Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- Fine Young Disciples (Neville)
A sound and caring piece of advice Nev. -- life is no fairytale and as...
April 20th, 2019 10:33 - BRIAN ~ MY BIG BEAR HAS LANDED ~ ANGELA ~ 8 8 4 BIDECET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
What an exciting adventure is waiting for you both and also for your...
April 20th, 2019 02:14 - THE LUMBERING KINE (Michael Edwards)
Another super three liner and oh what a wonderfully clear watercolour -...
April 20th, 2019 00:48 - Hey! come here (Poetic Dan)
Ah what a lovely walk I have been enjoying with you and your little one...
April 19th, 2019 13:12 - EASTER ~ ANGELA ~ ACROSTIC (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Short lines and so near to the point where Christianity arises dear
April 19th, 2019 06:39 - Occasions For Oils (Orchidee)
A wonderfully healing read my friend.
April 19th, 2019 03:53 - Faithless. (Goldfinch60)
Your pain and frustration are palpable dear Goldy - my heart goes out to...
April 19th, 2019 03:06 - BOOK OF DESTINY (Michael Edwards)
Destiny\'s book will have no ending methinks dear friend. A profound three...
April 19th, 2019 03:02 - Beware of Mirrors (Neville)
Much food for thought in this verse Nev. - -- an image of self reflects...
April 19th, 2019 02:59 - Evening of Our Great Content (Lorna)
Love the title and you capture it all Lorna and truly peaceful it is. Am...
April 18th, 2019 06:10 - BRIAN = MY HAPPINESS ~ ANGELA ~ A 4 4 4 4 4 BIDECET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Lots of good wishes for your adventure together on South Island - - I...
April 18th, 2019 04:08 - Play. (Goldfinch60)
Ella sings it all and so beautifully - - and your six words whirling...
April 18th, 2019 01:39 - Harbour Side (Neville)
This invitation will move to the core that special friend - of that I am...
April 18th, 2019 01:34 - LIVING IN A DREAM (Michael Edwards)
What a lovely morning surprise - picture and words most engaging. Thanks...
April 18th, 2019 00:20 - WORLD HOSPITALS ~ ANGELA ~ A 5 9 ACROSTIC SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Carers are special people and blessings to you in your profession dear...
April 17th, 2019 16:09 - I Am Enough (SerenWise)
You are more than enough of a poet to rhyme this sad song so well Seren -...
April 17th, 2019 14:49 - dawns delight (re-written) (Dusk arising)
A wonderful feeling of dawn when this special smile awakens a dreamer D.A....
April 17th, 2019 07:05 - Aromatic Anointing (Orchidee)
Aromatic sounds as it is - full of scented beauty and given with love it...
April 17th, 2019 07:01 - WOMAN IN BLACK (Michael Edwards)
Three good words you use here for describing the colour of mourning in...
April 17th, 2019 04:28 - Turn Toward the Window (Neville)
Telling it then as it once was - love soured reads as a powerful piece of...
April 17th, 2019 03:08 - I asked! (Poetic Dan)
Yep - - keep slow and steady and give when you can - - a great race to win...
April 16th, 2019 11:19 - know JB (Dusk arising)
Lurve the rythmn in this number by JB - - - agree with every word - ...
April 16th, 2019 08:27 - Another New Day (Neville)
Yes this is the way to see life dear Nev -- - to welcome another new...
April 16th, 2019 03:44 - THE EGOTIST (Michael Edwards)
Ah - Clever assessment of those who think they are the cat\'s whiskers -...
April 16th, 2019 03:36 - Punctuality Spurned. (Goldfinch60)
Agree with Neville that those two final lines say it all Goldy - - ...
April 16th, 2019 02:44 - The Voyage (SerenWise)
Such a warm appeal in this message to a loved one Seren.
April 15th, 2019 15:49 - Old Sunlight (Neville)
Not yet locked away those sun-dappled moments that stand there in old...
April 15th, 2019 12:53 - The Foggy, Foggy Dew. (Goldfinch60)
That number is now going round in my head now dear Goldy -- your words...
April 15th, 2019 10:21 - I AM SORRY (SensualRomantic)
A poignant feel to this write of
few lines yet excellent length to...
April 15th, 2019 08:34 - Rainbow Colours Shine. (Kevin browne)
An unusual rhyme scheme in this one Kevin but so tenderly phrased and...
April 15th, 2019 08:30 - The Birth of Opals (Neville)
Wow - - missed this one first time around - - tis a bouquet of poetic...
April 15th, 2019 05:57 - Whale Whispering (Neville)
Had a second read of this saline saga and felt every whoosh and weave of...
April 15th, 2019 05:14 - Grow Some Flowers. (Kevin browne)
A most enlightening read Kevin - flowers when tended have their own magic...
