Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.

• Cold Winter Nights (Samer Amin) The lonely feeling of that wintery cold when dark covered the scary...
  January 19th, 2021 14:58
• I WOKED (Michael Edwards) Ha ha - - you have such a way of using rhyme-words - another bit of...
  January 19th, 2021 12:08
• careful silence (Dusk arising) Oooh - - what a scene these words portray -- loved the scary feel of this...
  January 19th, 2021 10:56
• Reasons for Leaving (Neville) One way of dealing with build-ups as you so tellingly describe here my...
  January 19th, 2021 05:33
• In Reality. (Goldfinch60) Love such as yours can never die Andy and your dream-experience with Joyce...
  January 19th, 2021 02:30
• Ears, pulsing beat (L. B. Mek) What a beautiful rendering of Schumann and so enjoyed your awesome...
  January 18th, 2021 13:51
• Ephemeral (FredPeyer) Wholly agree with every line of your perceptive write Fred and like D.A....
  January 18th, 2021 09:12
• Birdspeak (Neville) I just love your play on words here Nev.. - the murmurations of starling...
  January 18th, 2021 04:29
• no fear for comforts company (Dusk arising) Oh the solemn pathos in these heart-tugging lines - that lonely walk...
  January 16th, 2021 09:05
• RAIN (Michael Edwards) Sp clearly described I was there and watching those drops of cascading...
  January 16th, 2021 08:20
• Two Hopes for Thee (Neville) Two caring wishes for some special person and poemed so well - what a...
  January 16th, 2021 07:41
• Discovery (Julie B) Love the exuberance that gushes from these poetic lines Julie - - keep the...
  January 16th, 2021 05:25
• Wanton Need (Suresh) Oh so cleverly scribed this comparison that says it all. One for my...
  January 15th, 2021 17:20
• driftwood (Dusk arising) Oh the pathos in your every line D.A. which highlights the loss of a...
  January 15th, 2021 13:03
• belong (Dusk arising) Such an emotive read which tugs at the heartstrings - - deep-rooted...
  January 15th, 2021 02:21
• Untitled - XXXV (Suresh) Loud applause for this gem of tongue-twister Suresh - a super write.
  January 14th, 2021 13:39
• Kiss (Jerry Reynolds) A potent read Jerry - this clever three liner must rise from experience...
  January 14th, 2021 10:57
• Quaffed (Neville) Worded so clearly those needs for guilty quaffing your super three liner...
  January 14th, 2021 10:56
• PUT THE FIRE OUT (Michael Edwards) Giggled a bit at your infectious wit Mike but oh what a picture where...
  January 14th, 2021 09:15
• Better Ones To Come. (Goldfinch60) Yes optimism - - I was going to use the very same word Neville has...
  January 14th, 2021 03:40
• Elderly Ghosts (Samer Amin) You poem the secret of old buildings so well in this perceptive...
  January 14th, 2021 03:34
• Lockdown Life. (Goldfinch60) A fine and well-planned day that lightens the lock-down by being so...
  January 13th, 2021 11:55
• Remembered (Neville) Affairs of the heart though lasting for moments leave mem\'ries forever -...
  January 13th, 2021 06:44
• Old Laughter. (Goldfinch60) Oh yes indeed - agree most fully with that wise quote my poet-friend - -...
  January 12th, 2021 05:28
• Diary Note (Neville) Ha - - Clever cover to freak out the naughty-minded - well I knew it...
  January 12th, 2021 05:15
• Where Would I Be Without It? (Goldfinch60) Your chosen music was a new experience for me today Andy -- very cool...
  January 11th, 2021 17:02
• behind the shield (Dusk arising) Such an honest assessment of life behind shields - - keep that ink flowing...
  January 11th, 2021 16:58
• LIMERICK 73 ( Plus 3 Variants ) (Michael Edwards) ha ha - -the last one appealed to my sense of humour - thouigh have to...
  January 11th, 2021 10:35
• When the Earth Shakes (Samer Amin) An exciting read Samer - -- that perpetual essence will never alter...
  January 7th, 2021 11:04
• Trust Through Trials (Orchidee) Good and prayerful words Orchi.
  January 7th, 2021 11:01
• A love undefined yet (Poetic Dan) A perceptive look at linguistic energy Dan - - yes Poetry is indeed...
  January 7th, 2021 10:59
• SON (Amon) A medley of sound sense for a young offspring to remember and such a ...
  January 7th, 2021 10:54
• tomorrow (Dusk arising) No truer word spoken my friend - - climate change has to be challenged.
  January 7th, 2021 10:49
• IN THE FORMAT (3) (Michael Edwards) such an appealing Sen my friend - - and the artwork is simply superb.
  January 7th, 2021 08:54
• Gerry Marsden RIP. (Goldfinch60) One of my faves too - their appeal was great back in the day and your...
