Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- Prayers And Praises (Orchidee)
Full of strong faith these scriptural rhymes - good write again Orchi.
April 22nd, 2021 13:42 - SCENT OF A WOMAN (Short story) (PrEm Ji)
A trial indeed escapes from your pen here that takes the reader along...
April 22nd, 2021 13:40 - Sweet Pride (Jerry Reynolds)
Young members bring such pleasure to the proud family at school dramas - ...
April 22nd, 2021 13:30 - not you (Dusk arising)
The heartache this experience causes will not go away but a writer can...
April 22nd, 2021 13:27 - Fall Out (Neville)
Hhmmm - - Intriguing again mon ami - and passionate indeed when dropped...
April 22nd, 2021 04:56 - Good Lives For Each Of Us. (Goldfinch60)
Appreciating life makes all the difference to health my friend - I love...
April 21st, 2021 15:30 - Chosen By The Father (Orchidee)
Good thoughts in this write Orchi.
April 21st, 2021 15:21 - STARDUST (Short story) (PrEm Ji)
A compelling story Prem and told with your usual talent for making a tale...
April 21st, 2021 13:34 - ghosts (Dusk arising)
Oooooh - scary those sprites my poetic friend - - shall look more...
April 21st, 2021 13:22 - Memories (Jerry Reynolds)
Yes there are special hollows where treasured memories thrive and thanks...
April 21st, 2021 13:18 - When I am Done (Neville)
Many the unforgettable things we will miss my dear friend and you scribe...
April 21st, 2021 03:15 - upon Burleigh common (Dusk arising)
I am speechless after reading these lines on the experience of spiritual...
April 21st, 2021 02:03 - A Jar of Nuthatch (Neville)
Welcome back Nev with your reflective and dreamy romantic Jar of Nuthatch ...
April 20th, 2021 06:38 - forest (Dusk arising)
A question which every lover of nature is asking in these troubled times...
April 19th, 2021 07:23 - Risen Redeemer (Orchidee)
A fine write Orchi.
April 18th, 2021 16:03 - where (Dusk arising)
You pen a gem of a verse here Dusk where dreams soaked in hope take us...
April 18th, 2021 15:56 - my dream (Dusk arising)
Romance is every line of this compellingly lovely appeal - great read
April 17th, 2021 05:21 - #58 The Sea Seeks the Truth (Liam Power)
The image and wording flows together so well in this poetic view of the...
April 17th, 2021 01:58 - FOR YOUR EYES ONLY! (Short story) (PrEm Ji)
A captivating account of finding what true love means and told with honest...
April 16th, 2021 15:39 - the needy boot (Dusk arising)
An impressive reminder of how habits can stay long enough to smear the...
April 16th, 2021 02:33 - Mr Roberts (Doggerel Dave)
Applause for keeping me on the edge of my seat with this intriguing tale...
April 5th, 2021 09:37 - TAKING THE RISE (Michael Edwards)
Still laughing at your fantastic wit - thanks for both image and smiles...
April 4th, 2021 06:26 - Imagine If You Will. (Goldfinch60)
A wonderful vision of true love\'s future dear Andy.
April 4th, 2021 06:24 - Better to of loved just pick those pieces up (Poetic Dan)
A piece filled with gems dear Dan - souls interconnecting brings...
April 4th, 2021 06:22 - Easter Expressions (Orchidee)
Light, love and liberty - such beautiful words Orchi - a fine write.
April 4th, 2021 06:20 - Perpetuating (SureshG)
How true and perfectly put Suresh -- moments are our building blocks and...
April 4th, 2021 06:19 - Radiant Love. (Goldfinch60)
May your happy memories of radiant togetherness live on in those lovely...
April 4th, 2021 05:55 - Out of Mind (Neville)
Love has a way of staying in mind when its day has ended and these moving...
April 2nd, 2021 17:13 - on the precipice..... (SureshG)
Such powerful scenes set in poetic words Suresh - - am on the edge of my...
April 2nd, 2021 13:30 - Sorrow (Jerry Reynolds)
What a telling three liner - thanks for the well-crafted and neat...
April 1st, 2021 09:29 - Smiling Lady (Accidental Poet)
A lovely poetic walk down memory land and written so well I felt I could...
April 1st, 2021 05:45 - Free (Brimelow)
Your positive words at the end of this enjoyable read show the right way...
April 1st, 2021 02:04 - Pressing the pause button (Heatherbee)
Hi Heather - So good to see you back here and ready to take up the pen...
April 1st, 2021 02:01 - Little Songbird (Kevin Michael Bloor)
A really engaging read and with such tender care for a little bird this...
