Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- What Do I Want From You (Neville)
So many intimate memories belong to those left alone when love goes away -...
December 7th, 2018 04:02 - The Other Side of Fear. (Goldfinch60)
Excellent piece of advice dear Goldi - yes a fearless approach to life...
December 7th, 2018 04:00 - CUTLETS errr COUPLETS (2) (Michael Edwards)
Ha - - my favourite of these couplets has to be the one about Noah and...
December 7th, 2018 02:56 - THE PERFECT CUP OF COFFEE (Michael Edwards)
Michael - Flavours are nonsense when serving good coffee - I love the...
December 6th, 2018 17:43 - The Promise of a Shower (The Retired Bloke)
A place of sheer silence that oozes gross fear -- no space is daubed...
December 6th, 2018 17:34 - Inspiration (Heather Harrisson)
Ah -Heather - this I can relate to and I love the metaphor which runs...
December 6th, 2018 17:25 - A funeral\'s toast (Netashi)
A wish which puts the adventure of living with no regrets into the right...
December 6th, 2018 11:54 - Cova (Neville)
You write of beguiling memories so well Neville - - I am intrigued with...
December 5th, 2018 03:17 - POST OP COMPLICATIONS (Michael Edwards)
Such good news re. the journey back to health again Michael - - after a...
December 5th, 2018 03:12 - A New Day! (Jennie Devallon)
Such a positive and happy read Jennie - - your words are alive with...
December 4th, 2018 14:23 - Faith lost then returned like a boomerang (Poetic Dan)
This read brought me to compassionate tears Dan - - your outlook after...
December 4th, 2018 14:19 - Nothing (Sylviasearcher)
A forceful and well rhymed outcry which highlights the phrase that Nothing...
December 4th, 2018 14:11 - Communication (John Prophet)
A well- constructed reminder of what communication can achieve given time ...
December 4th, 2018 14:07 - A SMALL BUTTERFLY (Yasu Na)
A forceful reminder that we as humans know almost nothing about the...
December 4th, 2018 14:00 - States of Ignored (AJ)
An amazing use of word here to underline the abuse life dishes out to...
December 4th, 2018 13:56 - Come show us...... (Orchidee)
A faith -filled invitation no less dear Orchi - - I love the chorus being...
December 4th, 2018 13:50 - The Fairy on the Tree. (Goldfinch60)
Such a noteworthy read Andy - - that group have won my vote too.
December 4th, 2018 13:46 - CUTLETS errr COUPLETS (Michael Edwards)
Cutlets indeed !! - - If anything fills up a young belly with wind it ...
December 4th, 2018 13:44 - A Little Indiscretion (Neville)
A powerful reminder of what love can do to one or another of parting...
December 4th, 2018 13:40 - WHO\'S SPEAKING? (Michael Edwards)
Oooh - Mike I have done that before now and received a similar...
December 3rd, 2018 17:57 - Artwork or Photography (Goldfinch60)
A most interesting read of your visit to both oil and photography work...
December 3rd, 2018 17:33 - Through Today\'s Time (Orchidee)
A lovely comforting read Orchi.
December 3rd, 2018 17:28 - old winter (Frank Prem)
Yes a haunt of a read - the flow of these mournful lines Frank has a...
December 3rd, 2018 17:27 - The Hunter (Netashi)
These words bring summer to a wintery evening here Theta and when people...
December 3rd, 2018 17:20 - The Christmas Angel (Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet)
A wonderful wish for Christmas blessings to all in that final couplet...
December 3rd, 2018 17:14 - Long Shadows (Neville)
Oh tender the gentle erotica used here to depict a memory never forgotten...
December 3rd, 2018 09:50 - SON OF GOD : BORN IN A MANGER ! ANGELA : A SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
This time of good news and good cheer means light to the world if only...
December 2nd, 2018 14:30 - Beautiful Bruises (Neville)
Thank you for this warm and intimate expression of love so tenderly...
December 2nd, 2018 14:25 - THE BRIDGE ~ BRIAN ~ A Reverse ABCDarian POEM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Excellent just as it is dear Brian - - the word meaning stubborn - i.e....
November 30th, 2018 12:43 - ‘DAD’ (Prettylittlepoet)
So sad this tragic happening when fathers abuse all those in the household...
November 30th, 2018 10:52 - AMASSED TO PLAN (Michael Edwards)
Ha ha - - your mind thinks in every which-way re. words Michael - - love...
November 29th, 2018 03:14 - Guess what ... (Frank Prem)
Congrats. - - wishing the best of success with the memoir Frank - - - ...
November 29th, 2018 03:08 - Life, music and memories (Poetic Dan)
A pleasure to read your tenderly poetic words and listen to a favourite...
November 28th, 2018 04:18 - EMOTION (Michael Edwards)
Ha - Michael - Am smiling at this quirky play on words -- How is that...
November 28th, 2018 01:56 - RICHARD & SHARON ~ 1980 - 2020 ~ RUBY WEDDING (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I am a no-good cook of risen sponges or scones but give me the fruit cake...
