Comments on community poems by Michael Edwards
- From Here to There. (Goldfinch60)
Friends and even acquaintances (got the spelling of that right first time...
June 25th, 2017 02:31 - GOD KNOWS ME ~ AMEN ~ A 4 4 4 2 Blank Verse Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Great construction and well composed as always Brian.
June 25th, 2017 02:27 - Let\'s all bake today...... (P.H.Rose)
And here I am about to load up the bread machine and I find this little...
June 25th, 2017 00:20 - Too old? (FredPeyer)
Just how I feel - still feel young and I have so much to do and look...
June 24th, 2017 12:25 - My Green Hoodie (ShannonXx)
More than just a comfort blanket - a real token - enjoyed this immensely.
June 24th, 2017 12:22 - Righteous Rulings (Orchidee)
You do it every time and I don\'t know how - another superb scribe.
June 24th, 2017 12:20 - ENGLISH SUMMER FRUIT ~ PERFECTION ~ HAIKU (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Fruit every day - love it and love the haikus.
June 24th, 2017 12:17 - Shyless. (Fay Slimm.)
Your work is certainly in my top selection Fay - another super piece of...
June 24th, 2017 10:06 - Ruins? (Garry)
I read the first line and immediately Nina Simone singing \'I think its...
June 24th, 2017 09:05 - Parliamentary Truth. (Goldfinch60)
I\'m not so sure that they tell lies - they simply never tell the truth....
June 24th, 2017 01:42 - Sleeping Beauty (FredPeyer)
Prose par excellence - great stuff.
June 23rd, 2017 13:52 - KISSING DAY IN UK ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A kiss a day - whenever anyone asked my father what time it was he\'d...
June 23rd, 2017 12:59 - My One Hundred and Seventy Year old house...1847 (P.H.Rose)
Thankfully old buildings are better protected than in the past but still...
June 23rd, 2017 12:56 - THE PRISONER (Louis Gibbs)
And still there is so much to learn about autism - I have a family member...
June 23rd, 2017 12:54 - Trust in Nature. (Goldfinch60)
It\'s the less flamboyant birds that often give the greatest pleasure -...
June 23rd, 2017 12:47 - Awesome (Tony36)
Great acrostic Tony.
June 22nd, 2017 16:12 - Praise Plenipotentiaries* (Orchidee)
Another fine example of your truly great craftsmanship O
June 22nd, 2017 11:24 - Grandmother White..... (P.H.Rose)
Looking up - one of our greatest joys - and never ever the same. Super...
June 22nd, 2017 09:18 - Lost Mum. (Goldfinch60)
I really feel for you - my father suffered from this and It wasn\'t until...
June 22nd, 2017 02:35 - These two poems are DEDICATED TO ALL OF YOU! (FredPeyer)
Great write but not something I usually experience. If an idea comes to...
June 22nd, 2017 02:29 - A BAD REVIEW (Louis Gibbs)
Super write but, yes, I am sure good will prevail in spite of and not...
June 21st, 2017 10:29 - HEAT WAVE UK ~ ACROSTIC (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Well I just love the heat - can\'t get enough of it but not surprising...
June 21st, 2017 07:46 - Battle Lines. (Fay Slimm.)
a complete cycle so very well expressed as ever Fay.
June 21st, 2017 07:43 - Memories of Last Night (FredPeyer)
Well penned sir - and what a great last line - yes this really appealed to...
June 21st, 2017 00:18 - Stealing Mountains (Garry)
A good one Garry.
June 11th, 2017 10:16 - I call it love, they call it living in sin (Jooles)
How people chose to live their lives is entirely up to them - bizarre...
June 11th, 2017 10:14 - Temptuous Tide (Swingline)
Some really great lines in this little gem.
June 11th, 2017 10:09 - Strawberries š (Ab120ma)
Yes - and are to the touch - but otherwise a great first posting - keep at...
June 11th, 2017 02:58 - Hope{less} (Allan J. Renaldo)
Totally bewildered and determined not to be beaten I put it into Word and...
June 11th, 2017 02:23 - Storm - Haiku. (Goldfinch60)
Perfect and complete - great piece.
June 11th, 2017 02:18 - ODDS AND SAUSAGES (Michael Edwards)
Actually I\'m going to take a break - this was a collection of a few odd...
June 11th, 2017 01:29 - midnight mass (Willyweed)
Beautiful, reflective - keep fighting ww
June 10th, 2017 23:02 - The evil of drink (Jooles)
I never used to drink but eventually I broke the habit.