March 28th, 2021 06:46 - Zadok The Priest. (Goldfinch60)
What better music to blend you together again with your precious one - - ...
March 27th, 2021 23:17 - Great Expectations (Doggerel Dave)
What a well-told tale about an unlengthy tail -- am still in a fit of...
March 27th, 2021 12:01 - A WHITE CAR NATION (Joe Marcello)
What an apt and surprising title to this four liner Joe - - I truly...
March 26th, 2021 16:43 - light of hope (Dusk arising)
A poignant array of seeming failures listed in this set of impressive...
March 26th, 2021 12:28 - Playing In Heavens Band. (Goldfinch60)
May your very treasured musical memories stay ever close to your playing ...
March 25th, 2021 03:42 - We are all more than enough (Poetic Dan)
\"To be authentic\" - yes and that \"inner child\" is important to...
March 25th, 2021 03:37 - Restoring Reinspirings (Orchidee)
Good flow to this reading my friend.
March 24th, 2021 08:29 - Truth n Courage (SureshG)
You capture it well Suresh and in just a few words.......... courage is...
March 24th, 2021 03:10 - Apple Blossoms (Ron parrish aka wordman)
Such a comforting and peaceful read Ron - -- a welcome time is Spring -...
March 23rd, 2021 03:22 - of Disparity (L. B. Mek)
A fine reminder and well expressed in your verse ;here L.B. - - we are...
March 22nd, 2021 16:56 - Miracle (FredPeyer)
Wholeheartedly agree with your stand on why we benefit from seeing...
March 21st, 2021 14:45 - Spring equinox arrived March 20th, 2021 at 5:37 AM (Rew4er2nail)
Applause for your tribute albeit worded with zesty exuberance to nature\'s...
March 21st, 2021 14:39 - Stepping Onto The Lawn. (Goldfinch60)
Your lines encourage us all to go stand still and view Nature at work dear...
March 21st, 2021 14:27 - PAST DREAMS (Michael Edwards)
Your artistic words lure this reader to join in those scenic dreams my...
March 21st, 2021 05:32 - THE HAVES (Joe Marcello)
Wise conclusion to reach in these four lines Joe.
March 20th, 2021 05:37 - Signals (Poetic Dan)
Wonderful words Dan and really delightful video - so glad I caught this...
March 19th, 2021 17:11 - fighter (Kevin Michael Bloor)
That last line says it all Kevin - whatever life throws at us we can as...
March 19th, 2021 16:59 - My Life With Nature. (Goldfinch60)
So good to read of your walks with nature and feeling at one with the...
March 19th, 2021 16:52 - Dead Man\'s Bones (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Honest and so well rhymed Kevin this confession of youthful neglect when...
March 18th, 2021 04:08 - Centurion (AuburnScribbler)
Filled with reasons for retaining our inner-child this well-rhymed write...
March 18th, 2021 03:53 - Tiny Star (Rrodriguez)
Starlight is humbling yet helps us to see that being light-bearers is who...
March 18th, 2021 03:30 - A Single Flower. (Goldfinch60)
Wonderful voices to add to your positive words on climbing into the light...
March 17th, 2021 06:43 - Roadwork Gods. (Goldfinch60)
The same assembly hits these parts too - traffic is held in their grip as...
March 16th, 2021 05:26 - Daily Door. (Goldfinch60)
Doors are there for us to open where ventures await and you show such a...
March 16th, 2021 03:20 - Dead Man Crying (MendedFences27)
You pen this tale of lament so well my friend with excellent rhyming and...
March 14th, 2021 17:12 - The Koel Calls (Doggerel Dave)
Wow - did I really refuse to have the koel\'s call in my garden ? - - and...
March 14th, 2021 05:51 - To Feel You – Just To Feel (Nafis Light)
Your words engender the real meaning of deeper connection when heart...
March 14th, 2021 05:42 - Tomodachi ya Koibito (Neville)
Love\'s reproduction brought to our eyes by such poetic wording that only...
March 14th, 2021 03:00 - was it fear or something else (Dusk arising)
Life certainly does teach us my friend as this honest verse aptly states....
March 13th, 2021 17:01 - Just for You (Neville)
A tenderly poemed assurance to ever remember -- nothing comes near to...
March 13th, 2021 06:51 - A Lonely Cottage On The Moor (Alan .S. Jeeves)
A penned picture of beauty that only the moors can bequest to those...
March 12th, 2021 11:27 - Metro Mornings (Neville)
A face tells a thousand stories when dawn-wakened it begins a new day - so...
