Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- THE WONDERS OF GOD (Frogspoetry)
So good to read of such living faith dear friend - blessings galore from...
June 28th, 2018 10:02 - Three Little Words (Darren)
Your words touch the heart and will delight your loved one - thank you...
June 28th, 2018 09:57 - REVERIE. (Fay Slimm.)
Thank you EPoems for saving this verse in your favourites - so pleased...
June 28th, 2018 09:55 - TOO MUCH INFORMATION ? (BRIAN & ANGELA)
All too true this outcry against unrequired and unneeded information ...
June 28th, 2018 04:35 - I AM A PHYSIOTHERAPIST ~ ANGELA (BRIAN & ANGELA)
What a rewarding profession to be in Angela where people who need that bit...
June 27th, 2018 16:04 - THE EAGLE IN THE SKY (Frogspoetry)
A wonderful and uplifting positive message to help a friend - I love the...
June 27th, 2018 11:51 - Grey (Syd)
You describe the emotionless shade of grey so eloquently Syd - - - it ...
June 27th, 2018 11:47 - FOUR SEASONS ~ ONE DAY IN MAY ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
British weather is always precocious and your poem outlined the surprises...
June 22nd, 2018 14:48 - A LITTER OF LANTURNES (Michael Edwards)
A litter of truth adorns these lanturnes - - great read Michael.
June 21st, 2018 02:48 - ANGELA ~ LOVE OF MY LIFE ~ A Rhymed 3 5 6 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Wishing you both all these words and more - may you find a lifetime of...
June 21st, 2018 02:46 - Kneading Emotions. (Goldfinch60)
A clear and very readable recipe for proper bread-making - beating out...
June 20th, 2018 06:04 - 3:30 am argument with the page (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Ah - loud applause for this flowing and well worded outcry against...
June 20th, 2018 06:00 - THREE PICTURES PAINTED (Michael Edwards)
You make reading a sheer delight with these three little jewels dear ...
June 20th, 2018 02:32 - Holding My Breath (Christina8)
This touches down to the core dear Christina - - - sending you some big...
June 20th, 2018 02:30 - My Dog Diesel (Darren)
Your poem touches the heart and many readers can relate to the feeling of...
June 19th, 2018 21:57 - MY MAMAS ROSE GARDEN ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I love all roses dear Brian and your Mum certainly has an abundance of...
June 19th, 2018 10:03 - SOME ONE LINERS (Michael Edwards)
Truth outs in these wise words Michael - - - great one-liners.
June 19th, 2018 09:57 - SOME SHORTIES (575) (Michael Edwards)
Fantastic water-colour of beautiful cyclamen - - - great shorties too...
June 18th, 2018 06:19 - Birdsong (W c)
Such a beautifully written description of birdsong to adorn the colourful...
June 16th, 2018 16:01 - counting crows (Willyweed)
Like that positive thought that dawn will chase the darkness - how true...
June 15th, 2018 12:18 - Amazing World. (Goldfinch60)
I agree both nature and music have such an effect on our personal worlds -...
June 15th, 2018 05:59 - MAORIS ~ BEAUTIFUL PEOPLE NZ II ~ ANGELA ~ A 6 6 2 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
The very singing and dancing is hypnotic - - no wonder Angela has fallen...
June 15th, 2018 05:47 - The Freedom of Wolves (Lorna)
Lorna you clearly portrayed in this heart-tugging verse the call of the...
June 13th, 2018 11:04 - By My Side (Christina8)
A warm and tender appreciation of being loved -- a blessing put into...
June 13th, 2018 02:02 - Prayer Progress (Orchidee)
A fine write Orchi.
June 12th, 2018 07:12 - Finding Peace. (Goldfinch60)
Both the poem and that charming number by Frank made an interesting read...
June 12th, 2018 07:11 - A SKELETON IN MY BED ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Another well written piece of needed information which demands respect for...
June 12th, 2018 06:08 - A Flirtatious Understanding with Death (Lorna)
A first class emotive write Lorna - - those rhyming lines are perfectly...
June 12th, 2018 06:06 - LOVE HEALS (Michael Edwards)
Perfect statements for the form chosen - and a lovely reminder too that...
June 12th, 2018 01:39 - A Honey of a Day (Lorna)
Fair-weather lovers are getting more frequent and this poignant write...
June 11th, 2018 05:32 - BENEATH (Michael Edwards)
Super poem with some wonderful metaphor used to full effect. First rate...
June 11th, 2018 04:20 - DOUBLETS ~ COLOURS OF ROSES ~ MESSAGES (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Roses of any shade are favs with me as long as their perfume fills the...
June 11th, 2018 04:17 - Baby Boy (W c)
You well describe the delight of a baby with caring parents - such a...
June 8th, 2018 13:19 - Pink Royalty (Lorna)
Yes I accessed the video no probs. - - I too love Danny Kaye - he was so...
