Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- FROM MY LATEST SET OF COUPLETS (1) (Michael Edwards)
You have been missed dear friend - hope by now you have new pen and ink...
March 3rd, 2020 05:52 - THE FLOWERS OF SPRING UK 🧡 ANGELA 🤍 BRIAN 💙 FIVE HAIKU (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A compelling tribute to Spring and its chorus of floral beauties. -...
March 3rd, 2020 05:48 - Some Words Are Too Heavy (Neville)
Yes getting a love song just right is the problem - but poets seem to have...
March 2nd, 2020 10:51 - calling (Dusk arising)
A brilliant summary of how we should listen to life\'s calling and be...
March 2nd, 2020 07:03 - i am,all that i am (Ron parrish aka wordman)
This has to be one of your best Ron - - says it all without wincing - -
March 2nd, 2020 05:12 - Nature\'s Orchestra. (Goldfinch60)
A wonderful tribute to nature\'s music my friend - and I second your...
February 29th, 2020 03:05 - Together (Neville)
Such a sad challenge this write Nev. An important and emotional place...
February 28th, 2020 09:50 - that smile (Dusk arising)
Brilliant summary of loving Grandparents - most remembered are times we...
February 28th, 2020 05:33 - The Croquet Myth. (Goldfinch60)
Shivering as I take in your descriptive lines of how to get ready for...
February 28th, 2020 04:14 - Spring Knows. (Fay Slimm.)
Though written a while ago the latest weather has made me re-post the...
February 28th, 2020 04:02 - Hurt (2) (Sylviasearcher)
A solemn look at difference. Three lines that say it all.
February 26th, 2020 11:01 - Disequilibrium (Neville)
Top drawer descriptions of the disequilibrium this world has achieved Nev....
February 26th, 2020 10:53 - The better Gems (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
A beautiful string of reasons for shining like gems while we have life and...
February 26th, 2020 09:06 - Life Song. (Fay Slimm.)
Hoping this write introduces a bit of light at the end of our troubled...
February 25th, 2020 06:53 - The Greenman (Saxon Crow)
I love the flow of this tribute to old ways - - your pen evokes nature\'s...
February 24th, 2020 11:25 - She Rises. (Fay Slimm.)
I wrote these few lines after sight of a sun-rise last summer - - - hope...
February 21st, 2020 03:19 - Loneliness (Myself and me)
this tells all in such a short space. Brill.
February 21st, 2020 03:10 - Drug of Choice. (Goldfinch60)
A fine past-time I should imagine is the game of croquet - -- so play...
February 20th, 2020 08:28 - Humble-Hearted (Orchidee)
Fine write Orchi.
February 20th, 2020 08:26 - WEDDING DAY BLUES ! 💙 ANGELA 🧡 BRIAN 💙 A RHYMING SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
You have given thought to all the important arrangements and wedding-wise...
February 20th, 2020 08:25 - TULIPS FOR MICHAEL 💛 ANGELA 💛 AN ACROSTIC SEXTET (IAMBIC PENTAMETER) (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Tulips en masse must be a read delight to see and am so pleased you have...
February 19th, 2020 07:36 - Encouraging Expressions (In praise of MPS) (Orchidee)
I agree totally that this poetic site brings delightful gifts to all its...
February 18th, 2020 13:54 - LIKE A ROSE 💛 OF 🧡 PEACE ~ BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A terrible shock to lose someone so young - I remember my cousin who at...
February 18th, 2020 13:50 - Bring the play, rhyme once a day (Poetic Dan)
Good reasons here for trying to write a rhyme every day -- and though
I...
February 18th, 2020 11:56 - the receptionist mumbles (Dusk arising)
Still blushing at my naughty mind and when I read the last line had to...
February 18th, 2020 11:51 - HAIKU SPRING (1) (Michael Edwards)
A change we are all awaiting springs from your fine haiku today Micheal - ...
February 18th, 2020 03:20 - HOME 🧡 SWEET 🤍 HOME 💙 A 4 4 4 2 BLANK VERSE SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A piece of really good news for you both and do hope your new life will be...
February 17th, 2020 17:34 - Over ? (Fay Slimm.)
Grateful thanks to Poetic Dan and to meandmyself for adding the poem to...
February 17th, 2020 17:24 - Locked Out (Neville)
And what of the meaning behind this intriguing imagery my eloquent friend...
February 15th, 2020 17:09 - Amazed by Music Again. (Goldfinch60)
I had never heart Cleo sing this number either and wow she brings it over...
February 15th, 2020 03:17 - Discarded (Neville)
This era has become addicted to temporary thinking and you verse that...
February 14th, 2020 09:46 - I\'M TOAST (Joe Marcello)
Ah - a poet\'s poem that tickles my mind with its clever imagery - thanks...
February 14th, 2020 05:21 - Único (SerenWise)
A perfect and very poetic Valentine which no normal male would be able to...
