Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- Do you remember? (JaydeVictoria)
An excellent list of reasons for thinking before we speak - - you...
April 3rd, 2019 12:58 - Why I Choose My Poetic Side? (Nafis Light)
Love and Laughter come first with me too - what better way could our lives...
April 3rd, 2019 10:38 - From overseas (Poetic Dan)
A wonderful find is a love from distant lands - congrats dear Dan -...
April 3rd, 2019 04:31 - Big Empty Space (Neville)
Solemn yet coping with feel of abuse these words span extra space with the...
April 3rd, 2019 03:30 - Stop and Look. (Goldfinch60)
What an abundance we see when we do stop and stare my friend.... thanks...
April 3rd, 2019 03:26 - Hope Of Help (Orchidee)
Lovely organ and words Orchi.
April 3rd, 2019 03:24 - Child of the clouds (Netashi)
An apt reassurance that love has many faces and friendship being one the...
April 2nd, 2019 13:39 - Stop questioning! (Poetic Dan)
Yes too much questioning can lead to discouragement Dan - hope soon you...
April 2nd, 2019 09:01 - Hopeful (Sylviasearcher)
The chorus appeals as it has musical undertones - and my favourtie verse...
April 2nd, 2019 08:58 - Thirsty Tones (Orchidee)
Faith of the best kind finds first place in this inspiring verse Orchi.
April 2nd, 2019 05:16 - How Can I Fail? (Goldfinch60)
And beautiful words you compose in this ballad to real success dear Goldy...
April 2nd, 2019 05:13 - Hungry Corner (Neville)
A strange and sad place rises from your poignant description today Nev - -...
April 2nd, 2019 04:16 - The missing piece. (Jay123)
A cleverly worded piece of metaphor with a sound message which is very...
April 2nd, 2019 04:07 - MELLOW YELLOW ~ ANGELA ~ A 6 6 DODECET ACROSTIC ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
One of the most alluring of dress-colours on the right type of skin is...
April 2nd, 2019 04:02 - The butterfly tree (Crystal Hope)
What a delightful first read of my day - - -I love to see butterflies...
April 2nd, 2019 00:50 - A Thirst Well Quenched (Neville)
Had me a second read of this telling love- write Nev and found it this...
April 1st, 2019 16:13 - Morning and Night (Jeffrey Roy)
Filled with love\'s bounty these warm confessions would comfort any heart...
April 1st, 2019 06:32 - Waiting (Jenny Wren)
A poignancy flows through these lines Jennny -- so telling the message...
April 1st, 2019 06:30 - my heaven (Birddie Jane)
A lovely read bluejay - so colourfully penned - the pink in the...
April 1st, 2019 06:28 - Gone for a Week. (Goldfinch60)
How strong you must be to continue with tending dementia dear Goldy - my...
April 1st, 2019 06:02 - TIME & AGE ~ BRIAN ~ A SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Wishing you years of adventure dear Brian - a lovely read on the need to...
April 1st, 2019 04:05 - Way To Walk (Orchidee)
A beautifully composed confession of faith dear Orchi - thank you for...
April 1st, 2019 04:02 - A Thirst Well Quenched (Neville)
A successful use of the thesaurus in these telling lines Neville - -- a...
April 1st, 2019 03:19 - i will comfort you (Dusk arising)
This write pens real love and so so tenderly in such short lines - - a...
March 31st, 2019 16:26 - LAVENDER\'S BLUE (No 3) (Michael Edwards)
When blows the tide inward and nowhere is private I run for home quickly...
March 31st, 2019 12:44 - Mum (Sue.evans)
Such a wonderful list of reasons to value a Mum - - first rate piece of...
March 31st, 2019 11:43 - To Whom It May Concern (Neville)
Some uniquely meaningful words in this respectful but solemn request my...
March 31st, 2019 05:08 - To be lied to (Paris)
How true that constant lies break down the strongest of relationships -...
March 31st, 2019 04:40 - MOTHERS ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ AN ACROSTIC (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Honour is certainly due to the one who cared for our growth to maturity - ...
March 31st, 2019 04:35 - Sometimes I forget (Poetic Dan)
A lovely and loving Mothers Day tribute to the special lady in your life...
March 31st, 2019 04:32 - An extract (Sylviasearcher)
This piece of admirable prose aptly describes the glories of regeneration...
March 31st, 2019 04:16 - Great Art (MendedFences27)
Loads of applause for this question I have never dared ask Phil - - you...
March 30th, 2019 13:14 - I LUV ME MUDDER ! BENJAMIN ZEPHANIAH ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I agree that the flow and words of this lovely tribute to a well loved...
March 30th, 2019 12:25 - At Peace Once More. (Goldfinch60)
The peace of that walk fills my heart too dear friend and I was almost...
