Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- Into The New Day. (Goldfinch60)
A beautiful piece of positive encouragement Andy as I am sure all who...
November 21st, 2019 15:00 - Bread, Jam, and Knife (Orchidee)
You describe the bread of life well here my friend - - a novel idea that...
November 20th, 2019 14:25 - Truism (Neville)
Your pen Nev identifies results so well in these few lines with this...
November 19th, 2019 03:51 - NATURE V NURTURE 🧡 ANGELA & BRIAN 💜 AN ACROSTIC 6 1 7 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
First rate acrostic dear duo and as for the number -a fave of mine - - ...
November 18th, 2019 13:58 - Peaceful Pursuit (Sylviasearcher)
No editing needed in my opinion for this inspiring verse on pursuing the...
November 18th, 2019 13:52 - COUPLETS (1) (Michael Edwards)
Ah - a stunning couplet to adorn the picture - or vice-verse maybe -...
November 18th, 2019 13:49 - Two Harbours (Neville)
Two harbours could never be more achingly remembered than in this...
November 18th, 2019 09:37 - THESE NIGHTS OF SOLITUDE (Laura🌻)
Your words ring clear in the heart of one who has lost a loved Mom - the...
November 16th, 2019 12:06 - Be Fierce And Strong (Brooklyn6timesplus)
A wonderfully inspiring read - thank you Brooklyn
November 15th, 2019 13:30 - Day 55 of light (Poetic Dan)
Your little pumpkin will treasure these words i am sure when she is grown.
November 14th, 2019 08:28 - MY POETIC SIDE ~ PROS & CON 🧡 ANGELA & BRIAN 💜 A 5 6 3 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Truly agree the MPS site has such a diversity on offer.
November 14th, 2019 08:27 - My Hands (Tom Wood)
A first class poem in both form and perceptive imagery Tom - - thank you...
November 14th, 2019 04:08 - Bride And Groom (Orchidee)
Very uplifting read Orchi.
November 14th, 2019 03:59 - SHE AGREES (Michael Edwards)
Great peek at what power a midnight paddle can reveal to lovers who ant...
November 14th, 2019 03:58 - WE TALK TO THE TREES 💙 BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡 A 4 4 4 2 BLANK VERSE SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A lovely tribute to one of the planet\'s greatest blessings - - trees are...
November 10th, 2019 05:26 - Strange Evening. (Goldfinch60)
Your miss of music dear Andy shows in this poem. Despite friends and...
November 10th, 2019 05:24 - a lie became noble (Dusk arising)
Oh the heartache raised in this read when youth for excitement lied to be...
November 9th, 2019 17:34 - War is Not for Lovers (Neville)
The appropriate picture your emotive pen paints wrings tears from my eyes...
November 9th, 2019 11:01 - THE BLEAK TREE 🧡 BRIAN 💙 A REFLECTION (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A poet\'s poem for sure Brian and one that stirs and inspires - I love...
November 6th, 2019 17:06 - The Smile (FredPeyer)
Yes a smile can mean many things Fred and you describe so well the...
November 6th, 2019 16:36 - Take Me Somewhere (Neville)
A request by a smitten She which put so plainly cannot, in any event, be...
November 5th, 2019 11:03 - She is Not There. (Goldfinch60)
Such a moving read dear Andy - - she will never leave the place in your...
November 5th, 2019 04:51 - Servant Sureties (Orchidee)
An inspiring read Orchi.
November 3rd, 2019 04:12 - RANDOM THUNKS (5) (Michael Edwards)
Oh - you rascal you - - - this had me in stiches at both the drawing and...
November 3rd, 2019 04:10 - Words to Page. (Goldfinch60)
Thank you for this first read of my day dear Andy - Words from your caring...
November 3rd, 2019 02:45 - Summer Breeze (Ron parrish aka wordman)
So utterly romantic Ron these memories of a summer-breeze time with love.
November 2nd, 2019 14:53 - St Stephen\'s Autumn. (Goldfinch60)
A wonderful collection of diverse happenings in Autumn and I am sure the...
November 1st, 2019 05:25 - SEA LEVEL RISE ~ MYTH OR MENACE 🧡ANGELA 💙 BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A dire time to be alive in this changing earth-face Brian - - you verse...
November 1st, 2019 03:33 - MOONLIGHT IN THE WOODS 🧡 ANGELA & BRIAN 💙 A FLOW POEM (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Both the Sonata and your intriguing poem bring the moonlight into its own...
October 30th, 2019 16:07 - Four Letter Words (Neville)
Ah - Fecundity - yes tis an appropriate eight-letter word that could...
October 30th, 2019 05:38 - just an oak bench (Dusk arising)
Your words fill a hospital bench with such evocative memories etched into...
October 30th, 2019 03:12 - Tin Whistle Player. (Goldfinch60)
This read filled my soul with both sadness and joy - to know there are...
October 29th, 2019 04:27 - Roses (Thoughts In Time)
A beautiful tribute to roses and butterflies - - thank you Kelly for...
