Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.

• Brooke (Lamar Cole) A compelling read Lamar and thanks for sharing.
  October 26th, 2019 05:11
• Excellence Expression (Orchidee) A lovely and faith-strengthening poem Orchi.
  October 26th, 2019 05:09
• KEEP WALKING (Michael Edwards) Ha ha - - am sending out a search party post-haste my friend........ ...
  October 26th, 2019 05:08
• ETIQUETTE TODAY 🧡 ANGELA & BRIAN 💙ACROSTIC 9 5 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN) Your acrostic speaks out and loudly of all the changes for worse in our...
  October 24th, 2019 05:46
• Rare Diamond (Lamar Cole) Than you Lamar for this sweet and well written love poem.
  October 24th, 2019 04:19
• The Perfect Storm (SerenWise) Brilliant erotic read Seren - must dash now to take a cold...
  October 24th, 2019 02:37
• GARDENS OF PEACE ~ A & B ACROSTIC 7 2 5 SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN) My garden grows much the same as your lovely poem describes - - a mixture...
  October 23rd, 2019 05:11
• Indecently Yours (Neville) Have to agree my dear Nev. that bound and tethered together these poetic...
  October 23rd, 2019 03:44
• Love gives (Aa Harvey) A wonderful tribute to Love - really enjoyed this positive and very wise...
  October 22nd, 2019 15:46
• The rise and fall of life\'s notes (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽) Excellent advice on how to take life as it\'s ups and downs are a...
  October 22nd, 2019 08:31
• Simple Man (Lamar Cole) And what better plan for anyone\'s life Lamar - simple is beautiful and...
  October 22nd, 2019 04:19
• Penitent Pleas (Orchidee) A comforting verse of praise - thank you dear Orchi.
  October 22nd, 2019 02:40
• Autumn Into Winter. (Goldfinch60) Beautiful thoughts dear friend with this positive look at the passing of...
  October 22nd, 2019 02:33
• Music Acrostic. (Goldfinch60) A wonderful tribute in acrostic form Andy - - the sound of the glorious...
  October 21st, 2019 01:37
• Always Yours (Neville) Oh is a letter for a fortunate lady to keep forever -- unconditional love...
  October 20th, 2019 06:45
• MAGIC OF HAWAII ! 🧡 ANGELA & BRIAN 💙 A COLLABORATION (ANGELA & BRIAN) Am sighing for Hawaii after seeing the video and reading your poem - have...
  October 20th, 2019 02:11
• Time Past (Neville) True my friend that time past is never past to those sort of folks - -- - ...
  October 19th, 2019 07:53
• GOODBYE FOR NOW ! 🧡 ANGELA 🧡 (ANGELA & BRIAN) Wishing you both safe journey home and although parting from friends is...
  October 17th, 2019 09:13
• Breaking Bread (Neville) Pathos runs through these lines of invitation and what a mantra to chose...
  October 17th, 2019 05:41
• TOGETHER AGAIN 🧡 ANGELA & BRIAN 💙 A LOVE POEM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN) LOVELY TO READ THAT ALL WENT WELL WITH THE JOURNEY AND NOW YOU ARE BOTH...
  October 12th, 2019 04:37
• Presence Promise (Orchidee) The best presence in one which by faith we can feel.......... fine write...
  October 11th, 2019 11:07
• He and... C (Clara) All your warm concern for a known friend shines from these sad lines dear...
  October 11th, 2019 11:06
• AUCKLAND NEW ZEALAND 🧡 ANGELA 🧡 AN ACROSTIC (ANGELA & BRIAN) With love put to such a test your future together will be better assured -...
  October 11th, 2019 06:25
• Challenges to Experience. (Goldfinch60) How true that experience cannot be taught my dear friend......... we all...
  October 11th, 2019 03:07
• ‘Connections Through Time’ (Thoughts In Time) Connections of heart are I believe timeless and eternal Kelly - your...
  October 11th, 2019 03:02
• those years (Dusk arising) An unforgettable read which recounts time\'s ability - we need those...
  October 11th, 2019 02:56
• Lost in Time (FredPeyer) Oh Fred -- - time as you write it is so very mysterious and we humble...
  October 11th, 2019 02:35
• THE WAITINGS OVER ! BRIAN & ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN) Truly a celebration time coming so put on your best smiles dear duo - your...
  October 10th, 2019 12:48
• THE AMERICAN \'R\' (Michael Edwards) Couldn\'t agree more Michael this sloppy lingo DARminates T.V. a LARt - ...
  October 10th, 2019 04:12
• Thirsting Tale (Orchidee) Fine write Orchi.
  October 10th, 2019 03:57
• My Firework (Clara) Am so pleased to have caught this tribute to firework displays and woven...
  October 10th, 2019 03:56
• Colorful accessories and grey memories (Alta H Mabin) Yes dear Alta writing out our sorrows and anguish at losing love is the...
