Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- Riding a Curve (Neville)
Such a sensuous read - know what you mean by knowing and hope that stone...
May 30th, 2021 12:43 - Young entrepreneur (Dusk arising)
Ha ha - -- Thanks Mr. D. - that Patrick smacks of the thing called...
May 29th, 2021 05:30 - People In Life. (Goldfinch60)
Thanks dear Andy for the number called Mem\'ry with a beautiful rendering...
May 29th, 2021 04:47 - 2 Put it Frankly (Neville)
My smiles ever widen by your cleverly inventive twisting of words Nev. -...
May 29th, 2021 04:23 - Wholesome Wisdom (Orchidee)
Good words of advice for living in peace Orchi.
May 28th, 2021 05:03 - EVERYTHING HAS A PRICE (Short story) (PrEm Ji)
The truth outs in this interesting account of all things having a price...
May 28th, 2021 04:45 - your defences (Dusk arising)
A superb piece of tender encouragement - written in poetic styling to...
May 28th, 2021 04:29 - A Box Full of Maybe’s (Neville)
Bending to change can bring an awakening - - and that is no maybe my...
May 28th, 2021 04:19 - British Summertime. (Goldfinch60)
Thank you for sharing the contented outlook that summer can evoke dear...
May 28th, 2021 02:07 - Final Funny – (not funny at all - a Cautionary Tale…) (Doggerel Dave)
Never heard this dicky- tale before Dave so I must not be ancient !!! - ...
May 27th, 2021 05:52 - Rokhsana (Neville)
What a terrible custom Nev. - and so widely used for eons by many cultures...
May 27th, 2021 03:35 - Building Blocks (Orchidee)
Love that last line Orchi - God surely dwells and contacts through...
May 26th, 2021 13:09 - Yellow Birds (Jerry Reynolds)
The saying pf picking up more than you thought springs to mind after...
May 26th, 2021 13:08 - Mary Lou Williams. (Goldfinch60)
What an artist and how talented - -am glad to have been made aware of Mary...
May 26th, 2021 04:29 - was it just moments (Dusk arising)
Filled with wonder at your recorded visit of what sounds like the Muse my...
May 26th, 2021 04:21 - Scarce Blues (Neville)
More than a tribute to butterfly-beauty in this clever exposure of...
May 26th, 2021 03:14 - The Baby Boomers Of Paradise (Alan .S. Jeeves)
Agree with this look-back at a memorable era - -a lovely read Alan - -...
May 25th, 2021 04:14 - in the eye (Dusk arising)
Old wives used to say the eyes are the windows to the soul - - a lovely...
May 25th, 2021 04:10 - Face-ination (Neville)
Love the coined word in the title Nev. and oh that clever and very telling...
May 25th, 2021 04:08 - Creating Happiness. (Goldfinch60)
To see happy faces is enough to lift hearts of others who would like to...
May 24th, 2021 16:01 - Do you dare (Sandra)
Amen from me to these caring wishes. With you in your prayers too dear...
May 21st, 2021 04:57 - What Is A Youth. (Goldfinch60)
A really wonderful piece of romantic music and words - - love certainly...
May 20th, 2021 12:49 - Let me Quilt My Affections (Dove)
Such appeal in this tender love-verse - dear Dove --- I love that first...
May 20th, 2021 12:46 - Paper Cups (Neville)
So rich with imagery this write - it cleverly takes events in back-...
May 20th, 2021 04:05 - as it should be (Dusk arising)
Yes we are individuals and we are enough - - a needed message and so well...
May 17th, 2021 03:09 - longing (Dusk arising)
Dreams are so meaningful when we understand that they are just that my...
May 16th, 2021 04:52 - was that me (Dusk arising)
Your questions and wonderings are very relatable Dusk - we all have days...
May 16th, 2021 04:50 - Golden Girl. (Goldfinch60)
A description not to be forgotten this lady - your words live on in...
May 16th, 2021 04:48 - Not Never in a Month of Sundays (Neville)
A confession which must make your lady know such love is
May 16th, 2021 04:14 - MINDFULNESS (Short story) (PrEm Ji)
So uplifting to read the result of mindfulness found in a sweet nurse...
May 14th, 2021 15:40 - Our coping, Substitutions (L. B. Mek)
How true these reminders to seek help when negative moods rule our minds...
May 14th, 2021 15:24 - Fletched (Neville)
Cupid\'s darts always hit where they wish to cause most damage methinks ...
May 13th, 2021 04:18 - HOW ANNOYING IS THAT? (Michael Edwards)
Loud applause for wording some of my pet rants against the abuse and...
May 12th, 2021 12:59 - No Guaranteed Tomorrows (Neville)
Am loving the thoughtful use of words in this lament of lost love and how...