March 12th, 2021 03:52 - Nineveh Nullified (Orchidee)
An interesting and well-worded write Orchi - Assyria has a violent
March 10th, 2021 17:35 - HIDDEN DEEP (Michael Edwards)
We have both been away for the same while Mike and so nice now I am back...
March 10th, 2021 17:33 - Minds Your Into. (Goldfinch60)
Ha ha - -- giggled at Dave\'s words of fun and then read your tongue...
March 10th, 2021 17:27 - thoughts on time (revisited) (Dusk arising)
Such an apt question on time in that final line Dusk - - peace is needed...
March 10th, 2021 17:19 - A Woodland Walk (Classicmister)
Such a powerful final line in this well-worded and very poetic reason for...
March 10th, 2021 17:13 - Melancholic Men (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Great flow to this well-worded lament at the miss of the Muse dear Kevin...
March 10th, 2021 17:05 - Love like a Song (Neville)
Am listening and truly enjoying the gently worded love-song echoing...
March 10th, 2021 11:43 - Sincere Serving (Orchidee)
Sincere serving indeed.
February 24th, 2021 07:16 - A Good Day. (Goldfinch60)
It feels so good when we know before sleep that the day has been kind to...
February 24th, 2021 03:49 - Wonderment (John Prophet)
Yes that feeling of wonder is something to try for my friend. Open doors...
February 23rd, 2021 10:41 - Lockdown Grey (Neville)
The word \"almost\" adds a pathos that touches the heart in this poemed...
February 23rd, 2021 08:26 - Feeling Poetry. (Goldfinch60)
I agree that the mind needs to cease for moments in order for words to be...
February 22nd, 2021 04:56 - Rebellion (Samer Amin)
You capture the essence of chaos so well here Samer but the positive...
February 22nd, 2021 04:51 - Mastication (Neville)
An over-large shirt can make all the difference to female adroitness -...
February 22nd, 2021 03:41 - the sun tomorrow (Dusk arising)
Ah - - Dusk you have scored yet again with this engaging confession of...
February 21st, 2021 02:53 - Beautiful River. (Goldfinch60)
May the beauty of nature\'s seasons stay with you forever dear Andy and...
February 18th, 2021 17:14 - Funfair (Heatherbee)
This read brought back so many childhood memories Heather - - those...
February 18th, 2021 06:02 - Life Changed Forever (Doggerel Dave)
Your arrangement of clichés coudl not be bettered Dave - great write and...
February 18th, 2021 05:56 - The New Day (Goldfinch60)
Simply beautiful words dear Andy along with a wonderful number and video.
February 16th, 2021 16:56 - Seduction (Jerry Reynolds)
Ha ha - - well not quite three of the clock for me dear Jerry but love the...
February 16th, 2021 10:13 - Satori (Neville)
Sadness fills the mind when scenes you had to leave behind burst from...
February 16th, 2021 10:09 - Gratitude to God for gratis blessings (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
An inspiring read my friend,.
February 15th, 2021 17:02 - Spring Memory (Jerry Reynolds)
Thanks a lot Jerry for sharing a passing experience of a spring memory...
February 15th, 2021 17:01 - of the parting (Dusk arising)
Just one word my friend for this moving lament - - - Excellent.
February 15th, 2021 07:31 - Remembered (Neville)
On re-reading this bit of lovely nostalgia I found much more depth to the...
February 14th, 2021 15:21 - a tired heart (Dusk arising)
You broaden the effect that these troubled times has on us all dear friend...
February 14th, 2021 05:29 - SPRING (Michael Edwards)
Your beautifully prosed Spring makes me look even more forward to its...
February 13th, 2021 13:20 - The Power Of Music. (Goldfinch60)
What a lovely piece of music and your words hold its comforting message of...
February 13th, 2021 11:43 - Talking On The Screen. (Goldfinch60)
Chatting with someone special is always a way to lighten our hearts Andy ...
February 10th, 2021 16:27 - Dawn After Darkness (Orchidee)
A helpful write for those lost in utter despair - -- - thanks for...
February 8th, 2021 06:35 - Short & Sweet as life should be (Poetic Dan)
First class reflections on life where minds matter if hearts hear -- I...
February 8th, 2021 06:32 - Love For Eternity. (Goldfinch60)
Your beautiful words are indeed reminders that love last forever - - love...
February 8th, 2021 02:55 - WOUNDS OF MONSOON (Short story) (PrEm Ji)
Such a moving account of how tragedies like floods bring out the essence...
February 5th, 2021 07:10 - Window North (Jerry Reynolds)
A four liner that has me reading its apt placement of line and pace over...
February 1st, 2021 15:51
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