Comments on community poems by aDarkerMind
- Expectations (Sorenbarrett) 
well you hit the spot with this fine write Soren.
far too many good...
 September 21st, 2024 12:47
- Junkyard of time (Sorenbarrett) 
you have a gift for words Soren.
of that, there is no doubt.
am a fan...
 September 20th, 2024 13:00
- A very Gracious Goodbye   (Teddy.15) 
you have taken your poetry to a new level here Teddy.
a wonderfully...
 September 20th, 2024 05:44
- Land beyond the rainbow  (Tony36) 
a colourful dream to have Tony.
nicely penned.
what w wonderful world...
 September 19th, 2024 09:16
- Handicap (Sorenbarrett) 
and up dreams creek we seem to be these days soren.
as impressed as...
 September 19th, 2024 05:00
- A Pick Me Up (ADarkerMind) 
a nursery rhyme from an asylum Teddy...
but a more cheerful one.
 September 19th, 2024 04:47
- The Final Retreat (Thomas W Case) 
I enjoyed the youtube vid Thomas
almost as much as I enjoy reading your...
 September 19th, 2024 04:40
- Bicycles in Beijing  (Cassie58) 
very poetic, full of rhyme.
and a joy to read Cassie.
and theres no...
 September 19th, 2024 04:01
- Soul-finder  (Teddy.15) 
a very touching, moving write Teddy.
a poem to read and live...
 September 19th, 2024 01:58
- Hard Winter (Dan Williams) 
an outstanding write Dan,
and one I can truely relate to.
worthy of much...
 September 19th, 2024 01:51
- Perfectly polished  (Teddy.15) 
what a wonderful story Teddy...
am losing count of the times you have...
 September 18th, 2024 12:10
- Me (Bella Shepard) 
my thoughts are with you Bella.
I hope things get better....
and hope to...
 September 18th, 2024 11:05
- Dishcloth Wisdom (AuburnScribbler) 
a very impressive write....
loved the line
\'at a woodworm garden...
 September 17th, 2024 13:06
- Poet  (Teddy.15) 
well Teddy, am not ashamed to say this wonderful write has put many tears...
 September 17th, 2024 04:48
- A Tender Dream (Thomas W Case) 
she farted a lot.....! 
my friend Thomas puts this in a poem, and it...
 September 16th, 2024 12:48
- Another day (Sorenbarrett) 
murky reflections in faded fog...
love that line.
another fine write...
 September 16th, 2024 06:04
- The Sweetest of Slumberbash (Teddy.15) 
oh my Teddy!
fantasy indeed....
you have created a world I would...
 September 16th, 2024 06:02
- A Winter Passing  (Cassie58) 
how very true Cassie.
a very expressive and touching write.
 September 16th, 2024 02:56
- How Slow These Cradles Rock (ADarkerMind) 
I would suggest soren, your \'\'far from\'\' inadequate mind has summed up...
 September 15th, 2024 12:43
- Country walk (Sorenbarrett) 
a very expressive write soren.
picture perfect and most enjoyable.
 September 15th, 2024 11:01
- My Father’s Daughters  (Cassie58) 
a wonderful story
beautifully written Cassie.
one to fave for sure.
 September 15th, 2024 09:17
- Devil Plays the Fiddle  (Teddy.15) 
and share this fine write you must Teddy.
another one to savour and...
 September 15th, 2024 06:39
- Rainbow  (Teddy.15) 
a cheer-me-up on a cold wet day here on the south coast Teddy.
much...
 September 8th, 2024 11:36
- Visions of Death (Tristan Robert Lange) 
as impressive a write as I have read Tristan.
grabbed me on the opening...
 September 8th, 2024 11:12
- Inferno (Sorenbarrett) 
 one to be remembered......
and faved soren.
a cracking write!
 September 3rd, 2024 13:52
- Learn (Bella Shepard) 
a timely slap on the butt
and a lesson learnt Bella.
am never too...
 September 2nd, 2024 12:59
- Look at Me, Mama  (Thomas W Case) 
great stuff my friend
as always.
 September 2nd, 2024 12:13
- Chance Of A Kiss (Dan Williams) 
I thought it worked out very well Dan.
a very impressive write.
 September 1st, 2024 12:54
- The Sullen Swimmer (Tristan Robert Lange) 
top marks from me Tristan.
a most impressive write;
 September 1st, 2024 12:45
- An Ode To The Kookaburra  (Teddy.15) 
another work of art from the gifted pen of Teddy.
a most superbly...
 September 1st, 2024 07:40
- Through The Eyes Of Mnemosyne\'s Muse (ADarkerMind) 
thank you Ellen
 August 27th, 2024 10:58
- Two Bunnies Beneath a Cold Grey Sky (Thomas W Case) 
having also lost a friend recently Thomas, I can more than the feel the...
