Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave

• Paraclete\'s Presence - Ye Olde Prayers series (16) (Orchidee) Definitely going to seek medical attention after that second stanza.
  February 4th, 2024 04:21
• Going Green. (Chris Duffy) Wonderfully surrealistic world you live in, Chris. neva mind - it won\'t...
  February 4th, 2024 04:17
• Michael Jordan’s Boots (Doggerel Dave) I do - but are you travelling incognito in order to evade detection during...
  February 4th, 2024 03:40
• Without (Peto) I may have mentioned somewhere that I\'m not very fond of love poetry...
  February 3rd, 2024 20:20
• senryu to Gaza (Teddy.15) The contrast between the picture and the poem was a meaningful choice - an...
  February 3rd, 2024 20:05
• The Gagging of Gaza (Neville) Neville - I\'m not sure you are OK. Just a feeling.....
  February 3rd, 2024 16:47
• From time to time (Sorenbarrett) I\'m not skilled with metaphor, as I may have mentioned before once or...
  February 3rd, 2024 05:10
• Lost in the light (Tallisman) Thanks for your return, T. (And for me a rhymer always wins the day) A...
  February 3rd, 2024 01:05
• Email Gmail (2781) Do the best you can - no one can ask anymore of you than that.....except...
  February 2nd, 2024 17:34
• Well Isn’t That Something? (Teddy.15) Well then, a preemptive Merry Birthday (I like \'Merry\' rather than...
  February 2nd, 2024 17:26
• The Gagging of Gaza (Neville) There\'s nothing I can add to the last three entries above, ignoring for...
  February 2nd, 2024 16:38
• Broken (Tallisman) What\'s up, Tallisman? Where are you? Distance is a good...
  February 1st, 2024 21:57
• Immortal Music. (Goldfinch60) You\'ve got me. Now, whenever I hear a piece of music (esp. jazz or...
  February 1st, 2024 07:40
• From The Underside Of The Wild Roses (Teddy.15) I\'m still pondering the title - haven\'t got to the main meal...
  February 1st, 2024 07:32
• Poetry Competition (Tom Dylan) I\'m not sure I\'d like to go to one of your poetry groups, Tom. Much...
  February 1st, 2024 07:16
• Dare to Stray (Neville) Premier advice there, Sir - analyze, decide and move on.... Neat...
  February 1st, 2024 07:01
• Help For Humans - Ye Olde Prayers series (14) (Orchidee) This Master - he\'s deaf as a post, ain\'t he?
  February 1st, 2024 06:56
• Radicalisation Is Just Another Hate Definition (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) That one deserves more recognition than it will quite possibly get -...
  January 31st, 2024 05:52
• One of the Lads (Tom Dylan) Cracked that one, mate.... machismo such a farce. Oh so well said....
  January 31st, 2024 05:44
• Service Shown - Ye Olde Prayers series (13) (Orchidee) I\'ve probably missed the point, but could not companionship involve a...
  January 31st, 2024 05:38
• Just a Few Odd Diary Notes (Neville) I have a a sneaking suspicion that some of your lines might be very well...
  January 31st, 2024 05:34
• A Lesson Learned (Tom Dylan) They\'ve told you the truth above, but with you I always feel that you...
  January 30th, 2024 22:12
• When I Found Myself on eBay (Neville) I do tend to agree..... Amazon (damn \'em)are very swift, whereas with...
  January 30th, 2024 21:12
• The Edimpost (by two) (Michael Edwards) The road to nowhere is precisely the way we all are going, I...
  January 30th, 2024 21:04
• A Mantra of Life & Death (Tom Dylan) It\'s the way you tell \'em, Tom - had me in to the very end. I would...
  January 30th, 2024 20:56
• Trash to treasure (Sorenbarrett) Because much of that is bull shit (the \'Many think my poems are trash\'),...
  January 30th, 2024 20:34
• Mortal-Hamas-ment (Israeli Shout) (Friend of Israel) (AuburnScribbler) HI Ben - Is \'please do stay everyone\' a typo or intentional? Either way,...
  January 30th, 2024 20:12
• My Advice To Poets (+2) (Kurt Philip Behm) \' The First Cut ...\' does it for me. No message, then form, rhythm,...
  January 29th, 2024 00:15
• Diversity of Thought (Bella Shepard) \"Ability\" = courage, because sometimes (not very often) a concept/idea...
  January 28th, 2024 18:35
• When it Gets That Bad it Must be Broken (Neville) Painful reminder of a wrong place wrong time situation I\'d like to keep a...
  January 28th, 2024 18:10
• Administrative Malfunction (Quemis) A breakdown? You broke it down skilfully. Technology gone...
  January 28th, 2024 17:59
• Poetic Injustice (Alan R) I\'m full of admiration for the time effort and tenacity which must have...
