Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- Come and Nestle In My Soul (Freni Karaluthara)
Speaking so tenderly to a small bird I can relate to as I often do it too...
August 12th, 2021 12:41 - The Mahler effect (Classicmister)
You chose my favourite Mahler piece John and how well your rhyme your take...
August 12th, 2021 09:28 - Laughter All Around. (Goldfinch60)
And you shared that love of laughter with us too - thank you Andy and...
August 12th, 2021 07:39 - Brave (For Laura) (Lorna)
Comforting words which will Laura will treasure and the number you chose...
August 12th, 2021 05:27 - easy (Dusk arising)
A mark of excellence for this fine and flowing example of walking life\'s...
August 12th, 2021 05:03 - Time (Jerry Reynolds)
Oh how true Jerry - to stand still stops time for a moment and lets us...
August 11th, 2021 16:12 - Untitled - XLVIII (SureshG)
Brilliant imagery I call it - I love the picture of jumping in puddles of...
August 11th, 2021 16:10 - companion (Dusk arising)
The power of the unseen shines through each line in your inspiring write...
August 11th, 2021 15:58 - Eventus (Coyote)
The flow and rhyming are first rate in this dark lament my friend - you...
August 11th, 2021 15:46 - Perfectly Hued (Neville)
Oh what a world that would be if sight became coloured with love for...
August 11th, 2021 03:04 - Shadows (Lorna)
ou share a familiar experience for many dear Lorna and you word it so...
August 10th, 2021 16:04 - Upon a Time Once (Neville)
A read to remember the whens and the hows of once upon such a time - - ...
August 10th, 2021 03:59 - Marionette (Coyote)
Loud applause for this perfectly rhymed and metred story of drama for a...
August 9th, 2021 11:14 - Meadow of Time (Jerry Reynolds)
What an honour to be part of the inspiration for this piece of charming...
August 9th, 2021 11:10 - to dream as an innocent (Dusk arising)
Ah - a bouquet of persuasive vocabulary to set any mind at rest - this...
August 9th, 2021 11:07 - An Unfinished Summer (Neville)
The feel of the 60\'s jumps out of these lines Nev. - ah yes - I...
August 9th, 2021 05:50 - Dementia (Coyote)
So sad these well rhymed set of words that is sure to affect minds and...
August 8th, 2021 13:43 - It\'s a harsh world for a delicate flower (ChameleonNoLonger)
Such inspiring thoughts on the strength of a flower and so very true.
August 8th, 2021 09:21 - Calling Time (Neville)
Wow and what a way to call closing on life that ends in easy-chaired...
August 8th, 2021 05:24 - Record on Repeat (M.E.M.)
A terrible time scribed here so clearly and giving the tension when...
August 7th, 2021 11:29 - living in the past (Dusk arising)
Music has magic to take us to times when youth was exciting Dusk - - I too...
August 7th, 2021 11:24 - A soldier I see (Jennybee89)
A wonderfully penned tribute and rhymed to perfection - thank you Jenny...
August 7th, 2021 06:37 - Hope And Help (Orchidee)
Hope genders help of the right sort if the right spirit is displayed. God...
August 7th, 2021 05:15 - Upon the Arms of Favourite Chairs (Neville)
Long-time relationships can get that way where comfort comes first -- but...
August 7th, 2021 04:09 - More of natures lessons (Poetic Dan)
A treat of a read Dan - - what could be better than to be in the moment...
August 6th, 2021 15:43 - No Curtain Call (Saxon Crow)
A thrilling drama about life and its lessons being played out and need...
August 6th, 2021 15:38 - When You Find These Words (Neville)
Good enough yes - but ignoring never - -- a plea that your readers will...
August 6th, 2021 05:00 - Another Day (Jerry Reynolds)
Love that lemonade sunrise Jerry - - a fantastic beginning to a perfect...
August 5th, 2021 12:42 - beyond the silent doorbell (Dusk arising)
A first rate penning of how wet affects us in summer when promised a dry...
August 4th, 2021 07:37 - Ode to the moving clouds (Thekkinkkattil)
How well constructed and interesting your personification of clouds dear...
August 3rd, 2021 21:41 - Two Parts made One (Saxon Crow)
Brilliant love poem Sax. -- must read this some more so into my faves...
August 3rd, 2021 11:36 - The Stare (MendedFences27)
The tale brought me to standstill and left me amazed with your end lines ...
August 3rd, 2021 11:34 - Recovering From The Shock. (Goldfinch60)
Ha - I smiled when I knew what these lines were leading to - - he waited...
