Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- Calliope Acrostic (Goldfinch60)
A lovely read Andy - \"new wonder\" will surely appear to a clear mind...
February 9th, 2020 07:06 - Saved And Secure (Orchidee)
Sharing wonders is the best way forward - thanks for this reminder dear...
February 9th, 2020 07:04 - HAPPINESS ~ THE BORIS LEGACY ? 💛 ANGELA 💛 BRIAN 💛 (ANGELA & BRIAN)
You raised a chuckle with that cartoon and Ken Dodd did a good job with...
February 9th, 2020 07:02 - Together (Daydream Believer)
A tender love message and written with skill - - he will surely read and...
February 9th, 2020 06:59 - Hark thee Lover (Neville)
These words of love\'s changing face are charged with such imagery that...
February 9th, 2020 02:22 - after the lovestruck\'s audition (Dusk arising)
Sad but beautifully phrased this lament for love lost - - \"I sang from my...
February 6th, 2020 02:00 - As All Things Must (Nicholas Browning)
Both wording and message gives linguistic pleasure to this reader Nick - ...
February 5th, 2020 03:02 - Midnight (SerenWise)
You capture with well written rhyme the sense of a scary night scene so...
February 5th, 2020 02:44 - windy (Dusk arising)
Happy memories you versed here my friend when younger long legs conquered...
February 2nd, 2020 15:17 - STAGES OF LIFE (Michael Edwards)
So apt to describe the fact that minds change as years fly by my friend....
January 29th, 2020 17:51 - FIVE SENSES ~ 4 SENRYU & A TANKA ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Now who among your daily readers could ever resist how your relate to the...
January 29th, 2020 17:45 - What Shall I do? (Goldfinch60)
You made the wise choice by playing your croquet and watching other games...
January 29th, 2020 17:37 - My Everything (Markziff)
A scent of love\'s death with romance sadly lost in these words of past...
January 29th, 2020 17:35 - Word Of Life And Light (Orchidee)
We all need light in this troublesome world Orchi - thank you for the...
January 29th, 2020 17:28 - Stay Weird. (Goldfinch60)
Great number set me tapping my feet Andy as I read your urging for folk to...
January 27th, 2020 11:13 - Ocean breeze- Paint Chip Poem (Jackeggz)
A dream of a free-style poem Jack - your linguistic talent brings the...
January 27th, 2020 11:10 - Bumps in the road (Jackeggz)
Mature use of rhyme and I like the fun-side of this bit of advice on...
January 27th, 2020 06:41 - There come a day (Jackeggz)
Such a positive vibe comes from this posting - I am glad that I caught...
January 27th, 2020 06:36 - A Far Away Voice (Alan .S. Jeeves)
A ballad of sheer empathy to a friend and so well put together - another...
January 27th, 2020 03:52 - Death is inevitable. (Aa Harvey)
How true these word A.A. - we must treat the bit in between as a gift...
January 26th, 2020 11:18 - ODE TO BREXIT 🧡 ANGELA & BRIAN 💙 TRIBUTE TAE RABBIE BURNS (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Am still smiling at this out-crop of happenings when Brexit begins..........
January 24th, 2020 13:24 - WHERE NO ROSES GROW (Michael Edwards)
Such a super -dark write Michael.
January 24th, 2020 10:34 - Final Parting. (Goldfinch60)
Reading your sad but comforting poem brought me near tears dear Andy - ...
January 24th, 2020 03:25 - Ooh Ironing! (Goldfinch60)
A chore too many for me too dear Andy - though some things need a good...
January 23rd, 2020 04:47 - BENGAL TIGER 🧡 ANGELA & BRIAN 💙 A DIAMOND (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I agree wholeheartedly with the points made here on the caging of animals...
January 23rd, 2020 04:45 - HE (Michael Edwards)
Wow - I did much the same as Andy as your amazingly colourful art-work ...
January 23rd, 2020 03:34 - Peace Not Panic (Orchidee)
Fine hymn-poem Orchi..........
January 22nd, 2020 11:54 - Forest of Dean. (Goldfinch60)
This takes me back decades dear Andy when the forest of Dean was a...
January 22nd, 2020 11:53 - A memory (Nemo)
You verse the sad feeling so well with these few words Nemo - - so hard to...
January 22nd, 2020 11:51 - BOUQUET OF LANGUAGE 🧡 ANGELA & BRIAN 💙 AN APPRECIATION (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Your summary of linguistic effect gives me a big smile dear duo especially...
January 20th, 2020 16:20 - circle of trees (Dusk arising)
Great use of the words which although almost the same spelling mean so...
January 20th, 2020 06:28 - Map of Life. (Goldfinch60)
Yes our dreams have to circulate around those maps - thanks for the apt...
January 20th, 2020 06:27 - Growing In Grace (Orchidee)
Lovely words Orchi
January 20th, 2020 06:25 - I wonder (Nemo)
How sadly this lament verses with tenderest words what was and what could...
