Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.

• TIMING (Jerry Reynolds) Being the last is bound to be best - Jerry your apt description proves ...
  September 25th, 2021 11:13
• The Tease (Neville) What a linguistic and valid complaint about one so enticingly false to the...
  September 25th, 2021 05:04
• Blathering On re Loss of Inspiration (Doggerel Dave) And after a read of this enjoyable rhyming a bard you certainly were and...
  September 25th, 2021 03:09
• Favourable Farewell (Orchidee) A comforting write Orchi.
  September 24th, 2021 10:47
• Nothing to Lose (Neville) That eventual awakening so very sensitively portrayed brought a smile to...
  September 24th, 2021 03:13
• DIBBLES AND DABBLES (6) (Michael Edwards) So good to see you posting again Michael - - I chuckled at your witty two...
  September 23rd, 2021 15:30
• La Traviata. (Goldfinch60) What a delight to see on screen that famous opera and then to have you...
  September 23rd, 2021 03:54
• weary n weak (Dusk arising) Your courage and determination blaze through these lines my friend -- with...
  September 23rd, 2021 03:10
• Autumnal Equinox (Laura🌻) Dear Laura - -- How near you appear with the image and wording as you sit...
  September 22nd, 2021 16:47
• First Day Of Autumn (Jerry Reynolds) Applause for this super rhyme on the change Autumn brings and what an...
  September 22nd, 2021 12:48
• Without Closure (Neville) The case of a missing lady-love and what skill in the telling when your...
  September 22nd, 2021 12:46
• Natures Gymnopodie. (Goldfinch60) Your verse oozes peace and what a number to relax with dear Andy
  September 22nd, 2021 03:31
• A Taste Well Shared (Neville) Leaving me near speechless the appeal of these scenes Nev where closeness...
  September 21st, 2021 05:10
• For Reference Purposes Only (Neville) Slowing reading and finding near-at-hand special shelves for these...
  September 20th, 2021 04:56
• Someone More Golden (Neville) Hope you are just wondering Nev. and not really experiencing the saddest...
  September 19th, 2021 04:52
• CONSTRUCT (Michael Edwards) So good to read your engaging words again Michael and view your impressive...
  September 19th, 2021 03:03
• Scarper  (Neville) Ha - Well at least it was mutual that quick scarper Nev. . Scalded by...
  September 18th, 2021 06:01
• it was easy (Dusk arising) Your words make those trips to watch tides spreading good fortune sound...
  September 17th, 2021 08:03
• Blighty (Neville) These potent words got to my heart the first time Nev and now after this...
  September 17th, 2021 05:22
• Shark Cloud. (Goldfinch60) yes clouds can have many faces that change with the breeze or wind - a...
  September 17th, 2021 03:37
• What you see is not all of me (Poetic Dan) Yes sometimes we have to \"let it be\" and give misery central stage for a...
  September 16th, 2021 12:44
• Question (Jerry Reynolds) yes Jerry - the question is answered by your last line - love knows...
  September 16th, 2021 12:29
• Yesterday, Tomorrow, Today. (Goldfinch60) How wise these lines on how to look at the three times and find they are...
  September 15th, 2021 15:06
• May I (Myself and me) Simply riveting these few loaded words. Into my list of faves goes this...
  September 11th, 2021 13:01
• Fablon (Neville) Ah - such clever imagery to get the point over Nev. Fablon makes the...
  September 11th, 2021 02:39
• Pursuing Peace (Orchidee) Much food for thought in this well written reminder on Pursuing Peace.
  September 10th, 2021 04:35
• Narcissist (Neville) Sometimes a strong message such as this commendable verse contains is...
  September 10th, 2021 04:19
• falling into autumn glory (Dusk arising) What an experience to hear romantic music while reading your tender and...
  September 10th, 2021 02:30
• maybe (Dusk arising) Only a poet could fancy those changes in to peaceful living my friend -...
  September 9th, 2021 07:38
• Their Lips Move. (Goldfinch60) Can feel your angst my dear friend - lies are what politics are all...
  September 8th, 2021 05:33
• O Aspiring Poet (Doggerel Dave) For thirty or forty five minutes this rant of a write matches my own...
  September 8th, 2021 04:55
• My Lotus and Me (Neville) Not being race-trained I ask did this Lotus have a tragic accident when a...
  September 8th, 2021 03:31
• Sea (Floreann) Amazingly colourful this seaside scene at Santa Cruz and your wonderful...
  September 7th, 2021 16:13
• Clouds of Destiny (Dove) Such an appealing read my friend - your imagery deserves applause....
