Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- Sunflowers (Neville)
You succeeded with getting the picture of countless sunflower faces on...
July 13th, 2019 03:31 - Smaller Mouth. (Goldfinch60)
An old favourite of mine was Helen - what a voice - and so sorry you...
July 13th, 2019 03:23 - FIRST SIGHTING (Michael Edwards)
Point taken Mike on the cyclist and sighting of Spring......... super
July 13th, 2019 03:20 - Sunflowers (Neville)
Wow what a beautiful sight to behold - - the sunflower is high in my list...
July 13th, 2019 03:18 - The Truth Of It (SerenWise)
Soul-mate love so perfectly described - - -a wonderful read Seren
July 13th, 2019 02:08 - THINK (Michael Edwards)
With you all the way re. some of the two-wheel road users - - around here...
July 12th, 2019 08:04 - Long Meg (SerenWise)
A mystic energy lives within ancient standing stones and your pen verses...
July 12th, 2019 05:24 - Darkness Dismissed (Orchidee)
A fine write Orchi and thank you .
July 12th, 2019 04:30 - Guilt Ridden. (Goldfinch60)
My heart goes out to you dear friend at this terrible time of having to...
July 12th, 2019 04:29 - Laudable Light (Orchidee)
A very fine write Orchi.
July 10th, 2019 04:16 - POP IN FOR A PIZZA ! ~ BRIAN ~ A 2 4 5 3 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
And a yummy pizza poem it is -Brian - making me hungry at this early...
July 10th, 2019 04:15 - Two Drivers. (Goldfinch60)
Ha ha - that happened to me once Andy - a bit disconcerting to say the...
July 10th, 2019 03:04 - Exposed (Suresh)
I so agree with this definition of poetry my friend. Well composed.
July 10th, 2019 02:56 - BELLS RING OUT (Michael Edwards)
Some music raises the hairs on my neck too - a thrilling sense of wonder...
July 10th, 2019 02:54 - Clarity Resumed. (Goldfinch60)
Your spirit will float in that help from the flow of that river dear Andy.
July 9th, 2019 14:59 - Among The Stars (Christina8)
Such a romantic poem needs more readers dear Christina - a beautiful feel...
July 9th, 2019 14:58 - DYING EMBERS (Michael Edwards)
Your gift for wording to send slivers of sight into my imagination is...
July 9th, 2019 13:42 - Invoke II (Suresh)
Invoking help on the two you mentioned will bring us wisdom and hope for a...
July 9th, 2019 09:48 - THE CARBON CYCLE ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ AN ACROSTIC SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Absolutely agree that the more understood of environment the more we will...
July 9th, 2019 09:06 - The Curious Nature of Adoration (SerenWise)
How true that no words can describe love my friend - a beautiful first...
July 5th, 2019 00:48 - The First Move. (Goldfinch60)
Yes all the lonely people and never moving around to meet others but...
July 3rd, 2019 15:29 - Looking Just to See (Neville)
This verse leads us into a memory with the expertise of a true wordsmith...
July 3rd, 2019 01:15 - I dedicate these thoughts (Poetic Dan)
A wonderful read - your words echo to the feeling of growth Dan - - keep...
July 2nd, 2019 13:50 - Silently screaming (Aa Harvey)
Oh the pathos emerging from these few lines - wishing a true love comes...
July 2nd, 2019 09:38 - A FINE PEAR ! ANGELA ~ FIVE BALANCED QUATRAINS ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Ha ha - this tribute to one of my favourite fruits had me in stitches - -...
July 2nd, 2019 05:34 - No harm (Poetic Dan)
Good to know you talk to wasps and bees Dan like me.............. great...
July 2nd, 2019 04:33 - Tomorrow Lost (Neville)
very poetic way to describe moving on my friend - - tomorrows are not for...
July 2nd, 2019 03:30 - A Temple is desecrated (Suresh)
All points you outline here are valid and truly need to be highlighted -...
July 2nd, 2019 03:19 - FROM the New World! (Goldfinch60)
A needed reminder for this most wonderful composition dear Andy - well...
July 2nd, 2019 03:16 - From \'A COLLECTION\' (15 and 16) (Michael Edwards)
Oh yes bad backs mean shops are too heavy to lift any more Michael and...
July 2nd, 2019 01:53 - Pershore bridge (Dusk arising)
A great read not only for children my friend as adults too need informing...
July 2nd, 2019 01:48 - Happy Ever Ending (SerenWise)
Love that title and oh those sweet words. Thanks for sharing your lovely...
July 1st, 2019 05:54 - HOT AIR BALLOONS ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A 338 Acrostic Sonnet (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Your lively and exciting words on hot-air balloons has me interested dear...
July 1st, 2019 05:01 - Childlike Communings (Orchidee)
simplicity is always the answer Orchi - an interesting and upbuilding...
