Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.

• When the Sea Fret Hit (Neville) This special sea-fog is prevalent here often but Nev you gave it a...
  September 7th, 2021 04:55
• THE SEVENTH FLOOR (PETERHARRISON) How tragic to lose any loved one to such an empty existence and you...
  September 7th, 2021 01:43
• Wryneck (Neville) Beautiful sheen on the bird I have never seen Nev - they can be spotted...
  September 6th, 2021 05:21
• Wasted Day - Almost. (Goldfinch60) Am one of those who love home-made bread and making those five loaves...
  September 5th, 2021 02:57
• Listen Through the Breeze (Neville) Am listening hard after reading this bit of familiar intrigue and thinking...
  September 5th, 2021 02:52
• The Stars are Jellyfish (Saxon Crow) Interesting questions put to the stars viewed from a window. Surely not so...
  September 5th, 2021 02:17
• hello (Dusk arising) Unexpected a meeting after so long can rouse romantic feelings and it...
  September 4th, 2021 15:57
• This is Not a Hake (Neville) And tis highly prized so I understand - never tasted European Hake...
  September 4th, 2021 05:42
• Look At The Moon (Goldfinch60) Oh my absolute favourite playing while I read your fine tribute to the...
  September 4th, 2021 03:23
• ‘Hell hath no fury like a…’ (Laura🌻) Thinking of you Laura - you describe so well the horror of hurricanes and...
  September 4th, 2021 03:20
• shudders (Dusk arising) Ah - - your pen caught the moment when a pebble that meant treasure to a...
  September 3rd, 2021 13:19
• I Do so Hope There are Saxophones in Heaven (Neville) So do I re.the title my friend - - the sax has mystical seduction - am...
  September 3rd, 2021 02:37
• Autumnal Leaves (Saxon Crow) Oh how I agree with these two lovely and very poetic lines.
  September 3rd, 2021 01:56
• Music Revelation. (Goldfinch60) The wonderful world of music is there for those who like your dear self...
  September 3rd, 2021 01:53
• Smaller Balls? (Goldfinch60) Ha ha - - thank you dear Andy for my first big smile of the day - - -...
  September 3rd, 2021 01:46
• Songs From a Room (Neville) men to all that Nev - -- LC \'s inspiration is really exceptional - -- I...
  September 2nd, 2021 10:03
• Called to War (Neville) Wars have ever made skies weep large tears - - these few lines of poetic...
  September 2nd, 2021 01:23
• Too Soon October (Lorna) A haunting number together with your shivery autumn lament makes a really...
  August 31st, 2021 14:04
• the lake of time (Dusk arising) A scene to read and ponder on my friend -- the final line was just a...
  August 31st, 2021 07:58
• To Be Continued Maybe (Neville) Well penned dear Nev. those long ago happenings in Brest. To be most...
  August 31st, 2021 05:08
• Within (Floreann) Loving the romance in this tender confession of abiding inner love -...
  August 30th, 2021 15:53
• a summer night (Dusk arising) Yes wonder is normal if we but stop and stare for a while at the glory of...
  August 30th, 2021 15:45
• August Garden (Lorna) You have caught the essence of this time of year with such poetic mastery...
  August 30th, 2021 15:41
• The Treatise of Love (Neville) Oooh - just image being in one tiny room for life - this woman was...
  August 30th, 2021 04:28
• Sufferings Sensed (Orchidee) A lifting thought in the end line for all those world over brought low by...
  August 29th, 2021 17:02
• Wanderlust (Lorna) A cry of appeal to another who cannot be on one place or situation for...
  August 29th, 2021 16:21
• shall we know peace (Dusk arising) Those two first lines did it for me with their question \"shall we know...
  August 29th, 2021 05:48
• A Permanent Embrace (Neville) Locked indeed those errant but happy lovers melded together in frozen...
  August 29th, 2021 04:29
• Please be Gentle (Saxon Crow) One of the tenderest encouragements to aid another get going again - I...
  August 29th, 2021 03:23
• An Old Promise Well Kept (Neville) The scene as always implacably penned clearly has a wise message hid in...
  August 28th, 2021 05:32
• HELPER SKELTER (Joe Marcello) wow - good advice Joe - great point to bring over when tested beyond...
  August 28th, 2021 04:49
• She Calls Them Tears (Neville) You have mastered the art of written inference so blinkin\' well Nev. - ...
  August 27th, 2021 02:26
• storm (Dusk arising) What a story - it gripped my attention all the way through and the end...
  August 26th, 2021 03:28
• That Ideal Place. (Goldfinch60) A wonderful dream Andy - if only enough dreamt of peace it could become...
