Comments on community poems by David Wakeling
- Kindness and Compassion Are Free. (Poetic Licence)
I wish people could practise kindness and compassion A great poem.
April 10th, 2025 05:17 - Once upon a dark moon (Mourgana of the Fey)
This is a powerful poem. I enjoyed the images created.I had to look up...
April 10th, 2025 05:16 - Flower (Sorenbarrett)
I love the egyptian connection here.I actually learned something.Great...
April 10th, 2025 05:14 - the keening woman (Mourgana of the Fey)
An amazing poem. It is certainly magical. Be careful poetry can cast a...
April 9th, 2025 18:24 - Vilvoorde: wash (Arqios)
This creates a melancholic mood of a mind nit yet defeated.Enjoyable read
April 8th, 2025 22:14 - How soon we forget (Sorenbarrett)
A delightful view of the seasons and the best part of the day.Very well...
April 8th, 2025 22:10 - Freedom Is Here. (Goldfinch60)
This is so true. Without wisdom and humour this would be a dull life I\'m...
March 28th, 2025 05:26 - Denial, and friends (Arqios)
Wow this is a master piece of self reflection.There is a detailled...
March 28th, 2025 05:24 - The Race (Poetic Licence)
Yes very true.Excellent
March 28th, 2025 05:20 - Sweet and bitter (Sorenbarrett)
yes Love is often confused with Lust.This raises some deep...
March 28th, 2025 05:19 - Love For Eternity. (Goldfinch60)
What a wonderful poem on her Birthday.Well done Andy. Excellent
March 27th, 2025 05:03 - forgive not forget (Arqios)
This to me sums up Existentialism.There is sadness and despair here.A lack...
March 27th, 2025 05:01 - Never good enough (Sorenbarrett)
This reminds me of a dysfunctional couple who are capable of complimenting...
March 27th, 2025 04:57 - nocturne (Arqios)
Wow this is so well written. It left me wanting more.I like the use of...
March 26th, 2025 05:30 - To Forever. (Goldfinch60)
Wonderful positive poem. Forever is there for us.Amazing words mi amigo
March 26th, 2025 05:28 - Plot For Redevelopment (Poetic Licence)
Certainly a complex poem. Excelllent. You came to the right decision not...
March 26th, 2025 05:26 - Poems in the wind (Sorenbarrett)
This is quite a conclusion to come to. Perhaps the answer my friend is...
March 26th, 2025 05:23 - Zara’s Choice (Arqios)
This is interesting.John and Zara a love story around computers.I often...
March 25th, 2025 05:25 - Orange And Yellow (Goldfinch60)
I think Art is just colour. You can see or feel anything you like. Amazing...
March 25th, 2025 05:20 - Is Insanity Now Normality. (Poetic Licence)
Some scary but important questions here.I wish i had answers.Important
March 25th, 2025 05:18 - History according to the administration (Sorenbarrett)
Oh my God there is a lunatic in the White House. Probably not the first...
March 25th, 2025 05:17 - and then us, content creators (Arqios)
wow this poem packs a punch.You are right about the power of Social Media...
March 24th, 2025 05:19 - The Irony Of Life. (Goldfinch60)
yes this is so true and thought provoking. Irony is very complicated.Great...
March 24th, 2025 05:16 - Is The Window Open In Moscow. (Poetic Licence)
I don\'t trust Trumpp to do the right thing but I am with you I hope...
March 24th, 2025 05:14 - Winged shoes or meat mittens (Sorenbarrett)
This is remarkable.So well constructed.The rhyme and cadence are...
March 24th, 2025 05:13 - waterfront recital: reprise (Arqios)
This is amazing.Such wonderful immagery and depth.The cycles of life...
March 23rd, 2025 05:06 - Where Was Our Dinner! (Goldfinch60)
We have all been there amigo. The whole purpose of dining out is...
March 23rd, 2025 05:03 - Wise Man Say (7) Fun On a Spring Sunday. (Poetic Licence)
Some wisdom and Fun mixed together.Wonderful
March 23rd, 2025 05:00 - Hands that grasp (Sorenbarrett)
Jealousy,Love Hate and Forgiveness.This poem has it all. Well done.
March 23rd, 2025 04:59 - You Seen That U? (Orchidee)
Good fun poem.Enjoyed reading
March 22nd, 2025 05:26 - “the internet does not lie” (Arqios)
If its made by human beings there will be 50% lies an 50% truth.Great poem...
March 22nd, 2025 05:25 - Fifty Years Ago, Blimey. Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
I must say I can\'t believe wher the time goes.I loved John Denver.Sad...
March 22nd, 2025 05:22 - Writers Doubt (Poetic Licence)
Some greta wisdom here mi amigo.Never doubt yourself.You are a great...
