Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.

• SIMPLE CHORDS (Michael Edwards) Lovely this delicate introduction to a tale which could have an...
  January 10th, 2019 04:49
• Tell Me (Neville) A delicate and tender position when love on the part of one becomes...
  January 10th, 2019 04:47
• You Did It (Psychofemale) Such an appealing read - -- the challenge of giving the heart into...
  January 10th, 2019 04:43
• HERBS & SPICES ~ An ABCDarian POEM ~ ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN) Hi Angela - - blessings to you too as you experiment with herbs and spices...
  January 7th, 2019 09:26
• Epiphany Enquirings (Orchidee) A lovely portrayal of the One who came from the small town of Bethlehem -...
  January 7th, 2019 05:56
• HERBS & SPICES ~ An ABCDarian POEM ~ ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN) Such a yummy addition to the first read of my morning dear Angela - - ...
  January 7th, 2019 05:53
• WINTER CLOSES (1) (Michael Edwards) An engaging short anthem to winter\'s closure - - another gem of a...
  January 7th, 2019 05:00
• SNOWDROPS ! A 7 7 MIRROR SONNET ~ BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN) There are carpets of snowdrops that open around the new year near to where...
  January 2nd, 2019 09:02
• LIFES DECISIONS ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ AN ACROSTIC 5 9 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN) This lovely look at the reason for sparkle and display at year\'s...
  January 1st, 2019 16:43
• The Blue Flames of Immortality (Joanna Garrido) Oh Yes - - SHE of the Rider Haggard -inspired mind - - a great choice of...
  January 1st, 2019 14:14
• Dali’s Eyes (Neville) Great structure to this tribute - Dali and Hemingway are both...
  January 1st, 2019 14:10
• LOOKING FORWARD (Dusk arising) A clever play on words in this seriously good write describing the scary...
  January 1st, 2019 09:35
• New Beginnings (The Retired Bloke) Excellent rhyming in these much needed reminders of New Year significance...
  January 1st, 2019 05:48
• IN DREAMS (Michael Edwards) A poem of mystic appeal and a picture that saw the beginnings of challenge...
  January 1st, 2019 04:45
• POLLUTED PLANET 2019 ~ ANGELA & BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN) A haunt of a read with the graphic and number bearing out these dire...
  December 31st, 2018 03:47
• HAPPY NEW YEAR TO ALL AT MPS (Michael Edwards) Thanks for the bit of early morning lingual fun after your lovely New Year...
  December 31st, 2018 01:17
• NEW YEAR : 2019 : IN THE PINK : ANGELA & BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN) Good rhyming and clear advice in this wish for blessings as new year rolls...
  December 30th, 2018 14:06
• Dream of Peace. (Goldfinch60) An apt dream dear Goldi this need for peace between nations and people ...
  December 30th, 2018 14:02
• Angels Acclaimings (Orchidee) A fine reminder of who holds all truth Orchi.
  December 30th, 2018 14:01
• arms trade (Dusk arising) A powerful few lines of mindful sympathy for those caught between guns...
  December 30th, 2018 13:59
• Rough Sketched & True (Neville) Loud cheers for this lyrical walk around countryside with an artistic eye...
  December 30th, 2018 05:33
• Ode To Bianca (W c) Cats are our companions and deserve this fine ode as a tribute W.C. - a...
  December 29th, 2018 14:05
• Wind Washed & Flying (Neville) An engaging read filled with gentle erotica so discreetly described it ...
  December 29th, 2018 03:54
• New Day - Haiku to Senryu. (Goldfinch60) Encouraging combination Goldi in this seasonal tribute to a new day\'s...
  December 29th, 2018 03:46
• Blessed Birth (Orchidee) A heart-warming read and a comforting instrumental too Orchi.
  December 29th, 2018 03:30
• NEW YEAR RESOLVE : 2019 : ANGELA : An Acrostic Sonnet (ANGELA & BRIAN) Angela - well done - -a very appealing set of reasons to try listing the...
  December 28th, 2018 08:44
• BRIDGING SPACE @ CHRISTMAS ~ BRIAN ~ A SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN) Lovely sonnet and although poigantly worded the love comes through . Keep...
  December 26th, 2018 08:39
• Frozen (Joanna Garrido) Good use of comparative metaphor Joanna - I look forward to reading more...
  December 26th, 2018 08:34
• Talk Me Poetry (Neville) An amazing flow and a wonderful metre to this delight read Neville. nto my...
  December 26th, 2018 06:51
• A KOOL YOOL TO EVERYONE : ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡 (ANGELA & BRIAN) With you in these festive lines on why Love will conquer in the end - -...
  December 24th, 2018 12:25
• Christmas Peace. (Goldfinch60) Lovely wrote on the night before Christmas dear Goldi and a delight to...
  December 24th, 2018 12:21
• Portals (LIGHT WARRIOR) A compelling read Jason - -so true that life goes on and that death is a...