  January 28th, 2024 00:37
• I\'m Closing The Books (Tom Dylan) You are a change agent, Tom. A random phrase and you burst through into a...
  January 27th, 2024 21:36
• No good deed goes unpunished (Sorenbarrett) The rhyming’s great me old mate, Not always easy to do; It takes hard...
  January 27th, 2024 18:19
• Can\'t argue (2781) Got my attention - good one. More like this and you have a devoted reader
  January 27th, 2024 17:40
• Now look.... woof! (Orchidee) Arise, Sir Orchi Non Sequitur - off your knees; embrace the truth.....
  January 27th, 2024 17:11
• Now look.... woof! (Orchidee) This is absolute rubbish, orchi, and you know it. A bigger load of...
  January 27th, 2024 05:16
• The Moon Looks Down. (Goldfinch60) Enjoy it while you can, Andy - it is all going to be dug up...
  January 26th, 2024 18:23
• Fruit Bats (Gray0328) Campaign for fruit bats is very much needed - in some parts they are...
  January 26th, 2024 06:39
• How Many More Planets (Neville) Maybe one or two….but it’s a very local issue – the Universe won’t...
  January 26th, 2024 06:28
• \"9/11\" (Gray0328) Tragic. Innocent people die in war.
  January 26th, 2024 02:00
• A Songbird\'s Final Flight (GeekSusie) “somehow I never noticed you before today, I’m afraid to say” Joan...
  January 25th, 2024 17:24
• Remember (M.E.M.) Just don\'t sleep in......... 🛌🏻 !!!
  January 25th, 2024 15:30
• Cloud cover (2781) A rip roaring read, even if.......
  January 25th, 2024 15:27
• America (Stormy) I\'m overwhelmed. You don\'t mean \'enjoy\' literally, do you? \'Feel the...
  January 25th, 2024 06:48
• Artificial Artist? The Unbelievable Accusation (GeekSusie) If it\'s not aliens in flying saucers, then something else.......ah! AI...
  January 24th, 2024 22:01
• Artificial Artist? The Unbelievable Accusation (GeekSusie) This is the beginning. It will take time for the AI situation to shake...
  January 24th, 2024 20:17
• With Phone in Hand (Tom Dylan) I encounter these zombies every day. I alter my line of travel slightly...
  January 24th, 2024 17:39
• A crime commited (Sorenbarrett) Regrets? yeh - me too. Redemption in later life, but life\'s early...
  January 24th, 2024 17:24
• The Ballad of Womanhood (Morgana) Hey Lorenz – give her a break. When I first responded to her piece (as...
  January 23rd, 2024 23:15
• The Teenage Dream (Stormy) \"Slowly managing\" is the most optimistic and realistic assurance you...
  January 23rd, 2024 20:15
• That Beautiful Dress. (Goldfinch60) I have an extremely strong suspicion that if she turned up in a totally...
  January 23rd, 2024 19:36
• The Teenage Dream (Stormy) Grit your teeth and hang in there. I would never under any circumstances...
  January 23rd, 2024 19:20
• Wandering Thoughts in Ordinary Places (GeekSusie) You make me feel better now - I think I\'ll mortify my flesh less often -...
  January 22nd, 2024 23:53
• Nothing is Free (Neville) The freedom of absence absolutely screwed, monetarised via meditation...
  January 22nd, 2024 06:43
• The Poet\'s Birthdate (Tom Dylan) So Tom, I know this will take some hard decision making, but stop fishing...
  January 22nd, 2024 06:04
• Kensington 2050 (Lorenz) My mind architecture is, I believe very different from yours - I retire...
  January 22nd, 2024 05:19
• Kensington 2050 (Lorenz) I had no idea what Kensington you were talking about - but following...
  January 22nd, 2024 01:11
• Rue-anda (AuburnScribbler) Yes - Australia has been at it too and has sometimes been cited as a...
  January 22nd, 2024 01:00
• What Is Real? (Bella Shepard) No argument from me whatsoever, Bella. ‘The truth The reality’ to be...
  January 21st, 2024 18:14
• kirei ni tsukurowa re te iru (Neville) Did try Guv, honestly. All I got was involved instructions re tense etc...
  January 21st, 2024 05:34
• Life\'s People. (Goldfinch60) Mirror mirror on the wall, who is the fairest... Smile mate - the...
  January 21st, 2024 05:20
• A Nation: Desolated, Dusted and Defeated (Petrichor of Love) Apologies - I\'ve never clicked on your poetry before (I think your Nom De...
  January 21st, 2024 05:07
• Technology (Sorenbarrett) Neat ingenious write, Soren. And for once (once only, mind) I\'m not...
  January 20th, 2024 17:33
• Expulsion explosion (EvenwheniLie) This is difficult to unpick, actually. • I know nothing much about...
  January 19th, 2024 21:43
• Phonies (2781) Great comment - from whom or what are you protecting your rear...
