Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- To Cry Witch (Woodkatie28)
Yes those were the days when none could be familiar with herbs etc for...
August 21st, 2019 11:22 - Reaching (Sylviasearcher)
A wonderful appeal in these fervent lines - - your captured the title so...
August 21st, 2019 11:20 - TIME GOES BY SO SLOWLY ~ BRIAN ~ A REVERSED FORM POEM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I am sure you are both counting those minutes dear Brian - - a fine form...
August 21st, 2019 08:20 - catching raindrops (Dusk arising)
Ooooh I can feel the shock of a love lost D.A. - - - we never get over...
August 21st, 2019 04:19 - Unttled - XXIV (Suresh)
These words give much food for thought and ring true - thank you Suresh.
August 21st, 2019 03:25 - Mercy Missive (Orchidee)
Divine mercy can take mysterious ways which often need deep faith. A good...
August 21st, 2019 03:24 - DROLL COUPLETS (7) (Michael Edwards)
Oooops and Ouch -- I have done it myself - -- you must switch on the...
August 21st, 2019 03:20 - Gateway to Where? (Goldfinch60)
I too have had curiosity about old gates and am still wondering where some...
August 21st, 2019 03:14 - The Appetite of Voyeurs (Neville)
Ha - - now I know to leave the key in the door so you cant peeeeeeeep !!
August 21st, 2019 03:13 - 4 weeks today! (Poetic Dan)
A write full of positive vibes - keep up the fine flow of love for self...
August 20th, 2019 13:52 - My two best companion - Heart and Mind (Aman1586)
A fine comparison in these well crafted lines knowing heart and mind are...
August 20th, 2019 13:49 - TKR (Michael Edwards)
Welcome back Michael - good to read how well things are going ....bestest...
August 20th, 2019 09:36 - Fly Me in Circles (Neville)
Slow making of love in a summer storm reads so engagingly good as does...
August 20th, 2019 01:18 - Bride of the Hedgerows (Neville)
An brilliant ode to autumnal\'s wooing of winter - - so pleased to have...
August 19th, 2019 12:34 - Thinking Of You (Christina8)
Love means all to those who have found Mr Right - - a lovely read...
August 19th, 2019 12:29 - WOODMAN SPARE THAT TREE ~ FOR ME ~ A BALLAD ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
With you all the way to protect these glorious trees dear duo.
August 19th, 2019 09:50 - Wordiku Three. (Goldfinch60)
Ha ha - your three liner has inspired me to try this new wordiku Andy my...
August 19th, 2019 04:57 - From a Certain Distance (Neville)
Short, pithy and a sure masterclass in telling so much with such paucity...
August 19th, 2019 01:13 - the actress (Dusk arising)
This tale of a female who abuses what life and love offers makes for a...
August 18th, 2019 11:42 - A Quarter Past Ten (Tom Wood)
Tom you have a talent for engaging a reader with short terse lines which...
August 18th, 2019 11:35 - A Travelling Man (Neville)
Returned for a second helping of this gentle story of opposites needing at...
August 18th, 2019 11:24 - Towards the Top. (Goldfinch60)
A life well lived is worthy of such a poetic declaration dear Andy - keep...
August 18th, 2019 04:17 - THE GOODNESS OF OUR GOD ~ A PANTOUM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Worthy of praise indeed is our wonderful Creator............. thank you...
August 18th, 2019 04:13 - Celebrating Communion (Orchidee)
An inspired write and fine example of why the Communion. Thank you Orchi.
August 18th, 2019 03:21 - Miracles (Andrew Charles Forrest)
An impressive and well-written list of reasons why only the pseudo \"blind...
August 18th, 2019 03:20 - Tanka - Tanka (Neville)
We have no idea of conditions in places where customs allow this inhumane...
August 18th, 2019 03:15 - HERO (Laura🌻)
An impressive four liner describing a hero and telling the reason he or...
August 17th, 2019 12:04 - Goodbye Little Friend (Orchidee)
To lose such a delightful piggy-friend must be so sad and the video you...
August 17th, 2019 07:07 - Eating to Save the Earth. (Goldfinch60)
Well that is one way of helping reduce global warming - ha ha - thanks...
August 17th, 2019 04:31 - dark august days (Dusk arising)
Such a beguiling read and set in my old stomping ground of the Cotswolds...
August 17th, 2019 04:27 - Dirty Margarita (Neville)
Your tales always speak for the reader to judge and forge their opinion...
August 17th, 2019 03:40 - pure as driven (Dusk arising)
Even small changes if made by the many will shout the end to plastic...
August 16th, 2019 12:20 - THE LIFE OF ANGELA ~ IN NUMBERS ~ A BLANK VERSE SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
And what an adventurous life it has been so far my friend - - loved the...