November 26th, 2018 17:14 - Hair Today and Gone Tomorrow (The Retired Bloke)
Such a telling happening you capture here in this well rhyme tale of...
November 26th, 2018 17:09 - A MELLOW PLACE (Michael Edwards)
Got lost from the first line in your sensitive and finely crafted tale...
November 26th, 2018 03:55 - Snakebite (Phil_Briggs)
The outing of deep core results of former abuse can only be helpful to...
November 25th, 2018 15:11 - What Do I Believe (Pldabbs)
Strong belief in the right way to view others is brought out so clearly in...
November 25th, 2018 14:52 - OUT OF BOUNCE (Michael Edwards)
Ooooh - - Mike - dare I say I understand this fully - ha ha - - -- ...
November 24th, 2018 09:01 - ONE DAY EACH WEEK (Michael Edwards)
Wow - - she has to go without them for one day of the week - - draughty I...
November 23rd, 2018 07:08 - CAR SENSE IN WINTER ~ BRIAN (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A needed list of essentials for snowy assault Brian - - well even here in...
November 23rd, 2018 06:50 - Seasons of Love. (Goldfinch60)
Beautiful tribute to true love Goldi - a pleasure to read.
November 23rd, 2018 06:46 - Why Do I Love Thee (Neville)
I love the original classic but so heartwarming this modern ode to true...
November 23rd, 2018 06:39 - THE STATISTICIAN (Michael Edwards)
Oh Michael - My brain must be going awry cos after a double read of your...
November 22nd, 2018 17:36 - Writing not Tapping. (Goldfinch60)
Yes dear Goldi poets can be strangely out of this world when we get a...
November 22nd, 2018 17:11 - Awesome Approach (Orchidee)
A fine write Orchi. Thank you for sharing such vital words.
November 22nd, 2018 16:58 - THE WHOLE ARMOUR OF GOD ~ BRIAN & ANGELA (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A fine and vital piece of fighting equipment meant to dispose of Satan\'s...
November 22nd, 2018 12:51 - Thanksgiving (ForeverJesus7)
Thanks for this needed reminder on what being thankful is all about and...
November 22nd, 2018 11:43 - Does it seem as if I’m dreamin’ ? (Frederick Samson)
I know full well how chronic insomnia gets us to a screaming point - your...
November 22nd, 2018 11:40 - Relax? (The Retired Bloke)
A familiar feeling to many including myself -this need to get out and...
November 22nd, 2018 11:31 - Never (Sylviasearcher)
Thank you for this great cascade of rhythmic and expressive words which...
November 22nd, 2018 11:26 - HAPPY THANKSGIVING (Laura🌻)
Thank you sweet lady for this wonderfully kind wish for blessings that...
November 22nd, 2018 11:20 - Obedience Outcomes (Orchidee)
With strong rhyme and rousing warnings against disobeying this read has ...
November 21st, 2018 16:58 - Abattoir Gulls (Neville)
Ah - Loud applause for this flow of bird-assault Neville - - You capture...
November 21st, 2018 11:19 - We Two Ships (Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet)
A compelling read Tamara - you capture the tragic ends so vividly in this...
November 21st, 2018 05:58 - A CHINESE LOVE STORY~ BRIAN (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Ha ha ha - - - loved this play on the Goons famous classic - - took me...
November 21st, 2018 05:22 - DOUBLE TROUBLE (Michael Edwards)
Wow - -Still smiling at your predicament Mike - - hope it is resolved by...
November 21st, 2018 03:35 - Autumn Is With Us - HAIKU. (Goldfinch60)
Love the season - - love that number on a trumpet - - and love your...
November 21st, 2018 03:31 - DAYS OF THE WEEK : ANGELA : A 7 7 Sonnet as an Inverted Columnette ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I well remember having to learn the days of the week in French and have...
November 20th, 2018 12:16 - THE RISING SUN (Michael Edwards)
A calm feel to this charming tribute Michael - - the sun does indeed,...
November 20th, 2018 06:20 - WHEN WE FELL IN LOVE ~ BRIAN & ANGELA ~ A PANTOUM (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Love every burgeoning stanza in this tribute to love - you two do such a...
November 19th, 2018 17:16 - DESERVING OF FINE EPITHETS (Michael Edwards)
The comfort \"pliant love\" brings outstrips all \"false sentiment\" to...
November 19th, 2018 04:42 - TICKLING STICK (Michael Edwards)
A smile to begin my day with a tickle of the vocal chords Michael - Ken...
November 18th, 2018 02:51 - COLOURS OF THE RAINBOW ~ BRIAN ~ A 4 4 6 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Colour is surely a gift from above and brings variety to human experience ...
November 17th, 2018 11:05 - SEASONS OF MY MIND : COLUMNETTE : ANGELA (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A fine new structure Angela and you have presented it well
in columnar...
November 16th, 2018 06:13 - Seasonals (Michael Edwards)
A fine array of the follow-ups as season gives way to season in these...
November 15th, 2018 06:26 - PRAY FOR CALIFORNIA ~ BRIAN ~ A 4 4 4 2 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Awful the devastation described by your sonnet as California burns right...