June 10th, 2017 11:35 - Line-Dancing (Fay Slimm.)
Great subject and superb bit of writing.
June 10th, 2017 07:37 - LOST IN THE NIGHT (Michael Edwards)
Thanks s, G, o, and fay
June 10th, 2017 03:08 - Breakfast. (Garry)
I go along with that except giving up coffee of course - too early for...
June 10th, 2017 02:59 - Stands Death There At My Door (Swingline)
Life is but sleep\'s interruption.
June 10th, 2017 01:44 - Broken Country. (Goldfinch60)
Well said. It\'s interesting that the younger ones tended towards Labour...
June 10th, 2017 01:42 - THE WISDOM OF FOLLY (Louis Gibbs)
I certainly did things then which I can\'t do now. Great piece.
June 9th, 2017 14:27 - IāM (Tony36)
Powerful stuff - great piece.
June 9th, 2017 14:25 - Light Each Day (+ 4) (Augustus)
Beautiful write - my mind conjures it all.
June 9th, 2017 14:23 - Answered. (Fay Slimm.)
Great prose - it puts me in mind of the books by Mary Webb - just finished...
June 9th, 2017 14:19 - Scary Night. (Goldfinch60)
I did that once - it was the wrong person !! love it G
June 9th, 2017 14:17 - What Makes A Poet (Swingline)
And a poet\'s pen - My best work is done first thing before my wife wakes...
June 9th, 2017 00:53 - Happenings. (Fay Slimm.)
Another super scribe Fay.
June 8th, 2017 08:42 - Uplifting Sounds. (Goldfinch60)
Really uplifting - both video and poem.
June 8th, 2017 02:20 - A Bird without A Nest (Swingline)
Serious message with a twinkle - nice one s.
June 8th, 2017 02:13 - COURAGEOUS LOVE (Louis Gibbs)
Beautiful indeed - great story and so sympathetically expressed.
June 7th, 2017 10:26 - Full Spate. (Fay Slimm.)
Common theme in today\'s postings and another truly great write Fay.
June 7th, 2017 10:23 - Crescent Moon Memorial Buried Blues Band (Swingline)
Started to read this and got really drawn in - great writing and it\'s the...
June 7th, 2017 10:21 - Mournful Memories (Orchidee)
So well drafted as always but - yes - very dark.
June 6th, 2017 11:16 - Highcliffe Beach (ShannonXx)
You do write some good stuff and this is up there with them.
June 6th, 2017 11:14 - Haiku Attempts (Augustus)
Great fun reading this. To heck with the rules - just stick to the 5-7-5...
June 6th, 2017 11:13 - Reminders. (Fay Slimm.)
I agree with Louis - great poem and last two lines still applies although...
June 6th, 2017 11:04 - Impossible Conquered. (Goldfinch60)
Got a jar of mustard seeds. Great message G
June 6th, 2017 02:14 - Poems (Definition) (Swingline)
When I was working I was a first scan guinea pig for a couple of new MRIs...
June 6th, 2017 02:13 - Inconsistent Consistency (Ethan)
I also love \'playing\' with words and this is a great example even if a...
June 6th, 2017 00:14 - Deja Vu (Louis Gibbs)
Such a sad reflection - such well chosen words.
June 5th, 2017 23:29 - Teachers (ShannonXx)
A most touching read - I sense that you have pulled through even though...
June 5th, 2017 10:34 - Mislaid. (Fay Slimm.)
I am writing a poem where I mention speaking to the wind and heard in...
June 5th, 2017 10:28 - The Cook. (Goldfinch60)
Never eaten in McDonalds - I do love good food. Even today\'s menu sounds...
June 5th, 2017 10:26 - Sneha\'s Eyes (Swingline)
If her eyes are as intriguing as her name: wow
June 5th, 2017 10:19 - FIVE THIRTY PM (Michael Edwards)
Thanks everyone - many of us have been there, done that.
June 5th, 2017 02:11 - THE WIZZARDS OF OZ (Louis Gibbs)
June 4th, 2017 16:13 - Clinical Trials (Augustus)
I was responsible for drafting Clinical Trial agreements and one of the...
June 4th, 2017 10:17 - Coffee brown eyes (ShannonXx)
What a lovely expression of your friendship so well versed.
June 4th, 2017 10:12 - Dead Poets (Swingline)
Ah I love this - all the more reason to keep writing.
In fact it\'s just...
