Comments on community poems by SureshG
- Line Dancing (Jerry Reynolds)
Dancing on the line, is your poems’ every line
July 19th, 2021 13:05 - No Longer At Home. (Goldfinch60)
In the seething pain of your words, I read the intensity of love for...
July 19th, 2021 13:02 - Pearls of my world (Short & sweet) (Poetic Dan)
Your poem reflects the love and devotion you have found, to steal you to...
July 19th, 2021 12:53 - DIBBLES AND DABBLES (4) (Michael Edwards)
Those who can’t, critique, but in my case, even bad press is some...
July 16th, 2021 23:54 - Ink forged: Soulmates (L. B. Mek)
If pleasant dreams can become reality,
my poetry may also increase in...
July 16th, 2021 15:59 - Just a Kiss Goodbye (Neville)
Brilliant!
July 16th, 2021 13:01 - Nine Sighs (Flyingfish)
For no reason, sigh!!!!!
July 16th, 2021 12:59 - Active Messaging (Jerry Reynolds)
One only has to read your poem to know that there isn’t an event that...
July 16th, 2021 12:58 - At One With Nature. (Goldfinch60)
Vegetation is the harbinger of nature and in their presence we experience...
July 16th, 2021 12:52 - The Hunter (Fay Slimm.)
Many creatures have to hunt to survive, whether omnivores or carnivores,...
July 16th, 2021 12:46 - Homemade scarf (Poetic Dan)
I’ve been to many a specialist
Have yet not discovered the catalyst...
July 16th, 2021 12:33 - Dark (Fay Slimm.)
The image sets the tone, but your words gave it meaning, as the saline...
July 15th, 2021 13:15 - Wood-fired Kiln (Flyingfish)
Everyone admires the potters vision, but there’s another at play, hidden...
July 15th, 2021 12:20 - $50 Fortune Cookie (Jerry Reynolds)
So now you tell me, I was facing the ‘ronge’ direction - ohhh, those...
July 15th, 2021 12:14 - You know it (Poetic Dan)
I know that you know that I know that you know it. What was the problem...
July 15th, 2021 12:10 - Hippie Warning. (Goldfinch60)
Hippie UTOPIA!,,,,,,
July 15th, 2021 10:40 - Mark these Words (Neville)
I’ve heard this argument before, and can tell with surety, that it is...
July 15th, 2021 10:37 - The land of Anon. (Doggerel Dave)
The Land of Anon, of course I know it
At the round-a-about, turn left, I...
July 15th, 2021 10:19 - Magnificently Different (Neville)
the trouble of being a late arrival is that all ones thoughts have already...
July 13th, 2021 12:49 - Deep Dive Jive (Flyingfish)
Truly entertaining
July 13th, 2021 12:42 - All risks are worth it in the end (Poetic Dan)
When it comes to children, ain’t it strange what memories our mind...
July 13th, 2021 12:41 - Shall and Because (Fay Slimm.)
You have the mastery of using the features of a revered creature and...
July 13th, 2021 12:37 - The Poetry Shop (Jerry Reynolds)
and such is poetry, purposively done
July 13th, 2021 12:27 - Trust (Accidental Poet)
beautifully poemed, sir, remove a letter and trust becomes rust
July 13th, 2021 12:25 - The Lost Words. (Goldfinch60)
so many times I wish my mind,
too had a button called ‘rewind’,
for...
July 13th, 2021 12:21 - Ephemeral: ‘We’ (L. B. Mek)
‘ Oui’
what more is necessary to say, but
‘Oui’
July 13th, 2021 12:11 - Free as a Bird (Flyingfish)
Yea! The bug we created, surely taught us a lesson, that we never seem to...
July 10th, 2021 12:17 - Such is Nostalgia (Fay Slimm.)
Truly nostalgic both in art and prose
July 10th, 2021 12:12 - Banished (Neville)
Hello Sincerely Banished
Here, in the US, they have mastered this art of...
July 10th, 2021 12:10 - Time Waits for No Man (Accidental Poet)
one lost love, till we meet again, in this life or …… I’m left with...
July 10th, 2021 11:41 - At The Top Of The Hill. (Goldfinch60)
She is still your forever love, and stamina to keep climbing that hill and...
July 10th, 2021 11:36 - We all have darkness (Poetic Dan)
The expression of pain, suffering, torture and plea is so clearly visible...
July 10th, 2021 11:33 - Be Brave (Jerry Reynolds)
In the heat of the moment, but the memories will last forever, as will...