June 8th, 2018 08:46 - Pink Royalty (Lorna)
Ah - I love the short lines of perceptive glory in this little ode to the...
June 8th, 2018 07:26 - TWILIGHT (Michael Edwards)
Quite a depth to this moving write Michael - - and to counterbalance the...
June 8th, 2018 01:59 - OUR TOWN CENTRES ? A Nostalgic Acrostic Sonnet ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Agree wholeheartedly Brian - how sad to see city and even small-town shops...
June 8th, 2018 01:50 - THE BOATYARD (Michael Edwards)
Boat-building described with an artist\'s flair - great read and lovely...
June 7th, 2018 07:35 - The girl within. (Isabel Chelisia Villa)
It is sometimes a hard lesson to learn but self is all that is needed for...
June 7th, 2018 07:33 - Plenteous Praises (Orchidee)
Plenteous praises make the day special for the giver and receiver my...
June 7th, 2018 07:28 - Coffeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee (Lorna)
Know just how you feel Lorna - gardening is darned-hard work and the next...
June 7th, 2018 07:23 - FIVE LOVE QUATRAINS ~ ENJOY (BRIAN & ANGELA)
By the way that number you chose has been my favourite for ages.She knew...
June 7th, 2018 05:35 - FIVE LOVE QUATRAINS ~ ENJOY (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Ah - a sweet and romantic tale of love when separated - your words...
June 7th, 2018 05:33 - Wanting To Go With You (Lorna)
Love cannot die yet this set of poignant questions has to be asked when...
June 6th, 2018 11:33 - JOAN HUNTER DUNN ~ JOHN BETJEMAN (1941) (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Ah - - one of my all time favs of John Betjeman\'s talent for writing...
June 6th, 2018 10:47 - Shrinking World (Goldfinch60)
The reaches of this generation astound me too dear Goldi - - they think...
June 6th, 2018 05:52 - Recipe For A Poem (Jane Frye)
A very perceptive look at what makes a good poem Jane and one to which...
June 6th, 2018 01:59 - A DREAM (Michael Edwards)
The mystery of a dream described perfectly and with poetic prowess.
June 6th, 2018 01:53 - PERCEPTION (Michael Edwards)
Yes the word \"again\" begs a question here Michael -and I agree it opens...
June 5th, 2018 16:18 - Love Unknown. (Goldfinch60)
A heart-wrenching write along with the music - - such test on true love is...
June 5th, 2018 16:15 - Constructive Chastening: Hebrews Series - 17 (Orchidee)
A spiritual reminder on the need for chastening as we all fall behind to...
June 5th, 2018 16:11 - Social Faces, Social Graces (Fox)
This write describes so clearly the depth our present culture has fallen...
June 5th, 2018 16:09 - COCKNEY RHYMING SLANG ~ A RESPONSE ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A very rich and clever language is Cockney-speak Brian and thanks for the...
June 5th, 2018 15:52 - CARING FOR OTHERS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Wise words of advice in that final stanza of needed reminders of how much...
June 4th, 2018 11:50 - Indecisive House Wrens (Lorna)
The scene and the wrens looking for house-room is outlined delightfully in...
June 4th, 2018 08:20 - AUTUMN (Michael Edwards)
Super write Michael - every word meaningful. Great read.
June 1st, 2018 15:53 - Property (Christina8)
This read touches the heart deeply - - keep that chin high Christina...
June 1st, 2018 10:10 - BRAW BROWN BEARS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
What an adventure to see in the wild a family of bears - I love the...
May 31st, 2018 08:05 - AGONY & ECSTASY OF LIFE & LOVE ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Both sides of the subject are dealt with most eloquently in this...
May 25th, 2018 16:12 - OCTOPUSES ARE ALIENS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Love the descriptions you use or these slithery masters of Neptune\'s bed...
May 23rd, 2018 06:32 - Clean up your act. (Aa Harvey)
Sound advice here Aa - - -life indeed is too short for living it...
May 23rd, 2018 06:24 - My Mother is Busy in Writing (Pintu Mahakul)
A beautiful tribute to a talented and much loved Mother who has no doubt...
May 22nd, 2018 16:10 - THE LADY DRESSED IN BLACK (Michael Edwards)
The picture expresses the depth in such poignant poetic lines Michael -...
May 21st, 2018 13:29 - Early Awakening (W c)
A lovely scene of early excitement watching nature at dawn - - a very ...
May 21st, 2018 13:20 - SUMMER HOLIDAYS ~ MAXINE & BRIAN Collaboration ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Such a happy and informative read - - well done you two with lots of...
May 21st, 2018 13:17 - Promised Paraclete At Pentecost (Orchidee)
An amazing account of the pouring out of Holy Spirit which empowered those...
May 21st, 2018 13:12 - Lost Decade. (Goldfinch60)
A sense of lost time comes to the fore very clearly in this poignant verse...
