Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- Bethlehem Birth (Orchidee)
Fine write my friend.
January 2nd, 2020 14:37 - HELD BY ALL (Michael Edwards)
A secret beam from this intriguing read really lights up my evening - ...
January 2nd, 2020 14:37 - Time (Nemo)
A look at what love does to time - very well styled and full of romantic...
January 2nd, 2020 14:22 - TWENTY ~ TWENTY 🧡 ANGELA & BRIAN 💙 AN *ACROSTIC* PANTOUM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Clever verse which no doubt raises our heads to a new year of Britain...
January 2nd, 2020 14:19 - Fragile memories (Alta H Mabin)
You capture such pathos in these few lines of lost love dear Alta - - a...
January 1st, 2020 17:26 - A RESOLUTION (Michael Edwards)
Never fear Michael dear - Your wit will always rise to the crest of...
January 1st, 2020 05:17 - 2020 (Suresh)
An inspiring read Suresh - -- wishing you peace of many blessings in...
January 1st, 2020 05:10 - Into the New Year 2. (Goldfinch60)
May your warm and determined heart go on courageously as you face your new...
January 1st, 2020 05:09 - Last Breath. (Goldfinch60)
My heartfelt sympathy dear Andy - - how moving to read the saddest of...
December 31st, 2019 09:22 - The Light Of Life (Orchidee)
Fine thoughts to ponder here Orchi.
December 31st, 2019 09:04 - Pink Tinted Windows (TheImpossibleGirl🍁🤞)
A fine comparison in this romantic ballad - mirrors do indeed need...
December 31st, 2019 09:03 - birth of a poet No 2 (Dusk arising)
You capture the result of a troubled mind\'s call for pen and paper so...
December 31st, 2019 09:00 - Known stranger (Nemo)
The awful heart-tugging moment can happen to either gender and wrench out...
December 31st, 2019 08:57 - OUR NEW YEAR*S EVE 🧡💙🧡💙 A 3 3 5 3 ACROSTIC ~ SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Your celebrations must bring joy to all when after eating the singing and...
December 31st, 2019 07:00 - Radiant Revealing (Orchidee)
An inspiring read dear friemd.
December 23rd, 2019 10:44 - A Subaltern\'s Marriage. (Goldfinch60)
An most engaging twenty words Andy rhymed as a challenge and hope it won...
December 22nd, 2019 11:35 - A Ghost Perched on a Box (Nicholas Browning)
I enjoyed every line of intrigue as your story progressed in this meeting...
December 22nd, 2019 11:31 - Spirit Sparks (Orchidee)
A fine writ on taking steps toward grace - thank you Orchi.
December 20th, 2019 17:18 - AUTUMN IN WEMBLEY (FineB)
An admirable reminder that autumn brings its own beauties to those who...
December 20th, 2019 11:26 - TRUE FRIENDSHIP (Laura🌻)
A point on which to ponder dear Laura - Though rare this mutual closeness...
December 17th, 2019 17:43 - CHRISTMAS DECS (Michael Edwards)
Ha ha - - Oh Humbug dear Michael I am on your lady\'s side here - - tis...
December 16th, 2019 17:28 - Come And Lay Down Beside Me. (Kevin browne)
Such a tender and loving invitation to \"let love dangle from hearts\" in...
December 16th, 2019 17:04 - NUTZ about NUTZ 🧡 ANGELA & BRIAN 💚 A 4 5 5 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I am nuts about nuts too - - very informative read dear duo....
December 16th, 2019 16:45 - REPEAT~REPEAT WORDS ~💚 BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡 A RHYMING SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I never knew there were so many double takes for all sorts of things - a...
December 9th, 2019 17:02 - only you (Dusk arising)
Good to see your postings back again D.A. - thanks for this tender verse...
December 4th, 2019 05:26 - Missing You (Laura🌻)
I can feel your sad ache dear Laura - - when Moms are best friends we...
December 3rd, 2019 17:18 - UNDIES (1) (Michael Edwards)
I heard only once of peg thieves around my neck of the woods but wondered...
December 2nd, 2019 17:24 - Boredom Personified. (Goldfinch60)
Ha - - thanks for the first smile of my day dear Andy -- we all need to...
November 27th, 2019 06:34 - Tunnel of Life. (Goldfinch60)
A hard tunnel to dig my friend - - so pleased you got through - - - keep...
November 24th, 2019 11:43 - His Loving Art (Zuzanna Musial)
You word the beauty of nature in sun\'s rising and setting so well here...
November 23rd, 2019 15:07 - The Leap (FredPeyer)
Ouch - I felt the pain of decision in your excellent verse Fred - - - a...
November 23rd, 2019 05:26 - COUPLETS (3) (Michael Edwards)
A smile of a read but oh that picture - - - fantastic water-colour
November 23rd, 2019 02:39 - LOVE AT A DISTANCE ~ BRIAN ~ A LAMENT ~ (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A good idea scribed with great rhyming and a wonderful number to...
November 22nd, 2019 08:56 - Intake - (plus one for Fun Friday) (Fay Slimm.)
