Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- Who is She? (Clara)
I love the form and style of this denunciation of two-facedness Clara - -...
October 2nd, 2019 04:47 - Indecent Propositions (Neville)
Cant make up my mind whether it refers to a waitress selling food, a...
October 2nd, 2019 03:57 - Jessye Norman. (Goldfinch60)
Jessye had tonal perfection in her voice and she will be sorely missed --...
October 2nd, 2019 00:47 - Crying Earth (Christina8)
Such a good rhyme in these few lines with an important message - - a well...
October 1st, 2019 12:25 - Assessing the Blues (Neville)
Ha - - a round of applause after reading this poetic play on words my...
October 1st, 2019 05:00 - Here lies She (Clara)
A tale of battle lost but fought hard to retain being the One - -what a...
September 30th, 2019 13:21 - MY OCTOBER BLUES ~ ANGELA ~ AN ACROSTIC 2 7 5 SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
The wrench is to be expected dear Angela but I guess I know which path...
September 30th, 2019 10:05 - Pick up the pieces (Alta H Mabin)
Picking up pieces can often take much more time than any of us realize - ...
September 30th, 2019 08:16 - Enlargement Expectancy (Orchidee)
Good write Orchi.
September 30th, 2019 08:14 - The Cedar wood tree and me (Andrew Charles Forrest)
The feel of end nearing for a long-lived tree will hit hearts of readers...
September 30th, 2019 04:58 - Wishes (Neville)
Oh those wishes when time has had its results -- a poem touching the...
September 30th, 2019 04:54 - I know (Alta H Mabin)
Yea the right love can always be felt whether near or far true hearts ever...
September 29th, 2019 05:35 - I Miss Her. (Goldfinch60)
The missing will ever be there dear friend - love is no respecter of...
September 29th, 2019 04:50 - Childish Smiles (Neville)
Sweet memories run through these few lines giving a most appealing read. I...
September 29th, 2019 04:42 - Yellow River (Neville)
Reading this hitherto unknown and abominable method of female birth...
September 28th, 2019 10:49 - Just once more (Alta H Mabin)
As long as we see we can write clearly about all around us for others to...
September 27th, 2019 05:21 - So. (Goldfinch60)
A two letter word with a punch in its tail Andy - so I will handle with...
September 27th, 2019 04:38 - Loves Dormant Memories (Suresh)
The grim truth of reality sings itself into your poignant lines here...
September 27th, 2019 01:13 - When Does Trust Kick In (Neville)
Trust kicks in from that single moment when eyes first meet and lock ...
September 27th, 2019 01:10 - No Longer Jazz. (Goldfinch60)
Knowing how well jazz was at one time brought over by such as the Duke...
September 26th, 2019 15:37 - THE END YEARS (Michael Edwards)
An admirable write and what a lovely flower-painting. Your talents are...
September 26th, 2019 15:33 - HARVEST IN 19th CENTURY AMERICA 🧡 ANGELA & BRIAN 💙 (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A perfect picture of harvest and why it should be celebrated - meal of...
September 26th, 2019 15:30 - Colors of the Rainbow (FredPeyer)
Fantastic advice Fred - - this is off to my favourites.
September 26th, 2019 12:46 - Serenity (Clara)
Ah - I love this piece...The serenity of sleep is so well expressed here...
September 26th, 2019 07:58 - Breathe (Alta H Mabin)
And what better to reconcile a distracting dawn with than quietly...
September 26th, 2019 07:55 - worth it? (Dusk arising)
The young one are quite rightly worth every move we make to force change...
September 26th, 2019 07:44 - Poppies (Neville)
A reverent but light-hearted look at poppy-red and all it pertains to and...
September 26th, 2019 03:48 - Deciduous (Neville)
The difference between ever and naked deciduous makes needing that...
September 25th, 2019 04:02 - Only you (Alta H Mabin)
Such a heart-rending read Alta - hoping it was not written from...
September 25th, 2019 02:26 - Crystal clear (Poetic Dan)
Love is indeed to be held dear and you tell it so well Dan - I love the...
September 24th, 2019 04:40 - Not so perfect, dinner for one (Alta H Mabin)
Oh - sighs after reading these words dear Alta. -A tale so well told and...
September 24th, 2019 04:38 - The Lightening in My Dark. (Goldfinch60)
Yes lightening is forecast for the southern coasts today Andy -- it sure...
September 24th, 2019 04:08 - These Words (Neville)
A great early write for it shows your potential to a fine degree...
September 24th, 2019 04:02 - Why Do You Write Poetry? (Goldfinch60)
such a good answer to that simple question dear friend - - poetry as your...
September 23rd, 2019 07:14 - Stashed (Neville)
Memory indeed holds everything stashed very safe where none can break...