  October 10th, 2019 03:16
• Morning coffee (Alta H Mabin) Such a warm and romantic scene you describe and so well Alta - thank you...
  October 9th, 2019 15:33
• WHICH SHOWER GEL? (Michael Edwards) Ha ha - didn\'t expect that last line - love your sense of humour Mike...
  October 9th, 2019 10:53
• Little Girl (FredPeyer) Such a refreshing read Fred and a tale well told with reminders that...
  October 8th, 2019 04:25
• We Do Not Bow (CindyB) Excellent imagery Cindy - -- we are made from the stuff of stars and you...
  October 8th, 2019 03:53
• Shriek (Dusk arising) Wow - -- never knew gulls could shout for entrails - a great surprise...
  October 7th, 2019 13:57
• BEYOND THE RIVER (Michael Edwards) Composed to poetic perfection the life beyond a river in these lyrical and...
  October 7th, 2019 03:35
• Walk Together to Eternity. (Goldfinch60) What a wonderful example of love your poem outlines my friend with joy...
  October 7th, 2019 02:49
• The Invisible Stuff (Andrew Charles Forrest) Loud applause for the new phrasing for these caring traits - I shall...
  October 4th, 2019 04:22
• I am a dreamer (Alta H Mabin) Dreamers tag onto a fanciful memory and keep enlarging to help life...
  October 4th, 2019 04:21
• Alphabetical Infidelities (Neville) Oh - very big chuckles at your last line - - what a surprise ending and...
  October 4th, 2019 04:18
• The Rainbows Answer. (Kevin browne) I love the flow of these reasons for looking more closely at colours of...
  October 3rd, 2019 23:42
• The Game (FredPeyer) And oh how second these word Fred - - you describe the futility of...
  October 3rd, 2019 23:37
• DISCOVERING A NEW CAVE ! 💙 BRIAN 💙 (ANGELA & BRIAN) A wonderful account of finding a cavern and how............. dear Fonz is...
  October 3rd, 2019 15:50
• just a half written song (Dusk arising) Glad you decided to post this bit of blues - I reckon it would go as well...
  October 3rd, 2019 11:05
• Broken Dreams (Clara) A tale within the first line of this tantalizing read Clara - - you take...
  October 3rd, 2019 09:25
• Perfect Imperfections (Neville) Yes the title you give tells how perfect imperfections can enhance the...
  October 3rd, 2019 09:21
• Cried A Million Shadows. (Kevin browne) A really deep emotive write Kevin - - it gives a poignant experience and...
  October 3rd, 2019 03:32
• Croquet and Nature. (Goldfinch60) That sounds like a game to enjoy amid the beauty of nature Andy - keep...
  October 3rd, 2019 02:50
• Waves crashing (Alta H Mabin) Soul mates are ever connected and as your verse points to the stars as the...
  October 3rd, 2019 02:11
• Message to My River. (Goldfinch60) The feel of being beside a flowing river cannot be beaten - water on the...
  October 2nd, 2019 12:17
• THE LANGUAGE OF ROSES ? 🧡 ANGELA & BRIAN 💙 COLLABORATION POEM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN) Lovely lovely the essences of roses so carefully explained in this...
  October 2nd, 2019 12:14
• God\'s Presence - Peace Series (3) (Orchidee) One of my favourite texts is used in this verse Orchi - - the words \" be...
  October 2nd, 2019 04:49
• Who is She? (Clara) I love the form and style of this denunciation of two-facedness Clara - -...
  October 2nd, 2019 04:47
• Indecent Propositions (Neville) Cant make up my mind whether it refers to a waitress selling food, a...
  October 2nd, 2019 03:57
• Jessye Norman. (Goldfinch60) Jessye had tonal perfection in her voice and she will be sorely missed --...
  October 2nd, 2019 00:47
• Crying Earth (Christina8) Such a good rhyme in these few lines with an important message - - a well...
  October 1st, 2019 12:25
• Assessing the Blues (Neville) Ha - - a round of applause after reading this poetic play on words my...
  October 1st, 2019 05:00
• Here lies She (Clara) A tale of battle lost but fought hard to retain being the One - -what a...
  September 30th, 2019 13:21
• MY OCTOBER BLUES ~ ANGELA ~ AN ACROSTIC 2 7 5 SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN) The wrench is to be expected dear Angela but I guess I know which path...
  September 30th, 2019 10:05
• Pick up the pieces (Alta H Mabin) Picking up pieces can often take much more time than any of us realize - ...
  September 30th, 2019 08:16
• Enlargement Expectancy (Orchidee) Good write Orchi.
  September 30th, 2019 08:14
• The Cedar wood tree and me (Andrew Charles Forrest) The feel of end nearing for a long-lived tree will hit hearts of readers...
  September 30th, 2019 04:58
• Wishes (Neville) Oh those wishes when time has had its results -- a poem touching the...
  September 30th, 2019 04:54
• I know (Alta H Mabin) Yea the right love can always be felt whether near or far true hearts ever...
