Comments on community poems by Michael Edwards
- MY VALLEY ~ A 4442 Rhyming Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Another clever write - and a good reminder - thanks for posting Brian.
August 1st, 2017 02:49 - The Outing (WriteBeLight)
Good poem that again highlights this internet predator - I feel so let...
July 31st, 2017 14:34 - five candles (Heather T)
An inspired piece of writing.
July 31st, 2017 14:30 - POISON FRUIT (Louis Gibbs)
It\'s scary - in a way I\'m grateful I belong to my current generation.
July 31st, 2017 10:23 - Secret Place (FredPeyer)
Well I have a place like this but it\'s not entirely secret - my wife...
July 31st, 2017 04:55 - Early Morning Troubles. (Goldfinch60)
Now this is so so true - I get totally carried away writing and my wife...
July 31st, 2017 02:05 - YOUNG MISTRESS ~ MEETS OLD MASTER ~ SENRYU (BRIAN & ANGELA)
So sorry to hear they both fell - nice one Brian - will write a haiku...
July 31st, 2017 02:01 - WORDS WRITTEN (Michael Edwards)
Does anyone here watch the Japanese channel NHK. They\'ve just had a great...
July 31st, 2017 00:45 - chant (Onepauly)
I fuggled with gingling this fortid written and found it to be quite umbly...
July 30th, 2017 23:34 - Maybe (Its Raskolnikov)
Even having read this I am still not sure whether you would class yourself...
July 30th, 2017 23:30 - mortal (Heather T)
So beautiful written with such a great meter to it - my kind of poem.
July 30th, 2017 14:12 - Afterglow (Fay Slimm.)
Beautifully descriptive
July 30th, 2017 08:43 - THE TRINITY ~ Four Tankas (5 7 5 7 7) (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I like this form - well worked Brian
July 30th, 2017 03:28 - Books? (Goldfinch60)
Super poem - so true - and so it is with poetry - I do like poetry in...
July 30th, 2017 03:21 - Procrastination (FredPeyer)
My oldest son says \'Procrastination is a virtue - if you leave it long...
July 30th, 2017 00:09 - LATE JULY (Michael Edwards)
You were quick Fred - just added a few words which you might ave missed -...
July 30th, 2017 00:05 - My grandson and his dog... (P.H.Rose)
You could have written this for me - my little grandson aged 5 was with us...
July 29th, 2017 15:24 - Fear (FredPeyer)
The scourge of fear so well described in this gem.
July 29th, 2017 12:32 - Ridiculous Renditions. (Kevin browne)
A great work as always Kevin but a tad daunting to read. Hope you don\'t...
July 29th, 2017 12:27 - Night-Stained. (Fay Slimm.)
A masterful work - some really first class similes and metaphors used to...
July 29th, 2017 12:18 - L A B O R A T O R I E S ~ A Blank Verse Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Well plenty of reason here - congrats on giving the lab a thumbs up - so...
July 29th, 2017 12:16 - Over the Hills and Far Away. (Goldfinch60)
Great fun poem but have to admit I\'m not averse to a bit of BP screeching...
July 29th, 2017 02:24 - LETTERS TO MY UNIVERSE (Kaychee)
What a simple yet effective work - love it.
July 29th, 2017 01:19 - foolish heart (Heather T)
I\'ve only just read this and, as a man, I feel betrayed. Everything I...
July 28th, 2017 22:57 - My MPS friends (Christina8)
Yes I missed you too - great to see the Lilac bloom again and look forward...
July 28th, 2017 12:00 - FINAL CURTAIN (Louis Gibbs)
Beautiful rounded piece - great work.
July 28th, 2017 11:53 - MY LIFE ~ GOD\'S TAPESTRY (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Great write B
July 28th, 2017 11:48 - A Days first kiss..... (P.H.Rose)
This has geat meaning_- I\'ve a great marriage and we are still after...
July 28th, 2017 11:47 - Kaleidoscope (FredPeyer)
One eye at one end - the future through the other - great Fred.
July 28th, 2017 11:44 - Orange Memory. (Goldfinch60)
Super - with my Dad it\'s the Hydrangea so this poem means something to me
July 28th, 2017 02:31 - Finally Go To Sleep. (Kevin browne)
Such a well composed write with some great lines.
July 27th, 2017 08:35 - S O I L S P O L L U T I O N ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Great message punched home.
July 27th, 2017 08:34 - Uncivilized. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautifully worded scene - I can see it my minds eye even without the...
