Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- FIVE LOVE QUATRAINS ~ ENJOY (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Ah - a sweet and romantic tale of love when separated - your words...
June 7th, 2018 05:33 - Wanting To Go With You (Lorna)
Love cannot die yet this set of poignant questions has to be asked when...
June 6th, 2018 11:33 - JOAN HUNTER DUNN ~ JOHN BETJEMAN (1941) (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Ah - - one of my all time favs of John Betjeman\'s talent for writing...
June 6th, 2018 10:47 - Shrinking World (Goldfinch60)
The reaches of this generation astound me too dear Goldi - - they think...
June 6th, 2018 05:52 - Recipe For A Poem (Jane Frye)
A very perceptive look at what makes a good poem Jane and one to which...
June 6th, 2018 01:59 - A DREAM (Michael Edwards)
The mystery of a dream described perfectly and with poetic prowess.
June 6th, 2018 01:53 - PERCEPTION (Michael Edwards)
Yes the word \"again\" begs a question here Michael -and I agree it opens...
June 5th, 2018 16:18 - Love Unknown. (Goldfinch60)
A heart-wrenching write along with the music - - such test on true love is...
June 5th, 2018 16:15 - Constructive Chastening: Hebrews Series - 17 (Orchidee)
A spiritual reminder on the need for chastening as we all fall behind to...
June 5th, 2018 16:11 - Social Faces, Social Graces (Fox)
This write describes so clearly the depth our present culture has fallen...
June 5th, 2018 16:09 - COCKNEY RHYMING SLANG ~ A RESPONSE ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A very rich and clever language is Cockney-speak Brian and thanks for the...
June 5th, 2018 15:52 - CARING FOR OTHERS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Wise words of advice in that final stanza of needed reminders of how much...
June 4th, 2018 11:50 - Indecisive House Wrens (Lorna)
The scene and the wrens looking for house-room is outlined delightfully in...
June 4th, 2018 08:20 - AUTUMN (Michael Edwards)
Super write Michael - every word meaningful. Great read.
June 1st, 2018 15:53 - Property (Christina8)
This read touches the heart deeply - - keep that chin high Christina...
June 1st, 2018 10:10 - BRAW BROWN BEARS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
What an adventure to see in the wild a family of bears - I love the...
May 31st, 2018 08:05 - AGONY & ECSTASY OF LIFE & LOVE ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Both sides of the subject are dealt with most eloquently in this...
May 25th, 2018 16:12 - OCTOPUSES ARE ALIENS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Love the descriptions you use or these slithery masters of Neptune\'s bed...
May 23rd, 2018 06:32 - Clean up your act. (Aa Harvey)
Sound advice here Aa - - -life indeed is too short for living it...
May 23rd, 2018 06:24 - My Mother is Busy in Writing (Pintu Mahakul)
A beautiful tribute to a talented and much loved Mother who has no doubt...
May 22nd, 2018 16:10 - THE LADY DRESSED IN BLACK (Michael Edwards)
The picture expresses the depth in such poignant poetic lines Michael -...
May 21st, 2018 13:29 - Early Awakening (W c)
A lovely scene of early excitement watching nature at dawn - - a very ...
May 21st, 2018 13:20 - SUMMER HOLIDAYS ~ MAXINE & BRIAN Collaboration ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Such a happy and informative read - - well done you two with lots of...
May 21st, 2018 13:17 - Promised Paraclete At Pentecost (Orchidee)
An amazing account of the pouring out of Holy Spirit which empowered those...
May 21st, 2018 13:12 - Lost Decade. (Goldfinch60)
A sense of lost time comes to the fore very clearly in this poignant verse...
May 21st, 2018 13:10 - This is It. (Christina K)
So moving Christina - -the words flow into lines of real emptiness at...
May 21st, 2018 13:08 - Elusive Endorphins (Lorna)
Just looking at that lovely image can bring on the magic which is never...
May 12th, 2018 16:40 - FOUR HORSEMEN OF THE APOCALYPSE ~ PROPHETICAL VISION ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
John\'s vision assures us that God will arrange the troubled finalé of...
May 11th, 2018 12:15 - SIX LANTURNES (In Collaboration with Laura ) (Michael Edwards)
Congrats to you both - - a complete success in this interesting form.
May 11th, 2018 02:07 - Ghost (Nicholas Browning)
I was walking that pathway with you so clear your description of life in a...
May 10th, 2018 16:43 - Enjoy The Music (W c)
The healing that music can bring is found in each line of this lovely read...
May 10th, 2018 16:39 - A LIFELESS LAND (Michael Edwards)
More lifeless a land cannot be than this eerie verse paints dear...
May 10th, 2018 10:17 - LOVE\'S TUNE. (Fay Slimm.)
MY APOLOGIES DEAR FRIENDS FOR NOT BEING ABLE TO GET INDIVIDUAL REPLIES TO...