  January 7th, 2021 08:52
• That Place of Peace. (Goldfinch60) May that slow glorious sound never leave your appreciative heart dear...
  January 6th, 2021 13:32
• Star Scene (Orchidee) Good write Orchi
  January 6th, 2021 10:39
• IN THE FORMAT (2) (Michael Edwards) I fear not masking the grin this read left as I tried that elbow-touch...
  January 5th, 2021 11:37
• Croquet in the Snow. (Goldfinch60) Must have been fun to try knocking the snow off your shots my friend - a ...
  January 5th, 2021 09:38
• SOS (L. B. Mek) A fine piece of advice on how to stand upright L.B. - - shoulder to...
  January 5th, 2021 06:38
• Seeing People. (Goldfinch60) What an exciting version of La Mer - -never heard this one before -...
  January 3rd, 2021 03:16
• One Brighter Day (Kevin Michael Bloor) A piece of honest and very well rhymed appeal which not only moves the...
  January 2nd, 2021 06:53
• pandemic limericks (Dusk arising) Great rhymes in this grouse about being locked in and yearning to be...
  January 1st, 2021 13:41
• Freedoms expanding, no questioning if permission was granted! (Poetic Dan) What a beautiful reason that gorgeous baby for staying on top and not...
  January 1st, 2021 13:37
• New Year Limerick. (Goldfinch60) Ha - love the limerick my friend - -wishing you an inspiring year ahead.
  January 1st, 2021 07:26
• good things to come (Dusk arising) Thank you for the warm wishes dear friend and the same to you too as the...
  January 1st, 2021 03:45
• More than words (Poetic Dan) A lovely and caring tribute for that special lady who lights up your life...
  December 31st, 2020 09:59
• SUMMER DAY IN MY VILLAGE (Amon) Thank you for the delightful pleasure of reading your summary of summer in...
  December 31st, 2020 08:35
• The Year\'s Adieu (Alan .S. Jeeves) What a super bouquet of well chosen rhymes to wish the old year adieu dear...
  December 31st, 2020 08:24
• All Good Things (Neville) Thanking you most kindly for those caring wishes dear Nev. and may your...
  December 31st, 2020 08:20
• I GOT UP (Michael Edwards) Climbing through windows on stairs to the star-way - what a wonderful...
  December 31st, 2020 05:39
• Tomorrow\'s New Day. (Goldfinch60) Yes always two sides the happening as the old year draws to is close -...
  December 31st, 2020 04:33
• River of thoughts to an ocean of dreams (Poetic Dan) Your inner essence shines with love and humility in this verse of tribute...
  December 30th, 2020 17:02
• Zenavia (Neville) The scene is so well described I feel I too am listening and looking at...
  December 30th, 2020 10:19
• She Doesn\'t Think Of Me (Alan .S. Jeeves) Great rhyming tale of love on the rocks - -- a first class read my...
  December 30th, 2020 07:29
• more limericks (Dusk arising) Limerick day and yours brings a smile D.A. with mention of what this...
  December 29th, 2020 17:05
• LIMERICKS 70 and 71 (Michael Edwards) That second verse of yours Michael sums up how we all feel so wishing the...
  December 29th, 2020 16:35
• 2021 (Suresh) Sound sense in these suggestions my friend........ may 2021 bring you...
  December 29th, 2020 06:11
• In a Moment of Poetry #2 (Neville) The end of a sensuous dream should read like these sumptuous words on a...
  December 29th, 2020 06:00
• Treasured Moments. (Goldfinch60) May you have countless moments left to enjoy dear Andy. A lovely read and...
  December 28th, 2020 06:39
• TWO SHORTIES (Michael Edwards) Ha- ha - -- your mind is a hive of originality dear Michael - -- I ...
  December 28th, 2020 06:37
• Bare (Neville) Mmmm -- - Hibernate eh - - snuggling all winter under a duvet - sounds...
  December 27th, 2020 05:46
• Merry Christmas (Alta H Mabin) Best wished along with a thank you for this caring Christmas greeting dear...
  December 24th, 2020 15:25
• Pandemonium attachment (RDS) Submission\'s the word when trying to master the weather conditions here...
  December 23rd, 2020 17:26
• Mele Kalikimaka (FredPeyer) May the blessings of this Christmas season bring happy moments to you too...
  December 23rd, 2020 17:15
• To my child (Arobot) A perceptively expressed understanding of love which a caring father...
  December 23rd, 2020 17:08
• Love Through The Pages (Clara) An engaging read Clara and versed so romantically that love between pages....
  December 23rd, 2020 17:03
• Faith Through Fears (Orchidee) Faith despite fear is described so well here Orchi.
