Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- Lonely (Aa Harvey)
This kind of loneliness infects so many - impressively told my friend.
March 12th, 2020 16:56 - Wallpaper Row. (Goldfinch60)
A humour like yours can produce grreat poems and the lady will love it...
March 12th, 2020 09:34 - Protection - Peace Series (4) (Orchidee)
We all need more strength from above - thanks for sharing these words dear...
March 12th, 2020 09:28 - Power (Rein Armstrong)
Hello Elliot - - - a passionate appeal for ears to hear those who have...
March 11th, 2020 17:16 - Pride (Rein Armstrong)
Never read a better description of answering those who do not yet...
March 11th, 2020 17:09 - It\'s When... (Saxon Crow)
A picture of loving care filled with scenes I remember when mine was small...
March 11th, 2020 11:52 - Moonswept (Roxie)
Ah -- Moonswept - - I love it - - An engaging read Roxie with amazing...
March 11th, 2020 11:32 - Just A Sec, etc. (Orchidee)
Spent it like Dove - composing a few lines - thank you for sharing that...
March 11th, 2020 11:28 - 💛 WHAT*S IN A NAME ? 🧡 ANGELA 🤍 BRIAN 💙 FIVE QUATRAINS 💛 (ANGELA & BRIAN)
What an super piece about names - - shall have a longer listen later but...
March 11th, 2020 11:24 - Needles eye (Poetic Dan)
Ha ha - - what a great video - -I chuckled at that happy pair - - those...
March 11th, 2020 11:19 - Spring Arises. (Goldfinch60)
At last we can see Spring activity and you verse it so well- - love the...
March 11th, 2020 11:13 - WINTER NIGHTS (2) (Michael Edwards)
So clear I was there alongside whoever was sleeping in that ancient...
March 11th, 2020 11:07 - SPORT IS GOOD FOR BODY & SOUL ! 🧡 ANGELA 🤍 BRIAN 💙 TOP TEN ATTRACTIVE UK SPORTS (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Those Olympic games and the hard work that goes to make them so popular...
March 10th, 2020 16:53 - My first dog blog (Poetic Dan)
I wholly agree that we can learn much from our four-footed friends Dan - -...
March 10th, 2020 13:30 - Happy Holi (Suresh)
What a delightful comparison - thanking you kindly for bestowing us these...
March 10th, 2020 13:23 - LOVE IS LIKE A BUTTERFLY 🧡 ANGELA 🤍 BRIAN 💙 AN ACROSTIC 9 5 SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Ah - my favourite too is the peacock but the whole family of UK...
March 9th, 2020 12:15 - LONG LEGGED CELERY (Michael Edwards)
Ha ha - -- somewun betta go back-ta skoooool - -- love your penchant...
March 9th, 2020 11:23 - The Lament of Jenny Mack and Finn Murphy (Saxon Crow)
Ooooh - D.A. what a sad ending to this story of fairies and their special...
March 9th, 2020 08:55 - Passover Pieces (Orchidee)
Lovely write Orchi.
March 9th, 2020 08:46 - No More Running, No More Shame (JWKP98)
Everyone has a past that maybe they want to keep hidden and thanks for...
March 8th, 2020 09:46 - Hesitation (Neville)
An impressive telling of what happens to he or ( she) who hesitates when...
March 8th, 2020 09:38 - Persistent Progression (Orchidee)
Good read Orchi.
March 8th, 2020 06:57 - Annie\'s Poem. (Goldfinch60)
When there is a friend to write and offer such caring help in moving...
March 8th, 2020 06:25 - Listen (Angmaria)
Your caring words remind me of the well known Beatle song - \" All The...
March 8th, 2020 06:20 - I rest my soul (Alta H Mabin)
A super and very romantic read - thank you for sharing it Alma.
March 8th, 2020 03:11 - Forsaken (Neville)
Those who feel forsaken would be prey to sad memories and to despair - - ...
March 7th, 2020 11:58 - Broken (Neville)
You did again Nev. - - A sad medley of inventive imagery which captivates...
March 6th, 2020 08:02 - A HOUSE AND A HOME 🧡 ANGELA 🤍 BRIAN 💙 AN ACROSTIC SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Ggod news re. your newly found house dear duo - - no doubt you will have...
March 6th, 2020 04:29 - POUNDLAND 💛 (An Exract) 💛 SIMON ARMITAGE 💛 POET LAUREATE 💛 (ANGELA & BRIAN)
All praise to the way this streetwise poet describes potent journeys with...
March 5th, 2020 18:01 - No Eulogy (FredPeyer)
Powerful message here Fred and one which makes lots of sense - - when no...
March 5th, 2020 17:28 - Listen carefully (Aa Harvey)
Beautiful words of advice on real living and from which to learn - a...
March 5th, 2020 17:21 - all in a dream (Dusk arising)
An impressive poem D.A. The flow and feel of this ballad to dreams has...
