Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- For The Homeless (W c)
Empathy is its own payment to kind souls who give of themselves to others...
January 18th, 2019 05:08 - Red Sky (Joanna Garrido)
Touchingly poignant these beautifully sad words.
January 18th, 2019 05:06 - Proximity (Whisperingquill)
A first rate write on the meaning of emotional neglect when love is facing...
January 17th, 2019 09:41 - Being (Sylviasearcher)
Such a poignant appeal in this outpour of Being - a most...
January 17th, 2019 09:34 - forgotten field (Markashley1961)
Loud applause for this first rate write on dark fields of lament Mark - ...
January 17th, 2019 05:58 - MORE HERBS & SPICES ~ BRIAN ~ An ABC Rhyming Acrostic ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Glad you included the humble nastursium in your interesting list of herbs...
January 17th, 2019 05:54 - Turquoise (Neville)
The colour of blue in your write called Turquoise gave me a walk down...
January 17th, 2019 05:49 - Beautiful (Mia_Rose)
A lovely and positive read Mia - - those last two lines are what we should...
January 16th, 2019 13:55 - SHE WILL NEVER WALK AGAIN (Ruthdeming)
Welcome to this friendly poetry site Ruth - - your first poem makes a...
January 16th, 2019 11:52 - Score for Words. (Goldfinch60)
Words and wonderful score together paint a picture of patient experience ...
January 16th, 2019 09:52 - The Better Version of Us (Denise)
An emotional tug through each line of this tribute to love brought tears...
January 16th, 2019 09:48 - Empty Spaces (Markashley1961)
Such a heart-touching read Mark - - those spaces which dark with emptiness...
January 16th, 2019 09:44 - Practical Preparation - Mark\'s Gospel (1) (Orchidee)
A fine testament to the Baptist\'s ministry of preparation. Thanks for...
January 16th, 2019 09:42 - The Weavers Knot (Neville)
So evocative with its gentle reminders of erotic alertness when bewitched...
January 16th, 2019 09:35 - Its never empty! (Poetic Dan)
I once read Dan that the mind has power but not over will - there is a...
January 15th, 2019 13:31 - Our Family Games (W c)
Ah - those were the days my friend - - family times ever stay in the mind...
January 15th, 2019 13:26 - LUSTS EMBRACE (Michael Edwards)
Narrow minds can stoke coals to flaming fires - yes indeed - love this...
January 15th, 2019 10:52 - 🧠💔A.D.H.D (YoursTruly9)
Such a brave yet instructive write - thank you for sharing it.
January 15th, 2019 10:49 - Morning Glory. (Goldfinch60)
Reading this brought tears to my eyes Goldi - your love for sweetheart is...
January 15th, 2019 10:48 - Hope, Help, Healing (Orchidee)
Uplifting thoughts here - thank you Orchi.
January 15th, 2019 10:44 - Borrowed Characters (Neville)
Borrowed indeed are the characters of people who like to ferment both...
January 15th, 2019 10:43 - ANGELA ~ MY HAPPINESS ~ BRIAN ~ Poeme d\'Amour ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Love in all its wonderful faces shine from your words and the beautiful...
January 15th, 2019 10:36 - Gossip (Joseph M Marion)
You describe the effects this flourishing devil called Gossip has on any...
January 15th, 2019 10:30 - The Opposite of Up (Sylviasearcher)
Inventive and compelling this read on the state of being between the ups...
January 15th, 2019 10:20 - DATING 2019 🧡 ANGELA & BRIAN 💙 A RHYMING SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Ah = a love to sigh for - a very blessed fellow is your Brian methinks -...
January 14th, 2019 08:59 - Golden Fleece (Tiffany_Arnold)
A positive and very encouraging message Tiffany and thanks for sharing...
January 11th, 2019 14:38 - Evening to Dawn. (Goldfinch60)
Changes by light and darkness and so beautifully described Goldi - - I...
January 11th, 2019 06:29 - Stealing La Petit Morts underneath a cerise moon/Velvet Strands (Whisperingquill)
Compelling read and so adeptly crafted - - a favourite for sure. Thanks...
January 11th, 2019 03:26 - Separations (Lorna)
The flow and appeal of this poignant verse stays long after the read - - -...
January 11th, 2019 03:19 - Everything now has color (Netashi)
Colour can be a saviour to sight that has seen only sad black and white -...
January 10th, 2019 17:33 - Recovery rhyme and to thank all of life (Poetic Dan)
Fine write Dan -- a writer\'s passion needs an outlet for as this verse...
January 10th, 2019 17:04 - Lucky In Love (W c)
A celebration of true love in every line dear WC - --- would that all...
January 10th, 2019 16:58 - TEN HEALTHIEST UK UNIVERSITIES ~ BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Yes it pays to look at the curriculum offered by such places and then make...
January 10th, 2019 13:11 - Matter (Dakota)
The appeal of questions on life\'s unfairness and brevity comes through...
