Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.

• ridiculous organism (Dusk arising) Really apt questions D.A. - - there is I believe a very different being...
  September 19th, 2019 07:59
• The Things We Keep (CindyB) Ah - I have to agree with Neville - - - these lines are wrought with a...
  September 19th, 2019 07:56
• There Are Those (Neville) Whew - - - tis a grand list of rhyming description between those and those...
  September 19th, 2019 05:02
• JOY OF WOODLAND SOUNDS 🧡 A 6 8 SONNET 💙 (ANGELA & BRIAN) Ah - what could be better than walking in woodland - the sound of gentle...
  September 19th, 2019 03:39
• CYPRUS (Michael Edwards) Lovely rhyme Michael - - what a great way to holiday under a \"cobalt...
  September 19th, 2019 03:33
• All Was Right. (Goldfinch60) A wonderful help both the feather and poem and your dear one and her...
  September 19th, 2019 02:30
• CONTENTMENT & HAPPINESS 🧡 ANGELA & BRIAN 💙 (ANGELA & BRIAN) You have outlined the formula for attaining happiness and that is in being...
  September 18th, 2019 15:50
• there was a boy (Dusk arising) Much sense in this very clear assessment of what television has brought to...
  September 18th, 2019 12:02
• Good Time Girl (Neville) Such a pitiable yet in some ways quite memorable time to be in is the...
  September 18th, 2019 02:47
• Settle Down Dark (CindyB) An amazing read Cindy - - you have such a way of grabbing attention with...
  September 17th, 2019 08:00
• Don\'t tell Me Promises. (Kevin browne) The feeling of loss weaves its spell throughout this poignant write Kevin...
  September 17th, 2019 05:04
• Fondly and Truly (Neville) An appeal to set female hearts asighing - you win again Nev with your...
  September 17th, 2019 04:58
• evening descends (Dusk arising) Ah - - this soothes as it is read - and full of gentle acceptance that...
  September 17th, 2019 02:24
• The hope of a sunflower (Alta H Mabin) Such a splendidly telling haiku again Alta.
  September 17th, 2019 02:21
• The Vow (SerenWise) Some beautiful words weave their gentle magic around this reflection on...
  September 17th, 2019 02:20
• Until All The Lights Are Gone (CindyB) A bouquet of phrasing like I never read before - your talent for capturing...
  September 16th, 2019 11:04
• Pure (CindyB) Cindy - how have I missed your postings until now - after having read and...
  September 16th, 2019 10:59
• In Whaley Bridge (Kevin Michael Bloor) A beautifully compiled and rhymed tribute to a place I have never known...
  September 16th, 2019 10:13
• Opinions Welcome? (Meg) Censorship is more rife than ever as this verse brings out Meg....... good...
  September 16th, 2019 07:25
• What women need 101 (Alta H Mabin) That\'s saying it and rhyming it beautifully Alta - - - hope those needs...
  September 16th, 2019 07:24
• Protective Power (Orchidee) Divine protection is something to liven each human spirit. A lovely...
  September 16th, 2019 06:54
• WORDLESS (Michael Edwards) 8905 - - 9665 - - 699473022 - - - a wordless set of arresting numbers...
  September 16th, 2019 04:28
• Client (Neville) Letting that be so is wisest methinks......... clients are clients of all...
  September 16th, 2019 04:21
• Misty Waters (Ron parrish aka wordman) A wonderfully positive feel to this read Ron - - really enjoyed the...
  September 16th, 2019 02:44
• Ready-Made Muse (SerenWise) Wow - - Seren what a perfectly penned romantic ballad that spills from...
  September 16th, 2019 02:40
• IT IS NO SECRET - WHAT GOD CAN DO 💙 BRIAN ANGELA🧡 (ANGELA & BRIAN) What a comforting message in this lovely write - I learnt quite a lot...
  September 15th, 2019 13:32
• Inside Her Pants (Neville) I like a dare specially a double but can only think of these two...
  September 15th, 2019 08:57
• Manners Abandoned. (Goldfinch60) Manners atrocious these days - - unlike the video you chose Andy - - a...
  September 15th, 2019 05:17
• My son, Jaden (Alta H Mabin) No tribute could be more filled with love and your son will surely...
  September 14th, 2019 14:40
• Freedom...Just Feel and Share It (Nafis Light) What a beautiful words is FREEDOM - and you verse it so well here -...
  September 14th, 2019 14:38
• A Blue Toothbrush (Neville) I knew this ruse at one time and fell for it hook line and sinker - - ...
  September 14th, 2019 13:47
• La Rêverie (SerenWise) The depth of loss in this read is astoundingly versed - love the style...
  September 14th, 2019 02:24
• AS AUTUMN TURNS (Michael Edwards) A read to remember and save -- your verse had me spell-bound and that...