July 1st, 2019 04:50 - WORKS OF ART (Michael Edwards)
Art in a nutshell my friend - and oh what beautiful art is your picture...
July 1st, 2019 04:23 - Chaos Theory (Neville)
A powerful way to describe time\'s indifferent effects as it ticks away -...
July 1st, 2019 04:21 - Escaping From Reality. (Goldfinch60)
Vital points raised here Andy - the game of life is always there for us...
June 30th, 2019 04:22 - Big Pharm (Christina8)
Welcome back dear Christina - you have been missed and so good to read...
June 30th, 2019 04:16 - Captivating Games (Neville)
Ask for shackles and you will be caught in the love-game with verses like...
June 30th, 2019 03:38 - Sotto Voce (SerenWise)
A very expressive and tender love poem . One for my faves. Seren.
June 30th, 2019 01:56 - I Found Myself Thinking of You (Neville)
We who care deeply do really die in fragments when those we love have to...
June 29th, 2019 03:44 - Hill (Suresh)
You capture the feel of escaping to woodland where wild is the attraction...
June 28th, 2019 04:19 - Tomorrow, today and always (Poetic Dan)
Ah - what with your excellent turns of phrase and the exciting video I...
June 28th, 2019 03:10 - Poppy Seeds (Neville)
A dream of a meeting with love lost and remembered - - - such a thing can...
June 28th, 2019 02:35 - That Day When..... (Goldfinch60)
The deep love you have and have had with your sweetheart still shines...
June 28th, 2019 02:09 - When My Life Begins (SerenWise)
Yes life can be begin when love arrives home again - - a lovely first...
June 28th, 2019 02:05 - Time Beaten Path (Suresh)
Such a vivid description I felt I was there inhaling the smells of...
June 27th, 2019 11:36 - Faith Produces Dependence On God - James Series (7) (Orchidee)
Yes faith is all we ever need Orchi - thank you for the reminder.
June 27th, 2019 04:07 - Red Lorry, Yellow Lorry? (Goldfinch60)
It twisted my tongue to try saying it Andy - thanks for the smile and the...
June 27th, 2019 03:13 - MY SECRET GARDEN ~ BRIAN ~ A 66666 TRIGINTA XXX ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
What better than a secret garden to a young boy and your words describe...
June 27th, 2019 03:12 - A Sound for Sore Eyes (Neville)
This read leaves me breathless with admiration for linguistic word-craft ...
June 27th, 2019 03:07 - GUILTY ~ OF NOT BEING GREEN ENOUGH ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A 4442 SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A much needed review of what humanity must do to help save our earth. A...
June 26th, 2019 05:15 - Two Brothers. (Goldfinch60)
The ways brothers can take are varied but as long as love remains they are...
June 26th, 2019 03:53 - Yoda ish (Poetic Dan)
A good mantra for us all here Dan.
June 26th, 2019 03:50 - Dance (Neville)
So clear your amorous tale I feel I am on that mill-pool bank and dancing...
June 26th, 2019 03:45 - Zen Hunting (Neville)
Growing accustomed to pleasure of bliss sounds like the monk though...
June 25th, 2019 17:22 - Colors and feelings (for the painter and poet Michael Edwards) (Marijoy)
A fit and worthy tribute to our painter-poet friend Michael whose work...
June 25th, 2019 16:31 - Hello (Moordykspot2)
The beauty of nature in early morn\'s stillness is indeed wonderment and...
June 25th, 2019 15:58 - Serenity (Suresh)
Ah you list the reasons so well for giving serenity - -- well done Suresh
June 25th, 2019 13:18 - ORANGE & LEMONS ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A DOUBLE SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Yummy these fruits which are full of good health - thank you dear duo for...
June 25th, 2019 11:21 - Best Before See Date (Neville)
The pathos in these tender lines Nev. tells of past yesteryear-embraces...
June 25th, 2019 07:06 - Linconnue de le Siene (SerenWise)
A most interesting penned picture of an lovely unknown who supports those...
June 24th, 2019 16:19 - Let the spirit of your will drive your hope (Poetic Dan)
A wonderfully positive last line which leaves all the forewords wrapped...
June 24th, 2019 11:04 - make believe its your first time (Dusk arising)
Later first-timers have every right to feel as they did long...
June 24th, 2019 11:00 - Will I ever? (Sylviasearcher)
This has to be one of your best Sylvia - a poetic gem indeed and one for...
June 24th, 2019 06:31 - THE MINIMALIST MANTRA (Michael Edwards)
A mantra we all should take note of my friend - I like the neatness of...
June 24th, 2019 04:35 - Faith Produces Humility - James Series (6) (Orchidee)
Humility is certainly needed for faith to develop - good points raised...
