Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- Thinking Backwards (Neville)
You expertly set the scene of past love in wonderful happenings that are...
August 6th, 2019 03:22 - Storm (PoeticBiscuit)
Good thought here PB - storms can make us much more aware of our strength...
August 5th, 2019 12:04 - Fearless (Poetic Dan)
One of your very best Dan and so so positive - loved the whole read.
August 5th, 2019 11:34 - DO EVERYTHING TENDERLY ! BRIAN & ANGELA ~ A 5 5 4 Blank Verse Sonnet ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Such a charming interpretation of that familiar song and the lovely word...
August 5th, 2019 07:48 - Summer Daze (Christina8)
Ha - - that final stanza came as as lovely surprise - after reading that...
August 5th, 2019 04:29 - Rest In Relationship (Orchidee)
This red rests in faithful relationships and thank you for posting it dear...
August 5th, 2019 04:24 - Dreamworld Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
Your steps to wonder come through every line dear Andy -- a lovely read.
August 5th, 2019 02:31 - Herb Song (Neville)
A bouquet of pleasure these poetic herbs which smell of roused libidos....
August 5th, 2019 02:17 - Untitled - XIX (Suresh)
So true Suresh - - micro and macro under the microscope
August 5th, 2019 00:59 - Totally Trusting (Orchidee)
A lovely read Orchi.
August 4th, 2019 13:46 - LOVE TO EVERYONE 🧡 ANGELA ~ A SONNET FROM MY 🧡 (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Smiles for this deilghtful read Angela
- and top \'o this wonderful...
August 4th, 2019 04:20 - Underwear (Neville)
A tease of a read if ever there was one - - proper job (as we Cornish...
August 4th, 2019 03:58 - takes me there (Dusk arising)
Yes you got the sense that always remains - - scent is the thing that...
August 3rd, 2019 15:59 - Diana, Princess of Wales - A Life (FineB)
Her fame and attraction crossed barriers of age and gender this Princess...
August 3rd, 2019 12:56 - Help And Hope (Orchidee)
Full of good thanks I enjoyed the whole piece dear Orchi.
August 3rd, 2019 09:23 - ONLY THE LONELY ....... ! ANGELA & BRIAN ~ INTERNAL RHYME LAMENT ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Only the lonely could write such a an emotive poem and late though the...
August 3rd, 2019 04:22 - Any Colour at All (Neville)
Touch penned so well and the rest though fired through with pathos gives...
August 3rd, 2019 04:14 - Facade (Christina8)
Think that tomorrow will sure to be better dear Christina - - after a...
August 2nd, 2019 07:40 - HUMAN DESIGN (Michael Edwards)
Ha ha - - well we will see what can be done about radical changes to human...
August 2nd, 2019 07:33 - At One With Nature. (Goldfinch60)
Great to know you have a chance to cast again Andy - -- whether a fish...
August 2nd, 2019 07:27 - THE SENSE O\' TOUCH ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A 3 5 1 5 Acoustic Sonnet (ANGELA & BRIAN)
What a gift is the sense of touch and so well captured in your extended...
August 2nd, 2019 03:09 - A Gift of Seasons (Neville)
An emotive plea for summer\'s smile and scribed with a notion of time...
August 2nd, 2019 02:52 - Knowledges. (Goldfinch60)
Memory of such exacted recitations do stay with us Andy - - - school...
August 1st, 2019 12:03 - Love you more (Poetic Dan)
Such a loving birthday poem Dan and adding my own wishes to your beautiful...
August 1st, 2019 05:50 - AN AFTERNOON TEA ~ BRIAN ~ A 2 9 3 Acrostic Sonnet ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Count me in for the delicious Earl Grey - love both its taste and the...
August 1st, 2019 05:48 - UNSAID (Michael Edwards)
Sad but true and scribed so cleverly - love the flower-pic. too...
August 1st, 2019 04:20 - the love of birdsong (Dusk arising)
Proud that my yesterday effort inspired this outburst of well-written...
August 1st, 2019 03:23 - In Absentia (Ronald Watson)
Oh what a revelation that must have been in the course of a funeral - an...
August 1st, 2019 03:07 - Fonts and Guises (Neville)
Yes true heroes exist to better others and what better than using not...
August 1st, 2019 02:07 - Shard of a shard (Poetic Dan)
An amazing piece of encouragement and sense. Humility was and is ever the...
July 31st, 2019 13:21 - Fear of anticipation (Chris Yellow)
A fine first posting here on MPS and welcome Chris - - the write raises...
July 31st, 2019 12:35 - A Cup Of Tea (Christina8)
Tea is real thirst quencher to me too dear friend yet take my hat off to...
July 31st, 2019 09:34 - FORGOT TO PACK ~ YOUR PLASTIC MAC ? ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A Lament ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
This read brought a hoot of recognition from yours truly - - a great...
