Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- Flowers Musing on Rain (Lorna)
Could feel the frustration of those flowers appealing - - such an...
May 15th, 2019 06:32 - OBSCURE SENRYUS (5) (Michael Edwards)
Wow this one tells me a story - not so obscure to my eye Michael - - and...
May 15th, 2019 06:29 - of Elspenore pt2 (Dusk arising)
Mystical phrasing attracts all the more the singing of praises to the...
May 14th, 2019 16:29 - DORIS DAY AN ACROSTIC TRIBUTE ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A sure favourite of mine too was Doris - - she was a winner in all...
May 14th, 2019 16:22 - Red Cushions (Lorna)
A taste of summer in a change of decor -what a wonderful idea for a poem...
May 14th, 2019 13:15 - Love Letter (SerenWise)
Honest and full of delightful imagery this ode to devotion comes home loud...
May 14th, 2019 00:53 - Mix Ups #27 (Andrew Charles Forrest)
And that old lady was right my friend........ thanks Andrew for the...
May 13th, 2019 12:20 - Chet Blow Your Horn. (Goldfinch60)
Another Chet fan here Goldy - could listen to his playing all night and...
May 13th, 2019 12:17 - All The Love He Kept. (Kevin browne)
Such an absorbing and wonderfully expressed write - - such a moving...
May 13th, 2019 05:23 - Thinker (Suresh)
I found these few words more than moving - truth wrapped in poetry stays...
May 13th, 2019 04:34 - OBSCURE SENRYUS (4) (Michael Edwards)
Turned white and dry they droppings make good Five Jacks didya know Mike ?...
May 13th, 2019 04:09 - HUMAN HANDS ~ ALMOST INDISPENSABLE ~ ANGELA & BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
What a wonderful and sometimes overlooked gift are human hands - as your...
May 13th, 2019 04:06 - Rainbows (Lorna)
A beautifully written verse - - full of positive vibes to remember dear...
May 13th, 2019 03:28 - SUNRISE ~ SUNSET : A BLANK VERSE SONNET : ANGELA & BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A wondrous time to be outside is sunrise or sunset -- -or both. Thanks...
May 12th, 2019 03:02 - OBSCURE SENRYUS (3) (Michael Edwards)
Ha ha ha - -- not so obscure to me....good one Mike.
May 12th, 2019 03:00 - it just wouldnt rhyme (Dusk arising)
First class writing my friend - a very inspiring read - - - - - I...
May 10th, 2019 10:32 - We\'re all needed (Poetic Dan)
a wonderful rhyme of sound advice Dan - we all need each other to help...
May 10th, 2019 04:31 - OBSCURE SENRYUS (2) (Michael Edwards)
Nonsense was never better expressed for I see in these lines a lifestyle...
May 10th, 2019 04:29 - Friends Are Special (W c)
So pleased I caught this lovely tribute to the special place friends hold...
May 9th, 2019 09:51 - COFFEE A LA MODE ~ A Sonnet in Internal Rhyme ~ ANGELA & BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Thanks so much for outlining the different coffees - I have learnt much...
May 8th, 2019 08:05 - Bum lie (Poetic Dan)
This has to be one of your best Dan - - loved the title and what it...
May 8th, 2019 06:02 - Peaceful Buzzard. (Goldfinch60)
A favourite of mine is the majestic buzzard - - here in south Cornwall...
May 8th, 2019 05:59 - of elspenore (Dusk arising)
Wow - this reads like the start of a marvelous saga D.A. - makes me want...
May 8th, 2019 04:50 - Royalty Reflections (Orchidee)
A very happy write my friend.
May 8th, 2019 04:45 - Fire-Crest (Neville)
A scene when enacted brings out raw feelings in females like me..........
May 8th, 2019 04:44 - Satisfaction in Life. (Goldfinch60)
I know what satisfaction a completed puzzle can bring - - a lovely read...
May 7th, 2019 16:41 - Treasure Hunting (Suresh)
A meaningful read Suresh -- I like the notion of hunting for treasured...
May 7th, 2019 16:37 - Hark (Neville)
Even on Holy Days the earth\'s sighs, if heard, can reverberate in still...
May 7th, 2019 16:33 - Skylark (Moordykspot2)
Ah - the skylarks have deserted this part of south-western Cornwall for...
May 7th, 2019 14:38 - CHOCOLATE AN ACROSTIC ~ ANGELA & BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A wonderful few moments just watching the making of chocolate from the...
May 7th, 2019 12:38 - new world (Dusk arising)
A fantastic journey down memory land with names I remember so well
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May 7th, 2019 11:20 - Rest Request (Orchidee)
Another fine read Orchi - rest after labour is needed by all ages;
May 7th, 2019 11:14 - Find your rhythm (Poetic Dan)
Really good advice and worth a few reads Dan - - saved to my faves.
