Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- DABBLINGS IN DAFTNESS (3) (Michael Edwards)
Ha ha - - loved your finalΓ© jabble on wangles my friend. thanks for the...
March 27th, 2020 02:52 - COUNT YOUR BLESSINGS 𧑠A FREE VERSE ACROSTIC (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Yes we have much for which to be grateful and you outline the blessings so...
March 26th, 2020 17:14 - global warning (Dusk arising)
Such a clever title to this outcry against the \"artificial\" as opposed...
March 26th, 2020 12:22 - Day 3 (Saxon Crow)
Yes every moment calls out for embracing - - these lines remind us of the...
March 26th, 2020 12:17 - My Fathers Son & Other Important Questions (Neville)
A familiar enquiry at a very sad time whether from sons or from daughters...
March 26th, 2020 11:19 - LOVE AN* MARRIAGE π ANGELA π BRIAN π AN ACROSTIC SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
CONGRATULATIONS TO OUR LOVELY DUO - - Was thinking of you all through...
March 25th, 2020 12:35 - Day 2 (Saxon Crow)
Loud applause for the well written sense in your lines my friend. Staying...
March 25th, 2020 04:27 - What a Wonderful World. (Goldfinch60)
Your lovely lines show how we can find blessings in these testing times -...
March 25th, 2020 04:23 - Job Lot of Biroβs (Neville)
Yes hearin\'ya loud and clear mon ami and am keeping to schedule on what...
March 24th, 2020 14:04 - Job Lot of Biroβs (Neville)
Love is so hard to shelve when time was it glittered with golden dreams...
March 24th, 2020 13:23 - PLANTED BY THE RIVER (Amon)
A beautiful feel to this read Amon - thank you for sharing it.
March 24th, 2020 09:33 - Lost. (Fay Slimm.)
Ah - another move forward to your long waited wedding - - may I add my...
March 24th, 2020 07:31 - And the Sun Rises. (Goldfinch60)
Yes a glorious day ahead is always there for us if we but see - thank you...
March 23rd, 2020 03:34 - FLOWERS ~ NATURES PERFECT BLESSING ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A 7 7 BLANK VERSE SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
What a delight to watch is the video you chose to complement your lovely...
March 23rd, 2020 03:27 - Insidious (Neville)
Impressive imagery used in the doleful unfinishment of this reflective...
March 22nd, 2020 06:58 - PAST ~ PRESENT ~ FUTURE π§‘ANGELA π€ BRIAN π FOUR VERSE PANTOUM (ANGELA & BRIAN)
You are sensibly looking ahead and willing to do what you can at your...
March 20th, 2020 17:04 - They Paved Paradise. (Goldfinch60)
First class impression of a credible title and apt for the topic - ...
March 20th, 2020 16:53 - 3 MORE COUPLETS (Michael Edwards)
Ha - - love your funny couplets - - more please dear fashionista.
March 20th, 2020 16:47 - the greyhound (Dusk arising)
Mystical Columbian music so apt to illustrate the wreck of Greyhound and...
March 19th, 2020 13:45 - still waters (Dusk arising)
The verse describes well how much a smile may cover my friend. -- ...
March 16th, 2020 17:41 - Servant Sensibility (Orchidee)
A lovely write Orchi and that old hymn is a favourite too.
March 16th, 2020 17:38 - Thoughts Version 2. (Goldfinch60)
Yes - I have for so long believed that the best is yet to come - - your...
March 16th, 2020 17:36 - LIMERICK No 66 (Michael Edwards)
Love your limericks -- your wit is something I would love to even a tiny...
March 16th, 2020 17:34 - Shine-free (Daydream Believer)
Excellent - - a poet\'s poem indeed - - into my list of favourites ...
March 16th, 2020 17:26 - COVID 19 ~ DONT PANIC 𧑠ANGELA π€ BRIAN π AN aabb PANTOUM π (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Most helpful posting dear duo - thank you for sharing these sensible...
March 16th, 2020 14:20 - still waters (Dusk arising)
Filled with natural pathos this taste of growing older and missing what...
March 16th, 2020 03:21 - Grandma (Mikal)
Grandmas who lived quietly like you describe here deserve tributes like...
March 13th, 2020 16:02 - HALF FULL (Joe Marcello)
How true Joe -- book me in for the country of dreamers.
March 13th, 2020 04:04 - Death\'s beauty (Rein Armstrong)
Bravo Elliot - - this subject always brings different interpretations but...
March 13th, 2020 01:52 - PLENTY FOR ALL (Michael Edwards)
Forgot to say I laughed myself off the chair after reading your rhyme - -...
March 12th, 2020 17:19 - PLENTY FOR ALL (Michael Edwards)
Washing the hands is a bit difficult when the fingers have to stay crossed...
March 12th, 2020 17:18 - Synergy (Roxie)
An invite to ponder this plea wrapped in fabulous imagery -- super write...