March 5th, 2020 11:42 - I SAW A WORM (Michael Edwards)
Dear Michael. - you are person after my own heart - a saver of worms is...
March 5th, 2020 08:51 - Beautiful Stranger (Gino)
A wise way to take is to \"realize the emptiness of time\" - My mind was...
March 5th, 2020 07:31 - The Wind and Me (Saxon Crow)
Loud applause for your brilliant portrayal of what happens when we yield...
March 5th, 2020 07:24 - Tom Bowling. (Goldfinch60)
An impressive tribute to words I have never before read - thank you Andy...
March 5th, 2020 05:29 - tower (Dusk arising)
The tale held me spellbound with its first rate imagery - - - another gem...
March 5th, 2020 02:27 - TODAY (FredPeyer)
A fantastic orchestration of words here Fred - - loved the arrangementt...
March 4th, 2020 14:34 - Sweet Female (Clara)
Your words in this verse have flowed so well with a subject we often feel...
March 4th, 2020 11:57 - It Could Have Been Me (Saxon Crow)
An emotive tribute to a friend whom now gone you surely understood better...
March 4th, 2020 11:53 - Sylvia\'s Mother Said (Neville)
A talented life ending the way that it did for Sylvia is such a sad and...
March 4th, 2020 11:45 - Generation World Saviours (Clara)
How vivid the picture your words paint in this re-cap of yesteryear when...
March 4th, 2020 03:06 - quench (Dusk arising)
A scene I could read all day is your tale of wild love in a woodgreen...
March 3rd, 2020 09:27 - Global Warning (Neville)
An impressive title which drew me into its powerful body - versed with...
March 3rd, 2020 09:24 - Here and Now (Starbuck Kentipoos Cruz)
I truly agree that things often happen at just the right time - I...
March 3rd, 2020 05:57 - Self Belief. (Goldfinch60)
I truly agree that opening doors need to be walked through and am sure...
March 3rd, 2020 05:54 - FROM MY LATEST SET OF COUPLETS (1) (Michael Edwards)
You have been missed dear friend - hope by now you have new pen and ink...
March 3rd, 2020 05:52 - THE FLOWERS OF SPRING UK 🧡 ANGELA 🤍 BRIAN 💙 FIVE HAIKU (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A compelling tribute to Spring and its chorus of floral beauties. -...
March 3rd, 2020 05:48 - Some Words Are Too Heavy (Neville)
Yes getting a love song just right is the problem - but poets seem to have...
March 2nd, 2020 10:51 - calling (Dusk arising)
A brilliant summary of how we should listen to life\'s calling and be...
March 2nd, 2020 07:03 - i am,all that i am (Ron parrish aka wordman)
This has to be one of your best Ron - - says it all without wincing - -
March 2nd, 2020 05:12 - Nature\'s Orchestra. (Goldfinch60)
A wonderful tribute to nature\'s music my friend - and I second your...
February 29th, 2020 03:05 - Together (Neville)
Such a sad challenge this write Nev. An important and emotional place...
February 28th, 2020 09:50 - that smile (Dusk arising)
Brilliant summary of loving Grandparents - most remembered are times we...
February 28th, 2020 05:33 - The Croquet Myth. (Goldfinch60)
Shivering as I take in your descriptive lines of how to get ready for...
February 28th, 2020 04:14 - Spring Knows. (Fay Slimm.)
Though written a while ago the latest weather has made me re-post the...
February 28th, 2020 04:02 - Hurt (2) (Sylviasearcher)
A solemn look at difference. Three lines that say it all.
February 26th, 2020 11:01 - Disequilibrium (Neville)
Top drawer descriptions of the disequilibrium this world has achieved Nev....
February 26th, 2020 10:53 - The better Gems (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
A beautiful string of reasons for shining like gems while we have life and...
February 26th, 2020 09:06 - Life Song. (Fay Slimm.)
Hoping this write introduces a bit of light at the end of our troubled...
February 25th, 2020 06:53 - The Greenman (Saxon Crow)
I love the flow of this tribute to old ways - - your pen evokes nature\'s...
February 24th, 2020 11:25 - She Rises. (Fay Slimm.)
I wrote these few lines after sight of a sun-rise last summer - - - hope...
February 21st, 2020 03:19 - Loneliness (Myself and me)
this tells all in such a short space. Brill.
February 21st, 2020 03:10 - Drug of Choice. (Goldfinch60)
A fine past-time I should imagine is the game of croquet - -- so play...
February 20th, 2020 08:28 - Humble-Hearted (Orchidee)
Fine write Orchi.
February 20th, 2020 08:26 - WEDDING DAY BLUES ! 💙 ANGELA 🧡 BRIAN 💙 A RHYMING SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
You have given thought to all the important arrangements and wedding-wise...
February 20th, 2020 08:25 - TULIPS FOR MICHAEL 💛 ANGELA 💛 AN ACROSTIC SEXTET (IAMBIC PENTAMETER) (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Tulips en masse must be a read delight to see and am so pleased you have...