  January 19th, 2024 21:03
• To A Lesser Degree (Tom Dylan) Stop moaning.🙂 Went to Uni age 36 and 46. A struggle - I\'m sure it is...
  January 19th, 2024 16:21
• Noncence Geography (Teddy.15) American Renée Zellweger did a good job of portraying a daffy English...
  January 19th, 2024 16:08
• Another One of Those Café Moments (Neville) That focus on physical beauty - something I\'ve fought against within...
  January 19th, 2024 15:53
• Past And Future. (Goldfinch60) Definitely gets easier as you travel along, Andy.
  January 19th, 2024 15:38
• Once (Sorenbarrett) Not all life can be beautiful for many I suspect - certainly occasionally...
  January 18th, 2024 17:03
• Again Upon Reflection (Neville) Love yourself? Have I missed something? You know I have trouble with...
  January 18th, 2024 16:53
• Heart-Matters - Ye Olde Prayers Series (3) (Orchidee) THREE of \'em? you could have at least called it a trilogy and then called...
  January 18th, 2024 05:05
• The Mind of Her (Morgana) https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-160895 Please note in particular,...
  January 17th, 2024 15:35
• The Whole of A Woman Shared (Neville) I\'ve been both gazumped and as the active agent gazumped in matters of...
  January 17th, 2024 05:43
• Glorious Sunny Morn. (Goldfinch60) Risk numb toes so that I don\'t have to...... You word painted a lovely...
  January 16th, 2024 20:06
• Hope (Cassie58) The entirety, especially your very short but telling Comment speaks of an...
  January 16th, 2024 18:36
• The Ballad of Womanhood (Morgana) Men come in all kinds - a spectrum from good to bad and all points in...
  January 16th, 2024 18:30
• Verses of My Everlast: A Queer Identity Etched in Ink (GeekSusie) Those reflections on sexuality through one\'s life (whatever team you\'re...
  January 16th, 2024 00:49
• The Ballad of Womanhood (Morgana) Got a problem there, haven\'t you?
  January 16th, 2024 00:39
• Rolling along (Hzugman) Tireless in your pursuit?
  January 16th, 2024 00:36
• War (MendedFences27) I.......... (You know what I would write, with respect to war, don\'t you...
  January 16th, 2024 00:32
• Facial Recognition Blues (ElizabethMoroz) Would you care to identify the source of your \'external review\'?
  January 15th, 2024 08:38
• The Most Dangerous Animal In The World. (Goldfinch60) Cryptic, candid, correct, Andy.
  January 15th, 2024 08:31
• On a clear night like this (Tom Dylan) 🥹Gentle irony, a picture well painted in words. I will have to see what...
  January 15th, 2024 04:38
• Architect (Teddy.15) Apart from the surrealistic imagery, so typical of dream states (or at...
  January 14th, 2024 17:32
• What Does Love Mean? (CST) https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-129135 I hope this is of some help.
  January 14th, 2024 16:27
• As The Saying Goes (Bella Shepard) Re Teddy , Above: I\'ve objected to the use of \'we\' before - see my...
  January 14th, 2024 16:10
• The War That Defies Justification (ElizabethMoroz) Tragic. Innocent people die in war. ANY war defies justification.
  January 14th, 2024 04:46
• A Night Time Stroll (Goddess of the Mist) I liked this muchly, Goddess. Charged with expectation... Relief that the...
  January 14th, 2024 04:39
• GENDER ROTATION (Bobby O) Seen this before somewhere......
  January 14th, 2024 00:51
• चुनावी खेल (Uglykavi) If you are capable of delivering your commentary in English, why not the...
  January 13th, 2024 19:45
• The Folding Chair (Aimee C Kay) I understood this piece very well - an habitually used chair can retain...
  January 13th, 2024 19:33
• One Real, one isn’t (Gary Edward Geraci) As a piece of pulpitry this has no peer. But the jolly old Deacon will...
  January 13th, 2024 19:02
• Some Things are Best Left (Neville) A salutary reminder to stay shtum and keep my shit in order. Well writ,...
  January 13th, 2024 00:29
• Hemingway\'s Hideaway (Teddy.15) Two weeks in Venice was nowhere near enough for me, Teddy.....and...
  January 12th, 2024 05:35
• Looking Out To Sea. (Goldfinch60) Golly - gosh, a rhymer. What has got into you, Andy? 🙂 Great write...
  January 12th, 2024 05:14
• Crude and rude (Sorenbarrett) Not Gregory P Smith are you? https://drgregorypsmith.com/ Either way, a...
  January 10th, 2024 06:04
• Feasting Upon Leftovers (Neville) Felt like that once, but the fools at the feast didn\'t finish me and...
  January 10th, 2024 05:48
• To Be In Love (Teddy.15) \"now faded into forgotten.\" Wouldn\'t take much to turn that into solid...
  January 10th, 2024 05:42