Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.

• Glass Lips (Lee Renard Caspian) Powerful write Lee - an apt word is \"contortionist\" where vulnerablity...
  February 4th, 2019 03:54
• Something Rises (CindyB) The form and line-length add their own pace to this intriguing write Cindy...
  February 4th, 2019 03:51
• Riches Restrainings - Mark\'s Gospel (12) (Orchidee) Fine thoughts in this read Orchi.
  February 4th, 2019 03:46
• New or Old. (Goldfinch60) Agree wholeheartedly - comfort comes from clothing that has warmed the...
  February 4th, 2019 03:42
• Virus (Neville) Fro just the one word sprung all these images that so expertly leads the...
  February 4th, 2019 03:39
• Ink Blots (Neville) Good style and flow to this intriguing piece Neville - Ink blobs on paper...
  February 3rd, 2019 10:53
• S U N D A Y ~ A Day for Peace & Praise ~ BRIAN & ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN) Sunday is special for all sorts of reasons to many today and as this piece...
  February 3rd, 2019 10:44
• Frozen (Syd) First rate piece again Syd and which poetically reflects the present...
  February 3rd, 2019 10:39
• A Box With No Light (The Retired Bloke) That would be the worst of nightmares to find oneself locked in some sort...
  February 3rd, 2019 10:36
• TONIGHT. (Fay Slimm.) MY APOLOGIES FOR THE AWFUL MISALIGNMENT OF THIS PIECE - I CAN DO NOTHING...
  February 1st, 2019 07:30
• Old Age Phonephobia? (Goldfinch60) Oh the sax has always blown me away my friend - - - such cool cool music ...
  January 31st, 2019 16:53
• WISH LIST HOLIDAYS ~ ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN) Italy too for my first choice at this moment in time - - but so many I...
  January 31st, 2019 16:49
• Many Things to Many Men (Neville) Powerful imagery to help with grief - - your friend in his loss will no...
  January 31st, 2019 10:27
• Gone Away. (Goldfinch60) Goldi my heart goes out to you in the problems of tending dementia - -- it...
  January 30th, 2019 14:14
• BRIDGE OVER TROUBLED WATER ~ SIMON & GARFUNKEL ~ BRIAN ~ An 8 6 Sonnet ! (ANGELA & BRIAN) Ah - - an oldie goldie that certain number but has never lost its...
  January 30th, 2019 14:06
• Countless Indiscretions (Neville) Love the original way you use rhymed words in this read Neville - - the...
  January 30th, 2019 13:56
• I wake everyday (Joseph M Marion) Ah - - a beautiful read Joseph - - a fortunate lady to receive such tender...
  January 30th, 2019 13:43
• Horses and Gates (W c) Ah - what an interesting read W.C. and that lovely leaping horse is...
  January 30th, 2019 13:40
• NO GOLD TO GLISTEN (Michael Edwards) Wonderful metaphors used in this intriguing write Michael - loved every...
  January 30th, 2019 08:05
• Everlasting Hold (Gino) Gino Thanks for such a tender paternal tribute to well loved sons - it...
  January 30th, 2019 02:47
• Clickety Click (Joanna Garrido) So touchingly good this account of family disturbance when one parent...
  January 29th, 2019 16:48
• WELLINGTON (N Z) : ANGELA : A Barrel Acrostic (ANGELA & BRIAN) All those invitations make Wellington a special place indeed - - a lovely...
  January 29th, 2019 10:40
• Be (Michael Edwards) A cascade of poetic wisdom again from your witty imagination my friend. -...
  January 28th, 2019 18:21
• But is it Poetry? (Goldfinch60) Poetry exposes the heart and mind so all writings are poetry to those who...
  January 28th, 2019 18:16
• Just A Second....! (Orchidee) An informative write Orchi and thank you.
  January 28th, 2019 18:11
• WITCHDOCTORS! (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽) Ah - power used badly ends often in sadness for those who need most a...
  January 28th, 2019 18:08
• F E B R U A R Y ~ BRIAN ~ A Barrel Acrostic (ANGELA & BRIAN) Oh I know the snow\'s floating causes such chaos but each flake is unique...
  January 28th, 2019 17:44
• Barren Land (Sylviasearcher) Excellent read Sylvia - - love all the metaphors along with fine rhyming.
  January 28th, 2019 17:34
• Might She by Chance be a Witch (Neville) Another shared moment of question and answer with sensuous phrasing to...
  January 28th, 2019 17:32
• From this moment (Joseph M Marion) The essence of romance fills every line in this wonderful write to a much...
  January 28th, 2019 17:14
• Oldest Mirror (Netashi) The wings of youth as mentioned by your tribute to sibling wisdom make...
  January 28th, 2019 17:12
• The sunshine days (Aa Harvey) A tender array of loving words here - - thanks for sharing it with...
  January 28th, 2019 07:42
• Towards My Rosie Lee. (part 1) (Kevin browne) What a moving write and tale told so well - -your way with words is...