January 20th, 2020 05:09 - Fear of unknown (Nemo)
How true that we often fear the unknown and put up a barrier to our...
January 19th, 2020 13:55 - Bright side (Poetic Dan)
A wonderful few minutes with your gorgeous family Dan - what a lovely...
January 19th, 2020 13:51 - Sunny, Frosty Morning. (Goldfinch60)
Your talent for writing on nature\'s blessings to those who stop to look...
January 19th, 2020 13:48 - Soft Be The Echo (Nicholas Browning)
A delightfully arranged dish of imagery that your eloquent poetry offers...
January 19th, 2020 09:19 - Memories of Amsterdam (Barry Hodges)
Oh Barry - an unthinkable horror to lose a loved brother to these...
January 16th, 2020 13:12 - Thinking of (Mildred Achoch)
A super piece of story from words mixed for different meaning Mildred - I...
January 16th, 2020 13:08 - Time reveals all (Poetic Dan)
Yes indeed with exposure even under the pier we see the hidden again........
January 16th, 2020 13:04 - BUYING OUR FIRST HOUSE 🧡 ANGELA & BRIAN 💙 OUR DREAM HOME ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
You will certainly find your dream-house dear duo and when the time comes...
January 16th, 2020 09:42 - THOUGHTS OF A LOOSE ARTIST (5) (Michael Edwards)
Spot on this wise three liner -- love the calming watercolour too
January 16th, 2020 07:49 - Bon Voyage (Aa Harvey)
A beautiful poem of loving and wise advice . Every line a gem.
January 15th, 2020 04:27 - I Remember (Nicholas Browning)
An admirable rendering of the passing of Autumn and the eloquent...
January 14th, 2020 08:45 - Paths in Life. (Goldfinch60)
Life will always arrange variety if we are willing to take the differing...
January 14th, 2020 06:19 - THOUGHTS OF A LOOSE ARTIST (3&4) (Michael Edwards)
Wise and so true these thoughts on art and its producers dear Michael.
January 13th, 2020 03:01 - Can\'t be undone (Nemo)
Words which will ring a bell to so many and written with honest confession...
January 12th, 2020 14:07 - Maybe (Ron parrish aka wordman)
Love the flow of those romantic maybe\'s Ron - hope your journey to love...
January 12th, 2020 13:57 - I\'m In Love At Last. (Kevin browne)
A whole poem of reasons to celebrate love in this romantic ballad dear...
January 12th, 2020 02:56 - Burned bridges (Nemo)
Letting go is given its foregoing hurts and pains in this impressive...
January 10th, 2020 07:23 - TOLD ONCE (Michael Edwards)
Well it reads spot on to me - thanks Michael - intriguing and...
January 9th, 2020 03:55 - Time? (Goldfinch60)
Friend or enemy time has its own way of going just how quickly or slowly...
January 9th, 2020 03:50 - LOVE & MARRIAGE 🧡 ANGELA & BRIAN 💙 SEVEN PERFECT QUATRAINS ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Am so humbly honoured by your kind dedication dear duo and thank you - - ...
January 8th, 2020 13:49 - Buzzard. (Goldfinch60)
You capture the power of free-flight so well here - an exciting read...
January 8th, 2020 13:44 - anguish and despair (Dusk arising)
A heart-wrenching read my dear brave friend - -with you as you fight for...
January 8th, 2020 05:07 - Wait! (Poetic Dan)
Love the wise rhyme and oh those gorgeous canines............. great...
January 7th, 2020 16:51 - Amber (Brooke_Carters)
Letting in these potent lines with pleasure - an engaging read Brooke.
January 7th, 2020 05:17 - Community Concerns (Orchidee)
Yes dear Orchi - unity is the way forward to true peace. Thank you for...
January 7th, 2020 03:47 - VISIT OF THE MAGI 🧡 ANGELA & BRIAN 💙 AN ACROSTIC 5 2 3 4 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
An event of such dynamic importance and seen worldwide by those who were...
January 7th, 2020 03:45 - THREE 575s (Michael Edwards)
You have such a way with the 575 -style my friend - three wise haikus to...
January 7th, 2020 03:42 - birth of a poet (No 1) (Dusk arising)
A poet\'s poem indeed - this has to be one of your best D.A. - into my...
January 7th, 2020 03:37 - Life Changes. (Goldfinch60)
So well described the coping with change when a loved one is gone - - the...
January 7th, 2020 03:35 - velvet (Dusk arising)
Speechless at the beauty of this superb description. This one goes into my...
January 4th, 2020 02:16 - The New Day - Haiku. (Goldfinch60)
A wonderful number to hear as I read your fine haiku my friend.
January 3rd, 2020 04:20 - POETRY (Michael Edwards)
Ah - spot on Michael. A superb definition of how to write poetry in these...
January 3rd, 2020 04:19 - Bethlehem Birth (Orchidee)
Fine write my friend.
January 2nd, 2020 14:37 - HELD BY ALL (Michael Edwards)
A secret beam from this intriguing read really lights up my evening - ...
