Comments on community poems by FredPeyer
- Life\'s Influences - Another Etheree (Sue.evans)
Sue, this is a very thought provoking poem. Brilliantly penned I might...
September 3rd, 2017 02:52 - Two into One. (Goldfinch60)
I didn\'t think you had it in you Goldfinch! Jekyll and Hyde! Man, I love...
September 3rd, 2017 02:46 - DAFFODILS (Michael Edwards)
You guys are incredible with all these math oriented poems. Never like...
September 3rd, 2017 02:40 - Optical (SarahFluharty11345)
Welcome to MPS, Sarah!
Who are you? From what I see here, you are a good...
September 2nd, 2017 21:33 - Sunglasses (Ruby.e)
Ruby, your well written poem makes a valid point: After the rain comes the...
September 2nd, 2017 21:30 - Who I am (NikitaPassmore)
\'I want a reason to live.\'
Nikita, you DO have a reason to live. You...
September 2nd, 2017 21:19 - The way we got together (Miss Lisa Poems 80)
Nice writing, am happy for you. But it is not fair to wet our appetite...
September 2nd, 2017 21:09 - The Tempest (WL Schuett)
What language! Great choice of words, full of imagination. I love it!
September 2nd, 2017 19:32 - Black (BlueDays)
Beautifully written, BlueDays. It is in our blackest moments that we see...
September 2nd, 2017 19:28 - Blood on the bed (BlueDays)
I was filled with sadness after reading your excellent poem, BlueDays. I...
September 2nd, 2017 19:25 - Sex Starved (BlueDays)
Very nice write, BlueDays! Unusual and imaginative angle, I do like it!
September 2nd, 2017 19:12 - The In-Betweens (SheWasTheSun)
A beautiful poem with a great ending!
September 2nd, 2017 18:20 - Stretch (Myself and me)
Beautiful choice of words with so much meaning. I can just picture...
September 2nd, 2017 16:00 - Insomnia (Malubotelho)
Malu, I feel for you. Not being able to fall asleep must be...
September 2nd, 2017 15:58 - Mount Meetings (Orchidee)
\'Turn not away, take heed today\'
And I am not turning away from your...
September 2nd, 2017 14:04 - A collection of \'Love is...\' Poetry - Banana (Aa Harvey)
And in your case, Aa, a collection of beautiful poems!
September 2nd, 2017 13:34 - I have the power (Poetic Dan)
While I did not have the challenges you had, your writing resonates with...
September 2nd, 2017 13:30 - Lost. (Fay Slimm.)
While the photo is certainly beautiful, your poem doesn\'t need it. It is...
September 2nd, 2017 13:19 - Social Media Lives (Sue.evans)
Sue, I like the way it looks, I like the writing, I like the content. It...
September 2nd, 2017 13:08 - S E P T E M B E R ! An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
You are an excellent \"Wortschmied\", Brian!
September 2nd, 2017 13:05 - Ignorance in Age. (Goldfinch60)
You hit the nail on the head, Goldfinch. Absolutely true and beautifully...
September 2nd, 2017 13:00 - EBB AND FLOW (Michael Edwards)
This is so beautiful, Michael! Wish I could write like this. Awesome!
September 2nd, 2017 12:40 - Getting Older (FredPeyer)
Thank you so much, Fay!
September 2nd, 2017 04:18 - pictures (Dusk arising)
Great song, great writing! Like the last two lines!
September 1st, 2017 22:35 - Dominoes (Tony36)
Nicely penned, Tony! Let\'s just hope there is still a long line!
September 1st, 2017 22:04 - Beautiful (Confused kid)
Very well penned, c k!
Beauty IS in the eye of the beholder, no matter...
September 1st, 2017 20:34 - A Stunning Example (SheWasTheSun)
SWTS, you wrote a stunning poem here. Beautifully written, I really like...
September 1st, 2017 20:32 - She Wants To Dance (Mandi)
I really, really like this poem, Mandi. Shyness is a terrible affliction...
September 1st, 2017 20:29 - Good Friends (Adrianna Kjeld)
Well written poem, Adrianna, with a great message. Real friends are hard...
September 1st, 2017 20:26 - This is She (A__pott)
This is awesome writing, a-pott. While the last one (Golden grey silence)...
September 1st, 2017 18:35 - Stronger & Stronger (Miss Lisa Poems 80)
Welcome to MPS, Lisa! (Sorry, but the whole name is too long to type!...
September 1st, 2017 15:03 - The Weak (Baylee)
Nice, Nicole!
There seem to be two possible meanings:
a) Your love is...
September 1st, 2017 14:59 - Remind My Mind (WriteBeLight)
I do like this one WBL, reminds me so much of myself. The day after we...
September 1st, 2017 12:59 - End (Myself and me)
....and a new one starts in the first smile thereafter!