May 21st, 2018 13:10 - This is It. (Christina K)
So moving Christina - -the words flow into lines of real emptiness at...
May 21st, 2018 13:08 - Elusive Endorphins (Lorna)
Just looking at that lovely image can bring on the magic which is never...
May 12th, 2018 16:40 - FOUR HORSEMEN OF THE APOCALYPSE ~ PROPHETICAL VISION ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
John\'s vision assures us that God will arrange the troubled finalé of...
May 11th, 2018 12:15 - SIX LANTURNES (In Collaboration with Laura ) (Michael Edwards)
Congrats to you both - - a complete success in this interesting form.
May 11th, 2018 02:07 - Ghost (Nicholas Browning)
I was walking that pathway with you so clear your description of life in a...
May 10th, 2018 16:43 - Enjoy The Music (W c)
The healing that music can bring is found in each line of this lovely read...
May 10th, 2018 16:39 - A LIFELESS LAND (Michael Edwards)
More lifeless a land cannot be than this eerie verse paints dear...
May 10th, 2018 10:17 - LOVE\'S TUNE. (Fay Slimm.)
MY APOLOGIES DEAR FRIENDS FOR NOT BEING ABLE TO GET INDIVIDUAL REPLIES TO...
May 9th, 2018 16:03 - LOVE\'S TUNE. (Fay Slimm.)
Glad you found that final line pleasing Michael - - thanks for your...
May 9th, 2018 15:58 - Simply Shakespeare (Lorna)
Wonderfully poetic questions in this little gem Lorna.
May 9th, 2018 11:21 - Sleepless Nights (JackCoria)
You describe the experience very well of the nights when sleep seems to...
May 9th, 2018 04:53 - Blessings Bounties (Orchidee)
A needed reminder of that glorious name of the Creator and which we should...
May 9th, 2018 04:50 - LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT ~ A Diablo Morphic Mirror Poem ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Wonderful art-form top to tail and and back again - and full of reasons...
May 9th, 2018 04:47 - SILHOUETTED (Michael Edwards)
And a fine picture this form of poetic expression creates Michael - - love...
May 8th, 2018 16:12 - Out Of Harmony (Christina8)
Yes harmony is worth striving for in any relationship and this verse...
May 8th, 2018 16:11 - Malarkey Blowing in the Wind (Lorna)
So sad you had to write this to a person who does not feel the need of...
May 7th, 2018 16:07 - SHE DANCED (Michael Edwards)
Your words create dance which induces confidence so clearly Michael - ...
May 6th, 2018 04:02 - Cobwebs of the Sun (Lorna)
Oh I agree with Michael entirely on this gem of a verse dear Lorna. - -...
May 5th, 2018 13:24 - A RAINBOW VALLEY ~ An Acrostic Sonnet for ANGELA (BRIAN & ANGELA)
What a beautiful picture and appealing song - - glad I was able to pop in...
May 5th, 2018 13:22 - Throw Out the Nets for the Wondrous Heart (Lorna)
Straight into my favourites this little gem.
May 3rd, 2018 10:24 - Throw Out the Nets for the Wondrous Heart (Lorna)
Ah - Lorna - a lovely read - - loud applause for this superfine poem...
May 3rd, 2018 10:23 - ONCE HONED (Michael Edwards)
Just caught up with this deep and meaningful write Micheal - sorry hear...
May 3rd, 2018 02:11 - HOOD (Laura🌻)
Hood will be sorely missed here dear Laura - - his talent for word is...
May 1st, 2018 20:02 - HAPPINESS ~ An 8 6 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Your words on happiness at tribute to Ken Dodd brought back those many...
April 30th, 2018 16:29 - Towards Eternity. (Goldfinch60)
Some of the points made here are so true Andy - - yet the message of life...
April 30th, 2018 16:25 - Happiness (Netashi)
Your rhyme describes happiness with accurate benefits Theta - - it frees...
April 30th, 2018 16:20 - grateful (Onepauly)
A fine recommendation to foster positive thinking Pauly - - being grateful...
April 30th, 2018 12:06 - A poet (Netashi)
You outline the reason behind the urges to write with admirable imagery...
April 28th, 2018 02:32 - up and atom (Onepauly)
A power-packed write Paul - - love the twist and play on words which add...
April 28th, 2018 02:26 - LOVERS ON THE SHORE ~ A 4 4 4 2 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
You fill the experience with happy romance - to be with a loved one in...
April 27th, 2018 03:10 - The Great Escape (Lorna)
I love this write Lorna - the feel of this tribute to sleep soothes as it...
April 26th, 2018 16:01 - Barn Fire (W c)
A telling story of the power of flames - - - a great scene your lines set...
April 26th, 2018 13:48 - POWER OF THE CROSS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
To adorn your passionate words you chose my father\'s favourite hymn and...
April 26th, 2018 13:46
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