  January 25th, 2019 17:33
• Mirislavka (Neville) An intriguing read Neville - - - these romantic walks down your memory...
  January 25th, 2019 04:18
• Calliope Acrostic. (Goldfinch60) A fine testimony to our great and wonderful Muse - - thank you dear...
  January 25th, 2019 04:09
• Ms Melancholy (Netashi) Your warm empathy is so evident in this sad account of a young girl having...
  January 24th, 2019 13:46
• To all ladies encouragement (Joseph M Marion) Such encouraging words to all ladies and so gently expressed. Thank you...
  January 24th, 2019 11:49
• EVOKING. (Fay Slimm.) Thank you to Sylvia and Sunshine for saving this poem to your favourite...
  January 24th, 2019 07:08
• ELEMENTS IN THE ROOM ! BRIAN & ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN) A truly inspiring read and so well researched - -- those elements which...
  January 24th, 2019 07:05
• Waiting for Cancer (Neville) The sad unhappy state oozes through every line of this masterful poem...
  January 24th, 2019 07:00
• ARTY COUPLETS (Michael Edwards) Spot on !!!! - -your couplets are never anything else but arty dear...
  January 24th, 2019 03:55
• An Oncoming Storm (GeorgiaRayne) You describe the coming weather-change very well here Geogia - - I like...
  January 24th, 2019 02:58
• TO A MOUSE ~ ROBBIE BURNS ! (ANGELA & BRIAN) So wonderfully recited this Scottish reminder of mice and men\'s destiny -...
  January 23rd, 2019 14:10
• My wicked witch (Netashi) A fine read of opposites in family bond and what can happen when love...
  January 23rd, 2019 13:57
• An Occasional Dream (Neville) A touch of the ironic contained in these few cleverly gentle lines Neville
  January 23rd, 2019 04:37
• Stuck (Whisperingquill) The erotic\'s vivid heat clearly portrayed yet full of discreet metaphor...
  January 23rd, 2019 04:22
• Mirage (Joanna Garrido) Those short lines hit all the buttons for me Joanna - - contrasts you made...
  January 23rd, 2019 04:15
• Anaphora (Gary Edward Geraci) Clever haiku and so very true. Thanks for posting it Gary.
  January 23rd, 2019 04:07
• tick tock (Psychofemale) Can relate to the words in this verse - - time stretches itself double...
  January 23rd, 2019 04:05
• A (Michael Edwards) Chuckling at that witty drawing I read the verse and smiled even more at...
  January 23rd, 2019 04:03
• The Part Of Love I\'m Scared Of. (Kevin browne) Such powerful and moving words Kevin - -saddest of last lines but...
  January 22nd, 2019 06:37
• FESTAL LIGHT (Michael Edwards) Your poetic style ever fascinates and as usual I want to read this over...
  January 22nd, 2019 06:35
• How do I (Joseph M Marion) Beautifully romantic words Joseph. A lovely read.
  January 21st, 2019 18:03
• ARTISTIC LICENCE (Michael Edwards) Art is as you tell it dear friend - an interpretation of reality at large...
  January 21st, 2019 17:55
• Love of Healing. (Goldfinch60) Such a wonderful calling and those who hear it will feel joy that never...
  January 21st, 2019 17:40
• Faith For Forgiveness - Mark\'s Gospel (4) (Orchidee) Well scribed again Orchi - - cancelling Heaven\'s forgiveness is a...
  January 21st, 2019 17:36
• Enlightenment (Neville) Great tale again Neville - you have a way with words that make scenes...
  January 21st, 2019 17:32
• OH WHAT A BEAUTIFUL DAY ! BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN) A day well spent and described so well dear Brian - - early rise to...
  January 21st, 2019 17:26
• Puff The Magic Dragon. (Kevin browne) Such a beautiful walk down memory land with all these fun reminders dear...
  January 21st, 2019 17:21
• Shifting Adagios (Whisperingquill) Oh the emotion and pathos of music and verse together in this excellent...
  January 21st, 2019 17:13
• miscarriage (Lainacarson98) Good and well written advice to a poor self-blaming female after the...
  January 21st, 2019 17:10
• Exonerated (Heather Harrisson) A powerfully described tale of innocence jailed and then having to fight...
  January 21st, 2019 17:06
• The Death of Planet Earth (Joanna Garrido) A powerful and needed warning to all greedy earthlings - thanks for...
  January 21st, 2019 17:01
• My Lady Pleases Me This Way (Neville) The read set my senses a-tingle dear Neville so I suspect your verse...
  January 18th, 2019 10:58
• Will (The Retired Bloke) Good different usage of just one important word. Needed question asked as...
  January 18th, 2019 10:50
• Restless Sleep (Markashley1961) The search for lost love finds us even in our deepest dreams Mark - -such...
  January 18th, 2019 07:24
• For The Homeless (W c) Empathy is its own payment to kind souls who give of themselves to others...
