Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- 16.04.2020 (Neville)
Death tolls in these times of shock leave us all staggered especially...
April 17th, 2020 06:25 - At the Turning Point (Goldfinch60)
To be able to meet one who understands through experience is a sure...
April 16th, 2020 05:40 - An insensitive................ooh! (Orchidee)
I nearly fainted at this 18+ alongside your posting and had to have a peep...
April 16th, 2020 04:43 - Thoughts. (Fay Slimm.)
I certainly do like to think my picture-words stay in readers minds to...
April 16th, 2020 04:30 - True Colours (Neville)
Colours though hidden will change to show truth. The bleed of our real...
April 15th, 2020 09:58 - what love will do (Dusk arising)
Describer to a tee this feeling of second-time round according to memory...
April 15th, 2020 05:07 - COFFEE (Michael Edwards)
My eyes went to your artwork with a gasp at its clarity - you are so...
April 15th, 2020 05:04 - Because I love you so (FredPeyer)
Oh so moving these romantic rhymes which describe love\'s tender needs. A...
April 14th, 2020 16:37 - That Empty Chair. (Goldfinch60)
A time of living alone can suddenly bring grief and I should imagine an...
April 14th, 2020 16:35 - Strategic Goodbyes (Neville)
You create such scenes of emotive saga with this ballad of strategic...
April 13th, 2020 17:06 - easter celebrations (Dusk arising)
Agree with Neville - tis odd indeed
- -- and questions raised here...
April 13th, 2020 06:03 - Ma Hal Khe Te (Neville)
The return makes up for all that unwanted distance my friend - waste well...
April 13th, 2020 06:00 - Natural Neighbours (Orchidee)
Yes our aid to others makes us good Samaritans - - let us all work toward...
April 13th, 2020 05:57 - EMBERS TURN TO ASH (Michael Edwards)
This sad sen. shows how much is ash in empty cup is at the moment - -...
April 13th, 2020 05:55 - Over 10,000 (Sue.evans)
A very clear poetic way of seeing this number and reminding ourselves of...
April 13th, 2020 05:52 - Thinking Out Loud (SerenWise)
Ooooh this is perfectly versed with a splash of great tenderness after a...
April 10th, 2020 07:41 - The Eleventh Hour (Neville)
Many eleventh hours make escapees quake with what appears next and you hit...
April 10th, 2020 07:38 - NIGHT (Michael Edwards)
A classic write in which you capture the feel of summer moonlight - a...
April 9th, 2020 16:22 - Good People. (Goldfinch60)
People differ and some make all the difference to our outlook on life.......
April 9th, 2020 16:17 - LIFE 🧡 DURING LOCKDOWN 🤍 A SIX EIGHT SONNET 💙 (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Good to read of new things that people are learning while behind closed...
April 9th, 2020 16:11 - Lockdowntown (Dusk arising)
Wow what a descriptive piece of work on this lockdown where streets become...
April 9th, 2020 16:06 - Birdsong (Neville)
Naturally simple but beautifully expressed in these few lines Nev. ...and...
April 9th, 2020 07:06 - come the Covid day (Dusk arising)
Wonderful heroes these ones who are facing the effects of this virus - - ...
April 8th, 2020 16:24 - Such a Sadness. (Goldfinch60)
the memories of love shared will never to taken away dear friend --...
April 8th, 2020 16:18 - ASK ~ SEEK ~ KNOCK ! ~ A MANTRA (ANGELA & BRIAN)
What a fine mantra to live by - thanks for highlighting one of my...
April 8th, 2020 16:15 - Dont Kid Yourself (Neville)
These words have been true for many a century - - - - making moves on...
April 8th, 2020 13:58 - Chance. (Fay Slimm.)
Never too late Joe eh ? - - Glad you enjoyed the read.
April 8th, 2020 05:52 - come the Covid day (Dusk arising)
So meaningful your words at this time of troubles not seen before and...
April 8th, 2020 04:18 - Butterfly Wings (Ron parrish aka wordman)
Loved the movement you wrote into this tribute to beauty in both insect...
April 7th, 2020 15:57 - Is There Anyone There (Neville)
Clever this lead-up to saying goodbye to a dying romance but trying to get...
April 7th, 2020 12:55 - COVID 19 💛 CAUSE & EFFECT 💛 SEVEN 5 7 5 7 7 TANKAS 💛 (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I most certainly agree with these wise words - thank you for sharing them...
April 7th, 2020 06:21 - Frustrated Calendar. (Goldfinch60)
Good positive read my friend - - I certainly agree we have much for which...
April 7th, 2020 06:19 - TOGETHER ~ WHATEVER THE WEATHER 🧡A VIGINTRAIN 💙 A EULOGY (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Yes always together whatever the weather - You outlined the predicament...
April 6th, 2020 16:17 - Ache (SerenWise)
The force of lonely poison creeps through each line of this sad lament --...
April 6th, 2020 06:54 - Loose Leafed and Fancy Free (Neville)
Brilliant metaphors used here to clear the decks of an un-lovely ending to...
