Comments on community poems by aDarkerMind
- A very Gracious Goodbye (Teddy.15)
you have taken your poetry to a new level here Teddy.
a wonderfully...
September 20th, 2024 05:44 - Land beyond the rainbow (Tony36)
a colourful dream to have Tony.
nicely penned.
what w wonderful world...
September 19th, 2024 09:16 - Handicap (Sorenbarrett)
and up dreams creek we seem to be these days soren.
as impressed as...
September 19th, 2024 05:00 - A Pick Me Up (ADarkerMind)
a nursery rhyme from an asylum Teddy...
but a more cheerful one.
September 19th, 2024 04:47 - The Final Retreat (Thomas W Case)
I enjoyed the youtube vid Thomas
almost as much as I enjoy reading your...
September 19th, 2024 04:40 - Bicycles in Beijing (Cassie58)
very poetic, full of rhyme.
and a joy to read Cassie.
and theres no...
September 19th, 2024 04:01 - Soul-finder (Teddy.15)
a very touching, moving write Teddy.
a poem to read and live...
September 19th, 2024 01:58 - Hard Winter (Dan Williams)
an outstanding write Dan,
and one I can truely relate to.
worthy of much...
September 19th, 2024 01:51 - Perfectly polished (Teddy.15)
what a wonderful story Teddy...
am losing count of the times you have...
September 18th, 2024 12:10 - Me (Bella Shepard)
my thoughts are with you Bella.
I hope things get better....
and hope to...
September 18th, 2024 11:05 - Dishcloth Wisdom (AuburnScribbler)
a very impressive write....
loved the line
\'at a woodworm garden...
September 17th, 2024 13:06 - Poet (Teddy.15)
well Teddy, am not ashamed to say this wonderful write has put many tears...
September 17th, 2024 04:48 - A Tender Dream (Thomas W Case)
she farted a lot.....!
my friend Thomas puts this in a poem, and it...
September 16th, 2024 12:48 - Another day (Sorenbarrett)
murky reflections in faded fog...
love that line.
another fine write...
September 16th, 2024 06:04 - The Sweetest of Slumberbash (Teddy.15)
oh my Teddy!
fantasy indeed....
you have created a world I would...
September 16th, 2024 06:02 - A Winter Passing (Cassie58)
how very true Cassie.
a very expressive and touching write.
September 16th, 2024 02:56 - How Slow These Cradles Rock (ADarkerMind)
I would suggest soren, your \'\'far from\'\' inadequate mind has summed up...
September 15th, 2024 12:43 - Country walk (Sorenbarrett)
a very expressive write soren.
picture perfect and most enjoyable.
September 15th, 2024 11:01 - My Father’s Daughters (Cassie58)
a wonderful story
beautifully written Cassie.
one to fave for sure.
September 15th, 2024 09:17 - Devil Plays the Fiddle (Teddy.15)
and share this fine write you must Teddy.
another one to savour and...
September 15th, 2024 06:39 - Rainbow (Teddy.15)
a cheer-me-up on a cold wet day here on the south coast Teddy.
much...
September 8th, 2024 11:36 - Visions of Death (Tristan Robert Lange)
as impressive a write as I have read Tristan.
grabbed me on the opening...
September 8th, 2024 11:12 - Inferno (Sorenbarrett)
one to be remembered......
and faved soren.
a cracking write!
September 3rd, 2024 13:52 - Learn (Bella Shepard)
a timely slap on the butt
and a lesson learnt Bella.
am never too...
September 2nd, 2024 12:59 - Look at Me, Mama (Thomas W Case)
great stuff my friend
as always.
September 2nd, 2024 12:13 - Chance Of A Kiss (Dan Williams)
I thought it worked out very well Dan.
a very impressive write.
September 1st, 2024 12:54 - The Sullen Swimmer (Tristan Robert Lange)
top marks from me Tristan.
a most impressive write;
September 1st, 2024 12:45 - An Ode To The Kookaburra (Teddy.15)
another work of art from the gifted pen of Teddy.
a most superbly...
September 1st, 2024 07:40 - Through The Eyes Of Mnemosyne\'s Muse (ADarkerMind)
thank you Ellen
August 27th, 2024 10:58 - Two Bunnies Beneath a Cold Grey Sky (Thomas W Case)
having also lost a friend recently Thomas, I can more than the feel the...
August 25th, 2024 14:58 - Corporate (Bella Shepard)
I see a lot of work put into this very impressive write Bella.
you have...
August 25th, 2024 09:01 - Forest Games (Tony36)
you paint a picture of a world many of us long to see Tony.
very nicely...