September 23rd, 2019 07:11 - M I C H I G A N ~ I N ~ F A L L 🧡 ANGELA & BRIAN 💙 An ~ 8 2 4 Acrostic Sonnet (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Glorious video and tune to go with the pictures - together with your...
September 23rd, 2019 04:43 - Beginnings. (Goldfinch60)
An eloquent tribute to beginnings and fine advice on how to catch hold of...
September 22nd, 2019 13:42 - Splitting Hairs (Neville)
Naught could be more romantic than this -- - -- a sigh of a write and a...
September 21st, 2019 13:31 - A Perfectly Reasonable Question (Neville)
All those will who knew the effect another\'s life had upon their own...
September 20th, 2019 05:43 - BORROWING & LENDING 🧡 A SONNET 💙 (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Yes borrowing and lending in days gone by seemed a neighbourly custom ...
September 20th, 2019 04:55 - May I Kindly (Hidden)
Such an appealingly written set of reasons for a lady to say Yes to the...
September 20th, 2019 04:47 - Word is (Aa Harvey)
And you chose rightly my friend - a fine example of waiting to find...
September 20th, 2019 04:45 - Band Class (Sylviasearcher)
An astounding read Sylvia - a poet\'s poem and full of metaphored power ...
September 20th, 2019 04:42 - Very memorable occasion (Dusk arising)
Light and love are heaven\'s great gifts - you pen this so well Dusk......
September 20th, 2019 03:48 - Interlude (FredPeyer)
A bitter-sweet write that reaches the heart Fred - - do hope you and your...
September 20th, 2019 01:47 - To the sounds of Debussy (Alta H Mabin)
What a great way to go to sleep and then awake - - -and all beside a...
September 20th, 2019 01:26 - ridiculous organism (Dusk arising)
Really apt questions D.A. - - there is I believe a very different being...
September 19th, 2019 07:59 - The Things We Keep (CindyB)
Ah - I have to agree with Neville - - - these lines are wrought with a...
September 19th, 2019 07:56 - There Are Those (Neville)
Whew - - - tis a grand list of rhyming description between those and those...
September 19th, 2019 05:02 - JOY OF WOODLAND SOUNDS 🧡 A 6 8 SONNET 💙 (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Ah - what could be better than walking in woodland - the sound of gentle...
September 19th, 2019 03:39 - CYPRUS (Michael Edwards)
Lovely rhyme Michael - - what a great way to holiday under a \"cobalt...
September 19th, 2019 03:33 - All Was Right. (Goldfinch60)
A wonderful help both the feather and poem and your dear one and her...
September 19th, 2019 02:30 - CONTENTMENT & HAPPINESS 🧡 ANGELA & BRIAN 💙 (ANGELA & BRIAN)
You have outlined the formula for attaining happiness and that is in being...
September 18th, 2019 15:50 - there was a boy (Dusk arising)
Much sense in this very clear assessment of what television has brought to...
September 18th, 2019 12:02 - Good Time Girl (Neville)
Such a pitiable yet in some ways quite memorable time to be in is the...
September 18th, 2019 02:47 - Settle Down Dark (CindyB)
An amazing read Cindy - - you have such a way of grabbing attention with...
September 17th, 2019 08:00 - Don\'t tell Me Promises. (Kevin browne)
The feeling of loss weaves its spell throughout this poignant write Kevin...
September 17th, 2019 05:04 - Fondly and Truly (Neville)
An appeal to set female hearts asighing - you win again Nev with your...
September 17th, 2019 04:58 - evening descends (Dusk arising)
Ah - - this soothes as it is read - and full of gentle acceptance that...
September 17th, 2019 02:24 - The hope of a sunflower (Alta H Mabin)
Such a splendidly telling haiku again Alta.
September 17th, 2019 02:21 - The Vow (SerenWise)
Some beautiful words weave their gentle magic around this reflection on...
September 17th, 2019 02:20 - Until All The Lights Are Gone (CindyB)
A bouquet of phrasing like I never read before - your talent for capturing...
September 16th, 2019 11:04 - Pure (CindyB)
Cindy - how have I missed your postings until now - after having read and...
September 16th, 2019 10:59 - In Whaley Bridge (Kevin Michael Bloor)
A beautifully compiled and rhymed tribute to a place I have never known...
September 16th, 2019 10:13 - Opinions Welcome? (Meg)
Censorship is more rife than ever as this verse brings out Meg....... good...
September 16th, 2019 07:25 - What women need 101 (Alta H Mabin)
That\'s saying it and rhyming it beautifully Alta - - - hope those needs...
September 16th, 2019 07:24 - Protective Power (Orchidee)
Divine protection is something to liven each human spirit. A lovely...
September 16th, 2019 06:54 - WORDLESS (Michael Edwards)
8905 - - 9665 - - 699473022 - - - a wordless set of arresting numbers...