March 12th, 2020 17:10 - Fatality Trap (Saxon Crow)
Fear spreads like wild-fire and whilly agree with your final words on this...
March 12th, 2020 17:08 - eyebrows (Dusk arising)
Eyebrows today and yesteryear the beauty spot was considered a must-have ...
March 12th, 2020 17:04 - Lonely (Aa Harvey)
This kind of loneliness infects so many - impressively told my friend.
March 12th, 2020 16:56 - Wallpaper Row. (Goldfinch60)
A humour like yours can produce grreat poems and the lady will love it...
March 12th, 2020 09:34 - Protection - Peace Series (4) (Orchidee)
We all need more strength from above - thanks for sharing these words dear...
March 12th, 2020 09:28 - Power (Rein Armstrong)
Hello Elliot - - - a passionate appeal for ears to hear those who have...
March 11th, 2020 17:16 - Pride (Rein Armstrong)
Never read a better description of answering those who do not yet...
March 11th, 2020 17:09 - It\'s When... (Saxon Crow)
A picture of loving care filled with scenes I remember when mine was small...
March 11th, 2020 11:52 - Moonswept (Roxie)
Ah -- Moonswept - - I love it - - An engaging read Roxie with amazing...
March 11th, 2020 11:32 - Just A Sec, etc. (Orchidee)
Spent it like Dove - composing a few lines - thank you for sharing that...
March 11th, 2020 11:28 - π WHAT*S IN A NAME ? 𧑠ANGELA π€ BRIAN π FIVE QUATRAINS π (ANGELA & BRIAN)
What an super piece about names - - shall have a longer listen later but...
March 11th, 2020 11:24 - Needles eye (Poetic Dan)
Ha ha - - what a great video - -I chuckled at that happy pair - - those...
March 11th, 2020 11:19 - Spring Arises. (Goldfinch60)
At last we can see Spring activity and you verse it so well- - love the...
March 11th, 2020 11:13 - WINTER NIGHTS (2) (Michael Edwards)
So clear I was there alongside whoever was sleeping in that ancient...
March 11th, 2020 11:07 - SPORT IS GOOD FOR BODY & SOUL ! 𧑠ANGELA π€ BRIAN π TOP TEN ATTRACTIVE UK SPORTS (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Those Olympic games and the hard work that goes to make them so popular...
March 10th, 2020 16:53 - My first dog blog (Poetic Dan)
I wholly agree that we can learn much from our four-footed friends Dan - -...
March 10th, 2020 13:30 - Happy Holi (Suresh)
What a delightful comparison - thanking you kindly for bestowing us these...
March 10th, 2020 13:23 - LOVE IS LIKE A BUTTERFLY 𧑠ANGELA π€ BRIAN π AN ACROSTIC 9 5 SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Ah - my favourite too is the peacock but the whole family of UK...
March 9th, 2020 12:15 - LONG LEGGED CELERY (Michael Edwards)
Ha ha - -- somewun betta go back-ta skoooool - -- love your penchant...
March 9th, 2020 11:23 - The Lament of Jenny Mack and Finn Murphy (Saxon Crow)
Ooooh - D.A. what a sad ending to this story of fairies and their special...
March 9th, 2020 08:55 - Passover Pieces (Orchidee)
Lovely write Orchi.
March 9th, 2020 08:46 - No More Running, No More Shame (JWKP98)
Everyone has a past that maybe they want to keep hidden and thanks for...
March 8th, 2020 09:46 - Hesitation (Neville)
An impressive telling of what happens to he or ( she) who hesitates when...
March 8th, 2020 09:38 - Persistent Progression (Orchidee)
Good read Orchi.
March 8th, 2020 06:57 - Annie\'s Poem. (Goldfinch60)
When there is a friend to write and offer such caring help in moving...
March 8th, 2020 06:25 - Listen (Angmaria)
Your caring words remind me of the well known Beatle song - \" All The...
March 8th, 2020 06:20 - I rest my soul (Alta H Mabin)
A super and very romantic read - thank you for sharing it Alma.
March 8th, 2020 03:11 - Forsaken (Neville)
Those who feel forsaken would be prey to sad memories and to despair - - ...
March 7th, 2020 11:58 - Broken (Neville)
You did again Nev. - - A sad medley of inventive imagery which captivates...
March 6th, 2020 08:02 - A HOUSE AND A HOME 𧑠ANGELA π€ BRIAN π AN ACROSTIC SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Ggod news re. your newly found house dear duo - - no doubt you will have...
March 6th, 2020 04:29 - POUNDLAND π (An Exract) π SIMON ARMITAGE π POET LAUREATE π (ANGELA & BRIAN)
All praise to the way this streetwise poet describes potent journeys with...
March 5th, 2020 18:01 - No Eulogy (FredPeyer)
Powerful message here Fred and one which makes lots of sense - - when no...
March 5th, 2020 17:28 - Listen carefully (Aa Harvey)
Beautiful words of advice on real living and from which to learn - a...