April 6th, 2020 06:52 - THE LORDS PRAYER IN MAORI 🧡 ANGELA 🤍 BRIAN 💙 TRANSLATION (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Sending warmest of thoughts to all spiritual people across the world in...
April 6th, 2020 02:22 - A Happy Life (FredPeyer)
All you need is a mind like yours to come up with this needed list - can...
April 6th, 2020 02:10 - Hello! (Goldfinch60)
What an unusual name for a canine - and can understand the mix-up with who...
April 6th, 2020 01:59 - Fear of Haiku (Neville)
Ha - this hits the nail on the head - -
- that\'s the way it is with...
April 5th, 2020 08:36 - Flying Towards Eternity. (Goldfinch60)
Such a wonderful sign to see Andy and thank you for sharing that omen of...
April 5th, 2020 06:03 - BRITISH ~ GARDEN ~ BIRDS 🧡 BRIAN 🤍 ANGELA 💙 A EULOGY (ANGELA & BRIAN)
There is healing when watching Nature at work and we need it more than...
April 4th, 2020 16:52 - More Truth (Neville)
The kind of wealth beyond anything fiscal never depends on public revenue...
April 4th, 2020 16:47 - Prince (SerenWise)
Beautiful this tender write Seren - - am keeping this one. in my list of...
April 3rd, 2020 13:43 - THURSDAY ~ APPLAUD FOR NHS 🧡 BRIAN 🤍 ANGELA 💙 A EULOGY (ANGELA & BRIAN)
So good to show appreciation for the wonderful work being done despite...
April 3rd, 2020 07:08 - Annie\'s Smile. (Goldfinch60)
Happiness at heart is the answer dear Andy and your friend sounds a very...
April 3rd, 2020 03:58 - Unprecedented (Heather Harrisson)
A very telling list of today\'s fearful words Heather - thanks for the...
April 2nd, 2020 16:27 - stealer (Dusk arising)
A beguiling read dusk - - more please and I LURVE that tenor...
April 2nd, 2020 16:23 - To be is not to forget (Poetic Dan)
Really love that last line dear Dan -- a good mantra to keep well in
April 2nd, 2020 16:19 - 🧡 THE SOLAR SYSTEM 🤍 A SONNET 💙 (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Natural order surrounding us is simply amazing and as this planet ...
April 2nd, 2020 16:10 - I\'VE NEVER SEEN (Michael Edwards)
You marry ideas and thoughts so well Michael - - I too have great piles...
April 2nd, 2020 16:03 - Blimey! (Goldfinch60)
Yes I remember hopscotch so well Andy - - my friends seemed so good at it...
April 2nd, 2020 12:45 - waiting (Dusk arising)
Great imagery in your verse and oh that gorgeous voice and number - - ...
April 2nd, 2020 02:16 - NATURES RESPONSE TO MANS DESTRUCTION ~ A LAMENT (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Yes all our achievements over the past century has left humanity looking...
March 31st, 2020 05:47 - Discerning Distancing (Orchidee)
Lovely read Orchi.
March 31st, 2020 05:43 - limericks of isolation (Dusk arising)
Fantastic - - every bloomin one of em............. ha ha
March 31st, 2020 02:06 - reasons to be..... (part one) (Dusk arising)
An exciting opening and am up there with the climber and sheep waiting for...
March 30th, 2020 16:01 - legend (Ron parrish aka wordman)
A legend to our own mind is all we need Ron - - good thought on which to...
March 30th, 2020 02:48 - Corona Limerick. (Goldfinch60)
Am still smiling at this little gem - thank you Andy
March 29th, 2020 16:08 - The Dawning (Richard Paulson)
Your pace and style vibrate with the wonders of nature and penned with...
March 29th, 2020 11:18 - THE GLASS (Michael Edwards)
Bottoms up Michael and cheers to your wit - - - I love it \'cos it leaves...
March 29th, 2020 03:12 - covid city morning (Dusk arising)
I missed this post yesterday but now having read it my heart skips beats...
March 29th, 2020 02:51 - H A P P I N E S S ! ANGELA 💛 BRIAN ~ A BALLAD (ANGELA & BRIAN)
So many places to sample through your lovely ballad - - thank you dear...
March 29th, 2020 01:25 - Rekindling (SerenWise)
Compelling imagery in this emotive invite - - I love the calming effect of...
March 28th, 2020 03:17 - A Walk to My Willow. (Goldfinch60)
Wonderfully positive your postings and thank you for sharing your walk - ...
March 27th, 2020 08:54 - Uncertainty (Christina8)
So good to see you posting although your subject is powerfully with...
March 27th, 2020 08:52 - I LOVE YOU BECAUSE ~ BRIAN 💛 ANGELA ~ A PANTOUM (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Ah - - your lovely new wife will I am sure treasure these words - -- ...
March 27th, 2020 05:33 - DABBLINGS IN DAFTNESS (3) (Michael Edwards)
Ha ha - - loved your finalé jabble on wangles my friend. thanks for the...
