Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- Croquet in the Snow. (Goldfinch60)
Must have been fun to try knocking the snow off your shots my friend - a ...
January 5th, 2021 09:38 - SOS (L. B. Mek)
A fine piece of advice on how to stand upright L.B. - - shoulder to...
January 5th, 2021 06:38 - Seeing People. (Goldfinch60)
What an exciting version of La Mer - -never heard this one before -...
January 3rd, 2021 03:16 - One Brighter Day (Kevin Michael Bloor)
A piece of honest and very well rhymed appeal which not only moves the...
January 2nd, 2021 06:53 - pandemic limericks (Dusk arising)
Great rhymes in this grouse about being locked in and yearning to be...
January 1st, 2021 13:41 - Freedoms expanding, no questioning if permission was granted! (Poetic Dan)
What a beautiful reason that gorgeous baby for staying on top and not...
January 1st, 2021 13:37 - New Year Limerick. (Goldfinch60)
Ha - love the limerick my friend - -wishing you an inspiring year ahead.
January 1st, 2021 07:26 - good things to come (Dusk arising)
Thank you for the warm wishes dear friend and the same to you too as the...
January 1st, 2021 03:45 - More than words (Poetic Dan)
A lovely and caring tribute for that special lady who lights up your life...
December 31st, 2020 09:59 - SUMMER DAY IN MY VILLAGE (Amon)
Thank you for the delightful pleasure of reading your summary of summer in...
December 31st, 2020 08:35 - The Year\'s Adieu (Alan .S. Jeeves)
What a super bouquet of well chosen rhymes to wish the old year adieu dear...
December 31st, 2020 08:24 - All Good Things (Neville)
Thanking you most kindly for those caring wishes dear Nev. and may your...
December 31st, 2020 08:20 - I GOT UP (Michael Edwards)
Climbing through windows on stairs to the star-way - what a wonderful...
December 31st, 2020 05:39 - Tomorrow\'s New Day. (Goldfinch60)
Yes always two sides the happening as the old year draws to is close -...
December 31st, 2020 04:33 - River of thoughts to an ocean of dreams (Poetic Dan)
Your inner essence shines with love and humility in this verse of tribute...
December 30th, 2020 17:02 - Zenavia (Neville)
The scene is so well described I feel I too am listening and looking at...
December 30th, 2020 10:19 - She Doesn\'t Think Of Me (Alan .S. Jeeves)
Great rhyming tale of love on the rocks - -- a first class read my...
December 30th, 2020 07:29 - more limericks (Dusk arising)
Limerick day and yours brings a smile D.A. with mention of what this...
December 29th, 2020 17:05 - LIMERICKS 70 and 71 (Michael Edwards)
That second verse of yours Michael sums up how we all feel so wishing the...
December 29th, 2020 16:35 - 2021 (Suresh)
Sound sense in these suggestions my friend........ may 2021 bring you...
December 29th, 2020 06:11 - In a Moment of Poetry #2 (Neville)
The end of a sensuous dream should read like these sumptuous words on a...
December 29th, 2020 06:00 - Treasured Moments. (Goldfinch60)
May you have countless moments left to enjoy dear Andy. A lovely read and...
December 28th, 2020 06:39 - TWO SHORTIES (Michael Edwards)
Ha- ha - -- your mind is a hive of originality dear Michael - -- I ...
December 28th, 2020 06:37 - Bare (Neville)
Mmmm -- - Hibernate eh - - snuggling all winter under a duvet - sounds...
December 27th, 2020 05:46 - Merry Christmas (Alta H Mabin)
Best wished along with a thank you for this caring Christmas greeting dear...
December 24th, 2020 15:25 - Pandemonium attachment (RDS)
Submission\'s the word when trying to master the weather conditions here...
December 23rd, 2020 17:26 - Mele Kalikimaka (FredPeyer)
May the blessings of this Christmas season bring happy moments to you too...
December 23rd, 2020 17:15 - To my child (Arobot)
A perceptively expressed understanding of love which a caring father...
December 23rd, 2020 17:08 - Love Through The Pages (Clara)
An engaging read Clara and versed so romantically that love between pages....
December 23rd, 2020 17:03 - Faith Through Fears (Orchidee)
Faith despite fear is described so well here Orchi.
December 23rd, 2020 17:01 - Happy Birthday Chet. (Goldfinch60)
Ah great sound Andy - -Chet B. will ever remain in my choicest list of...
December 23rd, 2020 16:59 - A SERRY VERRY WISTMAS (Michael Edwards)
Got it and love it my friend and the wery same wishes to - - hic - ...
December 23rd, 2020 12:38 - The Kiss (SerenWise)
Your choice of right words for this love poem drew my mind into a similar...
