Comments on community poems by Michael Edwards

• Night-Stained. (Fay Slimm.) A masterful work - some really first class similes and metaphors used to...
  July 29th, 2017 12:18
• L A B O R A T O R I E S ~ A Blank Verse Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA) Well plenty of reason here - congrats on giving the lab a thumbs up - so...
  July 29th, 2017 12:16
• Over the Hills and Far Away. (Goldfinch60) Great fun poem but have to admit I\'m not averse to a bit of BP screeching...
  July 29th, 2017 02:24
• LETTERS TO MY UNIVERSE (Kaychee) What a simple yet effective work - love it.
  July 29th, 2017 01:19
• foolish heart (Heather T) I\'ve only just read this and, as a man, I feel betrayed. Everything I...
  July 28th, 2017 22:57
• My MPS friends (Christina8) Yes I missed you too - great to see the Lilac bloom again and look forward...
  July 28th, 2017 12:00
• FINAL CURTAIN (Louis Gibbs) Beautiful rounded piece - great work.
  July 28th, 2017 11:53
• MY LIFE ~ GOD\'S TAPESTRY (BRIAN & ANGELA) Great write B
  July 28th, 2017 11:48
• A Days first kiss..... (P.H.Rose) This has geat meaning_- I\'ve a great marriage and we are still after...
  July 28th, 2017 11:47
• Kaleidoscope (FredPeyer) One eye at one end - the future through the other - great Fred.
  July 28th, 2017 11:44
• Orange Memory. (Goldfinch60) Super - with my Dad it\'s the Hydrangea so this poem means something to me
  July 28th, 2017 02:31
• Finally Go To Sleep. (Kevin browne) Such a well composed write with some great lines.
  July 27th, 2017 08:35
• S O I L S P O L L U T I O N ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Great message punched home.
  July 27th, 2017 08:34
• Uncivilized. (Fay Slimm.) Beautifully worded scene - I can see it my minds eye even without the...
  July 27th, 2017 08:33
• Shredded Life. (Goldfinch60) The shredder - sad but satisfying - good read.
  July 27th, 2017 01:55
• The next door (Aa Harvey) Love the optimism of this - great read.
  July 27th, 2017 00:47
• Bondage (Malubotelho) More like 50 shades of red - such a powerful write - great passion.
  July 26th, 2017 12:53
• ANOTHER DAY (Michael Edwards) Been out and fell asleep on return so apologies for not responding to you...
  July 26th, 2017 10:51
• DREAM THEATER (Louis Gibbs) Just woken from a quick snooze so know it well - super piece of work.
  July 26th, 2017 10:49
• sooner or later (Willyweed) I would just love to meet up - whenever is the question. Bril stuff WW
  July 26th, 2017 10:48
• Making Sense. (Fay Slimm.) Great work Fay
  July 26th, 2017 10:45
• Another Glass of Whiskey (FredPeyer) This just trips off the tongue in a style that anyone can follow and as...
  July 26th, 2017 10:42
• F A B R I C S ~ An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA) Great bit of composition - as always -
  July 26th, 2017 10:39
• Treasure the Moment. (Goldfinch60) Never lose a moment make use of all the time you have - super piece of...
  July 26th, 2017 10:38
• take me down the mountain (Willyweed) Just rising here in the UK and the first thing I see is a posting by Sir...
  July 25th, 2017 23:33
• The Artist (Its Raskolnikov) So well crafted - a great work.
  July 25th, 2017 15:09
• lamentation (Heather T) This hits home - such a sad poem recording so well the grief within a...
  July 25th, 2017 15:08
• Childhood shenanigans (Jooles) Great write with a touch of the feel goods - really enjoyed it
  July 25th, 2017 13:31
• River-Speak. (Fay Slimm.) So evocative of the river - beautifully captured.
  July 25th, 2017 06:49
• JAPAN ~ NEW FUSION ON HOLIDAYS ~ PLEASE CHECK ~ THANKS (BRIAN & ANGELA) One of those countries still on the bucket list - hope to make it soon -...
  July 25th, 2017 04:40
• Just around the Corner (FredPeyer) I do like this - for me though I\'ve so much to live for and so much I...
  July 25th, 2017 02:54
• Marriage to Eternity. (Goldfinch60) Aah this so lovely and SO well written - the best gift they could wish
  July 25th, 2017 02:51
• Diet starts Monday (Rubers76) I know this so well. A meal without wine is like a day without sunshine...