September 16th, 2019 04:28 - Client (Neville)
Letting that be so is wisest methinks......... clients are clients of all...
September 16th, 2019 04:21 - Misty Waters (Ron parrish aka wordman)
A wonderfully positive feel to this read Ron - - really enjoyed the...
September 16th, 2019 02:44 - Ready-Made Muse (SerenWise)
Wow - - Seren what a perfectly penned romantic ballad that spills from...
September 16th, 2019 02:40 - IT IS NO SECRET - WHAT GOD CAN DO 💙 BRIAN ANGELA🧡 (ANGELA & BRIAN)
What a comforting message in this lovely write - I learnt quite a lot...
September 15th, 2019 13:32 - Inside Her Pants (Neville)
I like a dare specially a double but can only think of these two...
September 15th, 2019 08:57 - Manners Abandoned. (Goldfinch60)
Manners atrocious these days - - unlike the video you chose Andy - - a...
September 15th, 2019 05:17 - My son, Jaden (Alta H Mabin)
No tribute could be more filled with love and your son will surely...
September 14th, 2019 14:40 - Freedom...Just Feel and Share It (Nafis Light)
What a beautiful words is FREEDOM - and you verse it so well here -...
September 14th, 2019 14:38 - A Blue Toothbrush (Neville)
I knew this ruse at one time and fell for it hook line and sinker - - ...
September 14th, 2019 13:47 - La Rêverie (SerenWise)
The depth of loss in this read is astoundingly versed - love the style...
September 14th, 2019 02:24 - AS AUTUMN TURNS (Michael Edwards)
A read to remember and save -- your verse had me spell-bound and that...
September 14th, 2019 01:55 - Another Good Day to Come. (Goldfinch60)
Ah - gratitude opens lots of happiness and your lovely verse is filled...
September 14th, 2019 01:50 - Food for Thought (Neville)
There for the eating was Love - - covered in rice paper no less - your...
September 14th, 2019 01:48 - MyLife (Purdy61)
Such a loneliness seeps through these lines Purdy -and so many describe a...
September 13th, 2019 07:03 - Hurt (Ron parrish aka wordman)
The rough paths of life so tenderly poemed here Ron resound with hurt...
September 13th, 2019 04:59 - swollen breakers (Dusk arising)
Wow - a story in five little stanzas and leaving me wanting more. Great...
September 13th, 2019 04:11 - Jerusalem Joys (Orchidee)
A fine celebratory verse my friend.
September 13th, 2019 03:57 - My Solitary Magpie (Sylviasearcher)
Birds like the magpie though beautiful in feather have a reputation for...
September 13th, 2019 03:55 - PARADISE 🧡 ANGELA 💙 BRIAN 🧡 A 4 6 4 Sonnet (ANGELA & BRIAN)
You make the reasons for a visit to New Zealand very appealing dear duo --...
September 13th, 2019 03:45 - Right here (Alta H Mabin)
Ah - - my favourite way of re-living the good times - bath-time as your...
September 13th, 2019 03:23 - Downtown Girl (Laura🌻)
A haunt of a read and how these lines must resonate with those whose loved...
September 13th, 2019 03:18 - Starship Is Anybody Out There. (Goldfinch60)
Such a sad but true wake-up call your posted today my friend - your...
September 13th, 2019 02:00 - Disinterested (Neville)
Oh - what a poor love-sick swain you poem for us today Nev. The lady...
September 13th, 2019 01:20 - Croquet. (Goldfinch60)
How interesting you make a game I have not even seen - wishing you lots of...
September 12th, 2019 07:44 - A to Z and you and me (Alta H Mabin)
You pen a clear picture of sheer contentment when love grows between two...
September 12th, 2019 04:26 - big old moon (love) (Dusk arising)
True love never fades with time passing by D. - loved the rhyming and ...
September 12th, 2019 04:24 - FOOD FOR THOUGHT ~ A 3 4 7 Acrostic Sonnet (ANGELA & BRIAN)
The thought of mass anarchy sets the challenge ahead - -wastage and...
September 12th, 2019 04:21 - THE BOUQUET (Michael Edwards)
Emotion flows from these solemn lines Michael - - what tale could it tell...
September 12th, 2019 03:18 - Correction (Neville)
Ha - - your talent for making me smile with your play on words is always...
September 12th, 2019 01:59 - It Has Been Eighteen Years (Tribute To September 11th 2001) (Brooklyn6timesplus)
You versed the terrible tragedy so clearly brooklyn and reminded us never...
September 11th, 2019 13:47 - opposites (Dusk arising)
Ha ha ha - - your pen never ceases to amaze with its unique looks at life...
September 11th, 2019 05:39 - Could Be The Best (JWKP98)
This caring poem would surely affect a friend to \"get up and have a good...
September 11th, 2019 04:25
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