Comments on community poems by SureshG
- That Afterwards Feeling (Neville)
For those who have not experienced That Afterwards Feeling, will...
October 19th, 2023 12:05 - The Measure of a Single Year (Neville)
No, it means nothing
or is it
Yes, it means nothing
If I can’t...
October 12th, 2023 08:03 - Differences - the Beast (SureshG)
Your comments something to feast on
October 9th, 2023 09:46 - It’s not ok, it will NEVER be alright! (L. B. Mek)
It’s not just physical, for emotional violence can be just as...
October 9th, 2023 06:47 - Scammed (Neville)
She played her role artfully….
October 9th, 2023 06:31 - The Flicker of Life (Bella Shepard)
In cosmological time, we are still attached to the umbilical cord -
a...
October 8th, 2023 20:40 - No Contest (Neville)
knowing and acknowledging
your words to remember
October 8th, 2023 20:33 - Heed (Neville)
If only I did, if only I could, the pain not so much, the tears not so...
January 11th, 2023 11:02 - Musical Travels. (Goldfinch60)
From the first drumbeat, from the first sound, we have been captivated by...
January 5th, 2023 07:43 - Love\'s Mind (Fay Slimm.)
Loves mind resides in the cockles of the heart where dissent rarely...
January 5th, 2023 07:39 - New Wine From Old Vines (Neville)
It’s natural……
Romantically composed!
January 5th, 2023 07:23 - Hidden (Neville)
So absolutely true, great depth in them those few words
December 7th, 2022 19:32 - seasons passing (Jerry Reynolds)
While the colors of Spring are bright and cheerful, those of Autumn are...
November 28th, 2022 17:52 - Full Life. (Goldfinch60)
Emotions expressed truly in gratitude of a full life.
November 28th, 2022 17:47 - Just Another Zen Thing (Neville)
We are so enraptured by the part we are, that the whole completely alludes...
November 28th, 2022 17:00 - Burden Lifted? (Christina8)
When it becomes more than we can handle, it depletes us of our energy....
November 25th, 2022 18:39 - Beholding The Baptist (Orchidee)
You have so much fervor in your heart for your belief, and your words come...
November 25th, 2022 18:30 - Dilemma (Thekkinkkattil)
Your message hits me to the core, for I feel so helpless
November 25th, 2022 18:27 - so once (Dusk arising)
You exposed me, and I thought I could stay hidden in the back alleys of...
November 25th, 2022 18:24 - Death By a Thousand…… (Doggerel Dave)
Entertaining post indeed. Thanks
November 25th, 2022 18:22 - Creating Music. (Goldfinch60)
Only a smooth single malt could compliment the after rehearsal and the...
November 25th, 2022 18:20 - Gladding (Neville)
I looked at the dictionary and came back disappointed, but then DA!, saw...
November 25th, 2022 18:16 - Doing his Best (Fay Slimm.)
The sight when focused,
and senses heightened
The prey...
November 25th, 2022 17:55 - POOL (Dusk arising)
The progression of forgetting is taking a heavy toll, so it’s wonderful...
November 19th, 2022 09:01 - Forget Four Letter Words. (Doggerel Dave)
I believe, we or us become irrelevant for its the intent that carries the...
November 18th, 2022 17:40 - I Am One With Creation (Bella Shepard)
When you live in the moment, and it’s all yours, there’s no happier...
November 18th, 2022 17:33 - Mislaid (Fay Slimm.)
The space that has become a chasm, which at one stage was sandwiched in...
November 18th, 2022 17:13 - Algarvia (Neville)
What can I say that others have not already said, but still, memory lanes...
November 18th, 2022 16:51 - Remembering Them (Fay Slimm.)
It is the youth that is tapped for its:
Innocence
Fervor
and by the...
November 18th, 2022 09:30 - Remembering Them (Fay Slimm.)
It is the youth that is tapped for its:
Innocence
Fervor
and by the...
November 11th, 2022 12:56 - To Tyro Poets in Need of Advice: (Doggerel Dave)
Who’s a poet and what is poetry
You have well defined how one could
November 9th, 2022 11:58 - The Future (Bella Shepard)
A few words, with deep meaning.
“All is predestined, yet we alone are...
November 9th, 2022 07:55 - Integrity Issue (Doggerel Dave)
The reason only dad and cubs went out is because mom told him to spend...
November 9th, 2022 07:48 - A Wonderful World? (Goldfinch60)
Could it be that we don’t want griefs shadow to cast on us by extension?
November 9th, 2022 07:42 - Recharging (Fay Slimm.)
