Comments on community poems by Michael Edwards
- Redefining. (Fay Slimm.)
I\'ve just written one which goes hand in glove with this excellent write...
August 13th, 2017 10:52 - Check Yourself Out (Edward Charles McDevitt)
Same here in the UK - hate them and won\'t use them - love the poem but...
August 13th, 2017 06:04 - Katrina dials 911 (Bibbeck)
Yes imaginative and a good write at that - enjoyed it Bibbeck.
August 13th, 2017 04:51 - My poetic Side (Accidental Poet)
I have to agree this is an excellent site but would welcome a forum where...
August 13th, 2017 04:50 - PRAISE THE LORD ~ A 4 4 4 2 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Another gem Brian - I have just written a poem at 552 which works well...
August 13th, 2017 04:47 - I watched (Mel Marz)
Beautiful write - a pleasure to read.
August 13th, 2017 02:41 - New Generations. (Goldfinch60)
Not as tall as you Andy - I was 6ft but I\'ve lost a bit in older age and...
August 13th, 2017 01:31 - Dandelion Seeds (FredPeyer)
The stately dandelion - I love them they bring such colour and vitality -...
August 13th, 2017 01:03 - I\'m your girl (Malubotelho)
Warm, sensuous, and she\'s here with me now - I wish !!! Love this Malu...
August 13th, 2017 00:21 - A Mirror (Kurt Philip Behm)
Sad piece of writing so well expressed - even though, like Fred, in my...
August 13th, 2017 00:17 - Goodnight (Ethan)
Super write Ethan - its great to see so many different forms being posted...
August 13th, 2017 00:13 - ()
Just great - yes I see you did manage one and what a result - did you find...
August 13th, 2017 00:08 - Parched Lips (Gary Edward Geraci)
Coupled with your comments this is a most moving poem. My own wife comes...
August 12th, 2017 16:02 - Living (FredPeyer)
Fred - I can\'t really add anything to the praises expressed above which...
August 12th, 2017 13:29 - So Full Of Dreams (Alf W)
A picture painted with words - thanks for posting Alf.
August 12th, 2017 12:15 - Let Go Your Ego (WriteBeLight)
Thanks for the poem WBL . They\'ve got a name for people who suffer from...
August 12th, 2017 08:24 - CARIBBEAN GIRL ~ A Blank Verse Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Feedback positive - more please Brian.
August 12th, 2017 04:28 - Enticing. (Fay Slimm.)
In fact lots of lovely lines - love nights shawl and the idea of day\'s...
August 12th, 2017 04:26 - Music - FIBS. (Goldfinch60)
Having seen some of your past postings in this form I tried my hand at it...
August 12th, 2017 01:39 - ()
But you\'ve made it look so easy - love them both - keep writing
August 12th, 2017 00:12 - Flakes (Whisperingquill)
Strong piece - a big tick from me.
August 11th, 2017 23:25 - Jack the little yellow Dinosaur (FredPeyer)
Such a great fun read - nice one Frank.
August 11th, 2017 21:28 - Love still (Malubotelho)
A beautiful write with a great last line
August 11th, 2017 21:27 - A Load O\' Rubbish! (Orchidee)
Sherrified pissifications methinks - but a load of fun.
August 11th, 2017 14:36 - A day in the Snow (Lizzy Renee)
Superb, unpretentious, love the language and such a good read.
August 11th, 2017 14:34 - Crispy Wing Things (WriteBeLight)
Great fun write even without a \'u\' in flavour - we love them this side...
August 11th, 2017 14:32 - IMAGINE (Louis Gibbs)
The masks are the same - the difference lies behind them - I am now...
August 11th, 2017 14:30 - Interference. (Fay Slimm.)
I can see them in my mind\'s eye - great write fay
August 11th, 2017 14:25 - CITY GIRLS ~ SIX SIZZLING SENRYU (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I love \'em all - what about Market Harborough girls?
August 11th, 2017 14:23 - Death of a King (Nicholas Browning)
Read it and thoroughly enjoyed the language. As for the message I need to...
August 11th, 2017 03:10 - Jupiter Farms (Malubotelho)
Great write m
August 11th, 2017 01:51 - Rioja - Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
A great one G - love red wine but have been keeping away from it for a few...
August 11th, 2017 01:38 - Hope (FredPeyer)
Great to see you back BUT there\'s always hope - without it what is the...
