Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- The morning after (H. Ray Davis)
Love expressed like this will thrill the fortunate lady - - a beautiful...
October 22nd, 2018 12:52 - A RAMBLE IN THE BRAMBLE (Michael Edwards)
Ha - - Love all the apt rhyming words in this poetic warning against...
October 19th, 2018 11:16 - Half Moon (Sylviasearcher)
A beautiful description in poetic terms of the moon\'s striking radiance...
October 19th, 2018 07:05 - My Everything (Christina8)
Such a heart-warming feel in this lovely ballad dear Christina - your poem...
October 19th, 2018 03:43 - Icarus (Powder Blue) (Syd)
A forceful warning on drug-use and the fall that precedes flights to more...
October 16th, 2018 16:07 - ...and so it is (Andrew Charles Forrest)
The well-chosen image speaks loudly in accord with your powerful words in...
October 16th, 2018 15:58 - You will live on beside me. (EliDagger)
A lament which only those know who have loved much and lost to death - - -...
October 16th, 2018 15:48 - Seville Stunner (The Retired Bloke)
You have instilled an ardour for football viewing with this fervent...
October 16th, 2018 05:31 - MY EWER (Michael Edwards)
Yes I agree the words are special my friend - - I see appreciation for...
October 16th, 2018 02:46 - Inspirational Drought (The Retired Bloke)
Ah - we who daily put pen to poetic paper get the same blockage from...
October 15th, 2018 08:26 - Fallen Idol (The Retired Bloke)
Your poem outlined so well the familiar outcome from drugs and not knowing...
October 15th, 2018 08:15 - NATURAL WORLD (Michael Edwards)
Love the sketch and the three pieces of studied wisdom Michael- -- the...
October 15th, 2018 05:53 - Under Her Rainbow\'s Light. (Kevin browne)
The mind is filled with the sparkle of love in this worthy account of the...
October 11th, 2018 12:44 - Listen or Hear? (Goldfinch60)
Hearing is so different from listening as this wise poem states - - thanks...
October 11th, 2018 06:23 - FOUR SHORTIES (Michael Edwards)
Ah - love the wit in number two but that third shortie ticked every box...
October 10th, 2018 12:20 - BIRDS IN FLIGHT : ESSEX : ANGELA (BRIAN & ANGELA)
So sad that so many New Zealand birds are extinct or vulnerable - as...
October 10th, 2018 12:16 - That Still Small Voice (Kevin Michael Bloor)
So sad though well written the voices heard sometimes by those left in...
October 9th, 2018 11:39 - Family is Forever (Dakota)
Such a well written collection of reasons for considering the value of...
October 9th, 2018 11:29 - Land Softly (Christina8)
You will come out on top and stay there dear Christina for your firm\' and...
October 9th, 2018 11:20 - SUNDAY MORNING AT LOUGHTON POOL (Michael Edwards)
So realistic I was almost there with you dear Michael - - firs rate read.
October 8th, 2018 16:52 - Or so I\'d like to think... (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Such a tender feel to this poem Andrew - -angels are guardians to those...
October 8th, 2018 09:50 - THE HAUNTED MILL ~ VISUAL POEM (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Ha ha ha - - this fun-piece raised more than a smile for my first read of...
October 8th, 2018 05:15 - TO JEANNE (Michael Edwards)
Your wife will adore this one Mike. Simply lovely.
October 4th, 2018 01:05 - Old Rock Stars Never Die (W c)
Oh Yes W.C. - rock stars never die for they leave songs in our hearts . A...
October 3rd, 2018 13:26 - Refreshments Renewals (Orchidee)
A fine spiritual write Orchi.
October 3rd, 2018 13:23 - HE SPURNS APPROACH (Michael Edwards)
A miss-match of marital needs hidden in sensitive imagery Mike - - I know...
October 3rd, 2018 13:15 - FIVE MORE WICKED WORDS : ANGELA & BRIAN : G to K (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Lovely sounding new words to me i;n this witty write about unusual use of...
October 3rd, 2018 13:09 - Carefree? (Goldfinch60)
The challenge of seeing a loved one undergoing such changes must be so...
October 1st, 2018 04:22 - SIX SIMPLE SENRYU SYMBIOTICALLY ~ ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡 (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Fine set of senryu magic dear Brian - -and that lovely young voice singing...
October 1st, 2018 04:12 - Flowered By Rainbows. (Kevin browne)
These wise pieces of poetic advice resound with artistic imagery and stay...
September 30th, 2018 15:55 - FIVE NEW & EXCITING WORDS ~ A to E ~ SENRYU (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A Jim Reeves favourite with a moral and message - - good to see and...
September 28th, 2018 09:47 - One Tear Removed (Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet)
Your gift for words is amazing Tamara - - another gem to your poetic...
September 28th, 2018 09:43 - Anxiety Lifted (Christina8)
An example of going beyond and between to find hope of peace - - dear...
September 28th, 2018 09:35 - Watered Way (Orchidee)
A wonderfully expressed write on the value of the water that is...