March 30th, 2019 09:59 - LAVENDER\'S BLUE (Michael Edwards)
Am wordless with giggle here Michael - - - where on earth do they come...
March 30th, 2019 08:14 - Before Breakfast (Neville)
Romance could not be better reduced to a few lines of poetic appeal than...
March 30th, 2019 07:07 - I LOVE YOU MORE THAN YOU WILL EVER KNOW ~ ANGELA & BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A medley of reasons for highlighting love shine from your lines like...
March 29th, 2019 17:01 - BENEATH (Michael Edwards)
So glad I caught this one Michael - the quiet you wrote into every line...
March 29th, 2019 16:40 - Cutlery Talking (Neville)
Love this cutlery talk Nev.- your mind works on levels so diverse and...
March 29th, 2019 06:36 - Short & neat (Poetic Dan)
Both quote and words leave the right vibes on choice - a lucid write -...
March 28th, 2019 17:13 - Music in the Stars. (Goldfinch60)
To be there and feel the essence of trad music must have been heaven - ...
March 28th, 2019 17:05 - GRINLOADS OF 575s (2) (Michael Edwards)
Ha - Michael am glad I did not miss this one today - your 575s are a...
March 28th, 2019 14:09 - Jovial And Jubilant (Brooklyn6timesplus)
Sound piece of advice in these lines - an uplifting and welcome read.
March 28th, 2019 14:05 - Leave (Sylviasearcher)
Agree wholeheartedly with Neville\'s comment on the total injustice to...
March 28th, 2019 05:07 - Heart (Neville)
This perceptive write sees through the hardest of outer shells that abuse...
March 28th, 2019 04:58 - In another life (Netashi)
A number of reasons for feeling defeated yet the read holds out hope that...
March 27th, 2019 12:52 - Promise (Sylviasearcher)
An ache for love could not have been written better dear Sylvia.
March 27th, 2019 12:37 - SOLITARY ! BRIAN ~ A THEASAURUS LAMENT SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Wow - you have chosen my favourite number and singer after - -Gilbert...
March 27th, 2019 08:02 - Macabre masquerade (Dusk arising)
Clever - so clever this poetic exposure.
March 27th, 2019 07:58 - GRINLOADS OF 575s (1) (Michael Edwards)
Grins all over me face after reading these fun 575s - - -you have a great...
March 27th, 2019 06:32 - Back Streets of Banjul (Neville)
Conditions for asking abound in such places - - - the term \"good price\"...
March 27th, 2019 04:54 - We\'ll Meet Again (Ettolrahc)
A charming verse of farewell to a loved one that must have brought joy to...
March 26th, 2019 12:14 - Creation Crescendo (Orchidee)
My mind is now filled with enough Allelulias to last me all day - - such...
March 26th, 2019 05:59 - Instead (Sylviasearcher)
Short but saying all it ought - the sea has so much to answer for
March 26th, 2019 05:56 - Saturday Nights Were Special. (Goldfinch60)
Such a walk down memory lane reminded me of a old song - - - \"Those were...
March 26th, 2019 05:40 - CATALOGUE OF CRAZY CATS ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A SCOREODE (20 LINE POEM !) (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Ha ha - love your description of each little kitty - - great read.
March 26th, 2019 05:36 - Misinterpretation (Nicholas Browning)
Good and sound advice in your finalƩ here Nick - - misinterpretation has...
March 26th, 2019 05:32 - Stuck (Neville)
An aptitude for taking three little words and using them for mysterious...
March 26th, 2019 05:27 - Count down (Lonelyraccoon)
Questions we all ask at one time or another and put into poetic lines such...
March 25th, 2019 17:13 - HEY MATE : LETS EMIGRATE ! ANGELA & BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Good to think hard and long before coming to conclusions on best place to...
March 25th, 2019 06:42 - Hey Lazarus (Neville)
Today\'s need for recognition smears itself over unscrupulous word-thieves...
March 25th, 2019 04:56 - Set Sail! (Nicholas Browning)
Your way with metaphor astounds in this piece of poetic tribute Nick -- I...
March 25th, 2019 04:23 - Her Beautiful Smile - Senryu. (Goldfinch60)
A world of meaning in these three lines dear Goldy - thanks for sharing.
March 25th, 2019 04:17 - Nature Notings (Orchidee)
Loved those alleluias Orchi - - thanks for today\'s refreshing stanzas on...
March 25th, 2019 04:14 - SWIM WITH ME (Michael Edwards)
Inspired by such a fine piece your sensual write Mike does more than...
March 25th, 2019 04:06 - Envy (M.E.M.)
A good poetic description of the sin of envy. Nothing good can come from...
March 24th, 2019 17:36 - digging a hole (Jon Nakapalau)
This write tells its own story Jon as in just a few lines you open...
