Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- How Else Would We Know? (Nicholas Browning)
A good way to attract the Muse is quietly sit and wait for those \"words...
March 19th, 2019 06:13 - Intimidating Senryu. (Goldfinch60)
Love the genius of Pererson and yes his playing is quite intimidating when...
March 19th, 2019 06:09 - 20 SHADES OF PURPLE ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A DODECET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
es - oh yes to purples of any description dear A and B - - - penned so...
March 19th, 2019 06:07 - Worship Wonders (Orchidee)
A lovely read Orchi - -- sheep of the pasture is such a telling metaphor
March 19th, 2019 06:04 - CAGE AND CREED (Michael Edwards)
An extraordinary form of \"art\" methinks Michael - would rather by far...
March 19th, 2019 06:03 - Prolet (Neville)
A tribute to Prolet re-read and enjoyed quite as much as first rime around...
March 19th, 2019 05:23 - Lost tickets to ride (Poetic Dan)
Good vibes all the way through these poignant lines Dan........ keep going...
March 18th, 2019 13:22 - DEFINITIONS (3) (Michael Edwards)
Hoe can you keep producing such common-sense wry wisdom wrapped in...
March 18th, 2019 10:56 - Dispelling Myths. (Goldfinch60)
Clever words about knowing why the ironing baskets have bottoms - -your...
March 18th, 2019 09:48 - GRANDDAD WE LOVE YOU ! BRIAN & ANGELA ~ DODECAHEXA (26) (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Well done you two for highlighting a vital need when folk get too old to...
March 18th, 2019 09:44 - No more shelter (Sylviasearcher)
Fantastic structure and powerfully written this first class verse has to...
March 16th, 2019 05:39 - Lucky dip (Poetic Dan)
Best of warm wishes Dan - - I love that last stanza - -so good to know...
March 16th, 2019 04:07 - That Which Aches (Nicholas Browning)
The sad feel which oozes from these worthy lines tugs at the heart in the...
March 16th, 2019 04:04 - DEFINITIONS (2) (Michael Edwards)
Loud applause for your really witty posting - - love the one about
March 16th, 2019 02:42 - Effortless Charm (Ztaysimple)
Ah - so poetic - a great piece of romantic verse.
March 15th, 2019 12:43 - Beware! (Goldfinch60)
Oooh a scary read Goldy - - and is that Henry Fonda I see receiving...
March 15th, 2019 08:06 - Rise (G84)
Good and solid advice for those who want to find positive thinking. A...
March 15th, 2019 07:51 - 24 SHADES OF GREEN ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ COLLABORATION POEM (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Green is a gift to all on earth - you word all its tints so beautifully...
March 15th, 2019 04:44 - The look... (Jeffrey Roy)
You have a beautifully expressive way with words. Love that final line.
March 15th, 2019 04:40 - LUSCIOUS LUCY (Michael Edwards)
Ha ha ha ha for both the fun-sketch and luscious words.
March 15th, 2019 04:39 - Think Things Over. (Kevin browne)
Excellent advice in these well written lines Kev. - - some of the phrases...
March 14th, 2019 17:13 - As Hollows Whisper (Nicholas Browning)
Yes Nicholas I have truly enjoyed your talent for shaping words clearly in...
March 14th, 2019 07:33 - Numbers in Life. (Goldfinch60)
Yes a wonderful journey is this mystery we call life on earth - - an so...
March 14th, 2019 07:25 - Majestic Mount (Orchidee)
An inspiring read Orchi
March 14th, 2019 07:22 - Mourning Song (Neville)
Thursday mid-day - - you keep coming back like a song on my screen ........
March 14th, 2019 07:19 - LITTLE BOY BLUE ~ BRIAN ~ AN ALPHABET POEM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Love that wonderful rhapsody and the lovely alphabet poem - well done...
March 14th, 2019 07:07 - ATHENA\'S FLUTE (Michael Edwards)
More than just super this little jewel - has to be one of your very...
March 14th, 2019 07:03 - Joey played the saxophone (Dusk arising)
Strange how coincidence or fate sometimes brings things together as in...
March 13th, 2019 10:04 - MEANT. (Fay Slimm.)
Many thanks dear L.G. for saving this verse among your favourites.
March 13th, 2019 06:57 - DEFINITIONS (1) (Michael Edwards)
Your clever quips make the day more lighthearted and that\'s what it...
March 13th, 2019 04:56 - Mourning Song (Neville)
Can hear murmurs of mourning in your well-worded song. The pull of these...
March 13th, 2019 04:36 - Dark To Light (Orchidee)
This verse certainly praises the wonders of change from dark to light and...
March 12th, 2019 08:32 - Everywhere I look around (Poetic Dan)
Ha ha - - you describe the wind\'s naughtiest tricks in this bit of...