Oooh - - sorry I didn\'t know anything about a Fun Friday not a chance...
November 22nd, 2019 07:42 - Into The New Day. (Goldfinch60)
A beautiful piece of positive encouragement Andy as I am sure all who...
November 21st, 2019 15:00 - Bread, Jam, and Knife (Orchidee)
You describe the bread of life well here my friend - - a novel idea that...
November 20th, 2019 14:25 - Truism (Neville)
Your pen Nev identifies results so well in these few lines with this...
November 19th, 2019 03:51 - NATURE V NURTURE 🧡 ANGELA & BRIAN 💜 AN ACROSTIC 6 1 7 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
First rate acrostic dear duo and as for the number -a fave of mine - - ...
November 18th, 2019 13:58 - Peaceful Pursuit (Sylviasearcher)
No editing needed in my opinion for this inspiring verse on pursuing the...
November 18th, 2019 13:52 - COUPLETS (1) (Michael Edwards)
Ah - a stunning couplet to adorn the picture - or vice-verse maybe -...
November 18th, 2019 13:49 - Two Harbours (Neville)
Two harbours could never be more achingly remembered than in this...
November 18th, 2019 09:37 - THESE NIGHTS OF SOLITUDE (Laura🌻)
Your words ring clear in the heart of one who has lost a loved Mom - the...
November 16th, 2019 12:06 - Be Fierce And Strong (Brooklyn6timesplus)
A wonderfully inspiring read - thank you Brooklyn
November 15th, 2019 13:30 - Day 55 of light (Poetic Dan)
Your little pumpkin will treasure these words i am sure when she is grown.
November 14th, 2019 08:28 - MY POETIC SIDE ~ PROS & CON 🧡 ANGELA & BRIAN 💜 A 5 6 3 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Truly agree the MPS site has such a diversity on offer.
November 14th, 2019 08:27 - My Hands (Tom Wood)
A first class poem in both form and perceptive imagery Tom - - thank you...
November 14th, 2019 04:08 - Bride And Groom (Orchidee)
Very uplifting read Orchi.
November 14th, 2019 03:59 - SHE AGREES (Michael Edwards)
Great peek at what power a midnight paddle can reveal to lovers who ant...
November 14th, 2019 03:58 - WE TALK TO THE TREES 💙 BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡 A 4 4 4 2 BLANK VERSE SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A lovely tribute to one of the planet\'s greatest blessings - - trees are...
November 10th, 2019 05:26 - Strange Evening. (Goldfinch60)
Your miss of music dear Andy shows in this poem. Despite friends and...
November 10th, 2019 05:24 - a lie became noble (Dusk arising)
Oh the heartache raised in this read when youth for excitement lied to be...
November 9th, 2019 17:34 - War is Not for Lovers (Neville)
The appropriate picture your emotive pen paints wrings tears from my eyes...
November 9th, 2019 11:01 - THE BLEAK TREE 🧡 BRIAN 💙 A REFLECTION (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A poet\'s poem for sure Brian and one that stirs and inspires - I love...
November 6th, 2019 17:06 - The Smile (FredPeyer)
Yes a smile can mean many things Fred and you describe so well the...
November 6th, 2019 16:36 - Take Me Somewhere (Neville)
A request by a smitten She which put so plainly cannot, in any event, be...
November 5th, 2019 11:03 - She is Not There. (Goldfinch60)
Such a moving read dear Andy - - she will never leave the place in your...
November 5th, 2019 04:51 - Servant Sureties (Orchidee)
An inspiring read Orchi.
November 3rd, 2019 04:12 - RANDOM THUNKS (5) (Michael Edwards)
Oh - you rascal you - - - this had me in stiches at both the drawing and...
November 3rd, 2019 04:10 - Words to Page. (Goldfinch60)
Thank you for this first read of my day dear Andy - Words from your caring...
November 3rd, 2019 02:45 - Summer Breeze (Ron parrish aka wordman)
So utterly romantic Ron these memories of a summer-breeze time with love.
November 2nd, 2019 14:53 - St Stephen\'s Autumn. (Goldfinch60)
A wonderful collection of diverse happenings in Autumn and I am sure the...
November 1st, 2019 05:25 - SEA LEVEL RISE ~ MYTH OR MENACE 🧡ANGELA 💙 BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A dire time to be alive in this changing earth-face Brian - - you verse...
November 1st, 2019 03:33 - MOONLIGHT IN THE WOODS 🧡 ANGELA & BRIAN 💙 A FLOW POEM (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Both the Sonata and your intriguing poem bring the moonlight into its own...
October 30th, 2019 16:07 - Four Letter Words (Neville)
Ah - Fecundity - yes tis an appropriate eight-letter word that could...
October 30th, 2019 05:38 - just an oak bench (Dusk arising)
Your words fill a hospital bench with such evocative memories etched into...
October 30th, 2019 03:12 - Tin Whistle Player. (Goldfinch60)
This read filled my soul with both sadness and joy - to know there are...