April 15th, 2019 05:08 - ANTICIPATIONS of LOVE ~ BRIAN ~ AN 8 8 4 BIDECET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A beautiul read of anticipation and the loneliness meanwhile of being...
April 15th, 2019 05:02 - Now You’re Gone (Apete4010)
Full of the feeling of loss that only a gone Mum can leave behind - my...
April 15th, 2019 05:00 - Serving Serenity (Orchidee)
The first line did it for me Orchi - - Blessed are they that help the...
April 15th, 2019 04:09 - Plum Pencil Skirt (Neville)
Old memories die hard Nev. and no wonder names are forgotten when shapes...
April 15th, 2019 02:38 - MARY HAD .....A RAM (Michael Edwards)
Oh that abstract is gorgeously swathed in colour and looking so long at...
April 15th, 2019 01:59 - what need in me for kisses (Dusk arising)
Very emotive this read of few lines my friend. Love all the phrasing so...
April 15th, 2019 01:56 - Tis Only Angels Crying (Neville)
Two differing views and so well brought home to this reader -- a...
April 14th, 2019 04:22 - TOGETHER AGAIN with BRIAN ~ LOVE ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡 (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Thinking of you both as time rolls along and may Saturday make your...
April 14th, 2019 01:56 - Weep Over Love. (Kevin browne)
A very moving read Kevin - you pen the weeping over the passing of love...
April 14th, 2019 00:58 - Watching (Neville)
Obviously a sad little female who shame on her teases but never plays - -...
April 13th, 2019 10:48 - Fancy a Brew? (SerenWise)
Perceptive use of words in this clever piece which tells a much bigger...
April 12th, 2019 15:56 - Mended Wing (W c)
What a wonderful story of healing a meadowlark and then setting him free -...
April 12th, 2019 11:13 - APRIL (Moordykspot2)
A bouquet of well-penned tribute to beautiful April - thank you for such...
April 12th, 2019 10:01 - Motivated Movements (Orchidee)
Beautiful thoughts Orchi and thank you.
April 12th, 2019 06:52 - at closure (Frank Prem)
Such a peaceful read Frank - delightfully penned this change at the...
April 12th, 2019 06:49 - La Petit Mort (Neville)
A fantastic exposure of la petit mort Nev. and in such delicate language -...
April 12th, 2019 05:18 - SUNRISE ~ SUNSET : ANGELA : A 7 7 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Twelve precious hours and described so well in terms of coming and going...
April 12th, 2019 03:25 - SADNESS (Michael Edwards)
Love the artistic comparison used in these few clever lines Michael........
April 12th, 2019 01:41 - Something Missing. (Goldfinch60)
Nothing beats a good protein breakfast to bolster against our inclement...
April 12th, 2019 01:39 - Night Sky (DesertWords)
I love this well-penned scene of bedding under the stars.The gentle...
April 11th, 2019 16:39 - Vortex (Suresh)
A profound write making me think of the rotation of round-about...
April 11th, 2019 13:20 - TAPS~24 notes (Laura🌻)
An amazing tribute to those who now gone left behind a reason to \"sustain...
April 11th, 2019 05:32 - Repentance Rejoicings (Orchidee)
What a celebratory feel to this lovely write today Orchi.
April 11th, 2019 05:28 - ONCE (Michael Edwards)
Language and its strange means of pronunciation is a matter of where and...
April 11th, 2019 04:40 - Yes! You.. (Poetic Dan)
I Love this short but inspired few lines Dan - -- must read it over...
April 11th, 2019 03:47 - Morning Coffee (Neville)
A poignancy hangs over this small verse of reflection and penned with your...
April 11th, 2019 03:44 - Only a Dream. (Goldfinch60)
Yes this must be one of the best dreams we can have dear Goldy - keep...
April 11th, 2019 02:33 - SIGHTS OF THE SEASONS ~ ANGELA ~ QUATRO QUARANTAS (ANGELA & BRIAN)
You have painted well each wonderful season dear Angela. Thank you for...
April 11th, 2019 02:31 - X-RAYS : ANGELA : A 6 8 4 OCTADECET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A fine explanation of x-rays and what help they are to the many - thank...
April 10th, 2019 16:18 - Birds (JB)
The best reason for listening to song-birds is given in your few lines...
April 10th, 2019 11:38 - Unexpected Perfection (SerenWise)
Beautiful thoughts on love Seren
April 10th, 2019 03:57 - NIGHTS OF SOLITUDE (Michael Edwards)
A solemn reminder that solitude can alter many a mind - good write...
April 10th, 2019 03:56 - Hey.... (Poetic Dan)
I woke with a start of regret - - - Sun was up and I\'d overslept.
April 10th, 2019 03:52 - Shadow Envy (Neville)
Shadows of love never impeach on the other to spoil its simplicity-- such...
