Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- Protective Power (Orchidee)
Divine protection is something to liven each human spirit. A lovely...
September 16th, 2019 06:54 - WORDLESS (Michael Edwards)
8905 - - 9665 - - 699473022 - - - a wordless set of arresting numbers...
September 16th, 2019 04:28 - Client (Neville)
Letting that be so is wisest methinks......... clients are clients of all...
September 16th, 2019 04:21 - Misty Waters (Ron parrish aka wordman)
A wonderfully positive feel to this read Ron - - really enjoyed the...
September 16th, 2019 02:44 - Ready-Made Muse (SerenWise)
Wow - - Seren what a perfectly penned romantic ballad that spills from...
September 16th, 2019 02:40 - IT IS NO SECRET - WHAT GOD CAN DO 💙 BRIAN ANGELA🧡 (ANGELA & BRIAN)
What a comforting message in this lovely write - I learnt quite a lot...
September 15th, 2019 13:32 - Inside Her Pants (Neville)
I like a dare specially a double but can only think of these two...
September 15th, 2019 08:57 - Manners Abandoned. (Goldfinch60)
Manners atrocious these days - - unlike the video you chose Andy - - a...
September 15th, 2019 05:17 - My son, Jaden (Alta H Mabin)
No tribute could be more filled with love and your son will surely...
September 14th, 2019 14:40 - Freedom...Just Feel and Share It (Nafis Light)
What a beautiful words is FREEDOM - and you verse it so well here -...
September 14th, 2019 14:38 - A Blue Toothbrush (Neville)
I knew this ruse at one time and fell for it hook line and sinker - - ...
September 14th, 2019 13:47 - La Rêverie (SerenWise)
The depth of loss in this read is astoundingly versed - love the style...
September 14th, 2019 02:24 - AS AUTUMN TURNS (Michael Edwards)
A read to remember and save -- your verse had me spell-bound and that...
September 14th, 2019 01:55 - Another Good Day to Come. (Goldfinch60)
Ah - gratitude opens lots of happiness and your lovely verse is filled...
September 14th, 2019 01:50 - Food for Thought (Neville)
There for the eating was Love - - covered in rice paper no less - your...
September 14th, 2019 01:48 - MyLife (Purdy61)
Such a loneliness seeps through these lines Purdy -and so many describe a...
September 13th, 2019 07:03 - Hurt (Ron parrish aka wordman)
The rough paths of life so tenderly poemed here Ron resound with hurt...
September 13th, 2019 04:59 - swollen breakers (Dusk arising)
Wow - a story in five little stanzas and leaving me wanting more. Great...
September 13th, 2019 04:11 - Jerusalem Joys (Orchidee)
A fine celebratory verse my friend.
September 13th, 2019 03:57 - My Solitary Magpie (Sylviasearcher)
Birds like the magpie though beautiful in feather have a reputation for...
September 13th, 2019 03:55 - PARADISE 🧡 ANGELA 💙 BRIAN 🧡 A 4 6 4 Sonnet (ANGELA & BRIAN)
You make the reasons for a visit to New Zealand very appealing dear duo --...
September 13th, 2019 03:45 - Right here (Alta H Mabin)
Ah - - my favourite way of re-living the good times - bath-time as your...
September 13th, 2019 03:23 - Downtown Girl (Laura🌻)
A haunt of a read and how these lines must resonate with those whose loved...
September 13th, 2019 03:18 - Starship Is Anybody Out There. (Goldfinch60)
Such a sad but true wake-up call your posted today my friend - your...
September 13th, 2019 02:00 - Disinterested (Neville)
Oh - what a poor love-sick swain you poem for us today Nev. The lady...
September 13th, 2019 01:20 - Croquet. (Goldfinch60)
How interesting you make a game I have not even seen - wishing you lots of...
September 12th, 2019 07:44 - A to Z and you and me (Alta H Mabin)
You pen a clear picture of sheer contentment when love grows between two...
September 12th, 2019 04:26 - big old moon (love) (Dusk arising)
True love never fades with time passing by D. - loved the rhyming and ...
September 12th, 2019 04:24 - FOOD FOR THOUGHT ~ A 3 4 7 Acrostic Sonnet (ANGELA & BRIAN)
The thought of mass anarchy sets the challenge ahead - -wastage and...
September 12th, 2019 04:21 - THE BOUQUET (Michael Edwards)
Emotion flows from these solemn lines Michael - - what tale could it tell...
September 12th, 2019 03:18 - Correction (Neville)
Ha - - your talent for making me smile with your play on words is always...
September 12th, 2019 01:59 - It Has Been Eighteen Years (Tribute To September 11th 2001) (Brooklyn6timesplus)
You versed the terrible tragedy so clearly brooklyn and reminded us never...
September 11th, 2019 13:47 - opposites (Dusk arising)
Ha ha ha - - your pen never ceases to amaze with its unique looks at life...