June 24th, 2019 04:32 - EUROPE ~ MOST DIVERSE CONTINENT ! ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A VIGINTI QUINQUE (5 6 11 3 !) (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Such an informative write and a big thank you for the tempting array of...
June 24th, 2019 04:15 - There Are No Graves (Neville)
The suddeness of your final line jerks this reader\'s heart to the core -...
June 24th, 2019 04:11 - Dylan (Kevin Michael Bloor)
A story of love despite situations so complex that only love could find a...
June 23rd, 2019 12:05 - Sing (CindyB)
Loud applause for this tribute to victorious love - must read this one...
June 23rd, 2019 12:01 - Ache (Neville)
A unique way of looking at aches love can create then leave behind
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June 23rd, 2019 11:58 - My Spirit. (Goldfinch60)
Really good points made in your posting today dear Andy - We are all...
June 23rd, 2019 11:55 - TIME ALONE (Michael Edwards)
Thoughts and what rules them time alone can reveal - redemption...
June 23rd, 2019 11:44 - The Window of My Life (Edward Charles McDevitt)
The words are so appealing in this expression of coping with stress - ...
June 23rd, 2019 11:39 - When You Were Perfect (Neville)
A moving and honest appeal to a long-gone lover with reasons for looking...
June 23rd, 2019 11:34 - Millennial (SerenWise)
How powerful these words of reflection - -- a compelling feel of...
June 23rd, 2019 11:29 - SHOPLIFTING ! BRIAN & ANGELA ~ A BIDECET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A most needed reminder that all stealing is simply dishonest and taking...
June 22nd, 2019 13:20 - TRIBUTE TO SOUND (Thomas J. Dooley)
You verse the tribute to sound so well Thomas with your engaging outline ...
June 21st, 2019 08:06 - Bravely (CindyB)
Another gem of poetic expertise - a superb write Cindy.
June 21st, 2019 03:51 - Faith Produces Wisdom - James Series (5) (Orchidee)
Faith can certainly turn into wise ways of dealing with life\'s challenges...
June 21st, 2019 03:49 - If you come across (Poetic Dan)
A wonderfully refreshing read Dan - keep doing what you are doing and you...
June 21st, 2019 03:46 - Modesty? Moi? (Goldfinch60)
Am still chuckling at this read Andy - - Inner satisfaction coming to the...
June 21st, 2019 02:02 - THE LANGUAGE OF POETRY (2) (Michael Edwards)
Ha - - am still giggling at Neville\'s comment - - sad that dictionaries...
June 21st, 2019 01:59 - Old Sea Walls (Neville)
Days of yore peeping again from time\'s saline jaw - and you saw it...
June 21st, 2019 01:02 - Life Before Bar-codes (Neville)
Yes - before time sped into the confusion of what to press where and when...
June 20th, 2019 16:12 - Erigeron (Neville)
An endearing tribute to a gem from the daisy family that graces every...
June 20th, 2019 16:06 - Before I Go Blind (Neville)
Your write for once mystifies me - - I can see the sad state before...
June 14th, 2019 04:52 - That Wonderful Place. (Goldfinch60)
What a gift is music dear Andy and you describe its effect so well --...
June 14th, 2019 01:55 - Once an Item (Neville)
Ha - - that\'s memory getting fainter the longer it\'s not useful methinks...
June 13th, 2019 08:33 - The Earthworm and Caterpillar (Jenny Wren)
Hi Jenny - - I like this clever piece of adventurous fable - -- - sad...
June 13th, 2019 07:54 - Once an Item (Neville)
Some unique phrasing and more than good rhyming in this strong reminder ...
June 13th, 2019 07:48 - Saved (CindyB)
A poet\'s poem that touches the imaginative by use of metaphor and makes...
June 13th, 2019 02:08 - NEW ZEALAND ~ NEW EXPERIENCES ~ ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Such a potently sad song you chose to illustrate the end of your parents\'...
June 12th, 2019 07:56 - Faith Proves Itself By Works - James Series (3) (Orchidee)
How true that faith must be followed by action - thanks for this tuneful...
June 12th, 2019 03:07 - Shadows (Suresh)
Doing our best is all that\'s expected by reasonable beings who live in...
June 12th, 2019 03:06 - I am.... (Poetic Dan)
A fine place to be is to have found our uniqueness - - a big step forward...
June 12th, 2019 02:40 - Who Am I - FIBS. (Goldfinch60)
A powerful write and one to ponder again dear Andy -- this is a ...
June 12th, 2019 02:35 - beautiful pastime (Dusk arising)
Finding pleasure in physical union could not be penned better my friend. ...
June 12th, 2019 02:31 - On Being Human (Neville)
Starkly true these informed words my friend - yet I see its message in its...
June 12th, 2019 02:05
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