Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- A Handful of Nightingales (Neville)
How did I miss this one ? - - ha - I love double dares and I like the...
May 6th, 2019 16:44 - Untitled - VIII (Suresh)
This is the case of trying to hide scarring within and sometimes it gets...
May 6th, 2019 16:25 - My Wonderful World. (Goldfinch60)
A beautiful idea of a walk which ends in a pictured collage - Michael...
May 6th, 2019 11:30 - MISSFIRE MCHUGH ~ AN ACROSTIC SONNET ~ BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
What a wonderful idea is a 3 D tree of learning - - I love any learning...
May 6th, 2019 11:27 - Moodswings (Moordykspot2)
Such an engaging reflection on autumnal moods - thanks for these...
May 6th, 2019 11:20 - IN TRANSCENDENCE (Michael Edwards)
Full of amazing imagery these lines betoken the changes when indecision is...
May 6th, 2019 11:11 - Light And The Spirit (Orchidee)
A poetic example of combining light and spirit with giving thanks for...
May 6th, 2019 11:07 - Breath Of A Soul. (Camille)
These reflections on birth and death are written in clear and...
May 6th, 2019 10:56 - Dear Capricorn (Neville)
A tender and understanding verse on the effect an abused childhood leaves...
May 6th, 2019 04:37 - MAGICAL MYSTERY TOUR ~ A SONNET OF DOUBLETS (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A fantastically good rhyme on your wonderful tour of South Island and...
May 5th, 2019 10:47 - A Peck Above the Brow (Neville)
Ah - just the place a romantic lip-shaped peck should aim for...........
May 5th, 2019 03:48 - Loves Light FIBS. (Goldfinch60)
Excellent fibs used to highlight love dear Goldy - thank you for sharing...
May 5th, 2019 03:03 - SMUTTY YES BUT VULGAR NO (Michael Edwards)
I agree entirely - vulgar is put into differing places but wherever it is...
May 5th, 2019 01:26 - Versal Law (Neville)
You create gentle erotica so easily Nev. - -- and after an extra busy day...
May 4th, 2019 16:08 - I Am What I Am (Neville)
Such a rhythmic and multi-textured assessment of a few nots - but what...
May 4th, 2019 02:56 - NOW IS THE HOUR 🧡 WHEN WE MUST SAY GOODBYE 🧡 ANGELA 🧡 BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
This parting was bound to be the sadder and I understand your tears dear...
May 4th, 2019 01:29 - Gender revealing (Poetic Dan)
A great expectation of joy when that little sparkle makes her entrance - ...
May 3rd, 2019 15:33 - BRIAN 🧡 I LOVE YOU BECAUSE 🧡 ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A heart-tugging song and your words were to match - - love is very real...
May 3rd, 2019 12:31 - THE WELL OF TIME (Michael Edwards)
Love the abstracted imagery in both verse and artwork -Michael - ...
May 3rd, 2019 03:32 - Butterfly Mind. (Goldfinch60)
Minds can be overworked until tired they sink in the murk of duties - I...
May 3rd, 2019 03:20 - Babies Don’t Bounce (Neville)
Wow this write amazes me Nev. - Full of powerful imagery (as is my...
May 3rd, 2019 03:17 - Auralism (SerenWise)
Excellent read and very romantic.
May 2nd, 2019 07:03 - ANGELA 🧡 MY BEST FRIEND 🧡 BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A beautiful love letter to leave behind after your holiday and Angela...
May 2nd, 2019 07:02 - In The Beginning (Neville)
Looking back with regret brings no closer those innocent Cathedral...
May 2nd, 2019 04:51 - disappointed (Dusk arising)
Purity of heart in a newborn shows the truth to us adults if only we...
May 1st, 2019 16:12 - FROM COMMENTS (1) (Michael Edwards)
Ha - - smiling at the fun-verse but oh what an absolute cracker is your...
May 1st, 2019 14:01 - THE ARTHURS PASS ~ AN ACROSTIC SONNET ~ ANGELA 🧡 BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
No doubt you have made so many happy memories that you will have lots of...
May 1st, 2019 10:07 - Let it roll of the tongue (Poetic Dan)
Good advice Dan - truth must out and then fun can be enjoyed.
May 1st, 2019 05:18 - Between Mountains (Neville)
You warm and romantic pen writing of \"might- have -beens\" - and so...
May 1st, 2019 04:02 - Concerto of Dreams (Moordykspot2)
Such an intimate picture of tender togetherness on that erotic moon that I...
April 30th, 2019 15:55 - New World Calls. (Goldfinch60)
What beautiful words to hear as you go on your way to a new life etc......
April 30th, 2019 13:04 - The Conversation Conservation (Andrew Charles Forrest)
So very true in this too busy age is the lack of face-to-face...