September 11th, 2019 05:39 - Could Be The Best (JWKP98)
This caring poem would surely affect a friend to \"get up and have a good...
September 11th, 2019 04:25 - I was not ready for this (Poetic Dan)
A powerful read Dan and I must agree with its sentiments - we have but a...
September 11th, 2019 03:42 - Never Not Once (Neville)
Good morn to you Nev. The sadness in these lines shows how self-pity can...
September 11th, 2019 02:31 - LESOTHOHTOSEL ~ A REFLECTION ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Lots of interesting facts learnt from your posting today dear duo - - -...
September 10th, 2019 15:41 - Finding Moments (Christina8)
I must agree with Neville - your other half is very fortunate dear...
September 10th, 2019 14:53 - last dance (Dusk arising)
That last dance is always the saddest and this little write has all the...
September 10th, 2019 13:21 - No fear (Poetic Dan)
We who have the gift of life will not go into non-existence - as there is...
September 10th, 2019 12:24 - Best Friends (Neville)
Best friends to the bitter end said the crows in Jungledbook and I took...
September 10th, 2019 10:20 - Treasure Hunt. (Goldfinch60)
what a fun thing to do Andy - I love the idea of hunting treasure for all...
September 10th, 2019 05:37 - Search Me, See Me (Orchidee)
A fine prayer-poem Orchi.
September 10th, 2019 03:06 - TREES in SEASON ~ QUARTETTE of QUATRAINS (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Love this tribute to all the glorious trees - - whenever I walk my faves...
September 9th, 2019 13:02 - Roses Grow A Thorn Of Love. (Kevin browne)
This set of stanzas have an amazing flow as thought follows thought - -...
September 9th, 2019 11:02 - Rain dance (Alta H Mabin)
That dance of aching souls leaves such a hollow when raindrops add to our...
September 9th, 2019 07:57 - look back (Dusk arising)
A read filled with the lure of mystery - your pen write these metaphoric...
September 9th, 2019 03:33 - Don\'t You Dare Stop Now (Neville)
Ha ha -- Big Little Fay - - hhhmmm that\'s a new name - -- I\'m not very...
September 9th, 2019 02:57 - Don\'t You Dare Stop Now (Neville)
Ah - - this write reaches its climax so poetically perfect - - - - - - a...
September 9th, 2019 02:04 - Double Jeopardy (Neville)
Returned for a second helping of this punchy 7-5 -7 and still find it...
September 8th, 2019 23:57 - confidence (Dusk arising)
You out-best you best with this little gem D - deep and ...
September 8th, 2019 23:53 - Infinite beauty (Alta H Mabin)
An engaging unfolding through so few words of morning\'s beautiful dress...
September 8th, 2019 11:46 - The Book of Life. (Goldfinch60)
A great attitude to have - that book of life I feel sure will be opened...
September 8th, 2019 05:28 - IT\'S WHAT AN ARTIST DOES (Michael Edwards)
You most certainly are in that class of crearting as your wonderful ...
September 8th, 2019 02:49 - Double Jeopardy (Neville)
An ouch of a Sen. my friend....... am feeling the force of your...
September 8th, 2019 02:44 - A million shattered pieces of my heart (Alta H Mabin)
Your words reach into the core and I feel the sadness yet that last stanza...
September 7th, 2019 13:25 - A Silver Coin A Poets Flair. (Kevin browne)
Your love poems allure every reader with flow and diversity - another...
September 7th, 2019 11:07 - Mourning (Bay)
The feel of sad loss and overwhelming depression makes this a haunt of a...
September 7th, 2019 09:59 - Tock (Andrew Charles Forrest)
These droll lines sum up the dire situation so well Andrew. Thanks for...
September 7th, 2019 04:25 - Strong is Quiet. (Goldfinch60)
There are reasons for both yet the quiet are often the strongest inside. A...
September 7th, 2019 02:18 - An Autumn Harvest (Neville)
I was there in that orchard so clear was your picture of autumn long past...
September 7th, 2019 00:58 - AS NIGHT DISPLACES (Michael Edwards)
I felt that saline surge as I read this little gem Michael - - great...
September 7th, 2019 00:48 - Denial (Vanessa wallace)
A good look at perfection and how it changes according to choice - - I...
September 6th, 2019 10:49 - Shutter (Vanessa wallace)
A shutter will snap and there will be an image - your poem looked at what...
September 6th, 2019 10:43 - Winters kitten and the autumn (Andrew Charles Forrest)
A lovely and very well crafted tribute to September\'s gift of the...
September 6th, 2019 07:56 - conjeal (Dusk arising)
A most beguiling read D. that leaves me wanting a sequel. A deep and...
September 6th, 2019 02:47 - DROLL COUPLETS (14) (Michael Edwards)
Another chuckle from your clever aptitude for seeing the fun-side of life...
