Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- Magic Bead (Neville)
The finding would bring about a magical change to one who made curtains...
August 2nd, 2021 15:44 - The Tipping Point (Jerry Reynolds)
Nothing is truer than these few words Jerry --- fearful but C\'est la...
July 31st, 2021 10:07 - Mirror Poet (Saxon Crow)
You have nailed it in this impresive piece Sax - - we get something...
July 31st, 2021 04:07 - Experience Learned. (Goldfinch60)
Such are the ways children learn and you capture the lessons so well here...
July 31st, 2021 02:06 - A Nameless Craft (Neville)
Ha - - Well who would want a skipper around when they are being kissed on...
July 30th, 2021 02:55 - Almost a Very Nearly (Neville)
Intriguing yet describing a timid bather methinks -- did you make it in...
July 29th, 2021 03:48 - Climate Change (Thekkinkkattil)
Hello and welcome to this friendly collection of serious writers dear Git....
July 29th, 2021 02:19 - Sounds of the Sixties (Saxon Crow)
Was there with all those titles Sax - - great piece of fab. memory-time in...
July 29th, 2021 02:09 - Rider (M.E.M.)
For sure these wise words of fine imagery and tribute to a young mind\'s...
July 28th, 2021 15:37 - the owl and the..... (Dusk arising)
Oh dozens of readers will be taken back to their owl and puddy cat days...
July 28th, 2021 12:55 - No Sweat (Neville)
Ha ha - Why not a strapless to tan ya bare shoulders and maybe a...
July 28th, 2021 03:07 - Just Conversing. (Goldfinch60)
The beauty of a friend cannot be bettered - good to know you are talking...
July 27th, 2021 06:02 - Its Shore Life (Neville)
Love your play on words - -- was with you there Nev watching those busy...
July 27th, 2021 02:30 - Walking the dog (Jerry Reynolds)
Nothing like a dog to smell out your past and resurrect those memories...
July 26th, 2021 16:54 - Beached Whale Blues (Neville)
Strange the beaching of whales Nev.
-- your descriptive haiku reminds...
July 26th, 2021 03:32 - DIBBLES AND DABBLES (5) (Michael Edwards)
A great short-line but needed reminder Mike to watch the height of our...
July 26th, 2021 01:48 - Not A Love Poem (Saxon Crow)
Oh yes SAx - love hurts and is often made out to be other than this honest...
July 25th, 2021 04:07 - New Bloom Tanka. (Goldfinch60)
Just being there and noticing blooms gives them the attention each one...
July 25th, 2021 02:51 - Upon the Tip of His Tongue (Neville)
Maybe or not - however the taste of these beguiling four lines will remain...
July 25th, 2021 02:25 - From a Safe Distance Only (Neville)
Your poet\'s mind has versed the almost unattainable with this invitation...
July 24th, 2021 10:03 - SUNDAY MASK (Joe Marcello)
Ha - - - you\'ve nailed it again Joe. Great read.
July 24th, 2021 03:42 - En Route From A to B (Neville)
Every line in your exposure of such evil makes that route from A. to B...
July 23rd, 2021 15:39 - Stumbling Blocks. (Goldfinch60)
No truer words written dear Andy -- there are problems to be solved and...
July 23rd, 2021 04:04 - Vengeance Vindication (Orchidee)
A fine write Orchi
July 23rd, 2021 04:03 - Inequities - II (SureshG)
Could not agree more with these sentiments Suresh - hats off to you for...
July 23rd, 2021 03:51 - Night Club Time. (Goldfinch60)
Ha - am with you dear Andy for the musical jives but leaving at just...
July 22nd, 2021 12:27 - The Essence of You (Neville)
Nothing beats breathing love\'s essence like expressed in this tenderest...
July 22nd, 2021 03:47 - The Craghoppers Calling (Saxon Crow)
You learn something new every day so they say from a bit of good poetic...
July 21st, 2021 06:22 - Opus (Neville)
What a memory to store in a corner of experience and told with such...
July 21st, 2021 03:40 - Because it Got in the Way (Neville)
Vital points made in this three liner my friend. The fate of most \"game\"...
July 20th, 2021 07:04 - What Matters Most (Neville)
Filled with care this write sounds to my mind like good parental advice to...
July 19th, 2021 13:50 - Cathedral Bells (Neville)
Everyone fall short of the mark yet repetition gives sinners the urge to...
July 18th, 2021 07:42 - One More Four Letter Word (Neville)
Ugh - --betrayed by lies is one of the worst things to cope with ...
July 17th, 2021 11:17 - Just a Kiss Goodbye (Neville)
Very emotive these few words can apply to so many losses that rip families...
