Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- Presence Promise (Orchidee)
The best presence in one which by faith we can feel.......... fine write...
October 11th, 2019 11:07 - He and... C (Clara)
All your warm concern for a known friend shines from these sad lines dear...
October 11th, 2019 11:06 - AUCKLAND NEW ZEALAND 𧑠ANGELA 𧑠AN ACROSTIC (ANGELA & BRIAN)
With love put to such a test your future together will be better assured -...
October 11th, 2019 06:25 - Challenges to Experience. (Goldfinch60)
How true that experience cannot be taught my dear friend......... we all...
October 11th, 2019 03:07 - βConnections Through Timeβ (Thoughts In Time)
Connections of heart are I believe timeless and eternal Kelly - your...
October 11th, 2019 03:02 - those years (Dusk arising)
An unforgettable read which recounts time\'s ability - we need those...
October 11th, 2019 02:56 - Lost in Time (FredPeyer)
Oh Fred -- - time as you write it is so very mysterious and we humble...
October 11th, 2019 02:35 - THE WAITINGS OVER ! BRIAN & ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Truly a celebration time coming so put on your best smiles dear duo - your...
October 10th, 2019 12:48 - THE AMERICAN \'R\' (Michael Edwards)
Couldn\'t agree more Michael this sloppy lingo DARminates T.V. a LARt - ...
October 10th, 2019 04:12 - Thirsting Tale (Orchidee)
Fine write Orchi.
October 10th, 2019 03:57 - My Firework (Clara)
Am so pleased to have caught this tribute to firework displays and woven...
October 10th, 2019 03:56 - Colorful accessories and grey memories (Alta H Mabin)
Yes dear Alta writing out our sorrows and anguish at losing love is the...
October 10th, 2019 03:16 - Morning coffee (Alta H Mabin)
Such a warm and romantic scene you describe and so well Alta - thank you...
October 9th, 2019 15:33 - WHICH SHOWER GEL? (Michael Edwards)
Ha ha - didn\'t expect that last line - love your sense of humour Mike...
October 9th, 2019 10:53 - Little Girl (FredPeyer)
Such a refreshing read Fred and a tale well told with reminders that...
October 8th, 2019 04:25 - We Do Not Bow (CindyB)
Excellent imagery Cindy - -- we are made from the stuff of stars and you...
October 8th, 2019 03:53 - Shriek (Dusk arising)
Wow - -- never knew gulls could shout for entrails - a great surprise...
October 7th, 2019 13:57 - BEYOND THE RIVER (Michael Edwards)
Composed to poetic perfection the life beyond a river in these lyrical and...
October 7th, 2019 03:35 - Walk Together to Eternity. (Goldfinch60)
What a wonderful example of love your poem outlines my friend with joy...
October 7th, 2019 02:49 - The Invisible Stuff (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Loud applause for the new phrasing for these caring traits - I shall...
October 4th, 2019 04:22 - I am a dreamer (Alta H Mabin)
Dreamers tag onto a fanciful memory and keep enlarging to help life...
October 4th, 2019 04:21 - Alphabetical Infidelities (Neville)
Oh - very big chuckles at your last line - - what a surprise ending and...
October 4th, 2019 04:18 - The Rainbows Answer. (Kevin browne)
I love the flow of these reasons for looking more closely at colours of...
October 3rd, 2019 23:42 - The Game (FredPeyer)
And oh how second these word Fred - - you describe the futility of...
October 3rd, 2019 23:37 - DISCOVERING A NEW CAVE ! π BRIAN π (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A wonderful account of finding a cavern and how............. dear Fonz is...
October 3rd, 2019 15:50 - just a half written song (Dusk arising)
Glad you decided to post this bit of blues - I reckon it would go as well...
October 3rd, 2019 11:05 - Broken Dreams (Clara)
A tale within the first line of this tantalizing read Clara - - you take...
October 3rd, 2019 09:25 - Perfect Imperfections (Neville)
Yes the title you give tells how perfect imperfections can enhance the...
October 3rd, 2019 09:21 - Cried A Million Shadows. (Kevin browne)
A really deep emotive write Kevin - - it gives a poignant experience and...
October 3rd, 2019 03:32 - Croquet and Nature. (Goldfinch60)
That sounds like a game to enjoy amid the beauty of nature Andy - keep...
October 3rd, 2019 02:50 - Waves crashing (Alta H Mabin)
Soul mates are ever connected and as your verse points to the stars as the...
October 3rd, 2019 02:11 - Message to My River. (Goldfinch60)
The feel of being beside a flowing river cannot be beaten - water on the...
October 2nd, 2019 12:17 - THE LANGUAGE OF ROSES ? 𧑠ANGELA & BRIAN π COLLABORATION POEM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Lovely lovely the essences of roses so carefully explained in this...