  December 23rd, 2020 17:01
• Happy Birthday Chet. (Goldfinch60) Ah great sound Andy - -Chet B. will ever remain in my choicest list of...
  December 23rd, 2020 16:59
• A SERRY VERRY WISTMAS (Michael Edwards) Got it and love it my friend and the wery same wishes to - - hic - ...
  December 23rd, 2020 12:38
• The Kiss (SerenWise) Your choice of right words for this love poem drew my mind into a similar...
  December 18th, 2020 03:46
• When you\'re miles away (MendedFences27) A gentle but powerful lament Phil. - - as your words aptly say - -each...
  December 11th, 2020 02:51
• PLEASE RECYCLE GLASS ! FIVE QUATRAINS & A DOUBLET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN) Could not agree more dear duo - glass has so many uses and as for me I...
  December 10th, 2020 16:54
• HERITAGE (Thomas J. Dooley) Much food for thought in these well chosen lines my friend. Our heritage...
  December 9th, 2020 08:34
• Turning And Trusting (Orchidee) Thanks for sharing these words of appeal - - a fine write Orchi.....
  December 9th, 2020 03:54
• Tapestry of Words. (Goldfinch60) Applause indeed dear Andy for this tribute to poetic words that coated...
  December 9th, 2020 03:22
• destiny (Dusk arising) What a wonderfully well-written and positive first read of my day that...
  December 9th, 2020 03:17
• CHRISTMAS CRACKERS ~ TRADITION ! ~ A BALLAD ! (ANGELA & BRIAN) Tradition of crackers have always excited the child in me - old fashioned...
  December 8th, 2020 17:18
• Happy Birthday Joyce. (Goldfinch60) Your loving words on this special day as a tribute to Joyce and in...
  December 8th, 2020 12:45
• Vermeil (Neville) Such a gentle old-fashioned tribute to sentimentality when politeness wins...
  December 8th, 2020 07:12
• Never too late, to reflect (L. B. Mek) This is surely the best letter that could be written to a goading bully - ...
  December 7th, 2020 09:21
• Swansong (Neville) Don\'t we all have that same illusion mon ami ? The inevitable occurs and...
  December 7th, 2020 08:48
• I pluck the sun from my pocket (Trenz Pruca) What a truly positive and well crafted piece as a first read of my morning...
  December 7th, 2020 03:35
• Brubeck Lives On. (Goldfinch60) What a talent and what an unforgettable sound Brubeck made in his day - ...
  December 7th, 2020 03:09
• Carbonito de Sophie (Neville) A sagaciously delicate verse with such clever usage of word-definitions...
  December 6th, 2020 03:53
• Sense Perception (Suresh) First rate writing which puts the two sides of each sense so engagingly...
  December 5th, 2020 17:19
• PASSION OVERHEATED (Michael Edwards) Laughter that comes from humour makes the whole world light up with ...
  December 5th, 2020 17:12
• She Was Standing There. (Goldfinch60) A heart-rending read of love which defies every parting my dear friend - -...
  December 5th, 2020 17:06
• Groundhog Day (Neville) The passing of things and of those held so dear makes love and...
  December 5th, 2020 16:59
• The Gift of Love (Dove) Whatever and for whom Love is always a treasure as this lovely verse...
  December 4th, 2020 14:14
• of Destiny (L. B. Mek) An incredible imagery-filled poem on what love means as time passes and...
  December 4th, 2020 05:43
• Manifesto or Look Beyond the Name. (Doggerel Dave) Liberation has first place with all those who refuse to be sheep without...
  December 3rd, 2020 06:39
• Strictly, Here I Come! (Goldfinch60) Am tapping my feet to the number and smiling at imagining you dancing...
  December 3rd, 2020 06:35
• MORNING HAS BROKEN ~ AGAIN AMEN ! ~ A BALLAD (ANGELA & BRIAN) Loved this positive read Brian - the flow and the rhyme brought to life...
  December 2nd, 2020 17:09
• RECALLING (Michael Edwards) Michael your stylish verses always leave me with wanting more and today\'s...
  December 2nd, 2020 17:04
• In reflection (RDS) A lovely word-entanglement which flows and gyrates to captivate readers in...
  December 2nd, 2020 16:51
• Soul Satisfaction (Orchidee) A very comforting read my friend - - and expertly crafted.
  December 2nd, 2020 16:46
• With Nature Once More (Goldfinch60) You verse the sunrise so beautifully Andy - - that poetic walk took me too...
  December 2nd, 2020 13:26
• CAD. (Goldfinch60) Ah yes - -- road-bounders and cads are everywhere Andy whatever their...
  December 2nd, 2020 03:33
• OF LOVE WRITTEN (RDS) A wonderful scent of foreverness pervades the read of this tribute to...
  November 30th, 2020 13:35