Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.

• To Nirvana. (Goldfinch60) A worthy tribute to a famous singer as music meets needs in us all -...
  September 28th, 2018 06:03
• EIGHT ESSENTIAL ELEMENTS ~ DOUBLETS By BRIAN (BRIAN & ANGELA) Full of needed reminders on how vital those mentioned elements are to us...
  September 26th, 2018 08:01
• A CINQUAIN COLLECTION (Michael Edwards) Wow - - what power in each of these cinquains Michael - - my favourite is ...
  September 26th, 2018 01:33
• Teardrops (Christina8) A poignant look back on love gone your short-line rhyming captures the...
  September 24th, 2018 15:56
• A FAMILY OF OUR OWN ! BRIAN & ANGELA (BRIAN & ANGELA) A lovely reminder that Family is a divine arrangement and often blessed...
  September 24th, 2018 11:02
• i wonder, when did we fall out of love (Ron parrish aka wordman) A poignant lament touched with pathos yet using the honest approach to a...
  September 22nd, 2018 15:36
• The Final Over. (Goldfinch60) I have learned so much about the game I knew little about from this...
  September 18th, 2018 05:03
• preponderance (Onepauly) A well rhymed lament on the loss of old friends - it goes with the flow...
  September 18th, 2018 04:38
• JOHN DENVER ~ POET & COUNTRY SINGER ~ A ROLLING ACROSTIC (BRIAN & ANGELA) John Denver had everything country music could ask for - a lovely read...
  September 18th, 2018 04:07
• OCEANS TEARS (Michael Edwards) Loud applause for this read - - - such linguistic pleasure to catch the...
  September 17th, 2018 06:00
• Aquaplane (Syd) An intriguing read Syd - - I love the way you wind words around to obtain...
  September 14th, 2018 13:43
• TEN CRITERIA TO CHOOSE NEW ZEALAND ! ANGELA & BRIAN (BRIAN & ANGELA) Have my bag of dreams packed to join you in that fabulous adventure ...
  September 14th, 2018 05:37
• harmony revealed (Dusk arising) Spot on and with so few words - agree wholeheartedly that is where peace...
  September 14th, 2018 02:31
• My Love, My World, My LIfe (Rrodriguez) A beautiful tribute to unconditional love and its power.. You use words of...
  September 13th, 2018 13:06
• Flying High (W c) I was flying along with each line W.C. - - I like the way you give duo...
  September 13th, 2018 13:01
• A Timeless Room (Brycycle) An ode to the feel of time when insomnia ticks vision away in the silence...
  September 13th, 2018 12:57
• Grow (Netashi) Ah I love the title of this clever lead into the surprise last line...
  September 13th, 2018 12:54
• My best friend... (Misskay) Oh yes a dog can be all this lovely verse says - an intelligent mind on...
  September 13th, 2018 04:57
• Inimitable Invitation (Orchidee) A rapturous read Orchi - one of my favourite hymns too.
  September 13th, 2018 04:53
• Steve Jobs’ Dying Words (The Retired Bloke) Excellent piece of advice and a needed reminder of how short is a lifespan...
  September 13th, 2018 04:51
• Pot of Gold (D. K. Heqet) The yearning is palpable Kanisha - -- love unrequited would feel just...
  September 13th, 2018 04:49
• Natures Power - Senryu. (Goldfinch60) Great music and the famous violinist is wonderful.
  September 13th, 2018 04:46
• With these hands (Poetic Dan) Hoping those hands when tomorrow appears hold onto peace for you Dan - -
  September 13th, 2018 04:43
• Observation #23 (Andrew Charles Forrest) Too true my friend and how art can push its way in when it wants - - a ...
  September 13th, 2018 04:42
• MAORI RELIGION : ANGELA (BRIAN & ANGELA) So interesting to read of Maori culture and religion. Thank you for...