January 2nd, 2020 14:37 - Time (Nemo)
A look at what love does to time - very well styled and full of romantic...
January 2nd, 2020 14:22 - TWENTY ~ TWENTY 🧡 ANGELA & BRIAN 💙 AN *ACROSTIC* PANTOUM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Clever verse which no doubt raises our heads to a new year of Britain...
January 2nd, 2020 14:19 - Fragile memories (Alta H Mabin)
You capture such pathos in these few lines of lost love dear Alta - - a...
January 1st, 2020 17:26 - A RESOLUTION (Michael Edwards)
Never fear Michael dear - Your wit will always rise to the crest of...
January 1st, 2020 05:17 - 2020 (Suresh)
An inspiring read Suresh - -- wishing you peace of many blessings in...
January 1st, 2020 05:10 - Into the New Year 2. (Goldfinch60)
May your warm and determined heart go on courageously as you face your new...
January 1st, 2020 05:09 - Last Breath. (Goldfinch60)
My heartfelt sympathy dear Andy - - how moving to read the saddest of...
December 31st, 2019 09:22 - The Light Of Life (Orchidee)
Fine thoughts to ponder here Orchi.
December 31st, 2019 09:04 - Pink Tinted Windows (TheImpossibleGirl🍁🤞)
A fine comparison in this romantic ballad - mirrors do indeed need...
December 31st, 2019 09:03 - birth of a poet No 2 (Dusk arising)
You capture the result of a troubled mind\'s call for pen and paper so...
December 31st, 2019 09:00 - Known stranger (Nemo)
The awful heart-tugging moment can happen to either gender and wrench out...
December 31st, 2019 08:57 - OUR NEW YEAR*S EVE 🧡💙🧡💙 A 3 3 5 3 ACROSTIC ~ SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Your celebrations must bring joy to all when after eating the singing and...
December 31st, 2019 07:00 - Radiant Revealing (Orchidee)
An inspiring read dear friemd.
December 23rd, 2019 10:44 - A Subaltern\'s Marriage. (Goldfinch60)
An most engaging twenty words Andy rhymed as a challenge and hope it won...
December 22nd, 2019 11:35 - A Ghost Perched on a Box (Nicholas Browning)
I enjoyed every line of intrigue as your story progressed in this meeting...
December 22nd, 2019 11:31 - Spirit Sparks (Orchidee)
A fine writ on taking steps toward grace - thank you Orchi.
December 20th, 2019 17:18 - AUTUMN IN WEMBLEY (FineB)
An admirable reminder that autumn brings its own beauties to those who...
December 20th, 2019 11:26 - TRUE FRIENDSHIP (Laura🌻)
A point on which to ponder dear Laura - Though rare this mutual closeness...
December 17th, 2019 17:43 - CHRISTMAS DECS (Michael Edwards)
Ha ha - - Oh Humbug dear Michael I am on your lady\'s side here - - tis...
December 16th, 2019 17:28 - Come And Lay Down Beside Me. (Kevin browne)
Such a tender and loving invitation to \"let love dangle from hearts\" in...
December 16th, 2019 17:04 - NUTZ about NUTZ 🧡 ANGELA & BRIAN 💚 A 4 5 5 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I am nuts about nuts too - - very informative read dear duo....
December 16th, 2019 16:45 - REPEAT~REPEAT WORDS ~💚 BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡 A RHYMING SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I never knew there were so many double takes for all sorts of things - a...
December 9th, 2019 17:02 - only you (Dusk arising)
Good to see your postings back again D.A. - thanks for this tender verse...
December 4th, 2019 05:26 - Missing You (Laura🌻)
I can feel your sad ache dear Laura - - when Moms are best friends we...
December 3rd, 2019 17:18 - UNDIES (1) (Michael Edwards)
I heard only once of peg thieves around my neck of the woods but wondered...
December 2nd, 2019 17:24 - Boredom Personified. (Goldfinch60)
Ha - - thanks for the first smile of my day dear Andy -- we all need to...
November 27th, 2019 06:34 - Tunnel of Life. (Goldfinch60)
A hard tunnel to dig my friend - - so pleased you got through - - - keep...
November 24th, 2019 11:43 - His Loving Art (Zuzanna Musial)
You word the beauty of nature in sun\'s rising and setting so well here...
November 23rd, 2019 15:07 - The Leap (FredPeyer)
Ouch - I felt the pain of decision in your excellent verse Fred - - - a...
November 23rd, 2019 05:26 - COUPLETS (3) (Michael Edwards)
A smile of a read but oh that picture - - - fantastic water-colour
November 23rd, 2019 02:39 - LOVE AT A DISTANCE ~ BRIAN ~ A LAMENT ~ (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A good idea scribed with great rhyming and a wonderful number to...
November 22nd, 2019 08:56 - Intake - (plus one for Fun Friday) (Fay Slimm.)
Oooh - - sorry I didn\'t know anything about a Fun Friday not a chance...
November 22nd, 2019 07:42
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