October 2nd, 2019 12:14 - God\'s Presence - Peace Series (3) (Orchidee)
One of my favourite texts is used in this verse Orchi - - the words \" be...
October 2nd, 2019 04:49 - Who is She? (Clara)
I love the form and style of this denunciation of two-facedness Clara - -...
October 2nd, 2019 04:47 - Indecent Propositions (Neville)
Cant make up my mind whether it refers to a waitress selling food, a...
October 2nd, 2019 03:57 - Jessye Norman. (Goldfinch60)
Jessye had tonal perfection in her voice and she will be sorely missed --...
October 2nd, 2019 00:47 - Crying Earth (Christina8)
Such a good rhyme in these few lines with an important message - - a well...
October 1st, 2019 12:25 - Assessing the Blues (Neville)
Ha - - a round of applause after reading this poetic play on words my...
October 1st, 2019 05:00 - Here lies She (Clara)
A tale of battle lost but fought hard to retain being the One - -what a...
September 30th, 2019 13:21 - MY OCTOBER BLUES ~ ANGELA ~ AN ACROSTIC 2 7 5 SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
The wrench is to be expected dear Angela but I guess I know which path...
September 30th, 2019 10:05 - Pick up the pieces (Alta H Mabin)
Picking up pieces can often take much more time than any of us realize - ...
September 30th, 2019 08:16 - Enlargement Expectancy (Orchidee)
Good write Orchi.
September 30th, 2019 08:14 - The Cedar wood tree and me (Andrew Charles Forrest)
The feel of end nearing for a long-lived tree will hit hearts of readers...
September 30th, 2019 04:58 - Wishes (Neville)
Oh those wishes when time has had its results -- a poem touching the...
September 30th, 2019 04:54 - I know (Alta H Mabin)
Yea the right love can always be felt whether near or far true hearts ever...
September 29th, 2019 05:35 - I Miss Her. (Goldfinch60)
The missing will ever be there dear friend - love is no respecter of...
September 29th, 2019 04:50 - Childish Smiles (Neville)
Sweet memories run through these few lines giving a most appealing read. I...
September 29th, 2019 04:42 - Yellow River (Neville)
Reading this hitherto unknown and abominable method of female birth...
September 28th, 2019 10:49 - Just once more (Alta H Mabin)
As long as we see we can write clearly about all around us for others to...
September 27th, 2019 05:21 - So. (Goldfinch60)
A two letter word with a punch in its tail Andy - so I will handle with...
September 27th, 2019 04:38 - Loves Dormant Memories (Suresh)
The grim truth of reality sings itself into your poignant lines here...
September 27th, 2019 01:13 - When Does Trust Kick In (Neville)
Trust kicks in from that single moment when eyes first meet and lock ...
September 27th, 2019 01:10 - No Longer Jazz. (Goldfinch60)
Knowing how well jazz was at one time brought over by such as the Duke...
September 26th, 2019 15:37 - THE END YEARS (Michael Edwards)
An admirable write and what a lovely flower-painting. Your talents are...
September 26th, 2019 15:33 - HARVEST IN 19th CENTURY AMERICA 𧑠ANGELA & BRIAN π (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A perfect picture of harvest and why it should be celebrated - meal of...
September 26th, 2019 15:30 - Colors of the Rainbow (FredPeyer)
Fantastic advice Fred - - this is off to my favourites.
September 26th, 2019 12:46 - Serenity (Clara)
Ah - I love this piece...The serenity of sleep is so well expressed here...
September 26th, 2019 07:58 - Breathe (Alta H Mabin)
And what better to reconcile a distracting dawn with than quietly...
September 26th, 2019 07:55 - worth it? (Dusk arising)
The young one are quite rightly worth every move we make to force change...
September 26th, 2019 07:44 - Poppies (Neville)
A reverent but light-hearted look at poppy-red and all it pertains to and...
September 26th, 2019 03:48 - Deciduous (Neville)
The difference between ever and naked deciduous makes needing that...
September 25th, 2019 04:02 - Only you (Alta H Mabin)
Such a heart-rending read Alta - hoping it was not written from...
September 25th, 2019 02:26 - Crystal clear (Poetic Dan)
Love is indeed to be held dear and you tell it so well Dan - I love the...
September 24th, 2019 04:40 - Not so perfect, dinner for one (Alta H Mabin)
Oh - sighs after reading these words dear Alta. -A tale so well told and...
September 24th, 2019 04:38 - The Lightening in My Dark. (Goldfinch60)
Yes lightening is forecast for the southern coasts today Andy -- it sure...
September 24th, 2019 04:08 - These Words (Neville)
A great early write for it shows your potential to a fine degree...
September 24th, 2019 04:02 - Why Do You Write Poetry? (Goldfinch60)
such a good answer to that simple question dear friend - - poetry as your...
