Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- the haunting fifty fives (Dusk arising)
An account to store and remember - heroes are all around now and in need...
June 1st, 2020 07:46 - Nob Hill Hotel Ca (Neville)
Book me a ticket on the first plane then - Nob Hill eh ? - ah - this...
June 1st, 2020 05:30 - Kathleen. (Goldfinch60)
A voice to delight in and spend time with as your verse advocates Andy -...
May 31st, 2020 06:53 - Pentecost Promise (Orchidee)
Powerful words Orchi.
May 31st, 2020 06:51 - MORE MONOSUCHS 5 (Michael Edwards)
Good one to remember my friend.
May 31st, 2020 06:49 - isnt it about time? (Dusk arising)
Well said indeed D.A. - hoping this write gets through to whomever it is...
May 31st, 2020 06:48 - Skien (Neville)
Yes coming or going has often foxed me -- but just to recall that murmur...
May 31st, 2020 04:22 - Skien (Neville)
Ooooh I too love to stand and watch this special performance -...
May 31st, 2020 03:35 - MORE MONOSUCHS 4 (Michael Edwards)
Yes jumping in before then can lead to more than confusion. I love these...
May 30th, 2020 01:01 - betrayal (Dusk arising)
Reading your honest words gives tribute by drawing attention to their...
May 30th, 2020 00:58 - WHITE DOVE ~ UNA PALOMA BLANCA ~ UNA POEMA PANTOUMA ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A beautifully apt tribute to Dove which I am sure will delight and upbuild...
May 29th, 2020 09:28 - Music is My Life. (Goldfinch60)
Your very words bring music to my ears dear Andy - I believe we were made...
May 29th, 2020 09:24 - Badgers (Neville)
Agreed my friend - Badgers see life as a simple black-and-white way of...
May 29th, 2020 07:05 - Clothes Flattener. (Goldfinch60)
Ha ha - - do I understand you to have presented a crumpled appearance for...
May 28th, 2020 10:45 - BIRDS ALPHABETICALLY (1) ~ AN ABCDARIAN ~ A to M ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Most interesting list of birds and their habits. - - well done again dear...
May 28th, 2020 09:41 - Wind (Shij)
Hello Shij - - welcome to M.P.S. This is a friendly poetry site and has...
May 27th, 2020 16:31 - BEGONE...COVID-19 (Laura🌻)
I agree with each line in this wise condemnation of an unwelcome virus.
May 27th, 2020 13:39 - Ruwa - Praise Series (Orchidee)
Though familiar with scriptural text the Hebrew word Ruwa is new to me so...
May 27th, 2020 12:46 - Upon the Morrow (Neville)
Ah Nev -the tense and linguistic simplicity of this tender ballad...
May 27th, 2020 10:20 - THE TOILET ROLLS ! 💛 A 3 6 5 💛 ACROSTIC 💛 SONNET 💛 (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Haha -- you phrased this unseen necessity so well and yes every newspaper...
May 27th, 2020 04:29 - MORE MONOSUCHS 3 (Michael Edwards)
Excellent one-liner advice Michael.
May 27th, 2020 04:22 - SMOKEY (III) HIS ATTRIBUTES 💛 ANGELA 💛 BRIAN 💛 (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A delightful assessment of Smokey as you are getting used to ;his regal...
May 25th, 2020 07:08 - Thin Linens (Confia.En.Tu.Corazon 87)
A genuine cry in the wilderness hits this reader from your honest pen -...
May 25th, 2020 02:15 - Touching 2. (Goldfinch60)
Your words hold a powerful truth Andy - - touching most certainly creates...
May 24th, 2020 02:35 - MORE MONOSUCHS 1 (Michael Edwards)
A wise observation my friend. Hoping like me you are on your way up again...
May 24th, 2020 01:14 - SMOKEY (II) A CONTENT FELINE 💛 ANGELA 💛 BRIAN 💛 A 1 7 6 ACROSTIC SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Describes perfectly what a feline requires - - Smokey is a fortunate...
May 23rd, 2020 12:16 - Mercy Missive (Orchidee)
A lovely and comforting read fr a Saturday - thanking you Orchi.
May 23rd, 2020 06:04 - Second Best (Neville)
That beauty was prettily doing what comes naturally - - - but your wrap...
May 23rd, 2020 06:02 - IN DAYS TO COME (Michael Edwards)
Hard days in the future await as your poem says Michael. Wounded the earth...
May 22nd, 2020 06:53 - SMOKEY (I) SMOKEY HAS LANDED ! 💛 BRIAN 💛 ANGELA 💛 A PANTOUM (ANGELA & BRIAN)
ha ha - love this fun-pantoum with its welcome to Smokey - - landed...
May 22nd, 2020 04:49 - Lockdown (Neville)
Dotted with love-names this view of lockdown sounds like the perfect...
May 22nd, 2020 04:44 - Respect. (Goldfinch60)
That beautiful word so clearly described has got lost in the me-first...
