Comments on community poems by Michael Edwards

• Things didn\'t work out (ShannonXx) Beautifully expressed.
  August 7th, 2017 09:13
• OUR LIFE\'S MELODY (Louis Gibbs) Dance? Me? I can\'t even clap in time with music. Another little beauty...
  August 7th, 2017 06:37
• Hats Off. (Fay Slimm.) This is such a god read and so well written as is your wont - congrats
  August 7th, 2017 04:18
• THALASSOPHILES ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Only wish I was closer but live slam donk in the middle of the country -...
  August 7th, 2017 04:04
• A FEW COUPLETS (3) (Michael Edwards)
  August 7th, 2017 02:18
• Harmony in Our Minds - Scionating. (Goldfinch60) Thanks for putting this on the site - feel flattered that you should use...
  August 7th, 2017 02:09
• Double enjoyment (Poetic Dan) Great in its simplicity PD
  August 7th, 2017 01:04
• Who Needs Weeds? (WriteBeLight) Ahh - I fell a tad sorry for the weeds - after all they are only plants...
  August 6th, 2017 14:20
• Last Flight (FredPeyer) Nice one and actually we will miss you but needs must.
  August 6th, 2017 07:15
• PEACE & JUSTICE ~ SONNET FOR SUNDAY (BRIAN & ANGELA) May all those who have a God be touched by Him
  August 6th, 2017 02:29
• Sitting at Heavens Door. (Goldfinch60) Your poem sounds like an ideal piece of heaven - must get more into jazz -...
  August 6th, 2017 02:26
• I want to run to you.... (Rrodriguez) Yes I like this too - simple message so eloquently expressed.
  August 6th, 2017 00:34
• Healing Helps (Orchidee) Great O - I could even hear the music as I read it.
  August 5th, 2017 12:51
• I Wonder Why (Edward Charles McDevitt) This is a fine posting but to answer the question: if you simply post and...
  August 5th, 2017 12:47
• Venezuela: Land of Grace (Rrodriguez) Sadly I know little of Venezuela and nothing of their National Anthem but...
  August 5th, 2017 12:38
• All Washed Up (WriteBeLight) A lifting write - I also use them for painting (art type painting that is...
  August 5th, 2017 10:18
• As she desired (Malubotelho) Lovely uplifting write - enjoyed it very much. Peace rose?
  August 5th, 2017 10:16
• TRISTAN & ISOLDE ~ A Tragic Love Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Like he choice of painting - our chemist is out of love potion at the...
  August 5th, 2017 08:00
• Too Long. (Fay Slimm.) Had to come in from the garden - guess what - it was raining. Great poem.
  August 5th, 2017 07:46
• Never (FredPeyer) Sometimes, me included, folk can get too wrapt up in our own interests...
  August 5th, 2017 06:15
• Cleansing Rain. (Goldfinch60) Super stuff and I love the picture - might even copy the idea in acrylic...
  August 5th, 2017 01:48
• Look Both Ways (WriteBeLight) They can be so dangerous - when we reach a crossing we need time to...
  August 4th, 2017 11:41
• Incubating (Malubotelho) Quite a little special and love the last few words which serve the poem so...
  August 4th, 2017 11:39
• Her (Tony36) Thank goodness I didn\'t turn away my gal - still married and so blessed...
  August 4th, 2017 11:38
• GRANDFATHERS (Louis Gibbs) A case of ditto - my paternal grandfather was also quiet but he had a lot...
  August 4th, 2017 08:23
• Not A Doubt. (Fay Slimm.) A super work as always. I not usually a great fan of pre-Raphaelite but...
  August 4th, 2017 05:36
• The Undarkened House. (Goldfinch60) Don\'t like dark mornings when it gets late late. Do like this though - I...
  August 4th, 2017 02:59
• SIX TO TEN ~ NUMBERS GAME II ~ TANKAS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) I can relate with these great bit of writing Brian
  August 4th, 2017 02:55
• Tropical Rain (FredPeyer) Kat is spot on (if you\'ll excuse the pun) - this is such a good poem love...
  August 4th, 2017 00:55
• A Letter Left Unopened (Thewildfire) I have been so lucky - I had a wonderful mother who I miss so much and...
  August 3rd, 2017 23:27
• Twenty four of darkness.... (P.H.Rose) Some experience and bravo for seeing it through (no pun intended) - great...
  August 3rd, 2017 14:18
• A Hat For That (WriteBeLight) Don\'t wear a hat never worn a hat my hair is thick I\'ve quite a...