October 29th, 2019 04:27 - Roses (Thoughts In Time)
A beautiful tribute to roses and butterflies - - thank you Kelly for...
October 29th, 2019 02:32 - RIVER OF LOVE ~ ANGELA 🧡 BRIAN ~ A PANTOUM (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A gorgeous picture and a verse to remember for those who are still looking...
October 28th, 2019 14:48 - Good and Proper (Neville)
Oh with that kind of want and need how could a lady refuse - hope she...
October 28th, 2019 10:31 - The Night Wind (Lamar Cole)
That night wind has such a lot to answer for in the romance department my...
October 28th, 2019 03:17 - I Walked A While (Thoughts In Time)
A piece capturing the romance of time spent with a loved one - a...
October 28th, 2019 03:15 - Pedantry - Limerick. (Goldfinch60)
Love the limerick and glad you found it again - - and as for the music -...
October 28th, 2019 03:14 - RANDOM THUNKS (4) (Michael Edwards)
Clever this witty thunk and so very true - -- love the peace of your...
October 28th, 2019 03:12 - It hurts as a human (FineB)
The conditions besetting humans are described so well - - consideration...
October 27th, 2019 15:00 - RANDOM THUNKS (3) (Michael Edwards)
What a brill idea............... ha ha .
October 27th, 2019 14:56 - Black n White (Suresh)
You verse Diversity so well Suresh - first class write.
October 27th, 2019 14:03 - Love vs Fire (Alta H Mabin)
A gorgeous colour to choose for a love-smitten river of emotions\" is...
October 27th, 2019 12:32 - Extended Ripples of Life. (Goldfinch60)
Those ripples are made even clearer by your capture of what they...
October 27th, 2019 09:02 - Resting Place? (Sylviasearcher)
Brilliant poetry and a wonderful tribute - -very moving to read and...
October 27th, 2019 08:03 - Festival of Lights (Suresh)
Yes Dewali lights up lives with kindness and joy of celebration - wishing...
October 26th, 2019 16:21 - Brooke (Lamar Cole)
A compelling read Lamar and thanks for sharing.
October 26th, 2019 05:11 - Excellence Expression (Orchidee)
A lovely and faith-strengthening poem Orchi.
October 26th, 2019 05:09 - KEEP WALKING (Michael Edwards)
Ha ha - - am sending out a search party post-haste my friend........ ...
October 26th, 2019 05:08 - ETIQUETTE TODAY 🧡 ANGELA & BRIAN 💙ACROSTIC 9 5 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Your acrostic speaks out and loudly of all the changes for worse in our...
October 24th, 2019 05:46 - Rare Diamond (Lamar Cole)
Than you Lamar for this sweet and well written love poem.
October 24th, 2019 04:19 - The Perfect Storm (SerenWise)
Brilliant erotic read Seren - must dash now to take a cold...
October 24th, 2019 02:37 - GARDENS OF PEACE ~ A & B ACROSTIC 7 2 5 SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
My garden grows much the same as your lovely poem describes - - a mixture...
October 23rd, 2019 05:11 - Indecently Yours (Neville)
Have to agree my dear Nev. that bound and tethered together these poetic...
October 23rd, 2019 03:44 - Love gives (Aa Harvey)
A wonderful tribute to Love - really enjoyed this positive and very wise...
October 22nd, 2019 15:46 - The rise and fall of life\'s notes (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
Excellent advice on how to take life as it\'s ups and downs are a...
October 22nd, 2019 08:31 - Simple Man (Lamar Cole)
And what better plan for anyone\'s life Lamar - simple is beautiful and...
October 22nd, 2019 04:19 - Penitent Pleas (Orchidee)
A comforting verse of praise - thank you dear Orchi.
October 22nd, 2019 02:40 - Autumn Into Winter. (Goldfinch60)
Beautiful thoughts dear friend with this positive look at the passing of...
October 22nd, 2019 02:33 - Music Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
A wonderful tribute in acrostic form Andy - - the sound of the glorious...
October 21st, 2019 01:37 - Always Yours (Neville)
Oh is a letter for a fortunate lady to keep forever -- unconditional love...
October 20th, 2019 06:45 - MAGIC OF HAWAII ! 🧡 ANGELA & BRIAN 💙 A COLLABORATION (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Am sighing for Hawaii after seeing the video and reading your poem - have...
October 20th, 2019 02:11 - Time Past (Neville)
True my friend that time past is never past to those sort of folks - -- - ...
October 19th, 2019 07:53 - GOODBYE FOR NOW ! 🧡 ANGELA 🧡 (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Wishing you both safe journey home and although parting from friends is...
October 17th, 2019 09:13 - Breaking Bread (Neville)
Pathos runs through these lines of invitation and what a mantra to chose...
October 17th, 2019 05:41 - TOGETHER AGAIN 🧡 ANGELA & BRIAN 💙 A LOVE POEM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
LOVELY TO READ THAT ALL WENT WELL WITH THE JOURNEY AND NOW YOU ARE BOTH...
October 12th, 2019 04:37
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