Comments on community poems by Michael Edwards
- Teachers (ShannonXx)
A most touching read - I sense that you have pulled through even though...
June 5th, 2017 10:34 - Mislaid. (Fay Slimm.)
I am writing a poem where I mention speaking to the wind and heard in...
June 5th, 2017 10:28 - The Cook. (Goldfinch60)
Never eaten in McDonalds - I do love good food. Even today\'s menu sounds...
June 5th, 2017 10:26 - Sneha\'s Eyes (Swingline)
If her eyes are as intriguing as her name: wow
June 5th, 2017 10:19 - FIVE THIRTY PM (Michael Edwards)
Thanks everyone - many of us have been there, done that.
June 5th, 2017 02:11 - THE WIZZARDS OF OZ (Louis Gibbs)
June 4th, 2017 16:13 - Clinical Trials (Augustus)
I was responsible for drafting Clinical Trial agreements and one of the...
June 4th, 2017 10:17 - Coffee brown eyes (ShannonXx)
What a lovely expression of your friendship so well versed.
June 4th, 2017 10:12 - Dead Poets (Swingline)
Ah I love this - all the more reason to keep writing.
In fact it\'s just...
June 4th, 2017 10:06 - Transformation. (Fay Slimm.)
If only people could unglue their eyes - I get so cross when I hear folk...
June 4th, 2017 10:05 - When Rodents Roam... (P.H.Rose)
Sadly rats give other rodents an undeserved bad reputation. Great write PH
June 4th, 2017 10:01 - SCRIPTURE FOR SUNDAY ~ PLEASE PRAY FOR LONDON (AGAIN) (BRIAN & ANGELA)
My daughter in law was at the scene just an hour before it happened last...
June 4th, 2017 09:58 - A Narrative Snare (Ethan)
Great imagery - an accomplished piece of work.
June 4th, 2017 09:53 - Nan. (Goldfinch60)
What a cracking write - like the others it made me think of my Gran too -...
June 4th, 2017 09:51 - Exuberance (Augustus)
Ah babies and children and I just melt - sad reflection on the world these...
June 3rd, 2017 13:55 - Waiting A While (Orchidee)
Super construction O
June 3rd, 2017 10:42 - Salisbury City (ShannonXx)
It\'s been a long time since I was in Salisbury - as an artist whenever I...
June 3rd, 2017 10:40 - C A R B O N D I O X I D E S ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Some learn others refuse to - Put our Planet First said Macron - I fear...
June 3rd, 2017 09:13 - Little Voice (The Invisible)
Glad I looked in - a great write and hope to see more.
June 3rd, 2017 06:05 - The Swan\'s Diversity. (Goldfinch60)
I was there watching them as I read this - beautifully written G.
June 3rd, 2017 03:40 - 3:10 A M (Swingline)
Another little beauty and love the last stanza.
June 3rd, 2017 01:02 - Awayness. (Fay Slimm.)
Well I certainly understood it and also marvel at your superb use of the...
June 2nd, 2017 12:24 - My beautiful cordyline... (P.H.Rose)
They are superb plants and to get one to bloom in our climate is quite...
June 2nd, 2017 12:23 - Back of School. (Garry)
Not sure my mind was on ice cream at the time - but it is now!
June 2nd, 2017 10:36 - BARN OWL AWESOME ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Such lovely creatures - I can forgive them their diet.
June 2nd, 2017 08:18 - Tomorrow Will Do (Goldfinch60)
Whilst I do agree with this (if something needs to be done I can\'t wait...
June 2nd, 2017 01:43 - Thirty Years Later (Swingline)
Beautiful write - really had me feeling emotionally about your position....
June 2nd, 2017 01:21 - SYNTACTIC AMBIGUITY 1 (Michael Edwards)
Looks like Cedric\'s got toothache - I wonder if the fairy will be...
June 2nd, 2017 00:09 - Young Love.... (P.H.Rose)
This peels away the years - lovely write PH.
June 1st, 2017 23:48 - PEACE (Louis Gibbs)
Ah I\'m the same - in fact I am not a team player - If something has to be...
June 1st, 2017 09:31 - The Old Home (Swingline)
This really set the imagination working - another great write s.
June 1st, 2017 06:29 - LIMERICK 32 (Michael Edwards)
They do indeed - cheers Brian.
