Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- Little Songbird (Kevin Michael Bloor)
A really engaging read and with such tender care for a little bird this...
March 28th, 2021 06:46 - Zadok The Priest. (Goldfinch60)
What better music to blend you together again with your precious one - - ...
March 27th, 2021 23:17 - Great Expectations (Doggerel Dave)
What a well-told tale about an unlengthy tail -- am still in a fit of...
March 27th, 2021 12:01 - A WHITE CAR NATION (Joe Marcello)
What an apt and surprising title to this four liner Joe - - I truly...
March 26th, 2021 16:43 - light of hope (Dusk arising)
A poignant array of seeming failures listed in this set of impressive...
March 26th, 2021 12:28 - Playing In Heavens Band. (Goldfinch60)
May your very treasured musical memories stay ever close to your playing ...
March 25th, 2021 03:42 - We are all more than enough (Poetic Dan)
\"To be authentic\" - yes and that \"inner child\" is important to...
March 25th, 2021 03:37 - Restoring Reinspirings (Orchidee)
Good flow to this reading my friend.
March 24th, 2021 08:29 - Truth n Courage (SureshG)
You capture it well Suresh and in just a few words.......... courage is...
March 24th, 2021 03:10 - Apple Blossoms (Ron parrish aka wordman)
Such a comforting and peaceful read Ron - -- a welcome time is Spring -...
March 23rd, 2021 03:22 - of Disparity (L. B. Mek)
A fine reminder and well expressed in your verse ;here L.B. - - we are...
March 22nd, 2021 16:56 - Miracle (FredPeyer)
Wholeheartedly agree with your stand on why we benefit from seeing...
March 21st, 2021 14:45 - Spring equinox arrived March 20th, 2021 at 5:37 AM (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
Applause for your tribute albeit worded with zesty exuberance to nature\'s...
March 21st, 2021 14:39 - Stepping Onto The Lawn. (Goldfinch60)
Your lines encourage us all to go stand still and view Nature at work dear...
March 21st, 2021 14:27 - PAST DREAMS (Michael Edwards)
Your artistic words lure this reader to join in those scenic dreams my...
March 21st, 2021 05:32 - THE HAVES (Joe Marcello)
Wise conclusion to reach in these four lines Joe.
March 20th, 2021 05:37 - Signals (Poetic Dan)
Wonderful words Dan and really delightful video - so glad I caught this...
March 19th, 2021 17:11 - fighter (Kevin Michael Bloor)
That last line says it all Kevin - whatever life throws at us we can as...
March 19th, 2021 16:59 - My Life With Nature. (Goldfinch60)
So good to read of your walks with nature and feeling at one with the...
March 19th, 2021 16:52 - Dead Man\'s Bones (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Honest and so well rhymed Kevin this confession of youthful neglect when...
March 18th, 2021 04:08 - Centurion (AuburnScribbler)
Filled with reasons for retaining our inner-child this well-rhymed write...
March 18th, 2021 03:53 - Tiny Star (Rrodriguez)
Starlight is humbling yet helps us to see that being light-bearers is who...
March 18th, 2021 03:30 - A Single Flower. (Goldfinch60)
Wonderful voices to add to your positive words on climbing into the light...
March 17th, 2021 06:43 - Roadwork Gods. (Goldfinch60)
The same assembly hits these parts too - traffic is held in their grip as...
March 16th, 2021 05:26 - Daily Door. (Goldfinch60)
Doors are there for us to open where ventures await and you show such a...
March 16th, 2021 03:20 - Dead Man Crying (MendedFences27)
You pen this tale of lament so well my friend with excellent rhyming and...
March 14th, 2021 17:12 - The Koel Calls (Doggerel Dave)
Wow - did I really refuse to have the koel\'s call in my garden ? - - and...
March 14th, 2021 05:51 - To Feel You – Just To Feel (Nafis Light)
Your words engender the real meaning of deeper connection when heart...
March 14th, 2021 05:42 - Tomodachi ya Koibito (Neville)
Love\'s reproduction brought to our eyes by such poetic wording that only...
March 14th, 2021 03:00 - was it fear or something else (Dusk arising)
Life certainly does teach us my friend as this honest verse aptly states....
March 13th, 2021 17:01 - Just for You (Neville)
A tenderly poemed assurance to ever remember -- nothing comes near to...
March 13th, 2021 06:51 - A Lonely Cottage On The Moor (Alan .S. Jeeves)
A penned picture of beauty that only the moors can bequest to those...
March 12th, 2021 11:27 - Metro Mornings (Neville)
A face tells a thousand stories when dawn-wakened it begins a new day - so...