 August 25th, 2024 14:58
- Corporate (Bella Shepard) 
I see a lot of work put into this very impressive write Bella.
you have...
 August 25th, 2024 09:01
- Forest Games (Tony36) 
you paint a picture of a world many of us long to see Tony.
very nicely...
 August 25th, 2024 08:29
- Meltdown (Tristan Robert Lange) 
a most impressive write Tristan.
thoroughly enjoyed the read.
 August 25th, 2024 08:21
- think of yourself as the world (Emvd) 
nicely written.
most impressed.
 August 25th, 2024 08:05
- A conversation with him. (Nicholas12) 
a most impressive write that took me in from the very first line.
very...
 August 25th, 2024 07:55
- Guilt (Sorenbarrett) 
a most impressive write soren.
one to fave for sure.
 August 25th, 2024 05:47
- The Lines, part two (Dan Williams) 
a very impressive write Dan.
worthy of much applause.
 August 25th, 2024 05:45
- Missing  (Cassie58) 
a most beautiful write Cassie
 August 25th, 2024 01:43
- Inside Out  (Teddy.15) 
nailed it indeed Teddy...
what a talent you are.
 August 25th, 2024 01:37
- One Recognizes His Own Kind (Thomas W Case) 
another work of art my friend.
 August 25th, 2024 01:32
- What More Could You Want? (Thomas W Case) 
a fucking life indeed Thomas.
written as only you know how my friend.
 August 19th, 2024 10:12
- An Ode to Sunday  (Teddy.15) 
am surrounded by trees, squirrels forever squabbling, and a birds nest...
 August 19th, 2024 10:08
- Firefly Date Night (Bella Shepard) 
perfect in every way,
and beautifully written Bella.
 August 19th, 2024 10:02
- Because My Darling It all  Belongs to You  (Teddy.15) 
a deep and touching write Teddy...
and if I were to be granted one...
 August 14th, 2024 11:40
- A Special Breed (Tom Dylan) 
a big thumbs up for this one Tom.
very impressed.
 August 12th, 2024 14:08
- Blue Eyes, Blue Eggs, Lost Love. (Cassie58) 
a wonderfuly expressive write Cassie.
am most impressed.
 August 11th, 2024 11:43
- Waltzing Down Love Street (Thomas W Case) 
brilliant!
 August 11th, 2024 10:22
- After the Ending (Dan Williams) 
a very impressive write Dam.
your opening line took me in,
and what...
 August 11th, 2024 09:39
- Illusions? (Thoughtless) 
a very impressive write JDB.
 August 11th, 2024 09:26
- Darker than black (Sorenbarrett) 
a pain I know only too well Soren.
a very impressive write
and I...
 August 11th, 2024 08:36
- The Devil\'s In Town  (Teddy.15) 
a delightful and fun read Teddy.
a perfect poem on this, a bright sunny...
 August 11th, 2024 08:31
- The Devil\'s In Town  (Teddy.15) 
a delightful and fun read Teddy.
a perfect poem on this, a bright sunny...
 August 11th, 2024 08:31
- You\'re Just Too Good To Be True  (Teddy.15) 
thank you to, my very dear friend Teddy.
a lemon meringue that has...
 August 10th, 2024 11:50
- Squeaks (Dan Williams) 
one to savour here Dan.
a very impressive write.
 August 8th, 2024 14:29
- In The Deepest Darkest Depths of My Heart  (Teddy.15) 
goose bumps
and a lump in my throat.
(and a few tears while thinking...
 August 8th, 2024 13:23
- Montana (Thomas W Case) 
to me Thomas, it doesnt matter what state youre in..to go back home, that...
 August 6th, 2024 10:11
- If I Was Just A Lonely House Upon a Hill (Teddy.15) 
without the rain
we would never have a rainbow.
one to keep warm the...
 August 4th, 2024 07:09
- Silent colors (Sorenbarrett) 
one to favour soren.
and my favourite colour you write of,
is...
 August 4th, 2024 06:55
- A Battle With Irony  (Teddy.15) 
but Napeoleon didn\'t have a gift for poetry, did he Teddy.
a fun...
 July 31st, 2024 14:17
- My Favourite Colour Is Blue (Teddy.15) 
a yellow Fiat Panda running you over Teddy ?
glad you\'re ok tho...
 July 30th, 2024 12:39
- When the Light Came (Thomas W Case) 
ten out of ten Thomas!
 July 30th, 2024 12:31
- And I\'ll Write About That Too (Teddy.15) 
on a beautiful island writing a beautiful poem for all to see.
perfect...
 July 29th, 2024 11:04
- ~> Stan And The Wishing Well - A Fable (Thad Wilk) 
I will now be very careful what I wish for Thad...
good one my friend.
 July 28th, 2024 14:08
- If Your Face Doesn’t Fit  (Cassie58) 
a most impressive write Cassie.
and every line a gem.