August 11th, 2017 00:30 - The Melding (John Prophet)
Super write and so thought provoking
August 10th, 2017 15:53 - ()
Brilliant - I\'ve just written a few lanturnes - will post one in the...
August 10th, 2017 13:42 - A New Beginning (Shahla Latifi)
A superbly expressive work
August 10th, 2017 11:27 - Waning Will (WriteBeLight)
nice one WBL
August 10th, 2017 10:22 - Life (Edward Charles McDevitt)
So insightful - some poem.
August 10th, 2017 10:14 - Abundance. (Fay Slimm.)
A great homage to a great Month.
August 10th, 2017 06:40 - My Time. (Goldfinch60)
Magic Moments - magic write.
August 10th, 2017 06:39 - SOPA MINESTRONE ~ PER FAVORE ~ ITALIAN SONNET ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Just come in from doing a painting demo and starving - this has made it...
August 10th, 2017 06:37 - \"Emergency\" (Edward Charles McDevitt)
My dear mum passed away a few years back now and I still miss her so so...
August 9th, 2017 11:19 - Thoughts (Malubotelho)
Love them - so pleased to see you have a go and such excellent one liners...
August 9th, 2017 11:16 - Terrible Trustings (Orchidee)
I am still in awe as to how you manage to write a prolific stream of these...
August 9th, 2017 11:14 - Dream Lunch (WriteBeLight)
I also do the lottery in a syndicate at the Hospital where I used to work...
August 9th, 2017 11:12 - IN SPITE OF (Louis Gibbs)
Written with feeling and passion - great write Louis
August 9th, 2017 06:30 - I\'m strong (Angel-baby28)
Good for you - an enjoyable read - cry when you need to - I do and I\'m a...
August 8th, 2017 21:58 - A Poet (Tony36)
Yes - a great structure Tony
August 8th, 2017 13:18 - Blue paradise (Malubotelho)
Just delightful - read it aloud - err quietly or the family would think...
August 8th, 2017 13:12 - Deliverance Desirings (Orchidee)
blust, brust, bused, bussed, bust, crust, cussed, dust, fussed, fust,...
August 8th, 2017 13:09 - It\'s Not All About Me (Edward Charles McDevitt)
A gentle thank you from a gentleman - nice work Edward
August 8th, 2017 07:30 - Dreamers (Michael Edwards)
Thanks everyone for all your kind words - so much appreciated
August 8th, 2017 05:13 - So Much. (Fay Slimm.)
Indeed there is so much beauty around us - well reflected in this poem of...
August 8th, 2017 05:12 - LOVE ~ AN ELUSIVE DREAM ? A Rhyming Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Great structure as always Brian - works so well.
August 8th, 2017 05:10 - The Glass Shadow (Brycycle)
Never apologise for the short ones - sometimes I think the short ones are...
August 8th, 2017 04:04 - Man in Orange. (Goldfinch60)
Intriguing write and great to hear the Ying Tong Song again - what do our...
August 8th, 2017 02:07 - It\'s Monday (WriteBeLight)
You never cease to give us a smile - thanks WBL
August 7th, 2017 09:15 - Things didn\'t work out (ShannonXx)
Beautifully expressed.
August 7th, 2017 09:13 - OUR LIFE\'S MELODY (Louis Gibbs)
Dance? Me? I can\'t even clap in time with music. Another little beauty...
August 7th, 2017 06:37 - Hats Off. (Fay Slimm.)
This is such a god read and so well written as is your wont - congrats
August 7th, 2017 04:18 - THALASSOPHILES ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Only wish I was closer but live
slam donk in the middle of the country -...
August 7th, 2017 04:04 - A FEW COUPLETS (3) (Michael Edwards)
August 7th, 2017 02:18 - Harmony in Our Minds - Scionating. (Goldfinch60)
Thanks for putting this on the site - feel flattered that you should use...
August 7th, 2017 02:09 - Double enjoyment (Poetic Dan)
Great in its simplicity PD
August 7th, 2017 01:04 - Who Needs Weeds? (WriteBeLight)
Ahh - I fell a tad sorry for the weeds - after all they are only plants...
August 6th, 2017 14:20 - Last Flight (FredPeyer)
Nice one and actually we will miss you but needs must.
August 6th, 2017 07:15 - PEACE & JUSTICE ~ SONNET FOR SUNDAY (BRIAN & ANGELA)
May all those who have a God be touched by Him
August 6th, 2017 02:29 - Sitting at Heavens Door. (Goldfinch60)
Your poem sounds like an ideal piece of heaven - must get more into jazz -...