February 14th, 2020 05:18 - TRUE LOVE ~ BRIAN 🧡 ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Hello dear duo - Bravo for re-stating in modern words my all favourite...
February 13th, 2020 17:34 - Brighter than the stars at night (Aa Harvey)
So much truth in these few lines - thanks for the solemn reminders my...
February 13th, 2020 17:08 - Waiting (Neville)
A lyrically emotive piece of writing here Nev. The lilt of long-gone...
February 13th, 2020 16:54 - LOVE & MARRIAGE 💛 ANGELA 💛 BRIAN 💛 FIVE 57577 SENRYU ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Smiling from ear to ear at this list of differences on marriage but you...
February 12th, 2020 14:37 - I met him on here & now I give more than a tear. R.i.p (poet passed) (Poetic Dan)
So sad to read of Kevin\'s passing - he will be truly missed - your words...
February 12th, 2020 12:22 - Until Spring (Neville)
The fall of leaves could never be given more appeal with better imagery...
February 12th, 2020 10:21 - The only love she held onto (Dusk arising)
Sper write D.A. - the surprise ending was a lovely reminder of how...
February 12th, 2020 05:41 - This Is Our Life Now (Clara)
Ah - loud applause Clara for bringing the third party in any relationship...
February 11th, 2020 16:52 - Today. (Goldfinch60)
Oh - that number is so alluring and your verse so comforting - thank you...
February 11th, 2020 13:49 - TEN MANTRAS FOR SENIORS 💛 ANGELA 💛 BRIAN 💛 (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Great advice in all these suggestions for those who grow old un-gracefully...
February 11th, 2020 06:50 - Remarkably Unfinished (Neville)
Wow - what normal female would want release after that intimate but...
February 11th, 2020 06:30 - Departed Manners. (Goldfinch60)
Sincere thanks Andy for bringing this need to our attention - - those...
February 11th, 2020 02:56 - Sanctuary (Daydream Believer)
Ah a beautiful word to use in your title and as your subject is Sanctuary...
February 10th, 2020 17:28 - Different (Sylviasearcher)
First class rhyming in this deeply dark write Sylvia - -- the flow is...
February 10th, 2020 17:24 - Child of the Tempest (SerenWise)
A first rate piece of work Seren - feeling the storm through your graphic...
February 10th, 2020 17:17 - At Rest (Nemo)
Letting go calmly to our last breath dear Nemo will open doorways to more...
February 10th, 2020 17:06 - Hazy Went the Dark (John Snowdon)
Such a compelling haunt of a read with `imagery to sigh for as the glimpse...
February 10th, 2020 14:49 - Hold on if you can (Poetic Dan)
A fantastic write Dan - -a very appealing read and I love all the clever...
February 10th, 2020 09:18 - noitcelfeR (Neville)
Clever my friend this turnabout word which had me working out what it...
February 10th, 2020 08:22 - Mechanic (Aa Harvey)
A good example of staying as young as we feel A.A. - I like the words...
February 9th, 2020 07:13 - Heidi and Snoop (Alan .S. Jeeves)
A light and engaging tribute to a real canine who is obviously happy to be...
February 9th, 2020 07:10 - Calliope Acrostic (Goldfinch60)
A lovely read Andy - \"new wonder\" will surely appear to a clear mind...
February 9th, 2020 07:06 - Saved And Secure (Orchidee)
Sharing wonders is the best way forward - thanks for this reminder dear...
February 9th, 2020 07:04 - HAPPINESS ~ THE BORIS LEGACY ? 💛 ANGELA 💛 BRIAN 💛 (ANGELA & BRIAN)
You raised a chuckle with that cartoon and Ken Dodd did a good job with...
February 9th, 2020 07:02 - Together (Daydream Believer)
A tender love message and written with skill - - he will surely read and...
February 9th, 2020 06:59 - Hark thee Lover (Neville)
These words of love\'s changing face are charged with such imagery that...
February 9th, 2020 02:22 - after the lovestruck\'s audition (Dusk arising)
Sad but beautifully phrased this lament for love lost - - \"I sang from my...
February 6th, 2020 02:00 - As All Things Must (Nicholas Browning)
Both wording and message gives linguistic pleasure to this reader Nick - ...
February 5th, 2020 03:02 - Midnight (SerenWise)
You capture with well written rhyme the sense of a scary night scene so...
February 5th, 2020 02:44 - windy (Dusk arising)
Happy memories you versed here my friend when younger long legs conquered...
February 2nd, 2020 15:17 - STAGES OF LIFE (Michael Edwards)
So apt to describe the fact that minds change as years fly by my friend....
January 29th, 2020 17:51 - FIVE SENSES ~ 4 SENRYU & A TANKA ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Now who among your daily readers could ever resist how your relate to the...
January 29th, 2020 17:45 - What Shall I do? (Goldfinch60)
You made the wise choice by playing your croquet and watching other games...
January 29th, 2020 17:37 - My Everything (Markziff)
A scent of love\'s death with romance sadly lost in these words of past...
