Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.

• That Will Be Me. (Goldfinch60) We need never fear seeing ourselves maturing for our outlook on love...
  July 12th, 2018 17:28
• BE TOUGH (Michael Edwards) Clever rhyming with terse lines telling how far to go down before reaching...
  July 12th, 2018 17:11
• TURTLE & TORTOISE ~ An Acrostic 6 8 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Your tribute to turtle and tortoise left me with a smile dear Brian - - I...
  July 12th, 2018 16:10
• \"If I have not love...\" (DesertWords) A powerful read as a tribute to love - an outstanding stanza has to be...
  July 12th, 2018 15:58
• Chasing Our Rainbows (Kevin browne) This read hit home in so many ways Kevin - the shame of mistreating the...
  July 12th, 2018 15:55
• Comfort in Isaiah (3): God\'s Character (Orchidee) Ah yes He does each address and with love He gives us our worth. A lovely...
  July 6th, 2018 15:33
• Trenched Hearts. (Kevin browne) Your way with words never ceases to amaze Kevin - this read brings tears...
  July 6th, 2018 13:59
• NOBLETS OF NONESENSE (3) (Michael Edwards) Ha ha - this noblet raised more than a smile today Michael - - super idea...
  July 6th, 2018 00:40
• NOBLETS OF NONESENSE (2) (Michael Edwards) Another smile as I view the penguin picture - - you never cease to amaze...
  July 6th, 2018 00:38
• NOBLETS OF NONESENSE (1) (Michael Edwards) So glad I caught up with your penguin paintings Michael - have always...
  July 6th, 2018 00:36
• Greatest Love (Christina8) A love poem to be treasured dear Christina - your warm and grateful...
  July 5th, 2018 01:42
• Addiction (Poetic Dan) With honesty like this you will conquer your fears friend - - a most...
  July 3rd, 2018 16:00
• ENGLAND ~ GREAT AGAIN ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Count me in for the wine and biscuits but sorry the game simply has no...
  July 3rd, 2018 15:53
• A BROODING PLACE (Michael Edwards) This is a first class write Michael - must put it in my favs for further...
  July 3rd, 2018 02:33
• WHAT IS LOVE? (KinleyMillsap) ah - this flows with fresh wording on love with short pithy lines which...
  June 28th, 2018 13:14
• The Security Fowl (W c) What beautiful creatures these guinea fowl - birds I have not been blessed...
  June 28th, 2018 12:25
• \'They say\' ...Who is \'They\'? (E-Poems) Some of these sayings are coated with truth and we do well to take heed -...
  June 28th, 2018 10:06
• THE WONDERS OF GOD (Frogspoetry) So good to read of such living faith dear friend - blessings galore from...
  June 28th, 2018 10:02
• Three Little Words (Darren) Your words touch the heart and will delight your loved one - thank you...
  June 28th, 2018 09:57
• REVERIE. (Fay Slimm.) Thank you EPoems for saving this verse in your favourites - so pleased...
  June 28th, 2018 09:55
• TOO MUCH INFORMATION ? (BRIAN & ANGELA) All too true this outcry against unrequired and unneeded information ...
  June 28th, 2018 04:35
• I AM A PHYSIOTHERAPIST ~ ANGELA (BRIAN & ANGELA) What a rewarding profession to be in Angela where people who need that bit...
  June 27th, 2018 16:04
• THE EAGLE IN THE SKY (Frogspoetry) A wonderful and uplifting positive message to help a friend - I love the...
  June 27th, 2018 11:51
• Grey (Syd) You describe the emotionless shade of grey so eloquently Syd - - - it ...
  June 27th, 2018 11:47
• FOUR SEASONS ~ ONE DAY IN MAY ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) British weather is always precocious and your poem outlined the surprises...
  June 22nd, 2018 14:48
• A LITTER OF LANTURNES (Michael Edwards) A litter of truth adorns these lanturnes - - great read Michael.
  June 21st, 2018 02:48
• ANGELA ~ LOVE OF MY LIFE ~ A Rhymed 3 5 6 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Wishing you both all these words and more - may you find a lifetime of...
  June 21st, 2018 02:46
• Kneading Emotions. (Goldfinch60) A clear and very readable recipe for proper bread-making - beating out...
  June 20th, 2018 06:04
• 3:30 am argument with the page (Andrew Charles Forrest) Ah - loud applause for this flowing and well worded outcry against...
  June 20th, 2018 06:00
• THREE PICTURES PAINTED (Michael Edwards) You make reading a sheer delight with these three little jewels dear ...
  June 20th, 2018 02:32
• Holding My Breath (Christina8) This touches down to the core dear Christina - - - sending you some big...
  June 20th, 2018 02:30
• My Dog Diesel (Darren) Your poem touches the heart and many readers can relate to the feeling of...
  June 19th, 2018 21:57
• MY MAMAS ROSE GARDEN ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) I love all roses dear Brian and your Mum certainly has an abundance of...