March 12th, 2019 06:48 - When I Was Dead (Neville)
A scare of a read yet phrased with great metaphor - - deadness which...
March 12th, 2019 05:59 - SPRING IS SPRUNG ~ A FLOW SONNET ~ BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Glorious Vivaldi and a superflow poem - - Spring brings all those...
March 12th, 2019 05:20 - LIMERICK No.60 (Michael Edwards)
What a mess for young Meg....and . the sketch is so funny -wonder whether...
March 12th, 2019 05:18 - Such a Sadness. (Goldfinch60)
The state you describe must be so hard to cope with and my heart goes out...
March 12th, 2019 05:15 - You never forget (Poetic Dan)
Writing it through means our mind can accept and move on as yours is doing...
March 11th, 2019 13:39 - You (Lonelyraccoon)
Welcome to MPS with this short but oh so poignant a write - - I look...
March 11th, 2019 10:12 - You (Lonelyraccoon)
How true these few words can be when blind love guides.
March 11th, 2019 10:10 - WHY DONT PLASTICS DECOMPOSE? BRIAN ~ A DODECET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
An outcry which should be read at all outlets and drummed into every mind ...
March 11th, 2019 07:09 - Je Riviens by Worth (Neville)
A sense of smell can take us back in an instant - - memory of scent calls...
March 11th, 2019 04:18 - The Wind (FineB)
A scary view of what climate change means - thanks for sharing it FineB
March 10th, 2019 13:42 - A Stint In Jail (W c)
A time of detention and incarceration is never forgot - an interesting...
March 10th, 2019 13:41 - Dressing for Seasons. (Goldfinch60)
Glorious music -- symphonic rock is very exciting - - thanks too for the ...
March 10th, 2019 07:30 - Restoring Rejoicings (Orchidee)
A comforting read this Sunday morn Orchi. - - and thank you,.
March 10th, 2019 07:26 - LIMERICK 58 (Michael Edwards)
You are a marvel with limericks my friend. A loud giggle too after...
March 10th, 2019 07:25 - Misrepresentation (Neville)
A case of misunderstanding may be behind many an upset - - I love the...
March 10th, 2019 06:43 - YOU\'RE MY BEST FRIEND : ANGELA : SONNET FOR BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Something of beauty and priceless is love like this between best friends -...
March 10th, 2019 06:14 - Breath of life (JaydeVictoria)
The power of love - -and so beautifully expressed.
March 10th, 2019 06:12 - Leaving our marks (Poetic Dan)
Leaving behind words will assure our memory stays in readers\' minds and...
March 10th, 2019 06:09 - Living the Day. (Goldfinch60)
Wonderfully uplifting these inspiring words Goldy - - shall keep them...
March 9th, 2019 06:12 - I BELIEVE IN YOU ! ~ SONNET FOR ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A poem which no doubt will be specially appreciated by your other half...
March 9th, 2019 06:10 - Not Just Any Words (Neville)
A lovely and fresh invitation to let go our confines and shout words aloud...
March 9th, 2019 05:01 - MARCH 1st 2019 (Michael Edwards)
Sensing each line of flow in your beautiful ode depicting change from cold...
March 9th, 2019 02:10 - BIRD-TALK.. (Fay Slimm.)
Thanks Outback for saving the poem in your favourite list. So pleased you...
March 8th, 2019 15:54 - An Ode To..... (Suresh)
That last line is one to remember for it sums up the precious moments you...
March 8th, 2019 14:20 - Unfinished (Neville)
Re-read this unfinished melody to lost moments just now and can relate to...
March 8th, 2019 14:14 - FRIENDS ~ SEVEN SYNONYMS ~ A SONNET ~ ANGELA & BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Nothing like friends and we can create them if we go out of our way to...
March 8th, 2019 08:26 - Justice Judgement - Chronicles Series (4) (Orchidee)
Agree with Neville here |Orchi - so much blood shed back then when maybe...
March 8th, 2019 08:23 - Love is... (Jeffrey Roy)
Ah - - spot on Jeffrey - love is certainly all this and more - a fine...
March 8th, 2019 08:20 - Don\'t be forgotten (Poetic Dan)
A sound and good reason for taking up words and making them work for our...
March 8th, 2019 08:17 - Boudoir (Neville)
The scene - penned so well has a certain poignancy added as a finalé -- ...
March 8th, 2019 04:45 - HER VEINS (Michael Edwards)
A good lesson in moderation from our talented word-smith and along with...
March 8th, 2019 04:18 - The Path (Stormer551)
Loud applause for this light to finding more pathways toward the flame of...
March 7th, 2019 11:41 - A Poem For Good Eaters (Pldabbs)
You nailed it in one how to get rid ofh high blood pressure - Well...