  August 3rd, 2017 14:16
• Cook (Tony36) Nothing at all - we are always entertaining or being entertained - great...
  August 3rd, 2017 14:11
• A Lady Standing By A Gate (Alf W) I can\'t think which painting it could have been but as a member of the...
  August 3rd, 2017 06:39
• Imagination (P.X. Vexxus) Reads really well - enjoyed it.
  August 3rd, 2017 04:54
• Cutting Free. (Fay Slimm.) Good write Fay
  August 3rd, 2017 04:52
• Class Reunion (FredPeyer) Never been to one but I can imagine the strain on trying to communicate...
  August 3rd, 2017 04:51
• NUMBERS GAME ~ FIVE RHYMING TANKAS (BRIAN & ANGELA) They read well Brian - I find that they can be quite demanding since you...
  August 3rd, 2017 04:46
• Walking in Space. (Goldfinch60) I read it and I was there - great descriptive writing G
  August 3rd, 2017 04:42
• Blowing Bubbles (Tony36) And a fun poem Tony.
  August 2nd, 2017 23:21
• My Small Silent Child (ShannonXx) Sensitive yet powerful - great work.
  August 2nd, 2017 23:19
• Dark moon arrives.... (P.H.Rose) Some achievement - love it.
  August 2nd, 2017 23:17
• Death (Malubotelho) Great piece of work Malu
  August 2nd, 2017 23:13
• gehenna burning (Heather T) Another amazing write Heather.
  August 2nd, 2017 23:12
• Garden Glories (Orchidee) And here was me expecting you to name a few of the flowers in your garden...
  August 2nd, 2017 07:52
• WE ALL ARE CAPTIVES (Louis Gibbs) A little belter - great piece Louis
  August 2nd, 2017 07:51
• Food Fight (WriteBeLight) Great to see you fun work back in the gallery - just what it needs - this...
  August 2nd, 2017 06:03
• More Than. (Fay Slimm.) Great work Fay
  August 2nd, 2017 03:52
• MY DOG ~ OLD SHEP (BRIAN & ANGELA) I never cease to admire the way we humans can get so attached to a dog and...
  August 2nd, 2017 03:49
• Stay Just Stay (Tia Davis/テイア) What a beautiful write - she must be a very special lady.
  August 2nd, 2017 02:31
• Falling into the Night. (Goldfinch60) I like this - you certainly can\'t beat a good ponder.
  August 2nd, 2017 02:30
• My Motorcycle (FredPeyer) Do you know I\'ve never ridden a motorcycle but I can well imagine the...
  August 2nd, 2017 01:20
• Memories revisited... (P.H.Rose) Well I don\'t recall seeing it before but that doesn\'t matter - its a...
  August 1st, 2017 12:50
• I Feel Better (WriteBeLight) Thankfully there are many good poets and this site has them in plenty. ...
  August 1st, 2017 10:17
• They\'s a Daid Armydilly in the Road (ColBUSAF) Made my day - great fun and loved the video - might even end up singing it...
  August 1st, 2017 06:41
• Today. (Fay Slimm.) A real stunner Fay - I am so envious of your poetic talent.
  August 1st, 2017 04:24
• On the Bus (FredPeyer) Oh this really takes you there - so full of sadness yet so beautifully...
  August 1st, 2017 02:52
• A Soldier of the Great War. (Goldfinch60) Such a moving ceremony and this is a great tribute to all those involved...
  August 1st, 2017 02:51
• MY VALLEY ~ A 4442 Rhyming Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Another clever write - and a good reminder - thanks for posting Brian.
  August 1st, 2017 02:49
• The Outing (WriteBeLight) Good poem that again highlights this internet predator - I feel so let...
  July 31st, 2017 14:34
• five candles (Heather T) An inspired piece of writing.
  July 31st, 2017 14:30
• POISON FRUIT (Louis Gibbs) It\'s scary - in a way I\'m grateful I belong to my current generation.
  July 31st, 2017 10:23
• Secret Place (FredPeyer) Well I have a place like this but it\'s not entirely secret - my wife...
  July 31st, 2017 04:55
• Early Morning Troubles. (Goldfinch60) Now this is so so true - I get totally carried away writing and my wife...
  July 31st, 2017 02:05
• YOUNG MISTRESS ~ MEETS OLD MASTER ~ SENRYU (BRIAN & ANGELA) So sorry to hear they both fell - nice one Brian - will write a haiku...
  July 31st, 2017 02:01
• WORDS WRITTEN (Michael Edwards) Does anyone here watch the Japanese channel NHK. They\'ve just had a great...