  September 13th, 2018 02:43
• IRONY (Michael Edwards) Oooh you don\'t strike me as a regular speedster my friend - what a...
  September 13th, 2018 00:26
• keeping it to myself (Dusk arising) The read from line one sears the heart - there is nothing so sad than...
  September 12th, 2018 12:34
• Doctor Who. (Goldfinch60) A woman Doctor Who - - that will be interesting - - - thanks for this ...
  September 12th, 2018 08:47
• Crayons (W c) Children making memories with pictures are a real treasure and you verse...
  September 12th, 2018 08:42
• PRESIDENTIAL PREFERENCES : BRIAN & ANGELA (BRIAN & ANGELA) An admirable survey of all the leaders who gave various ways toward what...
  September 12th, 2018 05:27
• A FULL HEAD OF HAIR (Michael Edwards) Still giggling at this Mike - I know quite a few in that category too.
  September 12th, 2018 04:40
• Doing One\'s Best (Lorna) Showing a heart of gold in these compassionate words Lorna.
  September 10th, 2018 11:51
• 9/10 ~ THE DAY BEFORE TOMORROW ! A Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) We all will ever see those twin towers and their tragic downfall that...
  September 10th, 2018 07:11
• ANNIVERSARIES ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Wishing you happys galore on your birthday dear Brian - - cake and...
  September 7th, 2018 11:31
• In Reply to Michael\'s \"The Months\" (2018 version) (Lorna) Love the flow in this gem of an ode to inclement weather . Great read...
  September 7th, 2018 04:21
• Scars (W c) A fine summary of what scars to to the remainder of lives once injury has...
  September 7th, 2018 01:54
• Llama Drama (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽) So funny and very attractive the llamas I know in Cornwall have just the...
  September 6th, 2018 15:02
• Getting old (Poetic Dan) Oooh The feel of this posting comes through so clearly - these words get...
  September 5th, 2018 04:38
• NEW ZEALAND : SHEEP RULE OK : ANGELA (BRIAN & ANGELA) Your verse on New Zealand Lamb serves us with plenty to think on Angela...
  September 5th, 2018 03:50
• FINE WINE (Michael Edwards) This perceptive write brings out the ire in me as I can never follow the...
  September 5th, 2018 01:48
• ODE TO AUTUMN LEAVES ~ A Sonnet for ANGELA (BRIAN & ANGELA) There is always something poignant about autumn yet its appearance brings...
  September 4th, 2018 02:34
• THE BIRD POEM (Michael Edwards) Brilliant fun-use of names and traits Mike - - super write once again. -...
  September 3rd, 2018 05:39
• LEAVING ON A JET PLANE ~ BRIAN (BRIAN & ANGELA) Sad but sweet true love will outlast any long distance and this you know...
  September 3rd, 2018 05:02
• What an Amazing Hour. (Goldfinch60) A telling read Goldi - - an amazing hour indeed when mobiles are not to be...
  August 31st, 2018 05:55
• Motivation(5) - The message of reconciliation (Orchidee) Comforting thought in this tribute to One who sacrificed all - - one of...
  August 31st, 2018 05:52
• NEW ZEALAND WINES : NECTAR OF THE GODS : ANGELA (BRIAN & ANGELA) Lots of tasty fermented New Zealand liquids to choose from here Angela -...
  August 31st, 2018 05:49
• Endless (Sylviasearcher) An insightful read Sylvia - I love the multi-layered approach to the...
  August 31st, 2018 05:45
• The Harvest Moon (September) (Lorna) Whoops sorry about misspelling your name my friend - meant to type Lorna
  August 31st, 2018 04:49
• The Harvest Moon (September) (Lorna) Simply lovely these few lines of wonderful moon-metaphor Laura - a really...
  August 31st, 2018 04:49
• LIMERICK No 53 (Michael Edwards) This limerick sums up what is wrong with most folk - - the \"we \" and ...
  August 31st, 2018 02:01
• Tonight (Christina8) Nature\'s majestic wonders and family love -- what a wonderful...