August 16th, 2019 09:09 - Asleep (Seek)
A wonderful example of looking at romance whilst love takes a rest - - a...
August 16th, 2019 06:58 - Through a Tangle of Shadows (Neville)
Shadows veer imagination toward the forbidden at times and these...
August 16th, 2019 06:54 - SERENITY (Laura🌻)
Dear Laura - - find a small space for me by your serene side - - just...
August 16th, 2019 04:41 - FRUSTRATION (FineB)
Felt that outburst against things that go wonky at times in our life - -...
August 15th, 2019 12:47 - MY LIFE IN NUMBERS ~ BRIAN ~ A BLANK VERSE SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Glad you life in numbers Brian has given you times when you felt very...
August 15th, 2019 08:23 - A NEW KNEE (Michael Edwards)
Sending you bestest of wishes dear friend - people tell me they wished...
August 15th, 2019 05:07 - ...Of Love and Grief (Andrew Charles Forrest)
A stunning picture-verse of imagery Andrew which points readers to more...
August 15th, 2019 04:09 - Victim (PoeticBiscuit)
The best of attitudes to take is the mantra you penned and so well that ...
August 15th, 2019 03:27 - Not My Day. (Goldfinch60)
I know that feeling of being hemmed in while road-business goes on in its...
August 15th, 2019 03:25 - War a Senryu (Neville)
Enlightening senryu dear Nev and so very true. Hate and war indeed beget...
August 15th, 2019 01:55 - Talk Me Poetry (Neville)
My eyes fell on this resurrected piece of bold story-telling again and had...
August 14th, 2019 10:31 - Find your rainbow (Poetic Dan)
A wonderfully inspiring image you chose to head your poem today Dan - we...
August 14th, 2019 10:21 - Living Life. (Goldfinch60)
A wonderful outlook on living life to the full Andy and being unafraid...
August 14th, 2019 06:57 - NO SILVER MEDALS IN LIFE & LOVE ~ ANGELA ~ A 6 5 3 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Good to see you posting again and what an achievement for two eager...
August 14th, 2019 05:27 - Hemlock (Sylviasearcher)
A potent though gloomy look at what \"love\" does to some - -wonderfully...
August 14th, 2019 04:25 - Mature Love (Christina8)
A wonderful expression of loving devotion and am sure one day your...
August 14th, 2019 03:22 - GOOD vs. EVIL (Andrew Charles Forrest)
An apt and well written comparison the two vital words - thank you Andrew.
August 14th, 2019 03:15 - Rock Of Refuge (Orchidee)
The surest refuge and described with deep faith - -thank you Orchi.
August 14th, 2019 03:13 - Singular I’s (Neville)
Sad but inevitable the procession from nearness to singular when love...
August 14th, 2019 02:49 - The Spider (PoeticBiscuit)
May Fred live a long time as protector and guardian to prove your...
August 14th, 2019 02:40 - DROLL COUPLETS (6) (Michael Edwards)
Taking control they debate your condition methinks........... moot point...
August 14th, 2019 02:36 - Night Rhythms (Rrodriguez)
The flow of night\'s rhythm comes over so well in this poetic description...
August 14th, 2019 02:30 - INNER PEACE (Laura🌻)
Ah you have penned a deep truth here dear Laura - embracing indeed the...
August 13th, 2019 10:11 - Solitaire (SerenWise)
Yes these bad-air days can take their negative toll Seren - trying to...
August 13th, 2019 03:19 - DROLL COUPLETS (5) (Michael Edwards)
Ha ha - - from where in your talented mind go these droll couplets appear ...
August 13th, 2019 03:14 - Fed With Music. (Goldfinch60)
Oh yes - - music is from and to the soul - -- a wonderful gift to lift us...
August 12th, 2019 03:52 - Sing-Song Satiation (Orchidee)
A lovely read of your prayer-poem and thank you for sharing it Orchi.
August 12th, 2019 03:50 - The Long Drop (Neville)
The final stanza changed my mind about all the foregoing - - it is a...
August 12th, 2019 03:48 - Bated Breath (Christina8)
Wow - - a gasp of a read dear Christina - - must dash to have a cold...
August 12th, 2019 02:12 - destiny (Dusk arising)
Powerfully penned and very appealing this urging for souls to know who...
August 12th, 2019 00:45 - we need a whole lot of love (Dusk arising)
Could hear you singin\' this summary of food for the dancers D.A. -...
August 11th, 2019 05:50 - all the times she tried (Dusk arising)
An echo of musical poetry fills this reader who is glad to have caught its...