August 3rd, 2021 04:36 - Summer (Jerry Reynolds)
Abandon - - yes how right that word to describe summer\'s arms - - a fine...
August 2nd, 2021 15:59 - Psychosis (Coyote)
A cry in the wilderness and so well written I almost heard that howl for...
August 2nd, 2021 15:48 - Magic Bead (Neville)
The finding would bring about a magical change to one who made curtains...
August 2nd, 2021 15:44 - The Tipping Point (Jerry Reynolds)
Nothing is truer than these few words Jerry --- fearful but C\'est la...
July 31st, 2021 10:07 - Mirror Poet (Saxon Crow)
You have nailed it in this impresive piece Sax - - we get something...
July 31st, 2021 04:07 - Experience Learned. (Goldfinch60)
Such are the ways children learn and you capture the lessons so well here...
July 31st, 2021 02:06 - A Nameless Craft (Neville)
Ha - - Well who would want a skipper around when they are being kissed on...
July 30th, 2021 02:55 - Almost a Very Nearly (Neville)
Intriguing yet describing a timid bather methinks -- did you make it in...
July 29th, 2021 03:48 - Climate Change (Thekkinkkattil)
Hello and welcome to this friendly collection of serious writers dear Git....
July 29th, 2021 02:19 - Sounds of the Sixties (Saxon Crow)
Was there with all those titles Sax - - great piece of fab. memory-time in...
July 29th, 2021 02:09 - Rider (M.E.M.)
For sure these wise words of fine imagery and tribute to a young mind\'s...
July 28th, 2021 15:37 - the owl and the..... (Dusk arising)
Oh dozens of readers will be taken back to their owl and puddy cat days...
July 28th, 2021 12:55 - No Sweat (Neville)
Ha ha - Why not a strapless to tan ya bare shoulders and maybe a...
July 28th, 2021 03:07 - Just Conversing. (Goldfinch60)
The beauty of a friend cannot be bettered - good to know you are talking...
July 27th, 2021 06:02 - Its Shore Life (Neville)
Love your play on words - -- was with you there Nev watching those busy...
July 27th, 2021 02:30 - Walking the dog (Jerry Reynolds)
Nothing like a dog to smell out your past and resurrect those memories...
July 26th, 2021 16:54 - Beached Whale Blues (Neville)
Strange the beaching of whales Nev.
-- your descriptive haiku reminds...
July 26th, 2021 03:32 - DIBBLES AND DABBLES (5) (Michael Edwards)
A great short-line but needed reminder Mike to watch the height of our...
July 26th, 2021 01:48 - Not A Love Poem (Saxon Crow)
Oh yes SAx - love hurts and is often made out to be other than this honest...
July 25th, 2021 04:07 - New Bloom Tanka. (Goldfinch60)
Just being there and noticing blooms gives them the attention each one...
July 25th, 2021 02:51 - Upon the Tip of His Tongue (Neville)
Maybe or not - however the taste of these beguiling four lines will remain...
July 25th, 2021 02:25 - From a Safe Distance Only (Neville)
Your poet\'s mind has versed the almost unattainable with this invitation...
July 24th, 2021 10:03 - SUNDAY MASK (Joe Marcello)
Ha - - - you\'ve nailed it again Joe. Great read.
July 24th, 2021 03:42 - En Route From A to B (Neville)
Every line in your exposure of such evil makes that route from A. to B...
July 23rd, 2021 15:39 - Stumbling Blocks. (Goldfinch60)
No truer words written dear Andy -- there are problems to be solved and...
July 23rd, 2021 04:04 - Vengeance Vindication (Orchidee)
A fine write Orchi
July 23rd, 2021 04:03 - Inequities - II (SureshG)
Could not agree more with these sentiments Suresh - hats off to you for...
July 23rd, 2021 03:51 - Night Club Time. (Goldfinch60)
Ha - am with you dear Andy for the musical jives but leaving at just...
July 22nd, 2021 12:27 - The Essence of You (Neville)
Nothing beats breathing love\'s essence like expressed in this tenderest...
July 22nd, 2021 03:47 - The Craghoppers Calling (Saxon Crow)
You learn something new every day so they say from a bit of good poetic...
July 21st, 2021 06:22 - Opus (Neville)
What a memory to store in a corner of experience and told with such...
July 21st, 2021 03:40 - Because it Got in the Way (Neville)
Vital points made in this three liner my friend. The fate of most \"game\"...
July 20th, 2021 07:04 - What Matters Most (Neville)
Filled with care this write sounds to my mind like good parental advice to...
July 19th, 2021 13:50 - Cathedral Bells (Neville)
Everyone fall short of the mark yet repetition gives sinners the urge to...
