Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- LIMERICK No 53 (Michael Edwards)
This limerick sums up what is wrong with most folk - - the \"we \" and ...
August 31st, 2018 02:01 - Tonight (Christina8)
Nature\'s majestic wonders and family love -- what a wonderful...
August 31st, 2018 01:55 - TORMENT (Michael Edwards)
Oh I agree that love can be torment when its unfettered force uses no...
August 29th, 2018 13:59 - Flavor (Netashi)
The swing between both genders in this clear reminder shows how one-sided...
August 29th, 2018 13:43 - Blue Autumn (Ron parrish aka wordman)
Such a poignant feel to this read Ron - you have a way with romantic...
August 29th, 2018 13:29 - WELLINGTON CAPITAL OF NEW ZEALAND ~ ANGELA (BRIAN & ANGELA)
That New Zealand food and drink sound yummy - enjoy every last mouthful...
August 29th, 2018 05:31 - NEW ZEALAND TRIP : ANGELA : An Acrostic 3 7 4 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
New Zealand\'s people being so friendly are a big draw to the visitor - ...
August 28th, 2018 23:34 - BAY OF ISLANDS - NZ : ANGELA (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Swimming with dolphins sounds like paradise to me - - we had a dolphin a...
August 24th, 2018 20:49 - Luminous Light - 2 (Orchidee)
A lovely read Orchi - thanks for sharing.
August 23rd, 2018 16:18 - EARLY BIRD 5 & 6 (Michael Edwards)
Hope all those worms that early birds get do not mean their later...
August 23rd, 2018 16:17 - Opportunity. (Goldfinch60)
Sound and wise advice here Goldi - - and that video blows me away too - ...
August 23rd, 2018 16:09 - DANCING QUEEN : ANGELA (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Lovely picture and oh that video - I could just imagine Brian exploding...
August 23rd, 2018 09:11 - Absence Of You (H. Ray Davis)
Tender reflections of love now apart - this is one to which I closely...
August 22nd, 2018 07:48 - Garden Lament (H. Ray Davis)
This touches the heart Ray - - a gem of a lament about being alone yet...
August 22nd, 2018 07:45 - Indebted (H. Ray Davis)
Romantic and very appealing H.R. - the lady in question will be...
August 22nd, 2018 07:36 - Wolves Up Close (W c)
Wolves have a hold on many a heart - mine included - a lovely and finely...
August 20th, 2018 15:45 - LOVE SONG FOR ANGELA ~ A SONNET (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Ah - - a perfect sonnet from across the world. There safe and sound and...
August 20th, 2018 03:20 - HIGH FIVES (Michael Edwards)
Count me in Michael --the high five is an American import that sets my...
August 17th, 2018 03:04 - ANGELA ~ MY HAPPINESS ~ By BRIAN ~ A Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
May your coming time together be filled with happiness Brian - - wishing...
August 17th, 2018 03:01 - NEW ZEALAND IS CALLING ME : By ANGELA (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Am so excited for you two as it gets nearer the time of saying a loving...
August 16th, 2018 13:30 - NATURE\'S WONDER (Lasergraph)
Yes such is the value of nature to us humans and your lovely poem brings...
August 15th, 2018 15:59 - Summer Breeze (Christina8)
You are a star dear friend and hope you enjoy many more moments making...
August 15th, 2018 13:53 - Hopeless Haiku (Sylviasearcher)
Vivid word-picture of a jump into death which is all too familiar in this...
August 14th, 2018 05:45 - SEVEN MORE NEW ZEALAND QUIRKS from ANGELA ~ A Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Such an exciting video and oh those New Zealand quirks which seem to have...
August 13th, 2018 16:18 - POETICAL OUTTAKES (Michael Edwards)
Such interesting phrasing in your poetical outtakes Michael - - cant...
August 13th, 2018 03:14 - Trout In Colorado (W c)
Trout are infamous in avoiding the baited line - - the fish farm sounds...
August 13th, 2018 03:11 - Fan The Flame (Orchidee)
Great read again Orchi - your postings keep the flame of faith burning my...
August 13th, 2018 03:09 - The Lost Words. (Goldfinch60)
Good questions to ask re. lost words Goldi - - poets suffer from...
August 13th, 2018 03:07 - FIVE FABULOUS FEMALES ~ SENRYU ~ By BRIAN (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Worthy females all five and oh the beauty of Princess Diana - thanks for...
August 10th, 2018 03:35 - THEIR SANCTUARY (Michael Edwards)
First class writing and painting Michael - - a delightful posting and a...
August 10th, 2018 03:32 - THOUGHTS OF DEATH (2) (Michael Edwards)
I am still giggling at your clever image - small is big to a palette like...
August 9th, 2018 16:42 - Mercy Mildness (Orchidee)
\"Christ in us\" - a wonderful phrase - love this hymn-poem Orchi ...
August 9th, 2018 16:34 - Two day break (ish) (Poetic Dan)
A couple of days under canvas with children can put new life in heart,...
August 9th, 2018 16:25 - She eyed the world... (Crystal Hope)
A well- written tale of seeing the world for the first time from a plane ...