December 18th, 2020 03:46 - PLEASE RECYCLE GLASS ! FIVE QUATRAINS & A DOUBLET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Could not agree more dear duo - glass has so many uses and as for me I...
December 10th, 2020 16:54 - HERITAGE (Thomas J. Dooley)
Much food for thought in these well chosen lines my friend. Our heritage...
December 9th, 2020 08:34 - Turning And Trusting (Orchidee)
Thanks for sharing these words of appeal - - a fine write Orchi.....
December 9th, 2020 03:54 - Tapestry of Words. (Goldfinch60)
Applause indeed dear Andy for this tribute to poetic words that coated...
December 9th, 2020 03:22 - destiny (Dusk arising)
What a wonderfully well-written and positive first read of my day that...
December 9th, 2020 03:17 - CHRISTMAS CRACKERS ~ TRADITION ! ~ A BALLAD ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Tradition of crackers have always excited the child in me - old fashioned...
December 8th, 2020 17:18 - Happy Birthday Joyce. (Goldfinch60)
Your loving words on this special day as a tribute to Joyce and in...
December 8th, 2020 12:45 - Vermeil (Neville)
Such a gentle old-fashioned tribute to sentimentality when politeness wins...
December 8th, 2020 07:12 - Never too late, to reflect (L. B. Mek)
This is surely the best letter that could be written to a goading bully - ...
December 7th, 2020 09:21 - Swansong (Neville)
Don\'t we all have that same illusion mon ami ? The inevitable occurs and...
December 7th, 2020 08:48 - I pluck the sun from my pocket (Trenz Pruca)
What a truly positive and well crafted piece as a first read of my morning...
December 7th, 2020 03:35 - Brubeck Lives On. (Goldfinch60)
What a talent and what an unforgettable sound Brubeck made in his day - ...
December 7th, 2020 03:09 - Carbonito de Sophie (Neville)
A sagaciously delicate verse with such clever usage of word-definitions...
December 6th, 2020 03:53 - Sense Perception (Suresh)
First rate writing which puts the two sides of each sense so engagingly...
December 5th, 2020 17:19 - PASSION OVERHEATED (Michael Edwards)
Laughter that comes from humour makes the whole world light up with ...
December 5th, 2020 17:12 - She Was Standing There. (Goldfinch60)
A heart-rending read of love which defies every parting my dear friend - -...
December 5th, 2020 17:06 - Groundhog Day (Neville)
The passing of things and of those held so dear makes love and...
December 5th, 2020 16:59 - The Gift of Love (Dove)
Whatever and for whom Love is always a treasure as this lovely verse...
December 4th, 2020 14:14 - of Destiny (L. B. Mek)
An incredible imagery-filled poem on what love means as time passes and...
December 4th, 2020 05:43 - Manifesto or Look Beyond the Name. (Doggerel Dave)
Liberation has first place with all those who refuse to be sheep without...
December 3rd, 2020 06:39 - Strictly, Here I Come! (Goldfinch60)
Am tapping my feet to the number and smiling at imagining you dancing...
December 3rd, 2020 06:35 - MORNING HAS BROKEN ~ AGAIN AMEN ! ~ A BALLAD (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Loved this positive read Brian - the flow and the rhyme brought to life...
December 2nd, 2020 17:09 - RECALLING (Michael Edwards)
Michael your stylish verses always leave me with wanting more and today\'s...
December 2nd, 2020 17:04 - In reflection (RDS)
A lovely word-entanglement which flows and gyrates to captivate readers in...
December 2nd, 2020 16:51 - Soul Satisfaction (Orchidee)
A very comforting read my friend - - and expertly crafted.
December 2nd, 2020 16:46 - With Nature Once More (Goldfinch60)
You verse the sunrise so beautifully Andy - - that poetic walk took me too...
December 2nd, 2020 13:26 - CAD. (Goldfinch60)
Ah yes - -- road-bounders and cads are everywhere Andy whatever their...
December 2nd, 2020 03:33 - OF LOVE WRITTEN (RDS)
A wonderful scent of foreverness pervades the read of this tribute to...
November 30th, 2020 13:35 - Life Changer. (Goldfinch60)
you have crafted well this universal truth my friend that our self and no...
November 30th, 2020 13:30 - Remaining Span (Suresh)
A needed and well crafted reminder that time spent reviewing the past...
November 30th, 2020 05:36 - AUTUMN TO WINTER ~ AN ACROSTIC 6 2 6 SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A grand acrostic highlighting the wonders of winter which helps to explain...
November 30th, 2020 03:04 - A beggars banquet (RDS)
Yes - couldn\'t be bettered - such a kick of new breath in this amended...
November 29th, 2020 10:16 - A beggars banquet (RDS)
The fuel of fantastic imagery makes this verse a delight to read though...
November 29th, 2020 08:49 - GENDER NEUTRAL (Michael Edwards)
I laughed out loud at some of these hilarious alterations dear Michael - -...