June 4th, 2017 10:06 - Transformation. (Fay Slimm.)
If only people could unglue their eyes - I get so cross when I hear folk...
June 4th, 2017 10:05 - When Rodents Roam... (P.H.Rose)
Sadly rats give other rodents an undeserved bad reputation. Great write PH
June 4th, 2017 10:01 - SCRIPTURE FOR SUNDAY ~ PLEASE PRAY FOR LONDON (AGAIN) (BRIAN & ANGELA)
My daughter in law was at the scene just an hour before it happened last...
June 4th, 2017 09:58 - A Narrative Snare (Ethan)
Great imagery - an accomplished piece of work.
June 4th, 2017 09:53 - Nan. (Goldfinch60)
What a cracking write - like the others it made me think of my Gran too -...
June 4th, 2017 09:51 - Exuberance (Augustus)
Ah babies and children and I just melt - sad reflection on the world these...
June 3rd, 2017 13:55 - Waiting A While (Orchidee)
Super construction O
June 3rd, 2017 10:42 - Salisbury City (ShannonXx)
It\'s been a long time since I was in Salisbury - as an artist whenever I...
June 3rd, 2017 10:40 - C A R B O N D I O X I D E S ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Some learn others refuse to - Put our Planet First said Macron - I fear...
June 3rd, 2017 09:13 - Little Voice (The Invisible)
Glad I looked in - a great write and hope to see more.
June 3rd, 2017 06:05 - The Swan\'s Diversity. (Goldfinch60)
I was there watching them as I read this - beautifully written G.
June 3rd, 2017 03:40 - 3:10 A M (Swingline)
Another little beauty and love the last stanza.
June 3rd, 2017 01:02 - Awayness. (Fay Slimm.)
Well I certainly understood it and also marvel at your superb use of the...
June 2nd, 2017 12:24 - My beautiful cordyline... (P.H.Rose)
They are superb plants and to get one to bloom in our climate is quite...
June 2nd, 2017 12:23 - Back of School. (Garry)
Not sure my mind was on ice cream at the time - but it is now!
June 2nd, 2017 10:36 - BARN OWL AWESOME ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Such lovely creatures - I can forgive them their diet.
June 2nd, 2017 08:18 - Tomorrow Will Do (Goldfinch60)
Whilst I do agree with this (if something needs to be done I can\'t wait...
June 2nd, 2017 01:43 - Thirty Years Later (Swingline)
Beautiful write - really had me feeling emotionally about your position....
June 2nd, 2017 01:21 - SYNTACTIC AMBIGUITY 1 (Michael Edwards)
Looks like Cedric\'s got toothache - I wonder if the fairy will be...
June 2nd, 2017 00:09 - Young Love.... (P.H.Rose)
This peels away the years - lovely write PH.
June 1st, 2017 23:48 - PEACE (Louis Gibbs)
Ah I\'m the same - in fact I am not a team player - If something has to be...
June 1st, 2017 09:31 - The Old Home (Swingline)
This really set the imagination working - another great write s.
June 1st, 2017 06:29 - LIMERICK 32 (Michael Edwards)
They do indeed - cheers Brian.
June 1st, 2017 06:26 - HONEY BEES ~ BEAUTIFUL (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I have a mug of hot steaming Twinings lemon and ginger with a spoonful of...
June 1st, 2017 05:02 - Deadly Intent. (Fay Slimm.)
Super - love your use of words: lunchtime sky etc Such a majestic bird.
June 1st, 2017 05:00 - The Glory of Jazz. (Goldfinch60)
You\'ve painted a great picture - wish I\'d been there.
June 1st, 2017 02:43 - A Single Rose (Tony36)
A real good \'un Tony
May 31st, 2017 15:51 - Available Access (Orchidee)
Another gem O
May 31st, 2017 15:49 - C U B A ~ An Island Paradise ? (BRIAN & ANGELA)
An interesting one. The generally held western take on the Cuban missile...
May 31st, 2017 04:35 - Which Path? (Goldfinch60)
Life\'s dichotomy - I would travel off the beaten track looking for...
May 31st, 2017 01:48 - My grave (ShannonXx)
Beautifully written and expressed - a fine poem.
May 31st, 2017 01:09 - I Pick Dandelions (Swingline)
This is a delightful poem s - simple, unpretentious yet so beautiful - \'I...
May 31st, 2017 00:53 - THE ENDING (Louis Gibbs)
This is so simply drafted and yet packs such a punch - but poets will...
May 30th, 2017 13:43
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