Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- FULL CIRCLE (Michael Edwards)
Full circle indeed Mike - - your flow of atmosphere shows there was and...
August 11th, 2019 03:11 - Kunoichi no Geisha (Neville)
Your talent for taking readers into poignant situations is first rate my ...
August 11th, 2019 03:09 - Flawed (Neville)
Caustic the questions addressed to a female playing the field and written...
August 10th, 2019 03:42 - Beautiful Ceremony (Gino)
Thank you Gino for this poignantly reflective read of Love found only in...
August 10th, 2019 02:58 - Teenage Dream (PoeticBiscuit)
A needed message in these three well-crafted stanzas - - good read.
August 10th, 2019 02:55 - Looking To Love (Orchidee)
There could never be any way better than your chosen title today -...
August 10th, 2019 02:54 - Modesty Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
A good and needed acrostic on a rare word in these days of me-first....
August 10th, 2019 02:35 - Try... (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Ha ha - I can relate to these well-rhymed lines Andrew - - dog lovers...
August 10th, 2019 02:30 - THE DREAM - THE REALITY (Michael Edwards)
Best laugh of my morning so far Michael ................ so is the
August 10th, 2019 02:16 - Alive (Christina8)
Filled deep appreciation of what loved can do..... wonderful read...
August 10th, 2019 01:35 - the Jesus within (Dusk arising)
That last line says such a lot about the empathy existing in souls like...
August 9th, 2019 11:02 - Fire & Ice (PoeticBiscuit)
Good comparison of fire and ice - - I suspect lots of relationships have...
August 9th, 2019 02:58 - Let the voices in (Poetic Dan)
Great quote Dan with which I truly agree and your verse well poems the...
August 9th, 2019 02:54 - Why When Where and How (Neville)
Two hearts in union and I say what could be better !!! .......... I love...
August 9th, 2019 02:40 - Walking Home. (Goldfinch60)
Ha ha - - I am still chuckling at that well-penned scene - bet that...
August 9th, 2019 02:14 - Abandoning christianity. (Goldfinch60)
There is no fear in love my dear friend - so with love\'s true...
August 8th, 2019 16:10 - Night Time Symphony (Christina8)
Ah - - thank you for the mentioning that my efforts to get this lovely...
August 8th, 2019 10:50 - The Gift (SerenWise)
Your words speak of the reality that loneliness brings and tell it so well...
August 8th, 2019 06:07 - Night Time Symphony (Christina8)
Loud applause for this cry for more nature and less technical toys - -...
August 8th, 2019 04:36 - That Secret Place (Neville)
A medley of clever double-entendres cascade effortlessly down these...
August 8th, 2019 04:24 - Untitled- XXI (Suresh)
Brief but so moving with a taste of being all alone.
August 7th, 2019 14:31 - Life is yours (Poetic Dan)
What a lighthearted way of looking at life - - a gem of write Dan and...
August 7th, 2019 12:40 - My Wish (DesertWords)
One of the most moving and gently expressed of writings on death and the...
August 7th, 2019 12:35 - To The Right Place. (Goldfinch60)
What better place to be in than where you want to be - an appealing write...
August 7th, 2019 05:01 - there (Dusk arising)
The gentle pathos in this read brought me near tears D.A. - you are a...
August 7th, 2019 04:59 - DROLL COUPLETS (1) (Michael Edwards)
Ha ha - - well as long as you know it might as well flaunt it eh ? -...
August 7th, 2019 03:53 - Blood Red Rim (Neville)
A spiritual feel to this verse of tribute to lost beauty Nev. - -- ...
August 7th, 2019 03:34 - Stable Steps (Orchidee)
A very readable account Orchi.
August 7th, 2019 03:25 - Senseless (Christina8)
Love thrives when it is appreciated and your verse certainly gives meaning...
August 7th, 2019 00:56 - My Boy (SerenWise)
Love makes those seedlings of hope grow into happy tomorrows and wishing...
August 7th, 2019 00:52 - upon midnight (Dusk arising)
I like the idea of opening verse with a continued title - - as in ...
August 6th, 2019 05:50 - Reuben had a Brother. (Goldfinch60)
They and their parents will cherish these caring words Andy - a beautiful...
August 6th, 2019 05:05 - Thinking Backwards (Neville)
Thank you a load...........\'tis good feeling treasured kind sir.
August 6th, 2019 05:03 - Play a role, listening to your soul (Poetic Dan)
This write bursts with positive vibes and rightly will influence readers...
August 6th, 2019 04:06 - Thinking Backwards (Neville)
You expertly set the scene of past love in wonderful happenings that are...
August 6th, 2019 03:22 - Storm (PoeticBiscuit)
Good thought here PB - storms can make us much more aware of our strength...
