Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- The Last Hurt (Neville)
Wow- - this must come from the core of one who has suffered real hurt...
March 2nd, 2019 10:32 - Mix Ups #18 (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Wisdom inspires these clever lines Andrew - - a thoughtful write and...
March 1st, 2019 08:39 - SOME EDITITS (Michael Edwards)
Oh so clever these quips and edit-bits Micheal - - - however I have spent...
March 1st, 2019 03:58 - SONG OF SUMMER : ANGELA & BRIAN : A SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Summertime is so well described in this medley of changes as months roll...
March 1st, 2019 03:54 - E.U. (Neville)
Ha - - \"indulge a bit\" is what I may add......... hope you get the gist.
March 1st, 2019 03:41 - Journey outside in (Sylviasearcher)
Amazing poetry Sylvia
February 28th, 2019 12:24 - DELPHIAN DAYS (Michael Edwards)
A cartoon to save and as for those Delph days they could not have been...
February 28th, 2019 10:58 - SCENTS OF SPRING ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Yes dear B & A - Spring has arrived early this year and in our county of...
February 28th, 2019 08:44 - of life and loss (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Missing life when its imperfect vessel has flown elsewhere makes a...
February 28th, 2019 07:24 - Unfinished (Neville)
To be whole and in the moment comes through clearly in this plea for...
February 28th, 2019 06:06 - You opened my mind (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Andrew this verse stirs all the right buttons on what is takes to be...
February 27th, 2019 15:23 - Incrementally Speaking (Neville)
Yes my friend, life adds more to those moments than time - if we are able...
February 27th, 2019 11:16 - Mary Had a Little Lamb 7. (Goldfinch60)
Yep - that was the song that got us all going back along Goldy - - ...
February 27th, 2019 04:04 - A MIRTH OF INSIGHTFUL MONOSTICHS (Michael Edwards)
Love the way you use words to make readers chuckle - the title gave me a...
February 27th, 2019 03:59 - STRANGER ON THE SHORE ~ BRIAN ~ A 6 6 6 2 Docdecet (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Oh what a tragic happening and the tale you weave round it catches the...
February 27th, 2019 03:54 - My Muse (Tiffany_Arnold)
A heart-touching tribute to a wonderful son - -- thanks so much for...
February 26th, 2019 14:11 - Time Lost in Words. (Goldfinch60)
Getting lost within your words and hearing Dizzy is my idea of delight...
February 26th, 2019 09:03 - Living Out Life - 1 Thessalonians Series (4) (Orchidee)
A really fine write Orchi.
February 26th, 2019 09:01 - Colour my night (Sylviasearcher)
What a fortunate unearthing of long-ago poems and this one Sylvia touches...
February 26th, 2019 08:59 - SOUTH ISLAND ~ NEW ZEALAND ~ BRIAN ~ A Sonnet (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Sounds like a coming fantastic adventure to view South Island in all its...
February 26th, 2019 05:16 - Reconfigure it out (Neville)
Clever piece of double-tongued inscription to digest my friend - - l...
February 26th, 2019 05:12 - Body Poetry (SerenWise)
Love was not described better seren - - look forward to reading more of...
February 25th, 2019 13:53 - An ABstRacT (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Freedom should be found in both music and writing - good points made in...
February 25th, 2019 12:56 - Faith, Hope, Love - 1 Thessalonians Series (3) (Orchidee)
A wonderful trilogy of traits on which to work - -thanks dear Orchi.
February 25th, 2019 12:15 - Bring Along a Lantern (Neville)
A feel of the true medieval in this atmospheric write - - loved those...
February 25th, 2019 10:14 - Snowdrops at Bridgewater (P.H.Rose)
What a beautiful sight of the Spring\'s whitest flower my friend -- I...
February 25th, 2019 09:58 - THE LADY AND HER DOG (Michael Edwards)
Super cartoon here Michael - a smile too at your well rhymed first smile...
February 25th, 2019 03:51 - Our Choir. (Goldfinch60)
I love these harmonious male voice choirs and thanks for this well written...
February 25th, 2019 03:49 - PEACE IN THE VALLEY ~ BRIAN & ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN)
e feel of peace pervades each lovely line - - a beautiful song and...
February 25th, 2019 03:45 - Ink spots and paper snowballs (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Ah - loud applause for each of these lovely reasons for writing - an...
February 22nd, 2019 11:27 - MORE 575 SMILES (3) (Michael Edwards)
Oh MIchael -- that flt-pack haiku had me nodding my head in agreement and...
February 22nd, 2019 11:17 - A Certain Point of Beauty (Neville)
A casket of treasured words here Neville - - beauty of course is in the...
February 22nd, 2019 06:43 - The Outcast (Sylviasearcher)
A powerful message in this tragic account Sylvia - told with fervour it...
February 22nd, 2019 06:05 - Dance the Tango. (Goldfinch60)
Dancing is good for the soul and to watch interchange of partners who...
