Comments on community poems by Michael Edwards
- LIMERICK No 41 (Michael Edwards) 
Thanks m&m - mine have quite electric blue arms and the front is grey -...
August 18th, 2017 08:25 - BARCELONA ~ WE WEEP WITH YOU TODAY ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) 
Another terrible event and good on you for writing about it in a way only...
August 18th, 2017 06:59 - Losing You. (Fay Slimm.) 
AP is right - an inspirational piece. 
August 18th, 2017 06:57 - Reaching Nirvana. (Goldfinch60) 
Can you give me map references please - great write 
August 18th, 2017 02:30 - Expectations (FredPeyer) 
Came to an abrupt halt on this one wondering where the \'u\' in mould had...
August 18th, 2017 00:58 - Bongo Drum (Tony36) 
My release is sploshing paint - great poem. 
August 17th, 2017 13:53 - Crystal (Malubotelho) 
Brilliant - the poem not the crystal :) 
August 17th, 2017 09:51 - Haiku #2 (Simple-Man87) 
Top notch S-M.
August 17th, 2017 08:12 - IT BREAKS MY HEART (Louis Gibbs) 
Narrow mindedness, arrogance, self aggrandizement , name them all but my...
August 17th, 2017 08:10 - OPPORTUNITY (Lasergraph) 
Having been a shy retiring type (LoL) all my life I can empathise with...
August 17th, 2017 08:03 - I AM A MIDDLEMAN !  A Rhyming 662 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) 
And it was ever thus and ever will be - super stuff Brian
August 17th, 2017 06:18 - Show Me. (Fay Slimm.) 
Fay this is so good and different from your usual style of writing - I...
August 17th, 2017 06:13 - Ill (Nicholas Browning) 
I am more and more beginning to appreciate short works and rarely write...
August 17th, 2017 02:01 - Dancing with Shadows. (Goldfinch60) 
It just came and it\'s just great - I do like this Andy.
August 17th, 2017 01:58 - no means no (AAA) 
Simple succinct and to the point - that\'s what makes this a great work -...
August 17th, 2017 00:38 - Tinnitus (FredPeyer) 
A great write about a lousy condition - nice one Fred
August 17th, 2017 00:37 - To Share With You My Love (Tony36) 
Super write - yes sharing is the key to happiness.
August 16th, 2017 14:08 - counting sighs (Heather T) 
So sorry to hear this - and such a haunting write and must concur with...
August 16th, 2017 14:06 - Follow Your Dreams (Alf W) 
A poem that makes you think and question. Good work.
August 16th, 2017 11:05 - Blue notes  (WL Schuett) 
The whole scene is in my mind - a great write.
August 16th, 2017 11:03 -    THE OLD MAN (Lasergraph) 
Very emotive - great read Lasergraft
August 16th, 2017 10:53 - Rising tides (Malubotelho) 
The door left open with questions like all great writes - love it M
August 16th, 2017 10:52 - DEAFENING SILENCE (Louis Gibbs) 
A great piece Louis
August 16th, 2017 10:50 - Finally, Less Stress (Edward Charles McDevitt) 
A really touching work.
August 16th, 2017 10:48 - Changeling. (Fay Slimm.) 
A1 use of the language yet again Fay.
August 16th, 2017 10:44 - Farting Around (WriteBeLight) 
Do you recall the video by Queen where he\'s vacuuming - whenever I see it...
August 16th, 2017 10:41 - CARIBBEAN MAMMY  ~  A Blank Verse Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) 
Ah - it\'s touching - good un Brian.
August 16th, 2017 10:32 - Quiet City. (Goldfinch60) 
If music be the food of poetry write on  - and so it is with me - great...
August 16th, 2017 10:30 - Itinerary (WriteBeLight) 
Love the adventure BUT not the cold weather\'s return - nice one WBL
August 15th, 2017 13:17 - Kingly Kindlings (Orchidee) 
Was actually singing it to the tune as I read this one - but as I am a bit...
August 15th, 2017 09:45 - Favourable Fare (Orchidee) 
Another skilled write O
August 15th, 2017 08:47 -  () 
The answer\'s easy - the one on the left - and another great poem . 
August 15th, 2017 08:38 - THE ENDING - A BEDTIME STORY (Louis Gibbs) 
Sweet dreams indeed - a terrifying thought - great poem though.
August 15th, 2017 07:56 - Ancient whispers (WL Schuett) 
Just found it and have to agree it is a great combination. Just love your...
