Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- I was not ready for this (Poetic Dan)
A powerful read Dan and I must agree with its sentiments - we have but a...
September 11th, 2019 03:42 - Never Not Once (Neville)
Good morn to you Nev. The sadness in these lines shows how self-pity can...
September 11th, 2019 02:31 - LESOTHOHTOSEL ~ A REFLECTION ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Lots of interesting facts learnt from your posting today dear duo - - -...
September 10th, 2019 15:41 - Finding Moments (Christina8)
I must agree with Neville - your other half is very fortunate dear...
September 10th, 2019 14:53 - last dance (Dusk arising)
That last dance is always the saddest and this little write has all the...
September 10th, 2019 13:21 - No fear (Poetic Dan)
We who have the gift of life will not go into non-existence - as there is...
September 10th, 2019 12:24 - Best Friends (Neville)
Best friends to the bitter end said the crows in Jungledbook and I took...
September 10th, 2019 10:20 - Treasure Hunt. (Goldfinch60)
what a fun thing to do Andy - I love the idea of hunting treasure for all...
September 10th, 2019 05:37 - Search Me, See Me (Orchidee)
A fine prayer-poem Orchi.
September 10th, 2019 03:06 - TREES in SEASON ~ QUARTETTE of QUATRAINS (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Love this tribute to all the glorious trees - - whenever I walk my faves...
September 9th, 2019 13:02 - Roses Grow A Thorn Of Love. (Kevin browne)
This set of stanzas have an amazing flow as thought follows thought - -...
September 9th, 2019 11:02 - Rain dance (Alta H Mabin)
That dance of aching souls leaves such a hollow when raindrops add to our...
September 9th, 2019 07:57 - look back (Dusk arising)
A read filled with the lure of mystery - your pen write these metaphoric...
September 9th, 2019 03:33 - Don\'t You Dare Stop Now (Neville)
Ha ha -- Big Little Fay - - hhhmmm that\'s a new name - -- I\'m not very...
September 9th, 2019 02:57 - Don\'t You Dare Stop Now (Neville)
Ah - - this write reaches its climax so poetically perfect - - - - - - a...
September 9th, 2019 02:04 - Double Jeopardy (Neville)
Returned for a second helping of this punchy 7-5 -7 and still find it...
September 8th, 2019 23:57 - confidence (Dusk arising)
You out-best you best with this little gem D - deep and ...
September 8th, 2019 23:53 - Infinite beauty (Alta H Mabin)
An engaging unfolding through so few words of morning\'s beautiful dress...
September 8th, 2019 11:46 - The Book of Life. (Goldfinch60)
A great attitude to have - that book of life I feel sure will be opened...
September 8th, 2019 05:28 - IT\'S WHAT AN ARTIST DOES (Michael Edwards)
You most certainly are in that class of crearting as your wonderful ...
September 8th, 2019 02:49 - Double Jeopardy (Neville)
An ouch of a Sen. my friend....... am feeling the force of your...
September 8th, 2019 02:44 - A million shattered pieces of my heart (Alta H Mabin)
Your words reach into the core and I feel the sadness yet that last stanza...
September 7th, 2019 13:25 - A Silver Coin A Poets Flair. (Kevin browne)
Your love poems allure every reader with flow and diversity - another...
September 7th, 2019 11:07 - Mourning (Bay)
The feel of sad loss and overwhelming depression makes this a haunt of a...
September 7th, 2019 09:59 - Tock (Andrew Charles Forrest)
These droll lines sum up the dire situation so well Andrew. Thanks for...
September 7th, 2019 04:25 - Strong is Quiet. (Goldfinch60)
There are reasons for both yet the quiet are often the strongest inside. A...
September 7th, 2019 02:18 - An Autumn Harvest (Neville)
I was there in that orchard so clear was your picture of autumn long past...
September 7th, 2019 00:58 - AS NIGHT DISPLACES (Michael Edwards)
I felt that saline surge as I read this little gem Michael - - great...
September 7th, 2019 00:48 - Denial (Vanessa wallace)
A good look at perfection and how it changes according to choice - - I...
September 6th, 2019 10:49 - Shutter (Vanessa wallace)
A shutter will snap and there will be an image - your poem looked at what...
September 6th, 2019 10:43 - Winters kitten and the autumn (Andrew Charles Forrest)
A lovely and very well crafted tribute to September\'s gift of the...
September 6th, 2019 07:56 - conjeal (Dusk arising)
A most beguiling read D. that leaves me wanting a sequel. A deep and...
September 6th, 2019 02:47 - DROLL COUPLETS (14) (Michael Edwards)
Another chuckle from your clever aptitude for seeing the fun-side of life...
September 6th, 2019 01:45 - Infinity (Neville)
Perfectly poemed these sacred places of fallen heroes - - time stands to...