  July 25th, 2017 02:48
• Dimensional Queries. (Kevin browne) Packed with thoughts in a great write - going back for another read as it...
  July 25th, 2017 00:31
• I just wanted to fly (Malubotelho) I see the wings being used here metaphorically in this great message -...
  July 25th, 2017 00:27
• Great weather (Renzi) Great fun piece R
  July 24th, 2017 09:50
• Disconsolate Depths (Orchidee) Another beauty O
  July 24th, 2017 09:50
• ALEXIS (Louis Gibbs) It makes us all feel so helpless in being unable to prevent it happening -...
  July 24th, 2017 09:48
• OCEAN BLESSINGS ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Great reminder of our responsibilities for our environment - will we ever...
  July 24th, 2017 07:49
• New Appetite. (Fay Slimm.) And a super write it is
  July 24th, 2017 07:46
• Reading Man. (Goldfinch60) Sadly not many seem to \'get\' poetry - well I do and I love this piece of...
  July 24th, 2017 03:20
• Coconuts (This is deep, real deep, probably as deep as you can get) (FredPeyer) Great piece Fred. I have only just conquered the art of shelling a coconut...
  July 24th, 2017 03:17
• Flames (Niallprideaux) Ah yes - a monostich - not many posted and this is great.
  July 24th, 2017 03:15
• Tranquility (Aa Harvey) An inspired last line - as an artist I am quite envious that it\'s not...
  July 24th, 2017 01:29
• Broke my promise (Renzi) Always a pleasure to read your postings - written with great abandon and...
  July 24th, 2017 00:01
• Nana (ShannonXx) What a beautiful piece. Is it my imagination - is there a greater...
  July 21st, 2017 12:44
• Truthtful Trustings (Orchidee) One of the problems with writing in rhyme (for me at least) is that the...
  July 21st, 2017 11:36
• THE CRIPPLED (Louis Gibbs) So sorry to hear you\'ve been a bit down of late but to cheer you up: ...
  July 21st, 2017 11:01
• Lois Bernadette (Poetic Dan) Having had a couple of scares with my wifes health (one of which was truly...
  July 21st, 2017 03:30
• Hypnotic. (Fay Slimm.) Did this a while back with my grandson - great fun and a great write to go...
  July 21st, 2017 03:16
• Seeing the Light. (Goldfinch60) Super piece - simple to the point and something I am sure we can all...
  July 21st, 2017 03:15
• Train to Nowhere (FredPeyer) That\'s what makes life worth living - not knowing for sure but always in...
  July 21st, 2017 03:13
• TEMPUS FUGIT ~ TIME FLIES ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Doesn\'t it just. I make sure I do something worthwhile every day....
  July 21st, 2017 03:11
• Childish head (Malubotelho) Love it - did you know that Dawn wanted to go out with Sunset but they...
  July 20th, 2017 15:07
• Interdependence. (Fay Slimm.) Great use of the language as always but having read it I feel I need to...
  July 20th, 2017 06:44
• Leading the Way (FredPeyer) However you interpret it its a great few lines Alfred
  July 20th, 2017 03:48
• LADIES & THEIR PETS ! ~ Seven Micro Poems (BRIAN & ANGELA) Great stuff Brian - gave me a big grin.-
  July 20th, 2017 03:47
• Kestrel - Haiku. (Goldfinch60) Great haiku Andy - how about working your way through Collins English...
  July 20th, 2017 03:45
• A few four line verses - food for thought! (Sue.evans) Great collection Sue.
  July 19th, 2017 15:50
• Love entropy (Malubotelho) Although full of very little its full of punch - full of admiration for...
  July 19th, 2017 12:39
• A day orf?! (Orchidee) Drove through Melton Mowbray yesterday - would have picked up a pork Pie...
  July 19th, 2017 12:32
• DON\'T LOOK BACK (Louis Gibbs) So simple, so effective. Often the hardest to write - I love it.
  July 19th, 2017 08:23
• Wednesday\'s child (Renzi) I was a Friday chick - cracked out of my shell at 5pm UK time - Love your...
  July 19th, 2017 08:22
• Still Climbing. (Fay Slimm.) the third stanza stands out for me despite its rather gruesome content -...
  July 19th, 2017 02:50
• E U T H A N A S I A ~ An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA) This is such a vexed question with divides among people of all religious...
  July 19th, 2017 02:47
• Vanishing Fears. (Goldfinch60) Do we know what questions to ask - good work G.
  July 19th, 2017 02:44
• My younger years (Christina8) Wouldn\'t mind being 62 again LoL but yes 22 was a good age - your poem...