April 10th, 2019 03:49 - The Office (Purdy61)
A very telling read.
April 9th, 2019 07:05 - Canvas (Neville)
Answering -- Not if love is the oil your lips feel my friend - - a warm...
April 9th, 2019 04:17 - Greatness Glorying (Orchidee)
Fine write Orchi.
April 9th, 2019 03:07 - You (SerenWise)
That\'s the way love should be Seren - lovely read.
April 9th, 2019 02:38 - Stopped. (Goldfinch60)
Good for the body, mind and soul is dancing dear Goldy -- let the feet...
April 9th, 2019 02:36 - LITTLE BOY BLUE (2) (Michael Edwards)
Ha ha - adult nursery rhymes sure leave a smile on my morning face - ...
April 9th, 2019 02:33 - Woad (SerenWise)
Ah the magic of woad as used by the ancient warriors - - naked the bodies...
April 8th, 2019 13:37 - Poppies (Neville)
The bearers of so many emotions are poppies and what they have become - ...
April 8th, 2019 05:38 - PORTRAITS OF AUTUMN : ANGELA : A QUARENTA* (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Ah - Angela thank you for posting the gifts Autumn brings. The number you...
April 8th, 2019 02:54 - The View from the Window. (Goldfinch60)
What a surprise ending to this meaningful write dear friend - thank you...
April 8th, 2019 02:39 - LITTLE BOY BLUE (1) (Michael Edwards)
The horn of politics blows every which way toward a tuneless future...
April 8th, 2019 00:55 - a wish (Dusk arising)
A very moving song and verse -- Love being part of the permanent cannot...
April 8th, 2019 00:50 - Untitled - IV (Suresh)
Oooh Suresh this couplet draws readers like me into its mystery - - next...
April 7th, 2019 16:50 - Bin Man. (Goldfinch60)
Do hope it was empty that dirty bin Goldy - strange what bin-men can get...
April 7th, 2019 16:47 - LOVE ME : LOVE MY CAT : TIGGA ! ANGELA : A SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Cats are so special and Tigga is now of course - fans worldwide will want...
April 7th, 2019 16:45 - You\'ll never forget me as I\'ll never forget you (Poetic Dan)
Still singing the number inside my mind Dan - - a wonderful feeling is the...
April 7th, 2019 16:42 - The Freedom of Slaves (Neville)
The wonder of flying to freedom never ceases to draw eyes of the captured...
April 7th, 2019 16:37 - Brotin Bönd (SerenWise)
Ouch - - filled with genuine pathos these few well- written lines Seren -...
April 7th, 2019 11:12 - COASTAL EROSION ~ BRIAN ~ AN ACROSTIC 7 7 SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Noting sounds worse than having to live in something so dangerous - - our...
April 6th, 2019 08:57 - Ballerina (Neville)
A love affair to remember when ending with such a tender confession - -- ...
April 6th, 2019 04:28 - Heaven Knows (SerenWise)
A steamy few lines of sensual metaphor which sets this reader\'s fancy...
April 5th, 2019 11:14 - SOLO LIVING ~ YES ~ BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
We owe it to our own self-respect to keep tidy the places we live in and...
April 5th, 2019 06:03 - I don\'t know where I\'m going, but I like it! (Poetic Dan)
What an artistic thing to achieve - playing along with a bird - great...
April 5th, 2019 05:26 - Choices. (Goldfinch60)
Choosing life is the best choice to make every single day dear Goldy.
April 5th, 2019 05:22 - LIMERICK 57 (Michael Edwards)
Am giggling at this - thought that potion was the cat\'s whiskers for...
April 5th, 2019 05:20 - Our Lady of the Harbour (Neville)
Never before have I read a more interesting tale of brave Joan who rode...
April 5th, 2019 03:59 - Blank (MendedFences27)
Excellent reflection on the poet\'s relationship with words on a page - ...
April 4th, 2019 13:25 - Awaken (SerenWise)
Potent and bold this list of sensuous invitations Seren - - - hope they...
April 4th, 2019 13:18 - Wrecking Ball (SerenWise)
If from experience and so vividly painted the past beds fast in memory - -...
April 4th, 2019 12:44 - Banter. (Goldfinch60)
I second that my dear friend Goldy - -whatever has happened to smiles...
April 4th, 2019 06:51 - Curse Made Curseless (Orchidee)
I admire the metre and also the rhyming in this lovely verse - - fine...
April 4th, 2019 06:41 - HAPPINESS IS TRUE LOVE ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A PANTOUM* (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A read full of not only form and style but positive vibes after finding...
April 4th, 2019 06:37 - Read Yourself (Neville)
Hearts will be aflutter after viewing this sensitive verse that I for...
April 4th, 2019 04:24
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