March 7th, 2019 11:37 - Therapy (JaydeVictoria)
A fine expression and honestly written Jayde - - with such achievements...
March 7th, 2019 09:27 - TOFFEE AND COFFEE (Michael Edwards)
Ha ha- your witty sketches have me chuckling again Mike - -- I love the...
March 7th, 2019 06:23 - Inevitable Transcendence (Valentina)
A warm welcome to MPS Valentina - - your talent for words which tell such...
March 7th, 2019 06:20 - NEW ZEALAND LAMB & CLARET ~ ANGELA ~ A SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
This sounds a delicious way to cook lamb - shall try it soon my friend -...
March 7th, 2019 05:46 - Prolet (Neville)
Inspirational my friend to say the least. - -this revered tribute to...
March 7th, 2019 05:27 - Let Those Encouraging Words (Brooklyn6timesplus)
A fine write of encouragement which we all need from time to time - ...
March 6th, 2019 17:18 - Achieve The Summit (W c)
Such sound advice in these well-written and interesting lines W.C. - - I...
March 6th, 2019 17:16 - Precious Scars (Neville)
ah I meant to mention how apt the illustration of Jananese Kintsugi - -...
March 6th, 2019 05:30 - Precious Scars (Neville)
Your loving assurance of the value of scars when faced and borne comes...
March 6th, 2019 05:28 - It\'s simple! Right... (Poetic Dan)
A lovely read for a wet dull morning - together we really can make life...
March 6th, 2019 04:56 - Remember the Now (SerenWise)
Bound we all are indeed seren - - a medley of reasons to take care of our...
March 5th, 2019 11:59 - Breathless (Mason)
An honest write Mason and maybe now it is out and said those tears will be...
March 5th, 2019 07:42 - Peace (Sylviasearcher)
Each line of agony pierces this reader - a senryu. to end all sens....
March 5th, 2019 07:40 - Flower. (Goldfinch60)
Ah - a lovely personification to set up my day dear Goldy - - what could...
March 5th, 2019 06:50 - WINSOMENESS OF WINTER ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I loved this quartet of the seasons as they appear - - New Zealand...
March 5th, 2019 06:47 - A Laugh Or Two...... (Orchidee)
Oooh the verse went very well and that cat video did it for me - would...
March 5th, 2019 05:43 - What We Have Here (Neville)
Good message my friend with quite a few moves toward getting a grip on...
March 5th, 2019 05:34 - Games (Trin)
Serious points made here trin - -a poignant and touching read and thanks...
March 5th, 2019 04:17 - INSIDE ME. (Fay Slimm.)
Thanks trin for saving this piece as one of your faves. - much...
March 5th, 2019 04:15 - YOU DO NOT SEE (Michael Edwards)
Love it - - love the style and metre of these semi-archaic lines Michael -...
March 5th, 2019 02:40 - Paranoia is right (Poetic Dan)
A wise piece of advice Dan - working together with like knots to undue...
March 4th, 2019 11:31 - Music And Work (W c)
Lovely to read of the part played by birds and clocks in your working...
March 4th, 2019 11:27 - MOPPING UP (Michael Edwards)
Poor Mary gets everything wrong and today she gave me a needed giggle - ...
March 4th, 2019 08:09 - AWESOMENESS OF AUTUMN ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Autumn so worthily worded and the song you chose to go with the read is...
March 4th, 2019 07:57 - Evil in Life. (Goldfinch60)
These lines are positive with love-vibes Goldy - -and wow - a great...
March 4th, 2019 06:20 - Lordly Laudings (Orchidee)
A powerful tribute to faith dear Orchi.
March 4th, 2019 06:17 - In a Room (Sylviasearcher)
Oh I love this romantic invite dear Sylvia - I can relate to each line.
March 4th, 2019 05:50 - I Am That Guy (Neville)
Words can be juggled to provide exciting adventures when we become what...
March 4th, 2019 05:07 - A COUPLE MORE (Michael Edwards)
Supressing unkindness is the way to gain happiness - love the first in...
March 3rd, 2019 14:08 - Paper Cuts (Neville)
Hearts that close should never feel more than a whisper away when...
March 3rd, 2019 06:58 - Talk to me (Sylviasearcher)
A tender gem of a hopeful write Sylvia - - its plea comes touches the...
March 3rd, 2019 02:42 - Locked in Love (The Retired Bloke)
Such a delightful read. A poem filled with affection and gratitude - what...
March 2nd, 2019 17:15 - OBSCURE SENRYUS (Michael Edwards)
Ha ha ha - couldnt get past the laugh at that wry humour of your...
March 2nd, 2019 10:40 - OUR PLANET EARTH : ANGELA & BRIAN : AN ACROSTIC SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
The beauty of earth cannot be replaced and those caring for nature must...
March 2nd, 2019 10:38
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