March 12th, 2021 03:52 - Nineveh Nullified (Orchidee)
An interesting and well-worded write Orchi - Assyria has a violent
March 10th, 2021 17:35 - HIDDEN DEEP (Michael Edwards)
We have both been away for the same while Mike and so nice now I am back...
March 10th, 2021 17:33 - Minds Your Into. (Goldfinch60)
Ha ha - -- giggled at Dave\'s words of fun and then read your tongue...
March 10th, 2021 17:27 - thoughts on time (revisited) (Dusk arising)
Such an apt question on time in that final line Dusk - - peace is needed...
March 10th, 2021 17:19 - A Woodland Walk (Classicmister)
Such a powerful final line in this well-worded and very poetic reason for...
March 10th, 2021 17:13 - Melancholic Men (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Great flow to this well-worded lament at the miss of the Muse dear Kevin...
March 10th, 2021 17:05 - Love like a Song (Neville)
Am listening and truly enjoying the gently worded love-song echoing...
March 10th, 2021 11:43 - Sincere Serving (Orchidee)
Sincere serving indeed.
February 24th, 2021 07:16 - A Good Day. (Goldfinch60)
It feels so good when we know before sleep that the day has been kind to...
February 24th, 2021 03:49 - Wonderment (John Prophet)
Yes that feeling of wonder is something to try for my friend. Open doors...
February 23rd, 2021 10:41 - Lockdown Grey (Neville)
The word \"almost\" adds a pathos that touches the heart in this poemed...
February 23rd, 2021 08:26 - Feeling Poetry. (Goldfinch60)
I agree that the mind needs to cease for moments in order for words to be...
February 22nd, 2021 04:56 - Rebellion (Samer Amin)
You capture the essence of chaos so well here Samer but the positive...
February 22nd, 2021 04:51 - Mastication (Neville)
An over-large shirt can make all the difference to female adroitness -...
February 22nd, 2021 03:41 - the sun tomorrow (Dusk arising)
Ah - - Dusk you have scored yet again with this engaging confession of...
February 21st, 2021 02:53 - Beautiful River. (Goldfinch60)
May the beauty of nature\'s seasons stay with you forever dear Andy and...
February 18th, 2021 17:14 - Funfair (Heatherbee)
This read brought back so many childhood memories Heather - - those...
February 18th, 2021 06:02 - Life Changed Forever (Doggerel Dave)
Your arrangement of clichés coudl not be bettered Dave - great write and...
February 18th, 2021 05:56 - The New Day (Goldfinch60)
Simply beautiful words dear Andy along with a wonderful number and video.
February 16th, 2021 16:56 - Seduction (Jerry Reynolds)
Ha ha - - well not quite three of the clock for me dear Jerry but love the...
February 16th, 2021 10:13 - Satori (Neville)
Sadness fills the mind when scenes you had to leave behind burst from...
February 16th, 2021 10:09 - Gratitude to God for gratis blessings (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
An inspiring read my friend,.
February 15th, 2021 17:02 - Spring Memory (Jerry Reynolds)
Thanks a lot Jerry for sharing a passing experience of a spring memory...
February 15th, 2021 17:01 - of the parting (Dusk arising)
Just one word my friend for this moving lament - - - Excellent.
February 15th, 2021 07:31 - Remembered (Neville)
On re-reading this bit of lovely nostalgia I found much more depth to the...
February 14th, 2021 15:21 - a tired heart (Dusk arising)
You broaden the effect that these troubled times has on us all dear friend...
February 14th, 2021 05:29 - SPRING (Michael Edwards)
Your beautifully prosed Spring makes me look even more forward to its...
February 13th, 2021 13:20 - The Power Of Music. (Goldfinch60)
What a lovely piece of music and your words hold its comforting message of...
February 13th, 2021 11:43 - Talking On The Screen. (Goldfinch60)
Chatting with someone special is always a way to lighten our hearts Andy ...
February 10th, 2021 16:27 - Dawn After Darkness (Orchidee)
A helpful write for those lost in utter despair - -- - thanks for...
February 8th, 2021 06:35 - Short & Sweet as life should be (Poetic Dan)
First class reflections on life where minds matter if hearts hear -- I...
February 8th, 2021 06:32 - Love For Eternity. (Goldfinch60)
Your beautiful words are indeed reminders that love last forever - - love...
February 8th, 2021 02:55 - WOUNDS OF MONSOON (Short story) (PrEm Ji)
Such a moving account of how tragedies like floods bring out the essence...
February 5th, 2021 07:10 - Window North (Jerry Reynolds)
A four liner that has me reading its apt placement of line and pace over...