August 9th, 2018 16:16 - SEVEN QUIRKY NZ FACTS from ANGELA : A Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Happy happy people show a wonderful togetherness with nature herself - ...
August 9th, 2018 08:30 - She\'s a Smitten Shrew (Adam Shirley (Rea))
A compelling read of what a shrew does in certain situations - - loved the...
August 8th, 2018 04:12 - Deep Within (Elaine)
A cry for help written with style and courage to face the hurt inside. An...
August 8th, 2018 03:32 - Hummingbird\'s Lullaby (Sylviasearcher)
Lovely and comforting words in this beautiful assurance that love has no...
August 8th, 2018 03:22 - riddance (Dusk arising)
Ah - letting go can show us the pleasanter ways - - I love the the gist...
August 8th, 2018 03:20 - Noticing The Needy (Orchidee)
So many are the needy today dear Orchi - a lovely and caring prayer which...
August 8th, 2018 03:18 - DANCING & ROMANCING ~ BRIAN & ANGELA ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Blessings on your soon-to-come reunion with your lady in red Brian - a...
August 8th, 2018 03:02 - THOUGHTS OF DEATH (1) (Michael Edwards)
Ha ha ha - who but you could think up an last line like that !! A...
August 8th, 2018 01:39 - Life (Crystal Hope)
Life as you state in this engaging rhyme is full of \"precious moments\"...
August 8th, 2018 00:07 - LONG WHITE CLOUD : AOTEAROA : An Acrostic Sonnet : By ANGELA (BRIAN & ANGELA)
It sounds such a beautiful name and your words describe the draw of New...
August 7th, 2018 05:36 - ZIMBABWE ~ PEACE & PROSPERITY ! A Blank Verse Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
When signs are set for a situation to be moved on there can be rapid...
August 6th, 2018 09:29 - Girded for Battle (Lorna)
Well done you for doing such good poetic battle with daily destructive...
August 3rd, 2018 09:17 - The Patient Sea and the Mighty Mountain (JWKP98)
A first class example wrapped well in the tale of mountain and sea. An...
August 3rd, 2018 06:05 - Things changed that day (Poetic Dan)
Great number and your words echo its feeling - - great read Dan.
August 3rd, 2018 05:18 - I WRITE (Michael Edwards)
Random happenings can produce serious poetry - good thoughts here...
August 3rd, 2018 04:13 - Pure Protectings (Orchidee)
The gist of this passage of poetic thought rings true as the needy...
August 3rd, 2018 04:09 - LAKESIDE PICNIC ~ A Blank Verse Sonnet ~ BRIAN & ANGELA (BRIAN & ANGELA)
The Word of God being alive is well represented here with these lines of...
August 3rd, 2018 04:07 - Forward With Knowledge. (Goldfinch60)
Very true and wise words Goldie.
August 3rd, 2018 04:02 - tribute (Onepauly)
A beautiful and welcome tribute to serious writers Pauly - - we can all...
August 3rd, 2018 04:01 - WELLINGTON CAPITAL : BY ANGELA : AN ACROSTIC (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Ooooh - love that singing too - - very powerful - thanks for the...
August 2nd, 2018 06:01 - AUGUST (Michael Edwards)
What a well observed and beautiful description of light\'s ability as...
August 2nd, 2018 00:25 - The Surgeon Moon (August) (Lorna)
A wonderfully magical scene your pen painted today Lorna - - could imagine...
August 1st, 2018 05:48 - Better than worse (Poetic Dan)
Wishing your daughter a great birthday and her Dad plenty of happy moments...
August 1st, 2018 04:20 - Beechworth Streets #07: leading by light (Frank Prem)
Love the warm flow of kindly advice to these \"night-morning souls\"...
July 31st, 2018 05:31 - SARTORINaL INELEGANCIES (2) (Michael Edwards)
Agreed Mike - polo shirts tucked in are over the top in my estimation -...
July 31st, 2018 05:30 - MARRIED BLISS & BIMBO ! ~ BRIAN (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Ha ha - - what a tale your wordy pen tells here Brian - - a veritable...
July 31st, 2018 05:00 - What Breezes Bring (Lorna)
Lovely read Lorna - a good start to my reading time. Great number too.
July 31st, 2018 04:56 - REST ~ BEST CURE FOR STRESSED ! Collaboration Brian & Angela XOX (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Such a lively and uplifting take on the subject of everyday stresses and...
July 31st, 2018 00:50 - Under The Weather (Christina8)
So good to know you are making progress and daily feeling a return to...
July 30th, 2018 01:36 - Veronica (Dusk arising)
Great number and a tribute to your writing ability. Am sure Veronica will...
July 27th, 2018 16:11 - It felt Like A Breeze. (Kevin browne)
A rhyme so full of flow and good advice it appeals to the mind and heart...
July 27th, 2018 09:37 - Charles Trenet - La Mer (Lorna)
Ah - - an all time favourite and thanks for sharing his appealing voice...
July 27th, 2018 05:31 - COASTAL EROSION ~ HORRIFIC ~ BRIAN (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Oh Brian that picture you chose brought a shiver of sad sympathy - - it...