September 28th, 2018 06:05 - To Nirvana. (Goldfinch60)
A worthy tribute to a famous singer as music meets needs in us all -...
September 28th, 2018 06:03 - EIGHT ESSENTIAL ELEMENTS ~ DOUBLETS By BRIAN (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Full of needed reminders on how vital those mentioned elements are to us...
September 26th, 2018 08:01 - A CINQUAIN COLLECTION (Michael Edwards)
Wow - - what power in each of these cinquains Michael - - my favourite is ...
September 26th, 2018 01:33 - Teardrops (Christina8)
A poignant look back on love gone your short-line rhyming captures the...
September 24th, 2018 15:56 - A FAMILY OF OUR OWN ! BRIAN & ANGELA (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A lovely reminder that Family is a divine arrangement and often blessed...
September 24th, 2018 11:02 - i wonder, when did we fall out of love (Ron parrish aka wordman)
A poignant lament touched with pathos yet using the honest approach to a...
September 22nd, 2018 15:36 - The Final Over. (Goldfinch60)
I have learned so much about the game I knew little about from this...
September 18th, 2018 05:03 - preponderance (Onepauly)
A well rhymed lament on the loss of old friends - it goes with the flow...
September 18th, 2018 04:38 - JOHN DENVER ~ POET & COUNTRY SINGER ~ A ROLLING ACROSTIC (BRIAN & ANGELA)
John Denver had everything country music could ask for - a lovely read...
September 18th, 2018 04:07 - OCEANS TEARS (Michael Edwards)
Loud applause for this read - - - such linguistic pleasure to catch the...
September 17th, 2018 06:00 - Aquaplane (Syd)
An intriguing read Syd - - I love the way you wind words around to obtain...
September 14th, 2018 13:43 - TEN CRITERIA TO CHOOSE NEW ZEALAND ! ANGELA & BRIAN (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Have my bag of dreams packed to join you in that fabulous adventure ...
September 14th, 2018 05:37 - harmony revealed (Dusk arising)
Spot on and with so few words - agree wholeheartedly that is where peace...
September 14th, 2018 02:31 - My Love, My World, My LIfe (Rrodriguez)
A beautiful tribute to unconditional love and its power.. You use words of...
September 13th, 2018 13:06 - Flying High (W c)
I was flying along with each line W.C. - - I like the way you give duo...
September 13th, 2018 13:01 - A Timeless Room (Brycycle)
An ode to the feel of time when insomnia ticks vision away in the silence...
September 13th, 2018 12:57 - Grow (Netashi)
Ah I love the title of this clever lead into the surprise last line...
September 13th, 2018 12:54 - My best friend... (Misskay)
Oh yes a dog can be all this lovely verse says - an intelligent mind on...
September 13th, 2018 04:57 - Inimitable Invitation (Orchidee)
A rapturous read Orchi - one of my favourite hymns too.
September 13th, 2018 04:53 - Steve Jobs’ Dying Words (The Retired Bloke)
Excellent piece of advice and a needed reminder of how short is a lifespan...
September 13th, 2018 04:51 - Pot of Gold (D. K. Heqet)
The yearning is palpable Kanisha - -- love unrequited would feel just...
September 13th, 2018 04:49 - Natures Power - Senryu. (Goldfinch60)
Great music and the famous violinist is wonderful.
September 13th, 2018 04:46 - With these hands (Poetic Dan)
Hoping those hands when tomorrow appears hold onto peace for you Dan - -
September 13th, 2018 04:43 - Observation #23 (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Too true my friend and how art can push its way in when it wants - - a ...
September 13th, 2018 04:42 - MAORI RELIGION : ANGELA (BRIAN & ANGELA)
So interesting to read of Maori culture and religion. Thank you for...
September 13th, 2018 02:43 - IRONY (Michael Edwards)
Oooh you don\'t strike me as a regular speedster my friend - what a...
September 13th, 2018 00:26 - keeping it to myself (Dusk arising)
The read from line one sears the heart - there is nothing so sad than...
September 12th, 2018 12:34 - Doctor Who. (Goldfinch60)
A woman Doctor Who - - that will be interesting - - - thanks for this ...
September 12th, 2018 08:47 - Crayons (W c)
Children making memories with pictures are a real treasure and you verse...
September 12th, 2018 08:42 - PRESIDENTIAL PREFERENCES : BRIAN & ANGELA (BRIAN & ANGELA)
An admirable survey of all the leaders who gave various ways toward what...
September 12th, 2018 05:27 - A FULL HEAD OF HAIR (Michael Edwards)
Still giggling at this Mike - I know quite a few in that category too.
September 12th, 2018 04:40 - Doing One\'s Best (Lorna)
Showing a heart of gold in these compassionate words Lorna.
September 10th, 2018 11:51 - 9/10 ~ THE DAY BEFORE TOMORROW ! A Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
We all will ever see those twin towers and their tragic downfall that...