August 11th, 2019 05:48 - But Not Yet. (Goldfinch60)
Thank you for letting us readers into your very deep feelings when walking...
August 11th, 2019 03:14 - FULL CIRCLE (Michael Edwards)
Full circle indeed Mike - - your flow of atmosphere shows there was and...
August 11th, 2019 03:11 - Kunoichi no Geisha (Neville)
Your talent for taking readers into poignant situations is first rate my ...
August 11th, 2019 03:09 - Flawed (Neville)
Caustic the questions addressed to a female playing the field and written...
August 10th, 2019 03:42 - Beautiful Ceremony (Gino)
Thank you Gino for this poignantly reflective read of Love found only in...
August 10th, 2019 02:58 - Teenage Dream (PoeticBiscuit)
A needed message in these three well-crafted stanzas - - good read.
August 10th, 2019 02:55 - Looking To Love (Orchidee)
There could never be any way better than your chosen title today -...
August 10th, 2019 02:54 - Modesty Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
A good and needed acrostic on a rare word in these days of me-first....
August 10th, 2019 02:35 - Try... (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Ha ha - I can relate to these well-rhymed lines Andrew - - dog lovers...
August 10th, 2019 02:30 - THE DREAM - THE REALITY (Michael Edwards)
Best laugh of my morning so far Michael ................ so is the
August 10th, 2019 02:16 - Alive (Christina8)
Filled deep appreciation of what loved can do..... wonderful read...
August 10th, 2019 01:35 - the Jesus within (Dusk arising)
That last line says such a lot about the empathy existing in souls like...
August 9th, 2019 11:02 - Fire & Ice (PoeticBiscuit)
Good comparison of fire and ice - - I suspect lots of relationships have...
August 9th, 2019 02:58 - Let the voices in (Poetic Dan)
Great quote Dan with which I truly agree and your verse well poems the...
August 9th, 2019 02:54 - Why When Where and How (Neville)
Two hearts in union and I say what could be better !!! .......... I love...
August 9th, 2019 02:40 - Walking Home. (Goldfinch60)
Ha ha - - I am still chuckling at that well-penned scene - bet that...
August 9th, 2019 02:14 - Abandoning christianity. (Goldfinch60)
There is no fear in love my dear friend - so with love\'s true...
August 8th, 2019 16:10 - Night Time Symphony (Christina8)
Ah - - thank you for the mentioning that my efforts to get this lovely...
August 8th, 2019 10:50 - The Gift (SerenWise)
Your words speak of the reality that loneliness brings and tell it so well...
August 8th, 2019 06:07 - Night Time Symphony (Christina8)
Loud applause for this cry for more nature and less technical toys - -...
August 8th, 2019 04:36 - That Secret Place (Neville)
A medley of clever double-entendres cascade effortlessly down these...
August 8th, 2019 04:24 - Untitled- XXI (Suresh)
Brief but so moving with a taste of being all alone.
August 7th, 2019 14:31 - Life is yours (Poetic Dan)
What a lighthearted way of looking at life - - a gem of write Dan and...
August 7th, 2019 12:40 - My Wish (DesertWords)
One of the most moving and gently expressed of writings on death and the...
August 7th, 2019 12:35 - To The Right Place. (Goldfinch60)
What better place to be in than where you want to be - an appealing write...
August 7th, 2019 05:01 - there (Dusk arising)
The gentle pathos in this read brought me near tears D.A. - you are a...
August 7th, 2019 04:59 - DROLL COUPLETS (1) (Michael Edwards)
Ha ha - - well as long as you know it might as well flaunt it eh ? -...
August 7th, 2019 03:53 - Blood Red Rim (Neville)
A spiritual feel to this verse of tribute to lost beauty Nev. - -- ...
August 7th, 2019 03:34 - Stable Steps (Orchidee)
A very readable account Orchi.
August 7th, 2019 03:25 - Senseless (Christina8)
Love thrives when it is appreciated and your verse certainly gives meaning...
August 7th, 2019 00:56 - My Boy (SerenWise)
Love makes those seedlings of hope grow into happy tomorrows and wishing...
August 7th, 2019 00:52 - upon midnight (Dusk arising)
I like the idea of opening verse with a continued title - - as in ...
August 6th, 2019 05:50 - Reuben had a Brother. (Goldfinch60)
They and their parents will cherish these caring words Andy - a beautiful...
August 6th, 2019 05:05 - Thinking Backwards (Neville)
Thank you a load...........\'tis good feeling treasured kind sir.
August 6th, 2019 05:03 - Play a role, listening to your soul (Poetic Dan)
This write bursts with positive vibes and rightly will influence readers...
August 6th, 2019 04:06
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