Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- A stands for aesthetic (Netashi)
Some adeptly crafted imagery in these engaging lines Theta - - a telling...
February 12th, 2019 13:57 - Self Harm (Neville)
Oh Neville - - that telling last stanza goes right to the core of most...
February 12th, 2019 05:41 - PAINS OF YESTERDAY (Michael Edwards)
Deep and comforting these poetic words of conclusion on sleep\'s benefit...
February 12th, 2019 03:02 - STATUS QUO ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A DODECET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Ah - - loud applause for this lovely style and flowing reminder of status...
February 11th, 2019 06:25 - Save the Elephant 🐘 (Joanna Garrido)
Wholeheartedly agree with this well written plea - - animals like...
February 11th, 2019 06:22 - Mirrors Cracked (Neville)
Oooh break-ups are made of these reflections - well written and to the...
February 11th, 2019 05:28 - MARY HAD...(3) (Michael Edwards)
Ha - thanks for this fun-piece Michael - - Love the beautiful lily in...
February 11th, 2019 03:33 - Our Best (Lorna)
Wise words beautifully expressed Lorna. We can do only our best for our...
February 8th, 2019 06:39 - THE ORCHARD (Michael Edwards)
The feel of quiet and burgeoning fruit stays well after this excellent...
February 7th, 2019 14:04 - The Lady of Shallott Rises. (Goldfinch60)
Oh clever you Goldi - to do a puzzle of that complication would drive me...
February 7th, 2019 14:01 - POEM WITHOUT WORDS ~ BRIAN ~ G U I T A R Acrostet ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Fine acrostic and oh those guitars - a truly favourite instrument with me...
February 7th, 2019 13:58 - Vineyard Valuings - Mark\'s Gospel (15) (Orchidee)
An enjoyable and informative read with lessons to learn Orchi.
February 7th, 2019 13:55 - Spilled milk (Netashi)
An engaging read and warning on what rage can taint and spoil - - ...
February 7th, 2019 13:52 - Evergreen pastures (Caleb.A)
Expression, metre and pace make this tale of pre-birth a special read...
February 7th, 2019 13:41 - Victims of Indifference (Neville)
Labels are often meant to be negative where people who have them attached...
February 7th, 2019 09:47 - C stands for calligraphy (Netashi)
Sincere thanks for this cascade of reasons that a real poet has to...
February 7th, 2019 03:17 - UNLUCKY IN LOVE ? : ANGELA : RHYMING SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Good observations on the state of some relationship;s when love is a word...
February 6th, 2019 16:13 - Your Hand (Rrodriguez)
A powerful scene your words set when time of death draws near to a loved...
February 6th, 2019 14:56 - A Day Changes (W c)
Vividly worded this poetic change from season to season. A first rate...
February 6th, 2019 14:53 - My core (Joseph M Marion)
So very romantic and honestly written this read touches the core of true...
February 6th, 2019 14:51 - Once Upon a Tablecloth (Neville)
A giggle a line for me in this tale of a lily-white thigh signing abroad...
February 6th, 2019 14:47 - At least, that\'s me. (Siranswerer)
Excellent poetic description of the ins and outs when counting the cost of...
February 6th, 2019 12:03 - Sickness (Sylviasearcher)
An outpour of needed words in this revolt against pharma-control - -...
February 6th, 2019 03:25 - The Hunter (CindyB)
A mysterious feel in every line of this intriguing write Cindy - - a haunt...
February 5th, 2019 07:16 - 575s - SERIOUS (1) (Michael Edwards)
The short but punchy lines you use stay with this reader long after the...
February 5th, 2019 07:09 - Transfer (Jabberwocky)
Ha ha - - original thinking on the over-use of cyber-offers. Love the last...
February 5th, 2019 07:08 - Posturing (Jabberwocky)
The sentiments underlying these words touch the heart when last lines...
February 5th, 2019 07:05 - Words (Lorna)
Ah - these lines say it all when words have been held in abeyance for...
February 5th, 2019 07:02 - WHERE ARE THE CLOWNS ? BRIAN ~ A RHYMING 4 4 4 2 SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Loud applause Brian for this well written look-back at my girlhood\'s...
February 5th, 2019 06:26 - Jun Kenshi (Neville)
Jun Kenshi - - What a transcendent place to achieve Neville - - love the...
February 5th, 2019 06:22 - Forecast (Netashi)
A heart-wrenching lament over the loss of a loved one - - a powerful set...
February 4th, 2019 14:49 - I Have No More Ideas. (Kevin browne)
Such an original conception of repetitious use Kevin - - great read
February 4th, 2019 06:42 - LOVE ME : LOVE MY CAT ! ANGELA : A SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Ah - such a good description of a cat\'s aloof air - a feline reproof in...
February 4th, 2019 06:37 - POLITICAL CORRECTNESS (Michael Edwards)
Ha ha - -another clever poetic angle you easily give to that racist-word...