February 21st, 2019 16:57 - Land of No More Shadow (Kevin Michael Bloor)
A wonderfully appreciative read - thank you for sharing such happiness ...
February 21st, 2019 14:05 - Heathen (Neville)
Inside a museum to the poet is a chance for fancy to impregnate the relics...
February 21st, 2019 12:03 - Risk (Hoopie)
Good reason for study here my poet friend - helping others in dire...
February 21st, 2019 09:57 - Spring (Sylviasearcher)
So romantic these well written words Sylvia. I love the sliding form of...
February 21st, 2019 09:56 - FUSIONS WERE FUN ! AN ACROSTIC SONNET ~ ANGELA & BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Thanks for the invite dear duo
- - Fusions are fun indeed when a writer...
February 20th, 2019 12:28 - MORE 575 SMILES (2) (Michael Edwards)
Love the fun behind your 575 smiles - - another chuckle to last me all...
February 20th, 2019 08:11 - what makes a poet? (Dusk arising)
How perfectly true these winsome and wise words - poets indeed have great...
February 20th, 2019 08:07 - Some Sort Of Dipity (Andrew Charles Forrest)
A deep and meaningful write Andrew - looking forward to that happy time of...
February 20th, 2019 06:42 - What Do You Drive (Neville)
The shame of being taken in by a two-timing dame eh Nev ? - - Loved this...
February 20th, 2019 06:40 - Under the Moon (Joanna Garrido)
So touching Johanna - - we have much to weep over for this earth\'s...
February 19th, 2019 06:22 - Spring Starts. (Goldfinch60)
A wonderful omen is the robin\'s sweet song at this time of year Goldi - -...
February 19th, 2019 06:20 - TRANSFORMED BY SEASONS ~ BRIAN & ANGELA ~ A DODECET FLOW POEM (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Love the flow-poem dear Angela - - a tree is a wonder and you worded this...
February 19th, 2019 06:18 - Denial Discourse - Mark\'s Gospel (19) (Orchidee)
How human was Peter of old as you aptly describe in your interesting poem...
February 19th, 2019 06:14 - Shield Maiden (Neville)
A dark and sad shape indeed is your feral maiden Neville - - loved the...
February 19th, 2019 04:47 - A Little Catholic Girl. (Kevin browne)
A tale with much meaning and told with your usual way of using good...
February 18th, 2019 17:48 - Away With Words (Neville)
ha ha - - well one was to think about NAKED - - but the others are too...
February 18th, 2019 13:41 - HIS INFLUENCES (Michael Edwards)
Spot on description of what happens to innocence when influenced by...
February 18th, 2019 08:54 - Smoke Filled Days. (Goldfinch60)
Thinking on health matters changes but smoking will always now be...
February 18th, 2019 07:56 - Away With Words (Neville)
Hey Neville - what a great idea for reader participation - - - I...
February 18th, 2019 07:45 - Pebble (Sylviasearcher)
An amazing write Sylvia - - that special pebble is available to warm...
February 16th, 2019 17:10 - Serving The Homeless (W c)
Yes service to those less fortunate is a way to show care dear W.C. - - a...
February 16th, 2019 05:03 - Everlasting Snow (Christina8)
Despite the weather it is good to see you back posting again Christina - -...
February 16th, 2019 05:00 - VALENTINE ACROSTIC FOR ANGELA : ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Tender and loving the words you received dear Angela - - true love indeed...
February 15th, 2019 04:17 - When I am Far (Neville)
Steeped in poignancy the feel of these words lingers long after the read ...
February 15th, 2019 04:14 - every now and again (Dusk arising)
Your words D.A. enrich the theme begun by Jon\'s poem of yesterday - - a...
February 15th, 2019 04:10 - The empty cage... (Jon Nakapalau)
So powerful Jon are these few lines. Thanks for posting them.
February 15th, 2019 04:08 - Saint Valentines Day Senryu. (Goldfinch60)
Beautiful senryu Goldi - - you two have real love.
February 14th, 2019 16:46 - SUGGESTIVELY STRUCK (Michael Edwards)
Can just imagine that waxen look of a red-lip-struck youth - -ha ha - -...
February 14th, 2019 04:03 - A VALENTINE CARD ~ BRIAN & ANGELA ~ AN ACROSTIC SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A valentine card is a tender reminder to someone we love - a great...
February 13th, 2019 14:11 - Cusp (Neville)
A classic if ever I read one Neville this piece of lilting description is...
February 13th, 2019 09:30 - YESTERDAY, TODAY, TOMORROW. (Michael Edwards)
Wow - and so true this slant-eyed look at the passing of time -- great...
February 13th, 2019 04:24 - RIOJA WINE ~ SUPERIOR ! BRIAN ~ A PHILOENIC SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Most helpful and shall buy a bottle of fruity-red Rioja after this...
