Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- Unraveling...... (Suresh)
Loud applause Suresh for this write which is obviously the result of...
July 29th, 2019 01:21 - THE ARTIST (2) (Michael Edwards)
Yes the art of both painter and poet are captured in these three skillful...
July 29th, 2019 01:17 - Hunfriths Head (SerenWise)
You capture the very essence of place here in this compelling poem of...
July 29th, 2019 01:14 - To Know Christ Is To Know God (Orchidee)
I really believe in the title and that Christ dwells in all fullness....
July 28th, 2019 12:24 - Love rays everyday (Poetic Dan)
A wonderful read Dan - you have made it................ congrats with...
July 28th, 2019 12:21 - And They Called Her Iris (Neville)
Ah - my favourite shade is violet
and thanks for the info. on such a ...
July 28th, 2019 03:46 - Break Your Heart (Christina8)
A heart that breaks can to an extent also heal and the humble contrition...
July 28th, 2019 03:16 - without drinking (Dusk arising)
Sending the warmest of wishes as you undertake another few weeks of this...
July 28th, 2019 03:13 - Ode to You (SerenWise)
A beautiful tribute to someone well loved and thanks for sharing it Seren.
July 27th, 2019 02:36 - Fishing Again. (Goldfinch60)
So pleased you are back with the rod Andy - looking forward to reading...
July 27th, 2019 02:34 - An Extraordinary Afternoon (Christina8)
Your pen paints the picture of paddling with minnows so clearly I could...
July 27th, 2019 01:36 - Bring it On (Neville)
Happenings welcomed are to be treasured as that moment does not come again...
July 27th, 2019 01:34 - Ignorant People. (Goldfinch60)
Folk find all sorts of reasons to be ignorant and act innocent - - I...
July 26th, 2019 04:44 - dusk arises (Dusk arising)
Simply beautiful this description of dusk... into my faves. with this one...
July 26th, 2019 04:40 - Always & Forever (Neville)
Devotion wrapped in eloquent lines makes this read even more coated in...
July 26th, 2019 03:35 - Thunder (Poetic Dan)
Yes be all that you can because you are enough my friend. I loved the flow...
July 25th, 2019 13:06 - Crucifixion? (Goldfinch60)
Well - fancy Clint singing - something learned today Andy and the words...
July 25th, 2019 13:02 - Another time (The death of love, not me.) (Aa Harvey)
Truly a poetic tribute to love that is non-judgemental - - a wonderfully...
July 25th, 2019 12:58 - Salvation Security (Orchidee)
A celebratory piece as tribute to unselfish love......... a message to...
July 25th, 2019 12:55 - BE A JITTERBUGGA NOT A LITTERBUGGA ! ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A DITTY ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Top marks for this outcry on what is left as litter by the many - - well...
July 25th, 2019 06:25 - Untarnished (Christina8)
With you in that heavenly field of colour and love the walk through floral...
July 25th, 2019 06:22 - You (Trin)
A gem of a love poem and written with such honest expression making a...
July 25th, 2019 04:56 - A Silent Refrain (Neville)
Who could resist capitulating to these tender invites my friend - -that...
July 25th, 2019 03:49 - for one another (Dusk arising)
A request phrased in poetic language yet simply explaining what we all...
July 25th, 2019 02:45 - STRUCTURE OF ICE ! ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A 9 2 3 ACROSTIC SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
This informative tribute to ice and its connection to diamond shape takes...
July 24th, 2019 04:25 - A Thimbleful of Seeds (Neville)
A list of emotive reasons why some believe strongly that love of life is...
July 24th, 2019 02:22 - Crimson Swathe (Neville)
A hint of pathos made me change my mind on the comment I was about to make...
July 23rd, 2019 04:19 - Greeting My River. (Goldfinch60)
The mystic feel of water your write here reminds me that I too walk by a...
July 22nd, 2019 05:00 - Unbearable! (Orchidee)
Ha ha - - your write got me smiling if not singing dear friend. Love the...
July 22nd, 2019 04:57 - Without you (Aa Harvey)
A wise way of explaining the reasons where even love cannot hold partners...
July 22nd, 2019 04:55 - BRIDGE OVER TROUBLED WATER ! ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A PANTOUM (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A fine and meaningful pantoum which gets all readers asking themselves...
July 22nd, 2019 04:51 - dont ask me why (Dusk arising)
A load of pathos in these poignant lines my friend - - questions that many...
July 22nd, 2019 04:49 - ART (Michael Edwards)
Oooh - what a picture - I wish I could take that broken down dwelling...
July 22nd, 2019 04:44 - She Sparkles (Neville)
Simple and to the point this summary of pseudo sweetness and sparkle in
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July 22nd, 2019 02:25 - but unbeaten (Dusk arising)
A wonder of words woven in hope to assure the heart that stays unbeaten - ...