Our unrelenting pursuit of happiness, unfortunately, doesn’t allow us...
November 9th, 2022 07:36 - To Tyro Poets in Need of Advice: (Doggerel Dave)
Who’s a poet and what is poetry
You have well defined how one could
November 8th, 2022 19:55 - Searching for Light (Neville)
No not die, to live!
that’s what alluding me, my friend.
November 7th, 2022 18:17 - Blackrock (Fay Slimm.)
Blackrocks like these have for eons reminded men to stay clear, for even...
November 7th, 2022 17:02 - A Few More Things Remembered (Neville)
ahhhh!!!!, that never fades from the memory glands with the passage of...
October 13th, 2022 07:08 - Voiceless (Fay Slimm.)
I feel the silence in your words
October 13th, 2022 07:03 - Something Greater (Fay Slimm.)
Your pen sheds tears of ecstasy!
October 9th, 2022 18:56 - Commissioned (Fay Slimm.)
For a few coppers the painter intently listened, for his craft was hired...
October 8th, 2022 07:56 - What Didn’t We Find in the Attic (Neville)
Thank God, or else the sirens will go off and the hand cuffs will shine...
October 8th, 2022 07:45 - That Point Where We Each Begin (Neville)
Superb!
October 8th, 2022 07:19 - Be To Me. (Fay Slimm.)
Being yourself, you let the words flow effortlessly, leaving the reader...
October 1st, 2022 17:44 - such romance as rests within (Dusk arising)
Barefoot on the freshly cut grass, your poem evokes the aromatic nature of...
September 5th, 2022 22:30 - Teacher’s Day (Thekkinkkattil)
A noble profession on which the pillars of society rest.
September 5th, 2022 22:21 - This Should be Obvious… (Doggerel Dave)
The bits that make up the bytes vs the bits that make up my brain...
September 5th, 2022 10:46 - This Time (Fay Slimm.)
Warmth of a mother’s bosom, whether of flesh or soil, is for ever etched...
September 5th, 2022 10:36 - On Being Too Gentle (Neville)
I regret it wasn’t me, for had I in my youth, while being rejected -...
September 5th, 2022 10:25 - Durable Days (Orchidee)
As always a well writ piece.
Though the premise of asking itself is...
September 5th, 2022 10:17 - Nature\'s Anger Tanka. (Goldfinch60)
Our very existence is the destruction of balance.
September 5th, 2022 10:14 - September (Dusk arising)
Your ode to September tells us that the change is in the air. To enjoy the...
August 30th, 2022 06:20 - Resignation To Life. (Goldfinch60)
She chose, and in so choosing even cancer could not rob her of her smile....
August 30th, 2022 06:14 - Light Leading (Orchidee)
HIS was a way of non-violence, a way to make us seek out our inner...
August 30th, 2022 05:51 - A Few Moments After (Neville)
Passion, so passionately scribed…..
August 30th, 2022 05:39 - Her (Fay Slimm.)
If on the words alone I must comment, then you know I think you have a...
August 30th, 2022 05:35 - Her (Fay Slimm.)
If on the words alone I must comment, then you know I think you have a...
August 30th, 2022 05:35 - Age not Withstanding (SureshG)
I would be too weak to resist, as I solemnly accept your generosity
June 3rd, 2022 12:00 - LIMERICK 120 (Michael Edwards)
Look on the brighter side, she fulfills all but maybe your physical...
June 3rd, 2022 10:13 - Heart Healing (Orchidee)
You be praised for your Praise.
June 3rd, 2022 10:04 - a lifetime ago haunts still. (Dusk arising)
Physical scars - physical, thou not to be diminished,
Verbal abuse, as...
June 3rd, 2022 10:02 - POETRY IS CORNY (Ok Waleed)
Yes, majority of poetry is exhaustively CORNY, but there are a few, whose...
June 3rd, 2022 09:57 - Trees and Me (Fay Slimm.)
We see it all, yet what will it take for our individual greed to change...
June 3rd, 2022 09:53 - Natural CURTAINS !! (Vamsi Sudha)
When we withdraw behind those curtains, so as not be distracted by the...
June 3rd, 2022 09:46 - Watching and working (Spilleronsheet)
Life is a chase - your words a dusting of hope
June 3rd, 2022 09:41 - Beyond That Door (Accidental Poet)
Beautifully prosed what each one of us have contemplated on sometime.
June 3rd, 2022 09:35 - Where Recollections Reside (Neville)
You take us on a journey of exoticism and eroticism- I don’t dare say...