May 22nd, 2020 03:52 - The Duck Billed Platypus (Neville)
Am searching round now-a-cus for your missing platypus and should I access...
May 21st, 2020 07:13 - Music and Lyrics. (Goldfinch60)
Never heard before what determines how you hear music - - thanks for...
May 21st, 2020 03:23 - More Words (Neville)
Ah - I love the measured rhyme in these seductive lines describing the...
May 20th, 2020 05:04 - LISTEN TO WORDS 2 (Michael Edwards)
Ha ha - - - the eternal accusation yet that is just what happens in many a...
May 20th, 2020 02:34 - Bubbles! (Sue.evans)
Bursting with hope this bubbly posting - thanks for sharing it sue
May 19th, 2020 11:35 - Star Trek Lives. (Goldfinch60)
Enjoyed this posting immensely - the wonderful voice brought back the...
May 19th, 2020 03:10 - Lockdown voyage! (Sue.evans)
Words of needed encouragement to keep carrying on while house-bound - a...
May 18th, 2020 13:08 - Too Late in the Day (Neville)
A poetic lesson in becoming more caring and penned with regret that...
May 18th, 2020 13:01 - SMOKEY ~ OUR FIRST CAT ! 💛 ANGELA 💛 BRIAN 💛 FIVE QUATRAINS 💛 (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Congrats on having a cat of your one and one who needed a new home too ...
May 18th, 2020 06:39 - Stars Shine. (Goldfinch60)
Stars are such blessings to all on this earth - a lovely Sunday-read Andy...
May 17th, 2020 05:39 - Three Guys Walked into a Bear (Neville)
Yes - well said Nev - never turn your bare backside to the sight of an...
May 17th, 2020 04:01 - Leave the View Behind (Neville)
You pen the scene well my friend. A formidable female who points fingers...
May 16th, 2020 10:13 - Briefly (Neville)
Ha - - methinks a gentleman merely half-tells in this brief poem - --
May 15th, 2020 06:42 - amazed (Dusk arising)
Great words and tune to help along times when memory takes us away to...
May 13th, 2020 13:19 - Chet. (Goldfinch60)
Fantastic personification Andy - - the best of talent yet given to toxic...
May 13th, 2020 13:16 - Wise Waiting (Orchidee)
We all need a refuge at times - good write Orchi.
May 13th, 2020 13:12 - DO YOU HAVE ANY REGRETS ? TEN QUOTES OF CELEBBRTIES ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Regrets as listed from some of the famous made me smile - - I go for...
May 13th, 2020 13:10 - The Lady Grey (Kevin Michael Bloor)
A real scary description of what ghostly business occurs when apparitions...
May 13th, 2020 13:02 - THE STRANGER (Michael Edwards)
Being a stranger is no easy task when asking locals the directions to...
May 12th, 2020 16:14 - Fading (Neville)
You poem the long-ago feeling so well Nev. and can relate to each line...
May 12th, 2020 07:12 - Aware ? ? ? (Dusk arising)
Wow - a first rate verse - The vile little virus has crept through your...
May 11th, 2020 12:42 - KEEPING UP APPEARANCES 💛 ANGELA 💛 CELEBRITY COMMENTS ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Inner beauty not only never fades but keep growing with passing years -...
May 11th, 2020 06:17 - Tree Song (Neville)
You caught a tree\'s magnificence essence in these few lines - - so...
May 11th, 2020 06:13 - Faith Through Forebodings (Orchidee)
A really fine write Orchi.
May 8th, 2020 14:33 - Released From Despair. (Goldfinch60)
A very encouraging verse on how to pull up from despair- - any friend in...
May 8th, 2020 14:32 - poetry to pass the time (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Kevin I can really relate to these observations as lock-down continues and...
May 8th, 2020 14:26 - VE DAY MAY 8TH 1945 ! LIVERPOOL (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A warm and telling story of that time when peace came again and the joy...
May 8th, 2020 14:22 - Reminder (SerenWise)
Words of love and understanding put so well into verse make this read...
May 8th, 2020 02:08 - What Happened to Yesterday? (Goldfinch60)
No doubt you made a memory or two Andy as yesterday rushed its way...
May 7th, 2020 16:03 - Bluebell Beauties (Orchidee)
Ah - \"now the green blade riseth\" indeed . ...You chose just the right...
May 7th, 2020 15:59 - Lunar Being (Sylviasearcher)
This write with its lilting pathos must be one of your best yet Sylvia -...
May 7th, 2020 15:52 - The Millers Daughter (Neville)
Methinks some millers\' daughters no doubt love their oats in floury...
May 7th, 2020 15:49 - slowly, into a shadow (Dusk arising)
Such a plaintive feeling of passing time in this slow lament for lost...
May 6th, 2020 14:55 - Secrets (Sylviasearcher)
Such a feel of peace in this description of something we often question...