July 10th, 2021 11:21 - Shuffle and flow (Poetic Dan)
There is beauty and happiness in the simplest of action, as you have so...
July 9th, 2021 12:57 - Shadows are Rather Stiff (Flyingfish)
By light is revealed ones shadow. A haunting piece indeed.
July 9th, 2021 12:51 - Elsa (Jerry Reynolds)
Words that pay homage to one of nature’s strengths
July 9th, 2021 12:49 - Sleeping on the Job (Neville)
When erected they were very alive and majestic, and now even time has laid...
July 9th, 2021 12:46 - Submitting (Fay Slimm.)
Aye! I submit to you.
July 9th, 2021 12:33 - A Triolet Ahead of The Pack (Doggerel Dave)
A very enjoyable read indeed
July 9th, 2021 12:20 - Passed The Universe. (Goldfinch60)
I am your co-pilot, my friend
July 9th, 2021 12:17 - Freshly Squeezed (Neville)
WOW!
I thought you were going to go to what happened before, in between...
July 8th, 2021 13:22 - Beginnings (Fay Slimm.)
and in that moment they inhaled each other’s essence, so masterfully...
July 8th, 2021 13:17 - Now I Know It (Accidental Poet)
We all have within us, a poet, a writer, a musician, an artist, and for...
July 8th, 2021 13:13 - Where None Have Visualised Before. (Goldfinch60)
End of the Universe is only limited by our imagination, in the meanwhile...
July 8th, 2021 13:05 - Way Too Late (Neville)
At the end of it all, I’m left wondering, why? Thank you for clarifying...
July 7th, 2021 13:32 - Passive Messaging (Jerry Reynolds)
Amazing how you have taken an issue of tension and transformed it into a...
July 7th, 2021 13:25 - natures sway (Dusk arising)
I can sense the melody of your words
July 7th, 2021 13:19 - Once (Fay Slimm.)
it’s there, carried by your everlasting words
July 7th, 2021 13:15 - Because Now You’re a Poet (Accidental Poet)
….as penned by a true poet.
July 7th, 2021 13:11 - Telephone Trepidation. (Goldfinch60)
Long, long, long time I was advised that if the call is important, they...
July 7th, 2021 13:08 - Covid 19 (Doggerel Dave)
The precautions are there for us to take,
If we discount the experts, our...
July 7th, 2021 12:44 - strangeness of strangers arms (Dusk arising)
Exquisitely written, had me dreaming of that tabletop ballet
July 6th, 2021 13:25 - Has He Returned? (Goldfinch60)
Glad you only pass by it, for I just checked my neck to see my head was...
July 6th, 2021 13:22 - Lost and Found (Jerry Reynolds)
There’s a different kind of the burning of the books movement going on...
July 6th, 2021 13:17 - Stone Sensibilities (Orchidee)
In my bones, I know the importance of that corner stone, that you have so...
July 6th, 2021 13:06 - I’ll Try to Keep Up (Accidental Poet)
She visits, at her pleasure
Not waiting at my leisure
When then I wish...
July 6th, 2021 13:01 - Maybe One of Us Should Leave (Neville)
I can totally relate to the intense emotions you have exposed, for I have...
July 6th, 2021 12:43 - Myself (Fay Slimm.)
I have, for a very long time, been contemplating on writing about this...
July 6th, 2021 12:29 - Untitled - XLVI (SureshG)
….you mean for my own good. I totally agree. BTW, you are too generous...
June 30th, 2021 16:43 - Walking By (Saxon Crow)
The layer of smog that the children of Adam and Eve have caused, have in...
June 30th, 2021 14:40 - My Sod it…sorry, Sonnet…but then again…. (Doggerel Dave)
Neutered, we have all been, willingly, as sheep to the slaughter, falsely...
June 30th, 2021 14:34 - Inside Looking Out (Accidental Poet)
I bet this flowed freely, guided by your muse.
Very entertaining
June 30th, 2021 14:31 - Curbed (Fay Slimm.)
Human cruelty has no bounds, for we have used our might and our...
June 30th, 2021 14:30 - Memorial (Jerry Reynolds)
Succinct, no reason to elaborate
Well penned, my friend
June 30th, 2021 14:24 - Cold Shoulder (Neville)
disagreements escalated to paranoia is now the norm of the day, that you...
June 30th, 2021 14:21 - Under The Hammer. (Goldfinch60)
Nothing is ever sacred, so let the hammer fall, I ain’t bidding anyways....
