Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- Unfurl (SerenWise)
A beautifully sensuous first read of my day - a great piece of gentle...
April 28th, 2019 04:06 - Empty Sky (Neville)
A languid lament that follows from time to time productive writers but...
April 28th, 2019 03:57 - A Travelling Man (Neville)
This I can relate to as I watch seagulls too -- ha -- and have baked a...
April 27th, 2019 05:51 - Daughter of creation (Poetic Dan)
Wonderful reflections on the best way to wake - thanks Dan for needed...
April 27th, 2019 03:48 - BEAUTIFUL QUEENSTOWN ~ A 7 7 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
So much to do and you chose to save some for the next time - your planned...
April 27th, 2019 03:46 - Communion Charis (Orchidee)
\"Oh love that wilt not let me go\" - those words take me back to my...
April 27th, 2019 03:41 - Curry Goldiku. (Goldfinch60)
Am on my way to deliver it Goldy - great curry and sounds like a tasty...
April 27th, 2019 03:39 - How many times (re-write) (Dusk arising)
As many times as we are given in this short life ........... sweet will...
April 27th, 2019 03:37 - Orchid (Neville)
Beauty they say is in the eye of the beholder so lets hope that storm-torn...
April 27th, 2019 03:35 - Heart to Soul (Crystal Hope)
A lovely and positive suggestion to look within and discover who we really...
April 26th, 2019 15:59 - evil (Dusk arising)
The saddest part is when evil holds its victim close enough to reject any...
April 26th, 2019 14:52 - Each Day I Arise. (Goldfinch60)
This verse gives the very best way of viewing todays and tomorrows...........
April 26th, 2019 13:54 - IN MILFORD SOUND ~ A 2 7 5 ACROSTIC SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Glorious experience just watching the video puts this place high on my...
April 26th, 2019 13:53 - In a Moment Gone (Neville)
Oh how true and so poetically put .....good to have you back posting again...
April 26th, 2019 10:23 - The Pyramid of Longing (Neville)
A triangle of romantic angles built on tender reflections of the journey...
April 25th, 2019 06:45 - I still am me (Mirela Athanas)
A wonderful list of changes we all make as we pass through life - your...
April 25th, 2019 06:42 - four and counting (Dusk arising)
A lighthearted tale of sibling rivalry and told with such style. Great...
April 25th, 2019 06:17 - DUNEDIN AN ELEGANT CITY ~ A 6 6 2 SONNET ~ (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Such an interesting read for those like me who have never visited the fine...
April 25th, 2019 04:15 - remnant (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Very appealing these winsome words of remembrance my friend - your pen...
April 24th, 2019 08:09 - You are part of me (Poetic Dan)
Living and learning we need no secrets - a verse of good thoughts and...
April 24th, 2019 02:25 - Redemption Reassurance (Orchidee)
An inspiring read Orchi.
April 24th, 2019 02:21 - Ten Dead Chickens (Neville)
Ah - just read your comment at the top - so had to adjust my own in -put...
April 24th, 2019 02:06 - THE JOYS OF CAMPER VANNING ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A 6 6 2 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Snuggles in camper vans are just right for touring pilgrims methinks - -...
April 24th, 2019 01:59 - Life in Art. (Goldfinch60)
This lovely tribute adds to the picture as poetry written while viewing a...
April 24th, 2019 01:50 - Eventide (Moordykspot2)
Eventide comes to central stage in this account of nature\'s varied...
April 23rd, 2019 15:53 - Harry\'sField (Moordykspot2)
A compelling read of countryside contact and Harry will always be there in...
April 23rd, 2019 15:42 - Autumn (Neville)
A summary of passing life-seasons and written with deep reflection on...
April 23rd, 2019 13:39 - Two Faces of Joy (Goldfinch60)
Two worthy questions and the clip from Casablanca rounded the read off so...
April 23rd, 2019 04:24 - when? (Dusk arising)
Oooh - such a sad feel to these short lines - wishing you all you wish...
April 23rd, 2019 04:16 - CHRISTCHURCH THE JOURNEY BEGINS ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ AN ACROSTIC (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A trip to remember forever methinks - enjoy every moment as you travel...
April 23rd, 2019 04:14 - Exiting right (Poetic Dan)
A clever way not only with words but with true advancement - another good...
April 23rd, 2019 03:48 - Head Rest (Neville)
A well and truly smitten confession of undying love resting its case... a...
April 23rd, 2019 03:46 - PARDON ? (Michael Edwards)
A very - - ummm - oh I forgot what the subject was in your whatsit.......
April 23rd, 2019 01:38 - Mouth Full of Words. (Goldfinch60)
We will all remember those mouthful of words now you have shared such a...