July 26th, 2018 11:06 - Isolation (Poetic Dan)
A magical and thought provoking read Dan - - - \"It\'s O.K. to feel good\"...
July 26th, 2018 05:31 - epitaph (Dusk arising)
Oh I so agree - those traits so expertly outlined here are the real...
July 26th, 2018 05:27 - THE PERIODIC TABLE OF ELEMENTS ~ A SONNET ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Filled with gratitude to such as the genius Mendeleev who centuries back...
July 25th, 2018 11:47 - The power in me (Poetic Dan)
A fine piece of testament to braving life through even though for periods...
July 25th, 2018 09:24 - Fire Dragon (LIGHT WARRIOR)
A powerful and perceptive read Jason - telling the ways we can be brought...
July 25th, 2018 09:19 - A lullaby (Poetic Dan)
Yes a healing piece of tender care and wise advice Dan - and a fine...
July 24th, 2018 05:14 - Life’s Limbo (JackSkelton)
The mundane of life clogging out ways and expressed so clearly Jack - - an...
July 24th, 2018 05:07 - Beechworth Streets #05: wait Aladdin (Frank Prem)
Love this picture of dark\'s mysterious lights Frank - city night-life...
July 24th, 2018 05:05 - NOBLETS OF NONESENSE (9) (Michael Edwards)
Avoiding the sponge-suck yesterday I plunged into the sea and struck...
July 23rd, 2018 16:31 - WE WERE BOTH SO YOUNG (Lasergraph)
Ah - loud applause for this warm and lighthearted look at the best way to...
July 23rd, 2018 16:25 - THREE SPANISH HAIKU ANGELA (BRIAN & ANGELA)
What a lovely idea Angela to present haiku in Spanish and English - - the...
July 23rd, 2018 16:06 - MADE IN MICHIGAN ~ A Two Dozen Tribute ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A really absorbing read about Michigan which makes me wish to visit one...
July 20th, 2018 16:02 - Cities (Stan Rodriguez)
Some of the phrasing you use about cities compels reassessment of their...
July 20th, 2018 15:56 - Sensual Dreams (Stan Rodriguez)
Rich in inventiveness and assonance this read stirs sensuality and needs...
July 20th, 2018 09:17 - Requiem for a Naked Thought (Stan Rodriguez)
Loud applause for this expressive lament for a thought never clad with a...
July 20th, 2018 07:27 - Goodbye Yesterday (Helen Phelan)
Welcome Helen - and congrats on creating a new you - -with your first...
July 20th, 2018 01:28 - friends (Onepauly)
A heart-warming read Pauly - thanks for the reminder that we all have...
July 20th, 2018 01:18 - easy (Dusk arising)
Love the positive outlook on life in this poetic and perceptive reminder...
July 20th, 2018 01:14 - THE FIRST TIME EVER ..... ? Collaboration BRIAN & ANGELA (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A duo combo like this deserves all our praise for highlighting the love...
July 19th, 2018 03:55 - HIGH SUMMER (Michael Edwards)
could smell the ripening fields of corn with the force of these lines and...
July 18th, 2018 12:05 - forever (Onepauly)
The limits we set ourselves are so puny and this verse points to the...
July 18th, 2018 05:40 - Seasons Sought (Orchidee)
Fine play on the double meaning of words here Orchi - - barren not only...
July 18th, 2018 05:38 - Perfection Failed. (Goldfinch60)
Agree with your words here Goldi - perfection should not trouble us as we...
July 18th, 2018 05:36 - 1st taught 2nd shown 3rd see (Poetic Dan)
Ah - - lovely piece of writing Dan - Straight from your warm heart this...
July 18th, 2018 05:34 - GOING HOME ~ A Blank Verse FLOW SONNET (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Your pen makes the best of this style and subject dear Brian - so clear...
July 18th, 2018 04:24 - CONTAGION (Michael Edwards)
This sums up the feared word of Contagion so well Michael - - fighting...
July 17th, 2018 05:35 - Unbroken Love. (Goldfinch60)
The tender feelings that come with true love are evident here in every...
July 17th, 2018 05:29 - Fruitful Flourishing (Orchidee)
A fine tribute to the reasons for flourishing and begetting fruit. Thanks...
July 17th, 2018 05:26 - Antagonist vs Antonyms (Poetic Dan)
Really wise answers to these jibes and pokes by those who as yet have no...
July 17th, 2018 05:23 - who we are (Onepauly)
I agree too - - faith is part of the permanent as are we - made of the...
July 17th, 2018 05:20 - SWEATY FEET (Michael Edwards)
You composed a smell which pervaded the page dear Michael - with this...
July 16th, 2018 14:13 - CHESS ~ A GAME FOR THE BRAIN ! A 4 5 5 Blank Verse Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Lovely voice and words - - very telling
- - interesting info. on chess...
July 16th, 2018 12:12 - Prayer For His Presence (Orchidee)
Lovely this read before going to bed - thank you Orchi - feeling blessed...
July 12th, 2018 17:30
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