June 1st, 2017 06:26 - HONEY BEES ~ BEAUTIFUL (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I have a mug of hot steaming Twinings lemon and ginger with a spoonful of...
June 1st, 2017 05:02 - Deadly Intent. (Fay Slimm.)
Super - love your use of words: lunchtime sky etc Such a majestic bird.
June 1st, 2017 05:00 - The Glory of Jazz. (Goldfinch60)
You\'ve painted a great picture - wish I\'d been there.
June 1st, 2017 02:43 - A Single Rose (Tony36)
A real good \'un Tony
May 31st, 2017 15:51 - Available Access (Orchidee)
Another gem O
May 31st, 2017 15:49 - C U B A ~ An Island Paradise ? (BRIAN & ANGELA)
An interesting one. The generally held western take on the Cuban missile...
May 31st, 2017 04:35 - Which Path? (Goldfinch60)
Life\'s dichotomy - I would travel off the beaten track looking for...
May 31st, 2017 01:48 - My grave (ShannonXx)
Beautifully written and expressed - a fine poem.
May 31st, 2017 01:09 - I Pick Dandelions (Swingline)
This is a delightful poem s - simple, unpretentious yet so beautiful - \'I...
May 31st, 2017 00:53 - THE ENDING (Louis Gibbs)
This is so simply drafted and yet packs such a punch - but poets will...
May 30th, 2017 13:43 - THE ENDING (Louis Gibbs)
This is so simply drafted and yet packs such a punch - but poets will...
May 30th, 2017 13:43 - The Foley (Augustus)
You show such spirit - may your god always be with you.
May 30th, 2017 13:40 - Hug It Out (WriteBeLight)
Let\'s keep fingers crossed. Where ever you\'re going - don\'t go.
May 30th, 2017 12:53 - Having Self consciousness and Self doubt (P.H.Rose)
This shows me that you are a special guy - such a great write from the...
May 30th, 2017 11:57 - Colors ! (Swingline)
You\'re a colourful character S - and a good write to go with it.
May 30th, 2017 11:54 - PEACE OF THE DOVE ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Will there ever be peace - not in my lifetime - such an eloquent write...
May 30th, 2017 11:52 - Betweeness. (Fay Slimm.)
Another superb offering - thanks so much for posting it Fay.
May 30th, 2017 11:51 - All Greek To Me. (Goldfinch60)
Reminds me of our apartment in Cyprus - so hospitable in the country...
May 30th, 2017 11:49 - Delightful Dwellings (Orchidee)
Construction, metre etc etc all perfect as always O
May 29th, 2017 10:33 - The Parade (WriteBeLight)
Our soldiers who have lost their lives have paid the ultimate price -...
May 29th, 2017 10:32 - Wild Beauty.. (Fay Slimm.)
You\'ve captured it Fay - A super part of the world and you make me want...
May 29th, 2017 10:26 - Joy of Desolation (Swingline)
You can buy many things but not the things that matter - great write.
May 29th, 2017 08:21 - THE ICE CREAM MAN ~ A SONNET (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Great write - I love the stuff but my waistline doesn\'t - oh the trials...
May 29th, 2017 08:18 - The Church of No Thanks. (Goldfinch60)
I know you don\'t do these things to get thanked but it is so...
May 29th, 2017 08:16 - Scathing (Baylee)
less is more and this simple work packs a powerful punch.
May 29th, 2017 00:26 - Fear of God (Swingline)
A great short write s
May 28th, 2017 10:27 - lived Life.... (P.H.Rose)
Good read PH
May 28th, 2017 08:57 - THE \\\\\\\"SHE\\\\\\\" (Rajkumar)
Well written and an enjoyable read.
May 28th, 2017 02:22 - Stillness Around Me (Goldfinch60)
Ah - I will be there tonight doing just this (if it isn\'t raining and...
May 28th, 2017 02:07 - Swings (Augustus)
Good write Augustus,
May 27th, 2017 10:43 - On the Nature of Daylight. (Goldfinch60)
A new work to me and your words complement it so well.
May 27th, 2017 10:38 - LIMONCELLO ~ LIQUEUR OF THE GODS ~ A Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
It\'s a must whenever we are in Italy but you\'ve hit the nail on the head...
May 27th, 2017 02:41 - Alcohol\'s next day... (P.H.Rose)
Not a beer drinker but wine is another matter. Must have it with my...
May 26th, 2017 20:12 - This is my crowd (Tony36)
Sounds a great crowd to be with Tony.