August 25th, 2024 08:29 - Meltdown (Tristan Robert Lange)
a most impressive write Tristan.
thoroughly enjoyed the read.
August 25th, 2024 08:21 - think of yourself as the world (Emvd)
nicely written.
most impressed.
August 25th, 2024 08:05 - A conversation with him. (Nicholas12)
a most impressive write that took me in from the very first line.
very...
August 25th, 2024 07:55 - Guilt (Sorenbarrett)
a most impressive write soren.
one to fave for sure.
August 25th, 2024 05:47 - The Lines, part two (Dan Williams)
a very impressive write Dan.
worthy of much applause.
August 25th, 2024 05:45 - Missing (Cassie58)
a most beautiful write Cassie
August 25th, 2024 01:43 - Inside Out (Teddy.15)
nailed it indeed Teddy...
what a talent you are.
August 25th, 2024 01:37 - One Recognizes His Own Kind (Thomas W Case)
another work of art my friend.
August 25th, 2024 01:32 - What More Could You Want? (Thomas W Case)
a fucking life indeed Thomas.
written as only you know how my friend.
August 19th, 2024 10:12 - An Ode to Sunday (Teddy.15)
am surrounded by trees, squirrels forever squabbling, and a birds nest...
August 19th, 2024 10:08 - Firefly Date Night (Bella Shepard)
perfect in every way,
and beautifully written Bella.
August 19th, 2024 10:02 - Because My Darling It all Belongs to You (Teddy.15)
a deep and touching write Teddy...
and if I were to be granted one...
August 14th, 2024 11:40 - A Special Breed (Tom Dylan)
a big thumbs up for this one Tom.
very impressed.
August 12th, 2024 14:08 - Blue Eyes, Blue Eggs, Lost Love. (Cassie58)
a wonderfuly expressive write Cassie.
am most impressed.
August 11th, 2024 11:43 - Waltzing Down Love Street (Thomas W Case)
brilliant!
August 11th, 2024 10:22 - After the Ending (Dan Williams)
a very impressive write Dam.
your opening line took me in,
and what...
August 11th, 2024 09:39 - Illusions? (Thoughtless)
a very impressive write JDB.
August 11th, 2024 09:26 - Darker than black (Sorenbarrett)
a pain I know only too well Soren.
a very impressive write
and I...
August 11th, 2024 08:36 - The Devil\'s In Town (Teddy.15)
a delightful and fun read Teddy.
a perfect poem on this, a bright sunny...
August 11th, 2024 08:31 - The Devil\'s In Town (Teddy.15)
a delightful and fun read Teddy.
a perfect poem on this, a bright sunny...
August 11th, 2024 08:31 - You\'re Just Too Good To Be True (Teddy.15)
thank you to, my very dear friend Teddy.
a lemon meringue that has...
August 10th, 2024 11:50 - Squeaks (Dan Williams)
one to savour here Dan.
a very impressive write.
August 8th, 2024 14:29 - In The Deepest Darkest Depths of My Heart (Teddy.15)
goose bumps
and a lump in my throat.
(and a few tears while thinking...
August 8th, 2024 13:23 - Montana (Thomas W Case)
to me Thomas, it doesnt matter what state youre in..to go back home, that...
August 6th, 2024 10:11 - If I Was Just A Lonely House Upon a Hill (Teddy.15)
without the rain
we would never have a rainbow.
one to keep warm the...
August 4th, 2024 07:09 - Silent colors (Sorenbarrett)
one to favour soren.
and my favourite colour you write of,
is...
August 4th, 2024 06:55 - A Battle With Irony (Teddy.15)
but Napeoleon didn\'t have a gift for poetry, did he Teddy.
a fun...
July 31st, 2024 14:17 - My Favourite Colour Is Blue (Teddy.15)
a yellow Fiat Panda running you over Teddy ?
glad you\'re ok tho...
July 30th, 2024 12:39 - When the Light Came (Thomas W Case)
ten out of ten Thomas!
July 30th, 2024 12:31 - And I\'ll Write About That Too (Teddy.15)
on a beautiful island writing a beautiful poem for all to see.
perfect...
July 29th, 2024 11:04 - ~> Stan And The Wishing Well - A Fable (Thad Wilk)
I will now be very careful what I wish for Thad...
good one my friend.
July 28th, 2024 14:08 - If Your Face Doesn’t Fit (Cassie58)
a most impressive write Cassie.
and every line a gem.
July 28th, 2024 12:56 - Sleep Always Calls (Thomas W Case)
a write with my name all over it Thomas;
I too might follow your...
July 28th, 2024 00:07 - Perfect (Sorenbarrett)
If there was a god it would not be a man...
a most perfect line...