February 4th, 2019 03:59 - Glass Lips (Lee Renard Caspian)
Powerful write Lee - an apt word is \"contortionist\" where vulnerablity...
February 4th, 2019 03:54 - Something Rises (CindyB)
The form and line-length add their own pace to this intriguing write Cindy...
February 4th, 2019 03:51 - Riches Restrainings - Mark\'s Gospel (12) (Orchidee)
Fine thoughts in this read Orchi.
February 4th, 2019 03:46 - New or Old. (Goldfinch60)
Agree wholeheartedly - comfort comes from clothing that has warmed the...
February 4th, 2019 03:42 - Virus (Neville)
Fro just the one word sprung all these images that so expertly leads the...
February 4th, 2019 03:39 - Ink Blots (Neville)
Good style and flow to this intriguing piece Neville - Ink blobs on paper...
February 3rd, 2019 10:53 - S U N D A Y ~ A Day for Peace & Praise ~ BRIAN & ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Sunday is special for all sorts of reasons to many today and as this piece...
February 3rd, 2019 10:44 - Frozen (Syd)
First rate piece again Syd and which poetically reflects the present...
February 3rd, 2019 10:39 - A Box With No Light (The Retired Bloke)
That would be the worst of nightmares to find oneself locked in some sort...
February 3rd, 2019 10:36 - TONIGHT. (Fay Slimm.)
MY APOLOGIES FOR THE AWFUL MISALIGNMENT OF THIS PIECE - I CAN DO NOTHING...
February 1st, 2019 07:30 - Old Age Phonephobia? (Goldfinch60)
Oh the sax has always blown me away my friend - - - such cool cool music ...
January 31st, 2019 16:53 - WISH LIST HOLIDAYS ~ ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Italy too for my first choice at this moment in time - - but so many I...
January 31st, 2019 16:49 - Many Things to Many Men (Neville)
Powerful imagery to help with grief - - your friend in his loss will no...
January 31st, 2019 10:27 - Gone Away. (Goldfinch60)
Goldi my heart goes out to you in the problems of tending dementia - -- it...
January 30th, 2019 14:14 - BRIDGE OVER TROUBLED WATER ~ SIMON & GARFUNKEL ~ BRIAN ~ An 8 6 Sonnet ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Ah - - an oldie goldie that certain number but has never lost its...
January 30th, 2019 14:06 - Countless Indiscretions (Neville)
Love the original way you use rhymed words in this read Neville - - the...
January 30th, 2019 13:56 - I wake everyday (Joseph M Marion)
Ah - - a beautiful read Joseph - - a fortunate lady to receive such tender...
January 30th, 2019 13:43 - Horses and Gates (W c)
Ah - what an interesting read W.C. and that lovely leaping horse is...
January 30th, 2019 13:40 - NO GOLD TO GLISTEN (Michael Edwards)
Wonderful metaphors used in this intriguing write Michael - loved every...
January 30th, 2019 08:05 - Everlasting Hold (Gino)
Gino
Thanks for such a tender paternal tribute to well loved sons - it...
January 30th, 2019 02:47 - Clickety Click (Joanna Garrido)
So touchingly good this account of family disturbance when one parent...
January 29th, 2019 16:48 - WELLINGTON (N Z) : ANGELA : A Barrel Acrostic (ANGELA & BRIAN)
All those invitations make Wellington a special place indeed - - a lovely...
January 29th, 2019 10:40 - Be (Michael Edwards)
A cascade of poetic wisdom again from your witty imagination my friend. -...
January 28th, 2019 18:21 - But is it Poetry? (Goldfinch60)
Poetry exposes the heart and mind so all writings are poetry to those who...
January 28th, 2019 18:16 - Just A Second....! (Orchidee)
An informative write Orchi and thank you.
January 28th, 2019 18:11 - WITCHDOCTORS! (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
Ah - power used badly ends often in sadness for those who need most a...
January 28th, 2019 18:08 - F E B R U A R Y ~ BRIAN ~ A Barrel Acrostic (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Oh I know the snow\'s floating causes such chaos but each flake is unique...
January 28th, 2019 17:44 - Barren Land (Sylviasearcher)
Excellent read Sylvia - - love all the metaphors along with fine rhyming.
January 28th, 2019 17:34 - Might She by Chance be a Witch (Neville)
Another shared moment of question and answer with sensuous phrasing to...
January 28th, 2019 17:32 - From this moment (Joseph M Marion)
The essence of romance fills every line in this wonderful write to a much...
January 28th, 2019 17:14 - Oldest Mirror (Netashi)
The wings of youth as mentioned by your tribute to sibling wisdom make...
January 28th, 2019 17:12 - The sunshine days (Aa Harvey)
A tender array of loving words here -
- thanks for sharing it with...