July 21st, 2019 09:17 - A PURPOSE IN LIFE ! ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A 1 7 2 4 ACROSTIC SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Freedom and purpose should go hand in hand to provide each or both for...
July 21st, 2019 04:59 - One Day Maybe (Neville)
Poetic phrasing to sigh for in this gentle story of time spent as a duo...
July 21st, 2019 04:57 - SENSE OF COLOUR ? ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A COLLABORATION POEM (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A wonderful reminder of the gift of colour in our lives - thank you too...
July 21st, 2019 00:53 - The Peace of Music. (Goldfinch60)
A wonderful listen to music with meaning and your words helped me feel the...
July 18th, 2019 05:15 - My New Life. (Goldfinch60)
Caring as much as we are able will be enough and you dear friend deserve a...
July 17th, 2019 13:55 - No Hint of An End (Neville)
A roundelay of tender vibrations follow this read - - wordless but there...
July 16th, 2019 00:54 - WINGED. (Fay Slimm.)
Good for you to choose flying hearts Brian -- the picture explains their...
July 15th, 2019 16:10 - The Whimbrel (Neville)
This treatise on waders runs to its end by producing the giggles in my...
July 15th, 2019 04:50 - Faith Prays And Praises - James Series(9) (Orchidee)
An engaging read Orchi - prayer on behalf of each other brings us closer...
July 15th, 2019 02:25 - She Kissed My Cheek. (Kevin browne)
A tale with a happy ending and told so compellingly well Kevin. Thanks for...
July 15th, 2019 01:31 - A ballet (Suresh)
Your pen dances with care in this beautiful picture of light\'s birth and...
July 15th, 2019 01:25 - Quiet Love (Christina8)
Quiet love is the best dear friend and you pen it here so very well.
July 14th, 2019 07:34 - Maybe if... (Suresh)
Interesting appliance of the \"if\" word and the ultimate distance between...
July 14th, 2019 07:31 - Miss Me Hard (Neville)
These few discreetly penned lines gave me my first smile of the day Nev -...
July 14th, 2019 03:53 - Doves. (Goldfinch60)
Yes doves can be greedy and keep small birds away - -- I found buying...
July 14th, 2019 02:10 - My Beautiful Friend, Peace (Gino)
A message filled with hope and love and so tenderly written - - your...
July 14th, 2019 02:05 - A SHEDFUL OF 575s (2) (Michael Edwards)
P.S. - - Michael the intriguing penning is engaging too.......... I...
July 14th, 2019 01:13 - A SHEDFUL OF 575s (2) (Michael Edwards)
The painting of Italy\'s wonderful street deserves to be hung and will be...
July 14th, 2019 01:10 - I sit by me again offering a hand (Poetic Dan)
Yes facing is the way to control these unwanted feelings dear Dan - keep...
July 13th, 2019 03:35 - Sunflowers (Neville)
You succeeded with getting the picture of countless sunflower faces on...
July 13th, 2019 03:31 - Smaller Mouth. (Goldfinch60)
An old favourite of mine was Helen - what a voice - and so sorry you...
July 13th, 2019 03:23 - FIRST SIGHTING (Michael Edwards)
Point taken Mike on the cyclist and sighting of Spring......... super
July 13th, 2019 03:20 - Sunflowers (Neville)
Wow what a beautiful sight to behold - - the sunflower is high in my list...
July 13th, 2019 03:18 - The Truth Of It (SerenWise)
Soul-mate love so perfectly described - - -a wonderful read Seren
July 13th, 2019 02:08 - THINK (Michael Edwards)
With you all the way re. some of the two-wheel road users - - around here...
July 12th, 2019 08:04 - Long Meg (SerenWise)
A mystic energy lives within ancient standing stones and your pen verses...
July 12th, 2019 05:24 - Darkness Dismissed (Orchidee)
A fine write Orchi and thank you .
July 12th, 2019 04:30 - Guilt Ridden. (Goldfinch60)
My heart goes out to you dear friend at this terrible time of having to...
July 12th, 2019 04:29 - Laudable Light (Orchidee)
A very fine write Orchi.
July 10th, 2019 04:16 - POP IN FOR A PIZZA ! ~ BRIAN ~ A 2 4 5 3 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
And a yummy pizza poem it is -Brian - making me hungry at this early...
July 10th, 2019 04:15 - Two Drivers. (Goldfinch60)
Ha ha - that happened to me once Andy - a bit disconcerting to say the...
July 10th, 2019 03:04 - Exposed (Suresh)
I so agree with this definition of poetry my friend. Well composed.
