Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- A Woodland Walk (Classicmister)
Such a powerful final line in this well-worded and very poetic reason for...
March 10th, 2021 17:13 - Melancholic Men (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Great flow to this well-worded lament at the miss of the Muse dear Kevin...
March 10th, 2021 17:05 - Love like a Song (Neville)
Am listening and truly enjoying the gently worded love-song echoing...
March 10th, 2021 11:43 - Sincere Serving (Orchidee)
Sincere serving indeed.
February 24th, 2021 07:16 - A Good Day. (Goldfinch60)
It feels so good when we know before sleep that the day has been kind to...
February 24th, 2021 03:49 - Wonderment (E.J. Waling)
Yes that feeling of wonder is something to try for my friend. Open doors...
February 23rd, 2021 10:41 - Lockdown Grey (Neville)
The word \"almost\" adds a pathos that touches the heart in this poemed...
February 23rd, 2021 08:26 - Feeling Poetry. (Goldfinch60)
I agree that the mind needs to cease for moments in order for words to be...
February 22nd, 2021 04:56 - Rebellion (Samer Amin)
You capture the essence of chaos so well here Samer but the positive...
February 22nd, 2021 04:51 - Mastication (Neville)
An over-large shirt can make all the difference to female adroitness -...
February 22nd, 2021 03:41 - the sun tomorrow (Dusk arising)
Ah - - Dusk you have scored yet again with this engaging confession of...
February 21st, 2021 02:53 - Beautiful River. (Goldfinch60)
May the beauty of nature\'s seasons stay with you forever dear Andy and...
February 18th, 2021 17:14 - Funfair (Heatherbee)
This read brought back so many childhood memories Heather - - those...
February 18th, 2021 06:02 - Life Changed Forever (Doggerel Dave)
Your arrangement of clichés coudl not be bettered Dave - great write and...
February 18th, 2021 05:56 - The New Day (Goldfinch60)
Simply beautiful words dear Andy along with a wonderful number and video.
February 16th, 2021 16:56 - Seduction (Jerry Reynolds)
Ha ha - - well not quite three of the clock for me dear Jerry but love the...
February 16th, 2021 10:13 - Satori (Neville)
Sadness fills the mind when scenes you had to leave behind burst from...
February 16th, 2021 10:09 - Gratitude to God for gratis blessings (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
An inspiring read my friend,.
February 15th, 2021 17:02 - Spring Memory (Jerry Reynolds)
Thanks a lot Jerry for sharing a passing experience of a spring memory...
February 15th, 2021 17:01 - of the parting (Dusk arising)
Just one word my friend for this moving lament - - - Excellent.
February 15th, 2021 07:31 - Remembered (Neville)
On re-reading this bit of lovely nostalgia I found much more depth to the...
February 14th, 2021 15:21 - a tired heart (Dusk arising)
You broaden the effect that these troubled times has on us all dear friend...
February 14th, 2021 05:29 - SPRING (Michael Edwards)
Your beautifully prosed Spring makes me look even more forward to its...
February 13th, 2021 13:20 - The Power Of Music. (Goldfinch60)
What a lovely piece of music and your words hold its comforting message of...
February 13th, 2021 11:43 - Talking On The Screen. (Goldfinch60)
Chatting with someone special is always a way to lighten our hearts Andy ...
February 10th, 2021 16:27 - Dawn After Darkness (Orchidee)
A helpful write for those lost in utter despair - -- - thanks for...
February 8th, 2021 06:35 - Short & Sweet as life should be (Poetic Dan)
First class reflections on life where minds matter if hearts hear -- I...
February 8th, 2021 06:32 - Love For Eternity. (Goldfinch60)
Your beautiful words are indeed reminders that love last forever - - love...
February 8th, 2021 02:55 - WOUNDS OF MONSOON (Short story) (PrEm Ji)
Such a moving account of how tragedies like floods bring out the essence...
February 5th, 2021 07:10 - Window North (Jerry Reynolds)
A four liner that has me reading its apt placement of line and pace over...
February 1st, 2021 15:51 - Perfect (Sylviasearcher)
\"Perfect imperfection \"- - only a poet gifted with shaping words into ...
February 1st, 2021 15:47 - capt. Sir Tom (Dusk arising)
What a sad piece of news Dusk - - most prayerful thoughts are with dear...
February 1st, 2021 05:42 - Kitchen Hand (Doggerel Dave)
I remember those times well when my Gran was teaching me how to draw and...
February 1st, 2021 05:36 - Miss Take (Neville)
Methinks a Miss as explained here will ever Take as long as hunger for...