August 5th, 2019 12:04 - Fearless (Poetic Dan)
One of your very best Dan and so so positive - loved the whole read.
August 5th, 2019 11:34 - DO EVERYTHING TENDERLY ! BRIAN & ANGELA ~ A 5 5 4 Blank Verse Sonnet ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Such a charming interpretation of that familiar song and the lovely word...
August 5th, 2019 07:48 - Summer Daze (Christina8)
Ha - - that final stanza came as as lovely surprise - after reading that...
August 5th, 2019 04:29 - Rest In Relationship (Orchidee)
This red rests in faithful relationships and thank you for posting it dear...
August 5th, 2019 04:24 - Dreamworld Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
Your steps to wonder come through every line dear Andy -- a lovely read.
August 5th, 2019 02:31 - Herb Song (Neville)
A bouquet of pleasure these poetic herbs which smell of roused libidos....
August 5th, 2019 02:17 - Untitled - XIX (Suresh)
So true Suresh - - micro and macro under the microscope
August 5th, 2019 00:59 - Totally Trusting (Orchidee)
A lovely read Orchi.
August 4th, 2019 13:46 - LOVE TO EVERYONE 🧡 ANGELA ~ A SONNET FROM MY 🧡 (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Smiles for this deilghtful read Angela
- and top \'o this wonderful...
August 4th, 2019 04:20 - Underwear (Neville)
A tease of a read if ever there was one - - proper job (as we Cornish...
August 4th, 2019 03:58 - takes me there (Dusk arising)
Yes you got the sense that always remains - - scent is the thing that...
August 3rd, 2019 15:59 - Diana, Princess of Wales - A Life (FineB)
Her fame and attraction crossed barriers of age and gender this Princess...
August 3rd, 2019 12:56 - Help And Hope (Orchidee)
Full of good thanks I enjoyed the whole piece dear Orchi.
August 3rd, 2019 09:23 - ONLY THE LONELY ....... ! ANGELA & BRIAN ~ INTERNAL RHYME LAMENT ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Only the lonely could write such a an emotive poem and late though the...
August 3rd, 2019 04:22 - Any Colour at All (Neville)
Touch penned so well and the rest though fired through with pathos gives...
August 3rd, 2019 04:14 - Facade (Christina8)
Think that tomorrow will sure to be better dear Christina - - after a...
August 2nd, 2019 07:40 - HUMAN DESIGN (Michael Edwards)
Ha ha - - well we will see what can be done about radical changes to human...
August 2nd, 2019 07:33 - At One With Nature. (Goldfinch60)
Great to know you have a chance to cast again Andy - -- whether a fish...
August 2nd, 2019 07:27 - THE SENSE O\' TOUCH ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A 3 5 1 5 Acoustic Sonnet (ANGELA & BRIAN)
What a gift is the sense of touch and so well captured in your extended...
August 2nd, 2019 03:09 - A Gift of Seasons (Neville)
An emotive plea for summer\'s smile and scribed with a notion of time...
August 2nd, 2019 02:52 - Knowledges. (Goldfinch60)
Memory of such exacted recitations do stay with us Andy - - - school...
August 1st, 2019 12:03 - Love you more (Poetic Dan)
Such a loving birthday poem Dan and adding my own wishes to your beautiful...
August 1st, 2019 05:50 - AN AFTERNOON TEA ~ BRIAN ~ A 2 9 3 Acrostic Sonnet ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Count me in for the delicious Earl Grey - love both its taste and the...
August 1st, 2019 05:48 - UNSAID (Michael Edwards)
Sad but true and scribed so cleverly - love the flower-pic. too...
August 1st, 2019 04:20 - the love of birdsong (Dusk arising)
Proud that my yesterday effort inspired this outburst of well-written...
August 1st, 2019 03:23 - In Absentia (Ronald Watson)
Oh what a revelation that must have been in the course of a funeral - an...
August 1st, 2019 03:07 - Fonts and Guises (Neville)
Yes true heroes exist to better others and what better than using not...
August 1st, 2019 02:07 - Shard of a shard (Poetic Dan)
An amazing piece of encouragement and sense. Humility was and is ever the...
July 31st, 2019 13:21 - Fear of anticipation (Chris Yellow)
A fine first posting here on MPS and welcome Chris - - the write raises...
July 31st, 2019 12:35 - A Cup Of Tea (Christina8)
Tea is real thirst quencher to me too dear friend yet take my hat off to...
July 31st, 2019 09:34 - FORGOT TO PACK ~ YOUR PLASTIC MAC ? ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A Lament ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
This read brought a hoot of recognition from yours truly - - a great...