July 27th, 2017 08:33 - Shredded Life. (Goldfinch60)
The shredder - sad but satisfying - good read.
July 27th, 2017 01:55 - The next door (Aa Harvey)
Love the optimism of this - great read.
July 27th, 2017 00:47 - Bondage (Malubotelho)
More like 50 shades of red - such a powerful write - great passion.
July 26th, 2017 12:53 - ANOTHER DAY (Michael Edwards)
Been out and fell asleep on return so apologies for not responding to you...
July 26th, 2017 10:51 - DREAM THEATER (Louis Gibbs)
Just woken from a quick snooze so know it well - super piece of work.
July 26th, 2017 10:49 - sooner or later (Willyweed)
I would just love to meet up - whenever is the question. Bril stuff WW
July 26th, 2017 10:48 - Making Sense. (Fay Slimm.)
Great work Fay
July 26th, 2017 10:45 - Another Glass of Whiskey (FredPeyer)
This just trips off the tongue in a style that anyone can follow and as...
July 26th, 2017 10:42 - F A B R I C S ~ An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Great bit of composition - as always -
July 26th, 2017 10:39 - Treasure the Moment. (Goldfinch60)
Never lose a moment make use of all the time you have - super piece of...
July 26th, 2017 10:38 - take me down the mountain (Willyweed)
Just rising here in the UK and the first thing I see is a posting by Sir...
July 25th, 2017 23:33 - The Artist (Its Raskolnikov)
So well crafted - a great work.
July 25th, 2017 15:09 - lamentation (Heather T)
This hits home - such a sad poem recording so well the grief within a...
July 25th, 2017 15:08 - Childhood shenanigans (Jooles)
Great write with a touch of the feel goods - really enjoyed it
July 25th, 2017 13:31 - River-Speak. (Fay Slimm.)
So evocative of the river - beautifully captured.
July 25th, 2017 06:49 - JAPAN ~ NEW FUSION ON HOLIDAYS ~ PLEASE CHECK ~ THANKS (BRIAN & ANGELA)
One of those countries still on the bucket list - hope to make it soon -...
July 25th, 2017 04:40 - Just around the Corner (FredPeyer)
I do like this - for me though I\'ve so much to live for and so much I...
July 25th, 2017 02:54 - Marriage to Eternity. (Goldfinch60)
Aah this so lovely and SO well written - the best gift they could wish
July 25th, 2017 02:51 - Diet starts Monday (Rubers76)
I know this so well. A meal without wine is like a day without sunshine...
July 25th, 2017 02:48 - Dimensional Queries. (Kevin browne)
Packed with thoughts in a great write - going back for another read as it...
July 25th, 2017 00:31 - I just wanted to fly (Malubotelho)
I see the wings being used here metaphorically in this great message -...
July 25th, 2017 00:27 - Great weather (Renzi)
Great fun piece R
July 24th, 2017 09:50 - Disconsolate Depths (Orchidee)
Another beauty O
July 24th, 2017 09:50 - ALEXIS (Louis Gibbs)
It makes us all feel so helpless in being unable to prevent it happening -...
July 24th, 2017 09:48 - OCEAN BLESSINGS ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Great reminder of our responsibilities for our environment - will we ever...
July 24th, 2017 07:49 - New Appetite. (Fay Slimm.)
And a super write it is
July 24th, 2017 07:46 - Reading Man. (Goldfinch60)
Sadly not many seem to \'get\' poetry - well I do and I love this piece of...
July 24th, 2017 03:20 - Coconuts (This is deep, real deep, probably as deep as you can get) (FredPeyer)
Great piece Fred. I have only just conquered the art of shelling a coconut...
July 24th, 2017 03:17 - Flames (Niallprideaux)
Ah yes - a monostich - not many posted and this is great.
July 24th, 2017 03:15 - Tranquility (Aa Harvey)
An inspired last line - as an artist I am quite envious that it\'s not...
July 24th, 2017 01:29 - Broke my promise (Renzi)
Always a pleasure to read your postings - written with great abandon and...
July 24th, 2017 00:01 - Nana (ShannonXx)
What a beautiful piece. Is it my imagination - is there a greater...
July 21st, 2017 12:44 - Truthtful Trustings (Orchidee)
One of the problems with writing in rhyme (for me at least) is that the...
July 21st, 2017 11:36 - THE CRIPPLED (Louis Gibbs)
So sorry to hear you\'ve been a bit down of late but to cheer you up: ...
