Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- RICHARD & SHARON ~ 1980 - 2020 ~ RUBY WEDDING (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I am a no-good cook of risen sponges or scones but give me the fruit cake...
November 26th, 2018 17:14 - Hair Today and Gone Tomorrow (The Retired Bloke)
Such a telling happening you capture here in this well rhyme tale of...
November 26th, 2018 17:09 - A MELLOW PLACE (Michael Edwards)
Got lost from the first line in your sensitive and finely crafted tale...
November 26th, 2018 03:55 - Snakebite (Phil_Briggs)
The outing of deep core results of former abuse can only be helpful to...
November 25th, 2018 15:11 - What Do I Believe (Pldabbs)
Strong belief in the right way to view others is brought out so clearly in...
November 25th, 2018 14:52 - OUT OF BOUNCE (Michael Edwards)
Ooooh - - Mike - dare I say I understand this fully - ha ha - - -- ...
November 24th, 2018 09:01 - ONE DAY EACH WEEK (Michael Edwards)
Wow - - she has to go without them for one day of the week - - draughty I...
November 23rd, 2018 07:08 - CAR SENSE IN WINTER ~ BRIAN (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A needed list of essentials for snowy assault Brian - - well even here in...
November 23rd, 2018 06:50 - Seasons of Love. (Goldfinch60)
Beautiful tribute to true love Goldi - a pleasure to read.
November 23rd, 2018 06:46 - Why Do I Love Thee (Neville)
I love the original classic but so heartwarming this modern ode to true...
November 23rd, 2018 06:39 - THE STATISTICIAN (Michael Edwards)
Oh Michael - My brain must be going awry cos after a double read of your...
November 22nd, 2018 17:36 - Writing not Tapping. (Goldfinch60)
Yes dear Goldi poets can be strangely out of this world when we get a...
November 22nd, 2018 17:11 - Awesome Approach (Orchidee)
A fine write Orchi. Thank you for sharing such vital words.
November 22nd, 2018 16:58 - THE WHOLE ARMOUR OF GOD ~ BRIAN & ANGELA (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A fine and vital piece of fighting equipment meant to dispose of Satan\'s...
November 22nd, 2018 12:51 - Thanksgiving (ForeverJesus7)
Thanks for this needed reminder on what being thankful is all about and...
November 22nd, 2018 11:43 - Does it seem as if I’m dreamin’ ? (Frederick Samson)
I know full well how chronic insomnia gets us to a screaming point - your...
November 22nd, 2018 11:40 - Relax? (The Retired Bloke)
A familiar feeling to many including myself -this need to get out and...
November 22nd, 2018 11:31 - Never (Sylviasearcher)
Thank you for this great cascade of rhythmic and expressive words which...
November 22nd, 2018 11:26 - HAPPY THANKSGIVING (Laura🌻)
Thank you sweet lady for this wonderfully kind wish for blessings that...
November 22nd, 2018 11:20 - Obedience Outcomes (Orchidee)
With strong rhyme and rousing warnings against disobeying this read has ...
November 21st, 2018 16:58 - Abattoir Gulls (Neville)
Ah - Loud applause for this flow of bird-assault Neville - - You capture...
November 21st, 2018 11:19 - We Two Ships (Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet)
A compelling read Tamara - you capture the tragic ends so vividly in this...
November 21st, 2018 05:58 - A CHINESE LOVE STORY~ BRIAN (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Ha ha ha - - - loved this play on the Goons famous classic - - took me...
November 21st, 2018 05:22 - DOUBLE TROUBLE (Michael Edwards)
Wow - -Still smiling at your predicament Mike - - hope it is resolved by...
November 21st, 2018 03:35 - Autumn Is With Us - HAIKU. (Goldfinch60)
Love the season - - love that number on a trumpet - - and love your...
November 21st, 2018 03:31 - DAYS OF THE WEEK : ANGELA : A 7 7 Sonnet as an Inverted Columnette ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I well remember having to learn the days of the week in French and have...
November 20th, 2018 12:16 - THE RISING SUN (Michael Edwards)
A calm feel to this charming tribute Michael - - the sun does indeed,...
November 20th, 2018 06:20 - WHEN WE FELL IN LOVE ~ BRIAN & ANGELA ~ A PANTOUM (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Love every burgeoning stanza in this tribute to love - you two do such a...
November 19th, 2018 17:16 - DESERVING OF FINE EPITHETS (Michael Edwards)
The comfort \"pliant love\" brings outstrips all \"false sentiment\" to...
November 19th, 2018 04:42 - TICKLING STICK (Michael Edwards)
A smile to begin my day with a tickle of the vocal chords Michael - Ken...
November 18th, 2018 02:51 - COLOURS OF THE RAINBOW ~ BRIAN ~ A 4 4 6 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Colour is surely a gift from above and brings variety to human experience ...
November 17th, 2018 11:05 - SEASONS OF MY MIND : COLUMNETTE : ANGELA (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A fine new structure Angela and you have presented it well
in columnar...
November 16th, 2018 06:13 - Seasonals (Michael Edwards)
A fine array of the follow-ups as season gives way to season in these...