  August 31st, 2018 01:55
• TORMENT (Michael Edwards) Oh I agree that love can be torment when its unfettered force uses no...
  August 29th, 2018 13:59
• Flavor (Netashi) The swing between both genders in this clear reminder shows how one-sided...
  August 29th, 2018 13:43
• Blue Autumn (Ron parrish aka wordman) Such a poignant feel to this read Ron - you have a way with romantic...
  August 29th, 2018 13:29
• WELLINGTON CAPITAL OF NEW ZEALAND ~ ANGELA (BRIAN & ANGELA) That New Zealand food and drink sound yummy - enjoy every last mouthful...
  August 29th, 2018 05:31
• NEW ZEALAND TRIP : ANGELA : An Acrostic 3 7 4 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) New Zealand\'s people being so friendly are a big draw to the visitor - ...
  August 28th, 2018 23:34
• BAY OF ISLANDS - NZ : ANGELA (BRIAN & ANGELA) Swimming with dolphins sounds like paradise to me - - we had a dolphin a...
  August 24th, 2018 20:49
• Luminous Light - 2 (Orchidee) A lovely read Orchi - thanks for sharing.
  August 23rd, 2018 16:18
• EARLY BIRD 5 & 6 (Michael Edwards) Hope all those worms that early birds get do not mean their later...
  August 23rd, 2018 16:17
• Opportunity. (Goldfinch60) Sound and wise advice here Goldi - - and that video blows me away too - ...
  August 23rd, 2018 16:09
• DANCING QUEEN : ANGELA (BRIAN & ANGELA) Lovely picture and oh that video - I could just imagine Brian exploding...
  August 23rd, 2018 09:11
• Absence Of You (H. Ray Davis) Tender reflections of love now apart - this is one to which I closely...
  August 22nd, 2018 07:48
• Garden Lament (H. Ray Davis) This touches the heart Ray - - a gem of a lament about being alone yet...
  August 22nd, 2018 07:45
• Indebted (H. Ray Davis) Romantic and very appealing H.R. - the lady in question will be...
  August 22nd, 2018 07:36
• Wolves Up Close (W c) Wolves have a hold on many a heart - mine included - a lovely and finely...
  August 20th, 2018 15:45
• LOVE SONG FOR ANGELA ~ A SONNET (BRIAN & ANGELA) Ah - - a perfect sonnet from across the world. There safe and sound and...
  August 20th, 2018 03:20
• HIGH FIVES (Michael Edwards) Count me in Michael --the high five is an American import that sets my...
  August 17th, 2018 03:04
• ANGELA ~ MY HAPPINESS ~ By BRIAN ~ A Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) May your coming time together be filled with happiness Brian - - wishing...
  August 17th, 2018 03:01
• NEW ZEALAND IS CALLING ME : By ANGELA (BRIAN & ANGELA) Am so excited for you two as it gets nearer the time of saying a loving...
  August 16th, 2018 13:30
• NATURE\'S WONDER (Lasergraph) Yes such is the value of nature to us humans and your lovely poem brings...
  August 15th, 2018 15:59
• Summer Breeze (Christina8) You are a star dear friend and hope you enjoy many more moments making...
  August 15th, 2018 13:53
• Hopeless Haiku (Sylviasearcher) Vivid word-picture of a jump into death which is all too familiar in this...
  August 14th, 2018 05:45
• SEVEN MORE NEW ZEALAND QUIRKS from ANGELA ~ A Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Such an exciting video and oh those New Zealand quirks which seem to have...
  August 13th, 2018 16:18
• POETICAL OUTTAKES (Michael Edwards) Such interesting phrasing in your poetical outtakes Michael - - cant...
  August 13th, 2018 03:14
• Trout In Colorado (W c) Trout are infamous in avoiding the baited line - - the fish farm sounds...