  December 24th, 2018 12:18
• MERRY CHRISTMAS TO ALL (Michael Edwards) Ha - - Thanks for this needed reminder of female power at this festive...
  December 24th, 2018 12:11
• Dayspring Dawning (Orchidee) Beautiful words and thanks for sharing dear Orchi.
  December 24th, 2018 12:06
• Queue of Longing (Neville) Love your metaphors in this tribute to poets whose inspiration has taken...
  December 24th, 2018 12:05
• Meadow (Simon Bromley) Just the stroll I needed right now in a peaceful meadow and so poetically...
  December 24th, 2018 12:00
• Bride of the Dark Depths (Joanna Garrido) Oooh deliciously scary this underworld story -- a well-crafted tale with...
  December 24th, 2018 11:55
• Deep (John Prophet) Yes we live in a circle of mystery here on this wonderful planet and...
  December 24th, 2018 11:52
• New Year\'s Eve: (Niallprideaux) P.S. - - of course - reading the title again it is the New Year...
  December 24th, 2018 11:44
• New Year\'s Eve: (Niallprideaux) What a vivid picture of the Christmas festivities you pen here Nial - - a...
  December 24th, 2018 11:43
• FRIENDSHIP (Laura🌻) Thank you dear Laura and may your festive season bring you blessings and...
  December 24th, 2018 10:37
• Whispering words of wisdom (Netashi) True this poem contains poetic words of wisdom and enjoyed the play on...
  December 21st, 2018 14:06
• War is Not for Lovers (Neville) A heart-wrenching read about the truth of the trenches when death caught...
  December 21st, 2018 06:29
• CHOCOLATE AN ACROSTIC ~ ANGELA & BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN) Charming rhymes about love and from each gender side how it affects...
  December 21st, 2018 06:25
• DEJA VU EXPERIENCE 🧡 ANGELA 🧡 A TRUE STORY ? (ANGELA & BRIAN) Such an amazing experience and told with poetic verve - wow - finding...
  December 18th, 2018 07:40
• Whale Whispering (Neville) So explicit the description of dancing leviathans I was there with you...
  December 18th, 2018 07:34
• On Waking (Neville) Early morning coupling is good for those born as larks but not for owls...
  December 14th, 2018 05:02
• The Experts Opinion. (Goldfinch60) It is true that opinions differ when viewing anything in the field of art ...
  December 14th, 2018 04:57
• Fly Forth! (Orchidee) Such an uplift to read these encouraging words Orchi - joyous indeed.
  December 14th, 2018 04:52
• PARACHUTE BAND ~ CHRISTMAS CONCERT 2018 ~ BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN) Agree witn Michael - would I had been there to enjoy the performance and...
  December 14th, 2018 03:07
• A DISARRAY OF COUPLETS (Michael Edwards) An array of wise perception in these resurrected outtakes Michael - the...
  December 14th, 2018 02:42
• Tabula Rasa (Nicholas Browning) Truths abound in this honest verse - - a false step is certainly not a...
  December 13th, 2018 16:06
• Christmas Time (W c) A delightful number of reasons why this special season is a time of...
  December 12th, 2018 17:11
• Fools gold (Netashi) The theme of the verse gives a good reason to work against materialism...
  December 12th, 2018 17:08
• The Width of a Table (Neville) An ongoing wish which I hope comes true the next time Neville - - you...
  December 12th, 2018 13:20
• LATE ! FOR A VERY IMPORTANT DATE ! (ANGELA & BRIAN) A very romantic beginning although time caught a ride to your first date ...
  December 12th, 2018 05:49
• Man Flu (The Retired Bloke) Ah - a good twist to the tale in those final lines RB - - \"man-flue\" is...
  December 12th, 2018 05:46
• BLACK & WHITE ~ A REVERSE ABCDARIAN POEM ~ ANGELA & BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN) Thanks for the honesty in these wonderful lines Brian .A beautiful list of...
  December 11th, 2018 17:05
• SHORTIE TWO (Michael Edwards) Yes seal it is Michael - perceptive write and gorgeous water-colour.
  December 11th, 2018 04:35
• Malfunctioning (Poetic Dan) Correction to this amazing write - your show can still go on my friend -...
  December 10th, 2018 11:39
• SHORTIE ONE (Michael Edwards) Short line wise advice Michael - - love the mysterious path leading to -...
  December 10th, 2018 03:29
• TWELVE GIFTS OF CHRISTMAS : BRIAN & ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN) Bravo to both of you - -Excellent and very original twelve-day Christmas...
  December 10th, 2018 03:28
• ORCHESTRATEY (Michael Edwards) A fantastic re-assembly of language we now rarely hear yet remember well -...
  December 9th, 2018 04:19
• Afterwards (Neville) Ah - the blissful feeling of sexual contentment this read with its honest...
  December 9th, 2018 04:14
• Autumn Acrostic. (Goldfinch60) A lovely first read of my day - thank you or such an honest tribute to...
  December 9th, 2018 04:02
• IF I CAN HELP SOMEBODY ~ ANGELA 🧡 BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN) A beautiful confession of love by you two lovely people - good to read...
