Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- at closure (Frank Prem)
Such a peaceful read Frank - delightfully penned this change at the...
April 12th, 2019 06:49 - La Petit Mort (Neville)
A fantastic exposure of la petit mort Nev. and in such delicate language -...
April 12th, 2019 05:18 - SUNRISE ~ SUNSET : ANGELA : A 7 7 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Twelve precious hours and described so well in terms of coming and going...
April 12th, 2019 03:25 - SADNESS (Michael Edwards)
Love the artistic comparison used in these few clever lines Michael........
April 12th, 2019 01:41 - Something Missing. (Goldfinch60)
Nothing beats a good protein breakfast to bolster against our inclement...
April 12th, 2019 01:39 - Night Sky (DesertWords)
I love this well-penned scene of bedding under the stars.The gentle...
April 11th, 2019 16:39 - Vortex (Suresh)
A profound write making me think of the rotation of round-about...
April 11th, 2019 13:20 - TAPS~24 notes (Laura🌻)
An amazing tribute to those who now gone left behind a reason to \"sustain...
April 11th, 2019 05:32 - Repentance Rejoicings (Orchidee)
What a celebratory feel to this lovely write today Orchi.
April 11th, 2019 05:28 - ONCE (Michael Edwards)
Language and its strange means of pronunciation is a matter of where and...
April 11th, 2019 04:40 - Yes! You.. (Poetic Dan)
I Love this short but inspired few lines Dan - -- must read it over...
April 11th, 2019 03:47 - Morning Coffee (Neville)
A poignancy hangs over this small verse of reflection and penned with your...
April 11th, 2019 03:44 - Only a Dream. (Goldfinch60)
Yes this must be one of the best dreams we can have dear Goldy - keep...
April 11th, 2019 02:33 - SIGHTS OF THE SEASONS ~ ANGELA ~ QUATRO QUARANTAS (ANGELA & BRIAN)
You have painted well each wonderful season dear Angela. Thank you for...
April 11th, 2019 02:31 - X-RAYS : ANGELA : A 6 8 4 OCTADECET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A fine explanation of x-rays and what help they are to the many - thank...
April 10th, 2019 16:18 - Birds (JB)
The best reason for listening to song-birds is given in your few lines...
April 10th, 2019 11:38 - Unexpected Perfection (SerenWise)
Beautiful thoughts on love Seren
April 10th, 2019 03:57 - NIGHTS OF SOLITUDE (Michael Edwards)
A solemn reminder that solitude can alter many a mind - good write...
April 10th, 2019 03:56 - Hey.... (Poetic Dan)
I woke with a start of regret - - - Sun was up and I\'d overslept.
April 10th, 2019 03:52 - Shadow Envy (Neville)
Shadows of love never impeach on the other to spoil its simplicity-- such...
April 10th, 2019 03:49 - The Office (Purdy61)
A very telling read.
April 9th, 2019 07:05 - Canvas (Neville)
Answering -- Not if love is the oil your lips feel my friend - - a warm...
April 9th, 2019 04:17 - Greatness Glorying (Orchidee)
Fine write Orchi.
April 9th, 2019 03:07 - You (SerenWise)
That\'s the way love should be Seren - lovely read.
April 9th, 2019 02:38 - Stopped. (Goldfinch60)
Good for the body, mind and soul is dancing dear Goldy -- let the feet...
April 9th, 2019 02:36 - LITTLE BOY BLUE (2) (Michael Edwards)
Ha ha - adult nursery rhymes sure leave a smile on my morning face - ...
April 9th, 2019 02:33 - Woad (SerenWise)
Ah the magic of woad as used by the ancient warriors - - naked the bodies...
April 8th, 2019 13:37 - Poppies (Neville)
The bearers of so many emotions are poppies and what they have become - ...
April 8th, 2019 05:38 - PORTRAITS OF AUTUMN : ANGELA : A QUARENTA* (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Ah - Angela thank you for posting the gifts Autumn brings. The number you...
April 8th, 2019 02:54 - The View from the Window. (Goldfinch60)
What a surprise ending to this meaningful write dear friend - thank you...
April 8th, 2019 02:39 - LITTLE BOY BLUE (1) (Michael Edwards)
The horn of politics blows every which way toward a tuneless future...
April 8th, 2019 00:55 - a wish (Dusk arising)
A very moving song and verse -- Love being part of the permanent cannot...
April 8th, 2019 00:50 - Untitled - IV (Suresh)
Oooh Suresh this couplet draws readers like me into its mystery - - next...
April 7th, 2019 16:50 - Bin Man. (Goldfinch60)
Do hope it was empty that dirty bin Goldy - strange what bin-men can get...