  September 14th, 2019 01:55
• Another Good Day to Come. (Goldfinch60) Ah - gratitude opens lots of happiness and your lovely verse is filled...
  September 14th, 2019 01:50
• Food for Thought (Neville) There for the eating was Love - - covered in rice paper no less - your...
  September 14th, 2019 01:48
• MyLife (Purdy61) Such a loneliness seeps through these lines Purdy -and so many describe a...
  September 13th, 2019 07:03
• Hurt (Ron parrish aka wordman) The rough paths of life so tenderly poemed here Ron resound with hurt...
  September 13th, 2019 04:59
• swollen breakers (Dusk arising) Wow - a story in five little stanzas and leaving me wanting more. Great...
  September 13th, 2019 04:11
• Jerusalem Joys (Orchidee) A fine celebratory verse my friend.
  September 13th, 2019 03:57
• My Solitary Magpie (Sylviasearcher) Birds like the magpie though beautiful in feather have a reputation for...
  September 13th, 2019 03:55
• PARADISE 🧡 ANGELA 💙 BRIAN 🧡 A 4 6 4 Sonnet (ANGELA & BRIAN) You make the reasons for a visit to New Zealand very appealing dear duo --...
  September 13th, 2019 03:45
• Right here (Alta H Mabin) Ah - - my favourite way of re-living the good times - bath-time as your...
  September 13th, 2019 03:23
• Downtown Girl (Laura🌻) A haunt of a read and how these lines must resonate with those whose loved...
  September 13th, 2019 03:18
• Starship Is Anybody Out There. (Goldfinch60) Such a sad but true wake-up call your posted today my friend - your...
  September 13th, 2019 02:00
• Disinterested (Neville) Oh - what a poor love-sick swain you poem for us today Nev. The lady...
  September 13th, 2019 01:20
• Croquet. (Goldfinch60) How interesting you make a game I have not even seen - wishing you lots of...
  September 12th, 2019 07:44
• A to Z and you and me (Alta H Mabin) You pen a clear picture of sheer contentment when love grows between two...
  September 12th, 2019 04:26
• big old moon (love) (Dusk arising) True love never fades with time passing by D. - loved the rhyming and ...
  September 12th, 2019 04:24
• FOOD FOR THOUGHT ~ A 3 4 7 Acrostic Sonnet (ANGELA & BRIAN) The thought of mass anarchy sets the challenge ahead - -wastage and...
  September 12th, 2019 04:21
• THE BOUQUET (Michael Edwards) Emotion flows from these solemn lines Michael - - what tale could it tell...
  September 12th, 2019 03:18
• Correction (Neville) Ha - - your talent for making me smile with your play on words is always...
  September 12th, 2019 01:59
• It Has Been Eighteen Years (Tribute To September 11th 2001) (Brooklyn6timesplus) You versed the terrible tragedy so clearly brooklyn and reminded us never...
  September 11th, 2019 13:47
• opposites (Dusk arising) Ha ha ha - - your pen never ceases to amaze with its unique looks at life...
  September 11th, 2019 05:39
• Could Be The Best (JWKP98) This caring poem would surely affect a friend to \"get up and have a good...
  September 11th, 2019 04:25
• I was not ready for this (Poetic Dan) A powerful read Dan and I must agree with its sentiments - we have but a...
  September 11th, 2019 03:42
• Never Not Once (Neville) Good morn to you Nev. The sadness in these lines shows how self-pity can...
  September 11th, 2019 02:31
• LESOTHOHTOSEL ~ A REFLECTION ! (ANGELA & BRIAN) Lots of interesting facts learnt from your posting today dear duo - - -...
  September 10th, 2019 15:41
• Finding Moments (Christina8) I must agree with Neville - your other half is very fortunate dear...
  September 10th, 2019 14:53
• last dance (Dusk arising) That last dance is always the saddest and this little write has all the...
  September 10th, 2019 13:21
• No fear (Poetic Dan) We who have the gift of life will not go into non-existence - as there is...
  September 10th, 2019 12:24
• Best Friends (Neville) Best friends to the bitter end said the crows in Jungledbook and I took...
  September 10th, 2019 10:20
• Treasure Hunt. (Goldfinch60) what a fun thing to do Andy - I love the idea of hunting treasure for all...
  September 10th, 2019 05:37
• Search Me, See Me (Orchidee) A fine prayer-poem Orchi.
  September 10th, 2019 03:06
• TREES in SEASON ~ QUARTETTE of QUATRAINS (ANGELA & BRIAN) Love this tribute to all the glorious trees - - whenever I walk my faves...
  September 9th, 2019 13:02
• Roses Grow A Thorn Of Love. (Kevin browne) This set of stanzas have an amazing flow as thought follows thought - -...
  September 9th, 2019 11:02
• Rain dance (Alta H Mabin) That dance of aching souls leaves such a hollow when raindrops add to our...
