Comments on community poems by SureshG
- On Being Called to War (Neville)
War is inevitable and loss of life it’s by-product, but each individual...
November 29th, 2021 21:34 - In The Making (Fay Slimm.)
It’s magic to know how perfection takes shape, it’s inner satisfaction...
November 29th, 2021 19:24 - What Ghost! (Goldfinch60)
Till the last line, I thought the ghost was just everybody else’s...
November 29th, 2021 18:17 - Why I love her🥰 (Job Welime)
…..and with her starts the only memories, that your poetic words will...
November 28th, 2021 11:44 - Dark Desire (Jerry Reynolds)
A third of the county thinks it’s their right to hunt, humans are now...
November 28th, 2021 11:34 - Get It? (Accidental Poet)
If only you had posted this a long time ago, I wouldn’t have tripped so...
November 28th, 2021 11:29 - Muse alert….. Sorry – My Mistake (Doggerel Dave)
So that’s what I’ve been missing, while waiting for my muse. A fine...
November 28th, 2021 11:25 - Be Careful. (Goldfinch60)
You are what others perceive, so I take your lead
November 28th, 2021 11:20 - Holiday (Lorna)
Do I have to, and then I do. I go through all the pretenses and do all the...
November 28th, 2021 11:10 - johannes sabastian WOOF (Dusk arising)
Fido can really chime, but my god you can really rhyme. What a kicker,...
November 28th, 2021 11:02 - Summer 19.. (Neville)
You phrased my daydreams in silken words. OOHHH!!! many a destination...
November 28th, 2021 10:51 - Exchange (Fay Slimm.)
Gentleness is in your words, heat was in the way I perceived, had to step...
November 28th, 2021 10:43 - tide has turned (Dusk arising)
A lifetime so poetically laid out.
November 20th, 2021 09:37 - What a Way to Go…. (Doggerel Dave)
What does one do about those that are positively not intelligent but just...
November 20th, 2021 09:33 - Sensuality (Fay Slimm.)
The eroticism of the dance so eloquently phrased
November 20th, 2021 09:24 - The Wreck of Our Lady (Neville)
Whether it be a small boat, a yacht, a ship, a bungalow, a mansion, a car,...
November 20th, 2021 09:21 - What Failing Memory? (Goldfinch60)
Sweeeeeeeeet revenge
November 20th, 2021 09:09 - Into A New Day. (Goldfinch60)
A very cheerful poem indeed
November 17th, 2021 11:10 - Just Another Way Out (Neville)
Maybe I’m misreading this emasculate poem, but my mind immediately...
November 17th, 2021 11:08 - In Company of Angels (Accidental Poet)
Oh Kord, send me a guardian angel, the one that this poem evokes.
November 14th, 2021 20:47 - 3 a.m. (HannahElisabeth)
That dreaded feeling, I pray is just a poetic license - for the horror of...
November 14th, 2021 20:39 - Festivals (Thekkinkkattil)
It’s good to have a reason to be joyful, as we have one, others will...
November 14th, 2021 20:35 - Begone Bygones (Flyingfish)
Nicely phrased - moving on
November 14th, 2021 20:32 - For my Father.... (Saxon Crow)
I’m just happy for this lighthearted piece.
November 14th, 2021 20:29 - Beautiful you,, (Job Welime)
Glad to know there is beauty in your life. As is there beauty in your...
November 14th, 2021 20:19 - Pray Keep the Mask On (Neville)
While she’s willing to be intimate
She still needs to protect her...
November 14th, 2021 20:02 - Soundless Rest (Fay Slimm.)
Your words truly evoke the depth of sorrow, that is so somberly visible on...
November 14th, 2021 19:56 - Singing With Angels. (Goldfinch60)
I shall stay in the realm of the positive and say how true you love truly...
November 14th, 2021 17:36 - Lies to kill for (Dusk arising)
“in the name of religion “ blasphemes creation itself
In absolute...
November 14th, 2021 17:32 - Wonder (Jerry Reynolds)
To house one in the catacombs of one’s mind, will surely keep the...
November 14th, 2021 17:27 - Inconsequential Gulls (Neville)
Not to be a downer but hidden beneath your message is the ominous winds of...
October 30th, 2021 20:23 - The Squirrel (Jerry Reynolds)
caption above the squirrel
“eat your heart out”
October 30th, 2021 20:18 - Eternal River. (Goldfinch60)
your words prove, true love is never parted
October 30th, 2021 20:14 - Best (Fay Slimm.)