May 9th, 2018 16:03 - LOVE\'S TUNE. (Fay Slimm.)
Glad you found that final line pleasing Michael - - thanks for your...
May 9th, 2018 15:58 - Simply Shakespeare (Lorna)
Wonderfully poetic questions in this little gem Lorna.
May 9th, 2018 11:21 - Sleepless Nights (JackCoria)
You describe the experience very well of the nights when sleep seems to...
May 9th, 2018 04:53 - Blessings Bounties (Orchidee)
A needed reminder of that glorious name of the Creator and which we should...
May 9th, 2018 04:50 - LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT ~ A Diablo Morphic Mirror Poem ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Wonderful art-form top to tail and and back again - and full of reasons...
May 9th, 2018 04:47 - SILHOUETTED (Michael Edwards)
And a fine picture this form of poetic expression creates Michael - - love...
May 8th, 2018 16:12 - Out Of Harmony (Christina8)
Yes harmony is worth striving for in any relationship and this verse...
May 8th, 2018 16:11 - Malarkey Blowing in the Wind (Lorna)
So sad you had to write this to a person who does not feel the need of...
May 7th, 2018 16:07 - SHE DANCED (Michael Edwards)
Your words create dance which induces confidence so clearly Michael - ...
May 6th, 2018 04:02 - Cobwebs of the Sun (Lorna)
Oh I agree with Michael entirely on this gem of a verse dear Lorna. - -...
May 5th, 2018 13:24 - A RAINBOW VALLEY ~ An Acrostic Sonnet for ANGELA (BRIAN & ANGELA)
What a beautiful picture and appealing song - - glad I was able to pop in...
May 5th, 2018 13:22 - Throw Out the Nets for the Wondrous Heart (Lorna)
Straight into my favourites this little gem.
May 3rd, 2018 10:24 - Throw Out the Nets for the Wondrous Heart (Lorna)
Ah - Lorna - a lovely read - - loud applause for this superfine poem...
May 3rd, 2018 10:23 - ONCE HONED (Michael Edwards)
Just caught up with this deep and meaningful write Micheal - sorry hear...
May 3rd, 2018 02:11 - HOOD (Laura🌻)
Hood will be sorely missed here dear Laura - - his talent for word is...
May 1st, 2018 20:02 - HAPPINESS ~ An 8 6 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Your words on happiness at tribute to Ken Dodd brought back those many...
April 30th, 2018 16:29 - Towards Eternity. (Goldfinch60)
Some of the points made here are so true Andy - - yet the message of life...
April 30th, 2018 16:25 - Happiness (Netashi)
Your rhyme describes happiness with accurate benefits Theta - - it frees...
April 30th, 2018 16:20 - grateful (Onepauly)
A fine recommendation to foster positive thinking Pauly - - being grateful...
April 30th, 2018 12:06 - A poet (Netashi)
You outline the reason behind the urges to write with admirable imagery...
April 28th, 2018 02:32 - up and atom (Onepauly)
A power-packed write Paul - - love the twist and play on words which add...
April 28th, 2018 02:26 - LOVERS ON THE SHORE ~ A 4 4 4 2 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
You fill the experience with happy romance - to be with a loved one in...
April 27th, 2018 03:10 - The Great Escape (Lorna)
I love this write Lorna - the feel of this tribute to sleep soothes as it...
April 26th, 2018 16:01 - Barn Fire (W c)
A telling story of the power of flames - - - a great scene your lines set...
April 26th, 2018 13:48 - POWER OF THE CROSS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
To adorn your passionate words you chose my father\'s favourite hymn and...
April 26th, 2018 13:46 - LIMERICK No54 (Michael Edwards)
I agree that the majority of writing here seems to be an outlet for...
April 26th, 2018 03:42 - Child Of Change (Syd)
A powerful tale Syd and I really enjoyed the form you chose. Great write.
April 26th, 2018 01:53 - Buy By All Means (Lorna)
This verse says it all in these crazy times of materialism\'s allure - a...
April 24th, 2018 08:53 - WILLIAM AND KATE ~ An Aristocratic Sonnet ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A precious happening is the birth of a child and this one being so special...
April 24th, 2018 03:34 - Dismay (Aa Harvey)
A true message of love which will never fade despite the dismay of not yet...
April 23rd, 2018 16:11 - Little Tiny White Things (Lorna)
A lovely piece of gratitude for all things little and white at this time...
April 23rd, 2018 16:08 - create (Onepauly)
I truly agree with these clever lines on the power of mindfulness Pauly.
April 23rd, 2018 16:05 - The Dance (Lasergraph)
Oh how wonderful for you be there when your five year old grandchild...
April 23rd, 2018 16:03 - SHE SHOPPED AT LIDL (Michael Edwards)
Ha ha - - I have seen that done Michael - - bags by the load are needed...