March 22nd, 2025 05:21 - Too bad (metaphor) (Sorenbarrett)
I can\'t image how annoying it would be if the other team didn\'t turn...
March 22nd, 2025 05:19 - Only Drive When Necessary (Goddess of the Mist)
Amazing self reflection here.Excellent writing. I Enjoyed reading
March 22nd, 2025 01:54 - cure-alls (Arqios)
Show us the justice of Poetry. Making me think again. Amazing poem with...
March 21st, 2025 04:59 - Kindness In Your Heart. (Goldfinch60)
Always a positive and deep wisdom in your work.A privilege to read it.
March 21st, 2025 04:55 - Lie In a Truth. (Poetic Licence)
I think it is hard to know what is real. So many different opinions.Good...
March 21st, 2025 04:53 - Old coat (Sorenbarrett)
I see a much loved jumper here keeping warm even if it isa little...
March 21st, 2025 04:52 - déjà brew (Arqios)
Great way to start the day.Fun poem compadre
March 20th, 2025 03:12 - The First Day Of Spring. (Goldfinch60)
What a beautiful tribute to the best season.Spring.Well done
March 20th, 2025 03:11 - Am I Alone. (Poetic Licence)
An amazing mind you have.Fascinating piece.
March 20th, 2025 03:10 - What Is Life Together? (Goldfinch60)
Wonderful to read that your happy.Excellent tribute to your relationship.
March 19th, 2025 05:22 - Today Is Tomorrows History. (Poetic Licence)
Some wisdom here.I think the poem is excellent.Well done mi amigo
March 19th, 2025 05:20 - The circle (Sorenbarrett)
Amazing poem.I have heard of that snake, Excellent interpretation of the...
March 19th, 2025 05:19 - unveiling (Arqios)
This is a master piece both in structure and cadence, Very enjoyable to...
March 19th, 2025 05:17 - whale-watching season (Arqios)
This sums up Australia with whales at one end and the Outback at...
March 18th, 2025 05:28 - Another Weekend By The Sea Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
This is a master piece my friend.Wonderfully structered and beautifully...
March 18th, 2025 05:25 - My Mama`s Gone. (Poetic Licence)
Very distrubing events here.Its always difficult when Parents are...
March 18th, 2025 05:23 - It burns (Sorenbarrett)
A powerful piece that made me think,I think I learned something.Well done
March 18th, 2025 05:21 - Stormy Sea (Orchidee)
Gotta Love JC always and forever
March 18th, 2025 05:19 - Oh Dear Wales. (Goldfinch60)
You cannot let a rugby game come between you.Good fun poem
March 16th, 2025 18:26 - pulse (Arqios)
Wow amazing poetry. Nature at her best and we get to witness it.Good to be...
March 16th, 2025 18:24 - Smell of color (Sorenbarrett)
Good to be alive and witness it all.Enjoyable read mi amigo
March 16th, 2025 18:22 - echoes of Babel (Arqios)
This is brilliant. So well written and poetic. I felt like taking a...
March 15th, 2025 15:30 - Life Is Ahead. (Goldfinch60)
I guess we all get to hung up with worry.Great poem with wisdom as...
March 15th, 2025 15:26 - Do Not Cut Corners (Poetic Licence)
In most circles I am a square.But hey thats just me.Clever piece.
March 15th, 2025 15:25 - Leaves (Sorenbarrett)
This is so poetic.I like the metaphor of leaves.There is a sadness here...
March 15th, 2025 15:23 - Now lookie here, humans (Orchidee)
yeah I used to be human but I now have a mechanical heart and so I guess I...
March 14th, 2025 17:09 - We Met On A Crossing. (Goldfinch60)
This is a beautiful poem.The dance of the Seasons.Well done Enjoyable
March 14th, 2025 05:08 - Blood Brothers (Poetic Licence)
That\'s the fate of gangs to be buried with their enemy.An interesting...
March 14th, 2025 05:05 - wide road of the exterior (Arqios)
This is an amazing tribute to Basho.I sadly have not heard of him until...
March 14th, 2025 05:03 - Verses of dust (Sorenbarrett)
I know the feeling.Some of mine are like arrows that hit the target others...
March 14th, 2025 05:00 - boarding pass (Arqios)
Wonderful personificaition. Enjoyed reading. We are all universes that...
March 13th, 2025 15:18 - The Moon Above. (Goldfinch60)
Yes the Moon is there watching the good times and the even better times....
March 13th, 2025 04:55 - Thanatos night visitor (Sorenbarrett)
This is a master work.So powerful and insightful.Well done mi amigo
March 13th, 2025 04:53 - Buzzard. (Goldfinch60)
Sounds like a plan.Come back as a buzzard.They are really an amazing...