February 1st, 2021 03:36 - a new beginning.... (Dusk arising)
Such emotive words that make us at this troublesome time realize the...
January 31st, 2021 17:11 - Along the Wooded Edge (Gary Edward Geraci)
An engaging sonnet created to poetic description of petaled beauty - -...
January 30th, 2021 13:25 - That Photograph. (Goldfinch60)
What a delightful and telling picture where two know their future of...
January 30th, 2021 07:26 - a prayer for..... (Dusk arising)
What could be better than learning about love and the pleasant joy of...
January 30th, 2021 07:22 - David\'s Dynasty (Orchidee)
Well written Orchi.
January 29th, 2021 16:52 - i found love (Dusk arising)
I choose number four - but then after hearing Bonnie I guess it could be...
January 29th, 2021 09:19 - Lockdown (Heatherbee)
Pain certainly isolates and especially in lockdown needs to be admonished...
January 27th, 2021 02:58 - Times of Timothy and Titus (Orchidee)
An interesting account of the two Christian believers - thank you for...
January 26th, 2021 06:59 - A Birth Certificate (Samer Amin)
After a slow read of good imagery I am seeing a verse of romantic...
January 26th, 2021 04:31 - That Clock. (Goldfinch60)
Good question dear Andy - time can certainly be friend or enemy - --- ...
January 26th, 2021 04:27 - LAST SUPPER (Michael Edwards)
Love this fun rhyme on this dull morning and the clarity and life in your...
January 26th, 2021 04:24 - Stunningly Clear Vistas (FredPeyer)
This superb piece of poetry has to be one of your best Fred and it goes...
January 26th, 2021 04:18 - Paul\'s Progress (Orchidee)
Enjoyed this read Orchi.
January 25th, 2021 13:39 - A TRUMPERICK (Michael Edwards)
Agree with Dave on this current issue -- and I luuuurve that picture my...
January 24th, 2021 06:01 - MIDNIGHT TRILOGY (2) Around Midnight. (Doggerel Dave)
Ah - am still experiencing the chill you describe well in this part of...
January 24th, 2021 03:31 - MIDNIGHT TRILOGY (3) About Midnight. (Doggerel Dave)
Wow - what a well written tale of your experience of nightlife in London -...
January 24th, 2021 03:20 - fishing rod (Dusk arising)
What a scary tale that took me along with that ghostly sound Dusk - - ...
January 23rd, 2021 14:14 - Poem For Fay (Jerry Reynolds)
Ah - Jerry - I am doubly honoured to be named in the title of this...
January 23rd, 2021 14:08 - Believing in tomorrow (Jerry Reynolds)
Am so uplifted by the very thought of one flower trying its best to bloom...
January 23rd, 2021 13:57 - Incomprehensible (E.J. Waling)
Really agree with the perceptive lines here John - enjoyed the read -and...
January 22nd, 2021 13:19 - Indivisible Fractions (Neville)
Beguiling as ever these transient fractions of time - - - wonder where...
January 22nd, 2021 10:52 - The owl and the faerie craic (Dusk arising)
Ha ha - - a murmuration of frolicking faeries - not that is sight to...
January 22nd, 2021 03:38 - I Await Expectantly. (Goldfinch60)
Ha ha - - would it not have been more than exciting if Ludwig delivered...
January 22nd, 2021 03:33 - AIM HIGH (Michael Edwards)
Ha - Agreed that is the place to be - - and wishing you ever to be on...
January 21st, 2021 03:26 - Walking This Way (Orchidee)
Your faith shines through the words Orchi.
January 20th, 2021 10:10 - Try this for size: (Doggerel Dave)
Love the wit behind every line in this tribute to doggies in windows who...
January 20th, 2021 09:05 - When Once I was Ten (Alan .S. Jeeves)
A glorious set of reasons for remembering dear Alan - - I love the use of...
January 20th, 2021 09:01 - A Collection of Slumbers (Neville)
My treasured corners are full of such mem\'ries as your relatable verse...
January 20th, 2021 05:36 - Cold Winter Nights (Samer Amin)
The lonely feeling of that wintery cold when dark covered the scary...
January 19th, 2021 14:58 - I WOKED (Michael Edwards)
Ha ha - - you have such a way of using rhyme-words - another bit of...
January 19th, 2021 12:08 - careful silence (Dusk arising)
Oooh - - what a scene these words portray -- loved the scary feel of this...
January 19th, 2021 10:56 - Reasons for Leaving (Neville)
One way of dealing with build-ups as you so tellingly describe here my...
January 19th, 2021 05:33 - In Reality. (Goldfinch60)
Love such as yours can never die Andy and your dream-experience with Joyce...