September 6th, 2019 00:17 - The Mind (Stephen OConnell)
Ah - I really agree with these words Stephen - a writer is only know...
September 5th, 2019 12:49 - Diamonds And Dafodills. (Kevin browne)
what an inspiring title and unique phrasing in this well crafted tale of...
September 5th, 2019 05:05 - MEMORIES 🧡 ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN)
True love cannot fade and together again soon you dear duo will make this...
September 5th, 2019 04:22 - Sharon Tate (FineB)
Poor young innocents got really hung up on the tinsel back then - one sad...
September 5th, 2019 04:20 - DROLL COUPLETS (13) (Michael Edwards)
Who would have thought there was a rhyme to put with SQUITS - not...
September 5th, 2019 02:50 - Somewhere Behind These Eyes (Neville)
Words that break needed silence are but as this strong poem relates - a...
September 5th, 2019 02:15 - The One (Christina8)
Love and gentle enchantment in each other\'s expressions of tenderness...
September 4th, 2019 12:11 - Rain of Forgiveness (Nafis Light)
Raindrops invigorate if we stay and let them hit us a while - stress...
September 4th, 2019 11:29 - I Can Listen. (Goldfinch60)
This is what friends are for and you for sure brought that lady comfort...
September 4th, 2019 09:33 - Our Crescendo (Clara)
Such a discrete description of physical love - - the lines tumble sensual...
September 4th, 2019 09:30 - DROLL COUPLETS (12) (Michael Edwards)
Guson wi\' yer Mike - yous only old when you forget what mem\'ry...
September 4th, 2019 06:24 - SUMMER TO AUTUMN ~ AN ACROSTIC 6 2 6 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Autumn is favourite with me too and reading this tribute to the changes in...
September 4th, 2019 03:46 - A Ladies Man (Neville)
Ha ha -- brilliant.
September 4th, 2019 03:11 - I Held Your Hand (G84)
A treasured memory and told with poetic rhyme the place will ever be...
September 3rd, 2019 15:57 - David (Rrodriguez)
A wonderfully caring tribute which will be treasured not only by the said...
September 3rd, 2019 13:30 - A melody of love (Alta H Mabin)
A lyrical lilt to these melodious lines centred on love - -- thank you...
September 3rd, 2019 12:30 - DROLL COUPLETS (11) (Michael Edwards)
Am laughing now at this droll but true couplet dear Michael - - love the...
September 3rd, 2019 03:27 - When Waters Reflection. (Kevin browne)
You have such a way with words Kevin and this piece flows from your pen...
September 3rd, 2019 03:18 - For The Sake of Poetry (Neville)
A smile for this beguiling end again Nev --- you are a master at leaving...
September 3rd, 2019 03:12 - Adrenaline shot (Chris Yellow)
I agree with and admire your take on the second stage and the energy that...
September 2nd, 2019 07:38 - Fear of anticipation (Chris Yellow)
Anticipation can either be pleasant or a danger to health - well...
September 2nd, 2019 07:35 - The balance is one to nurture. (Chris Yellow)
A bouquet of phrasing to sigh for and well worth another few reads - - so...
September 2nd, 2019 07:29 - The pretensions of a poet misunderstood (Sylviasearcher)
Freedom to be just who we are is priceless and you write its absence most...
September 2nd, 2019 05:37 - Two Friends. (Goldfinch60)
That is just how a Dad and his son show true closeness - - relaxed and...
September 2nd, 2019 02:47 - what do you do? (Dusk arising)
Its hard to move on when your heart wants to stay.......... a...
September 2nd, 2019 02:39 - DROLL COUPLETS (10) (Michael Edwards)
Ha ha ha - - this couplet reads just like a male I know .
September 2nd, 2019 02:37 - PRAYER CHANGES EVERYTHING ~ A & B ~ A HYMN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Yes a prayerful mode is the answer to a life fraught with all sorts of...
September 1st, 2019 05:13 - white rabbits (Dusk arising)
Thanks for posting this poetic reminder of how to greet today\'s incoming...
September 1st, 2019 05:09 - HAVE I TOLD YOU LATELY THAT I 🧡 YOU ? A 🧡 B 💙 A PANTOUM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
What a lovely song to sing to each other across the miles and thanks for...
August 31st, 2019 13:12 - A Four Letter Word (SerenWise)
Love those two final lines Seren - - they augment the whole verse. - a...
August 31st, 2019 04:26 - The Love Of A Woman (Ron parrish aka wordman)
A wonderful tribute to love and full of your talent for the romantic -...
August 31st, 2019 04:19 - Loving Leadings (Orchidee)
A fine write Orchi. - a lot to be learned from that experience way back...
August 31st, 2019 02:16 - UNDEMOCRATIC DEMOCRACY (Michael Edwards)
Michael your outcry has my vote for every single point made on the issue...