November 29th, 2020 08:41 - In the End (Neville)
Back for a second read of your 757 on shared truth of humanity\'s common...
November 29th, 2020 03:58 - Hark, A Herald (Orchidee)
Sharing good news is an example of love - a good read dear Orchi.
November 29th, 2020 03:03 - Decisive (Fay Slimm.)
Thanks a load for adding this poem to your list of favourites Trenz
November 28th, 2020 13:45 - Tell Them (Tayama)
Telling those dearest and nearest how much they mean to your life is so...
November 28th, 2020 12:01 - We are not in control (Tayama)
Short and to the point this piece on t the spirit of love - I look...
November 28th, 2020 11:54 - Love First (Tayama)
Yes showing love instead of the list of alternatives would be a wise way...
November 28th, 2020 11:51 - 20 ways of dying and 20 hopes to live for (RDS)
A mélange of combined ways my friend of saying a last goodbye to this...
November 28th, 2020 05:03 - summer No 17 (Dusk arising)
Ah - -- as the song said - -\"Those were the days my friend - We thought...
November 28th, 2020 04:15 - In the End (Neville)
There is no escape from this bit of truth. as your three liner powerfully...
November 28th, 2020 03:40 - Clarity of Remembrance within Gratitude (L. B. Mek)
My eyes too have been opened by this poetic outing of genocide and my...
November 27th, 2020 11:06 - Cannabis Cool (A Nonsense Poem) (Alan .S. Jeeves)
A very clever nonsense poem that calls for another reading dear Alan - - I...
November 27th, 2020 10:57 - Idyllic Inspiration - Isaiah Series (28) (Orchidee)
Fine write Orchi and thank you for sharing the news of new heavens new...
November 27th, 2020 10:53 - My Lady Was a Poem (Neville)
Once a minion of written memory and although now aged this lady will live...
November 27th, 2020 05:40 - Where Nobody Has Gone Before. (Goldfinch60)
Ha - - up-cycling the old to give a trendy new face just gave me my first...
November 27th, 2020 04:19 - there and here (Dusk arising)
A gentle reminder that limbs can bud best when mature - colours of love...
November 27th, 2020 04:04 - THANKSGIVING FOR THE USA ~ SEVEN BALANCED QUATRAINS (ANGELA & BRIAN)
An informative read on Thanksgiving that leaves us wishing unity and...
November 26th, 2020 17:03 - Me & my Singing Bowl (Neville)
The gender of this graceful but potent relationship makes the singing-bowl...
November 26th, 2020 12:10 - the long goodnight (Dusk arising)
Had to read this over again before I could not find words to describe the...
November 24th, 2020 13:45 - Those Who Would Love Light (Neville)
This bouquet of exquisite medley carries the scent of true poetic talent...
November 24th, 2020 12:16 - MISS SYLLA BERLES (Michael Edwards)
Ha ha - - loved both the verse and the reference to misgivings when...
November 23rd, 2020 04:57 - With a ball at their feet (L. B. Mek)
Thrill of the game captured with detailed imagery throws this well-crafted...
November 23rd, 2020 04:51 - Another Golden Dawn (Neville)
Much food for thought in this little gem. After the light is gone unclear...
November 22nd, 2020 18:02 - Need (Christina8)
Wow - how alive you make the scene of coupling pleasure my friend - A...
November 22nd, 2020 03:30 - Practical Perusals (Orchidee)
Good and sound sense in all these well presented lines dear Orchi.
November 21st, 2020 12:22 - In the Vacant Spaces of Quietude (Dove)
A touching read Dove - your versing of emotional togetherness is so clear...
November 21st, 2020 12:21 - My Joy (Christina8)
Grand to read of your joy at this time of year dear Christina - - what a...
November 21st, 2020 10:37 - Aperitif (Neville)
What a fortunate she to be receiving such mouth-watering reminders that...
November 21st, 2020 09:27 - IM JUST A OWL IN A CHRISTMAS TREE ~ A SEASONABLE BALLAD ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A lovely fun read that made me smile widely - -- am looking for one of...
November 21st, 2020 06:55 - Shadows & reflections (RDS)
What an emotive write about all things experienced by humans who...
November 21st, 2020 04:25 - UNSAMES (2) 4&5 (Michael Edwards)
Love both the unsames and the picture - - great stuff Mike.
November 21st, 2020 03:10 - This Moment. (Goldfinch60)
Yes there is only this moment and the advice your write gives is essential...
November 21st, 2020 03:08 - Reflections on ecstasy (RDS)
An explosion of glorious togetherness as belonging and its tender...
November 20th, 2020 13:25 - How Far. (Goldfinch60)
Such sound advice dear Andy -- those last two lines say it all - - only...
November 20th, 2020 05:56
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