While the fire of lust is easily quenched
The fire of true love cannot...
October 30th, 2021 20:12 - gain the future (Dusk arising)
and if you slay the beast, make sure you inherit her spirit ….
October 30th, 2021 20:11 - Good Times FIB (Goldfinch60)
And with these words you make us all a part of each other.
October 28th, 2021 20:44 - Making Plain (Fay Slimm.)
Logic, step sibling of emotions, falters and succumbs in the presence of...
October 28th, 2021 20:33 - Burnt and Bitter Oranges (Neville)
Me thinks you tickled the MPS’s uvula, devilishly teasing, engaging,...
October 28th, 2021 20:20 - Mouth My Name Slow (Neville)
Wasn’t it those pints that loosened our tongues and gotten us in that...
October 28th, 2021 09:55 - i wonder (Dusk arising)
Find heart, for this love story will come to pass, when it recalls your...
October 27th, 2021 13:53 - AND PUPPETS DANCE (Michael Edwards)
You have a gift of two mediums, and the ease with which you interplay with...
October 27th, 2021 13:47 - Attack (Fay Slimm.)
Reading your poem and your comment immediately reminded me of the book and...
October 27th, 2021 13:40 - Mouth My Name Slow (Neville)
The friendship we endure, must strain to first recall the imperfections,...
October 27th, 2021 13:31 - Business of Life (Jerry Reynolds)
In so few words, so much said - dancing frees the mind and body.
August 13th, 2021 11:14 - Time Machine Please (Thekkinkkattil)
What a ride that would be, so now you have a passenger
August 13th, 2021 11:07 - Brooding (Fay Slimm.)
Those much anticipated summer rains, a lifeline to thirsty, such as your...
August 13th, 2021 11:05 - Pitter Patter (Flyingfish)
Those droplets hold our attention and then we remember them forever, just...
August 13th, 2021 11:01 - Perfectly Hued (Neville)
Perfectly hued, if that’s what we choose to see, or as shown by thee.
August 13th, 2021 10:43 - To See You Again (Accidental Poet)
Your poetic words reminds us what mind holds onto
August 13th, 2021 10:40 - The Lady In White. (Goldfinch60)
That aura of confidence displays its own attraction - by a Lady in...
August 13th, 2021 10:35 - Helpless (Arvy)
Intense, intense love, intensely painful when left unspoken
A superb...
August 13th, 2021 10:26 - A Line Storm Melody (HannahElisabeth)
I thus thank Frost for giving you the final inspiration for putting...
August 13th, 2021 10:20 - Otherness (Fay Slimm.)
The image is powerful, but it took your words for me to feel the walk down...
August 11th, 2021 20:17 - To Mars or Bust (Flyingfish)
Mars is not far enough, but for now your comforting words will do.
August 6th, 2021 12:23 - Omens (Fay Slimm.)
While all I can muster is ooooh! and aaaah! to my favorite scene of the...
August 6th, 2021 12:18 - When You Find These Words (Neville)
Forget I was ever here - NEVER
August 6th, 2021 12:13 - Uniquely You (Accidental Poet)
If we cannot muster your confidence, then, at least, let us borrow your...
August 6th, 2021 12:10 - Exam Fear (Thekkinkkattil)
It’s not that we lack knowledge, it’s being tested is what scares us,...
August 6th, 2021 12:05 - Winner Takes All. (Goldfinch60)
It’s a fallacy to believe we compete for the sake of playing, but rather...
August 6th, 2021 12:02 - Confident Commitment (Orchidee)
Isn’t it so that we must first refrain from sinning
August 6th, 2021 11:57 - Another Day (Jerry Reynolds)
Every word, a complement to my sences.
August 5th, 2021 14:06 - A Balanced Table (Accidental Poet)
What we elect to do must be done with passion, if for those who receive to...
August 5th, 2021 14:04 - if and when, it depends (Flyingfish)
This is great example of using one medium to envision another, but done so...
August 5th, 2021 13:51 - Another Fine Day Haiku. (Goldfinch60)
YES!!!!!!
August 5th, 2021 13:48 - Hailing Hope (Orchidee)
As always, extremely well versed.
August 5th, 2021 13:47 - Magic Bead (Neville)
I sense her tease, just as your words tease our senses
August 5th, 2021 13:45 - Collusion (Fay Slimm.)
If not for the dance between fire and water, life as we know won’t have...
August 5th, 2021 13:38 - We the Navigators (Flyingfish)
Our ancestors were the true adventurers, they took the risk and ventured...