August 31st, 2019 01:12 - Candle or Mirror. (Goldfinch60)
A caring request and told with such delicacy dear Andy - -- spreading...
August 30th, 2019 05:03 - CHICKEN TONIGHT ! 🧡 BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡 A CULLINARY SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
What a deeeeliciousss read - indeed a saucy addition to normal fried...
August 30th, 2019 05:00 - unlikely bunch (Dusk arising)
You describe the need for unlikely strangers meeting to fight the good...
August 30th, 2019 03:06 - I Knew I was Right! (Goldfinch60)
Yes that article made it clear that red wind is good for the heart - - and...
August 29th, 2019 11:52 - Imagine (Sylviasearcher)
A heart-ache of a read dear Sylvia and worded so clear that readers like...
August 29th, 2019 04:05 - Bedroom Walls & Borrowers (Neville)
A poet\'s look at the residue left by many a happening between old stone...
August 29th, 2019 03:02 - Seasons Change (Christina8)
Your well-crafted reminder of autumn\'s nearness helps us keep these...
August 28th, 2019 14:44 - ENTHUSIASM IN JOB 🧡 ANGELA 🧡 AN ACROSTIC SUPASONNET 🧡 (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Yes perseverance has a whole influence of those who need more dexterity...
August 28th, 2019 10:53 - shroud (Dusk arising)
Yes we all have a hanger on which we put personal traits we wish to be...
August 28th, 2019 03:46 - Trapped (Neville)
Sad but familiar - harming of self in some measure seems to come from too...
August 28th, 2019 03:25 - New Life. (Goldfinch60)
A truly delightful poetic welcome to the newest family member dear Andy - ...
August 27th, 2019 13:29 - if time would (Dusk arising)
So true and well written - a smile within lights up the soul - - a...
August 27th, 2019 13:26 - Juxtaposition (Meg)
Well said Meg - - - no going back once forward movement has shown you its...
August 26th, 2019 06:06 - Mistakes. (Goldfinch60)
A wise reminder dear Andy - mistakes are what make us if we see them...
August 26th, 2019 03:12 - Love and Warm Toast (Neville)
Beautiful........................
August 25th, 2019 03:02 - Prayer Petitions (Orchidee)
Another fine write Orchi. and thank you
August 24th, 2019 08:28 - Apathy. (Goldfinch60)
es - - so true these words dear Andy - --- - - you chose the right word...
August 24th, 2019 02:55 - The Wind Cried Mary (Neville)
The trauma of letting loved ones go is expressed in this tender tribute...
August 24th, 2019 02:51 - HAIL SMILING MORN 🧡 ANGELA 🧡 A PANTOUM (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A wonderful tribute to dawn and in archaic it reads even...
August 24th, 2019 01:54 - HOMESICK ON HOLIDAY ? ANGELA 🧡 BRIAN ~ A BALLAD (ANGELA & BRIAN)
An interesting read which outlines the various reasons for missing what we...
August 23rd, 2019 13:09 - A Lifetime Or More. (Kevin browne)
Kevin your verse made a compelling read - trying our best is all we can...
August 23rd, 2019 13:05 - A Recollection (Christina8)
That magic night will not be forgotten when love guided your dances...
August 23rd, 2019 13:03 - My Chest it Flutters (Neville)
A fluttering chest and a heart that dances could be time to see the Doc....
August 23rd, 2019 07:29 - DROLL COUPLETS (8) (Michael Edwards)
What a timely comparison that I confess raised me a smile..............
August 23rd, 2019 04:22 - big old moon (paranoia) (Dusk arising)
Was tapping my feet reading this threat to usurpers D.A. - - \'tis good...
August 23rd, 2019 04:07 - Prom of Peace. (Goldfinch60)
Music conveys all the emotions and that time of sadness can surely be...
August 23rd, 2019 03:41 - POLLUTION SOLUTION ? UR ! ANGELA & BRIAN ~ AN INTERNAL RHYMING POEM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I second your mission to clean up this planet and action now is needed by...
August 22nd, 2019 13:40 - Release (Sylviasearcher)
A cry in love\'s wilderness if ever I read one and written with such...
August 22nd, 2019 03:36 - just one more dancer (Dusk arising)
A brotherly piece of comfort in poetic style and full of common sense to...
August 22nd, 2019 03:05 - Over The Hill (Neville)
That acre sounds familiar my friend cos I have one of those...
August 22nd, 2019 02:34 - Youth (Stephen OConnell)
How wise these lines - - at our peril we ignore the heart for its...
August 21st, 2019 16:58 - Just Take a Look (Neville)
A flamboyant female indeed who can ride over established tradition and...
August 21st, 2019 16:49 - Be (Jeffrey Roy)
Some really good advice here Jeffery - would that every male could read...
August 21st, 2019 16:05
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