Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.

• A (Michael Edwards) Chuckling at that witty drawing I read the verse and smiled even more at...
  January 23rd, 2019 04:03
• The Part Of Love I\'m Scared Of. (Kevin browne) Such powerful and moving words Kevin - -saddest of last lines but...
  January 22nd, 2019 06:37
• FESTAL LIGHT (Michael Edwards) Your poetic style ever fascinates and as usual I want to read this over...
  January 22nd, 2019 06:35
• How do I (Joseph M Marion) Beautifully romantic words Joseph. A lovely read.
  January 21st, 2019 18:03
• ARTISTIC LICENCE (Michael Edwards) Art is as you tell it dear friend - an interpretation of reality at large...
  January 21st, 2019 17:55
• Love of Healing. (Goldfinch60) Such a wonderful calling and those who hear it will feel joy that never...
  January 21st, 2019 17:40
• Faith For Forgiveness - Mark\'s Gospel (4) (Orchidee) Well scribed again Orchi - - cancelling Heaven\'s forgiveness is a...
  January 21st, 2019 17:36
• Enlightenment (Neville) Great tale again Neville - you have a way with words that make scenes...
  January 21st, 2019 17:32
• OH WHAT A BEAUTIFUL DAY ! BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN) A day well spent and described so well dear Brian - - early rise to...
  January 21st, 2019 17:26
• Puff The Magic Dragon. (Kevin browne) Such a beautiful walk down memory land with all these fun reminders dear...
  January 21st, 2019 17:21
• Shifting Adagios (Whisperingquill) Oh the emotion and pathos of music and verse together in this excellent...
  January 21st, 2019 17:13
• miscarriage (Lainacarson98) Good and well written advice to a poor self-blaming female after the...
  January 21st, 2019 17:10
• Exonerated (Heather Harrisson) A powerfully described tale of innocence jailed and then having to fight...
  January 21st, 2019 17:06
• The Death of Planet Earth (Joanna Garrido) A powerful and needed warning to all greedy earthlings - thanks for...
  January 21st, 2019 17:01
• My Lady Pleases Me This Way (Neville) The read set my senses a-tingle dear Neville so I suspect your verse...
  January 18th, 2019 10:58
• Will (The Retired Bloke) Good different usage of just one important word. Needed question asked as...
  January 18th, 2019 10:50
• Restless Sleep (Markashley1961) The search for lost love finds us even in our deepest dreams Mark - -such...
  January 18th, 2019 07:24
• For The Homeless (W c) Empathy is its own payment to kind souls who give of themselves to others...
  January 18th, 2019 05:08
• Red Sky (Joanna Garrido) Touchingly poignant these beautifully sad words.
  January 18th, 2019 05:06
• Proximity (Whisperingquill) A first rate write on the meaning of emotional neglect when love is facing...
  January 17th, 2019 09:41
• Being (Sylviasearcher) Such a poignant appeal in this outpour of Being - a most...
  January 17th, 2019 09:34
• forgotten field (Markashley1961) Loud applause for this first rate write on dark fields of lament Mark - ...
  January 17th, 2019 05:58
• MORE HERBS & SPICES ~ BRIAN ~ An ABC Rhyming Acrostic ! (ANGELA & BRIAN) Glad you included the humble nastursium in your interesting list of herbs...
  January 17th, 2019 05:54
• Turquoise (Neville) The colour of blue in your write called Turquoise gave me a walk down...
  January 17th, 2019 05:49
• Beautiful (Mia_Rose) A lovely and positive read Mia - - those last two lines are what we should...
  January 16th, 2019 13:55
• SHE WILL NEVER WALK AGAIN (Ruthdeming) Welcome to this friendly poetry site Ruth - - your first poem makes a...
  January 16th, 2019 11:52
• Score for Words. (Goldfinch60) Words and wonderful score together paint a picture of patient experience ...
  January 16th, 2019 09:52
• The Better Version of Us (Denise) An emotional tug through each line of this tribute to love brought tears...
  January 16th, 2019 09:48
• Empty Spaces (Markashley1961) Such a heart-touching read Mark - - those spaces which dark with emptiness...
  January 16th, 2019 09:44
• Practical Preparation - Mark\'s Gospel (1) (Orchidee) A fine testament to the Baptist\'s ministry of preparation. Thanks for...
  January 16th, 2019 09:42
• The Weavers Knot (Neville) So evocative with its gentle reminders of erotic alertness when bewitched...
  January 16th, 2019 09:35
• Its never empty! (Poetic Dan) I once read Dan that the mind has power but not over will - there is a...
  January 15th, 2019 13:31
• Our Family Games (W c) Ah - those were the days my friend - - family times ever stay in the mind...
  January 15th, 2019 13:26
• LUSTS EMBRACE (Michael Edwards) Narrow minds can stoke coals to flaming fires - yes indeed - love this...
  January 15th, 2019 10:52
• 🧠💔A.D.H.D (YoursTruly9) Such a brave yet instructive write - thank you for sharing it.