  August 26th, 2021 01:56
• An Unexpected Chaos (Neville) Sublimely addictive he was methinks but maybe on finding chaos would she...
  August 25th, 2021 04:20
• Insanity (HannahElisabeth) You define love so well in this rant against insomnia Hannah - I like...
  August 25th, 2021 02:22
• THE WRITER. (The elder poet) Yes writers can present notions better than any other way as with pen...
  August 24th, 2021 13:34
• Perpetual Insanity (Coyote) Hats off and loud applause for this engaging tale of misled ancient and...
  August 24th, 2021 13:31
• When Nothing is a Sound Too Loud (Neville) A super three liner again Nev. The voice of inner conscience can ring the...
  August 24th, 2021 09:54
• WANTING. (The elder poet) A tender and beautiful piece of gentle reflection on how love feels with a...
  August 23rd, 2021 15:15
• The Fullest of Moons (Neville) Strong imagery which tells such an intriguing tale Nev. -- your pen sees...
  August 23rd, 2021 04:42
• The Within (Flyingfish) Yes life is so full of mystery and you pen well the questions that spring...
  August 23rd, 2021 01:34
• LETTERS FROM THE HEART (The elder poet) How true that at times our dreams bring back past loves and your verse...
  August 22nd, 2021 21:11
• nightime blue (Dusk arising) Filled with a pathos the words strike home as familiar to those who like...
  August 22nd, 2021 12:38
• A Very Personal Holocaust (Neville) Personal indeed this lament at grossly cruel inhumanity suffered by...
  August 22nd, 2021 11:30
• Because of Her (Saxon Crow) Oh Sax - so filled with emotional depth the read left me near tears - -...
  August 21st, 2021 08:25
• Nostradamus (Doggerel Dave) The pessimist tendency can be hard to the optimist who looks at life with...
  August 21st, 2021 06:21
• Limerence (Neville) And that\'s obsessive infatuation to an absolute tee Nev - - choosing...
  August 21st, 2021 03:47
• Untitled #2 (Neville) There comes a time when either gender is tested too much my friend - I...
  August 20th, 2021 08:00
• PASSION AND THE WINE. (The elder poet) You catch those passionate moments so well with each stanza beautifully...
  August 19th, 2021 16:00
• River of Love (Freni Karaluthara) What an apt image you penned in this charming verse for the flow of love...
  August 19th, 2021 15:52
• The Angle of Her Lay (Neville) A romantically intimate moment to sigh for and versed to perfection by...
  August 19th, 2021 09:34
• Nothing but love (Job Welime) Hi Job and welcome to M.P.S. I am delighted to have caught your ...
  August 19th, 2021 02:33
• Nonsense to Help Me Sleep (Coyote) Hi from me Coyote your rhythm came through well - what a flowing piece of...
  August 17th, 2021 15:48
• Elusive Blues (Neville) Evocative and fizzing with intimate moments of search and find. Who would...
  August 17th, 2021 04:09
• Sunday Shivers (Lorna) An hypnotic feel to this disclosure of what shivers a Sunday can deliver...
  August 16th, 2021 08:35
• Thanks to Covid (Neville) Smiling real big at this bit of tongue-in-cheek Covid exposure - your wit...
  August 16th, 2021 04:29
• Live it: your way! (L. B. Mek) A truly amazing perspective on what we see in existence as each moment...
  August 16th, 2021 04:27
• Black Candles (Neville) Ah - that\'s what love often does to a sufferer - that is if samphire is...
  August 15th, 2021 06:23
• Ephemeral (Dove) Your composing around the results from just one word arouses such empathy...
  August 15th, 2021 01:21
• Stir Fry (Jerry Reynolds) From your quick stir-fry arises more food for thought for me Jerry on the...
  August 15th, 2021 01:06
• pulsing fluff (Dusk arising) A dream of a read that conjours all sorts of tender feelings - -= a...
  August 14th, 2021 07:01
• Storm (Doggerel Dave) Just been introduced to Tim via your link Dave and wow he is so good and...
  August 14th, 2021 05:45
• Covertly Covid (Neville) Covert is one of my favourite terms to describe Covid - how did you know...
  August 14th, 2021 03:41
• In the Beginning... (Coyote) I do not believe any account of Adam and Eve could make me laugh out...
  August 13th, 2021 12:48
• Last Call (Coyote) The sad tale gripped me tight from the first line my friend. A brilliant...
  August 13th, 2021 01:45
• Come and Nestle In My Soul (Freni Karaluthara) Speaking so tenderly to a small bird I can relate to as I often do it too...