July 21st, 2017 11:01 - Lois Bernadette (Poetic Dan)
Having had a couple of scares with my wifes health (one of which was truly...
July 21st, 2017 03:30 - Hypnotic. (Fay Slimm.)
Did this a while back with my grandson - great fun and a great write to go...
July 21st, 2017 03:16 - Seeing the Light. (Goldfinch60)
Super piece - simple to the point and something I am sure we can all...
July 21st, 2017 03:15 - Train to Nowhere (FredPeyer)
That\'s what makes life worth living - not knowing for sure but always in...
July 21st, 2017 03:13 - TEMPUS FUGIT ~ TIME FLIES ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Doesn\'t it just. I make sure I do something worthwhile every day....
July 21st, 2017 03:11 - Childish head (Malubotelho)
Love it - did you know that Dawn wanted to go out with Sunset but they...
July 20th, 2017 15:07 - Interdependence. (Fay Slimm.)
Great use of the language as always but having read it I feel I need to...
July 20th, 2017 06:44 - Leading the Way (FredPeyer)
However you interpret it its a great few lines Alfred
July 20th, 2017 03:48 - LADIES & THEIR PETS ! ~ Seven Micro Poems (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Great stuff Brian - gave me a big grin.-
July 20th, 2017 03:47 - Kestrel - Haiku. (Goldfinch60)
Great haiku Andy - how about working your way through Collins English...
July 20th, 2017 03:45 - A few four line verses - food for thought! (Sue.evans)
Great collection Sue.
July 19th, 2017 15:50 - Love entropy (Malubotelho)
Although full of very little its full of punch - full of admiration for...
July 19th, 2017 12:39 - A day orf?! (Orchidee)
Drove through Melton Mowbray yesterday - would have picked up a pork Pie...
July 19th, 2017 12:32 - DON\'T LOOK BACK (Louis Gibbs)
So simple, so effective. Often the hardest to write - I love it.
July 19th, 2017 08:23 - Wednesday\'s child (Renzi)
I was a Friday chick - cracked out of my shell at 5pm UK time - Love your...
July 19th, 2017 08:22 - Still Climbing. (Fay Slimm.)
the third stanza stands out for me despite its rather gruesome content -...
July 19th, 2017 02:50 - E U T H A N A S I A ~ An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
This is such a vexed question with divides among people of all religious...
July 19th, 2017 02:47 - Vanishing Fears. (Goldfinch60)
Do we know what questions to ask - good work G.
July 19th, 2017 02:44 - My younger years (Christina8)
Wouldn\'t mind being 62 again LoL but yes 22 was a good age - your poem...
July 19th, 2017 00:54 - song of the hollow house (Heather T)
Just magical - wonderful use of a great language.
July 18th, 2017 14:57 - Solution (Malubotelho)
More words in English than any other and still I often struggle for the...
July 18th, 2017 12:18 - I\'m Not Perfect (Tony36)
None of us are - great scribe Tony.
July 18th, 2017 12:15 - Littleness. (Fay Slimm.)
Just returned from a Japanese meditation garden - a superb garden in...
July 18th, 2017 12:03 - HAIKU IN HARMONY ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Great piece to advocate all that\'s good about music - my favourite...
July 18th, 2017 11:06 - Life\'s Aims. (Goldfinch60)
Great stuff and what does it matter if perfection is never obtained - its...
July 18th, 2017 11:03 - Children of War (FredPeyer)
Inspiring write - good for them - hope they keep playing.
July 18th, 2017 11:00 - We March (Its Raskolnikov)
Not something we have here in the UK but I recognise what a great activity...
July 18th, 2017 10:58 - Monster (Its Raskolnikov)
I am not usually a lover of poems about personal experiences (the woe is...
July 18th, 2017 00:11 - \'Mr Snail 🐌- what\'s the point?\' (Sue.evans)
A quirky take - just love it.
July 17th, 2017 14:51 - Crystallised Dreams (ShannonXx)
Heart warming - a lovely poem which evokes nostalgia.
July 17th, 2017 14:48 - TOUCHING HEAVEN (Louis Gibbs)
My admiration goes out to you raking on such a wonderful role = and a...
July 17th, 2017 10:47 - Monday Monday so good to me (Renzi)
you have a real sense of communication in your writings - keep up the good...
July 17th, 2017 10:38 - Goodbye (FredPeyer)
Now I took it that you received the letter and the poem is about its...
July 17th, 2017 10:33
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