Great poem, M&M....
September 1st, 2017 12:54 - bare of branches (Heather T)
Finally! You are back with a beauty!
Missed your fine writing, your...
September 1st, 2017 12:51 - Forget-me-not (Aa Harvey)
Beautifully penned poem of love, loss, longing, regret, and finally...
September 1st, 2017 12:48 - The War of Fulfilment (TN96)
Very well written, great meaning, a beautiful and thought provoking poem!...
September 1st, 2017 12:45 - BITTERSWEET (Louis Gibbs)
Great poem, Louis, I really like (not rike) it!
When the \'bitter\'...
September 1st, 2017 12:43 - Year\'s Yield. (Fay Slimm.)
Thank you Fay for a beautiful poem. I had a garden, flowers, and apple...
September 1st, 2017 12:28 - HEY MATE ~ LET\'S GRADUATE ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Love your poem, Brian, and totally agree!
But do wonder sometimes about...
September 1st, 2017 12:18 - FIBS. (Goldfinch60)
And I thought writing was enough. But now I need a math class just to...
September 1st, 2017 12:13 - How do you play (Poetic Dan)
And you did exactly what you wrote in the last stanza! Perfectly done,...
September 1st, 2017 12:09 - Things That Impress Me Most... (Sue.evans)
In that last line, are you talking to me? If yes, there will be one kind...
September 1st, 2017 01:54 - PYRAMID SELLING (Michael Edwards)
Nice Etheree, and while sticking to form you managed to explain pyramid...
September 1st, 2017 00:26 - Zeitgeist (Satishverma)
Beautiful poem, great writing!
September 1st, 2017 00:00 - You\'re like a deep breath in (MaddieJ)
Great poem virago! That\'s why they call it \'floating on cloud 7\'!!! And...
August 31st, 2017 23:58 - The Sting (Mira-kitsu)
Welcome to MPS, Mira!
Well written and heart-felt. A love falling apart...
August 31st, 2017 22:03 - Examine Before Seventeen (Thoff1)
Well written, a lot of emotion. While it is true that you are who you are,...
August 31st, 2017 21:47 - Audition (NocturnalPenner)
Welcome to MPS, NP!
A very nice first submission, I am enjoying the view!
August 31st, 2017 19:53 - Golden Gray Silence (A__pott)
The picture is awesome, kind of scary though.
The poem seems to tell me...
August 31st, 2017 17:00 - The Angels (Christina8)
Christina you wrote something very very beautiful and heartfelt here. Even...
August 31st, 2017 15:04 - Glory Gleanings (Orchidee)
Orchidee, after reading all your poems here on MPS, I realized that I...
August 31st, 2017 14:45 - Don\'t Even Try To Please Everyone (WriteBeLight)
On our little island we have many different races, nobody is in a...
August 31st, 2017 14:44 - Etheree Challenge not done (Myself and me)
Etheree or etheroo
we all know what you can do!
August 31st, 2017 14:18 - A collection of \'Love is...\' Poetry - Feather (Aa Harvey)
“Impossible is only an issue of the mind.”
― Edmond Mbiaka
He...
August 31st, 2017 14:14 - Prisoner of love 💔 (Malubotelho)
Sometimes love can be suffocating. Too much good is bad. We all need our...
August 31st, 2017 14:10 - Mother. (Kevin browne)
Kevin, I absolutely LOVE this poem! A great and fitting ode and may I say...
August 31st, 2017 11:31 - The Roots Still Dream In the Land Of the Free (TN96)
Like your poem, NT. I used to know what \'The American Dream\' meant, not...
August 31st, 2017 11:27 - Entrapment (TN96)
Your brain, TN, is a wondrous thing. Something can be brewing without...
August 31st, 2017 11:19 - Experimenting with Cinquain (Sue.evans)
Excellent sue! Love it!
August 31st, 2017 04:11 - The Lone Poppy. (Goldfinch60)
Goldfinch, you just proved that we do have to go out and smell the...
August 31st, 2017 04:09 - THE 5 SENSES OF LOVE ~ A B & S Collaboration Poem (BRIAN & ANGELA)
In this case one plus one equals three!
August 31st, 2017 04:08 - Changes. (Fay Slimm.)
Fay, you just put beautiful words to the kind of sunsets we are privileged...
August 31st, 2017 04:05 - THREE BITS OF MERRY (Michael Edwards)
Michael, I like you more and more!
Bro, u good fun, u da best!
August 31st, 2017 03:51 - Lack of Words (Baylee)
Ingenious, Nicole!!!!!
Must have written hundreds of these no word poems!
August 31st, 2017 03:33 - Son from another ragguan (Poetic Dan)
A beautiful poem and a beautiful message from father to son.
Well done,...
