Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- A Ladies Man (Neville)
Ha ha -- brilliant.
September 4th, 2019 03:11 - I Held Your Hand (G84)
A treasured memory and told with poetic rhyme the place will ever be...
September 3rd, 2019 15:57 - David (Rrodriguez)
A wonderfully caring tribute which will be treasured not only by the said...
September 3rd, 2019 13:30 - A melody of love (Alta H Mabin)
A lyrical lilt to these melodious lines centred on love - -- thank you...
September 3rd, 2019 12:30 - DROLL COUPLETS (11) (Michael Edwards)
Am laughing now at this droll but true couplet dear Michael - - love the...
September 3rd, 2019 03:27 - When Waters Reflection. (Kevin browne)
You have such a way with words Kevin and this piece flows from your pen...
September 3rd, 2019 03:18 - For The Sake of Poetry (Neville)
A smile for this beguiling end again Nev --- you are a master at leaving...
September 3rd, 2019 03:12 - Adrenaline shot (Chris Yellow)
I agree with and admire your take on the second stage and the energy that...
September 2nd, 2019 07:38 - Fear of anticipation (Chris Yellow)
Anticipation can either be pleasant or a danger to health - well...
September 2nd, 2019 07:35 - The balance is one to nurture. (Chris Yellow)
A bouquet of phrasing to sigh for and well worth another few reads - - so...
September 2nd, 2019 07:29 - The pretensions of a poet misunderstood (Sylviasearcher)
Freedom to be just who we are is priceless and you write its absence most...
September 2nd, 2019 05:37 - Two Friends. (Goldfinch60)
That is just how a Dad and his son show true closeness - - relaxed and...
September 2nd, 2019 02:47 - what do you do? (Dusk arising)
Its hard to move on when your heart wants to stay.......... a...
September 2nd, 2019 02:39 - DROLL COUPLETS (10) (Michael Edwards)
Ha ha ha - - this couplet reads just like a male I know .
September 2nd, 2019 02:37 - PRAYER CHANGES EVERYTHING ~ A & B ~ A HYMN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Yes a prayerful mode is the answer to a life fraught with all sorts of...
September 1st, 2019 05:13 - white rabbits (Dusk arising)
Thanks for posting this poetic reminder of how to greet today\'s incoming...
September 1st, 2019 05:09 - HAVE I TOLD YOU LATELY THAT I 🧡 YOU ? A 🧡 B 💙 A PANTOUM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
What a lovely song to sing to each other across the miles and thanks for...
August 31st, 2019 13:12 - A Four Letter Word (SerenWise)
Love those two final lines Seren - - they augment the whole verse. - a...
August 31st, 2019 04:26 - The Love Of A Woman (Ron parrish aka wordman)
A wonderful tribute to love and full of your talent for the romantic -...
August 31st, 2019 04:19 - Loving Leadings (Orchidee)
A fine write Orchi. - a lot to be learned from that experience way back...
August 31st, 2019 02:16 - UNDEMOCRATIC DEMOCRACY (Michael Edwards)
Michael your outcry has my vote for every single point made on the issue...
August 31st, 2019 01:12 - Candle or Mirror. (Goldfinch60)
A caring request and told with such delicacy dear Andy - -- spreading...
August 30th, 2019 05:03 - CHICKEN TONIGHT ! 🧡 BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡 A CULLINARY SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
What a deeeeliciousss read - indeed a saucy addition to normal fried...
August 30th, 2019 05:00 - unlikely bunch (Dusk arising)
You describe the need for unlikely strangers meeting to fight the good...
August 30th, 2019 03:06 - I Knew I was Right! (Goldfinch60)
Yes that article made it clear that red wind is good for the heart - - and...
August 29th, 2019 11:52 - Imagine (Sylviasearcher)
A heart-ache of a read dear Sylvia and worded so clear that readers like...
August 29th, 2019 04:05 - Bedroom Walls & Borrowers (Neville)
A poet\'s look at the residue left by many a happening between old stone...
August 29th, 2019 03:02 - Seasons Change (Christina8)
Your well-crafted reminder of autumn\'s nearness helps us keep these...
August 28th, 2019 14:44 - ENTHUSIASM IN JOB 🧡 ANGELA 🧡 AN ACROSTIC SUPASONNET 🧡 (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Yes perseverance has a whole influence of those who need more dexterity...
August 28th, 2019 10:53 - shroud (Dusk arising)
Yes we all have a hanger on which we put personal traits we wish to be...
August 28th, 2019 03:46 - Trapped (Neville)
Sad but familiar - harming of self in some measure seems to come from too...
August 28th, 2019 03:25 - New Life. (Goldfinch60)
A truly delightful poetic welcome to the newest family member dear Andy - ...
August 27th, 2019 13:29 - if time would (Dusk arising)
So true and well written - a smile within lights up the soul - - a...