April 23rd, 2018 05:47 - EARTH ~ AIR ~ FIRE ~ WATER ~ TANKAS (57577) (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Four seems enough when addressing the elements needed for gratitude to ...
April 23rd, 2018 05:44 - Does She Ever Stop? (Goldfinch60)
This gave me a Monday morning smile as I think I know the same lady - - ha...
April 23rd, 2018 05:40 - Trials And Tests - Epistles of Peter Series - 6 (Orchidee)
Fine words and great video on organ playing Orchi
April 23rd, 2018 05:38 - QUEEN ELIZABETH II ~ An Aristocratic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A fitting and well written tribute to a wonderful lady who is such a...
April 22nd, 2018 05:36 - Yakety Yakety Yakety Yak (Lorna)
Ooooh love the number and those words deliver some truths with honest...
April 21st, 2018 16:14 - Along The Road. (Kevin browne)
This write is so moving Kevin - - it touches a depth of love which often...
April 21st, 2018 16:00 - CATS RULE ~ OK ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
You sum up the cat so well in this verse which helps us choose whether to...
April 21st, 2018 13:38 - Shepherding Security (Orchidee)
A fine write Orchi.
April 21st, 2018 03:58 - NEW ZEALAND ~ A Blank Verse DECACROSTIC (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Am already packing my bags after reading this colourful tribute to what...
April 19th, 2018 02:30 - EARLY MORNING (Michael Edwards)
Beautiful flower pic and super write Michael -- wishing all the best for...
April 19th, 2018 02:11 - The Black Flower (Lorna)
First class writing Lorna - the picture and number adorn the words which...
April 18th, 2018 06:33 - SUNDAY (Michael Edwards)
Love the flow and fresh feel to this verse Michael -- it describes...
April 18th, 2018 03:28 - NOW THAT I\'M OLD ~ A SCOTS PERSPECTIVE ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Ha ha - your humour excels in that penultimate stanza - - the rhyming is...
April 17th, 2018 16:13 - The Hungry Shadows (Lorna)
The effect of shadows brought out so clearly and even a bit scary in this...
April 17th, 2018 13:58 - Bad Dream (Christina8)
Those kind of dreams always give a shock when waking and hoping by now you...
April 17th, 2018 13:54 - To Forget Is Good (W c)
You sum jup so well with poetic versing the need to forget and remember...
April 16th, 2018 11:09 - N ATURE\'S RAINBOW ~ COLLABORATION MAXINE & BRIAN (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Loud applause for this colourful rhyming by a wonderful duo - - congrats...
April 16th, 2018 10:16 - Riding Pegasus (Lorna)
Oh Lorna what a wonderful experience to fly on a horse - your husband \'s...
April 16th, 2018 10:13 - AN ARTISTS EYE (Michael Edwards)
A few little lines and the image of beauty is there in your wonderful...
April 14th, 2018 02:08 - Sixteen Years (Christina8)
A beautiful tribute to marital love and congrats. for reaching sixteen...
April 14th, 2018 02:04 - UNWINESQUE (Michael Edwards)
Wow you certainly got the feel of his hilarious wording Michael - - if I...
April 13th, 2018 14:57 - my muse (Blast219)
Written as the mood took you and full of honest and positive vibes - - a...
April 13th, 2018 13:33 - In The Stillness Of The Morning. (Goldfinch60)
Oh - I was going to add that the piece of music you chose is simply so apt...
April 13th, 2018 13:30 - In The Stillness Of The Morning. (Goldfinch60)
This fills the heart with its tender love toward a partner who slowly has...
April 13th, 2018 13:28 - Wedlock (Aa Harvey)
An amazing take on what happens as the lock of marital binding gets...
April 13th, 2018 13:23 - SAME OR DIFFERENT ? A Deconstructed (7 x 2) Sonnet ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A yummy pleasure to have this free-verse piece to read about the value of...
April 13th, 2018 12:37 - Much Ado About Anything (Lorna)
Ah - such good poetry with its terse lines and clear message - - a really...
April 13th, 2018 09:35 - ALL MY OWN (Michael Edwards)
Fantastic new form Michael - powerful words - - the abstract reminds me...
April 12th, 2018 02:16 - MUSIC OF THE SPHERES ~ A 7-7-7-7 DOUBLE SONNET ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
The music of nature sings to our hearts here Brian and the picture adorns...
April 11th, 2018 16:59 - Closed Door (Christina8)
Losing a mother can raise much uncertainty of how we may have handled...
April 11th, 2018 16:47 - Butterflies Along The Way. (Kevin browne)
A tender love story which pulls at the heart - such a romantic final...
April 11th, 2018 16:37 - The Shade Garden (Lorna)
You make that garden so inviting dear Lorna -shade in high heat is your...
April 11th, 2018 07:12 - morning walk (Onepauly)
Hi Paul, - -that early morning walk must be a tonic without the arrival...
April 11th, 2018 05:38
« Return to the profile of Fay Slimm.