April 30th, 2019 03:17 - Colours Without Names (Neville)
New things learnt today by reading this news about nameless colours - am...
April 30th, 2019 03:13 - DAY MONTH YEAR (Michael Edwards)
Hhhmmm - the choice seems to be ours then -- I prefer the first...
April 30th, 2019 02:07 - Students (Neville)
The beauty of poetry is in its seduction whatever the subject and this...
April 29th, 2019 17:13 - Crumbs of Comfort (Neville)
So often given to poverty\'s children are crumbs of parental comfort - ...
April 29th, 2019 03:32 - MOUNT COOK NZ ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ AN ACROSTIC (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A chilly but welcome sight must have been that glorious mountain on which...
April 29th, 2019 03:27 - Weighty Dreams. (Goldfinch60)
Scales are the bane of many lives Goldy - - you verse well the tease of...
April 29th, 2019 03:17 - ONCE I HAD A LOVER (Michael Edwards)
Good to have you back posting again Michael and what a laugh the fun-verse...
April 29th, 2019 01:45 - Empyrean (SerenWise)
First rate romantic writing Seren - - A kiss has never been raised higher...
April 29th, 2019 01:41 - The Bag Lady (MaggieF)
Many towns countrywide have bag ladies who walk unseeing through street...
April 28th, 2019 16:35 - On Waking (Neville)
Another dunk into the scented draw of an early morning bare tease...
April 28th, 2019 16:23 - White Bus (W c)
An informative read w.c. and told so carefully the final lines took me...
April 28th, 2019 16:07 - Bard (MendedFences27)
Ah - loud applause for this medley of compliments amid most pleasant...
April 28th, 2019 13:15 - Invisible tattoo (for Scarlet) (Andrew Charles Forrest)
What a treasure for Scarlet to keep is this tribute of love dear...
April 28th, 2019 05:35 - UPWARDS & ONWARDS ~ SOUTH ISLAND NZ ~ ANGELA & BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Your busy agenda will reward you with many warm memories and thank you...
April 28th, 2019 04:15 - Peace Perpetual (Orchidee)
A lovely read Orchi.
April 28th, 2019 04:11 - Unfurl (SerenWise)
A beautifully sensuous first read of my day - a great piece of gentle...
April 28th, 2019 04:06 - Empty Sky (Neville)
A languid lament that follows from time to time productive writers but...
April 28th, 2019 03:57 - A Travelling Man (Neville)
This I can relate to as I watch seagulls too -- ha -- and have baked a...
April 27th, 2019 05:51 - Daughter of creation (Poetic Dan)
Wonderful reflections on the best way to wake - thanks Dan for needed...
April 27th, 2019 03:48 - BEAUTIFUL QUEENSTOWN ~ A 7 7 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
So much to do and you chose to save some for the next time - your planned...
April 27th, 2019 03:46 - Communion Charis (Orchidee)
\"Oh love that wilt not let me go\" - those words take me back to my...
April 27th, 2019 03:41 - Curry Goldiku. (Goldfinch60)
Am on my way to deliver it Goldy - great curry and sounds like a tasty...
April 27th, 2019 03:39 - How many times (re-write) (Dusk arising)
As many times as we are given in this short life ........... sweet will...
April 27th, 2019 03:37 - Orchid (Neville)
Beauty they say is in the eye of the beholder so lets hope that storm-torn...
April 27th, 2019 03:35 - Heart to Soul (Crystal Hope)
A lovely and positive suggestion to look within and discover who we really...
April 26th, 2019 15:59 - evil (Dusk arising)
The saddest part is when evil holds its victim close enough to reject any...
April 26th, 2019 14:52 - Each Day I Arise. (Goldfinch60)
This verse gives the very best way of viewing todays and tomorrows...........
April 26th, 2019 13:54 - IN MILFORD SOUND ~ A 2 7 5 ACROSTIC SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Glorious experience just watching the video puts this place high on my...
April 26th, 2019 13:53 - In a Moment Gone (Neville)
Oh how true and so poetically put .....good to have you back posting again...
April 26th, 2019 10:23 - The Pyramid of Longing (Neville)
A triangle of romantic angles built on tender reflections of the journey...
April 25th, 2019 06:45 - I still am me (Mirela Athanas)
A wonderful list of changes we all make as we pass through life - your...
April 25th, 2019 06:42 - four and counting (Dusk arising)
A lighthearted tale of sibling rivalry and told with such style. Great...
April 25th, 2019 06:17 - DUNEDIN AN ELEGANT CITY ~ A 6 6 2 SONNET ~ (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Such an interesting read for those like me who have never visited the fine...
April 25th, 2019 04:15 - remnant (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Very appealing these winsome words of remembrance my friend - your pen...