January 29th, 2020 17:35 - Word Of Life And Light (Orchidee)
We all need light in this troublesome world Orchi - thank you for the...
January 29th, 2020 17:28 - Stay Weird. (Goldfinch60)
Great number set me tapping my feet Andy as I read your urging for folk to...
January 27th, 2020 11:13 - Ocean breeze- Paint Chip Poem (Jackeggz)
A dream of a free-style poem Jack - your linguistic talent brings the...
January 27th, 2020 11:10 - Bumps in the road (Jackeggz)
Mature use of rhyme and I like the fun-side of this bit of advice on...
January 27th, 2020 06:41 - There come a day (Jackeggz)
Such a positive vibe comes from this posting - I am glad that I caught...
January 27th, 2020 06:36 - A Far Away Voice (Alan .S. Jeeves)
A ballad of sheer empathy to a friend and so well put together - another...
January 27th, 2020 03:52 - Death is inevitable. (Aa Harvey)
How true these word A.A. - we must treat the bit in between as a gift...
January 26th, 2020 11:18 - ODE TO BREXIT 🧡 ANGELA & BRIAN 💙 TRIBUTE TAE RABBIE BURNS (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Am still smiling at this out-crop of happenings when Brexit begins..........
January 24th, 2020 13:24 - WHERE NO ROSES GROW (Michael Edwards)
Such a super -dark write Michael.
January 24th, 2020 10:34 - Final Parting. (Goldfinch60)
Reading your sad but comforting poem brought me near tears dear Andy - ...
January 24th, 2020 03:25 - Ooh Ironing! (Goldfinch60)
A chore too many for me too dear Andy - though some things need a good...
January 23rd, 2020 04:47 - BENGAL TIGER 🧡 ANGELA & BRIAN 💙 A DIAMOND (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I agree wholeheartedly with the points made here on the caging of animals...
January 23rd, 2020 04:45 - HE (Michael Edwards)
Wow - I did much the same as Andy as your amazingly colourful art-work ...
January 23rd, 2020 03:34 - Peace Not Panic (Orchidee)
Fine hymn-poem Orchi..........
January 22nd, 2020 11:54 - Forest of Dean. (Goldfinch60)
This takes me back decades dear Andy when the forest of Dean was a...
January 22nd, 2020 11:53 - A memory (Nemo)
You verse the sad feeling so well with these few words Nemo - - so hard to...
January 22nd, 2020 11:51 - BOUQUET OF LANGUAGE 🧡 ANGELA & BRIAN 💙 AN APPRECIATION (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Your summary of linguistic effect gives me a big smile dear duo especially...
January 20th, 2020 16:20 - circle of trees (Dusk arising)
Great use of the words which although almost the same spelling mean so...
January 20th, 2020 06:28 - Map of Life. (Goldfinch60)
Yes our dreams have to circulate around those maps - thanks for the apt...
January 20th, 2020 06:27 - Growing In Grace (Orchidee)
Lovely words Orchi
January 20th, 2020 06:25 - I wonder (Nemo)
How sadly this lament verses with tenderest words what was and what could...
January 20th, 2020 05:09 - Fear of unknown (Nemo)
How true that we often fear the unknown and put up a barrier to our...
January 19th, 2020 13:55 - Bright side (Poetic Dan)
A wonderful few minutes with your gorgeous family Dan - what a lovely...
January 19th, 2020 13:51 - Sunny, Frosty Morning. (Goldfinch60)
Your talent for writing on nature\'s blessings to those who stop to look...
January 19th, 2020 13:48 - Soft Be The Echo (Nicholas Browning)
A delightfully arranged dish of imagery that your eloquent poetry offers...
January 19th, 2020 09:19 - Memories of Amsterdam (Barry Hodges)
Oh Barry - an unthinkable horror to lose a loved brother to these...
January 16th, 2020 13:12 - Thinking of (Mildred Achoch)
A super piece of story from words mixed for different meaning Mildred - I...
January 16th, 2020 13:08 - Time reveals all (Poetic Dan)
Yes indeed with exposure even under the pier we see the hidden again........
January 16th, 2020 13:04 - BUYING OUR FIRST HOUSE 🧡 ANGELA & BRIAN 💙 OUR DREAM HOME ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
You will certainly find your dream-house dear duo and when the time comes...
January 16th, 2020 09:42 - THOUGHTS OF A LOOSE ARTIST (5) (Michael Edwards)
Spot on this wise three liner -- love the calming watercolour too
January 16th, 2020 07:49 - Bon Voyage (Aa Harvey)
A beautiful poem of loving and wise advice . Every line a gem.
January 15th, 2020 04:27 - I Remember (Nicholas Browning)
An admirable rendering of the passing of Autumn and the eloquent...
January 14th, 2020 08:45 - Paths in Life. (Goldfinch60)
Life will always arrange variety if we are willing to take the differing...
January 14th, 2020 06:19
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