Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- The Making of Them Both Maybe (Neville)
Ah - the lift laughter gives to any relationship and in this case could...
August 25th, 2022 16:45 - with you (Arqios)
Applied with poetic imagery to sigh for is this description of how distant...
August 25th, 2022 04:21 - Creating Memories. (Goldfinch60)
Days of play create many memories and thank you for reminding us that...
August 24th, 2022 05:03 - With Only Five Leaves Left (Neville)
The fate of some folk lies in their lifestyles but you pen Drakes sad case...
August 24th, 2022 04:23 - Anticipating Angels (Neville)
Nothing like a milligram or two of anticipation my friend. You paint such...
August 21st, 2022 04:22 - Trapped In A Telephone. (Goldfinch60)
I have to laugh when I see someone talking it seems to themselves - we...
August 21st, 2022 03:35 - Winter Loneliness (MendedFences27)
A wonderful use of metaphor Phil - - your third stanza captures the...
August 20th, 2022 02:51 - perceiving chapters (Dusk arising)
A question worth asking fills your last lines Dusk in this heart-tugging...
August 19th, 2022 04:31 - Progressing Prosperously (Orchidee)
An appeal in each psalm - - good write my friend.
August 19th, 2022 02:22 - Changes In Time. (Goldfinch60)
A tear in my eye after reading your words - - so true Andy that time...
August 19th, 2022 02:20 - Why Not Just Throw Away The Key (Neville)
Indeed a femme fatale can play many a perverted game methinks Nev and it ...
August 18th, 2022 07:49 - Come Let us Dance Some More (Neville)
Yes despite acid rain let the dancing continue - cleverly writ the ...
August 17th, 2022 14:22 - Epitaph for a PC (Doggerel Dave)
OOoh I know how you feel Dave - naked without means to cover your page...
August 17th, 2022 11:18 - Early One Morning. (Goldfinch60)
Ha ha - - well we can all wake sometimes with the wrong day in mind eh ?...
August 16th, 2022 17:48 - -Symphonic sadness- (Dean langmuir)
The title drew my close attention to this poignant lament dean - - you...
August 16th, 2022 16:56
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