  January 15th, 2019 10:49
• Morning Glory. (Goldfinch60) Reading this brought tears to my eyes Goldi - your love for sweetheart is...
  January 15th, 2019 10:48
• Hope, Help, Healing (Orchidee) Uplifting thoughts here - thank you Orchi.
  January 15th, 2019 10:44
• Borrowed Characters (Neville) Borrowed indeed are the characters of people who like to ferment both...
  January 15th, 2019 10:43
• ANGELA ~ MY HAPPINESS ~ BRIAN ~ Poeme d\'Amour ! (ANGELA & BRIAN) Love in all its wonderful faces shine from your words and the beautiful...
  January 15th, 2019 10:36
• Gossip (Joseph M Marion) You describe the effects this flourishing devil called Gossip has on any...
  January 15th, 2019 10:30
• The Opposite of Up (Sylviasearcher) Inventive and compelling this read on the state of being between the ups...
  January 15th, 2019 10:20
• DATING 2019 🧡 ANGELA & BRIAN 💙 A RHYMING SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN) Ah = a love to sigh for - a very blessed fellow is your Brian methinks -...
  January 14th, 2019 08:59
• Golden Fleece (Tiffany_Arnold) A positive and very encouraging message Tiffany and thanks for sharing...
  January 11th, 2019 14:38
• Evening to Dawn. (Goldfinch60) Changes by light and darkness and so beautifully described Goldi - - I...
  January 11th, 2019 06:29
• Stealing La Petit Morts underneath a cerise moon/Velvet Strands (Whisperingquill) Compelling read and so adeptly crafted - - a favourite for sure. Thanks...
  January 11th, 2019 03:26
• Separations (Lorna) The flow and appeal of this poignant verse stays long after the read - - -...
  January 11th, 2019 03:19
• Everything now has color (Netashi) Colour can be a saviour to sight that has seen only sad black and white -...
  January 10th, 2019 17:33
• Recovery rhyme and to thank all of life (Poetic Dan) Fine write Dan -- a writer\'s passion needs an outlet for as this verse...
  January 10th, 2019 17:04
• Lucky In Love (W c) A celebration of true love in every line dear WC - --- would that all...
  January 10th, 2019 16:58
• TEN HEALTHIEST UK UNIVERSITIES ~ BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN) Yes it pays to look at the curriculum offered by such places and then make...
  January 10th, 2019 13:11
• Matter (Dakota) The appeal of questions on life\'s unfairness and brevity comes through...
  January 10th, 2019 04:56
• SIMPLE CHORDS (Michael Edwards) Lovely this delicate introduction to a tale which could have an...
  January 10th, 2019 04:49
• Tell Me (Neville) A delicate and tender position when love on the part of one becomes...
  January 10th, 2019 04:47
• You Did It (Psychofemale) Such an appealing read - -- the challenge of giving the heart into...
  January 10th, 2019 04:43
• HERBS & SPICES ~ An ABCDarian POEM ~ ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN) Hi Angela - - blessings to you too as you experiment with herbs and spices...
  January 7th, 2019 09:26
• Epiphany Enquirings (Orchidee) A lovely portrayal of the One who came from the small town of Bethlehem -...
  January 7th, 2019 05:56
• HERBS & SPICES ~ An ABCDarian POEM ~ ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN) Such a yummy addition to the first read of my morning dear Angela - - ...
  January 7th, 2019 05:53
• WINTER CLOSES (1) (Michael Edwards) An engaging short anthem to winter\'s closure - - another gem of a...
  January 7th, 2019 05:00
• SNOWDROPS ! A 7 7 MIRROR SONNET ~ BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN) There are carpets of snowdrops that open around the new year near to where...
  January 2nd, 2019 09:02
• LIFES DECISIONS ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ AN ACROSTIC 5 9 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN) This lovely look at the reason for sparkle and display at year\'s...
  January 1st, 2019 16:43
• The Blue Flames of Immortality (Joanna Garrido) Oh Yes - - SHE of the Rider Haggard -inspired mind - - a great choice of...
  January 1st, 2019 14:14
• Dali’s Eyes (Neville) Great structure to this tribute - Dali and Hemingway are both...
  January 1st, 2019 14:10
• LOOKING FORWARD (Dusk arising) A clever play on words in this seriously good write describing the scary...
  January 1st, 2019 09:35
• New Beginnings (The Retired Bloke) Excellent rhyming in these much needed reminders of New Year significance...
  January 1st, 2019 05:48
• IN DREAMS (Michael Edwards) A poem of mystic appeal and a picture that saw the beginnings of challenge...
  January 1st, 2019 04:45
• POLLUTED PLANET 2019 ~ ANGELA & BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN) A haunt of a read with the graphic and number bearing out these dire...
  December 31st, 2018 03:47
• HAPPY NEW YEAR TO ALL AT MPS (Michael Edwards) Thanks for the bit of early morning lingual fun after your lovely New Year...