May 12th, 2021 02:46 - Peace Possibilities (Orchidee)
Well written this fine hymn-poem.
May 11th, 2021 12:50 - The End Of The Day. (Goldfinch60)
Lovely read of your pleasure in Mozart my friend - wonderful talent both...
May 11th, 2021 12:47 - Journey of Tears (Neville)
The falling of self-pity\'s tears for whatever devious reason could not be...
May 11th, 2021 04:22 - Sandy (Jerry Reynolds)
Love the pace of this tripping piece of romantic nostalgia - - reading it...
May 10th, 2021 15:33 - OCCUPATIONAL HAZARD (Short story) (PrEm Ji)
Another most interesting and engaging read on life when alcohol takes any...
May 10th, 2021 13:26 - Not Here – better elsewhere. (Doggerel Dave)
Oh Dave this rhyme is CLEVER - - - four lines of warning and so very...
May 10th, 2021 11:11 - The March of the Chocolate Soldier (Alan .S. Jeeves)
Oooh - - am smiling yet feeling sad tears - - -
what an end to a...
May 10th, 2021 04:47 - Negative in Blue (Neville)
A brilliant example of intriguing imagery written to tease our sense...
May 10th, 2021 04:44 - Somewhere in Time (Ron parrish aka wordman)
Full of tender longings this lovely write along with the music sifts peace...
May 9th, 2021 02:02 - Meditation (Fay Slimm.)
Glad my few words of tribute to small things helped you find quiet and...
May 8th, 2021 13:01 - trail to sleep (Dusk arising)
Very relatable the roamings of past events on that trail to sleep as you...
May 8th, 2021 12:49 - The Earth Worm-a sonnet (Dove)
Agree with each line of your tribute to this wriggly gardener\'s friend -...
May 7th, 2021 16:13 - he stood (Dusk arising)
These few insightful lines contain such a meaningful depth - - an...
May 7th, 2021 15:56 - Thatch (Neville)
The quaintness of thatch though pretty seems to have lost its place around...
May 7th, 2021 05:29 - Painting To Music. (Goldfinch60)
Your wonderfully uplifting words and the thrilling quote give both...
May 7th, 2021 01:25 - Some Things Should Not be Forgot (Neville)
Gotta be one of your very best this reflection of the unforgettable held...
May 6th, 2021 13:31 - Early Morning Love Noise? (Goldfinch60)
Ha ha - - big smiles at the thought of the noises you make Andy pulling...
May 6th, 2021 06:44 - MATHS WIZARD (Short story) (PrEm Ji)
An eye-opener of a read Prem - and agree with the need to cross-check...
May 6th, 2021 02:15 - Rambling Reflections (Orchidee)
Good write Orchi. - - like all those Alleluias
May 5th, 2021 16:44 - The Joys of Apartment Living. (Doggerel Dave)
Good to hear the prob. with door-slams is being sorted Dave - - - - your...
May 5th, 2021 16:42 - Ice Queen (Neville)
A slight shiver of a compelling read Nev. - methinks that lady who left...
May 5th, 2021 14:02 - Some Sounds Easily Missed (Neville)
Dont know how I missed this piece of sound wisdom - - - the cupped hand...
May 5th, 2021 03:21 - All Through The Night. (Goldfinch60)
Thanks dear Andy for these words of positive love which goes on forever
...
May 5th, 2021 03:02 - Paying For My Haircut! (Goldfinch60)
Diana so easy on the ear - - she haunts me long after the number -- a...
May 4th, 2021 13:06 - Lies (Neville)
Showing that love is tender and forgets hurts by writing them out - -- a...
May 4th, 2021 04:19 - Blighty (Neville)
A heart-piercing and well written account of how lads were led back...
May 3rd, 2021 12:22 - of Uncertain, vigil’s (L. B. Mek)
A mesmeric rendering of love\'s first addictions L.B. - and in your own...
May 3rd, 2021 04:28 - MOURNING STAR (Short story) (PrEm Ji)
I once again became enraptured with your story of family togetherness and...
April 29th, 2021 12:37 - Light Ghost. (Goldfinch60)
Nods of agreement at reading your piece of exposure dear Andy - those...
April 29th, 2021 02:08 - Broken # 2 Maybe (Neville)
Rich with intent a love like this will surely win fair Lady dear Nev. - - ...
April 25th, 2021 06:04 - Less of the Fist (Neville)
Those sepia images could tell touching stories if they could but talk --...
April 24th, 2021 15:47 - Visions Senryu. (Goldfinch60)
Filled with love and devotion both the words and the number.