July 31st, 2019 04:46 - Untitled - XVII (Suresh)
Yes the read opens more doors than those four small lines - a memorable...
July 31st, 2019 03:23 - Creative Considerings (Orchidee)
A write of faith and no mistake Orchi - thank you for sharing it.
July 31st, 2019 03:21 - ANOTHER SHORTIE (Michael Edwards)
Good-un today my friend - shall be remembering this couplet - - living for...
July 31st, 2019 03:20 - Conned to the End. (Goldfinch60)
Ha ha - well that was a surprise to my eyes dear Andy - - the man knew...
July 31st, 2019 03:19 - Mirror Envy (Neville)
The read saddens yet strength guides the pen of your poetic defiance dear...
July 31st, 2019 03:14 - How Are You Today? (Goldfinch60)
Such a positive way to greet each day and thank you for sharing it...
July 30th, 2019 10:57 - Shards of Knowledge (Suresh)
Shards when put together can mount to a plan - - sound poetic reasoning...
July 30th, 2019 06:02 - On finding Truth (Neville)
Had to delete through a typo - my apologies Nev..........
And a poet of...
July 30th, 2019 03:50 - FIT AS A FIDDLE (Michael Edwards)
Ha - such a perceptive peer at what seems a bewildering old adage ...
July 30th, 2019 00:42 - LADY IN RED ~ BRIAN ~ 4 QUATRAINS plus line one repeat ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A smile swept across my face in reading this well-rhymed tribute to your...
July 29th, 2019 10:49 - Candles (Sylviasearcher)
Oh this is so beautifully rhymed and so appealing in texture and eloquence...
July 29th, 2019 08:00 - Cold Under The Coat (Neville)
A garment and its smell can have such a permanent significance and the...
July 29th, 2019 06:59 - Victim (Jabberwocky)
A very well perceived view of the growing need to be known as a victim....
July 29th, 2019 03:57 - Unraveling...... (Suresh)
Loud applause Suresh for this write which is obviously the result of...
July 29th, 2019 01:21 - THE ARTIST (2) (Michael Edwards)
Yes the art of both painter and poet are captured in these three skillful...
July 29th, 2019 01:17 - Hunfriths Head (SerenWise)
You capture the very essence of place here in this compelling poem of...
July 29th, 2019 01:14 - To Know Christ Is To Know God (Orchidee)
I really believe in the title and that Christ dwells in all fullness....
July 28th, 2019 12:24 - Love rays everyday (Poetic Dan)
A wonderful read Dan - you have made it................ congrats with...
July 28th, 2019 12:21 - And They Called Her Iris (Neville)
Ah - my favourite shade is violet
and thanks for the info. on such a ...
July 28th, 2019 03:46 - Break Your Heart (Christina8)
A heart that breaks can to an extent also heal and the humble contrition...
July 28th, 2019 03:16 - without drinking (Dusk arising)
Sending the warmest of wishes as you undertake another few weeks of this...
July 28th, 2019 03:13 - Ode to You (SerenWise)
A beautiful tribute to someone well loved and thanks for sharing it Seren.
July 27th, 2019 02:36 - Fishing Again. (Goldfinch60)
So pleased you are back with the rod Andy - looking forward to reading...
July 27th, 2019 02:34 - An Extraordinary Afternoon (Christina8)
Your pen paints the picture of paddling with minnows so clearly I could...
July 27th, 2019 01:36 - Bring it On (Neville)
Happenings welcomed are to be treasured as that moment does not come again...
July 27th, 2019 01:34 - Ignorant People. (Goldfinch60)
Folk find all sorts of reasons to be ignorant and act innocent - - I...
July 26th, 2019 04:44 - dusk arises (Dusk arising)
Simply beautiful this description of dusk... into my faves. with this one...
July 26th, 2019 04:40 - Always & Forever (Neville)
Devotion wrapped in eloquent lines makes this read even more coated in...
July 26th, 2019 03:35 - Thunder (Poetic Dan)
Yes be all that you can because you are enough my friend. I loved the flow...
July 25th, 2019 13:06 - Crucifixion? (Goldfinch60)
Well - fancy Clint singing - something learned today Andy and the words...
July 25th, 2019 13:02 - Another time (The death of love, not me.) (Aa Harvey)
Truly a poetic tribute to love that is non-judgemental - - a wonderfully...
July 25th, 2019 12:58 - Salvation Security (Orchidee)
A celebratory piece as tribute to unselfish love......... a message to...
July 25th, 2019 12:55 - BE A JITTERBUGGA NOT A LITTERBUGGA ! ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A DITTY ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Top marks for this outcry on what is left as litter by the many - - well...
July 25th, 2019 06:25
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