  June 19th, 2018 10:03
• SOME ONE LINERS (Michael Edwards) Truth outs in these wise words Michael - - - great one-liners.
  June 19th, 2018 09:57
• SOME SHORTIES (575) (Michael Edwards) Fantastic water-colour of beautiful cyclamen - - - great shorties too...
  June 18th, 2018 06:19
• Birdsong (W c) Such a beautifully written description of birdsong to adorn the colourful...
  June 16th, 2018 16:01
• counting crows (Willyweed) Like that positive thought that dawn will chase the darkness - how true...
  June 15th, 2018 12:18
• Amazing World. (Goldfinch60) I agree both nature and music have such an effect on our personal worlds -...
  June 15th, 2018 05:59
• MAORIS ~ BEAUTIFUL PEOPLE NZ II ~ ANGELA ~ A 6 6 2 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) The very singing and dancing is hypnotic - - no wonder Angela has fallen...
  June 15th, 2018 05:47
• The Freedom of Wolves (Lorna) Lorna you clearly portrayed in this heart-tugging verse the call of the...
  June 13th, 2018 11:04
• By My Side (Christina8) A warm and tender appreciation of being loved -- a blessing put into...
  June 13th, 2018 02:02
• Prayer Progress (Orchidee) A fine write Orchi.
  June 12th, 2018 07:12
• Finding Peace. (Goldfinch60) Both the poem and that charming number by Frank made an interesting read...
  June 12th, 2018 07:11
• A SKELETON IN MY BED ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Another well written piece of needed information which demands respect for...
  June 12th, 2018 06:08
• A Flirtatious Understanding with Death (Lorna) A first class emotive write Lorna - - those rhyming lines are perfectly...
  June 12th, 2018 06:06
• LOVE HEALS (Michael Edwards) Perfect statements for the form chosen - and a lovely reminder too that...
  June 12th, 2018 01:39
• A Honey of a Day (Lorna) Fair-weather lovers are getting more frequent and this poignant write...
  June 11th, 2018 05:32
• BENEATH (Michael Edwards) Super poem with some wonderful metaphor used to full effect. First rate...
  June 11th, 2018 04:20
• DOUBLETS ~ COLOURS OF ROSES ~ MESSAGES (BRIAN & ANGELA) Roses of any shade are favs with me as long as their perfume fills the...
  June 11th, 2018 04:17
• Baby Boy (W c) You well describe the delight of a baby with caring parents - such a...
  June 8th, 2018 13:19
• Pink Royalty (Lorna) Yes I accessed the video no probs. - - I too love Danny Kaye - he was so...
  June 8th, 2018 08:46
• Pink Royalty (Lorna) Ah - I love the short lines of perceptive glory in this little ode to the...
  June 8th, 2018 07:26
• TWILIGHT (Michael Edwards) Quite a depth to this moving write Michael - - and to counterbalance the...
  June 8th, 2018 01:59
• OUR TOWN CENTRES ? A Nostalgic Acrostic Sonnet ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Agree wholeheartedly Brian - how sad to see city and even small-town shops...
  June 8th, 2018 01:50
• THE BOATYARD (Michael Edwards) Boat-building described with an artist\'s flair - great read and lovely...
  June 7th, 2018 07:35
• The girl within. (Isabel Chelisia Villa) It is sometimes a hard lesson to learn but self is all that is needed for...
  June 7th, 2018 07:33
• Plenteous Praises (Orchidee) Plenteous praises make the day special for the giver and receiver my...
  June 7th, 2018 07:28
• Coffeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee (Lorna) Know just how you feel Lorna - gardening is darned-hard work and the next...
  June 7th, 2018 07:23
• FIVE LOVE QUATRAINS ~ ENJOY (BRIAN & ANGELA) By the way that number you chose has been my favourite for ages.She knew...
  June 7th, 2018 05:35
• FIVE LOVE QUATRAINS ~ ENJOY (BRIAN & ANGELA) Ah - a sweet and romantic tale of love when separated - your words...
  June 7th, 2018 05:33
• Wanting To Go With You (Lorna) Love cannot die yet this set of poignant questions has to be asked when...
  June 6th, 2018 11:33
• JOAN HUNTER DUNN ~ JOHN BETJEMAN (1941) (BRIAN & ANGELA) Ah - - one of my all time favs of John Betjeman\'s talent for writing...
  June 6th, 2018 10:47
• Shrinking World (Goldfinch60) The reaches of this generation astound me too dear Goldi - - they think...
  June 6th, 2018 05:52
• Recipe For A Poem (Jane Frye) A very perceptive look at what makes a good poem Jane and one to which...
  June 6th, 2018 01:59
• A DREAM (Michael Edwards) The mystery of a dream described perfectly and with poetic prowess.
  June 6th, 2018 01:53
• PERCEPTION (Michael Edwards) Yes the word \"again\" begs a question here Michael -and I agree it opens...
  June 5th, 2018 16:18
• Love Unknown. (Goldfinch60) A heart-wrenching write along with the music - - such test on true love is...