October 29th, 2019 02:32 - RIVER OF LOVE ~ ANGELA 🧡 BRIAN ~ A PANTOUM (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A gorgeous picture and a verse to remember for those who are still looking...
October 28th, 2019 14:48 - Good and Proper (Neville)
Oh with that kind of want and need how could a lady refuse - hope she...
October 28th, 2019 10:31 - The Night Wind (Lamar Cole)
That night wind has such a lot to answer for in the romance department my...
October 28th, 2019 03:17 - I Walked A While (Thoughts In Time)
A piece capturing the romance of time spent with a loved one - a...
October 28th, 2019 03:15 - Pedantry - Limerick. (Goldfinch60)
Love the limerick and glad you found it again - - and as for the music -...
October 28th, 2019 03:14 - RANDOM THUNKS (4) (Michael Edwards)
Clever this witty thunk and so very true - -- love the peace of your...
October 28th, 2019 03:12 - It hurts as a human (FineB)
The conditions besetting humans are described so well - - consideration...
October 27th, 2019 15:00 - RANDOM THUNKS (3) (Michael Edwards)
What a brill idea............... ha ha .
October 27th, 2019 14:56 - Black n White (Suresh)
You verse Diversity so well Suresh - first class write.
October 27th, 2019 14:03 - Love vs Fire (Alta H Mabin)
A gorgeous colour to choose for a love-smitten river of emotions\" is...
October 27th, 2019 12:32 - Extended Ripples of Life. (Goldfinch60)
Those ripples are made even clearer by your capture of what they...
October 27th, 2019 09:02 - Resting Place? (Sylviasearcher)
Brilliant poetry and a wonderful tribute - -very moving to read and...
October 27th, 2019 08:03 - Festival of Lights (Suresh)
Yes Dewali lights up lives with kindness and joy of celebration - wishing...
October 26th, 2019 16:21 - Brooke (Lamar Cole)
A compelling read Lamar and thanks for sharing.
October 26th, 2019 05:11 - Excellence Expression (Orchidee)
A lovely and faith-strengthening poem Orchi.
October 26th, 2019 05:09 - KEEP WALKING (Michael Edwards)
Ha ha - - am sending out a search party post-haste my friend........ ...
October 26th, 2019 05:08 - ETIQUETTE TODAY 🧡 ANGELA & BRIAN 💙ACROSTIC 9 5 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Your acrostic speaks out and loudly of all the changes for worse in our...
October 24th, 2019 05:46 - Rare Diamond (Lamar Cole)
Than you Lamar for this sweet and well written love poem.
October 24th, 2019 04:19 - The Perfect Storm (SerenWise)
Brilliant erotic read Seren - must dash now to take a cold...
October 24th, 2019 02:37 - GARDENS OF PEACE ~ A & B ACROSTIC 7 2 5 SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
My garden grows much the same as your lovely poem describes - - a mixture...
October 23rd, 2019 05:11 - Indecently Yours (Neville)
Have to agree my dear Nev. that bound and tethered together these poetic...
October 23rd, 2019 03:44 - Love gives (Aa Harvey)
A wonderful tribute to Love - really enjoyed this positive and very wise...
October 22nd, 2019 15:46 - The rise and fall of life\'s notes (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
Excellent advice on how to take life as it\'s ups and downs are a...
October 22nd, 2019 08:31 - Simple Man (Lamar Cole)
And what better plan for anyone\'s life Lamar - simple is beautiful and...
October 22nd, 2019 04:19 - Penitent Pleas (Orchidee)
A comforting verse of praise - thank you dear Orchi.
October 22nd, 2019 02:40 - Autumn Into Winter. (Goldfinch60)
Beautiful thoughts dear friend with this positive look at the passing of...
October 22nd, 2019 02:33 - Music Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
A wonderful tribute in acrostic form Andy - - the sound of the glorious...
October 21st, 2019 01:37 - Always Yours (Neville)
Oh is a letter for a fortunate lady to keep forever -- unconditional love...
October 20th, 2019 06:45 - MAGIC OF HAWAII ! 🧡 ANGELA & BRIAN 💙 A COLLABORATION (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Am sighing for Hawaii after seeing the video and reading your poem - have...
October 20th, 2019 02:11 - Time Past (Neville)
True my friend that time past is never past to those sort of folks - -- - ...
October 19th, 2019 07:53 - GOODBYE FOR NOW ! 🧡 ANGELA 🧡 (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Wishing you both safe journey home and although parting from friends is...
October 17th, 2019 09:13 - Breaking Bread (Neville)
Pathos runs through these lines of invitation and what a mantra to chose...
October 17th, 2019 05:41 - TOGETHER AGAIN 🧡 ANGELA & BRIAN 💙 A LOVE POEM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
LOVELY TO READ THAT ALL WENT WELL WITH THE JOURNEY AND NOW YOU ARE BOTH...
October 12th, 2019 04:37 - Presence Promise (Orchidee)
The best presence in one which by faith we can feel.......... fine write...