July 31st, 2019 04:46 - Untitled - XVII (Suresh)
Yes the read opens more doors than those four small lines - a memorable...
July 31st, 2019 03:23 - Creative Considerings (Orchidee)
A write of faith and no mistake Orchi - thank you for sharing it.
July 31st, 2019 03:21 - ANOTHER SHORTIE (Michael Edwards)
Good-un today my friend - shall be remembering this couplet - - living for...
July 31st, 2019 03:20 - Conned to the End. (Goldfinch60)
Ha ha - well that was a surprise to my eyes dear Andy - - the man knew...
July 31st, 2019 03:19 - Mirror Envy (Neville)
The read saddens yet strength guides the pen of your poetic defiance dear...
July 31st, 2019 03:14 - How Are You Today? (Goldfinch60)
Such a positive way to greet each day and thank you for sharing it...
July 30th, 2019 10:57 - Shards of Knowledge (Suresh)
Shards when put together can mount to a plan - - sound poetic reasoning...
July 30th, 2019 06:02 - On finding Truth (Neville)
Had to delete through a typo - my apologies Nev..........
And a poet of...
July 30th, 2019 03:50 - FIT AS A FIDDLE (Michael Edwards)
Ha - such a perceptive peer at what seems a bewildering old adage ...
July 30th, 2019 00:42 - LADY IN RED ~ BRIAN ~ 4 QUATRAINS plus line one repeat ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A smile swept across my face in reading this well-rhymed tribute to your...
July 29th, 2019 10:49 - Candles (Sylviasearcher)
Oh this is so beautifully rhymed and so appealing in texture and eloquence...
July 29th, 2019 08:00 - Cold Under The Coat (Neville)
A garment and its smell can have such a permanent significance and the...
July 29th, 2019 06:59 - Victim (Jabberwocky)
A very well perceived view of the growing need to be known as a victim....
July 29th, 2019 03:57 - Unraveling...... (Suresh)
Loud applause Suresh for this write which is obviously the result of...
July 29th, 2019 01:21 - THE ARTIST (2) (Michael Edwards)
Yes the art of both painter and poet are captured in these three skillful...
July 29th, 2019 01:17 - Hunfriths Head (SerenWise)
You capture the very essence of place here in this compelling poem of...
July 29th, 2019 01:14 - To Know Christ Is To Know God (Orchidee)
I really believe in the title and that Christ dwells in all fullness....
July 28th, 2019 12:24 - Love rays everyday (Poetic Dan)
A wonderful read Dan - you have made it................ congrats with...
July 28th, 2019 12:21 - And They Called Her Iris (Neville)
Ah - my favourite shade is violet
and thanks for the info. on such a ...
July 28th, 2019 03:46 - Break Your Heart (Christina8)
A heart that breaks can to an extent also heal and the humble contrition...
July 28th, 2019 03:16 - without drinking (Dusk arising)
Sending the warmest of wishes as you undertake another few weeks of this...
July 28th, 2019 03:13 - Ode to You (SerenWise)
A beautiful tribute to someone well loved and thanks for sharing it Seren.
July 27th, 2019 02:36 - Fishing Again. (Goldfinch60)
So pleased you are back with the rod Andy - looking forward to reading...
July 27th, 2019 02:34 - An Extraordinary Afternoon (Christina8)
Your pen paints the picture of paddling with minnows so clearly I could...
July 27th, 2019 01:36 - Bring it On (Neville)
Happenings welcomed are to be treasured as that moment does not come again...
July 27th, 2019 01:34 - Ignorant People. (Goldfinch60)
Folk find all sorts of reasons to be ignorant and act innocent - - I...
July 26th, 2019 04:44 - dusk arises (Dusk arising)
Simply beautiful this description of dusk... into my faves. with this one...
July 26th, 2019 04:40 - Always & Forever (Neville)
Devotion wrapped in eloquent lines makes this read even more coated in...
July 26th, 2019 03:35 - Thunder (Poetic Dan)
Yes be all that you can because you are enough my friend. I loved the flow...
July 25th, 2019 13:06 - Crucifixion? (Goldfinch60)
Well - fancy Clint singing - something learned today Andy and the words...
July 25th, 2019 13:02 - Another time (The death of love, not me.) (Aa Harvey)
Truly a poetic tribute to love that is non-judgemental - - a wonderfully...
July 25th, 2019 12:58 - Salvation Security (Orchidee)
A celebratory piece as tribute to unselfish love......... a message to...
July 25th, 2019 12:55 - BE A JITTERBUGGA NOT A LITTERBUGGA ! ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A DITTY ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Top marks for this outcry on what is left as litter by the many - - well...
July 25th, 2019 06:25 - Untarnished (Christina8)
With you in that heavenly field of colour and love the walk through floral...