  June 5th, 2018 16:15
• Constructive Chastening: Hebrews Series - 17 (Orchidee) A spiritual reminder on the need for chastening as we all fall behind to...
  June 5th, 2018 16:11
• Social Faces, Social Graces (Fox) This write describes so clearly the depth our present culture has fallen...
  June 5th, 2018 16:09
• COCKNEY RHYMING SLANG ~ A RESPONSE ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) A very rich and clever language is Cockney-speak Brian and thanks for the...
  June 5th, 2018 15:52
• CARING FOR OTHERS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Wise words of advice in that final stanza of needed reminders of how much...
  June 4th, 2018 11:50
• Indecisive House Wrens (Lorna) The scene and the wrens looking for house-room is outlined delightfully in...
  June 4th, 2018 08:20
• AUTUMN (Michael Edwards) Super write Michael - every word meaningful. Great read.
  June 1st, 2018 15:53
• Property (Christina8) This read touches the heart deeply - - keep that chin high Christina...
  June 1st, 2018 10:10
• BRAW BROWN BEARS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) What an adventure to see in the wild a family of bears - I love the...
  May 31st, 2018 08:05
• AGONY & ECSTASY OF LIFE & LOVE ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Both sides of the subject are dealt with most eloquently in this...
  May 25th, 2018 16:12
• OCTOPUSES ARE ALIENS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Love the descriptions you use or these slithery masters of Neptune\'s bed...
  May 23rd, 2018 06:32
• Clean up your act. (Aa Harvey) Sound advice here Aa - - -life indeed is too short for living it...
  May 23rd, 2018 06:24
• My Mother is Busy in Writing (Pintu Mahakul) A beautiful tribute to a talented and much loved Mother who has no doubt...
  May 22nd, 2018 16:10
• THE LADY DRESSED IN BLACK (Michael Edwards) The picture expresses the depth in such poignant poetic lines Michael -...
  May 21st, 2018 13:29
• Early Awakening (W c) A lovely scene of early excitement watching nature at dawn - - a very ...
  May 21st, 2018 13:20
• SUMMER HOLIDAYS ~ MAXINE & BRIAN Collaboration ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Such a happy and informative read - - well done you two with lots of...
  May 21st, 2018 13:17
• Promised Paraclete At Pentecost (Orchidee) An amazing account of the pouring out of Holy Spirit which empowered those...
  May 21st, 2018 13:12
• Lost Decade. (Goldfinch60) A sense of lost time comes to the fore very clearly in this poignant verse...
  May 21st, 2018 13:10
• This is It. (Christina K) So moving Christina - -the words flow into lines of real emptiness at...
  May 21st, 2018 13:08
• Elusive Endorphins (Lorna) Just looking at that lovely image can bring on the magic which is never...
  May 12th, 2018 16:40
• FOUR HORSEMEN OF THE APOCALYPSE ~ PROPHETICAL VISION ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) John\'s vision assures us that God will arrange the troubled finalé of...
  May 11th, 2018 12:15
• SIX LANTURNES (In Collaboration with Laura ) (Michael Edwards) Congrats to you both - - a complete success in this interesting form.
  May 11th, 2018 02:07
• Ghost (Nicholas Browning) I was walking that pathway with you so clear your description of life in a...
  May 10th, 2018 16:43
• Enjoy The Music (W c) The healing that music can bring is found in each line of this lovely read...
  May 10th, 2018 16:39
• A LIFELESS LAND (Michael Edwards) More lifeless a land cannot be than this eerie verse paints dear...
  May 10th, 2018 10:17
• LOVE\'S TUNE. (Fay Slimm.) MY APOLOGIES DEAR FRIENDS FOR NOT BEING ABLE TO GET INDIVIDUAL REPLIES TO...
  May 9th, 2018 16:03
• LOVE\'S TUNE. (Fay Slimm.) Glad you found that final line pleasing Michael - - thanks for your...
  May 9th, 2018 15:58
• Simply Shakespeare (Lorna) Wonderfully poetic questions in this little gem Lorna.
  May 9th, 2018 11:21
• Sleepless Nights (JackCoria) You describe the experience very well of the nights when sleep seems to...
  May 9th, 2018 04:53
• Blessings Bounties (Orchidee) A needed reminder of that glorious name of the Creator and which we should...
  May 9th, 2018 04:50
• LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT ~ A Diablo Morphic Mirror Poem ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Wonderful art-form top to tail and and back again - and full of reasons...
  May 9th, 2018 04:47
• SILHOUETTED (Michael Edwards) And a fine picture this form of poetic expression creates Michael - - love...
  May 8th, 2018 16:12
• Out Of Harmony (Christina8) Yes harmony is worth striving for in any relationship and this verse...
  May 8th, 2018 16:11
• Malarkey Blowing in the Wind (Lorna) So sad you had to write this to a person who does not feel the need of...
  May 7th, 2018 16:07