February 1st, 2021 15:51 - Perfect (Sylviasearcher)
\"Perfect imperfection \"- - only a poet gifted with shaping words into ...
February 1st, 2021 15:47 - capt. Sir Tom (Dusk arising)
What a sad piece of news Dusk - - most prayerful thoughts are with dear...
February 1st, 2021 05:42 - Kitchen Hand (Doggerel Dave)
I remember those times well when my Gran was teaching me how to draw and...
February 1st, 2021 05:36 - Miss Take (Neville)
Methinks a Miss as explained here will ever Take as long as hunger for...
February 1st, 2021 03:36 - a new beginning.... (Dusk arising)
Such emotive words that make us at this troublesome time realize the...
January 31st, 2021 17:11 - Along the Wooded Edge (Gary Edward Geraci)
An engaging sonnet created to poetic description of petaled beauty - -...
January 30th, 2021 13:25 - That Photograph. (Goldfinch60)
What a delightful and telling picture where two know their future of...
January 30th, 2021 07:26 - a prayer for..... (Dusk arising)
What could be better than learning about love and the pleasant joy of...
January 30th, 2021 07:22 - David\'s Dynasty (Orchidee)
Well written Orchi.
January 29th, 2021 16:52 - i found love (Dusk arising)
I choose number four - but then after hearing Bonnie I guess it could be...
January 29th, 2021 09:19 - Lockdown (Heatherbee)
Pain certainly isolates and especially in lockdown needs to be admonished...
January 27th, 2021 02:58 - Times of Timothy and Titus (Orchidee)
An interesting account of the two Christian believers - thank you for...
January 26th, 2021 06:59 - A Birth Certificate (Samer Amin)
After a slow read of good imagery I am seeing a verse of romantic...
January 26th, 2021 04:31 - That Clock. (Goldfinch60)
Good question dear Andy - time can certainly be friend or enemy - --- ...
January 26th, 2021 04:27 - LAST SUPPER (Michael Edwards)
Love this fun rhyme on this dull morning and the clarity and life in your...
January 26th, 2021 04:24 - Stunningly Clear Vistas (FredPeyer)
This superb piece of poetry has to be one of your best Fred and it goes...
January 26th, 2021 04:18 - Paul\'s Progress (Orchidee)
Enjoyed this read Orchi.
January 25th, 2021 13:39 - Winter soldiers (MendedFences27)
A truly relatable example of using metaphor to its best in this...
January 25th, 2021 07:31 - A TRUMPERICK (Michael Edwards)
Agree with Dave on this current issue -- and I luuuurve that picture my...
January 24th, 2021 06:01 - MIDNIGHT TRILOGY (2) Around Midnight. (Doggerel Dave)
Ah - am still experiencing the chill you describe well in this part of...
January 24th, 2021 03:31 - MIDNIGHT TRILOGY (3) About Midnight. (Doggerel Dave)
Wow - what a well written tale of your experience of nightlife in London -...
January 24th, 2021 03:20 - fishing rod (Dusk arising)
What a scary tale that took me along with that ghostly sound Dusk - - ...
January 23rd, 2021 14:14 - Poem For Fay (Jerry Reynolds)
Ah - Jerry - I am doubly honoured to be named in the title of this...
January 23rd, 2021 14:08 - Believing in tomorrow (Jerry Reynolds)
Am so uplifted by the very thought of one flower trying its best to bloom...
January 23rd, 2021 13:57 - Incomprehensible (John Prophet)
Really agree with the perceptive lines here John - enjoyed the read -and...
January 22nd, 2021 13:19 - Indivisible Fractions (Neville)
Beguiling as ever these transient fractions of time - - - wonder where...
January 22nd, 2021 10:52 - The owl and the faerie craic (Dusk arising)
Ha ha - - a murmuration of frolicking faeries - not that is sight to...
January 22nd, 2021 03:38 - I Await Expectantly. (Goldfinch60)
Ha ha - - would it not have been more than exciting if Ludwig delivered...
January 22nd, 2021 03:33 - AIM HIGH (Michael Edwards)
Ha - Agreed that is the place to be - - and wishing you ever to be on...
January 21st, 2021 03:26 - Walking This Way (Orchidee)
Your faith shines through the words Orchi.
January 20th, 2021 10:10 - Try this for size: (Doggerel Dave)
Love the wit behind every line in this tribute to doggies in windows who...
January 20th, 2021 09:05 - When Once I was Ten (Alan .S. Jeeves)
A glorious set of reasons for remembering dear Alan - - I love the use of...
January 20th, 2021 09:01 - A Collection of Slumbers (Neville)
My treasured corners are full of such mem\'ries as your relatable verse...
January 20th, 2021 05:36
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