April 7th, 2019 16:47 - LOVE ME : LOVE MY CAT : TIGGA ! ANGELA : A SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Cats are so special and Tigga is now of course - fans worldwide will want...
April 7th, 2019 16:45 - You\'ll never forget me as I\'ll never forget you (Poetic Dan)
Still singing the number inside my mind Dan - - a wonderful feeling is the...
April 7th, 2019 16:42 - The Freedom of Slaves (Neville)
The wonder of flying to freedom never ceases to draw eyes of the captured...
April 7th, 2019 16:37 - Brotin Bönd (SerenWise)
Ouch - - filled with genuine pathos these few well- written lines Seren -...
April 7th, 2019 11:12 - COASTAL EROSION ~ BRIAN ~ AN ACROSTIC 7 7 SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Noting sounds worse than having to live in something so dangerous - - our...
April 6th, 2019 08:57 - Ballerina (Neville)
A love affair to remember when ending with such a tender confession - -- ...
April 6th, 2019 04:28 - Heaven Knows (SerenWise)
A steamy few lines of sensual metaphor which sets this reader\'s fancy...
April 5th, 2019 11:14 - SOLO LIVING ~ YES ~ BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
We owe it to our own self-respect to keep tidy the places we live in and...
April 5th, 2019 06:03 - I don\'t know where I\'m going, but I like it! (Poetic Dan)
What an artistic thing to achieve - playing along with a bird - great...
April 5th, 2019 05:26 - Choices. (Goldfinch60)
Choosing life is the best choice to make every single day dear Goldy.
April 5th, 2019 05:22 - LIMERICK 57 (Michael Edwards)
Am giggling at this - thought that potion was the cat\'s whiskers for...
April 5th, 2019 05:20 - Our Lady of the Harbour (Neville)
Never before have I read a more interesting tale of brave Joan who rode...
April 5th, 2019 03:59 - Awaken (SerenWise)
Potent and bold this list of sensuous invitations Seren - - - hope they...
April 4th, 2019 13:18 - Wrecking Ball (SerenWise)
If from experience and so vividly painted the past beds fast in memory - -...
April 4th, 2019 12:44 - Banter. (Goldfinch60)
I second that my dear friend Goldy - -whatever has happened to smiles...
April 4th, 2019 06:51 - Curse Made Curseless (Orchidee)
I admire the metre and also the rhyming in this lovely verse - - fine...
April 4th, 2019 06:41 - HAPPINESS IS TRUE LOVE ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A PANTOUM* (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A read full of not only form and style but positive vibes after finding...
April 4th, 2019 06:37 - Read Yourself (Neville)
Hearts will be aflutter after viewing this sensitive verse that I for...
April 4th, 2019 04:24 - Do you remember? (JaydeVictoria)
An excellent list of reasons for thinking before we speak - - you...
April 3rd, 2019 12:58 - Why I Choose My Poetic Side? (Nafis Light)
Love and Laughter come first with me too - what better way could our lives...
April 3rd, 2019 10:38 - From overseas (Poetic Dan)
A wonderful find is a love from distant lands - congrats dear Dan -...
April 3rd, 2019 04:31 - Big Empty Space (Neville)
Solemn yet coping with feel of abuse these words span extra space with the...
April 3rd, 2019 03:30 - Stop and Look. (Goldfinch60)
What an abundance we see when we do stop and stare my friend.... thanks...
April 3rd, 2019 03:26 - Hope Of Help (Orchidee)
Lovely organ and words Orchi.
April 3rd, 2019 03:24 - Child of the clouds (Netashi)
An apt reassurance that love has many faces and friendship being one the...
April 2nd, 2019 13:39 - Stop questioning! (Poetic Dan)
Yes too much questioning can lead to discouragement Dan - hope soon you...
April 2nd, 2019 09:01 - Hopeful (Sylviasearcher)
The chorus appeals as it has musical undertones - and my favourtie verse...
April 2nd, 2019 08:58 - Thirsty Tones (Orchidee)
Faith of the best kind finds first place in this inspiring verse Orchi.
April 2nd, 2019 05:16 - How Can I Fail? (Goldfinch60)
And beautiful words you compose in this ballad to real success dear Goldy...
April 2nd, 2019 05:13 - Hungry Corner (Neville)
A strange and sad place rises from your poignant description today Nev - -...
April 2nd, 2019 04:16 - The missing piece. (Jay123)
A cleverly worded piece of metaphor with a sound message which is very...
April 2nd, 2019 04:07 - MELLOW YELLOW ~ ANGELA ~ A 6 6 DODECET ACROSTIC ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
One of the most alluring of dress-colours on the right type of skin is...
April 2nd, 2019 04:02 - The butterfly tree (Crystal Hope)
What a delightful first read of my day - - -I love to see butterflies...