  August 12th, 2021 12:41
• The Mahler effect (Classicmister) You chose my favourite Mahler piece John and how well your rhyme your take...
  August 12th, 2021 09:28
• Laughter All Around. (Goldfinch60) And you shared that love of laughter with us too - thank you Andy and...
  August 12th, 2021 07:39
• Brave (For Laura) (Lorna) Comforting words which will Laura will treasure and the number you chose...
  August 12th, 2021 05:27
• easy (Dusk arising) A mark of excellence for this fine and flowing example of walking life\'s...
  August 12th, 2021 05:03
• Time (Jerry Reynolds) Oh how true Jerry - to stand still stops time for a moment and lets us...
  August 11th, 2021 16:12
• Untitled - XLVIII (SureshG) Brilliant imagery I call it - I love the picture of jumping in puddles of...
  August 11th, 2021 16:10
• companion (Dusk arising) The power of the unseen shines through each line in your inspiring write...
  August 11th, 2021 15:58
• Eventus (Coyote) The flow and rhyming are first rate in this dark lament my friend - you...
  August 11th, 2021 15:46
• Perfectly Hued (Neville) Oh what a world that would be if sight became coloured with love for...
  August 11th, 2021 03:04
• Shadows (Lorna) ou share a familiar experience for many dear Lorna and you word it so...
  August 10th, 2021 16:04
• Upon a Time Once (Neville) A read to remember the whens and the hows of once upon such a time - - ...
  August 10th, 2021 03:59
• Marionette (Coyote) Loud applause for this perfectly rhymed and metred story of drama for a...
  August 9th, 2021 11:14
• Meadow of Time (Jerry Reynolds) What an honour to be part of the inspiration for this piece of charming...
  August 9th, 2021 11:10
• to dream as an innocent (Dusk arising) Ah - a bouquet of persuasive vocabulary to set any mind at rest - this...
  August 9th, 2021 11:07
• An Unfinished Summer (Neville) The feel of the 60\'s jumps out of these lines Nev. - ah yes - I...
  August 9th, 2021 05:50
• Dementia (Coyote) So sad these well rhymed set of words that is sure to affect minds and...
  August 8th, 2021 13:43
• It\'s a harsh world for a delicate flower (ChameleonNoLonger) Such inspiring thoughts on the strength of a flower and so very true.
  August 8th, 2021 09:21
• Calling Time (Neville) Wow and what a way to call closing on life that ends in easy-chaired...
  August 8th, 2021 05:24
• Record on Repeat (M.E.M.) A terrible time scribed here so clearly and giving the tension when...
  August 7th, 2021 11:29
• living in the past (Dusk arising) Music has magic to take us to times when youth was exciting Dusk - - I too...
  August 7th, 2021 11:24
• A soldier I see (Jennybee89) A wonderfully penned tribute and rhymed to perfection - thank you Jenny...
  August 7th, 2021 06:37
• Hope And Help (Orchidee) Hope genders help of the right sort if the right spirit is displayed. God...
  August 7th, 2021 05:15
• Upon the Arms of Favourite Chairs (Neville) Long-time relationships can get that way where comfort comes first -- but...
  August 7th, 2021 04:09
• More of natures lessons (Poetic Dan) A treat of a read Dan - - what could be better than to be in the moment...
  August 6th, 2021 15:43
• No Curtain Call (Saxon Crow) A thrilling drama about life and its lessons being played out and need...
  August 6th, 2021 15:38
• When You Find These Words (Neville) Good enough yes - but ignoring never - -- a plea that your readers will...
  August 6th, 2021 05:00
• Another Day (Jerry Reynolds) Love that lemonade sunrise Jerry - - a fantastic beginning to a perfect...
  August 5th, 2021 12:42
• beyond the silent doorbell (Dusk arising) A first rate penning of how wet affects us in summer when promised a dry...
  August 4th, 2021 07:37
• Ode to the moving clouds (Thekkinkkattil) How well constructed and interesting your personification of clouds dear...
  August 3rd, 2021 21:41
• Two Parts made One (Saxon Crow) Brilliant love poem Sax. -- must read this some more so into my faves...
  August 3rd, 2021 11:36
• Recovering From The Shock. (Goldfinch60) Ha - I smiled when I knew what these lines were leading to - - he waited...
  August 3rd, 2021 04:36
• Summer (Jerry Reynolds) Abandon - - yes how right that word to describe summer\'s arms - - a fine...
  August 2nd, 2021 15:59
• Psychosis (Coyote) A cry in the wilderness and so well written I almost heard that howl for...
  August 2nd, 2021 15:48