August 27th, 2019 13:26 - Juxtaposition (Meg)
Well said Meg - - - no going back once forward movement has shown you its...
August 26th, 2019 06:06 - Mistakes. (Goldfinch60)
A wise reminder dear Andy - mistakes are what make us if we see them...
August 26th, 2019 03:12 - Love and Warm Toast (Neville)
Beautiful........................
August 25th, 2019 03:02 - Prayer Petitions (Orchidee)
Another fine write Orchi. and thank you
August 24th, 2019 08:28 - Apathy. (Goldfinch60)
es - - so true these words dear Andy - --- - - you chose the right word...
August 24th, 2019 02:55 - The Wind Cried Mary (Neville)
The trauma of letting loved ones go is expressed in this tender tribute...
August 24th, 2019 02:51 - HAIL SMILING MORN 🧡 ANGELA 🧡 A PANTOUM (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A wonderful tribute to dawn and in archaic it reads even...
August 24th, 2019 01:54 - HOMESICK ON HOLIDAY ? ANGELA 🧡 BRIAN ~ A BALLAD (ANGELA & BRIAN)
An interesting read which outlines the various reasons for missing what we...
August 23rd, 2019 13:09 - A Lifetime Or More. (Kevin browne)
Kevin your verse made a compelling read - trying our best is all we can...
August 23rd, 2019 13:05 - A Recollection (Christina8)
That magic night will not be forgotten when love guided your dances...
August 23rd, 2019 13:03 - My Chest it Flutters (Neville)
A fluttering chest and a heart that dances could be time to see the Doc....
August 23rd, 2019 07:29 - DROLL COUPLETS (8) (Michael Edwards)
What a timely comparison that I confess raised me a smile..............
August 23rd, 2019 04:22 - big old moon (paranoia) (Dusk arising)
Was tapping my feet reading this threat to usurpers D.A. - - \'tis good...
August 23rd, 2019 04:07 - Prom of Peace. (Goldfinch60)
Music conveys all the emotions and that time of sadness can surely be...
August 23rd, 2019 03:41 - POLLUTION SOLUTION ? UR ! ANGELA & BRIAN ~ AN INTERNAL RHYMING POEM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I second your mission to clean up this planet and action now is needed by...
August 22nd, 2019 13:40 - Release (Sylviasearcher)
A cry in love\'s wilderness if ever I read one and written with such...
August 22nd, 2019 03:36 - just one more dancer (Dusk arising)
A brotherly piece of comfort in poetic style and full of common sense to...
August 22nd, 2019 03:05 - Over The Hill (Neville)
That acre sounds familiar my friend cos I have one of those...
August 22nd, 2019 02:34 - Youth (Stephen OConnell)
How wise these lines - - at our peril we ignore the heart for its...
August 21st, 2019 16:58 - Just Take a Look (Neville)
A flamboyant female indeed who can ride over established tradition and...
August 21st, 2019 16:49 - Be (Jeffrey Roy)
Some really good advice here Jeffery - would that every male could read...
August 21st, 2019 16:05 - To Cry Witch (Woodkatie28)
Yes those were the days when none could be familiar with herbs etc for...
August 21st, 2019 11:22 - Reaching (Sylviasearcher)
A wonderful appeal in these fervent lines - - your captured the title so...
August 21st, 2019 11:20 - TIME GOES BY SO SLOWLY ~ BRIAN ~ A REVERSED FORM POEM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I am sure you are both counting those minutes dear Brian - - a fine form...
August 21st, 2019 08:20 - catching raindrops (Dusk arising)
Ooooh I can feel the shock of a love lost D.A. - - - we never get over...
August 21st, 2019 04:19 - Unttled - XXIV (Suresh)
These words give much food for thought and ring true - thank you Suresh.
August 21st, 2019 03:25 - Mercy Missive (Orchidee)
Divine mercy can take mysterious ways which often need deep faith. A good...
August 21st, 2019 03:24 - DROLL COUPLETS (7) (Michael Edwards)
Oooops and Ouch -- I have done it myself - -- you must switch on the...
August 21st, 2019 03:20 - Gateway to Where? (Goldfinch60)
I too have had curiosity about old gates and am still wondering where some...
August 21st, 2019 03:14 - The Appetite of Voyeurs (Neville)
Ha - - now I know to leave the key in the door so you cant peeeeeeeep !!
August 21st, 2019 03:13 - 4 weeks today! (Poetic Dan)
A write full of positive vibes - keep up the fine flow of love for self...
August 20th, 2019 13:52 - My two best companion - Heart and Mind (Aman1586)
A fine comparison in these well crafted lines knowing heart and mind are...
August 20th, 2019 13:49 - TKR (Michael Edwards)
Welcome back Michael - good to read how well things are going ....bestest...