  August 13th, 2018 03:11
• Fan The Flame (Orchidee) Great read again Orchi - your postings keep the flame of faith burning my...
  August 13th, 2018 03:09
• The Lost Words. (Goldfinch60) Good questions to ask re. lost words Goldi - - poets suffer from...
  August 13th, 2018 03:07
• FIVE FABULOUS FEMALES ~ SENRYU ~ By BRIAN (BRIAN & ANGELA) Worthy females all five and oh the beauty of Princess Diana - thanks for...
  August 10th, 2018 03:35
• THEIR SANCTUARY (Michael Edwards) First class writing and painting Michael - - a delightful posting and a...
  August 10th, 2018 03:32
• THOUGHTS OF DEATH (2) (Michael Edwards) I am still giggling at your clever image - small is big to a palette like...
  August 9th, 2018 16:42
• Mercy Mildness (Orchidee) \"Christ in us\" - a wonderful phrase - love this hymn-poem Orchi ...
  August 9th, 2018 16:34
• Two day break (ish) (Poetic Dan) A couple of days under canvas with children can put new life in heart,...
  August 9th, 2018 16:25
• She eyed the world... (Crystal Hope) A well- written tale of seeing the world for the first time from a plane ...
  August 9th, 2018 16:16
• SEVEN QUIRKY NZ FACTS from ANGELA : A Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Happy happy people show a wonderful togetherness with nature herself - ...
  August 9th, 2018 08:30
• She\'s a Smitten Shrew (Adam Shirley) A compelling read of what a shrew does in certain situations - - loved the...
  August 8th, 2018 04:12
• Deep Within (Elaine) A cry for help written with style and courage to face the hurt inside. An...
  August 8th, 2018 03:32
• Hummingbird\'s Lullaby (Sylviasearcher) Lovely and comforting words in this beautiful assurance that love has no...
  August 8th, 2018 03:22
• riddance (Dusk arising) Ah - letting go can show us the pleasanter ways - - I love the the gist...
  August 8th, 2018 03:20
• Noticing The Needy (Orchidee) So many are the needy today dear Orchi - a lovely and caring prayer which...
  August 8th, 2018 03:18
• DANCING & ROMANCING ~ BRIAN & ANGELA ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Blessings on your soon-to-come reunion with your lady in red Brian - a...
  August 8th, 2018 03:02
• THOUGHTS OF DEATH (1) (Michael Edwards) Ha ha ha - who but you could think up an last line like that !! A...
  August 8th, 2018 01:39
• Life (Crystal Hope) Life as you state in this engaging rhyme is full of \"precious moments\"...
  August 8th, 2018 00:07
• LONG WHITE CLOUD : AOTEAROA : An Acrostic Sonnet : By ANGELA (BRIAN & ANGELA) It sounds such a beautiful name and your words describe the draw of New...
  August 7th, 2018 05:36
• ZIMBABWE ~ PEACE & PROSPERITY ! A Blank Verse Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA) When signs are set for a situation to be moved on there can be rapid...
  August 6th, 2018 09:29
• Girded for Battle (Lorna) Well done you for doing such good poetic battle with daily destructive...
  August 3rd, 2018 09:17
• The Patient Sea and the Mighty Mountain (JWKP98) A first class example wrapped well in the tale of mountain and sea. An...
  August 3rd, 2018 06:05
• Things changed that day (Poetic Dan) Great number and your words echo its feeling - - great read Dan.
  August 3rd, 2018 05:18
• I WRITE (Michael Edwards) Random happenings can produce serious poetry - good thoughts here...
  August 3rd, 2018 04:13
• Pure Protectings (Orchidee) The gist of this passage of poetic thought rings true as the needy...
  August 3rd, 2018 04:09
• LAKESIDE PICNIC ~ A Blank Verse Sonnet ~ BRIAN & ANGELA (BRIAN & ANGELA) The Word of God being alive is well represented here with these lines of...
  August 3rd, 2018 04:07