June 30th, 2021 14:16 - Plea Of The Persecuted (Orchidee)
If it was only that simple, evil would have little soil to germinate. But...
June 30th, 2021 14:14 - an angels gameplay (Dusk arising)
I always thought it was Cupid’s playful deceit, but I’ll take the...
June 30th, 2021 14:07 - Untitled - XLVI (SureshG)
As life goes on, after a comma, we have a means to change the direction. I...
June 29th, 2021 15:49 - Untitled - XLVI (SureshG)
It is one of the two most potent punctuations, but the one that keeps the...
June 29th, 2021 10:31 - Salvation Story (Orchidee)
‘saved through faith’, that’s all one needs to believe
June 27th, 2021 11:06 - Ponderings (Fay Slimm.)
A different motif from you, much easier to absorb, and yes, I wonder, if...
June 27th, 2021 11:00 - Along the Mineral Line (Neville)
Thanks for the poetic ride, even though not on this journey, have taken a...
June 27th, 2021 10:53 - What is Love? (Accidental Poet)
Strongest emotion is the love that could have been, as so poetically...
June 27th, 2021 10:42 - When We meet Again (Accidental Poet)
You have poured your heart here, and the ending is yet to be written.
June 27th, 2021 02:59 - PC Porpoodle (Saxon Crow)
When PC comes knocking on my door
He’ll see, a paper clock, both hands...
June 27th, 2021 02:53 - But Is It Poetry? (Goldfinch60)
I’ve seen a blank canvas in a recognized gallery, displayed as art, so...
June 27th, 2021 02:46 - Tree of Souls (Neville)
who know!!! I want to…
but reading your words tell me to just inhale...
June 25th, 2021 13:28 - Random Thoughts- (Jerry Reynolds)
The extremes seems to be empowered - we better take notice, lest we loose...
June 25th, 2021 13:18 - Freedom? (Saxon Crow)
Guilty, your honor
We are truly prisoners of our heart
No BS
loved
June 25th, 2021 13:14 - A Labor of Love (Accidental Poet)
That, like your words, which originates in the heart, is truly genuine
June 25th, 2021 13:09 - Red Dress. (Goldfinch60)
Awesome recollection
June 25th, 2021 13:06 - Losing You (Fay Slimm.)
I so truly believe in your words
June 25th, 2021 12:47 - Black December (Saxon Crow)
No matter from where the inspiration comes, you have earnestly crafted a...
June 24th, 2021 12:30 - Caught (Fay Slimm.)
Fire that made Homo sapiens, human, yet we are still subservient to its...
June 24th, 2021 12:24 - Through a Child’s Eyes (Accidental Poet)
Innocence is precious, till self interest robs it
June 24th, 2021 12:10 - Random Thought (Jerry Reynolds)
It’s meant for people like me……
June 24th, 2021 12:08 - One Step At A Time. (Goldfinch60)
Step by step, I heed your words
June 24th, 2021 12:05 - Seed Sown (Orchidee)
Like anything in life and nature
If you tend to it, it will grow strong...
June 24th, 2021 12:04 - Toward Normal (Jerry Reynolds)
Your accompanied art is how I feel, I better get to the gym too
June 23rd, 2021 13:18 - Humane Relations. (Doggerel Dave)
For a long time I have been composing a poem on the disastrous follies of...
June 23rd, 2021 13:16 - Our Perpetual Priest (Orchidee)
In spite of all the right words, sound and images, why is most of his...
June 23rd, 2021 13:09 - beautiful pastime (Dusk arising)
Most men don’t grasp the thrill of giving pleasure and the eroticism in...
June 23rd, 2021 13:04 - Picture of Love. (Goldfinch60)
AHHHHHH!!!!!! Moments - that can still bring joy to our heart, in spite...
June 23rd, 2021 12:59 - Look Around (Saxon Crow)
If only……
Thanks
June 23rd, 2021 12:55 - You (Fay Slimm.)
You inhale life………
June 23rd, 2021 12:52 - A common miracle (L. B. Mek)
Loved the crescendo ending “drunken hearts”
June 23rd, 2021 12:47 - A Taste of Hunger (Neville)
Maybe ‘cause Henry got all the courtesans and many wives, screwing up...
June 23rd, 2021 12:45 - Mother Nature Cries (Accidental Poet)
Minority seems to hijack life, while majority just sucks it up -
Nicely...
June 23rd, 2021 12:39 - Autumn (Jayasree)
Well penned
June 23rd, 2021 12:34
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