  January 18th, 2019 05:08
• Red Sky (Joanna Garrido) Touchingly poignant these beautifully sad words.
  January 18th, 2019 05:06
• Proximity (Whisperingquill) A first rate write on the meaning of emotional neglect when love is facing...
  January 17th, 2019 09:41
• Being (Sylviasearcher) Such a poignant appeal in this outpour of Being - a most...
  January 17th, 2019 09:34
• forgotten field (Markashley1961) Loud applause for this first rate write on dark fields of lament Mark - ...
  January 17th, 2019 05:58
• MORE HERBS & SPICES ~ BRIAN ~ An ABC Rhyming Acrostic ! (ANGELA & BRIAN) Glad you included the humble nastursium in your interesting list of herbs...
  January 17th, 2019 05:54
• Turquoise (Neville) The colour of blue in your write called Turquoise gave me a walk down...
  January 17th, 2019 05:49
• Beautiful (Mia_Rose) A lovely and positive read Mia - - those last two lines are what we should...
  January 16th, 2019 13:55
• SHE WILL NEVER WALK AGAIN (Ruthdeming) Welcome to this friendly poetry site Ruth - - your first poem makes a...
  January 16th, 2019 11:52
• Score for Words. (Goldfinch60) Words and wonderful score together paint a picture of patient experience ...
  January 16th, 2019 09:52
• The Better Version of Us (Denise) An emotional tug through each line of this tribute to love brought tears...
  January 16th, 2019 09:48
• Empty Spaces (Markashley1961) Such a heart-touching read Mark - - those spaces which dark with emptiness...
  January 16th, 2019 09:44
• Practical Preparation - Mark\'s Gospel (1) (Orchidee) A fine testament to the Baptist\'s ministry of preparation. Thanks for...
  January 16th, 2019 09:42
• The Weavers Knot (Neville) So evocative with its gentle reminders of erotic alertness when bewitched...
  January 16th, 2019 09:35
• Its never empty! (Poetic Dan) I once read Dan that the mind has power but not over will - there is a...
  January 15th, 2019 13:31
• Our Family Games (W c) Ah - those were the days my friend - - family times ever stay in the mind...
  January 15th, 2019 13:26
• LUSTS EMBRACE (Michael Edwards) Narrow minds can stoke coals to flaming fires - yes indeed - love this...
  January 15th, 2019 10:52
• 🧠💔A.D.H.D (YoursTruly9) Such a brave yet instructive write - thank you for sharing it.
  January 15th, 2019 10:49
• Morning Glory. (Goldfinch60) Reading this brought tears to my eyes Goldi - your love for sweetheart is...
  January 15th, 2019 10:48
• Hope, Help, Healing (Orchidee) Uplifting thoughts here - thank you Orchi.
  January 15th, 2019 10:44
• Borrowed Characters (Neville) Borrowed indeed are the characters of people who like to ferment both...
  January 15th, 2019 10:43
• ANGELA ~ MY HAPPINESS ~ BRIAN ~ Poeme d\'Amour ! (ANGELA & BRIAN) Love in all its wonderful faces shine from your words and the beautiful...
  January 15th, 2019 10:36
• Gossip (Joseph M Marion) You describe the effects this flourishing devil called Gossip has on any...
  January 15th, 2019 10:30
• The Opposite of Up (Sylviasearcher) Inventive and compelling this read on the state of being between the ups...
  January 15th, 2019 10:20
• DATING 2019 🧡 ANGELA & BRIAN 💙 A RHYMING SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN) Ah = a love to sigh for - a very blessed fellow is your Brian methinks -...
  January 14th, 2019 08:59
• Golden Fleece (Tiffany_Arnold) A positive and very encouraging message Tiffany and thanks for sharing...
  January 11th, 2019 14:38
• Evening to Dawn. (Goldfinch60) Changes by light and darkness and so beautifully described Goldi - - I...
  January 11th, 2019 06:29
• Stealing La Petit Morts underneath a cerise moon/Velvet Strands (Whisperingquill) Compelling read and so adeptly crafted - - a favourite for sure. Thanks...
  January 11th, 2019 03:26
• Separations (Lorna) The flow and appeal of this poignant verse stays long after the read - - -...
  January 11th, 2019 03:19
• Everything now has color (Netashi) Colour can be a saviour to sight that has seen only sad black and white -...
  January 10th, 2019 17:33
• Recovery rhyme and to thank all of life (Poetic Dan) Fine write Dan -- a writer\'s passion needs an outlet for as this verse...
  January 10th, 2019 17:04
• Lucky In Love (W c) A celebration of true love in every line dear WC - --- would that all...
  January 10th, 2019 16:58
• TEN HEALTHIEST UK UNIVERSITIES ~ BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN) Yes it pays to look at the curriculum offered by such places and then make...
  January 10th, 2019 13:11
• Matter (Dakota) The appeal of questions on life\'s unfairness and brevity comes through...
  January 10th, 2019 04:56