November 15th, 2018 06:26 - PRAY FOR CALIFORNIA ~ BRIAN ~ A 4 4 4 2 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Awful the devastation described by your sonnet as California burns right...
November 14th, 2018 06:22 - FORGOTTEN (Michael Edwards)
A fine summary of attention paid to the words those whom the world deemed...
November 13th, 2018 10:39 - NATURE LOVES HEXAGONS : ANGELA : A Form Poem (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Your choice of the hexagon shape is one I can really relate to for it is...
November 13th, 2018 04:06 - AND SO TO BED (Michael Edwards)
Still giggling at these lines Michael - - I pity poor Beaty - - h aha -...
November 12th, 2018 03:23 - Midnight Melody (Netashi)
A good mantra for looking at life\'s surprises and learn from them all - ...
November 9th, 2018 13:15 - Time\'s Bouquet (Lorna)
So much expertise used to fill these short lines with love\'s old...
November 8th, 2018 05:46 - All Along (Christina K)
A heartfelt prayer which is so honest and appealing dear Christina - -...
November 8th, 2018 03:41 - O LORD MY GOD : HOW GREAT YOU ARE : ANGELA (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A lovely confession of faith in these compelling lines Angela - -...
November 8th, 2018 03:35 - oh heart (Frank Prem)
Powerful feel to these short lines Frank - a timely reminder that peace...
November 8th, 2018 03:28 - River (Sylviasearcher)
A write to make readers want more of this warm and inviting stream of...
November 7th, 2018 16:16 - Autumn (Lorna)
Lorna you have wrapped Autumn in elegant skirts of vivid fantasy - well...
November 7th, 2018 15:46 - Battle of Cambrai 1917 (John f skinner)
A haunt of a read and a memorable lament of the victims who left their...
November 7th, 2018 15:03 - BUT I CAN WRITE (Michael Edwards)
So good you are home again after the op. Michael - resting now is the...
November 7th, 2018 09:06 - Annoying Attraction (The Retired Bloke)
Ah ha - - I know what you mean my friend !! That central isle is a true...
November 7th, 2018 05:15 - AFTER THE BONFIRE ......... ? ~ BRIAN ~ A SONNET LAMENT (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Good example of a lament Brian - The tale of high treason told without...
November 6th, 2018 12:27 - My heart (Netashi)
A beautiful and gentle confession of love - thank you for sharing it...
November 6th, 2018 12:17 - Can\'t wait! (Christina8)
A lovely look forward to Christmas kindness dear Christina - - may you be...
November 5th, 2018 16:59 - Oxford (The Retired Bloke)
Such a good summary of that means Oxford today and of course days of yore...
November 5th, 2018 16:57 - Bad Desire (Sylviasearcher)
A smouldering write on inner desire - - gentle erotica wrapped in ...
November 5th, 2018 10:40 - Phantoms (LIGHT WARRIOR)
Well said Jason - A timely word wrapped in excellent poetry which sorts...
November 5th, 2018 10:36 - C H R I S T M A S CANDLES : ANGELA (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Such a happy rhyme on candles and with the Christmas celebrations ahead...
November 5th, 2018 10:30 - Caitlyn Leaves Us (Pldabbs)
Oh these words touch th every heart of grief at losing so suddenly one so...
November 5th, 2018 10:25 - HARRY AND MEGHAN : IN AUCKLAND : ACROSTIC 5 3 6 SONNET (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Well done with this very romantic acrostic Angela - - Harry has broken...
November 1st, 2018 23:57 - YOU ARE MY : H A P P I N E S S ! ANGELA & BRIAN (BRIAN & ANGELA)
One of my faves. by Elvis - - your own wording interposed makes it all...
November 1st, 2018 23:49 - Almost Heaven (The Retired Bloke)
You describe that slice of heaven so well here - thanks for the gentle...
November 1st, 2018 13:58 - My eyes (Netashi)
Love the title and the description of those who in your kind eyes are all...
October 31st, 2018 16:20 - I N V I C T U S : UNDEFEATED : ANGELA (BRIAN & ANGELA)
There is true compassion and empathy in your needed reminder of amputee...
October 26th, 2018 05:35 - FLY TIPPING (Michael Edwards)
Your artistic mind works yet another amazing image with such few lines -...
October 26th, 2018 02:13 - SUNRISE : SUNSET : AUCKLAND : ANGELA : Rhyming 644 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Your zeal for the wondrous rise and fall of the sun on the island fills...
October 24th, 2018 20:39 - EXERCISE : ESSENTIAL TO EXIST ! : AN ACROSTIC : ANGELA (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Mobility with lots of regular walks is the key which this fine poem brings...
October 23rd, 2018 06:48 - ONE FOOT IN THE GRAVE (The Poet Doctor)
Such a sad and familiar happening n this poorly world - a verse which...
October 23rd, 2018 06:46 - Cupid\'s Arrows (W c)
A charm of a write and delight to read too W.C. - - thank you for sharing.
October 23rd, 2018 03:04 - FOR SHE WOULD BE NO ODALISQUE (Michael Edwards)
\"Finely seasoned flattery\" phrases the treatment of many on the...