  September 7th, 2021 15:29
• When the Sea Fret Hit (Neville) This special sea-fog is prevalent here often but Nev you gave it a...
  September 7th, 2021 04:55
• THE SEVENTH FLOOR (PETERHARRISON) How tragic to lose any loved one to such an empty existence and you...
  September 7th, 2021 01:43
• Wryneck (Neville) Beautiful sheen on the bird I have never seen Nev - they can be spotted...
  September 6th, 2021 05:21
• Wasted Day - Almost. (Goldfinch60) Am one of those who love home-made bread and making those five loaves...
  September 5th, 2021 02:57
• Listen Through the Breeze (Neville) Am listening hard after reading this bit of familiar intrigue and thinking...
  September 5th, 2021 02:52
• The Stars are Jellyfish (Saxon Crow) Interesting questions put to the stars viewed from a window. Surely not so...
  September 5th, 2021 02:17
• hello (Dusk arising) Unexpected a meeting after so long can rouse romantic feelings and it...
  September 4th, 2021 15:57
• This is Not a Hake (Neville) And tis highly prized so I understand - never tasted European Hake...
  September 4th, 2021 05:42
• Look At The Moon (Goldfinch60) Oh my absolute favourite playing while I read your fine tribute to the...
  September 4th, 2021 03:23
• ‘Hell hath no fury like a…’ (Laura🌻) Thinking of you Laura - you describe so well the horror of hurricanes and...
  September 4th, 2021 03:20
• shudders (Dusk arising) Ah - - your pen caught the moment when a pebble that meant treasure to a...
  September 3rd, 2021 13:19
• I Do so Hope There are Saxophones in Heaven (Neville) So do I re.the title my friend - - the sax has mystical seduction - am...
  September 3rd, 2021 02:37
• Autumnal Leaves (Saxon Crow) Oh how I agree with these two lovely and very poetic lines.
  September 3rd, 2021 01:56
• Music Revelation. (Goldfinch60) The wonderful world of music is there for those who like your dear self...
  September 3rd, 2021 01:53
• Smaller Balls? (Goldfinch60) Ha ha - - thank you dear Andy for my first big smile of the day - - -...
  September 3rd, 2021 01:46
• Songs From a Room (Neville) men to all that Nev - -- LC \'s inspiration is really exceptional - -- I...
  September 2nd, 2021 10:03
• Called to War (Neville) Wars have ever made skies weep large tears - - these few lines of poetic...
  September 2nd, 2021 01:23
• Too Soon October (Lorna) A haunting number together with your shivery autumn lament makes a really...
  August 31st, 2021 14:04
• the lake of time (Dusk arising) A scene to read and ponder on my friend -- the final line was just a...
  August 31st, 2021 07:58
• To Be Continued Maybe (Neville) Well penned dear Nev. those long ago happenings in Brest. To be most...
  August 31st, 2021 05:08
• Within (Floreann) Loving the romance in this tender confession of abiding inner love -...
  August 30th, 2021 15:53
• a summer night (Dusk arising) Yes wonder is normal if we but stop and stare for a while at the glory of...
  August 30th, 2021 15:45
• August Garden (Lorna) You have caught the essence of this time of year with such poetic mastery...
  August 30th, 2021 15:41
• The Treatise of Love (Neville) Oooh - just image being in one tiny room for life - this woman was...
  August 30th, 2021 04:28
• Sufferings Sensed (Orchidee) A lifting thought in the end line for all those world over brought low by...
  August 29th, 2021 17:02
• Wanderlust (Lorna) A cry of appeal to another who cannot be on one place or situation for...
  August 29th, 2021 16:21
• shall we know peace (Dusk arising) Those two first lines did it for me with their question \"shall we know...
  August 29th, 2021 05:48
• A Permanent Embrace (Neville) Locked indeed those errant but happy lovers melded together in frozen...
  August 29th, 2021 04:29
• Please be Gentle (Saxon Crow) One of the tenderest encouragements to aid another get going again - I...
  August 29th, 2021 03:23
• An Old Promise Well Kept (Neville) The scene as always implacably penned clearly has a wise message hid in...
  August 28th, 2021 05:32
• HELPER SKELTER (Joe Marcello) wow - good advice Joe - great point to bring over when tested beyond...
  August 28th, 2021 04:49
• She Calls Them Tears (Neville) You have mastered the art of written inference so blinkin\' well Nev. - ...
  August 27th, 2021 02:26
• storm (Dusk arising) What a story - it gripped my attention all the way through and the end...