September 10th, 2018 07:11 - ANNIVERSARIES ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Wishing you happys galore on your birthday dear Brian - - cake and...
September 7th, 2018 11:31 - In Reply to Michael\'s \"The Months\" (2018 version) (Lorna)
Love the flow in this gem of an ode to inclement weather . Great read...
September 7th, 2018 04:21 - Scars (W c)
A fine summary of what scars to to the remainder of lives once injury has...
September 7th, 2018 01:54 - Llama Drama (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
So funny and very attractive the llamas I know in Cornwall have just the...
September 6th, 2018 15:02 - Getting old (Poetic Dan)
Oooh The feel of this posting comes through so clearly - these words get...
September 5th, 2018 04:38 - NEW ZEALAND : SHEEP RULE OK : ANGELA (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Your verse on New Zealand Lamb serves us with plenty to think on Angela...
September 5th, 2018 03:50 - FINE WINE (Michael Edwards)
This perceptive write brings out the ire in me as I can never follow the...
September 5th, 2018 01:48 - ODE TO AUTUMN LEAVES ~ A Sonnet for ANGELA (BRIAN & ANGELA)
There is always something poignant about autumn yet its appearance brings...
September 4th, 2018 02:34 - THE BIRD POEM (Michael Edwards)
Brilliant fun-use of names and traits Mike - - super write once again. -...
September 3rd, 2018 05:39 - LEAVING ON A JET PLANE ~ BRIAN (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Sad but sweet true love will outlast any long distance and this you know...
September 3rd, 2018 05:02 - What an Amazing Hour. (Goldfinch60)
A telling read Goldi - - an amazing hour indeed when mobiles are not to be...
August 31st, 2018 05:55 - Motivation(5) - The message of reconciliation (Orchidee)
Comforting thought in this tribute to One who sacrificed all - - one of...
August 31st, 2018 05:52 - NEW ZEALAND WINES : NECTAR OF THE GODS : ANGELA (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Lots of tasty fermented New Zealand liquids to choose from here Angela -...
August 31st, 2018 05:49 - Endless (Sylviasearcher)
An insightful read Sylvia - I love the multi-layered approach to the...
August 31st, 2018 05:45 - The Harvest Moon (September) (Lorna)
Whoops sorry about misspelling your name my friend - meant to type Lorna
August 31st, 2018 04:49 - The Harvest Moon (September) (Lorna)
Simply lovely these few lines of wonderful moon-metaphor Laura - a really...
August 31st, 2018 04:49 - LIMERICK No 53 (Michael Edwards)
This limerick sums up what is wrong with most folk - - the \"we \" and ...
August 31st, 2018 02:01 - Tonight (Christina8)
Nature\'s majestic wonders and family love -- what a wonderful...
August 31st, 2018 01:55 - TORMENT (Michael Edwards)
Oh I agree that love can be torment when its unfettered force uses no...
August 29th, 2018 13:59 - Flavor (Netashi)
The swing between both genders in this clear reminder shows how one-sided...
August 29th, 2018 13:43 - Blue Autumn (Ron parrish aka wordman)
Such a poignant feel to this read Ron - you have a way with romantic...
August 29th, 2018 13:29 - WELLINGTON CAPITAL OF NEW ZEALAND ~ ANGELA (BRIAN & ANGELA)
That New Zealand food and drink sound yummy - enjoy every last mouthful...
August 29th, 2018 05:31 - NEW ZEALAND TRIP : ANGELA : An Acrostic 3 7 4 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
New Zealand\'s people being so friendly are a big draw to the visitor - ...
August 28th, 2018 23:34 - BAY OF ISLANDS - NZ : ANGELA (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Swimming with dolphins sounds like paradise to me - - we had a dolphin a...
August 24th, 2018 20:49 - Luminous Light - 2 (Orchidee)
A lovely read Orchi - thanks for sharing.
August 23rd, 2018 16:18 - EARLY BIRD 5 & 6 (Michael Edwards)
Hope all those worms that early birds get do not mean their later...
August 23rd, 2018 16:17 - Opportunity. (Goldfinch60)
Sound and wise advice here Goldi - - and that video blows me away too - ...
August 23rd, 2018 16:09 - DANCING QUEEN : ANGELA (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Lovely picture and oh that video - I could just imagine Brian exploding...
August 23rd, 2018 09:11 - Absence Of You (H. Ray Davis)
Tender reflections of love now apart - this is one to which I closely...
August 22nd, 2018 07:48 - Garden Lament (H. Ray Davis)
This touches the heart Ray - - a gem of a lament about being alone yet...
August 22nd, 2018 07:45 - Indebted (H. Ray Davis)
Romantic and very appealing H.R. - the lady in question will be...
August 22nd, 2018 07:36 - Wolves Up Close (W c)
Wolves have a hold on many a heart - mine included - a lovely and finely...
August 20th, 2018 15:45 - LOVE SONG FOR ANGELA ~ A SONNET (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Ah - - a perfect sonnet from across the world. There safe and sound and...
August 20th, 2018 03:20
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