April 2nd, 2019 00:50 - A Thirst Well Quenched (Neville)
Had me a second read of this telling love- write Nev and found it this...
April 1st, 2019 16:13 - Morning and Night (Jeffrey Roy)
Filled with love\'s bounty these warm confessions would comfort any heart...
April 1st, 2019 06:32 - Waiting (Jenny Wren)
A poignancy flows through these lines Jennny -- so telling the message...
April 1st, 2019 06:30 - my heaven (Birddie Jane)
A lovely read bluejay - so colourfully penned - the pink in the...
April 1st, 2019 06:28 - Gone for a Week. (Goldfinch60)
How strong you must be to continue with tending dementia dear Goldy - my...
April 1st, 2019 06:02 - TIME & AGE ~ BRIAN ~ A SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Wishing you years of adventure dear Brian - a lovely read on the need to...
April 1st, 2019 04:05 - Way To Walk (Orchidee)
A beautifully composed confession of faith dear Orchi - thank you for...
April 1st, 2019 04:02 - A Thirst Well Quenched (Neville)
A successful use of the thesaurus in these telling lines Neville - -- a...
April 1st, 2019 03:19 - i will comfort you (Dusk arising)
This write pens real love and so so tenderly in such short lines - - a...
March 31st, 2019 16:26 - LAVENDER\'S BLUE (No 3) (Michael Edwards)
When blows the tide inward and nowhere is private I run for home quickly...
March 31st, 2019 12:44 - Mum (Sue.evans)
Such a wonderful list of reasons to value a Mum - - first rate piece of...
March 31st, 2019 11:43 - To Whom It May Concern (Neville)
Some uniquely meaningful words in this respectful but solemn request my...
March 31st, 2019 05:08 - To be lied to (Paris)
How true that constant lies break down the strongest of relationships -...
March 31st, 2019 04:40 - MOTHERS ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ AN ACROSTIC (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Honour is certainly due to the one who cared for our growth to maturity - ...
March 31st, 2019 04:35 - Sometimes I forget (Poetic Dan)
A lovely and loving Mothers Day tribute to the special lady in your life...
March 31st, 2019 04:32 - An extract (Sylviasearcher)
This piece of admirable prose aptly describes the glories of regeneration...
March 31st, 2019 04:16 - I LUV ME MUDDER ! BENJAMIN ZEPHANIAH ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I agree that the flow and words of this lovely tribute to a well loved...
March 30th, 2019 12:25 - At Peace Once More. (Goldfinch60)
The peace of that walk fills my heart too dear friend and I was almost...
March 30th, 2019 09:59 - LAVENDER\'S BLUE (Michael Edwards)
Am wordless with giggle here Michael - - - where on earth do they come...
March 30th, 2019 08:14 - Before Breakfast (Neville)
Romance could not be better reduced to a few lines of poetic appeal than...
March 30th, 2019 07:07 - I LOVE YOU MORE THAN YOU WILL EVER KNOW ~ ANGELA & BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A medley of reasons for highlighting love shine from your lines like...
March 29th, 2019 17:01 - BENEATH (Michael Edwards)
So glad I caught this one Michael - the quiet you wrote into every line...
March 29th, 2019 16:40 - Cutlery Talking (Neville)
Love this cutlery talk Nev.- your mind works on levels so diverse and...
March 29th, 2019 06:36 - Short & neat (Poetic Dan)
Both quote and words leave the right vibes on choice - a lucid write -...
March 28th, 2019 17:13 - Music in the Stars. (Goldfinch60)
To be there and feel the essence of trad music must have been heaven - ...
March 28th, 2019 17:05 - GRINLOADS OF 575s (2) (Michael Edwards)
Ha - Michael am glad I did not miss this one today - your 575s are a...
March 28th, 2019 14:09 - Jovial And Jubilant (Brooklyn6timesplus)
Sound piece of advice in these lines - an uplifting and welcome read.
March 28th, 2019 14:05 - Leave (Sylviasearcher)
Agree wholeheartedly with Neville\'s comment on the total injustice to...
March 28th, 2019 05:07 - Heart (Neville)
This perceptive write sees through the hardest of outer shells that abuse...
March 28th, 2019 04:58 - In another life (Netashi)
A number of reasons for feeling defeated yet the read holds out hope that...
March 27th, 2019 12:52 - Promise (Sylviasearcher)
An ache for love could not have been written better dear Sylvia.
March 27th, 2019 12:37 - SOLITARY ! BRIAN ~ A THEASAURUS LAMENT SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Wow - you have chosen my favourite number and singer after - -Gilbert...
March 27th, 2019 08:02 - Macabre masquerade (Dusk arising)
Clever - so clever this poetic exposure.
March 27th, 2019 07:58
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