August 6th, 2017 02:26 - I want to run to you.... (Rrodriguez)
Yes I like this too - simple message so eloquently expressed.
August 6th, 2017 00:34 - Healing Helps (Orchidee)
Great O - I could even hear the music as I read it.
August 5th, 2017 12:51 - I Wonder Why (Edward Charles McDevitt)
This is a fine posting but to answer the question: if you simply post and...
August 5th, 2017 12:47 - Venezuela: Land of Grace (Rrodriguez)
Sadly I know little of Venezuela and nothing of their National Anthem but...
August 5th, 2017 12:38 - All Washed Up (WriteBeLight)
A lifting write - I also use them for painting (art type painting that is...
August 5th, 2017 10:18 - As she desired (Malubotelho)
Lovely uplifting write - enjoyed it very much. Peace rose?
August 5th, 2017 10:16 - TRISTAN & ISOLDE ~ A Tragic Love Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Like he choice of painting - our chemist is out of love potion at the...
August 5th, 2017 08:00 - Too Long. (Fay Slimm.)
Had to come in from the garden - guess what - it was raining. Great poem.
August 5th, 2017 07:46 - Never (FredPeyer)
Sometimes, me included, folk can get too wrapt up in our own interests...
August 5th, 2017 06:15 - Cleansing Rain. (Goldfinch60)
Super stuff and I love the picture - might even copy the idea in acrylic...
August 5th, 2017 01:48 - Look Both Ways (WriteBeLight)
They can be so dangerous - when we reach a crossing we need time to...
August 4th, 2017 11:41 - Incubating (Malubotelho)
Quite a little special and love the last few words which serve the poem so...
August 4th, 2017 11:39 - Her (Tony36)
Thank goodness I didn\'t turn away my gal - still married and so blessed...
August 4th, 2017 11:38 - GRANDFATHERS (Louis Gibbs)
A case of ditto - my paternal grandfather was also quiet but he had a lot...
August 4th, 2017 08:23 - Not A Doubt. (Fay Slimm.)
A super work as always. I not usually a great fan of pre-Raphaelite but...
August 4th, 2017 05:36 - The Undarkened House. (Goldfinch60)
Don\'t like dark mornings when it gets late late. Do like this though - I...
August 4th, 2017 02:59 - SIX TO TEN ~ NUMBERS GAME II ~ TANKAS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I can relate with these great bit of writing Brian
August 4th, 2017 02:55 - Tropical Rain (FredPeyer)
Kat is spot on (if you\'ll excuse the pun) - this is such a good poem love...
August 4th, 2017 00:55 - A Letter Left Unopened (Thewildfire)
I have been so lucky - I had a wonderful mother who I miss so much and...
August 3rd, 2017 23:27 - Twenty four of darkness.... (P.H.Rose)
Some experience and bravo for seeing it through (no pun intended) - great...
August 3rd, 2017 14:18 - A Hat For That (WriteBeLight)
Don\'t wear a hat
never worn a hat
my hair is thick
I\'ve quite a...
August 3rd, 2017 14:16 - Cook (Tony36)
Nothing at all - we are always entertaining or being entertained - great...
August 3rd, 2017 14:11 - A Lady Standing By A Gate (Alf W)
I can\'t think which painting it could have been but as a member of the...
August 3rd, 2017 06:39 - Imagination (P.X. Vexxus)
Reads really well - enjoyed it.
August 3rd, 2017 04:54 - Cutting Free. (Fay Slimm.)
Good write Fay
August 3rd, 2017 04:52 - Class Reunion (FredPeyer)
Never been to one but I can imagine the strain on trying to communicate...
August 3rd, 2017 04:51 - NUMBERS GAME ~ FIVE RHYMING TANKAS (BRIAN & ANGELA)
They read well Brian - I find that they can be quite demanding since you...
August 3rd, 2017 04:46 - Walking in Space. (Goldfinch60)
I read it and I was there - great descriptive writing G
August 3rd, 2017 04:42 - Blowing Bubbles (Tony36)
And a fun poem Tony.
August 2nd, 2017 23:21 - My Small Silent Child (ShannonXx)
Sensitive yet powerful - great work.
August 2nd, 2017 23:19 - Dark moon arrives.... (P.H.Rose)
Some achievement - love it.
August 2nd, 2017 23:17 - Death (Malubotelho)
Great piece of work Malu
August 2nd, 2017 23:13
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