April 24th, 2021 03:49 - Making Islands (Neville)
A modern way of life to many I fear -- not making waves often avoids being...
April 23rd, 2021 05:35 - In My Dreams. (Goldfinch60)
May those dreams of togetherness uplift all your daytimes dear Andy - -...
April 22nd, 2021 13:45 - Prayers And Praises (Orchidee)
Full of strong faith these scriptural rhymes - good write again Orchi.
April 22nd, 2021 13:42 - SCENT OF A WOMAN (Short story) (PrEm Ji)
A trial indeed escapes from your pen here that takes the reader along...
April 22nd, 2021 13:40 - Sweet Pride (Jerry Reynolds)
Young members bring such pleasure to the proud family at school dramas - ...
April 22nd, 2021 13:30 - not you (Dusk arising)
The heartache this experience causes will not go away but a writer can...
April 22nd, 2021 13:27 - Fall Out (Neville)
Hhmmm - - Intriguing again mon ami - and passionate indeed when dropped...
April 22nd, 2021 04:56 - Good Lives For Each Of Us. (Goldfinch60)
Appreciating life makes all the difference to health my friend - I love...
April 21st, 2021 15:30 - Chosen By The Father (Orchidee)
Good thoughts in this write Orchi.
April 21st, 2021 15:21 - STARDUST (Short story) (PrEm Ji)
A compelling story Prem and told with your usual talent for making a tale...
April 21st, 2021 13:34 - ghosts (Dusk arising)
Oooooh - scary those sprites my poetic friend - - shall look more...
April 21st, 2021 13:22 - Memories (Jerry Reynolds)
Yes there are special hollows where treasured memories thrive and thanks...
April 21st, 2021 13:18 - When I am Done (Neville)
Many the unforgettable things we will miss my dear friend and you scribe...
April 21st, 2021 03:15 - upon Burleigh common (Dusk arising)
I am speechless after reading these lines on the experience of spiritual...
April 21st, 2021 02:03 - A Jar of Nuthatch (Neville)
Welcome back Nev with your reflective and dreamy romantic Jar of Nuthatch ...
April 20th, 2021 06:38 - forest (Dusk arising)
A question which every lover of nature is asking in these troubled times...
April 19th, 2021 07:23 - Risen Redeemer (Orchidee)
A fine write Orchi.
April 18th, 2021 16:03 - where (Dusk arising)
You pen a gem of a verse here Dusk where dreams soaked in hope take us...
April 18th, 2021 15:56 - my dream (Dusk arising)
Romance is every line of this compellingly lovely appeal - great read
April 17th, 2021 05:21 - #58 The Sea Seeks the Truth (Liam Power)
The image and wording flows together so well in this poetic view of the...
April 17th, 2021 01:58 - FOR YOUR EYES ONLY! (Short story) (PrEm Ji)
A captivating account of finding what true love means and told with honest...
April 16th, 2021 15:39 - the needy boot (Dusk arising)
An impressive reminder of how habits can stay long enough to smear the...
April 16th, 2021 02:33 - Mr Roberts (Doggerel Dave)
Applause for keeping me on the edge of my seat with this intriguing tale...
April 5th, 2021 09:37 - TAKING THE RISE (Michael Edwards)
Still laughing at your fantastic wit - thanks for both image and smiles...
April 4th, 2021 06:26 - Imagine If You Will. (Goldfinch60)
A wonderful vision of true love\'s future dear Andy.
April 4th, 2021 06:24 - Better to of loved just pick those pieces up (Poetic Dan)
A piece filled with gems dear Dan - souls interconnecting brings...
April 4th, 2021 06:22 - Easter Expressions (Orchidee)
Light, love and liberty - such beautiful words Orchi - a fine write.
April 4th, 2021 06:20 - Perpetuating (SureshG)
How true and perfectly put Suresh -- moments are our building blocks and...
April 4th, 2021 06:19 - Radiant Love. (Goldfinch60)
May your happy memories of radiant togetherness live on in those lovely...
April 4th, 2021 05:55 - Out of Mind (Neville)
Love has a way of staying in mind when its day has ended and these moving...
April 2nd, 2021 17:13 - on the precipice..... (SureshG)
Such powerful scenes set in poetic words Suresh - - am on the edge of my...
April 2nd, 2021 13:30 - Sorrow (Jerry Reynolds)
What a telling three liner - thanks for the well-crafted and neat...
April 1st, 2021 09:29 - Free (Brimelow)
Your positive words at the end of this enjoyable read show the right way...
April 1st, 2021 02:04 - Pressing the pause button (Heatherbee)
Hi Heather - So good to see you back here and ready to take up the pen...
April 1st, 2021 02:01
« Return to the profile of Fay Slimm.