January 28th, 2019 07:42 - Towards My Rosie Lee. (part 1) (Kevin browne)
What a moving write and tale told so well - -your way with words is...
January 25th, 2019 17:33 - Mirislavka (Neville)
An intriguing read Neville - - - these romantic walks down your memory...
January 25th, 2019 04:18 - Calliope Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
A fine testimony to our great and wonderful Muse - - thank you dear...
January 25th, 2019 04:09 - Ms Melancholy (Netashi)
Your warm empathy is so evident in this sad account of a young girl having...
January 24th, 2019 13:46 - To all ladies encouragement (Joseph M Marion)
Such encouraging words to all ladies and so gently expressed. Thank you...
January 24th, 2019 11:49 - EVOKING. (Fay Slimm.)
Thank you to Sylvia and Sunshine for saving this poem to your favourite...
January 24th, 2019 07:08 - ELEMENTS IN THE ROOM ! BRIAN & ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A truly inspiring read and so well researched - -- those elements which...
January 24th, 2019 07:05 - Waiting for Cancer (Neville)
The sad unhappy state oozes through every line of this masterful poem...
January 24th, 2019 07:00 - ARTY COUPLETS (Michael Edwards)
Spot on !!!! - -your couplets are never anything else but arty dear...
January 24th, 2019 03:55 - An Oncoming Storm (GeorgiaRayne)
You describe the coming weather-change very well here Geogia - - I like...
January 24th, 2019 02:58 - TO A MOUSE ~ ROBBIE BURNS ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
So wonderfully recited this Scottish reminder of mice and men\'s destiny -...
January 23rd, 2019 14:10 - My wicked witch (Netashi)
A fine read of opposites in family bond and what can happen when love...
January 23rd, 2019 13:57 - An Occasional Dream (Neville)
A touch of the ironic contained in these few cleverly gentle lines Neville
January 23rd, 2019 04:37 - Stuck (Whisperingquill)
The erotic\'s vivid heat clearly portrayed yet full of discreet metaphor...
January 23rd, 2019 04:22 - Mirage (Joanna Garrido)
Those short lines hit all the buttons for me Joanna - - contrasts you made...
January 23rd, 2019 04:15 - Anaphora (Gary Edward Geraci)
Clever haiku and so very true. Thanks for posting it Gary.
January 23rd, 2019 04:07 - tick tock (Psychofemale)
Can relate to the words in this verse - - time stretches itself double...
January 23rd, 2019 04:05 - A (Michael Edwards)
Chuckling at that witty drawing I read the verse and smiled even more at...
January 23rd, 2019 04:03 - The Part Of Love I\'m Scared Of. (Kevin browne)
Such powerful and moving words Kevin - -saddest of last lines but...
January 22nd, 2019 06:37 - FESTAL LIGHT (Michael Edwards)
Your poetic style ever fascinates and as usual I want to read this over...
January 22nd, 2019 06:35 - How do I (Joseph M Marion)
Beautifully romantic words Joseph. A lovely read.
January 21st, 2019 18:03 - ARTISTIC LICENCE (Michael Edwards)
Art is as you tell it dear friend - an interpretation of reality at large...
January 21st, 2019 17:55 - Love of Healing. (Goldfinch60)
Such a wonderful calling and those who hear it will feel joy that never...
January 21st, 2019 17:40 - Faith For Forgiveness - Mark\'s Gospel (4) (Orchidee)
Well scribed again Orchi - - cancelling Heaven\'s forgiveness is a...
January 21st, 2019 17:36 - Enlightenment (Neville)
Great tale again Neville - you have a way with words that make scenes...
January 21st, 2019 17:32 - OH WHAT A BEAUTIFUL DAY ! BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A day well spent and described so well dear Brian - - early rise to...
January 21st, 2019 17:26 - Puff The Magic Dragon. (Kevin browne)
Such a beautiful walk down memory land with all these fun reminders dear...
January 21st, 2019 17:21 - Shifting Adagios (Whisperingquill)
Oh the emotion and pathos of music and verse together in this excellent...
January 21st, 2019 17:13 - miscarriage (Lainacarson98)
Good and well written advice to a poor self-blaming female after the...
January 21st, 2019 17:10 - Exonerated (Heather Harrisson)
A powerfully described tale of innocence jailed and then having to fight...
January 21st, 2019 17:06 - The Death of Planet Earth (Joanna Garrido)
A powerful and needed warning to all greedy earthlings - thanks for...
January 21st, 2019 17:01 - My Lady Pleases Me This Way (Neville)
The read set my senses a-tingle dear Neville so I suspect your verse...
January 18th, 2019 10:58 - Will (The Retired Bloke)
Good different usage of just one important word. Needed question asked as...
January 18th, 2019 10:50 - Restless Sleep (Markashley1961)
The search for lost love finds us even in our deepest dreams Mark - -such...
January 18th, 2019 07:24
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