July 16th, 2021 03:06 - dreamy blue cheese (Dusk arising)
Never did like ripe cheese at bedtime my friend but as for your rhyming...
July 15th, 2021 14:18 - Mark these Words (Neville)
A gentle poetic plea for reason when love sinks into trouble and your...
July 15th, 2021 03:16 - a poet true (Kevin Michael Bloor)
A compelling and inventive rhyme Kevin which caught my attention from the...
July 14th, 2021 13:41 - Blossom Tree (Rebmasters)
Food to ponder on this tribute to how life is passed on when fade becomes...
July 14th, 2021 08:50 - Upon a Small White Feather (Neville)
A comforting read and no doubt about it my luverly friend........x
July 14th, 2021 04:04 - one in a million (SureshG)
A powerful write Suresh with a needed warning - there really is \"only one...
July 13th, 2021 16:02 - time (Dusk arising)
You scribe time to perfection in this lament about its passing so quickly ...
July 13th, 2021 04:45 - Magnificently Different (Neville)
The scene shows results of first-time involvement with mirrored clarity...
July 13th, 2021 03:31 - ART IS CRUEL (Short story) (PrEm Ji)
Such a good read Prem - - ghost writers world over are ever shocked when...
July 12th, 2021 13:28 - I Awake Into A New Day. (Goldfinch60)
A remarkable testimony again my special friend on how to live life and...
July 12th, 2021 06:20 - Ephemeral: ‘We’ (L. B. Mek)
A fine reflective write on how to stay who we are and from inside bring...
July 12th, 2021 06:18 - Freefallen (Neville)
Heart-touching this little three liner --
-- and so very telling....
July 12th, 2021 02:59 - Briefly (Neville)
A lovely short read of your version of briefness Nev. Nature often leaves...
July 11th, 2021 02:59 - i drove (Dusk arising)
A fine way of feeling alive my friend - driving to watch dawn arrive...
July 11th, 2021 01:09 - A Challenging See-Saw (Laura🌻)
How true your poetic words ring dear Laura - - our up days make us more...
July 10th, 2021 13:25 - Our Initial Encounter (Thomas Koron)
What could be better than freezing a love letter like this - a wonderful...
July 10th, 2021 04:54 - Banished (Neville)
Sad but true Nev. Breaking up is indeed now an art. and methinks when...
July 10th, 2021 04:01 - love (Crowns4Christ)
What a romantic message to your dear belovéd - - he no doubt will...
July 9th, 2021 15:40 - Life #1 (Saxon Crow)
You nailed it my friend.
July 9th, 2021 15:29 - Elsa (Jerry Reynolds)
Strangely enough I thought like Neville about the poem\'s subject - -
...
July 9th, 2021 13:47 - A Summer Morning (Kevin Michael Bloor)
A n inspiring rhyme Kevin -- those summer days draw poets to their praise...
July 9th, 2021 06:13 - Sleeping on the Job (Neville)
A thoughtful three liner Nev. which makes us ask why standing stones have...
July 9th, 2021 04:33 - Passed The Universe. (Goldfinch60)
You describe my idea of paradise here my dear Andy - - making love not war...
July 9th, 2021 01:55 - Where None Have Visualised Before. (Goldfinch60)
With you all the way Andy in that wonderful journey where none went before...
July 9th, 2021 01:53 - A Triolet Ahead of The Pack (Doggerel Dave)
Good to read you having your say with a powerful triolet Dave..
July 9th, 2021 01:23 - SINS OF THE PAST (Michael Edwards)
Never a truer last line here Michael - - shall be remembering it too for...
July 8th, 2021 04:46 - Freshly Squeezed (Neville)
Hey lover - - cant wait for winter after remembering those sheets. ...
July 8th, 2021 04:05 - Under the Battered Cap (Trenz Pruca)
Believing we have control is a step in the right direction but oh what a...
July 7th, 2021 13:50 - Passive Messaging (Jerry Reynolds)
Ha he had the wheels slashed yet - - even the luxury flat dwellers can...
July 7th, 2021 06:59 - Way Too Late (Neville)
Her trust then shattered and with eyes wide open her cannons I guess were...
July 7th, 2021 04:37 - meditative - II (SureshG)
Your poetically wise observation outlines the power of words so finely ...
July 6th, 2021 17:36 - But (IAli)
Impressively wise in inviting the reader to look again at life\'s...
July 6th, 2021 15:00 - The Fairies Cast A Spell- Triolet (Dove)
Lovely and very dainty triolet dear Dove - -- love the colours too.