April 24th, 2019 08:09 - You are part of me (Poetic Dan)
Living and learning we need no secrets - a verse of good thoughts and...
April 24th, 2019 02:25 - Redemption Reassurance (Orchidee)
An inspiring read Orchi.
April 24th, 2019 02:21 - Ten Dead Chickens (Neville)
Ah - just read your comment at the top - so had to adjust my own in -put...
April 24th, 2019 02:06 - THE JOYS OF CAMPER VANNING ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A 6 6 2 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Snuggles in camper vans are just right for touring pilgrims methinks - -...
April 24th, 2019 01:59 - Life in Art. (Goldfinch60)
This lovely tribute adds to the picture as poetry written while viewing a...
April 24th, 2019 01:50 - Eventide (Moordykspot2)
Eventide comes to central stage in this account of nature\'s varied...
April 23rd, 2019 15:53 - Harry\'sField (Moordykspot2)
A compelling read of countryside contact and Harry will always be there in...
April 23rd, 2019 15:42 - Autumn (Neville)
A summary of passing life-seasons and written with deep reflection on...
April 23rd, 2019 13:39 - Two Faces of Joy (Goldfinch60)
Two worthy questions and the clip from Casablanca rounded the read off so...
April 23rd, 2019 04:24 - when? (Dusk arising)
Oooh - such a sad feel to these short lines - wishing you all you wish...
April 23rd, 2019 04:16 - CHRISTCHURCH THE JOURNEY BEGINS ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ AN ACROSTIC (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A trip to remember forever methinks - enjoy every moment as you travel...
April 23rd, 2019 04:14 - Exiting right (Poetic Dan)
A clever way not only with words but with true advancement - another good...
April 23rd, 2019 03:48 - Head Rest (Neville)
A well and truly smitten confession of undying love resting its case... a...
April 23rd, 2019 03:46 - PARDON ? (Michael Edwards)
A very - - ummm - oh I forgot what the subject was in your whatsit.......
April 23rd, 2019 01:38 - Mouth Full of Words. (Goldfinch60)
We will all remember those mouthful of words now you have shared such a...
April 22nd, 2019 15:10 - One Last Time (Mundo)
A tender and heart-rending account of love departing and leaving warm...
April 22nd, 2019 13:58 - The Company of Angels (Neville)
First time of viewing this piece of work Nev. Scene set at attempts to...
April 22nd, 2019 13:50 - Finally (SerenWise)
A wonderfully descriptive reason for searching the crowds for just one...
April 22nd, 2019 13:15 - When Duty Calls (Neville)
A pleasure to read this tempting invitation my friend.
April 22nd, 2019 05:38 - SOUTH ISLAND ITINERARY ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
With you in spirit across that really awesomely beautiful countryside - ...
April 22nd, 2019 03:41 - Thank you for triggering my train (Poetic Dan)
Such a positive read about the way onward and upward just waiting beyond...
April 22nd, 2019 03:33 - BELLS (Michael Edwards)
The bell sounds go so well with the times depicted in your picture today ...
April 22nd, 2019 01:06 - Humility Hymning (Orchidee)
Fine write Orchi.
April 21st, 2019 16:32 - My mighty Oak (Apete4010)
A sensuous write but delicately done -- good comparison you chose too.
April 21st, 2019 16:31 - Our Scars (SerenWise)
A wonderful verse of inspiration for moving forward scars and all. Thanks...
April 21st, 2019 13:26 - tip-toeing (re-written) (Dusk arising)
Deep and altogether a lovely reminder value can hide in memories - -- ...
April 21st, 2019 03:58 - Feral Girls (Neville)
A woeful tale of female downfall - feral girls who often through no fault...
April 21st, 2019 03:55 - My Homeless Brother (W c)
The homeless are in a tragic situation. - Thanks w.c. for the needed...
April 21st, 2019 02:54 - Nominal Amnesia. (Goldfinch60)
A bit like selective hearing with me - numbers and names jumble together...
April 21st, 2019 02:11 - STILL LAMENTING (Michael Edwards)
Poor Quasi. his mode is ever loaded with smiles at such plight....... a...
April 21st, 2019 01:56 - THE OLD RUGGED CROSS ~ BRIAN & ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Always cherish the right things and what better news than this. Love and...
April 21st, 2019 01:46 - Laughter in our plight (Poetic Dan)
A fine place to be is there finding laughter. Good first read of my day...
April 21st, 2019 01:44 - STUFF! (Goldfinch60)
Stuff follows me everywhere my friend - - it gets dumped but I swear it...
April 20th, 2019 13:01 - now ready to depart (Dusk arising)
This grabs attention from its first line - late love can come when least...
April 20th, 2019 10:36
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