  December 8th, 2018 13:06
• What Do I Want From You (Neville) So many intimate memories belong to those left alone when love goes away -...
  December 7th, 2018 04:02
• The Other Side of Fear. (Goldfinch60) Excellent piece of advice dear Goldi - yes a fearless approach to life...
  December 7th, 2018 04:00
• CUTLETS errr COUPLETS (2) (Michael Edwards) Ha - - my favourite of these couplets has to be the one about Noah and...
  December 7th, 2018 02:56
• THE PERFECT CUP OF COFFEE (Michael Edwards) Michael - Flavours are nonsense when serving good coffee - I love the...
  December 6th, 2018 17:43
• The Promise of a Shower (The Retired Bloke) A place of sheer silence that oozes gross fear -- no space is daubed...
  December 6th, 2018 17:34
• Inspiration (Heather Harrisson) Ah -Heather - this I can relate to and I love the metaphor which runs...
  December 6th, 2018 17:25
• A funeral\'s toast (Netashi) A wish which puts the adventure of living with no regrets into the right...
  December 6th, 2018 11:54
• Cova (Neville) You write of beguiling memories so well Neville - - I am intrigued with...
  December 5th, 2018 03:17
• POST OP COMPLICATIONS (Michael Edwards) Such good news re. the journey back to health again Michael - - after a...
  December 5th, 2018 03:12
• A New Day! (Jennie Devallon) Such a positive and happy read Jennie - - your words are alive with...
  December 4th, 2018 14:23
• Faith lost then returned like a boomerang (Poetic Dan) This read brought me to compassionate tears Dan - - your outlook after...
  December 4th, 2018 14:19
• Nothing (Sylviasearcher) A forceful and well rhymed outcry which highlights the phrase that Nothing...
  December 4th, 2018 14:11
• Communication (John Prophet) A well- constructed reminder of what communication can achieve given time ...
  December 4th, 2018 14:07
• A SMALL BUTTERFLY (Yasu Na) A forceful reminder that we as humans know almost nothing about the...
  December 4th, 2018 14:00
• States of Ignored (AJ) An amazing use of word here to underline the abuse life dishes out to...
  December 4th, 2018 13:56
• Come show us...... (Orchidee) A faith -filled invitation no less dear Orchi - - I love the chorus being...
  December 4th, 2018 13:50
• The Fairy on the Tree. (Goldfinch60) Such a noteworthy read Andy - - that group have won my vote too.
  December 4th, 2018 13:46
• CUTLETS errr COUPLETS (Michael Edwards) Cutlets indeed !! - - If anything fills up a young belly with wind it ...
  December 4th, 2018 13:44
• A Little Indiscretion (Neville) A powerful reminder of what love can do to one or another of parting...
  December 4th, 2018 13:40
• WHO\'S SPEAKING? (Michael Edwards) Oooh - Mike I have done that before now and received a similar...
  December 3rd, 2018 17:57
• Artwork or Photography (Goldfinch60) A most interesting read of your visit to both oil and photography work...
  December 3rd, 2018 17:33
• Through Today\'s Time (Orchidee) A lovely comforting read Orchi.
  December 3rd, 2018 17:28
• old winter (Frank Prem) Yes a haunt of a read - the flow of these mournful lines Frank has a...
  December 3rd, 2018 17:27
• The Hunter (Netashi) These words bring summer to a wintery evening here Theta and when people...
  December 3rd, 2018 17:20
• The Christmas Angel (Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet) A wonderful wish for Christmas blessings to all in that final couplet...
  December 3rd, 2018 17:14
• Long Shadows (Neville) Oh tender the gentle erotica used here to depict a memory never forgotten...
  December 3rd, 2018 09:50
• SON OF GOD : BORN IN A MANGER ! ANGELA : A SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN) This time of good news and good cheer means light to the world if only...
  December 2nd, 2018 14:30
• Beautiful Bruises (Neville) Thank you for this warm and intimate expression of love so tenderly...
  December 2nd, 2018 14:25
• THE BRIDGE ~ BRIAN ~ A Reverse ABCDarian POEM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN) Excellent just as it is dear Brian - - the word meaning stubborn - i.e....
  November 30th, 2018 12:43
• ‘DAD’ (Prettylittlepoet) So sad this tragic happening when fathers abuse all those in the household...
  November 30th, 2018 10:52
• AMASSED TO PLAN (Michael Edwards) Ha ha - - your mind thinks in every which-way re. words Michael - - love...
  November 29th, 2018 03:14
• Guess what ... (Frank Prem) Congrats. - - wishing the best of success with the memoir Frank - - - ...
  November 29th, 2018 03:08
• Life, music and memories (Poetic Dan) A pleasure to read your tenderly poetic words and listen to a favourite...
  November 28th, 2018 04:18
• EMOTION (Michael Edwards) Ha - Michael - Am smiling at this quirky play on words -- How is that...
  November 28th, 2018 01:56