  September 9th, 2019 07:57
• look back (Dusk arising) A read filled with the lure of mystery - your pen write these metaphoric...
  September 9th, 2019 03:33
• Don\'t You Dare Stop Now (Neville) Ha ha -- Big Little Fay - - hhhmmm that\'s a new name - -- I\'m not very...
  September 9th, 2019 02:57
• Don\'t You Dare Stop Now (Neville) Ah - - this write reaches its climax so poetically perfect - - - - - - a...
  September 9th, 2019 02:04
• Double Jeopardy (Neville) Returned for a second helping of this punchy 7-5 -7 and still find it...
  September 8th, 2019 23:57
• confidence (Dusk arising) You out-best you best with this little gem D - deep and ...
  September 8th, 2019 23:53
• Infinite beauty (Alta H Mabin) An engaging unfolding through so few words of morning\'s beautiful dress...
  September 8th, 2019 11:46
• The Book of Life. (Goldfinch60) A great attitude to have - that book of life I feel sure will be opened...
  September 8th, 2019 05:28
• IT\'S WHAT AN ARTIST DOES (Michael Edwards) You most certainly are in that class of crearting as your wonderful ...
  September 8th, 2019 02:49
• Double Jeopardy (Neville) An ouch of a Sen. my friend....... am feeling the force of your...
  September 8th, 2019 02:44
• A million shattered pieces of my heart (Alta H Mabin) Your words reach into the core and I feel the sadness yet that last stanza...
  September 7th, 2019 13:25
• A Silver Coin A Poets Flair. (Kevin browne) Your love poems allure every reader with flow and diversity - another...
  September 7th, 2019 11:07
• Mourning (Bay) The feel of sad loss and overwhelming depression makes this a haunt of a...
  September 7th, 2019 09:59
• Tock (Andrew Charles Forrest) These droll lines sum up the dire situation so well Andrew. Thanks for...
  September 7th, 2019 04:25
• Strong is Quiet. (Goldfinch60) There are reasons for both yet the quiet are often the strongest inside. A...
  September 7th, 2019 02:18
• An Autumn Harvest (Neville) I was there in that orchard so clear was your picture of autumn long past...
  September 7th, 2019 00:58
• AS NIGHT DISPLACES (Michael Edwards) I felt that saline surge as I read this little gem Michael - - great...
  September 7th, 2019 00:48
• Denial (Vanessa wallace) A good look at perfection and how it changes according to choice - - I...
  September 6th, 2019 10:49
• Shutter (Vanessa wallace) A shutter will snap and there will be an image - your poem looked at what...
  September 6th, 2019 10:43
• Winters kitten and the autumn (Andrew Charles Forrest) A lovely and very well crafted tribute to September\'s gift of the...
  September 6th, 2019 07:56
• conjeal (Dusk arising) A most beguiling read D. that leaves me wanting a sequel. A deep and...
  September 6th, 2019 02:47
• DROLL COUPLETS (14) (Michael Edwards) Another chuckle from your clever aptitude for seeing the fun-side of life...
  September 6th, 2019 01:45
• Infinity (Neville) Perfectly poemed these sacred places of fallen heroes - - time stands to...
  September 6th, 2019 00:17
• The Mind (Stephen OConnell) Ah - I really agree with these words Stephen - a writer is only know...
  September 5th, 2019 12:49
• Diamonds And Dafodills. (Kevin browne) what an inspiring title and unique phrasing in this well crafted tale of...
  September 5th, 2019 05:05
• MEMORIES 🧡 ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN) True love cannot fade and together again soon you dear duo will make this...
  September 5th, 2019 04:22
• Sharon Tate (FineB) Poor young innocents got really hung up on the tinsel back then - one sad...
  September 5th, 2019 04:20
• DROLL COUPLETS (13) (Michael Edwards) Who would have thought there was a rhyme to put with SQUITS - not...
  September 5th, 2019 02:50
• Somewhere Behind These Eyes (Neville) Words that break needed silence are but as this strong poem relates - a...
  September 5th, 2019 02:15
• The One (Christina8) Love and gentle enchantment in each other\'s expressions of tenderness...
  September 4th, 2019 12:11
• Rain of Forgiveness (Nafis Light) Raindrops invigorate if we stay and let them hit us a while - stress...
  September 4th, 2019 11:29
• I Can Listen. (Goldfinch60) This is what friends are for and you for sure brought that lady comfort...
  September 4th, 2019 09:33
• Our Crescendo (Clara) Such a discrete description of physical love - - the lines tumble sensual...
  September 4th, 2019 09:30
• DROLL COUPLETS (12) (Michael Edwards) Guson wi\' yer Mike - yous only old when you forget what mem\'ry...
  September 4th, 2019 06:24
• SUMMER TO AUTUMN ~ AN ACROSTIC 6 2 6 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN) Autumn is favourite with me too and reading this tribute to the changes in...
  September 4th, 2019 03:46