September 6th, 2019 01:45 - Infinity (Neville)
Perfectly poemed these sacred places of fallen heroes - - time stands to...
September 6th, 2019 00:17 - The Mind (Stephen OConnell)
Ah - I really agree with these words Stephen - a writer is only know...
September 5th, 2019 12:49 - Diamonds And Dafodills. (Kevin browne)
what an inspiring title and unique phrasing in this well crafted tale of...
September 5th, 2019 05:05 - MEMORIES 🧡 ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN)
True love cannot fade and together again soon you dear duo will make this...
September 5th, 2019 04:22 - Sharon Tate (FineB)
Poor young innocents got really hung up on the tinsel back then - one sad...
September 5th, 2019 04:20 - DROLL COUPLETS (13) (Michael Edwards)
Who would have thought there was a rhyme to put with SQUITS - not...
September 5th, 2019 02:50 - Somewhere Behind These Eyes (Neville)
Words that break needed silence are but as this strong poem relates - a...
September 5th, 2019 02:15 - The One (Christina8)
Love and gentle enchantment in each other\'s expressions of tenderness...
September 4th, 2019 12:11 - Rain of Forgiveness (Nafis Light)
Raindrops invigorate if we stay and let them hit us a while - stress...
September 4th, 2019 11:29 - I Can Listen. (Goldfinch60)
This is what friends are for and you for sure brought that lady comfort...
September 4th, 2019 09:33 - Our Crescendo (Clara)
Such a discrete description of physical love - - the lines tumble sensual...
September 4th, 2019 09:30 - DROLL COUPLETS (12) (Michael Edwards)
Guson wi\' yer Mike - yous only old when you forget what mem\'ry...
September 4th, 2019 06:24 - SUMMER TO AUTUMN ~ AN ACROSTIC 6 2 6 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Autumn is favourite with me too and reading this tribute to the changes in...
September 4th, 2019 03:46 - A Ladies Man (Neville)
Ha ha -- brilliant.
September 4th, 2019 03:11 - I Held Your Hand (G84)
A treasured memory and told with poetic rhyme the place will ever be...
September 3rd, 2019 15:57 - David (Rrodriguez)
A wonderfully caring tribute which will be treasured not only by the said...
September 3rd, 2019 13:30 - A melody of love (Alta H Mabin)
A lyrical lilt to these melodious lines centred on love - -- thank you...
September 3rd, 2019 12:30 - DROLL COUPLETS (11) (Michael Edwards)
Am laughing now at this droll but true couplet dear Michael - - love the...
September 3rd, 2019 03:27 - When Waters Reflection. (Kevin browne)
You have such a way with words Kevin and this piece flows from your pen...
September 3rd, 2019 03:18 - For The Sake of Poetry (Neville)
A smile for this beguiling end again Nev --- you are a master at leaving...
September 3rd, 2019 03:12 - Adrenaline shot (Chris Yellow)
I agree with and admire your take on the second stage and the energy that...
September 2nd, 2019 07:38 - Fear of anticipation (Chris Yellow)
Anticipation can either be pleasant or a danger to health - well...
September 2nd, 2019 07:35 - The balance is one to nurture. (Chris Yellow)
A bouquet of phrasing to sigh for and well worth another few reads - - so...
September 2nd, 2019 07:29 - The pretensions of a poet misunderstood (Sylviasearcher)
Freedom to be just who we are is priceless and you write its absence most...
September 2nd, 2019 05:37 - Two Friends. (Goldfinch60)
That is just how a Dad and his son show true closeness - - relaxed and...
September 2nd, 2019 02:47 - what do you do? (Dusk arising)
Its hard to move on when your heart wants to stay.......... a...
September 2nd, 2019 02:39 - DROLL COUPLETS (10) (Michael Edwards)
Ha ha ha - - this couplet reads just like a male I know .
September 2nd, 2019 02:37 - PRAYER CHANGES EVERYTHING ~ A & B ~ A HYMN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Yes a prayerful mode is the answer to a life fraught with all sorts of...
September 1st, 2019 05:13 - white rabbits (Dusk arising)
Thanks for posting this poetic reminder of how to greet today\'s incoming...
September 1st, 2019 05:09 - HAVE I TOLD YOU LATELY THAT I 🧡 YOU ? A 🧡 B 💙 A PANTOUM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
What a lovely song to sing to each other across the miles and thanks for...
August 31st, 2019 13:12 - A Four Letter Word (SerenWise)
Love those two final lines Seren - - they augment the whole verse. - a...
August 31st, 2019 04:26 - The Love Of A Woman (Ron parrish aka wordman)
A wonderful tribute to love and full of your talent for the romantic -...
August 31st, 2019 04:19 - Loving Leadings (Orchidee)
A fine write Orchi. - a lot to be learned from that experience way back...
August 31st, 2019 02:16
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