February 19th, 2020 07:36 - Encouraging Expressions (In praise of MPS) (Orchidee)
I agree totally that this poetic site brings delightful gifts to all its...
February 18th, 2020 13:54 - LIKE A ROSE 💛 OF 🧡 PEACE ~ BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A terrible shock to lose someone so young - I remember my cousin who at...
February 18th, 2020 13:50 - Bring the play, rhyme once a day (Poetic Dan)
Good reasons here for trying to write a rhyme every day -- and though
I...
February 18th, 2020 11:56 - the receptionist mumbles (Dusk arising)
Still blushing at my naughty mind and when I read the last line had to...
February 18th, 2020 11:51 - HAIKU SPRING (1) (Michael Edwards)
A change we are all awaiting springs from your fine haiku today Micheal - ...
February 18th, 2020 03:20 - HOME 🧡 SWEET 🤍 HOME 💙 A 4 4 4 2 BLANK VERSE SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A piece of really good news for you both and do hope your new life will be...
February 17th, 2020 17:34 - Over ? (Fay Slimm.)
Grateful thanks to Poetic Dan and to meandmyself for adding the poem to...
February 17th, 2020 17:24 - Locked Out (Neville)
And what of the meaning behind this intriguing imagery my eloquent friend...
February 15th, 2020 17:09 - Amazed by Music Again. (Goldfinch60)
I had never heart Cleo sing this number either and wow she brings it over...
February 15th, 2020 03:17 - Discarded (Neville)
This era has become addicted to temporary thinking and you verse that...
February 14th, 2020 09:46 - I\'M TOAST (Joe Marcello)
Ah - a poet\'s poem that tickles my mind with its clever imagery - thanks...
February 14th, 2020 05:21 - Único (SerenWise)
A perfect and very poetic Valentine which no normal male would be able to...
February 14th, 2020 05:18 - TRUE LOVE ~ BRIAN 🧡 ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Hello dear duo - Bravo for re-stating in modern words my all favourite...
February 13th, 2020 17:34 - Brighter than the stars at night (Aa Harvey)
So much truth in these few lines - thanks for the solemn reminders my...
February 13th, 2020 17:08 - Waiting (Neville)
A lyrically emotive piece of writing here Nev. The lilt of long-gone...
February 13th, 2020 16:54 - LOVE & MARRIAGE 💛 ANGELA 💛 BRIAN 💛 FIVE 57577 SENRYU ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Smiling from ear to ear at this list of differences on marriage but you...
February 12th, 2020 14:37 - I met him on here & now I give more than a tear. R.i.p (poet passed) (Poetic Dan)
So sad to read of Kevin\'s passing - he will be truly missed - your words...
February 12th, 2020 12:22 - Until Spring (Neville)
The fall of leaves could never be given more appeal with better imagery...
February 12th, 2020 10:21 - The only love she held onto (Dusk arising)
Sper write D.A. - the surprise ending was a lovely reminder of how...
February 12th, 2020 05:41 - This Is Our Life Now (Clara)
Ah - loud applause Clara for bringing the third party in any relationship...
February 11th, 2020 16:52 - Today. (Goldfinch60)
Oh - that number is so alluring and your verse so comforting - thank you...
February 11th, 2020 13:49 - TEN MANTRAS FOR SENIORS 💛 ANGELA 💛 BRIAN 💛 (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Great advice in all these suggestions for those who grow old un-gracefully...
February 11th, 2020 06:50 - Remarkably Unfinished (Neville)
Wow - what normal female would want release after that intimate but...
February 11th, 2020 06:30 - Departed Manners. (Goldfinch60)
Sincere thanks Andy for bringing this need to our attention - - those...
February 11th, 2020 02:56 - Sanctuary (Daydream Believer)
Ah a beautiful word to use in your title and as your subject is Sanctuary...
February 10th, 2020 17:28 - Different (Sylviasearcher)
First class rhyming in this deeply dark write Sylvia - -- the flow is...
February 10th, 2020 17:24 - Child of the Tempest (SerenWise)
A first rate piece of work Seren - feeling the storm through your graphic...
February 10th, 2020 17:17 - At Rest (Nemo)
Letting go calmly to our last breath dear Nemo will open doorways to more...
February 10th, 2020 17:06 - Hazy Went the Dark (John Snowdon)
Such a compelling haunt of a read with `imagery to sigh for as the glimpse...
February 10th, 2020 14:49 - Hold on if you can (Poetic Dan)
A fantastic write Dan - -a very appealing read and I love all the clever...
February 10th, 2020 09:18 - noitcelfeR (Neville)
Clever my friend this turnabout word which had me working out what it...
February 10th, 2020 08:22 - Mechanic (Aa Harvey)
A good example of staying as young as we feel A.A. - I like the words...
February 9th, 2020 07:13 - Heidi and Snoop (Alan .S. Jeeves)
A light and engaging tribute to a real canine who is obviously happy to be...
February 9th, 2020 07:10
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