July 18th, 2021 07:42 - One More Four Letter Word (Neville)
Ugh - --betrayed by lies is one of the worst things to cope with ...
July 17th, 2021 11:17 - Just a Kiss Goodbye (Neville)
Very emotive these few words can apply to so many losses that rip families...
July 16th, 2021 03:06 - dreamy blue cheese (Dusk arising)
Never did like ripe cheese at bedtime my friend but as for your rhyming...
July 15th, 2021 14:18 - Mark these Words (Neville)
A gentle poetic plea for reason when love sinks into trouble and your...
July 15th, 2021 03:16 - a poet true (Kevin Michael Bloor)
A compelling and inventive rhyme Kevin which caught my attention from the...
July 14th, 2021 13:41 - Blossom Tree (Rebmasters)
Food to ponder on this tribute to how life is passed on when fade becomes...
July 14th, 2021 08:50 - Upon a Small White Feather (Neville)
A comforting read and no doubt about it my luverly friend........x
July 14th, 2021 04:04 - one in a million (SureshG)
A powerful write Suresh with a needed warning - there really is \"only one...
July 13th, 2021 16:02 - time (Dusk arising)
You scribe time to perfection in this lament about its passing so quickly ...
July 13th, 2021 04:45 - Magnificently Different (Neville)
The scene shows results of first-time involvement with mirrored clarity...
July 13th, 2021 03:31 - ART IS CRUEL (Short story) (PrEm Ji)
Such a good read Prem - - ghost writers world over are ever shocked when...
July 12th, 2021 13:28 - I Awake Into A New Day. (Goldfinch60)
A remarkable testimony again my special friend on how to live life and...
July 12th, 2021 06:20 - Ephemeral: ‘We’ (L. B. Mek)
A fine reflective write on how to stay who we are and from inside bring...
July 12th, 2021 06:18 - Freefallen (Neville)
Heart-touching this little three liner --
-- and so very telling....
July 12th, 2021 02:59 - Briefly (Neville)
A lovely short read of your version of briefness Nev. Nature often leaves...
July 11th, 2021 02:59 - i drove (Dusk arising)
A fine way of feeling alive my friend - driving to watch dawn arrive...
July 11th, 2021 01:09 - A Challenging See-Saw (Laura🌻)
How true your poetic words ring dear Laura - - our up days make us more...
July 10th, 2021 13:25 - Our Initial Encounter (Thomas Koron)
What could be better than freezing a love letter like this - a wonderful...
July 10th, 2021 04:54 - Banished (Neville)
Sad but true Nev. Breaking up is indeed now an art. and methinks when...
July 10th, 2021 04:01 - love (Crowns4Christ)
What a romantic message to your dear belovéd - - he no doubt will...
July 9th, 2021 15:40 - Life #1 (Saxon Crow)
You nailed it my friend.
July 9th, 2021 15:29 - Elsa (Jerry Reynolds)
Strangely enough I thought like Neville about the poem\'s subject - -
...
July 9th, 2021 13:47 - A Summer Morning (Kevin Michael Bloor)
A n inspiring rhyme Kevin -- those summer days draw poets to their praise...
July 9th, 2021 06:13 - Sleeping on the Job (Neville)
A thoughtful three liner Nev. which makes us ask why standing stones have...
July 9th, 2021 04:33 - Passed The Universe. (Goldfinch60)
You describe my idea of paradise here my dear Andy - - making love not war...
July 9th, 2021 01:55 - Where None Have Visualised Before. (Goldfinch60)
With you all the way Andy in that wonderful journey where none went before...
July 9th, 2021 01:53 - A Triolet Ahead of The Pack (Doggerel Dave)
Good to read you having your say with a powerful triolet Dave..
July 9th, 2021 01:23 - SINS OF THE PAST (Michael Edwards)
Never a truer last line here Michael - - shall be remembering it too for...
July 8th, 2021 04:46 - Freshly Squeezed (Neville)
Hey lover - - cant wait for winter after remembering those sheets. ...
July 8th, 2021 04:05 - Under the Battered Cap (Trenz Pruca)
Believing we have control is a step in the right direction but oh what a...
July 7th, 2021 13:50 - Passive Messaging (Jerry Reynolds)
Ha he had the wheels slashed yet - - even the luxury flat dwellers can...
July 7th, 2021 06:59 - Way Too Late (Neville)
Her trust then shattered and with eyes wide open her cannons I guess were...
July 7th, 2021 04:37 - meditative - II (SureshG)
Your poetically wise observation outlines the power of words so finely ...
July 6th, 2021 17:36
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