October 23rd, 2018 02:44 - The morning after (H. Ray Davis)
Love expressed like this will thrill the fortunate lady - - a beautiful...
October 22nd, 2018 12:52 - A RAMBLE IN THE BRAMBLE (Michael Edwards)
Ha - - Love all the apt rhyming words in this poetic warning against...
October 19th, 2018 11:16 - Half Moon (Sylviasearcher)
A beautiful description in poetic terms of the moon\'s striking radiance...
October 19th, 2018 07:05 - My Everything (Christina8)
Such a heart-warming feel in this lovely ballad dear Christina - your poem...
October 19th, 2018 03:43 - Icarus (Powder Blue) (Syd)
A forceful warning on drug-use and the fall that precedes flights to more...
October 16th, 2018 16:07 - ...and so it is (Andrew Charles Forrest)
The well-chosen image speaks loudly in accord with your powerful words in...
October 16th, 2018 15:58 - You will live on beside me. (EliDagger)
A lament which only those know who have loved much and lost to death - - -...
October 16th, 2018 15:48 - Seville Stunner (The Retired Bloke)
You have instilled an ardour for football viewing with this fervent...
October 16th, 2018 05:31 - MY EWER (Michael Edwards)
Yes I agree the words are special my friend - - I see appreciation for...
October 16th, 2018 02:46 - Inspirational Drought (The Retired Bloke)
Ah - we who daily put pen to poetic paper get the same blockage from...
October 15th, 2018 08:26 - Fallen Idol (The Retired Bloke)
Your poem outlined so well the familiar outcome from drugs and not knowing...
October 15th, 2018 08:15 - NATURAL WORLD (Michael Edwards)
Love the sketch and the three pieces of studied wisdom Michael- -- the...
October 15th, 2018 05:53 - Under Her Rainbow\'s Light. (Kevin browne)
The mind is filled with the sparkle of love in this worthy account of the...
October 11th, 2018 12:44 - Listen or Hear? (Goldfinch60)
Hearing is so different from listening as this wise poem states - - thanks...
October 11th, 2018 06:23 - FOUR SHORTIES (Michael Edwards)
Ah - love the wit in number two but that third shortie ticked every box...
October 10th, 2018 12:20 - BIRDS IN FLIGHT : ESSEX : ANGELA (BRIAN & ANGELA)
So sad that so many New Zealand birds are extinct or vulnerable - as...
October 10th, 2018 12:16 - That Still Small Voice (Kevin Michael Bloor)
So sad though well written the voices heard sometimes by those left in...
October 9th, 2018 11:39 - Family is Forever (Dakota)
Such a well written collection of reasons for considering the value of...
October 9th, 2018 11:29 - Land Softly (Christina8)
You will come out on top and stay there dear Christina for your firm\' and...
October 9th, 2018 11:20 - SUNDAY MORNING AT LOUGHTON POOL (Michael Edwards)
So realistic I was almost there with you dear Michael - - firs rate read.
October 8th, 2018 16:52 - Or so I\'d like to think... (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Such a tender feel to this poem Andrew - -angels are guardians to those...
October 8th, 2018 09:50 - THE HAUNTED MILL ~ VISUAL POEM (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Ha ha ha - - this fun-piece raised more than a smile for my first read of...
October 8th, 2018 05:15 - TO JEANNE (Michael Edwards)
Your wife will adore this one Mike. Simply lovely.
October 4th, 2018 01:05 - Old Rock Stars Never Die (W c)
Oh Yes W.C. - rock stars never die for they leave songs in our hearts . A...
October 3rd, 2018 13:26 - Refreshments Renewals (Orchidee)
A fine spiritual write Orchi.
October 3rd, 2018 13:23 - HE SPURNS APPROACH (Michael Edwards)
A miss-match of marital needs hidden in sensitive imagery Mike - - I know...
October 3rd, 2018 13:15 - FIVE MORE WICKED WORDS : ANGELA & BRIAN : G to K (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Lovely sounding new words to me i;n this witty write about unusual use of...
October 3rd, 2018 13:09 - Carefree? (Goldfinch60)
The challenge of seeing a loved one undergoing such changes must be so...
October 1st, 2018 04:22 - SIX SIMPLE SENRYU SYMBIOTICALLY ~ ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡 (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Fine set of senryu magic dear Brian - -and that lovely young voice singing...
October 1st, 2018 04:12 - Flowered By Rainbows. (Kevin browne)
These wise pieces of poetic advice resound with artistic imagery and stay...
September 30th, 2018 15:55 - FIVE NEW & EXCITING WORDS ~ A to E ~ SENRYU (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A Jim Reeves favourite with a moral and message - - good to see and...
September 28th, 2018 09:47 - One Tear Removed (Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet)
Your gift for words is amazing Tamara - - another gem to your poetic...
September 28th, 2018 09:43 - Anxiety Lifted (Christina8)
An example of going beyond and between to find hope of peace - - dear...
September 28th, 2018 09:35 - Watered Way (Orchidee)
A wonderfully expressed write on the value of the water that is...
September 28th, 2018 06:05
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