  July 19th, 2017 00:54
• song of the hollow house (Heather T) Just magical - wonderful use of a great language.
  July 18th, 2017 14:57
• Solution (Malubotelho) More words in English than any other and still I often struggle for the...
  July 18th, 2017 12:18
• I\'m Not Perfect (Tony36) None of us are - great scribe Tony.
  July 18th, 2017 12:15
• Littleness. (Fay Slimm.) Just returned from a Japanese meditation garden - a superb garden in...
  July 18th, 2017 12:03
• HAIKU IN HARMONY ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Great piece to advocate all that\'s good about music - my favourite...
  July 18th, 2017 11:06
• Life\'s Aims. (Goldfinch60) Great stuff and what does it matter if perfection is never obtained - its...
  July 18th, 2017 11:03
• Children of War (FredPeyer) Inspiring write - good for them - hope they keep playing.
  July 18th, 2017 11:00
• We March (Its Raskolnikov) Not something we have here in the UK but I recognise what a great activity...
  July 18th, 2017 10:58
• Monster (Its Raskolnikov) I am not usually a lover of poems about personal experiences (the woe is...
  July 18th, 2017 00:11
• \'Mr Snail 🐌- what\'s the point?\' (Sue.evans) A quirky take - just love it.
  July 17th, 2017 14:51
• Crystallised Dreams (ShannonXx) Heart warming - a lovely poem which evokes nostalgia.
  July 17th, 2017 14:48
• TOUCHING HEAVEN (Louis Gibbs) My admiration goes out to you raking on such a wonderful role = and a...
  July 17th, 2017 10:47
• Monday Monday so good to me (Renzi) you have a real sense of communication in your writings - keep up the good...
  July 17th, 2017 10:38
• Goodbye (FredPeyer) Now I took it that you received the letter and the poem is about its...
  July 17th, 2017 10:33
• For Papa (Thank You) (M. Mohon) Must admit it made my eyes water - superb write in what I would call...
  July 17th, 2017 03:44
• Coffee First! (Goldfinch60) Filter coffee or French Press - the only way to get a full rounded cup of...
  July 17th, 2017 02:03
• Motley. (Fay Slimm.) Another beauty - I love embroidered hedgerows - sheer inspiration.
  July 16th, 2017 04:49
• LEADERS ~ WHO WOULD BE GODS ! A Blank Verse Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Well said and we have our fair share of half truths and lies here in UK -...
  July 16th, 2017 04:48
• Wall of Power. (Goldfinch60) You must be talking about some sort of bat and ball game :) I can feel...
  July 16th, 2017 04:44
• I am a Leftie - And proud of it! (FredPeyer) You\'ve got it dead right = or in case dead left
  July 16th, 2017 04:43
• Still A Nurse (Christina8) I worked with nurses and was a lecturer for many years - they are all very...
  July 16th, 2017 04:39
• Rice Wine (Nicholas Browning) Found the translation and enjoyed it - a great celebration - I raise the...
  July 16th, 2017 00:54
• Sleazy lover (Malubotelho) Quite like the idea of a sleazy lover myself - could be something...
  July 15th, 2017 09:50
• SHOOTING STAR (Louis Gibbs) So sad - and such a great tribute in this elegant poem.
  July 15th, 2017 09:47
• Movement. (Fay Slimm.) FP is right - so self-evidently a Slimm and oh so good.
  July 15th, 2017 07:37
• Alone (FredPeyer) Poet and artist - both done alone, no competitive element, no team spirit...
  July 15th, 2017 07:35
• WE ARE SAILING ..................... ! A Blank Verse Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Rarely put feet on water so to speak although did go on the ferry Cross...
  July 15th, 2017 02:08
• Loving Fire (Its Raskolnikov) Intriguing and different - good write
  July 15th, 2017 01:31
• Prosperous Paths (Orchidee) Lovely structural piece and you\'ve come up with the goods yet again.
  July 14th, 2017 10:53
• Epiphany (Malubotelho) Someone else posting a couplet - you\'ve made my day especially since this...
  July 14th, 2017 10:52
• THE WHO I AM (Louis Gibbs) The idea gave me quite a smile and did enjoy reading it.
  July 14th, 2017 10:50
• Asleep under the bed (ShannonXx) Always and forever half full - a poem with great hope - a real good \'un...
  July 14th, 2017 10:48
• Holiday Season (Renzi) Sounds such great fun - good read R
  July 14th, 2017 05:10