  December 31st, 2018 01:17
• NEW YEAR : 2019 : IN THE PINK : ANGELA & BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN) Good rhyming and clear advice in this wish for blessings as new year rolls...
  December 30th, 2018 14:06
• Dream of Peace. (Goldfinch60) An apt dream dear Goldi this need for peace between nations and people ...
  December 30th, 2018 14:02
• Angels Acclaimings (Orchidee) A fine reminder of who holds all truth Orchi.
  December 30th, 2018 14:01
• arms trade (Dusk arising) A powerful few lines of mindful sympathy for those caught between guns...
  December 30th, 2018 13:59
• Rough Sketched & True (Neville) Loud cheers for this lyrical walk around countryside with an artistic eye...
  December 30th, 2018 05:33
• Ode To Bianca (W c) Cats are our companions and deserve this fine ode as a tribute W.C. - a...
  December 29th, 2018 14:05
• Wind Washed & Flying (Neville) An engaging read filled with gentle erotica so discreetly described it ...
  December 29th, 2018 03:54
• New Day - Haiku to Senryu. (Goldfinch60) Encouraging combination Goldi in this seasonal tribute to a new day\'s...
  December 29th, 2018 03:46
• Blessed Birth (Orchidee) A heart-warming read and a comforting instrumental too Orchi.
  December 29th, 2018 03:30
• NEW YEAR RESOLVE : 2019 : ANGELA : An Acrostic Sonnet (ANGELA & BRIAN) Angela - well done - -a very appealing set of reasons to try listing the...
  December 28th, 2018 08:44
• BRIDGING SPACE @ CHRISTMAS ~ BRIAN ~ A SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN) Lovely sonnet and although poigantly worded the love comes through . Keep...
  December 26th, 2018 08:39
• Frozen (Joanna Garrido) Good use of comparative metaphor Joanna - I look forward to reading more...
  December 26th, 2018 08:34
• Talk Me Poetry (Neville) An amazing flow and a wonderful metre to this delight read Neville. nto my...
  December 26th, 2018 06:51
• A KOOL YOOL TO EVERYONE : ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡 (ANGELA & BRIAN) With you in these festive lines on why Love will conquer in the end - -...
  December 24th, 2018 12:25
• Christmas Peace. (Goldfinch60) Lovely wrote on the night before Christmas dear Goldi and a delight to...
  December 24th, 2018 12:21
• Portals (LIGHT WARRIOR) A compelling read Jason - -so true that life goes on and that death is a...
  December 24th, 2018 12:18
• MERRY CHRISTMAS TO ALL (Michael Edwards) Ha - - Thanks for this needed reminder of female power at this festive...
  December 24th, 2018 12:11
• Dayspring Dawning (Orchidee) Beautiful words and thanks for sharing dear Orchi.
  December 24th, 2018 12:06
• Queue of Longing (Neville) Love your metaphors in this tribute to poets whose inspiration has taken...
  December 24th, 2018 12:05
• Meadow (Simon Bromley) Just the stroll I needed right now in a peaceful meadow and so poetically...
  December 24th, 2018 12:00
• Bride of the Dark Depths (Joanna Garrido) Oooh deliciously scary this underworld story -- a well-crafted tale with...
  December 24th, 2018 11:55
• Deep (E.J. Waling) Yes we live in a circle of mystery here on this wonderful planet and...
  December 24th, 2018 11:52
• New Year\'s Eve: (Niallprideaux) P.S. - - of course - reading the title again it is the New Year...
  December 24th, 2018 11:44
• New Year\'s Eve: (Niallprideaux) What a vivid picture of the Christmas festivities you pen here Nial - - a...
  December 24th, 2018 11:43
• FRIENDSHIP (Laura🌻) Thank you dear Laura and may your festive season bring you blessings and...
  December 24th, 2018 10:37
• Whispering words of wisdom (Netashi) True this poem contains poetic words of wisdom and enjoyed the play on...
  December 21st, 2018 14:06
• War is Not for Lovers (Neville) A heart-wrenching read about the truth of the trenches when death caught...
  December 21st, 2018 06:29
• CHOCOLATE AN ACROSTIC ~ ANGELA & BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN) Charming rhymes about love and from each gender side how it affects...
  December 21st, 2018 06:25
• DEJA VU EXPERIENCE 🧡 ANGELA 🧡 A TRUE STORY ? (ANGELA & BRIAN) Such an amazing experience and told with poetic verve - wow - finding...
  December 18th, 2018 07:40
• Whale Whispering (Neville) So explicit the description of dancing leviathans I was there with you...
  December 18th, 2018 07:34
• On Waking (Neville) Early morning coupling is good for those born as larks but not for owls...
  December 14th, 2018 05:02
• The Experts Opinion. (Goldfinch60) It is true that opinions differ when viewing anything in the field of art ...
  December 14th, 2018 04:57
• Fly Forth! (Orchidee) Such an uplift to read these encouraging words Orchi - joyous indeed.
  December 14th, 2018 04:52