March 27th, 2020 02:52 - COUNT YOUR BLESSINGS 🧡 A FREE VERSE ACROSTIC (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Yes we have much for which to be grateful and you outline the blessings so...
March 26th, 2020 17:14 - global warning (Dusk arising)
Such a clever title to this outcry against the \"artificial\" as opposed...
March 26th, 2020 12:22 - Day 3 (Saxon Crow)
Yes every moment calls out for embracing - - these lines remind us of the...
March 26th, 2020 12:17 - My Fathers Son & Other Important Questions (Neville)
A familiar enquiry at a very sad time whether from sons or from daughters...
March 26th, 2020 11:19 - LOVE AN* MARRIAGE 💛 ANGELA 💛 BRIAN 💛 AN ACROSTIC SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
CONGRATULATIONS TO OUR LOVELY DUO - - Was thinking of you all through...
March 25th, 2020 12:35 - Day 2 (Saxon Crow)
Loud applause for the well written sense in your lines my friend. Staying...
March 25th, 2020 04:27 - What a Wonderful World. (Goldfinch60)
Your lovely lines show how we can find blessings in these testing times -...
March 25th, 2020 04:23 - Job Lot of Biro’s (Neville)
Yes hearin\'ya loud and clear mon ami and am keeping to schedule on what...
March 24th, 2020 14:04 - Job Lot of Biro’s (Neville)
Love is so hard to shelve when time was it glittered with golden dreams...
March 24th, 2020 13:23 - PLANTED BY THE RIVER (Amon)
A beautiful feel to this read Amon - thank you for sharing it.
March 24th, 2020 09:33 - Lost. (Fay Slimm.)
Ah - another move forward to your long waited wedding - - may I add my...
March 24th, 2020 07:31 - And the Sun Rises. (Goldfinch60)
Yes a glorious day ahead is always there for us if we but see - thank you...
March 23rd, 2020 03:34 - FLOWERS ~ NATURES PERFECT BLESSING ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A 7 7 BLANK VERSE SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
What a delight to watch is the video you chose to complement your lovely...
March 23rd, 2020 03:27 - Insidious (Neville)
Impressive imagery used in the doleful unfinishment of this reflective...
March 22nd, 2020 06:58 - PAST ~ PRESENT ~ FUTURE 🧡ANGELA 🤍 BRIAN 💙 FOUR VERSE PANTOUM (ANGELA & BRIAN)
You are sensibly looking ahead and willing to do what you can at your...
March 20th, 2020 17:04 - They Paved Paradise. (Goldfinch60)
First class impression of a credible title and apt for the topic - ...
March 20th, 2020 16:53 - 3 MORE COUPLETS (Michael Edwards)
Ha - - love your funny couplets - - more please dear fashionista.
March 20th, 2020 16:47 - the greyhound (Dusk arising)
Mystical Columbian music so apt to illustrate the wreck of Greyhound and...
March 19th, 2020 13:45 - still waters (Dusk arising)
The verse describes well how much a smile may cover my friend. -- ...
March 16th, 2020 17:41 - Servant Sensibility (Orchidee)
A lovely write Orchi and that old hymn is a favourite too.
March 16th, 2020 17:38 - Thoughts Version 2. (Goldfinch60)
Yes - I have for so long believed that the best is yet to come - - your...
March 16th, 2020 17:36 - LIMERICK No 66 (Michael Edwards)
Love your limericks -- your wit is something I would love to even a tiny...
March 16th, 2020 17:34 - Shine-free (Daydream Believer)
Excellent - - a poet\'s poem indeed - - into my list of favourites ...
March 16th, 2020 17:26 - COVID 19 ~ DONT PANIC 🧡 ANGELA 🤍 BRIAN 💙 AN aabb PANTOUM 💛 (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Most helpful posting dear duo - thank you for sharing these sensible...
March 16th, 2020 14:20 - still waters (Dusk arising)
Filled with natural pathos this taste of growing older and missing what...
March 16th, 2020 03:21 - Grandma (Mikal)
Grandmas who lived quietly like you describe here deserve tributes like...
March 13th, 2020 16:02 - HALF FULL (Joe Marcello)
How true Joe -- book me in for the country of dreamers.
March 13th, 2020 04:04 - Death\'s beauty (Rein Armstrong)
Bravo Elliot - - this subject always brings different interpretations but...
March 13th, 2020 01:52 - PLENTY FOR ALL (Michael Edwards)
Forgot to say I laughed myself off the chair after reading your rhyme - -...
March 12th, 2020 17:19 - PLENTY FOR ALL (Michael Edwards)
Washing the hands is a bit difficult when the fingers have to stay crossed...
March 12th, 2020 17:18 - Synergy (Roxie)
An invite to ponder this plea wrapped in fabulous imagery -- super write...
March 12th, 2020 17:10 - Fatality Trap (Saxon Crow)
Fear spreads like wild-fire and whilly agree with your final words on this...
March 12th, 2020 17:08 - eyebrows (Dusk arising)
Eyebrows today and yesteryear the beauty spot was considered a must-have ...
March 12th, 2020 17:04
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