January 19th, 2021 02:30 - Ears, pulsing beat (L. B. Mek)
What a beautiful rendering of Schumann and so enjoyed your awesome...
January 18th, 2021 13:51 - Ephemeral (FredPeyer)
Wholly agree with every line of your perceptive write Fred and like D.A....
January 18th, 2021 09:12 - Birdspeak (Neville)
I just love your play on words here Nev.. - the murmurations of starling...
January 18th, 2021 04:29 - no fear for comforts company (Dusk arising)
Oh the solemn pathos in these heart-tugging lines - that lonely walk...
January 16th, 2021 09:05 - RAIN (Michael Edwards)
Sp clearly described I was there and watching those drops of cascading...
January 16th, 2021 08:20 - Two Hopes for Thee (Neville)
Two caring wishes for some special person and poemed so well - what a...
January 16th, 2021 07:41 - Discovery (Julie B)
Love the exuberance that gushes from these poetic lines Julie - - keep the...
January 16th, 2021 05:25 - Wanton Need (Suresh)
Oh so cleverly scribed this comparison that says it all. One for my...
January 15th, 2021 17:20 - driftwood (Dusk arising)
Oh the pathos in your every line D.A. which highlights the loss of a...
January 15th, 2021 13:03 - belong (Dusk arising)
Such an emotive read which tugs at the heartstrings - - deep-rooted...
January 15th, 2021 02:21 - Untitled - XXXV (Suresh)
Loud applause for this gem of tongue-twister Suresh - a super write.
January 14th, 2021 13:39 - Kiss (Jerry Reynolds)
A potent read Jerry - this clever three liner must rise from experience...
January 14th, 2021 10:57 - Quaffed (Neville)
Worded so clearly those needs for guilty quaffing your super three liner...
January 14th, 2021 10:56 - PUT THE FIRE OUT (Michael Edwards)
Giggled a bit at your infectious wit Mike but oh what a picture where...
January 14th, 2021 09:15 - Better Ones To Come. (Goldfinch60)
Yes optimism - - I was going to use the very same word Neville has...
January 14th, 2021 03:40 - Elderly Ghosts (Samer Amin)
You poem the secret of old buildings so well in this perceptive...
January 14th, 2021 03:34 - Lockdown Life. (Goldfinch60)
A fine and well-planned day that lightens the lock-down by being so...
January 13th, 2021 11:55 - Remembered (Neville)
Affairs of the heart though lasting for moments leave mem\'ries forever -...
January 13th, 2021 06:44 - Old Laughter. (Goldfinch60)
Oh yes indeed - agree most fully with that wise quote my poet-friend - -...
January 12th, 2021 05:28 - Diary Note (Neville)
Ha - - Clever cover to freak out the naughty-minded - well I knew it...
January 12th, 2021 05:15 - Where Would I Be Without It? (Goldfinch60)
Your chosen music was a new experience for me today Andy -- very cool...
January 11th, 2021 17:02 - behind the shield (Dusk arising)
Such an honest assessment of life behind shields - - keep that ink flowing...
January 11th, 2021 16:58 - LIMERICK 73 ( Plus 3 Variants ) (Michael Edwards)
ha ha - -the last one appealed to my sense of humour - thouigh have to...
January 11th, 2021 10:35 - When the Earth Shakes (Samer Amin)
An exciting read Samer - -- that perpetual essence will never alter...
January 7th, 2021 11:04 - Trust Through Trials (Orchidee)
Good and prayerful words Orchi.
January 7th, 2021 11:01 - A love undefined yet (Poetic Dan)
A perceptive look at linguistic energy Dan - - yes Poetry is indeed...
January 7th, 2021 10:59 - SON (Amon)
A medley of sound sense for a young offspring to remember and such a ...
January 7th, 2021 10:54 - tomorrow (Dusk arising)
No truer word spoken my friend - - climate change has to be challenged.
January 7th, 2021 10:49 - IN THE FORMAT (3) (Michael Edwards)
such an appealing Sen my friend - - and the artwork is simply superb.
January 7th, 2021 08:54 - Gerry Marsden RIP. (Goldfinch60)
One of my faves too - their appeal was great back in the day and your...
January 7th, 2021 08:52 - That Place of Peace. (Goldfinch60)
May that slow glorious sound never leave your appreciative heart dear...
January 6th, 2021 13:32 - Star Scene (Orchidee)
Good write Orchi
January 6th, 2021 10:39 - IN THE FORMAT (2) (Michael Edwards)
I fear not masking the grin this read left as I tried that elbow-touch...
January 5th, 2021 11:37
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