January 10th, 2019 04:56 - SIMPLE CHORDS (Michael Edwards)
Lovely this delicate introduction to a tale which could have an...
January 10th, 2019 04:49 - Tell Me (Neville)
A delicate and tender position when love on the part of one becomes...
January 10th, 2019 04:47 - You Did It (Psychofemale)
Such an appealing read - -- the challenge of giving the heart into...
January 10th, 2019 04:43 - HERBS & SPICES ~ An ABCDarian POEM ~ ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Hi Angela - - blessings to you too as you experiment with herbs and spices...
January 7th, 2019 09:26 - Epiphany Enquirings (Orchidee)
A lovely portrayal of the One who came from the small town of Bethlehem -...
January 7th, 2019 05:56 - HERBS & SPICES ~ An ABCDarian POEM ~ ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Such a yummy addition to the first read of my morning dear Angela - - ...
January 7th, 2019 05:53 - WINTER CLOSES (1) (Michael Edwards)
An engaging short anthem to winter\'s closure - - another gem of a...
January 7th, 2019 05:00 - SNOWDROPS ! A 7 7 MIRROR SONNET ~ BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
There are carpets of snowdrops that open around the new year near to where...
January 2nd, 2019 09:02 - LIFES DECISIONS ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ AN ACROSTIC 5 9 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
This lovely look at the reason for sparkle and display at year\'s...
January 1st, 2019 16:43 - The Blue Flames of Immortality (Joanna Garrido)
Oh Yes - - SHE of the Rider Haggard -inspired mind - - a great choice of...
January 1st, 2019 14:14 - Dali’s Eyes (Neville)
Great structure to this tribute - Dali and Hemingway are both...
January 1st, 2019 14:10 - LOOKING FORWARD (Dusk arising)
A clever play on words in this seriously good write describing the scary...
January 1st, 2019 09:35 - New Beginnings (The Retired Bloke)
Excellent rhyming in these much needed reminders of New Year significance...
January 1st, 2019 05:48 - IN DREAMS (Michael Edwards)
A poem of mystic appeal and a picture that saw the beginnings of challenge...
January 1st, 2019 04:45 - POLLUTED PLANET 2019 ~ ANGELA & BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A haunt of a read with the graphic and number bearing out these dire...
December 31st, 2018 03:47 - HAPPY NEW YEAR TO ALL AT MPS (Michael Edwards)
Thanks for the bit of early morning lingual fun after your lovely New Year...
December 31st, 2018 01:17 - NEW YEAR : 2019 : IN THE PINK : ANGELA & BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Good rhyming and clear advice in this wish for blessings as new year rolls...
December 30th, 2018 14:06 - Dream of Peace. (Goldfinch60)
An apt dream dear Goldi this need for peace between nations and people ...
December 30th, 2018 14:02 - Angels Acclaimings (Orchidee)
A fine reminder of who holds all truth Orchi.
December 30th, 2018 14:01 - arms trade (Dusk arising)
A powerful few lines of mindful sympathy for those caught between guns...
December 30th, 2018 13:59 - Rough Sketched & True (Neville)
Loud cheers for this lyrical walk around countryside with an artistic eye...
December 30th, 2018 05:33 - Ode To Bianca (W c)
Cats are our companions and deserve this fine ode as a tribute W.C. - a...
December 29th, 2018 14:05 - Wind Washed & Flying (Neville)
An engaging read filled with gentle erotica so discreetly described it ...
December 29th, 2018 03:54 - New Day - Haiku to Senryu. (Goldfinch60)
Encouraging combination Goldi in this seasonal tribute to a new day\'s...
December 29th, 2018 03:46 - Blessed Birth (Orchidee)
A heart-warming read and a comforting instrumental too Orchi.
December 29th, 2018 03:30 - NEW YEAR RESOLVE : 2019 : ANGELA : An Acrostic Sonnet (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Angela - well done - -a very appealing set of reasons to try listing the...
December 28th, 2018 08:44 - BRIDGING SPACE @ CHRISTMAS ~ BRIAN ~ A SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Lovely sonnet and although poigantly worded the love comes through . Keep...
December 26th, 2018 08:39 - Frozen (Joanna Garrido)
Good use of comparative metaphor Joanna - I look forward to reading more...
December 26th, 2018 08:34 - Talk Me Poetry (Neville)
An amazing flow and a wonderful metre to this delight read Neville. nto my...
December 26th, 2018 06:51 - A KOOL YOOL TO EVERYONE : ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡 (ANGELA & BRIAN)
With you in these festive lines on why Love will conquer in the end - -...
December 24th, 2018 12:25 - Christmas Peace. (Goldfinch60)
Lovely wrote on the night before Christmas dear Goldi and a delight to...
December 24th, 2018 12:21 - Portals (LIGHT WARRIOR)
A compelling read Jason - -so true that life goes on and that death is a...
December 24th, 2018 12:18 - MERRY CHRISTMAS TO ALL (Michael Edwards)
Ha - - Thanks for this needed reminder of female power at this festive...