July 10th, 2019 02:56 - BELLS RING OUT (Michael Edwards)
Some music raises the hairs on my neck too - a thrilling sense of wonder...
July 10th, 2019 02:54 - Clarity Resumed. (Goldfinch60)
Your spirit will float in that help from the flow of that river dear Andy.
July 9th, 2019 14:59 - Among The Stars (Christina8)
Such a romantic poem needs more readers dear Christina - a beautiful feel...
July 9th, 2019 14:58 - DYING EMBERS (Michael Edwards)
Your gift for wording to send slivers of sight into my imagination is...
July 9th, 2019 13:42 - Invoke II (Suresh)
Invoking help on the two you mentioned will bring us wisdom and hope for a...
July 9th, 2019 09:48 - THE CARBON CYCLE ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ AN ACROSTIC SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Absolutely agree that the more understood of environment the more we will...
July 9th, 2019 09:06 - The Curious Nature of Adoration (SerenWise)
How true that no words can describe love my friend - a beautiful first...
July 5th, 2019 00:48 - The First Move. (Goldfinch60)
Yes all the lonely people and never moving around to meet others but...
July 3rd, 2019 15:29 - Looking Just to See (Neville)
This verse leads us into a memory with the expertise of a true wordsmith...
July 3rd, 2019 01:15 - I dedicate these thoughts (Poetic Dan)
A wonderful read - your words echo to the feeling of growth Dan - - keep...
July 2nd, 2019 13:50 - Silently screaming (Aa Harvey)
Oh the pathos emerging from these few lines - wishing a true love comes...
July 2nd, 2019 09:38 - A FINE PEAR ! ANGELA ~ FIVE BALANCED QUATRAINS ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Ha ha - this tribute to one of my favourite fruits had me in stitches - -...
July 2nd, 2019 05:34 - No harm (Poetic Dan)
Good to know you talk to wasps and bees Dan like me.............. great...
July 2nd, 2019 04:33 - Tomorrow Lost (Neville)
very poetic way to describe moving on my friend - - tomorrows are not for...
July 2nd, 2019 03:30 - A Temple is desecrated (Suresh)
All points you outline here are valid and truly need to be highlighted -...
July 2nd, 2019 03:19 - FROM the New World! (Goldfinch60)
A needed reminder for this most wonderful composition dear Andy - well...
July 2nd, 2019 03:16 - From \'A COLLECTION\' (15 and 16) (Michael Edwards)
Oh yes bad backs mean shops are too heavy to lift any more Michael and...
July 2nd, 2019 01:53 - Pershore bridge (Dusk arising)
A great read not only for children my friend as adults too need informing...
July 2nd, 2019 01:48 - Happy Ever Ending (SerenWise)
Love that title and oh those sweet words. Thanks for sharing your lovely...
July 1st, 2019 05:54 - HOT AIR BALLOONS ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A 338 Acrostic Sonnet (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Your lively and exciting words on hot-air balloons has me interested dear...
July 1st, 2019 05:01 - Childlike Communings (Orchidee)
simplicity is always the answer Orchi - an interesting and upbuilding...
July 1st, 2019 04:50 - WORKS OF ART (Michael Edwards)
Art in a nutshell my friend - and oh what beautiful art is your picture...
July 1st, 2019 04:23 - Chaos Theory (Neville)
A powerful way to describe time\'s indifferent effects as it ticks away -...
July 1st, 2019 04:21 - Escaping From Reality. (Goldfinch60)
Vital points raised here Andy - the game of life is always there for us...
June 30th, 2019 04:22 - Big Pharm (Christina8)
Welcome back dear Christina - you have been missed and so good to read...
June 30th, 2019 04:16 - Captivating Games (Neville)
Ask for shackles and you will be caught in the love-game with verses like...
June 30th, 2019 03:38 - Sotto Voce (SerenWise)
A very expressive and tender love poem . One for my faves. Seren.
June 30th, 2019 01:56 - I Found Myself Thinking of You (Neville)
We who care deeply do really die in fragments when those we love have to...
June 29th, 2019 03:44 - Hill (Suresh)
You capture the feel of escaping to woodland where wild is the attraction...
June 28th, 2019 04:19 - Tomorrow, today and always (Poetic Dan)
Ah - what with your excellent turns of phrase and the exciting video I...
June 28th, 2019 03:10 - Poppy Seeds (Neville)
A dream of a meeting with love lost and remembered - - - such a thing can...
June 28th, 2019 02:35 - That Day When..... (Goldfinch60)
The deep love you have and have had with your sweetheart still shines...
June 28th, 2019 02:09 - When My Life Begins (SerenWise)
Yes life can be begin when love arrives home again - - a lovely first...
June 28th, 2019 02:05
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