March 24th, 2019 17:23 - Birds on the Wire (Neville)
Nev - after another close look at your birds with the wire a vision of how...
March 24th, 2019 13:04 - PRAY FOR CHRISTCHURCH ~ ANGELA & BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Chrstchurch in my prayerful thoughts as violence has tested all living...
March 24th, 2019 12:19 - BY CLOUDS REVEALED (Michael Edwards)
Wow - - satyrs seeking prancing nymphs - shall visit your neck of the...
March 24th, 2019 04:03 - Birds on the Wire (Neville)
Making life more fun from collective effort needs telepathy - and this I...
March 24th, 2019 02:59 - ELIJAH ~ (An Acrostic) (Lauraš»)
What a wonderful tribute and as an acrostic it works so well and it will...
March 23rd, 2019 14:06 - THE PERIODIC TABLE ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ AN ACROSTIC (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Oh how this takes me back to when tears met my need to remember those...
March 23rd, 2019 13:55 - Endless (Sylviasearcher)
An ache of a read Sylvia - the ferment of sadness follows along every...
March 23rd, 2019 13:53 - Sacrifice (Nicholas Browning)
Clever last line to end this beguiling write Nick - your pen achieves...
March 23rd, 2019 13:09 - The Boy Sat on the Burning Deck. (Goldfinch60)
I am so glad to have caught this funny ditty which captured my laughter...
March 23rd, 2019 13:01 - Victims of Truth (Neville)
An engagingly poetic invitation in this fascinating love poem which your...
March 23rd, 2019 05:29 - BODY DESIGN (Michael Edwards)
Ha ha - -- this post woke me up right enough --smiling as I say thanks...
March 23rd, 2019 01:42 - Marcella (Neville)
Catching a few spare moments with a read of past pleasures and Marcella of...
March 22nd, 2019 15:25 - A Certain Distance (Neville)
So tenderly romantic and penned with an honest wisp of mystery this...
March 22nd, 2019 15:15 - Live poetry reading on the Radio. (Frank Prem)
Frank it must be such fun to read poems aloud on a radio station - - I...
March 22nd, 2019 14:06 - that first morning (Jon Nakapalau)
A beguiling read Jon - and penned to draw from just a few lines the...
March 22nd, 2019 14:02 - DEFINITIONS (4) (Michael Edwards)
A giggle at some of this well written play on definitions has just made my...
March 22nd, 2019 05:58 - Toilet humour (Poetic Dan)
Thanks for the chuckle at you being found by your son and writing with...
March 22nd, 2019 05:13 - Your Face (Sylviasearcher)
This will go into my favourites - it has to be one of your best my
March 22nd, 2019 05:10 - A Life in Grey (Nicholas Browning)
Fantastic imagery in this walk through a peopled town - - your pen queries...
March 22nd, 2019 03:59 - in dark woodland (Dusk arising)
So poetic and atmospheric this write of time spent in dark woodland as...
March 22nd, 2019 03:54 - Recollections (Neville)
Strong recollections of unpleasant happenings and hopefully not from...
March 22nd, 2019 03:45 - Set Her Free. (Goldfinch60)
A truly heart-wrenching read - - you are both in my prayerful thoughts...
March 22nd, 2019 03:32 - VIBRATIONS. (Fay Slimm.)
Thank you kindly Sunshinefalling for adding my poem to your favourites.
March 21st, 2019 21:21 - The Girl Who Tamed a Demon (Nicholas Browning)
Embracing your fright is the way to dispense with demons - good thought...
March 21st, 2019 17:49 - Skylight (Neville)
Just popping back to view again those wondrous untangled webs in your ...
March 21st, 2019 17:46 - Loveās little pheonix (Palomita)
Welcome indeed with this stunning free-verse piece of fine poetry .Some...
March 21st, 2019 16:49 - MICKEY MOUSE RULES OK ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ AN ACROSTIC ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
What that little mouse set alight way back is simply incredible - - I love...
March 21st, 2019 14:13 - LAST STREET STANDING (Michael Edwards)
Love the smooth flow of these lines as they tell their sad tale - your...
March 21st, 2019 14:07 - Skylight (Neville)
Ah a quiet view of night\'s allure.Sky mapped with stars gives pen all it...
March 21st, 2019 14:04 - MARY MARY ..... (Michael Edwards)
Interesting picture in acrylic Mike with lots of movement in those...
March 20th, 2019 06:59 - Upon Your Return (Notapoet)
A beautiful confession of true love and thanks for sharing it - - loved...
March 19th, 2019 17:03 - Body m.o.t (Poetic Dan)
A haunt ot a read Dan - here\'s ho;ping those holes mend soon with lessons...
March 19th, 2019 06:18 - Invocation (SerenWise)
An alluring invitation to a distant but missed lover - and so potent in...
March 19th, 2019 06:15
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