March 5th, 2020 17:21 - all in a dream (Dusk arising)
An impressive poem D.A. The flow and feel of this ballad to dreams has...
March 5th, 2020 11:42 - I SAW A WORM (Michael Edwards)
Dear Michael. - you are person after my own heart - a saver of worms is...
March 5th, 2020 08:51 - Beautiful Stranger (Gino)
A wise way to take is to \"realize the emptiness of time\" - My mind was...
March 5th, 2020 07:31 - The Wind and Me (Saxon Crow)
Loud applause for your brilliant portrayal of what happens when we yield...
March 5th, 2020 07:24 - Tom Bowling. (Goldfinch60)
An impressive tribute to words I have never before read - thank you Andy...
March 5th, 2020 05:29 - tower (Dusk arising)
The tale held me spellbound with its first rate imagery - - - another gem...
March 5th, 2020 02:27 - TODAY (FredPeyer)
A fantastic orchestration of words here Fred - - loved the arrangementt...
March 4th, 2020 14:34 - Sweet Female (Clara)
Your words in this verse have flowed so well with a subject we often feel...
March 4th, 2020 11:57 - It Could Have Been Me (Saxon Crow)
An emotive tribute to a friend whom now gone you surely understood better...
March 4th, 2020 11:53 - Sylvia\'s Mother Said (Neville)
A talented life ending the way that it did for Sylvia is such a sad and...
March 4th, 2020 11:45 - Generation World Saviours (Clara)
How vivid the picture your words paint in this re-cap of yesteryear when...
March 4th, 2020 03:06 - quench (Dusk arising)
A scene I could read all day is your tale of wild love in a woodgreen...
March 3rd, 2020 09:27 - Global Warning (Neville)
An impressive title which drew me into its powerful body - versed with...
March 3rd, 2020 09:24 - Here and Now (Starbuck Kentipoos Cruz)
I truly agree that things often happen at just the right time - I...
March 3rd, 2020 05:57 - Self Belief. (Goldfinch60)
I truly agree that opening doors need to be walked through and am sure...
March 3rd, 2020 05:54 - FROM MY LATEST SET OF COUPLETS (1) (Michael Edwards)
You have been missed dear friend - hope by now you have new pen and ink...
March 3rd, 2020 05:52 - THE FLOWERS OF SPRING UK 𧑠ANGELA π€ BRIAN π FIVE HAIKU (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A compelling tribute to Spring and its chorus of floral beauties. -...
March 3rd, 2020 05:48 - Some Words Are Too Heavy (Neville)
Yes getting a love song just right is the problem - but poets seem to have...
March 2nd, 2020 10:51 - calling (Dusk arising)
A brilliant summary of how we should listen to life\'s calling and be...
March 2nd, 2020 07:03 - i am,all that i am (Ron parrish aka wordman)
This has to be one of your best Ron - - says it all without wincing - -
March 2nd, 2020 05:12 - Nature\'s Orchestra. (Goldfinch60)
A wonderful tribute to nature\'s music my friend - and I second your...
February 29th, 2020 03:05 - Together (Neville)
Such a sad challenge this write Nev. An important and emotional place...
February 28th, 2020 09:50 - that smile (Dusk arising)
Brilliant summary of loving Grandparents - most remembered are times we...
February 28th, 2020 05:33 - The Croquet Myth. (Goldfinch60)
Shivering as I take in your descriptive lines of how to get ready for...
February 28th, 2020 04:14 - Spring Knows. (Fay Slimm.)
Though written a while ago the latest weather has made me re-post the...
February 28th, 2020 04:02 - Hurt (2) (Sylviasearcher)
A solemn look at difference. Three lines that say it all.
February 26th, 2020 11:01 - Disequilibrium (Neville)
Top drawer descriptions of the disequilibrium this world has achieved Nev....
February 26th, 2020 10:53 - The better Gems (π€s.zaynab.kamoonpuriπ·π¦π½)
A beautiful string of reasons for shining like gems while we have life and...
February 26th, 2020 09:06 - Life Song. (Fay Slimm.)
Hoping this write introduces a bit of light at the end of our troubled...
February 25th, 2020 06:53 - The Greenman (Saxon Crow)
I love the flow of this tribute to old ways - - your pen evokes nature\'s...
February 24th, 2020 11:25 - She Rises. (Fay Slimm.)
I wrote these few lines after sight of a sun-rise last summer - - - hope...
February 21st, 2020 03:19 - Loneliness (Myself and me)
this tells all in such a short space. Brill.
February 21st, 2020 03:10 - Drug of Choice. (Goldfinch60)
A fine past-time I should imagine is the game of croquet - -- so play...
February 20th, 2020 08:28 - Humble-Hearted (Orchidee)
Fine write Orchi.
February 20th, 2020 08:26 - WEDDING DAY BLUES ! π ANGELA 𧑠BRIAN π A RHYMING SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
You have given thought to all the important arrangements and wedding-wise...
February 20th, 2020 08:25
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