May 7th, 2019 05:51 - Ghosts & Shells (Neville)
Real poets need no admiration but feed on word-mindfulness which is a...
May 7th, 2019 03:58 - A Handful of Nightingales (Neville)
How did I miss this one ? - - ha - I love double dares and I like the...
May 6th, 2019 16:44 - Untitled - VIII (Suresh)
This is the case of trying to hide scarring within and sometimes it gets...
May 6th, 2019 16:25 - My Wonderful World. (Goldfinch60)
A beautiful idea of a walk which ends in a pictured collage - Michael...
May 6th, 2019 11:30 - MISSFIRE MCHUGH ~ AN ACROSTIC SONNET ~ BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
What a wonderful idea is a 3 D tree of learning - - I love any learning...
May 6th, 2019 11:27 - Moodswings (Moordykspot2)
Such an engaging reflection on autumnal moods - thanks for these...
May 6th, 2019 11:20 - IN TRANSCENDENCE (Michael Edwards)
Full of amazing imagery these lines betoken the changes when indecision is...
May 6th, 2019 11:11 - Light And The Spirit (Orchidee)
A poetic example of combining light and spirit with giving thanks for...
May 6th, 2019 11:07 - Breath Of A Soul. (Camille)
These reflections on birth and death are written in clear and...
May 6th, 2019 10:56 - Dear Capricorn (Neville)
A tender and understanding verse on the effect an abused childhood leaves...
May 6th, 2019 04:37 - MAGICAL MYSTERY TOUR ~ A SONNET OF DOUBLETS (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A fantastically good rhyme on your wonderful tour of South Island and...
May 5th, 2019 10:47 - A Peck Above the Brow (Neville)
Ah - just the place a romantic lip-shaped peck should aim for...........
May 5th, 2019 03:48 - Loves Light FIBS. (Goldfinch60)
Excellent fibs used to highlight love dear Goldy - thank you for sharing...
May 5th, 2019 03:03 - SMUTTY YES BUT VULGAR NO (Michael Edwards)
I agree entirely - vulgar is put into differing places but wherever it is...
May 5th, 2019 01:26 - Versal Law (Neville)
You create gentle erotica so easily Nev. - -- and after an extra busy day...
May 4th, 2019 16:08 - I Am What I Am (Neville)
Such a rhythmic and multi-textured assessment of a few nots - but what...
May 4th, 2019 02:56 - NOW IS THE HOUR 🧡 WHEN WE MUST SAY GOODBYE 🧡 ANGELA 🧡 BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
This parting was bound to be the sadder and I understand your tears dear...
May 4th, 2019 01:29 - Gender revealing (Poetic Dan)
A great expectation of joy when that little sparkle makes her entrance - ...
May 3rd, 2019 15:33 - BRIAN 🧡 I LOVE YOU BECAUSE 🧡 ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A heart-tugging song and your words were to match - - love is very real...
May 3rd, 2019 12:31 - THE WELL OF TIME (Michael Edwards)
Love the abstracted imagery in both verse and artwork -Michael - ...
May 3rd, 2019 03:32 - Butterfly Mind. (Goldfinch60)
Minds can be overworked until tired they sink in the murk of duties - I...
May 3rd, 2019 03:20 - Babies Don’t Bounce (Neville)
Wow this write amazes me Nev. - Full of powerful imagery (as is my...
May 3rd, 2019 03:17 - Auralism (SerenWise)
Excellent read and very romantic.
May 2nd, 2019 07:03 - ANGELA 🧡 MY BEST FRIEND 🧡 BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A beautiful love letter to leave behind after your holiday and Angela...
May 2nd, 2019 07:02 - In The Beginning (Neville)
Looking back with regret brings no closer those innocent Cathedral...
May 2nd, 2019 04:51 - disappointed (Dusk arising)
Purity of heart in a newborn shows the truth to us adults if only we...
May 1st, 2019 16:12 - FROM COMMENTS (1) (Michael Edwards)
Ha - - smiling at the fun-verse but oh what an absolute cracker is your...
May 1st, 2019 14:01 - THE ARTHURS PASS ~ AN ACROSTIC SONNET ~ ANGELA 🧡 BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
No doubt you have made so many happy memories that you will have lots of...
May 1st, 2019 10:07 - Let it roll of the tongue (Poetic Dan)
Good advice Dan - truth must out and then fun can be enjoyed.
May 1st, 2019 05:18 - Between Mountains (Neville)
You warm and romantic pen writing of \"might- have -beens\" - and so...
May 1st, 2019 04:02 - Concerto of Dreams (Moordykspot2)
Such an intimate picture of tender togetherness on that erotic moon that I...
April 30th, 2019 15:55 - New World Calls. (Goldfinch60)
What beautiful words to hear as you go on your way to a new life etc......