June 3rd, 2022 09:30 - Beautiful Pain (Christina8)
Where many of us may fail, you show the strength in not walking away from...
June 3rd, 2022 09:27 - Life Is Wonderful Tanka. (Goldfinch60)
If we’d let it play out it’s own music. Lovely indeed.
June 3rd, 2022 09:22 - Lightning Amidst Clear Skies (Rocky Lagou)
I find that what flows freely exposes the inner self. Yet you have managed...
June 3rd, 2022 09:18 - Not A Royalist Poem (Saxon Crow)
What amazes me is that even in this day-an-age masses are still willing to...
June 3rd, 2022 09:12 - The Last Words (Rozina)
And on this site you have left a slice of yourself, that will be there for...
June 3rd, 2022 09:06 - Hairdo (Rozina)
They said,
“we can stretch and tuck it, we can perm and cut”
but I...
May 10th, 2022 10:13 - Rising In Love. (Goldfinch60)
LEAVES of tea or delight,
LEAVES you spent n smiling
LEAVES my mind...
May 10th, 2022 08:09 - Thank You Please. (Goldfinch60)
My motto to live by, and impart. Yes, it is a forgotten language where...
May 9th, 2022 01:21 - Dun a Runna (Neville)
Well god Dummit
He outdun me by 29 minnit
May 8th, 2022 18:31 - Dun a Runna (Neville)
Well god Dummit
He outdun me by 29 minnit
May 8th, 2022 18:31 - Ready (Fay Slimm.)
When the heavenly beauty of blossoms shed their petals, they, for one last...
May 8th, 2022 15:51 - Smith Johnsons Diet (Saxon Crow)
Humor, no matter it’s shape or form, is mostly welcomed, like your poem...
May 8th, 2022 12:09 - Morning To Night. (Goldfinch60)
I wonder when we speak, is it music to their ears, meanwhile ‘top of the...
May 8th, 2022 07:55 - Eighth Wonder (Nicholas Browning)
May the road you travel be smooth and free of pebbles and pot holes.
Good...
May 7th, 2022 19:29 - Why Do I Smile? (Goldfinch60)
Smiles are infectious, so thank you for spreading it to all of us.
May 7th, 2022 19:20 - The Spring Flowers (Christina8)
Freshly cut grass enliven the senses of the heart, though I totally agree...
May 7th, 2022 19:18 - Searching the silver line (Spilleronsheet)
If not now, then maybe in the next, or the one after that, a sun shall...
May 7th, 2022 19:13 - Miss. Lock Memories (Neville)
I had the most brutish BROTHERS, so no such frock, thus no such luck or Ms...
May 7th, 2022 19:09 - Destiny Calls (Accidental Poet)
Her love shines very bright, in you morning, noon and night. So...
May 7th, 2022 19:04 - SORRY! (Rozina)
Humor is the best compliment, and there is no subject better than self....
May 7th, 2022 19:00 - All the Words He Left Trapped in Her Throat (Neville)
It is undoubtedly an act, committed in the heat of passion, for what else...
May 7th, 2022 10:48 - Tactics (Fay Slimm.)
Passion not only ignites the bodies, but within your words, mind too.
May 7th, 2022 10:44 - Indifference (Nicholas Browning)
Not me, not yet. I see more than five words on a page.
May 4th, 2022 13:16 - Memory palace (Spilleronsheet)
The memories have not faded, it’s just that the reboot button is not...
May 4th, 2022 13:01 - A New Touch !! (Vamsi Sudha)
encapsulate that touch, bottle that feeling - wonderfully expressed
May 4th, 2022 12:57 - Expensive Liquid. (Goldfinch60)
——or make sure that those tears are “tears of joy”. Message...
May 4th, 2022 12:54 - My Gymnast (Christina8)
You hold her in a forever place, and with these words, proudly too.
May 4th, 2022 12:50 - No Looking Back Again (Neville)
Dean Martin,s song -
Take one fresh and tender kiss
Add one stolen...
May 4th, 2022 12:46 - No Looking Back Again (Neville)
Dean Martin,s song -
Take one fresh and tender kiss
Add one stolen...
May 4th, 2022 12:46 - Music Is My Life Once More. (Goldfinch60)
Music is synonymous to life, for when played it makes our emotions vibrate...
May 3rd, 2022 09:49 - NOR MOURNING TO MAKE (Michael Edwards)
Seriously, it’s lifes’ play,
Only as you can display
May 3rd, 2022 09:44 - grazed knees (Dusk arising)
Those underpasses hold in their shadows youths passion, that your poetic...
May 3rd, 2022 09:39
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