April 22nd, 2019 15:10 - One Last Time (Mundo)
A tender and heart-rending account of love departing and leaving warm...
April 22nd, 2019 13:58 - The Company of Angels (Neville)
First time of viewing this piece of work Nev. Scene set at attempts to...
April 22nd, 2019 13:50 - Finally (SerenWise)
A wonderfully descriptive reason for searching the crowds for just one...
April 22nd, 2019 13:15 - When Duty Calls (Neville)
A pleasure to read this tempting invitation my friend.
April 22nd, 2019 05:38 - SOUTH ISLAND ITINERARY ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
With you in spirit across that really awesomely beautiful countryside - ...
April 22nd, 2019 03:41 - Thank you for triggering my train (Poetic Dan)
Such a positive read about the way onward and upward just waiting beyond...
April 22nd, 2019 03:33 - BELLS (Michael Edwards)
The bell sounds go so well with the times depicted in your picture today ...
April 22nd, 2019 01:06 - Humility Hymning (Orchidee)
Fine write Orchi.
April 21st, 2019 16:32 - My mighty Oak (Apete4010)
A sensuous write but delicately done -- good comparison you chose too.
April 21st, 2019 16:31 - Our Scars (SerenWise)
A wonderful verse of inspiration for moving forward scars and all. Thanks...
April 21st, 2019 13:26 - tip-toeing (re-written) (Dusk arising)
Deep and altogether a lovely reminder value can hide in memories - -- ...
April 21st, 2019 03:58 - Feral Girls (Neville)
A woeful tale of female downfall - feral girls who often through no fault...
April 21st, 2019 03:55 - My Homeless Brother (W c)
The homeless are in a tragic situation. - Thanks w.c. for the needed...
April 21st, 2019 02:54 - Nominal Amnesia. (Goldfinch60)
A bit like selective hearing with me - numbers and names jumble together...
April 21st, 2019 02:11 - STILL LAMENTING (Michael Edwards)
Poor Quasi. his mode is ever loaded with smiles at such plight....... a...
April 21st, 2019 01:56 - THE OLD RUGGED CROSS ~ BRIAN & ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Always cherish the right things and what better news than this. Love and...
April 21st, 2019 01:46 - Laughter in our plight (Poetic Dan)
A fine place to be is there finding laughter. Good first read of my day...
April 21st, 2019 01:44 - STUFF! (Goldfinch60)
Stuff follows me everywhere my friend - - it gets dumped but I swear it...
April 20th, 2019 13:01 - now ready to depart (Dusk arising)
This grabs attention from its first line - late love can come when least...
April 20th, 2019 10:36 - Fine Young Disciples (Neville)
A sound and caring piece of advice Nev. -- life is no fairytale and as...
April 20th, 2019 10:33 - BRIAN ~ MY BIG BEAR HAS LANDED ~ ANGELA ~ 8 8 4 BIDECET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
What an exciting adventure is waiting for you both and also for your...
April 20th, 2019 02:14 - THE LUMBERING KINE (Michael Edwards)
Another super three liner and oh what a wonderfully clear watercolour -...
April 20th, 2019 00:48 - Hey! come here (Poetic Dan)
Ah what a lovely walk I have been enjoying with you and your little one...
April 19th, 2019 13:12 - EASTER ~ ANGELA ~ ACROSTIC (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Short lines and so near to the point where Christianity arises dear
April 19th, 2019 06:39 - Occasions For Oils (Orchidee)
A wonderfully healing read my friend.
April 19th, 2019 03:53 - Faithless. (Goldfinch60)
Your pain and frustration are palpable dear Goldy - my heart goes out to...
April 19th, 2019 03:06 - BOOK OF DESTINY (Michael Edwards)
Destiny\'s book will have no ending methinks dear friend. A profound three...
April 19th, 2019 03:02 - Beware of Mirrors (Neville)
Much food for thought in this verse Nev. - -- an image of self reflects...
April 19th, 2019 02:59 - Evening of Our Great Content (Lorna)
Love the title and you capture it all Lorna and truly peaceful it is. Am...
April 18th, 2019 06:10 - BRIAN = MY HAPPINESS ~ ANGELA ~ A 4 4 4 4 4 BIDECET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Lots of good wishes for your adventure together on South Island - - I...
April 18th, 2019 04:08 - Play. (Goldfinch60)
Ella sings it all and so beautifully - - and your six words whirling...
April 18th, 2019 01:39 - Harbour Side (Neville)
This invitation will move to the core that special friend - of that I am...
April 18th, 2019 01:34 - LIVING IN A DREAM (Michael Edwards)
What a lovely morning surprise - picture and words most engaging. Thanks...