July 29th, 2021 12:35 - Sisters (Fay Slimm.)
Sisters, brothers, siblings or friends
It’s a joy to be able to...
July 29th, 2021 12:29 - The Light Of Music. (Goldfinch60)
There are particles in our bodies that fluctuate to sound, and then there...
July 29th, 2021 12:26 - Possessing Possessions (Orchidee)
As poems go, another nice piece.
Isn’t the whole objective to not...
July 29th, 2021 12:21 - Worship Worthies (Orchidee)
As poems go, another romanticized piece.
July 27th, 2021 12:56 - Truffle Hunt (Flyingfish)
Amazing how far we are willing to go to satisfy our buds. Quite a ways...
July 27th, 2021 12:55 - Its Shore Life (Neville)
The sea was calling you and you obliged, and now it offers awesome sights.
July 27th, 2021 12:47 - Blackrock (Fay Slimm.)
A masterfully crafted poem on a sublime subject
July 27th, 2021 12:40 - Just Conversing. (Goldfinch60)
Keep talking, we’re all listening
July 27th, 2021 12:30 - Ode to the moving clouds (Thekkinkkattil)
Little rain nourishes us, too much and it’s a flood. Your poem today is...
July 26th, 2021 13:05 - Invitation, to fireworks: of fireflies (L. B. Mek)
There’s beauty everywhere within the nature’s course of life, in birth...
July 26th, 2021 13:03 - Awesome (Fay Slimm.)
An unexpected imagery, but your composition though did strike me with an...
July 26th, 2021 12:56 - Hope Of Help (Orchidee)
God, the omnipotent, the all knowing - I struggle with sacrifices and...
July 26th, 2021 12:46 - Dreams All at Sea (Flyingfish)
Loved the subject of your post, it can go in so many directions.
July 26th, 2021 12:41 - Beached Whale Blues (Neville)
Why do they get beached? Is it intentional or an accident - would be nice...
July 26th, 2021 12:39 - Something For Yourself. (Goldfinch60)
Time out for yourself, totally, for we all need to recharge as well....
July 26th, 2021 12:36 - Snails a Snail (Poetic Dan)
You are savoring every ounce of pleasure from the simplest of activity, so...
July 26th, 2021 12:31 - Gummy Snakes (Flyingfish)
These profound words so poetically describe the creative process, of...
July 22nd, 2021 12:34 - A Little Leaven (Orchidee)
We have been gifted with intelligence, so why is it so difficult to follow...
July 22nd, 2021 12:29 - Unbroken (Fay Slimm.)
Those footprints in the sand, your words have forever etched in the mind,...
July 22nd, 2021 12:25 - The Essence of You (Neville)
He’s in deep, just as I am of this astounding composition.
July 22nd, 2021 12:22 - Purpose to express and reason to share (Poetic Dan)
Auto check, changed the word, I did not notice
It’s OK! my friends at...
July 22nd, 2021 12:19 - Night Club Time. (Goldfinch60)
Days of youth, a lot of fun
In my time, a lot was done
Now enjoy doing...
July 22nd, 2021 12:12 - Because it Got in the Way (Neville)
I looked straight at my nemesis and wondered - why!
Your words,...
July 20th, 2021 13:20 - The Eye\'s Pupil (Flyingfish)
To be able to see one’s reflection in someone’s eye, is not to see an...
July 20th, 2021 13:01 - Retirement (Thekkinkkattil)
Retired from forced labor, to pursue adventures - make it memorable....
July 20th, 2021 12:57 - Singing Once More. (Goldfinch60)
Singing, an emotional release, a calming experience.
Thank you
July 20th, 2021 12:54 - Coooeee - Oh no! (Orchidee)
I suffered a similar consequence, and when I re-established, all my past...
July 20th, 2021 12:47 - Constraint (Fay Slimm.)
All my life I have been troubled by ones control over another, and doubly...
July 20th, 2021 12:43 - Avoiding no more ready to explore (Poetic Dan)
Just hold on to it tight, and keep posting such poems.
July 20th, 2021 12:35 - Anguish. (Fay Slimm.)
One paints, the other writes
- both masterpieces
July 19th, 2021 13:13 - Oh to be Tranquil (Flyingfish)
ataraxia - show me the way, send me the subscription, and if not, at...
July 19th, 2021 13:11 - What Matters Most (Neville)
Why?
though I did enjoy the poem
July 19th, 2021 13:07
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