December 24th, 2018 12:11 - Dayspring Dawning (Orchidee)
Beautiful words and thanks for sharing dear Orchi.
December 24th, 2018 12:06 - Queue of Longing (Neville)
Love your metaphors in this tribute to poets whose inspiration has taken...
December 24th, 2018 12:05 - Meadow (Simon Bromley)
Just the stroll I needed right now in a peaceful meadow and so poetically...
December 24th, 2018 12:00 - Bride of the Dark Depths (Joanna Garrido)
Oooh deliciously scary this underworld story -- a well-crafted tale with...
December 24th, 2018 11:55 - Deep (John Prophet)
Yes we live in a circle of mystery here on this wonderful planet and...
December 24th, 2018 11:52 - New Year\'s Eve: (Niallprideaux)
P.S. - - of course - reading the title again it is the New Year...
December 24th, 2018 11:44 - New Year\'s Eve: (Niallprideaux)
What a vivid picture of the Christmas festivities you pen here Nial - - a...
December 24th, 2018 11:43 - FRIENDSHIP (Laura🌻)
Thank you dear Laura and may your festive season bring you blessings and...
December 24th, 2018 10:37 - Whispering words of wisdom (Netashi)
True this poem contains poetic words of wisdom and enjoyed the play on...
December 21st, 2018 14:06 - War is Not for Lovers (Neville)
A heart-wrenching read about the truth of the trenches when death caught...
December 21st, 2018 06:29 - CHOCOLATE AN ACROSTIC ~ ANGELA & BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Charming rhymes about love and from each gender side how it affects...
December 21st, 2018 06:25 - DEJA VU EXPERIENCE 🧡 ANGELA 🧡 A TRUE STORY ? (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Such an amazing experience and told with poetic verve - wow - finding...
December 18th, 2018 07:40 - Whale Whispering (Neville)
So explicit the description of dancing leviathans I was there with you...
December 18th, 2018 07:34 - On Waking (Neville)
Early morning coupling is good for those born as larks but not for owls...
December 14th, 2018 05:02 - The Experts Opinion. (Goldfinch60)
It is true that opinions differ when viewing anything in the field of art ...
December 14th, 2018 04:57 - Fly Forth! (Orchidee)
Such an uplift to read these encouraging words Orchi - joyous indeed.
December 14th, 2018 04:52 - PARACHUTE BAND ~ CHRISTMAS CONCERT 2018 ~ BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Agree witn Michael - would I had been there to enjoy the performance and...
December 14th, 2018 03:07 - A DISARRAY OF COUPLETS (Michael Edwards)
An array of wise perception in these resurrected outtakes Michael - the...
December 14th, 2018 02:42 - Tabula Rasa (Nicholas Browning)
Truths abound in this honest verse - - a false step is certainly not a...
December 13th, 2018 16:06 - Christmas Time (W c)
A delightful number of reasons why this special season is a time of...
December 12th, 2018 17:11 - Fools gold (Netashi)
The theme of the verse gives a good reason to work against materialism...
December 12th, 2018 17:08 - The Width of a Table (Neville)
An ongoing wish which I hope comes true the next time Neville - - you...
December 12th, 2018 13:20 - LATE ! FOR A VERY IMPORTANT DATE ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A very romantic beginning although time caught a ride to your first date ...
December 12th, 2018 05:49 - Man Flu (The Retired Bloke)
Ah - a good twist to the tale in those final lines RB - - \"man-flue\" is...
December 12th, 2018 05:46 - BLACK & WHITE ~ A REVERSE ABCDARIAN POEM ~ ANGELA & BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Thanks for the honesty in these wonderful lines Brian .A beautiful list of...
December 11th, 2018 17:05 - SHORTIE TWO (Michael Edwards)
Yes seal it is Michael - perceptive write and gorgeous water-colour.
December 11th, 2018 04:35 - Malfunctioning (Poetic Dan)
Correction to this amazing write - your show can still go on my friend -...
December 10th, 2018 11:39 - SHORTIE ONE (Michael Edwards)
Short line wise advice Michael - - love the mysterious path leading to -...
December 10th, 2018 03:29 - TWELVE GIFTS OF CHRISTMAS : BRIAN & ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Bravo to both of you - -Excellent and very original twelve-day Christmas...
December 10th, 2018 03:28 - ORCHESTRATEY (Michael Edwards)
A fantastic re-assembly of language we now rarely hear yet remember well -...
December 9th, 2018 04:19 - Afterwards (Neville)
Ah - the blissful feeling of sexual contentment this read with its honest...
December 9th, 2018 04:14 - Autumn Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
A lovely first read of my day - thank you or such an honest tribute to...
December 9th, 2018 04:02 - IF I CAN HELP SOMEBODY ~ ANGELA 🧡 BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A beautiful confession of love by you two lovely people - good to read...
December 8th, 2018 13:06
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