July 6th, 2021 14:54 - strangeness of strangers arms (Dusk arising)
Your expertise in word-play is so engaging dear Dusk as here yet again you...
July 6th, 2021 06:22 - No Mean Feet (Neville)
Was it Louis Armstrong who sang \"I dunt luv ya cos ya feets too big\" -...
July 6th, 2021 06:16 - Has He Returned? (Goldfinch60)
Oooh and wow - a real scary thought Andy - hope you think twice about...
July 6th, 2021 02:23 - playground (Dusk arising)
Love it - love it - and into my faves this one skips.
July 5th, 2021 12:24 - Maybe One of Us Should Leave (Neville)
Seems like no compatible answer to this familiar request my friend.........
July 5th, 2021 04:12 - Shelley’s Steely Soul (Kevin Michael Bloor)
And loud applause from this female poet who agrees with every perceptive...
July 4th, 2021 13:16 - Let me tell you how the rainbow came (Rrodriguez)
A charming scene and described so well - -- I love your tale of how the...
July 4th, 2021 13:12 - Geraldine (Neville)
This caring tribute to a much missed lady must have been hard to scribe my...
July 4th, 2021 04:28 - Three T’s (Neville)
Ah - I like this three T take on what gets man to face his limits Nev. - -...
July 3rd, 2021 11:07 - Vita Nova (Kevin Michael Bloor)
A wonderful account of you meeting your future wife and how happy the lady...
July 2nd, 2021 12:41 - The towers (Jerry Reynolds)
wow - these few lines make me wonder if the question you put can be...
July 2nd, 2021 11:36 - All the Best Words (Neville)
Words are invaluable compared to fighting but can bring their own troubles...
July 2nd, 2021 03:36 - Comforts, Commands, Communing (Orchidee)
I love the word comfort with its many meanings.
July 1st, 2021 04:05 - Another Year (Saxon Crow)
Ha ha - - we never learn do we - - love that swingin word ending this...
July 1st, 2021 04:04 - Six Million Candles (Neville)
Heart-wrenching the feelings that these lines evoke Nev - each individual...
July 1st, 2021 04:01 - My Little Boy. (Goldfinch60)
There is nothing like the closeness of family where celebration of life...
July 1st, 2021 01:05 - high leaves (Dusk arising)
There is truly no better place to be for receiving peace my dear friend ...
July 1st, 2021 01:00 - Plea Of The Persecuted (Orchidee)
Fine write Orchi.
June 30th, 2021 15:33 - Memorial (Jerry Reynolds)
Excellent three liner which powerfully takes us into beyondness - thanks...
June 30th, 2021 15:31 - Cold Shoulder (Neville)
Judging fit to be demonized is all too familiar as you outline fools\'...
June 30th, 2021 08:01 - Empty Harbours (Neville)
Boating industries are sufferinig fishless and families too are crying for...
June 29th, 2021 04:45 - Twitarus (Neville)
Just had a pre-dinner toddy Nev. and did I read Hic or see Us - - what a...
June 28th, 2021 10:44 - the day is dark (Dusk arising)
There is a lot of that battle about in these worrisome days my friend - a...
June 28th, 2021 09:39 - My Sod it…sorry, Sonnet…but then again…. (Doggerel Dave)
Neutered indeed and an apt word to choose Dave - your sonnet has such a...
June 28th, 2021 05:10 - Along the Mineral Line (Neville)
Steamily right on the dot is your tale of fun-line journeys through much...
June 27th, 2021 08:54 - Understanding (Gary Edward Geraci)
Yes indeed Gary I can readily understand that a tender heart on seeing...
June 26th, 2021 15:29 - Red Dress. (Goldfinch60)
How wonderful for you both - Joyce must have been so thrilled - Oh what...
June 25th, 2021 16:31 - Digit slipped.... (Orchidee)
I have had the same recently Orchi and lost a poem - hope yours gets...
June 25th, 2021 13:45 - Kaleidoscope (M.E.M.)
Deeply moving this view on life and its changing patterns my friend - --...
June 25th, 2021 13:26 - Tree of Souls (Neville)
Yes we know next to no answers to the questions raised in this excellent...
June 25th, 2021 12:48 - THE LIFE ARTIST (Michael Edwards)
Ha ha - - a twist of the usual which gave me a big smile - - great to see...
June 25th, 2021 12:33 - A Little Point of Fact Maybe (Neville)
Lovely Nev. - Romantic lines again from your tender pen methinks - --...
June 24th, 2021 08:58 - The Interment (Alan .S. Jeeves)
A fine memorial verse Alan - a firefighter deserves all our verses of...
June 24th, 2021 02:16
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