August 15th, 2017 07:38 - ANARCHY IN VIRGINIA ~ A Wordless Poem (BRIAN & ANGELA) 
I am fully with you and your poem puts it across so well Brian.
August 15th, 2017 06:18 - First Love (FredPeyer) 
Oh those early days - memories flood back - super write Fred
August 15th, 2017 06:17 - Do You Take Sugar? (Goldfinch60) 
Oh this made my heart drop a beat - so so sad - be assured my thoughts are...
August 15th, 2017 01:29 - The Shackles  (Hannah.Almatarneh) 
Congrats Hannah - a great piece of writing.
August 14th, 2017 23:48 - Little Sister (CSS20013) 
You are a wonderful young lady - cherish your sister always and help keep...
August 14th, 2017 23:39 - River Music Haunts Me  (WL Schuett) 
Really enjoyed this - a great piece of writing and is that your painting?...
August 14th, 2017 23:35 - it\'s nothing personal.  (Ruth Fadairo) 
This is such a simply stated accessible piece which gets the message...
August 14th, 2017 11:28 - CRAYON ON THE WALL  (Lasergraph) 
I can certainly relate except that now I find myself increasingly asking...
August 14th, 2017 09:08 - Clocks and Calendars (WriteBeLight) 
Great thought and a great write - I think it may have inspired a limerick...
August 14th, 2017 08:08 - THE CYCLE REPLAYED (Louis Gibbs) 
I always love Outbacks comments - anyway back to your post - super short...
August 14th, 2017 08:02 - Intake. (Fay Slimm.) 
Great write Fay
August 14th, 2017 05:47 - Addict (Crazycatlady) 
oh only just found this - a different take that is so well expressed - I...
August 14th, 2017 03:01 - fractured picture (Stefan badham) 
Simply written in such a superb style - a great piece of writing.
August 14th, 2017 03:00 - Time to Leave (FredPeyer) 
This sad story is so often repeated - I never can understand how men (and...
August 14th, 2017 02:56 - I\'M A CARIBBEAN PIRATE ~ ENJOY ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) 
Funloads - great write - great read. 
August 14th, 2017 02:49 - Memories (Anthony R Chancellor) 
I like this very much - simple piece so well composed - great write
August 14th, 2017 01:51 - Test of Faith? (Goldfinch60) 
Great ending quite unexpected - super stuff Andy.
August 14th, 2017 01:49 - Waiting Is End (Myself and me) 
Yup - option 2 for me - a delightful write .
August 14th, 2017 00:38 - The Hidden Harbour (Alf W) 
As I read it I was there - so descriptive and it tells a great story as a...
August 14th, 2017 00:22 - red clay baptism (Heather T) 
Loved the footage and loved the poem - in awe of the size of the farm .
August 13th, 2017 14:38 - Simplicity Sentiments (Orchidee) 
A true wordsmith - keep \'em coming O 
August 13th, 2017 10:58 - Camila (Septolet Poem) (Rrodriguez) 
I just knew it is Septolet Sunday - she\'s gorgeous and a super poem to...
August 13th, 2017 10:57 - Redefining. (Fay Slimm.) 
I\'ve just written one which goes hand in glove with this excellent write...
August 13th, 2017 10:52 - Check Yourself Out (Edward Charles McDevitt) 
Same here in the UK - hate them and won\'t use them - love the poem but...
August 13th, 2017 06:04 - Katrina dials 911 (Bibbeck) 
Yes imaginative and a good write at that - enjoyed it Bibbeck.
August 13th, 2017 04:51 - PRAISE THE LORD  ~  A  4 4 4 2   Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) 
Another gem Brian - I have just written a poem at 552 which works well...
August 13th, 2017 04:47 - I watched (Mel Marz) 
Beautiful write - a pleasure to read. 
August 13th, 2017 02:41 - New Generations. (Goldfinch60) 
Not as tall as you Andy - I was 6ft but I\'ve lost a bit in older age and...
August 13th, 2017 01:31 - Dandelion Seeds (FredPeyer) 
The stately dandelion - I love them they bring such colour and vitality -...
August 13th, 2017 01:03 - I\'m your girl (Malubotelho) 
Warm, sensuous, and she\'s here with me now - I wish !!!   Love this Malu...
August 13th, 2017 00:21 - A Mirror (Kurt Philip Behm) 
Sad piece of writing so well expressed - even though, like Fred, in my...
August 13th, 2017 00:17 - Goodnight (Ethan) 
Super write Ethan - its great to see so many different forms being posted...