April 30th, 2019 13:04 - The Conversation Conservation (Andrew Charles Forrest)
So very true in this too busy age is the lack of face-to-face...
April 30th, 2019 03:17 - Colours Without Names (Neville)
New things learnt today by reading this news about nameless colours - am...
April 30th, 2019 03:13 - DAY MONTH YEAR (Michael Edwards)
Hhhmmm - the choice seems to be ours then -- I prefer the first...
April 30th, 2019 02:07 - Students (Neville)
The beauty of poetry is in its seduction whatever the subject and this...
April 29th, 2019 17:13 - Crumbs of Comfort (Neville)
So often given to poverty\'s children are crumbs of parental comfort - ...
April 29th, 2019 03:32 - MOUNT COOK NZ ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ AN ACROSTIC (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A chilly but welcome sight must have been that glorious mountain on which...
April 29th, 2019 03:27 - Weighty Dreams. (Goldfinch60)
Scales are the bane of many lives Goldy - - you verse well the tease of...
April 29th, 2019 03:17 - ONCE I HAD A LOVER (Michael Edwards)
Good to have you back posting again Michael and what a laugh the fun-verse...
April 29th, 2019 01:45 - Empyrean (SerenWise)
First rate romantic writing Seren - - A kiss has never been raised higher...
April 29th, 2019 01:41 - The Bag Lady (MaggieF)
Many towns countrywide have bag ladies who walk unseeing through street...
April 28th, 2019 16:35 - On Waking (Neville)
Another dunk into the scented draw of an early morning bare tease...
April 28th, 2019 16:23 - White Bus (W c)
An informative read w.c. and told so carefully the final lines took me...
April 28th, 2019 16:07 - Bard (MendedFences27)
Ah - loud applause for this medley of compliments amid most pleasant...
April 28th, 2019 13:15 - Invisible tattoo (for Scarlet) (Andrew Charles Forrest)
What a treasure for Scarlet to keep is this tribute of love dear...
April 28th, 2019 05:35 - UPWARDS & ONWARDS ~ SOUTH ISLAND NZ ~ ANGELA & BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Your busy agenda will reward you with many warm memories and thank you...
April 28th, 2019 04:15 - Peace Perpetual (Orchidee)
A lovely read Orchi.
April 28th, 2019 04:11 - Unfurl (SerenWise)
A beautifully sensuous first read of my day - a great piece of gentle...
April 28th, 2019 04:06 - Empty Sky (Neville)
A languid lament that follows from time to time productive writers but...
April 28th, 2019 03:57 - A Travelling Man (Neville)
This I can relate to as I watch seagulls too -- ha -- and have baked a...
April 27th, 2019 05:51 - Daughter of creation (Poetic Dan)
Wonderful reflections on the best way to wake - thanks Dan for needed...
April 27th, 2019 03:48 - BEAUTIFUL QUEENSTOWN ~ A 7 7 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
So much to do and you chose to save some for the next time - your planned...
April 27th, 2019 03:46 - Communion Charis (Orchidee)
\"Oh love that wilt not let me go\" - those words take me back to my...
April 27th, 2019 03:41 - Curry Goldiku. (Goldfinch60)
Am on my way to deliver it Goldy - great curry and sounds like a tasty...
April 27th, 2019 03:39 - How many times (re-write) (Dusk arising)
As many times as we are given in this short life ........... sweet will...
April 27th, 2019 03:37 - Orchid (Neville)
Beauty they say is in the eye of the beholder so lets hope that storm-torn...
April 27th, 2019 03:35 - Heart to Soul (Crystal Hope)
A lovely and positive suggestion to look within and discover who we really...
April 26th, 2019 15:59 - evil (Dusk arising)
The saddest part is when evil holds its victim close enough to reject any...
April 26th, 2019 14:52 - Each Day I Arise. (Goldfinch60)
This verse gives the very best way of viewing todays and tomorrows...........
April 26th, 2019 13:54 - IN MILFORD SOUND ~ A 2 7 5 ACROSTIC SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Glorious experience just watching the video puts this place high on my...
April 26th, 2019 13:53 - In a Moment Gone (Neville)
Oh how true and so poetically put .....good to have you back posting again...
April 26th, 2019 10:23 - The Pyramid of Longing (Neville)
A triangle of romantic angles built on tender reflections of the journey...
April 25th, 2019 06:45 - I still am me (Mirela Athanas)
A wonderful list of changes we all make as we pass through life - your...
April 25th, 2019 06:42 - four and counting (Dusk arising)
A lighthearted tale of sibling rivalry and told with such style. Great...
April 25th, 2019 06:17 - DUNEDIN AN ELEGANT CITY ~ A 6 6 2 SONNET ~ (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Such an interesting read for those like me who have never visited the fine...
April 25th, 2019 04:15 - remnant (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Very appealing these winsome words of remembrance my friend - your pen...
April 24th, 2019 08:09
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