  September 29th, 2019 05:35
• I Miss Her. (Goldfinch60) The missing will ever be there dear friend - love is no respecter of...
  September 29th, 2019 04:50
• Childish Smiles (Neville) Sweet memories run through these few lines giving a most appealing read. I...
  September 29th, 2019 04:42
• Yellow River (Neville) Reading this hitherto unknown and abominable method of female birth...
  September 28th, 2019 10:49
• Just once more (Alta H Mabin) As long as we see we can write clearly about all around us for others to...
  September 27th, 2019 05:21
• So. (Goldfinch60) A two letter word with a punch in its tail Andy - so I will handle with...
  September 27th, 2019 04:38
• Loves Dormant Memories (Suresh) The grim truth of reality sings itself into your poignant lines here...
  September 27th, 2019 01:13
• When Does Trust Kick In (Neville) Trust kicks in from that single moment when eyes first meet and lock ...
  September 27th, 2019 01:10
• No Longer Jazz. (Goldfinch60) Knowing how well jazz was at one time brought over by such as the Duke...
  September 26th, 2019 15:37
• THE END YEARS (Michael Edwards) An admirable write and what a lovely flower-painting. Your talents are...
  September 26th, 2019 15:33
• HARVEST IN 19th CENTURY AMERICA 🧡 ANGELA & BRIAN 💙 (ANGELA & BRIAN) A perfect picture of harvest and why it should be celebrated - meal of...
  September 26th, 2019 15:30
• Colors of the Rainbow (FredPeyer) Fantastic advice Fred - - this is off to my favourites.
  September 26th, 2019 12:46
• Serenity (Clara) Ah - I love this piece...The serenity of sleep is so well expressed here...
  September 26th, 2019 07:58
• Breathe (Alta H Mabin) And what better to reconcile a distracting dawn with than quietly...
  September 26th, 2019 07:55
• worth it? (Dusk arising) The young one are quite rightly worth every move we make to force change...
  September 26th, 2019 07:44
• Poppies (Neville) A reverent but light-hearted look at poppy-red and all it pertains to and...
  September 26th, 2019 03:48
• Deciduous (Neville) The difference between ever and naked deciduous makes needing that...
  September 25th, 2019 04:02
• Only you (Alta H Mabin) Such a heart-rending read Alta - hoping it was not written from...
  September 25th, 2019 02:26
• Crystal clear (Poetic Dan) Love is indeed to be held dear and you tell it so well Dan - I love the...
  September 24th, 2019 04:40
• Not so perfect, dinner for one (Alta H Mabin) Oh - sighs after reading these words dear Alta. -A tale so well told and...
  September 24th, 2019 04:38
• The Lightening in My Dark. (Goldfinch60) Yes lightening is forecast for the southern coasts today Andy -- it sure...
  September 24th, 2019 04:08
• These Words (Neville) A great early write for it shows your potential to a fine degree...
  September 24th, 2019 04:02
• Why Do You Write Poetry? (Goldfinch60) such a good answer to that simple question dear friend - - poetry as your...
  September 23rd, 2019 07:14
• Stashed (Neville) Memory indeed holds everything stashed very safe where none can break...
  September 23rd, 2019 07:11
• M I C H I G A N ~ I N ~ F A L L 🧡 ANGELA & BRIAN 💙 An ~ 8 2 4 Acrostic Sonnet (ANGELA & BRIAN) Glorious video and tune to go with the pictures - together with your...
  September 23rd, 2019 04:43
• Beginnings. (Goldfinch60) An eloquent tribute to beginnings and fine advice on how to catch hold of...
  September 22nd, 2019 13:42
• Splitting Hairs (Neville) Naught could be more romantic than this -- - -- a sigh of a write and a...
  September 21st, 2019 13:31
• A Perfectly Reasonable Question (Neville) All those will who knew the effect another\'s life had upon their own...
  September 20th, 2019 05:43
• BORROWING & LENDING 🧡 A SONNET 💙 (ANGELA & BRIAN) Yes borrowing and lending in days gone by seemed a neighbourly custom ...
  September 20th, 2019 04:55
• May I Kindly (Hidden) Such an appealingly written set of reasons for a lady to say Yes to the...
  September 20th, 2019 04:47
• Word is (Aa Harvey) And you chose rightly my friend - a fine example of waiting to find...
  September 20th, 2019 04:45
• Band Class (Sylviasearcher) An astounding read Sylvia - a poet\'s poem and full of metaphored power ...
  September 20th, 2019 04:42
• Very memorable occasion (Dusk arising) Light and love are heaven\'s great gifts - you pen this so well Dusk......
  September 20th, 2019 03:48
• Interlude (FredPeyer) A bitter-sweet write that reaches the heart Fred - - do hope you and your...
  September 20th, 2019 01:47
• To the sounds of Debussy (Alta H Mabin) What a great way to go to sleep and then awake - - -and all beside a...
  September 20th, 2019 01:26