August 20th, 2019 09:36 - Fly Me in Circles (Neville)
Slow making of love in a summer storm reads so engagingly good as does...
August 20th, 2019 01:18 - Bride of the Hedgerows (Neville)
An brilliant ode to autumnal\'s wooing of winter - - so pleased to have...
August 19th, 2019 12:34 - Thinking Of You (Christina8)
Love means all to those who have found Mr Right - - a lovely read...
August 19th, 2019 12:29 - WOODMAN SPARE THAT TREE ~ FOR ME ~ A BALLAD ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
With you all the way to protect these glorious trees dear duo.
August 19th, 2019 09:50 - Wordiku Three. (Goldfinch60)
Ha ha - your three liner has inspired me to try this new wordiku Andy my...
August 19th, 2019 04:57 - From a Certain Distance (Neville)
Short, pithy and a sure masterclass in telling so much with such paucity...
August 19th, 2019 01:13 - the actress (Dusk arising)
This tale of a female who abuses what life and love offers makes for a...
August 18th, 2019 11:42 - A Quarter Past Ten (Tom Wood)
Tom you have a talent for engaging a reader with short terse lines which...
August 18th, 2019 11:35 - A Travelling Man (Neville)
Returned for a second helping of this gentle story of opposites needing at...
August 18th, 2019 11:24 - Towards the Top. (Goldfinch60)
A life well lived is worthy of such a poetic declaration dear Andy - keep...
August 18th, 2019 04:17 - THE GOODNESS OF OUR GOD ~ A PANTOUM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Worthy of praise indeed is our wonderful Creator............. thank you...
August 18th, 2019 04:13 - Celebrating Communion (Orchidee)
An inspired write and fine example of why the Communion. Thank you Orchi.
August 18th, 2019 03:21 - Miracles (Andrew Charles Forrest)
An impressive and well-written list of reasons why only the pseudo \"blind...
August 18th, 2019 03:20 - Tanka - Tanka (Neville)
We have no idea of conditions in places where customs allow this inhumane...
August 18th, 2019 03:15 - HERO (Laura🌻)
An impressive four liner describing a hero and telling the reason he or...
August 17th, 2019 12:04 - Goodbye Little Friend (Orchidee)
To lose such a delightful piggy-friend must be so sad and the video you...
August 17th, 2019 07:07 - Eating to Save the Earth. (Goldfinch60)
Well that is one way of helping reduce global warming - ha ha - thanks...
August 17th, 2019 04:31 - dark august days (Dusk arising)
Such a beguiling read and set in my old stomping ground of the Cotswolds...
August 17th, 2019 04:27 - Dirty Margarita (Neville)
Your tales always speak for the reader to judge and forge their opinion...
August 17th, 2019 03:40 - pure as driven (Dusk arising)
Even small changes if made by the many will shout the end to plastic...
August 16th, 2019 12:20 - THE LIFE OF ANGELA ~ IN NUMBERS ~ A BLANK VERSE SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
And what an adventurous life it has been so far my friend - - loved the...
August 16th, 2019 09:09 - Asleep (Seek)
A wonderful example of looking at romance whilst love takes a rest - - a...
August 16th, 2019 06:58 - Through a Tangle of Shadows (Neville)
Shadows veer imagination toward the forbidden at times and these...
August 16th, 2019 06:54 - SERENITY (Laura🌻)
Dear Laura - - find a small space for me by your serene side - - just...
August 16th, 2019 04:41 - FRUSTRATION (FineB)
Felt that outburst against things that go wonky at times in our life - -...
August 15th, 2019 12:47 - MY LIFE IN NUMBERS ~ BRIAN ~ A BLANK VERSE SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Glad you life in numbers Brian has given you times when you felt very...
August 15th, 2019 08:23 - A NEW KNEE (Michael Edwards)
Sending you bestest of wishes dear friend - people tell me they wished...
August 15th, 2019 05:07 - ...Of Love and Grief (Andrew Charles Forrest)
A stunning picture-verse of imagery Andrew which points readers to more...
August 15th, 2019 04:09 - Victim (PoeticBiscuit)
The best of attitudes to take is the mantra you penned and so well that ...
August 15th, 2019 03:27 - Not My Day. (Goldfinch60)
I know that feeling of being hemmed in while road-business goes on in its...
August 15th, 2019 03:25 - War a Senryu (Neville)
Enlightening senryu dear Nev and so very true. Hate and war indeed beget...
August 15th, 2019 01:55 - Talk Me Poetry (Neville)
My eyes fell on this resurrected piece of bold story-telling again and had...
August 14th, 2019 10:31 - Find your rainbow (Poetic Dan)
A wonderfully inspiring image you chose to head your poem today Dan - we...
August 14th, 2019 10:21 - Living Life. (Goldfinch60)
A wonderful outlook on living life to the full Andy and being unafraid...
August 14th, 2019 06:57
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