November 14th, 2018 06:22 - FORGOTTEN (Michael Edwards)
A fine summary of attention paid to the words those whom the world deemed...
November 13th, 2018 10:39 - NATURE LOVES HEXAGONS : ANGELA : A Form Poem (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Your choice of the hexagon shape is one I can really relate to for it is...
November 13th, 2018 04:06 - AND SO TO BED (Michael Edwards)
Still giggling at these lines Michael - - I pity poor Beaty - - h aha -...
November 12th, 2018 03:23 - Midnight Melody (Netashi)
A good mantra for looking at life\'s surprises and learn from them all - ...
November 9th, 2018 13:15 - Time\'s Bouquet (Lorna)
So much expertise used to fill these short lines with love\'s old...
November 8th, 2018 05:46 - All Along (Christina K)
A heartfelt prayer which is so honest and appealing dear Christina - -...
November 8th, 2018 03:41 - O LORD MY GOD : HOW GREAT YOU ARE : ANGELA (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A lovely confession of faith in these compelling lines Angela - -...
November 8th, 2018 03:35 - oh heart (Frank Prem)
Powerful feel to these short lines Frank - a timely reminder that peace...
November 8th, 2018 03:28 - River (Sylviasearcher)
A write to make readers want more of this warm and inviting stream of...
November 7th, 2018 16:16 - Autumn (Lorna)
Lorna you have wrapped Autumn in elegant skirts of vivid fantasy - well...
November 7th, 2018 15:46 - Battle of Cambrai 1917 (John f skinner)
A haunt of a read and a memorable lament of the victims who left their...
November 7th, 2018 15:03 - BUT I CAN WRITE (Michael Edwards)
So good you are home again after the op. Michael - resting now is the...
November 7th, 2018 09:06 - Annoying Attraction (The Retired Bloke)
Ah ha - - I know what you mean my friend !! That central isle is a true...
November 7th, 2018 05:15 - AFTER THE BONFIRE ......... ? ~ BRIAN ~ A SONNET LAMENT (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Good example of a lament Brian - The tale of high treason told without...
November 6th, 2018 12:27 - My heart (Netashi)
A beautiful and gentle confession of love - thank you for sharing it...
November 6th, 2018 12:17 - Can\'t wait! (Christina8)
A lovely look forward to Christmas kindness dear Christina - - may you be...
November 5th, 2018 16:59 - Oxford (The Retired Bloke)
Such a good summary of that means Oxford today and of course days of yore...
November 5th, 2018 16:57 - Bad Desire (Sylviasearcher)
A smouldering write on inner desire - - gentle erotica wrapped in ...
November 5th, 2018 10:40 - Phantoms (LIGHT WARRIOR)
Well said Jason - A timely word wrapped in excellent poetry which sorts...
November 5th, 2018 10:36 - C H R I S T M A S CANDLES : ANGELA (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Such a happy rhyme on candles and with the Christmas celebrations ahead...
November 5th, 2018 10:30 - Caitlyn Leaves Us (Pldabbs)
Oh these words touch th every heart of grief at losing so suddenly one so...
November 5th, 2018 10:25 - HARRY AND MEGHAN : IN AUCKLAND : ACROSTIC 5 3 6 SONNET (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Well done with this very romantic acrostic Angela - - Harry has broken...
November 1st, 2018 23:57 - YOU ARE MY : H A P P I N E S S ! ANGELA & BRIAN (BRIAN & ANGELA)
One of my faves. by Elvis - - your own wording interposed makes it all...
November 1st, 2018 23:49 - Almost Heaven (The Retired Bloke)
You describe that slice of heaven so well here - thanks for the gentle...
November 1st, 2018 13:58 - My eyes (Netashi)
Love the title and the description of those who in your kind eyes are all...
October 31st, 2018 16:20 - I N V I C T U S : UNDEFEATED : ANGELA (BRIAN & ANGELA)
There is true compassion and empathy in your needed reminder of amputee...
October 26th, 2018 05:35 - FLY TIPPING (Michael Edwards)
Your artistic mind works yet another amazing image with such few lines -...
October 26th, 2018 02:13 - SUNRISE : SUNSET : AUCKLAND : ANGELA : Rhyming 644 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Your zeal for the wondrous rise and fall of the sun on the island fills...
October 24th, 2018 20:39 - EXERCISE : ESSENTIAL TO EXIST ! : AN ACROSTIC : ANGELA (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Mobility with lots of regular walks is the key which this fine poem brings...
October 23rd, 2018 06:48 - ONE FOOT IN THE GRAVE (The Poet Doctor)
Such a sad and familiar happening n this poorly world - a verse which...
October 23rd, 2018 06:46 - Cupid\'s Arrows (W c)
A charm of a write and delight to read too W.C. - - thank you for sharing.
October 23rd, 2018 03:04 - FOR SHE WOULD BE NO ODALISQUE (Michael Edwards)
\"Finely seasoned flattery\" phrases the treatment of many on the...
October 23rd, 2018 02:44
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