 July 28th, 2024 12:56
- Sleep Always Calls (Thomas W Case) 
a write with my name all over it Thomas;
I too might follow your...
 July 28th, 2024 00:07
- Perfect (Sorenbarrett) 
If there was a god it would not be a man...
a most perfect line...
 July 27th, 2024 10:56
- Fire pit (Tony36) 
very well written Tony
 July 27th, 2024 10:53
- My Friend Dale (Thomas W Case) 
another fine write my friend
 July 27th, 2024 10:21
- To the Bride and Groom  (Teddy.15) 
a touching haiku Teddy;
my best wishes for the happy couple...
and...
 July 27th, 2024 03:29
- Precious Thursday (Bella Shepard) 
my mother loved Nat King Cole...
many afternoons I would sit with her as...
 July 24th, 2024 13:33
- SUDDENLY WE SEE (Bobby O) 
a very impressive write Bobby O;
good to see you back with us all;
 July 24th, 2024 10:00
- There\'s Nothing But Grief in My Empty Fridge (Teddy.15) 
 July 24th, 2024 09:48
- There\'s Nothing But Grief in My Empty Fridge (Teddy.15) 
sad....yes.
but how beautifully put in words Teddy.
brought a tear...
 July 24th, 2024 09:48
- Lonesome Neon Nights (Thomas W Case) 
as miserable goes Thomas,
this is, without doubt....
as good as it...
 July 22nd, 2024 13:15
- Carnegie Of Lasses (Jerry Reynolds) 
love the image painted Jerry.
most impressed;
 July 22nd, 2024 12:15
- A Life Lesson In Tapestry  (Teddy.15) 
losing trust in people....
a subject I am very close to Teddy.
I...
 July 22nd, 2024 12:12
- Awkward (and queer)  (Weep little lion girl) 
touching indeed.
but, fight we must.
if we don\'t fight, what chance do...
 July 21st, 2024 11:40
- Chuang Tzu (Sorenbarrett) 
a very powerful write.....
culture the butcher of infants!
we have...
 July 21st, 2024 10:42
- A Sudden Touch Of Wood (ADarkerMind) 
thank you for reading, and for a most kind comment.
very much
 July 21st, 2024 09:36
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a very impressive write Sitara
 July 20th, 2024 15:58
- So I Can Finally Become Me (Teddy.15) 
a poem from the heart of a woman with a gift of poetry.
beautifully put...
 July 19th, 2024 13:10
- The Great Moon and The Baubab  (Teddy.15) 
as touching as always Teddy...
Sylvia would have enjoyed it,
of that...
 July 18th, 2024 14:07
- I React (Bella Shepard) 
I would say most definitely Bella.
a most impressive write.
 July 18th, 2024 13:58
- Declaration (Thomas W Case) 
well here\'s a kick up the backside if ever I needed one Thomas!
and,...
 July 18th, 2024 09:43
- Godspeed Came in Last (Dan Williams) 
many true words spoken here Dan.
a very impressive write.
 July 17th, 2024 14:31
- Infinite (Bella Shepard) 
now how impressive a write is this Bella.
when in reality, I know...
 July 16th, 2024 14:11
- ~> Lets All Join Hands For Peace (Thad Wilk) 
I too will applaud your kind heart Thad.
it scares me just watching...
 July 15th, 2024 13:18
- I Thirst for your Footsteps (Thomas W Case) 
romance is very much alive and kicking Thomas.
a master-class of love...
 July 15th, 2024 12:59
- Souls in Agony (Tristan Robert Lange) 
perfect in every way Tristan.
my kind of poetry,
love it!
 July 14th, 2024 13:14
- Moonlight  (Bella Shepard) 
very enjoyable indeed Bella.
loved every line.
 July 14th, 2024 11:39
- Though Lovely Is Her Memory (Cassie58) 
a very touching look at life\'s cycle Cassie.
beautifully put into...
 July 14th, 2024 08:23
- alone (Sheta) 
good luck
be strong
and never give up.
 July 14th, 2024 05:00
- alone (Sheta) 
good luck
be strong
and never give up.
 July 14th, 2024 05:00
- Screams in the Lucid Night (Tristan Robert Lange) 
a most impressive write Tristan.
 July 13th, 2024 22:20
- A Small Place Above His Left Ear (Thomas W Case) 
you got me on this one Thomas.
hook line and sinker!
 July 13th, 2024 14:56
- On The Very Edge of Passion (Teddy.15) 
love the title Teddy.
and so much in so few words.
most impressed.
 July 12th, 2024 12:21
- Unrelenting Rage (Katdream) 
and survive we must I guess...
lived every word, and felt the...
 July 11th, 2024 15:41
- Temporary Blemishes (Neville) 
well that took my mind to a far better place Neville.
come here and...
 July 11th, 2024 15:24
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