July 25th, 2019 06:22 - You (Trin)
A gem of a love poem and written with such honest expression making a...
July 25th, 2019 04:56 - A Silent Refrain (Neville)
Who could resist capitulating to these tender invites my friend - -that...
July 25th, 2019 03:49 - for one another (Dusk arising)
A request phrased in poetic language yet simply explaining what we all...
July 25th, 2019 02:45 - STRUCTURE OF ICE ! ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A 9 2 3 ACROSTIC SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
This informative tribute to ice and its connection to diamond shape takes...
July 24th, 2019 04:25 - A Thimbleful of Seeds (Neville)
A list of emotive reasons why some believe strongly that love of life is...
July 24th, 2019 02:22 - Crimson Swathe (Neville)
A hint of pathos made me change my mind on the comment I was about to make...
July 23rd, 2019 04:19 - Greeting My River. (Goldfinch60)
The mystic feel of water your write here reminds me that I too walk by a...
July 22nd, 2019 05:00 - Unbearable! (Orchidee)
Ha ha - - your write got me smiling if not singing dear friend. Love the...
July 22nd, 2019 04:57 - Without you (Aa Harvey)
A wise way of explaining the reasons where even love cannot hold partners...
July 22nd, 2019 04:55 - BRIDGE OVER TROUBLED WATER ! ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A PANTOUM (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A fine and meaningful pantoum which gets all readers asking themselves...
July 22nd, 2019 04:51 - dont ask me why (Dusk arising)
A load of pathos in these poignant lines my friend - - questions that many...
July 22nd, 2019 04:49 - ART (Michael Edwards)
Oooh - what a picture - I wish I could take that broken down dwelling...
July 22nd, 2019 04:44 - She Sparkles (Neville)
Simple and to the point this summary of pseudo sweetness and sparkle in
...
July 22nd, 2019 02:25 - but unbeaten (Dusk arising)
A wonder of words woven in hope to assure the heart that stays unbeaten - ...
July 21st, 2019 09:17 - A PURPOSE IN LIFE ! ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A 1 7 2 4 ACROSTIC SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Freedom and purpose should go hand in hand to provide each or both for...
July 21st, 2019 04:59 - One Day Maybe (Neville)
Poetic phrasing to sigh for in this gentle story of time spent as a duo...
July 21st, 2019 04:57 - SENSE OF COLOUR ? ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A COLLABORATION POEM (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A wonderful reminder of the gift of colour in our lives - thank you too...
July 21st, 2019 00:53 - The Peace of Music. (Goldfinch60)
A wonderful listen to music with meaning and your words helped me feel the...
July 18th, 2019 05:15 - My New Life. (Goldfinch60)
Caring as much as we are able will be enough and you dear friend deserve a...
July 17th, 2019 13:55 - No Hint of An End (Neville)
A roundelay of tender vibrations follow this read - - wordless but there...
July 16th, 2019 00:54 - WINGED. (Fay Slimm.)
Good for you to choose flying hearts Brian -- the picture explains their...
July 15th, 2019 16:10 - The Whimbrel (Neville)
This treatise on waders runs to its end by producing the giggles in my...
July 15th, 2019 04:50 - Faith Prays And Praises - James Series(9) (Orchidee)
An engaging read Orchi - prayer on behalf of each other brings us closer...
July 15th, 2019 02:25 - She Kissed My Cheek. (Kevin browne)
A tale with a happy ending and told so compellingly well Kevin. Thanks for...
July 15th, 2019 01:31 - A ballet (Suresh)
Your pen dances with care in this beautiful picture of light\'s birth and...
July 15th, 2019 01:25 - Quiet Love (Christina8)
Quiet love is the best dear friend and you pen it here so very well.
July 14th, 2019 07:34 - Maybe if... (Suresh)
Interesting appliance of the \"if\" word and the ultimate distance between...
July 14th, 2019 07:31 - Miss Me Hard (Neville)
These few discreetly penned lines gave me my first smile of the day Nev -...
July 14th, 2019 03:53 - Doves. (Goldfinch60)
Yes doves can be greedy and keep small birds away - -- I found buying...
July 14th, 2019 02:10 - My Beautiful Friend, Peace (Gino)
A message filled with hope and love and so tenderly written - - your...
July 14th, 2019 02:05 - A SHEDFUL OF 575s (2) (Michael Edwards)
P.S. - - Michael the intriguing penning is engaging too.......... I...
July 14th, 2019 01:13 - A SHEDFUL OF 575s (2) (Michael Edwards)
The painting of Italy\'s wonderful street deserves to be hung and will be...
July 14th, 2019 01:10 - I sit by me again offering a hand (Poetic Dan)
Yes facing is the way to control these unwanted feelings dear Dan - keep...
July 13th, 2019 03:35
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