August 13th, 2017 00:13 -  () 
Just great - yes I see you did manage one and what a result - did you find...
August 13th, 2017 00:08 - Parched Lips (Gary Edward Geraci) 
Coupled with your comments this is a most moving poem. My own wife comes...
August 12th, 2017 16:02 - Living (FredPeyer) 
Fred - I can\'t really add anything to the praises expressed above which...
August 12th, 2017 13:29 - So Full Of Dreams (Alf W) 
A picture painted with words - thanks for posting Alf.
August 12th, 2017 12:15 - Let Go Your Ego (WriteBeLight) 
Thanks for the poem  WBL .  They\'ve got a name for people who suffer from...
August 12th, 2017 08:24 - CARIBBEAN GIRL ~ A Blank Verse Sonnet  (BRIAN & ANGELA) 
Feedback positive - more please Brian.
August 12th, 2017 04:28 - Enticing. (Fay Slimm.) 
In fact lots of lovely lines - love nights shawl and the idea of day\'s...
August 12th, 2017 04:26 - Music - FIBS. (Goldfinch60) 
Having seen some of your past postings in this form I tried my hand at it...
August 12th, 2017 01:39 -  () 
But you\'ve made it look so easy - love them both - keep writing
August 12th, 2017 00:12 - Flakes (Whisperingquill) 
Strong piece - a big tick from me.
August 11th, 2017 23:25 - Jack the little yellow Dinosaur (FredPeyer) 
Such a great fun read - nice one Frank.
August 11th, 2017 21:28 - Love still (Malubotelho) 
A beautiful write with a great last line
August 11th, 2017 21:27 - A Load O\' Rubbish! (Orchidee) 
Sherrified pissifications methinks - but a load of fun.
August 11th, 2017 14:36 - A day in the Snow (Lizzy Renee) 
Superb, unpretentious,  love the language and such a good read. 
August 11th, 2017 14:34 - Crispy Wing Things (WriteBeLight) 
Great fun write even without a \'u\' in flavour - we love them this side...
August 11th, 2017 14:32 - IMAGINE (Louis Gibbs) 
The masks are the same - the difference lies behind them - I am now...
August 11th, 2017 14:30 - Interference. (Fay Slimm.) 
I can see them in my mind\'s eye - great write fay
August 11th, 2017 14:25 - CITY GIRLS ~ SIX SIZZLING SENRYU (BRIAN & ANGELA) 
I love \'em all - what about Market Harborough girls? 
August 11th, 2017 14:23 - Death of a King (Nicholas Browning) 
Read it and thoroughly enjoyed the language. As for the message I  need to...
August 11th, 2017 03:10 - Jupiter Farms (Malubotelho) 
Great write m
August 11th, 2017 01:51 - Rioja - Acrostic. (Goldfinch60) 
A great one G - love red wine but have been keeping away from it for a few...
August 11th, 2017 01:38 - Hope (FredPeyer) 
Great to see you back BUT there\'s always hope - without it what is the...
August 11th, 2017 00:30 - The Melding (E.J. Waling) 
Super write and so thought provoking
August 10th, 2017 15:53 -  () 
Brilliant - I\'ve just written a few lanturnes - will post one in the...
August 10th, 2017 13:42 -  A New Beginning (Shahla Latifi) 
A superbly expressive work 
August 10th, 2017 11:27 - Waning Will (WriteBeLight) 
nice one WBL
August 10th, 2017 10:22 - Life (Edward Charles McDevitt) 
So insightful - some poem.
August 10th, 2017 10:14 - Abundance. (Fay Slimm.) 
A great homage to a great Month.
August 10th, 2017 06:40 - My Time. (Goldfinch60) 
Magic Moments - magic write.
August 10th, 2017 06:39 - SOPA MINESTRONE ~ PER FAVORE ~ ITALIAN SONNET ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) 
Just come in from doing a painting demo and starving - this has made it...
August 10th, 2017 06:37 - \"Emergency\" (Edward Charles McDevitt) 
My dear mum passed away a few years back now and I still miss her so so...
August 9th, 2017 11:19 - Thoughts (Malubotelho) 
Love them - so pleased to see you have a go and such excellent one liners...
August 9th, 2017 11:16 - Terrible Trustings (Orchidee) 
I am still in awe as to how you manage to write a prolific stream of these...
August 9th, 2017 11:14 - Dream Lunch (WriteBeLight) 
I also do the lottery in a syndicate at the Hospital where I used to work...
August 9th, 2017 11:12 
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