August 30th, 2017 14:14 - Autumn Haiku (Sue.evans)
Love this Haiku, sue! Have to get another piece of mango now.
August 30th, 2017 14:12 - Pray for Texas (Malubotelho)
Good poem, Malu! And your faith is inspiring.
August 30th, 2017 14:11 - Want to be with you (Myself and me)
I love this one M&M. Looking simple, but yet so full of love. It is the...
August 30th, 2017 14:09 - GENIUS (Louis Gibbs)
Love your poem, Louis!
And I think you are right, we all must be at least...
August 30th, 2017 13:45 - Frenzy. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful choice of words, Fay! I do like this poem.
August 30th, 2017 13:28 - Felo-de-se (A__pott)
\'...it will burry deep into the chassis of your being\'
I am challenged...
August 30th, 2017 11:19 - Oblivious (A__pott)
a__pott, the more I read, the more I like your writing. You have a knack...
August 30th, 2017 11:14 - A S p a c e (A__pott)
Another great poem!
What you say is true, but you are now also in the...
August 30th, 2017 11:11 - Vs. Nature (A__pott)
We kill, we maim, we change, without any regard, but every once in a while...
August 30th, 2017 11:07 - 9 weeks (A__pott)
Somehow missed your poems but realized after reading your latest one from...
August 30th, 2017 11:01 - Say Something Nice (A__pott)
I will say something nice: YOUR POEM IS OUTSTANDING!
Short, to the point,...
August 30th, 2017 10:57 - That Maternal Touch (Accidental Poet)
AP, your wonderful poem touches on a very important subject. And I am...
August 30th, 2017 04:09 - Panoply and Flair (FredPeyer)
Kat, as far as I am concerned, do NOT remove it. I like to make fun of my...
August 30th, 2017 04:05 - A collection of \'Love is...\' Poetry - Dove (Aa Harvey)
Yes Aa, love is this and a whole lot more!
August 30th, 2017 03:38 - PRAYER FOR TEXAS ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Thank you Brian, I am sure they need all the prayers they can get!
August 30th, 2017 03:37 - World Wide Wicked. (Kevin browne)
Kevin, tried to find a favorite line, but could not make up my mind!
August 30th, 2017 03:35 - Hilary\'s Passing Year. (Goldfinch60)
Goldfinch, your friend Hilary is a very lucky woman to have this exellent...
August 30th, 2017 03:31 - THE SEASONS (Michael Edwards)
Congratulations Michael, your four seasons are incredible. And this last...
August 30th, 2017 03:23 - This Game (Failed Experimental Truth)
Overall the world is kind of like you say. But we do have the power to...
August 29th, 2017 21:50 - Life is Short So Be Swift to Love.. (A__pott)
Sometimes love is like a gamble. You have to know when to run.
August 29th, 2017 21:47 - What No One Ever Talks About (MaxWritesPoems)
Well penned poem. About the subject, what can i say!
August 29th, 2017 21:46 - You\'re not afraid. (Roudan)
Beautiful poem about this very special place only lovers can experience.
August 29th, 2017 21:42 - Blind Love Letter: (Scottcole178)
Beautiful poem. Especially like the stanza that starts \'Even though your...
August 29th, 2017 21:19 - Apparitions (Baylee)
\'The faded forms of our bodies\'
I like the way your write. Each stanza...
August 29th, 2017 21:10 - declare my fate (Mocuisle)
I have no clue what you are waiting for, but the writing is incredible....
August 29th, 2017 18:45 - Nothing to me. (Mocuisle)
Very well written, mocuisle. Sometimes it is hard to forgive, but to...
August 29th, 2017 18:42 - My Forever (Stella_Suicide)
Beautiful declaration of love!!
August 29th, 2017 17:14 - She, He (Brie)
Sometimes it takes a lot to open somebody\'s eyes. Nicely penned!
August 29th, 2017 17:11 - Little witch🕷🔮/ For Briansod and all MPS (Malubotelho)
That one is real fun! Good write, Malu!
August 29th, 2017 16:37 - What I Call Home (HeartfullyFallen)
I do like your writing HF. Like the metaphor of the house, the...
August 29th, 2017 14:21 - empty (Ummbree)
Reading this made me think. Had to read it again. We are never empty, at...
August 29th, 2017 14:15 - Pause your paws for a short journey- A nonsense poem in the absurdity of the English Language!!! (Sue.evans)
Well done, sue! And I park in the driveway after that drive on the
August 29th, 2017 14:11 - Hope-Re: Lino Cut of Goldfinch60 (Myself and me)
Good poem. Agree with Jane, the last line is very powerful.
August 29th, 2017 14:08 - The Fog Did Its Job (WriteBeLight)
Great poem, WBL! I can relate, lots of fog in my past. But now? Haven\'t...
August 29th, 2017 12:10
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