July 27th, 2024 10:56 - Fire pit (Tony36)
very well written Tony
July 27th, 2024 10:53 - My Friend Dale (Thomas W Case)
another fine write my friend
July 27th, 2024 10:21 - To the Bride and Groom (Teddy.15)
a touching haiku Teddy;
my best wishes for the happy couple...
and...
July 27th, 2024 03:29 - Precious Thursday (Bella Shepard)
my mother loved Nat King Cole...
many afternoons I would sit with her as...
July 24th, 2024 13:33 - SUDDENLY WE SEE (Bobby O)
a very impressive write Bobby O;
good to see you back with us all;
July 24th, 2024 10:00 - There\'s Nothing But Grief in My Empty Fridge (Teddy.15)
July 24th, 2024 09:48 - There\'s Nothing But Grief in My Empty Fridge (Teddy.15)
sad....yes.
but how beautifully put in words Teddy.
brought a tear...
July 24th, 2024 09:48 - Lonesome Neon Nights (Thomas W Case)
as miserable goes Thomas,
this is, without doubt....
as good as it...
July 22nd, 2024 13:15 - Carnegie Of Lasses (Jerry Reynolds)
love the image painted Jerry.
most impressed;
July 22nd, 2024 12:15 - A Life Lesson In Tapestry (Teddy.15)
losing trust in people....
a subject I am very close to Teddy.
I...
July 22nd, 2024 12:12 - Awkward (and queer) (Weep little lion girl)
touching indeed.
but, fight we must.
if we don\'t fight, what chance do...
July 21st, 2024 11:40 - Chuang Tzu (Sorenbarrett)
a very powerful write.....
culture the butcher of infants!
we have...
July 21st, 2024 10:42 - A Sudden Touch Of Wood (ADarkerMind)
thank you for reading, and for a most kind comment.
very much
July 21st, 2024 09:36 - ()
a very impressive write Sitara
July 20th, 2024 15:58 - So I Can Finally Become Me (Teddy.15)
a poem from the heart of a woman with a gift of poetry.
beautifully put...
July 19th, 2024 13:10 - The Great Moon and The Baubab (Teddy.15)
as touching as always Teddy...
Sylvia would have enjoyed it,
of that...
July 18th, 2024 14:07 - I React (Bella Shepard)
I would say most definitely Bella.
a most impressive write.
July 18th, 2024 13:58 - Declaration (Thomas W Case)
well here\'s a kick up the backside if ever I needed one Thomas!
and,...
July 18th, 2024 09:43 - Godspeed Came in Last (Dan Williams)
many true words spoken here Dan.
a very impressive write.
July 17th, 2024 14:31 - Infinite (Bella Shepard)
now how impressive a write is this Bella.
when in reality, I know...
July 16th, 2024 14:11 - ~> Lets All Join Hands For Peace (Thad Wilk)
I too will applaud your kind heart Thad.
it scares me just watching...
July 15th, 2024 13:18 - I Thirst for your Footsteps (Thomas W Case)
romance is very much alive and kicking Thomas.
a master-class of love...
July 15th, 2024 12:59 - Souls in Agony (Tristan Robert Lange)
perfect in every way Tristan.
my kind of poetry,
love it!
July 14th, 2024 13:14 - Moonlight (Bella Shepard)
very enjoyable indeed Bella.
loved every line.
July 14th, 2024 11:39 - Though Lovely Is Her Memory (Cassie58)
a very touching look at life\'s cycle Cassie.
beautifully put into...
July 14th, 2024 08:23 - alone (Sheta)
good luck
be strong
and never give up.
July 14th, 2024 05:00 - alone (Sheta)
good luck
be strong
and never give up.
July 14th, 2024 05:00 - Screams in the Lucid Night (Tristan Robert Lange)
a most impressive write Tristan.
July 13th, 2024 22:20 - A Small Place Above His Left Ear (Thomas W Case)
you got me on this one Thomas.
hook line and sinker!
July 13th, 2024 14:56 - On The Very Edge of Passion (Teddy.15)
love the title Teddy.
and so much in so few words.
most impressed.
July 12th, 2024 12:21 - Unrelenting Rage (Katdream)
and survive we must I guess...
lived every word, and felt the...
July 11th, 2024 15:41 - Temporary Blemishes (Neville)
well that took my mind to a far better place Neville.
come here and...
July 11th, 2024 15:24 - Resolve (Cassie58)
ghostly trails of veils now perish
as the light grows ever...
July 11th, 2024 10:03 - When Two Roads Diverge (Teddy.15)
a very interesting and complex question Teddy.
and one deserving of a...
July 11th, 2024 09:58
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