May 26th, 2017 20:09 - Back And Forth (WriteBeLight)
I have a pending file of poems in which I keep work for review. They move...
May 26th, 2017 20:08 - Nam (Augustus)
Here\'s another Brit who\'s moved by it - it could be any battle zone -...
May 26th, 2017 20:03 - Catching the Drift. (Fay Slimm.)
Great write - I can hear the music.
May 26th, 2017 10:02 - Emotional Precipitation (Swingline)
Made me think - good write s.
May 26th, 2017 09:54 - BRITISH CHEESE ~ DELICIOUS ! An ABCDarian Poem (BRIAN & ANGELA)
We are blessed in the UK with some great cheeses - to hell with the...
May 26th, 2017 09:53 - But Nothing is There. (Goldfinch60)
Spooky indeed - great verse and do like the photo - might do a painting...
May 26th, 2017 01:51 - Faith Flowings (Orchidee)
Great write - I am in total admiration of your ability to continually...
May 25th, 2017 12:59 - What\'s In A Bin (WriteBeLight)
Here in the UK we now have to pay for plastic bags which used to be given...
May 25th, 2017 12:57 - Love\'s Glow. (Fay Slimm.)
Erotic comes more slowly these days but certainly sensuous - great write...
May 25th, 2017 12:53 - Innocence (Swingline)
It paints a picture - good work s
May 25th, 2017 12:51 - PRAYER ~ A BLESSING (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Even though it has no meaning for me, my wife is a catholic and I have...
May 25th, 2017 02:10 - Nature\'s Bounteous World. (Goldfinch60)
The sight of a murmuration of starlings in the evening sky is one of...
May 25th, 2017 02:05 - Remember, Reflection and Reaction.only the first letter connects them... (P.H.Rose)
Three little gems - great stuff PH
May 24th, 2017 21:17 - Unmatched. (Fay Slimm.)
Brian says it all - great piece of work Fay
May 24th, 2017 21:14 - Leftovers (WriteBeLight)
Absolutely and in our house there is no such thing as waste food - my wife...
May 24th, 2017 06:59 - M A N C H E S T E R ~ Choose Love ~ An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Another fine write for the grieving city - so pleased to see the leaders...
May 24th, 2017 05:47 - Strengthened by Words. (Goldfinch60)
Well written.-
May 24th, 2017 02:55 - Muse Calling (Augustus)
Great piece Augustus.
May 23rd, 2017 15:12 - Table Manners (WriteBeLight)
Spot on - even worse are people who talk with a mouthful. But as I said...
May 23rd, 2017 15:11 - Judgement (ShannonXx)
Spoken from the heart - I can feel every word.
May 23rd, 2017 11:35 - Who Is God ? (Swingline)
May your God always be with you S
May 23rd, 2017 11:33 - SUICIDE BOMBERS ~ A Lament (7 7 Sonnet) (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Great piece as a tribute to those affected by this terrible act of...
May 23rd, 2017 11:31 - Bubbles (Tony36)
I do like this - surprising what you can pack into a single line.
May 23rd, 2017 11:28 - Watery Secrets. (Fay Slimm.)
And Mr Toad ? great write Fay.
May 23rd, 2017 11:25 - Words as I fall asleep... (P.H.Rose)
good write
May 23rd, 2017 07:06 - The Bubble. (Goldfinch60)
My thoughts are with you - written with passion.
May 23rd, 2017 07:05 - Freight Train (WriteBeLight)
You paint it well - I can feel the frustration.
May 22nd, 2017 20:46 - Rogation Tuesday (Orchidee)
Super writing with such great metre.
May 22nd, 2017 09:42 - Cook (Tony36)
Great construction Tony
May 22nd, 2017 09:39 - After Today. (Fay Slimm.)
It is indeed elegant and what a great title repeated so expertly in the...
May 22nd, 2017 09:38 - COOPERATION ? YES ! An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
So true with a great big \'but\' - if only.
May 22nd, 2017 09:36 - Mary (Swingline)
Love it - it gave me a great smile.
May 22nd, 2017 09:34 - Struggle to Nobility. (Goldfinch60)
And always aim above yourself - great write and so true.
May 22nd, 2017 02:27 - Lazy Rags Day (P.H.Rose)
I love clothes and only yesterday sorted out a load of old ones for the...
May 21st, 2017 23:18
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