  July 31st, 2017 00:45
• chant (Onepauly) I fuggled with gingling this fortid written and found it to be quite umbly...
  July 30th, 2017 23:34
• Maybe (Its Raskolnikov) Even having read this I am still not sure whether you would class yourself...
  July 30th, 2017 23:30
• mortal (Heather T) So beautiful written with such a great meter to it - my kind of poem.
  July 30th, 2017 14:12
• Afterglow (Fay Slimm.) Beautifully descriptive
  July 30th, 2017 08:43
• THE TRINITY ~ Four Tankas (5 7 5 7 7) (BRIAN & ANGELA) I like this form - well worked Brian
  July 30th, 2017 03:28
• Books? (Goldfinch60) Super poem - so true - and so it is with poetry - I do like poetry in...
  July 30th, 2017 03:21
• Procrastination (FredPeyer) My oldest son says \'Procrastination is a virtue - if you leave it long...
  July 30th, 2017 00:09
• LATE JULY (Michael Edwards) You were quick Fred - just added a few words which you might ave missed -...
  July 30th, 2017 00:05
• My grandson and his dog... (P.H.Rose) You could have written this for me - my little grandson aged 5 was with us...
  July 29th, 2017 15:24
• Fear (FredPeyer) The scourge of fear so well described in this gem.
  July 29th, 2017 12:32
• Ridiculous Renditions. (Kevin browne) A great work as always Kevin but a tad daunting to read. Hope you don\'t...
  July 29th, 2017 12:27
• Night-Stained. (Fay Slimm.) A masterful work - some really first class similes and metaphors used to...
  July 29th, 2017 12:18
• L A B O R A T O R I E S ~ A Blank Verse Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA) Well plenty of reason here - congrats on giving the lab a thumbs up - so...
  July 29th, 2017 12:16
• Over the Hills and Far Away. (Goldfinch60) Great fun poem but have to admit I\'m not averse to a bit of BP screeching...
  July 29th, 2017 02:24
• LETTERS TO MY UNIVERSE (Kaychee) What a simple yet effective work - love it.
  July 29th, 2017 01:19
• foolish heart (Heather T) I\'ve only just read this and, as a man, I feel betrayed. Everything I...
  July 28th, 2017 22:57
• My MPS friends (Christina8) Yes I missed you too - great to see the Lilac bloom again and look forward...
  July 28th, 2017 12:00
• FINAL CURTAIN (Louis Gibbs) Beautiful rounded piece - great work.
  July 28th, 2017 11:53
• MY LIFE ~ GOD\'S TAPESTRY (BRIAN & ANGELA) Great write B
  July 28th, 2017 11:48
• A Days first kiss..... (P.H.Rose) This has geat meaning_- I\'ve a great marriage and we are still after...
  July 28th, 2017 11:47
• Kaleidoscope (FredPeyer) One eye at one end - the future through the other - great Fred.
  July 28th, 2017 11:44
• Orange Memory. (Goldfinch60) Super - with my Dad it\'s the Hydrangea so this poem means something to me
  July 28th, 2017 02:31
• Finally Go To Sleep. (Kevin browne) Such a well composed write with some great lines.
  July 27th, 2017 08:35
• S O I L S P O L L U T I O N ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Great message punched home.
  July 27th, 2017 08:34
• Uncivilized. (Fay Slimm.) Beautifully worded scene - I can see it my minds eye even without the...
  July 27th, 2017 08:33
• Shredded Life. (Goldfinch60) The shredder - sad but satisfying - good read.
  July 27th, 2017 01:55
• The next door (Aa Harvey) Love the optimism of this - great read.
  July 27th, 2017 00:47
• Bondage (Malubotelho) More like 50 shades of red - such a powerful write - great passion.
  July 26th, 2017 12:53
• ANOTHER DAY (Michael Edwards) Been out and fell asleep on return so apologies for not responding to you...
  July 26th, 2017 10:51
• DREAM THEATER (Louis Gibbs) Just woken from a quick snooze so know it well - super piece of work.
  July 26th, 2017 10:49
• sooner or later (Willyweed) I would just love to meet up - whenever is the question. Bril stuff WW
  July 26th, 2017 10:48
• Making Sense. (Fay Slimm.) Great work Fay
  July 26th, 2017 10:45
• Another Glass of Whiskey (FredPeyer) This just trips off the tongue in a style that anyone can follow and as...
  July 26th, 2017 10:42
• F A B R I C S ~ An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA) Great bit of composition - as always -
  July 26th, 2017 10:39