April 18th, 2019 00:20 - WORLD HOSPITALS ~ ANGELA ~ A 5 9 ACROSTIC SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Carers are special people and blessings to you in your profession dear...
April 17th, 2019 16:09 - I Am Enough (SerenWise)
You are more than enough of a poet to rhyme this sad song so well Seren -...
April 17th, 2019 14:49 - dawns delight (re-written) (Dusk arising)
A wonderful feeling of dawn when this special smile awakens a dreamer D.A....
April 17th, 2019 07:05 - Aromatic Anointing (Orchidee)
Aromatic sounds as it is - full of scented beauty and given with love it...
April 17th, 2019 07:01 - WOMAN IN BLACK (Michael Edwards)
Three good words you use here for describing the colour of mourning in...
April 17th, 2019 04:28 - Turn Toward the Window (Neville)
Telling it then as it once was - love soured reads as a powerful piece of...
April 17th, 2019 03:08 - I asked! (Poetic Dan)
Yep - - keep slow and steady and give when you can - - a great race to win...
April 16th, 2019 11:19 - know JB (Dusk arising)
Lurve the rythmn in this number by JB - - - agree with every word - ...
April 16th, 2019 08:27 - Another New Day (Neville)
Yes this is the way to see life dear Nev -- - to welcome another new...
April 16th, 2019 03:44 - THE EGOTIST (Michael Edwards)
Ah - Clever assessment of those who think they are the cat\'s whiskers -...
April 16th, 2019 03:36 - Punctuality Spurned. (Goldfinch60)
Agree with Neville that those two final lines say it all Goldy - - ...
April 16th, 2019 02:44 - The Voyage (SerenWise)
Such a warm appeal in this message to a loved one Seren.
April 15th, 2019 15:49 - Old Sunlight (Neville)
Not yet locked away those sun-dappled moments that stand there in old...
April 15th, 2019 12:53 - The Foggy, Foggy Dew. (Goldfinch60)
That number is now going round in my head now dear Goldy -- your words...
April 15th, 2019 10:21 - I AM SORRY (SensualRomantic)
A poignant feel to this write of
few lines yet excellent length to...
April 15th, 2019 08:34 - Rainbow Colours Shine. (Kevin browne)
An unusual rhyme scheme in this one Kevin but so tenderly phrased and...
April 15th, 2019 08:30 - The Birth of Opals (Neville)
Wow - - missed this one first time around - - tis a bouquet of poetic...
April 15th, 2019 05:57 - Whale Whispering (Neville)
Had a second read of this saline saga and felt every whoosh and weave of...
April 15th, 2019 05:14 - Grow Some Flowers. (Kevin browne)
A most enlightening read Kevin - flowers when tended have their own magic...
April 15th, 2019 05:08 - ANTICIPATIONS of LOVE ~ BRIAN ~ AN 8 8 4 BIDECET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A beautiul read of anticipation and the loneliness meanwhile of being...
April 15th, 2019 05:02 - Now You’re Gone (Apete4010)
Full of the feeling of loss that only a gone Mum can leave behind - my...
April 15th, 2019 05:00 - Serving Serenity (Orchidee)
The first line did it for me Orchi - - Blessed are they that help the...
April 15th, 2019 04:09 - Plum Pencil Skirt (Neville)
Old memories die hard Nev. and no wonder names are forgotten when shapes...
April 15th, 2019 02:38 - MARY HAD .....A RAM (Michael Edwards)
Oh that abstract is gorgeously swathed in colour and looking so long at...
April 15th, 2019 01:59 - what need in me for kisses (Dusk arising)
Very emotive this read of few lines my friend. Love all the phrasing so...
April 15th, 2019 01:56 - Tis Only Angels Crying (Neville)
Two differing views and so well brought home to this reader -- a...
April 14th, 2019 04:22 - TOGETHER AGAIN with BRIAN ~ LOVE ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡 (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Thinking of you both as time rolls along and may Saturday make your...
April 14th, 2019 01:56 - Weep Over Love. (Kevin browne)
A very moving read Kevin - you pen the weeping over the passing of love...
April 14th, 2019 00:58 - Watching (Neville)
Obviously a sad little female who shame on her teases but never plays - -...
April 13th, 2019 10:48 - Fancy a Brew? (SerenWise)
Perceptive use of words in this clever piece which tells a much bigger...
April 12th, 2019 15:56 - Mended Wing (W c)
What a wonderful story of healing a meadowlark and then setting him free -...
April 12th, 2019 11:13 - APRIL (Moordykspot2)
A bouquet of well-penned tribute to beautiful April - thank you for such...
April 12th, 2019 10:01 - Motivated Movements (Orchidee)
Beautiful thoughts Orchi and thank you.
April 12th, 2019 06:52
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