February 12th, 2019 14:04 - A stands for aesthetic (Netashi)
Some adeptly crafted imagery in these engaging lines Theta - - a telling...
February 12th, 2019 13:57 - Self Harm (Neville)
Oh Neville - - that telling last stanza goes right to the core of most...
February 12th, 2019 05:41 - PAINS OF YESTERDAY (Michael Edwards)
Deep and comforting these poetic words of conclusion on sleep\'s benefit...
February 12th, 2019 03:02 - STATUS QUO ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A DODECET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Ah - - loud applause for this lovely style and flowing reminder of status...
February 11th, 2019 06:25 - Save the Elephant 🐘 (Joanna Garrido)
Wholeheartedly agree with this well written plea - - animals like...
February 11th, 2019 06:22 - Mirrors Cracked (Neville)
Oooh break-ups are made of these reflections - well written and to the...
February 11th, 2019 05:28 - MARY HAD...(3) (Michael Edwards)
Ha - thanks for this fun-piece Michael - - Love the beautiful lily in...
February 11th, 2019 03:33 - Our Best (Lorna)
Wise words beautifully expressed Lorna. We can do only our best for our...
February 8th, 2019 06:39 - THE ORCHARD (Michael Edwards)
The feel of quiet and burgeoning fruit stays well after this excellent...
February 7th, 2019 14:04 - The Lady of Shallott Rises. (Goldfinch60)
Oh clever you Goldi - to do a puzzle of that complication would drive me...
February 7th, 2019 14:01 - POEM WITHOUT WORDS ~ BRIAN ~ G U I T A R Acrostet ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Fine acrostic and oh those guitars - a truly favourite instrument with me...
February 7th, 2019 13:58 - Vineyard Valuings - Mark\'s Gospel (15) (Orchidee)
An enjoyable and informative read with lessons to learn Orchi.
February 7th, 2019 13:55 - Spilled milk (Netashi)
An engaging read and warning on what rage can taint and spoil - - ...
February 7th, 2019 13:52 - Evergreen pastures (Caleb.A)
Expression, metre and pace make this tale of pre-birth a special read...
February 7th, 2019 13:41 - Victims of Indifference (Neville)
Labels are often meant to be negative where people who have them attached...
February 7th, 2019 09:47 - C stands for calligraphy (Netashi)
Sincere thanks for this cascade of reasons that a real poet has to...
February 7th, 2019 03:17 - UNLUCKY IN LOVE ? : ANGELA : RHYMING SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Good observations on the state of some relationship;s when love is a word...
February 6th, 2019 16:13 - Your Hand (Rrodriguez)
A powerful scene your words set when time of death draws near to a loved...
February 6th, 2019 14:56 - A Day Changes (W c)
Vividly worded this poetic change from season to season. A first rate...
February 6th, 2019 14:53 - My core (Joseph M Marion)
So very romantic and honestly written this read touches the core of true...
February 6th, 2019 14:51 - Once Upon a Tablecloth (Neville)
A giggle a line for me in this tale of a lily-white thigh signing abroad...
February 6th, 2019 14:47 - At least, that\'s me. (Siranswerer)
Excellent poetic description of the ins and outs when counting the cost of...
February 6th, 2019 12:03 - Sickness (Sylviasearcher)
An outpour of needed words in this revolt against pharma-control - -...
February 6th, 2019 03:25 - The Hunter (CindyB)
A mysterious feel in every line of this intriguing write Cindy - - a haunt...
February 5th, 2019 07:16 - 575s - SERIOUS (1) (Michael Edwards)
The short but punchy lines you use stay with this reader long after the...
February 5th, 2019 07:09 - Transfer (Jabberwocky)
Ha ha - - original thinking on the over-use of cyber-offers. Love the last...
February 5th, 2019 07:08 - Posturing (Jabberwocky)
The sentiments underlying these words touch the heart when last lines...
February 5th, 2019 07:05 - Words (Lorna)
Ah - these lines say it all when words have been held in abeyance for...
February 5th, 2019 07:02 - WHERE ARE THE CLOWNS ? BRIAN ~ A RHYMING 4 4 4 2 SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Loud applause Brian for this well written look-back at my girlhood\'s...
February 5th, 2019 06:26 - Jun Kenshi (Neville)
Jun Kenshi - - What a transcendent place to achieve Neville - - love the...
February 5th, 2019 06:22 - Forecast (Netashi)
A heart-wrenching lament over the loss of a loved one - - a powerful set...
February 4th, 2019 14:49 - I Have No More Ideas. (Kevin browne)
Such an original conception of repetitious use Kevin - - great read
February 4th, 2019 06:42 - LOVE ME : LOVE MY CAT ! ANGELA : A SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Ah - such a good description of a cat\'s aloof air - a feline reproof in...
February 4th, 2019 06:37 - POLITICAL CORRECTNESS (Michael Edwards)
Ha ha - -another clever poetic angle you easily give to that racist-word...
February 4th, 2019 03:59
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