  August 26th, 2021 03:28
• That Ideal Place. (Goldfinch60) A wonderful dream Andy - if only enough dreamt of peace it could become...
  August 26th, 2021 01:56
• An Unexpected Chaos (Neville) Sublimely addictive he was methinks but maybe on finding chaos would she...
  August 25th, 2021 04:20
• Insanity (HannahElisabeth) You define love so well in this rant against insomnia Hannah - I like...
  August 25th, 2021 02:22
• THE WRITER. (The elder poet) Yes writers can present notions better than any other way as with pen...
  August 24th, 2021 13:34
• Perpetual Insanity (Coyote) Hats off and loud applause for this engaging tale of misled ancient and...
  August 24th, 2021 13:31
• When Nothing is a Sound Too Loud (Neville) A super three liner again Nev. The voice of inner conscience can ring the...
  August 24th, 2021 09:54
• WANTING. (The elder poet) A tender and beautiful piece of gentle reflection on how love feels with a...
  August 23rd, 2021 15:15
• The Fullest of Moons (Neville) Strong imagery which tells such an intriguing tale Nev. -- your pen sees...
  August 23rd, 2021 04:42
• The Within (Flyingfish) Yes life is so full of mystery and you pen well the questions that spring...
  August 23rd, 2021 01:34
• LETTERS FROM THE HEART (The elder poet) How true that at times our dreams bring back past loves and your verse...
  August 22nd, 2021 21:11
• nightime blue (Dusk arising) Filled with a pathos the words strike home as familiar to those who like...
  August 22nd, 2021 12:38
• A Very Personal Holocaust (Neville) Personal indeed this lament at grossly cruel inhumanity suffered by...
  August 22nd, 2021 11:30
• Because of Her (Saxon Crow) Oh Sax - so filled with emotional depth the read left me near tears - -...
  August 21st, 2021 08:25
• Nostradamus (Doggerel Dave) The pessimist tendency can be hard to the optimist who looks at life with...
  August 21st, 2021 06:21
• Limerence (Neville) And that\'s obsessive infatuation to an absolute tee Nev - - choosing...
  August 21st, 2021 03:47
• Untitled #2 (Neville) There comes a time when either gender is tested too much my friend - I...
  August 20th, 2021 08:00
• PASSION AND THE WINE. (The elder poet) You catch those passionate moments so well with each stanza beautifully...
  August 19th, 2021 16:00
• River of Love (Freni Karaluthara) What an apt image you penned in this charming verse for the flow of love...
  August 19th, 2021 15:52
• The Angle of Her Lay (Neville) A romantically intimate moment to sigh for and versed to perfection by...
  August 19th, 2021 09:34
• Nothing but love (Job Welime) Hi Job and welcome to M.P.S. I am delighted to have caught your ...
  August 19th, 2021 02:33
• Nonsense to Help Me Sleep (Coyote) Hi from me Coyote your rhythm came through well - what a flowing piece of...
  August 17th, 2021 15:48
• Elusive Blues (Neville) Evocative and fizzing with intimate moments of search and find. Who would...
  August 17th, 2021 04:09
• Sunday Shivers (Lorna) An hypnotic feel to this disclosure of what shivers a Sunday can deliver...
  August 16th, 2021 08:35
• Thanks to Covid (Neville) Smiling real big at this bit of tongue-in-cheek Covid exposure - your wit...
  August 16th, 2021 04:29
• Live it: your way! (L. B. Mek) A truly amazing perspective on what we see in existence as each moment...
  August 16th, 2021 04:27
• Black Candles (Neville) Ah - that\'s what love often does to a sufferer - that is if samphire is...
  August 15th, 2021 06:23
• Ephemeral (Dove) Your composing around the results from just one word arouses such empathy...
  August 15th, 2021 01:21
• Stir Fry (Jerry Reynolds) From your quick stir-fry arises more food for thought for me Jerry on the...
  August 15th, 2021 01:06
• pulsing fluff (Dusk arising) A dream of a read that conjours all sorts of tender feelings - -= a...
  August 14th, 2021 07:01
• Storm (Doggerel Dave) Just been introduced to Tim via your link Dave and wow he is so good and...
  August 14th, 2021 05:45
• Covertly Covid (Neville) Covert is one of my favourite terms to describe Covid - how did you know...
  August 14th, 2021 03:41
• In the Beginning... (Coyote) I do not believe any account of Adam and Eve could make me laugh out...
  August 13th, 2021 12:48
• Last Call (Coyote) The sad tale gripped me tight from the first line my friend. A brilliant...
  August 13th, 2021 01:45