March 12th, 2025 17:00 - I Thought I saw You Standing There. (Poetic Licence)
Very well constructed poem.I feel the loss of someone special.Well done
March 12th, 2025 16:58 - panhandler’s timepiece (Arqios)
This is an insightful view of Old Father Time. Enjoyable.
March 12th, 2025 16:56 - Bee in your bonnet sonnet (Sorenbarrett)
This is brillant.It sums up the despair that is felt with the way the...
March 12th, 2025 05:15 - Tangle Teaser (Cassie58)
What a beautiful poem. Brushing hair and applying make up. A loving memory...
March 11th, 2025 16:06 - Hang Your Head in Shame (Poetic Licence)
This is a deeply felt poem.I hear the anger and I feel the pain. We all...
March 11th, 2025 16:02 - a royal pain (Arqios)
This is an interesting poem.It leaves me wanting to know more.
March 11th, 2025 05:22 - ? (Sorenbarrett)
This is a little self deprecating. I am left wondering what initiated...
March 11th, 2025 05:19 - see you there (Arqios)
This is very enjoyable word play.It creates wonderful images . Well done...
March 10th, 2025 05:24 - Hippowhatsitphobia Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
Wow some long w0rds in this one.I\'m still recovering from...
March 10th, 2025 05:21 - Lost In a Snowstorm. (Poetic Licence)
Very clever and enjoyable
March 10th, 2025 05:19 - In school (Sorenbarrett)
Wow history can be horrific. I never studied history at school and I\'m...
March 10th, 2025 05:18 - Seasons of life (Tony36)
This is brilliant.The seasons of life. Very clever and poetic.
March 9th, 2025 15:28 - Fun On A Sunnier Sunday (Poetic Licence)
Some wonderful wisdom here.I always learn so much here.
March 9th, 2025 05:13 - Blessed Be. (Goldfinch60)
We are lucky in the Modern World, that\'s for sure.A powerful and...
March 9th, 2025 05:12 - goodbye robin (Arqios)
This is quite a sensitive look at always and forever.I enjoyed reading.
March 9th, 2025 05:10 - Who we are (Sorenbarrett)
Wow this sure does shine a light on our ancestors.I guess we all live in...
March 9th, 2025 05:08 - Presents from Penzance (Arqios)
What a brilliant and entertaining poem. Gilbert and Sullivan would be...
March 8th, 2025 04:33 - Alone Or With God. (Goldfinch60)
Yes good point.I would hate God to turn up. It would not end well.Great...
March 8th, 2025 04:29 - Half A Bag Of S... !!! (Poetic Licence)
Friendship is a tricky one.They will borrow the car but not pay when they...
March 8th, 2025 04:27 - A grip too tight (Sorenbarrett)
Wow this certainly puts forward the argument against High rise...
March 8th, 2025 04:25 - Too warm (Sorenbarrett)
Indeed it hot as hades here at times.A powerful poem. Enjoyed
March 7th, 2025 04:56 - fluid mosaic (Arqios)
Yes the microscopic world is amazing.This isan insightful poem.It made me...
March 7th, 2025 04:54 - recuperation (Arqios)
A powerful message of hope and survival.Excellent poem
March 6th, 2025 05:52 - What Problems. (Goldfinch60)
Good point. If they look down that\'s their problem. good poem
March 6th, 2025 05:50 - Blinded by the light (Sorenbarrett)
It seems hard to find security with all the problems in the world.Powerful...
March 6th, 2025 05:48 - The Success Of My Dreams. (Poetic Licence)
Yes excellent point.let children have a try even if they fail.Good poem
March 6th, 2025 05:45 - The Final Over. (Goldfinch60)
Sounds like an amazing game of Cricket. Great poem.Certainly captures the...
March 5th, 2025 05:17 - Love Is In The Air (Poetic Licence)
Good old Love. You gotta Love Love. Excellent poem
March 5th, 2025 05:15 - slipping away (Arqios)
Seems a sense of loneliness and losing confidence. A very powerful...
March 5th, 2025 05:13 - Returning And Reviving (Orchidee)
A great poem. A tribute to a great religion. Excellent
March 5th, 2025 05:10 - Nuts (Sorenbarrett)
This certainly is a close look in the mirror. Some this seems tough on...
March 5th, 2025 05:09 - minuet of the reeds (Arqios)
A beautiful poem.Some of the big words I had to look up but a powerful...
March 4th, 2025 15:59 - The Rules Of Cricket. (Goldfinch60)
In or out Cricket is a confusing game. I never did understand it much.Fun...
March 4th, 2025 15:57
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