October 11th, 2019 11:07 - He and... C (Clara)
All your warm concern for a known friend shines from these sad lines dear...
October 11th, 2019 11:06 - AUCKLAND NEW ZEALAND 🧡 ANGELA 🧡 AN ACROSTIC (ANGELA & BRIAN)
With love put to such a test your future together will be better assured -...
October 11th, 2019 06:25 - Challenges to Experience. (Goldfinch60)
How true that experience cannot be taught my dear friend......... we all...
October 11th, 2019 03:07 - ‘Connections Through Time’ (Thoughts In Time)
Connections of heart are I believe timeless and eternal Kelly - your...
October 11th, 2019 03:02 - those years (Dusk arising)
An unforgettable read which recounts time\'s ability - we need those...
October 11th, 2019 02:56 - Lost in Time (FredPeyer)
Oh Fred -- - time as you write it is so very mysterious and we humble...
October 11th, 2019 02:35 - THE WAITINGS OVER ! BRIAN & ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Truly a celebration time coming so put on your best smiles dear duo - your...
October 10th, 2019 12:48 - THE AMERICAN \'R\' (Michael Edwards)
Couldn\'t agree more Michael this sloppy lingo DARminates T.V. a LARt - ...
October 10th, 2019 04:12 - Thirsting Tale (Orchidee)
Fine write Orchi.
October 10th, 2019 03:57 - My Firework (Clara)
Am so pleased to have caught this tribute to firework displays and woven...
October 10th, 2019 03:56 - Colorful accessories and grey memories (Alta H Mabin)
Yes dear Alta writing out our sorrows and anguish at losing love is the...
October 10th, 2019 03:16 - Morning coffee (Alta H Mabin)
Such a warm and romantic scene you describe and so well Alta - thank you...
October 9th, 2019 15:33 - WHICH SHOWER GEL? (Michael Edwards)
Ha ha - didn\'t expect that last line - love your sense of humour Mike...
October 9th, 2019 10:53 - Little Girl (FredPeyer)
Such a refreshing read Fred and a tale well told with reminders that...
October 8th, 2019 04:25 - We Do Not Bow (CindyB)
Excellent imagery Cindy - -- we are made from the stuff of stars and you...
October 8th, 2019 03:53 - Shriek (Dusk arising)
Wow - -- never knew gulls could shout for entrails - a great surprise...
October 7th, 2019 13:57 - BEYOND THE RIVER (Michael Edwards)
Composed to poetic perfection the life beyond a river in these lyrical and...
October 7th, 2019 03:35 - Walk Together to Eternity. (Goldfinch60)
What a wonderful example of love your poem outlines my friend with joy...
October 7th, 2019 02:49 - The Invisible Stuff (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Loud applause for the new phrasing for these caring traits - I shall...
October 4th, 2019 04:22 - I am a dreamer (Alta H Mabin)
Dreamers tag onto a fanciful memory and keep enlarging to help life...
October 4th, 2019 04:21 - Alphabetical Infidelities (Neville)
Oh - very big chuckles at your last line - - what a surprise ending and...
October 4th, 2019 04:18 - The Rainbows Answer. (Kevin browne)
I love the flow of these reasons for looking more closely at colours of...
October 3rd, 2019 23:42 - The Game (FredPeyer)
And oh how second these word Fred - - you describe the futility of...
October 3rd, 2019 23:37 - DISCOVERING A NEW CAVE ! 💙 BRIAN 💙 (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A wonderful account of finding a cavern and how............. dear Fonz is...
October 3rd, 2019 15:50 - just a half written song (Dusk arising)
Glad you decided to post this bit of blues - I reckon it would go as well...
October 3rd, 2019 11:05 - Broken Dreams (Clara)
A tale within the first line of this tantalizing read Clara - - you take...
October 3rd, 2019 09:25 - Perfect Imperfections (Neville)
Yes the title you give tells how perfect imperfections can enhance the...
October 3rd, 2019 09:21 - Cried A Million Shadows. (Kevin browne)
A really deep emotive write Kevin - - it gives a poignant experience and...
October 3rd, 2019 03:32 - Croquet and Nature. (Goldfinch60)
That sounds like a game to enjoy amid the beauty of nature Andy - keep...
October 3rd, 2019 02:50 - Waves crashing (Alta H Mabin)
Soul mates are ever connected and as your verse points to the stars as the...
October 3rd, 2019 02:11 - Message to My River. (Goldfinch60)
The feel of being beside a flowing river cannot be beaten - water on the...
October 2nd, 2019 12:17 - THE LANGUAGE OF ROSES ? 🧡 ANGELA & BRIAN 💙 COLLABORATION POEM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Lovely lovely the essences of roses so carefully explained in this...
October 2nd, 2019 12:14 - God\'s Presence - Peace Series (3) (Orchidee)
One of my favourite texts is used in this verse Orchi - - the words \" be...
October 2nd, 2019 04:49
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