September 23rd, 2019 07:14 - Stashed (Neville)
Memory indeed holds everything stashed very safe where none can break...
September 23rd, 2019 07:11 - M I C H I G A N ~ I N ~ F A L L 𧑠ANGELA & BRIAN π An ~ 8 2 4 Acrostic Sonnet (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Glorious video and tune to go with the pictures - together with your...
September 23rd, 2019 04:43 - Beginnings. (Goldfinch60)
An eloquent tribute to beginnings and fine advice on how to catch hold of...
September 22nd, 2019 13:42 - Splitting Hairs (Neville)
Naught could be more romantic than this -- - -- a sigh of a write and a...
September 21st, 2019 13:31 - A Perfectly Reasonable Question (Neville)
All those will who knew the effect another\'s life had upon their own...
September 20th, 2019 05:43 - BORROWING & LENDING 𧑠A SONNET π (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Yes borrowing and lending in days gone by seemed a neighbourly custom ...
September 20th, 2019 04:55 - May I Kindly (Hidden)
Such an appealingly written set of reasons for a lady to say Yes to the...
September 20th, 2019 04:47 - Word is (Aa Harvey)
And you chose rightly my friend - a fine example of waiting to find...
September 20th, 2019 04:45 - Band Class (Sylviasearcher)
An astounding read Sylvia - a poet\'s poem and full of metaphored power ...
September 20th, 2019 04:42 - Very memorable occasion (Dusk arising)
Light and love are heaven\'s great gifts - you pen this so well Dusk......
September 20th, 2019 03:48 - Interlude (FredPeyer)
A bitter-sweet write that reaches the heart Fred - - do hope you and your...
September 20th, 2019 01:47 - To the sounds of Debussy (Alta H Mabin)
What a great way to go to sleep and then awake - - -and all beside a...
September 20th, 2019 01:26 - ridiculous organism (Dusk arising)
Really apt questions D.A. - - there is I believe a very different being...
September 19th, 2019 07:59 - The Things We Keep (CindyB)
Ah - I have to agree with Neville - - - these lines are wrought with a...
September 19th, 2019 07:56 - There Are Those (Neville)
Whew - - - tis a grand list of rhyming description between those and those...
September 19th, 2019 05:02 - JOY OF WOODLAND SOUNDS 𧑠A 6 8 SONNET π (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Ah - what could be better than walking in woodland - the sound of gentle...
September 19th, 2019 03:39 - CYPRUS (Michael Edwards)
Lovely rhyme Michael - - what a great way to holiday under a \"cobalt...
September 19th, 2019 03:33 - All Was Right. (Goldfinch60)
A wonderful help both the feather and poem and your dear one and her...
September 19th, 2019 02:30 - CONTENTMENT & HAPPINESS 𧑠ANGELA & BRIAN π (ANGELA & BRIAN)
You have outlined the formula for attaining happiness and that is in being...
September 18th, 2019 15:50 - there was a boy (Dusk arising)
Much sense in this very clear assessment of what television has brought to...
September 18th, 2019 12:02 - Good Time Girl (Neville)
Such a pitiable yet in some ways quite memorable time to be in is the...
September 18th, 2019 02:47 - Settle Down Dark (CindyB)
An amazing read Cindy - - you have such a way of grabbing attention with...
September 17th, 2019 08:00 - Don\'t tell Me Promises. (Kevin browne)
The feeling of loss weaves its spell throughout this poignant write Kevin...
September 17th, 2019 05:04 - Fondly and Truly (Neville)
An appeal to set female hearts asighing - you win again Nev with your...
September 17th, 2019 04:58 - evening descends (Dusk arising)
Ah - - this soothes as it is read - and full of gentle acceptance that...
September 17th, 2019 02:24 - The hope of a sunflower (Alta H Mabin)
Such a splendidly telling haiku again Alta.
September 17th, 2019 02:21 - The Vow (SerenWise)
Some beautiful words weave their gentle magic around this reflection on...
September 17th, 2019 02:20 - Until All The Lights Are Gone (CindyB)
A bouquet of phrasing like I never read before - your talent for capturing...
September 16th, 2019 11:04 - Pure (CindyB)
Cindy - how have I missed your postings until now - after having read and...
September 16th, 2019 10:59 - In Whaley Bridge (Kevin Michael Bloor)
A beautifully compiled and rhymed tribute to a place I have never known...
September 16th, 2019 10:13 - Opinions Welcome? (Meg)
Censorship is more rife than ever as this verse brings out Meg....... good...
September 16th, 2019 07:25 - What women need 101 (Alta H Mabin)
That\'s saying it and rhyming it beautifully Alta - - - hope those needs...
September 16th, 2019 07:24
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