May 5th, 2020 07:40 - R E H A B I L I T A T I O N ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (ANGELA & BRIAN)
The love and compassion shown to others in these testing times may we...
May 4th, 2020 16:22 - Sea-Dog (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Ah - loud applause for the exquisite rhythm in this engaging sea story of...
May 4th, 2020 13:04 - Rose Petals (Ron parrish aka wordman)
Oh Ron - this truly romantic poem together with my favourite piece of...
May 4th, 2020 12:59 - Saturday Meal. (Goldfinch60)
Yes dear Andy - a meal shared always did taste better - that salmon and...
May 3rd, 2020 03:54 - Comical Couplets (4) (Michael Edwards)
Michael your wit never fails to surprise - ha ha - just what I needed...
May 3rd, 2020 03:13 - BLUEBELLS 💙 RING IN THE SPRING 💙 AN ACROSTIC (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A most interesting video on one of my favourite spring flowers along with...
May 3rd, 2020 02:32 - Last dance (Myself and me)
An absorbing personification and written with such poetic observance I...
May 2nd, 2020 02:26 - 2020 May day blues (Dusk arising)
Boredom was never better described in this appeal for a bit more freedom...
May 1st, 2020 06:33 - 💛 KEY WORKER STAMPS 💛 ISLE OF MAN 💛 AN ADULATION 💛 (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Yes love will win the fight at this troubled time and praise for all those...
April 30th, 2020 16:56 - Sakura rain (Myself and me)
What a wonderful petally picture you pen of the time when pink covers the...
April 30th, 2020 16:50 - The Force of Destiny. (Goldfinch60)
Your musical heart must love being able to hear all sorts of presentations...
April 30th, 2020 02:01 - Comical Couplets (3) (Michael Edwards)
Ouch - many a truth spoken in jest Michael - we wonder about the...
April 30th, 2020 01:59 - conformity (Dusk arising)
A long time since I heard Cat - - thanks for sharing him Dusk - your...
April 30th, 2020 01:56 - After the Clapping (Sylviasearcher)
A very perceptive write which outlines isolation\'s real contribution to...
April 29th, 2020 03:19 - Living Side - Poet’s Reflection 09 (Nafis Light)
Applause for this poetic example of seeing the strength and not the...
April 27th, 2020 16:36 - DOUBT THREW (Michael Edwards)
Ah this made me near crying to think of the doubts that gave way to that...
April 27th, 2020 09:46 - Morning Stranger. (Goldfinch60)
Can imagine the almost daily changes in growing hair and the masculine...
April 27th, 2020 09:42 - 💛 F R E E D O M ? 💛 AN ACROSTIC 💛 (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Locked down will result in all sorts of complaints and perhaps rightly so...
April 27th, 2020 09:40 - Captain Tom (Dusk arising)
He and his brave determination will live in our hearts forever - the...
April 27th, 2020 06:42 - No Pot of Gold (Neville)
Gold at the end of the rainbow is where the eyes see it and my friend it...
April 27th, 2020 06:38 - Label (FredPeyer)
Ha ha - big grins after reading what would go down well in the tattoo...
April 26th, 2020 16:07 - Calm v Chaos (Neville)
Too true that madness can turn chaos to calm with a flick of the mind ...
April 26th, 2020 12:22 - Home Maid (Neville)
A perfect helping of contented home- made (maid) and its double meaning...
April 25th, 2020 16:38 - Tree-Towns. (Fay Slimm.)
Your comments are supportively kind D.A. and thank you for favouriting my...
April 23rd, 2020 04:34 - Beach. (Dysthymia)
I love the way you weave lots of reasons for visiting beaches into this...
April 23rd, 2020 04:09 - No Future (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Oh Kevin I have only just noticed your message that you are a recoverer...
April 21st, 2020 09:16 - No Future (Kevin Michael Bloor)
An extremely moving read - written to catch the flow of in-rushing...
April 21st, 2020 09:14 - Blue and Orange Arrow. (Goldfinch60)
Such a beautiful sight is the colourful Kingfisher - the same applies...
April 20th, 2020 16:27 - 🧡 HORNS OF A 🧡 DILEMMA 🧡 MIRROR DIAMOND ! 🧡 (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Great diamond-form and I love that poem too - Kipling had it nailed when...
April 20th, 2020 16:24 - CONSIGN TO OBLIVION (Michael Edwards)
Oh how true these few words Michael
April 20th, 2020 16:18 - covid-19 solidarity (Dusk arising)
A powerful and very poetic reminder that this virus needs fighting with...
April 20th, 2020 16:06 - Living Side - Poet’s Reflection 04 (Nafis Light)
Your words are wise and a good reminder of the benefits from living life...
April 20th, 2020 15:58 - THE BABY SHOW (Michael Edwards)
Oh you must have a charmed wit to raise a smile like mine big and broad...
April 18th, 2020 06:36 - Sea of Obituary (Neville)
Any description of manifold deaths has to be powerful and this force comes...
April 18th, 2020 06:24
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