Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- Black December (Saxon Crow)
Brilliant rhyming and after Poe\'s style this dark write should come a...
June 24th, 2021 02:08 - A Taste of Hunger (Neville)
Dear Nev - Is this your old house defending itself I wonder - or maybe...
June 23rd, 2021 12:57 - Himawari - Sunflower (Neville)
Your fine words raise a metaphor in my fanciful mind Nev. To belong to...
June 22nd, 2021 03:19 - Brokenness (M.E.M.)
With genuine hands held out the sufferer has a rope to pull on and must...
June 21st, 2021 14:46 - Pandemia (Neville)
This anthem to night\'s cavalcade of stars humble the senses if like me...
June 21st, 2021 11:43 - Back in the Day (Neville)
The many things that pass through the mind about a past love tell how much...
June 20th, 2021 15:07 - Fathers Day (Jerry Reynolds)
Yes a good Dad sets the pace of a child\'s future outlook = thanks for...
June 20th, 2021 13:37 - The New Day Ahead. (Goldfinch60)
No better outlook could be posted than your poems on finding the best in...
June 20th, 2021 13:23 - curl up (Dusk arising)
Dear Friend - I do hope these words are not from experience - your poetic...
June 19th, 2021 08:01 - VILLAGE OF LOVE (Short story) (PrEm Ji)
That village of Love sounds like a magical world Prem but what a tragedy...
June 16th, 2021 16:19 - Pride (An Acrostic, written in June, “Pride Month”) (AuburnScribbler)
I have always loved the phrase Dusk has used in his comment - to live and...
June 16th, 2021 16:01 - a walk (Dusk arising)
OOooh love that expression Dusk - - \"cornfield nakedness\" takes me back...
June 16th, 2021 15:51 - Heart Hearing - Wisdom Series (5) (Orchidee)
Wisdom is the pearl in anyone\'s crown - - a good read Orchi.
June 16th, 2021 15:47 - DIBBLES AND DABBLES (2) (Michael Edwards)
A truth indeed Michael and good to see you back posting your wonderful...
June 16th, 2021 05:06 - spoken (Dusk arising)
Ooooh this touches such tender heart-strings - - a fine love story and...
June 15th, 2021 13:34 - the operation (Dusk arising)
A terrible ouch of a write dear Dusk - your pen described well the...
June 14th, 2021 13:54 - Clutter Land (Jerry Reynolds)
Agree wholeheartedly Jerry that love can turn somersaults without any...
June 14th, 2021 13:51 - Dog Bowls and Therapy? (A Documentary) (AuburnScribbler)
Could just imagine the rumpus when doggie owners gathered for liquid and...
June 14th, 2021 13:47 - Untitled - XLIII (SureshG)
You introduce here the regular need to make peace with body, mind and soul...
June 14th, 2021 13:41 - Nothing but a Keepsake (Neville)
What might have been is covered here with veils of maybe and faded...
June 14th, 2021 13:38 - Between the place.. (Sandra)
A beautiful first read of my day Sandra - thank you sincerely for this...
June 14th, 2021 02:39 - A Quilt Of Memories (Jayasree)
A wonderfully inventive piece of imagery Jay which tells how memory should...
June 14th, 2021 02:37 - Fog (Jerry Reynolds)
A fantastic three lines which sets minds like mine sighing for such haiku...
June 13th, 2021 16:12 - I Should o\' Known (All Along) (Alan .S. Jeeves)
Great rhyming Alan and such an engaging tale of wisdom after the event -...
June 13th, 2021 16:10 - Dorian Gray (SureshG)
Ah - clever last line in this look at the changes a portrait displays...
June 13th, 2021 14:34 - the artist (Dusk arising)
The read of this re-visited poem tugs at heart-strings with vivid...
June 13th, 2021 11:33 - Overcome (Neville)
Sensually as any and hotter than this scorching Sunday - - ah yes - I...
June 13th, 2021 10:07 - Seizing Moments (Neville)
A quick second read of this truly engaging piece highlights a different...
June 13th, 2021 03:19 - Seizing Moments (Neville)
Am smiling again at how you build up with imagery a feel of intrigue as...
June 12th, 2021 05:23 - Untitled - XLII (SureshG)
You have just ticked every box in identifying real poetry my friend.
June 11th, 2021 16:12 - Emotions Pour Out. (Goldfinch60)
It shows you have heart dear Andy that even a book can bring out many...
June 11th, 2021 16:10 - Exercise Exhortation (Orchidee)
Good read Orchi.
June 11th, 2021 16:04 - to sleep (Dusk arising)
Hoping your hospital visit went well today Dusk and this little anecdote...
June 11th, 2021 16:03 - Unscathed (Jerry Reynolds)
Yes even crossing that river of woe former loves however old survive in...
June 11th, 2021 15:37 - Clickety Clack Life (Saxon Crow)
An awe- inspiring read Sax -- loved the part where you cant choose the...
June 11th, 2021 05:08 - Nowhere Left to Bleed (Neville)
Whooa - A strongly put set of reasons to say a firm Goodbye to love gone...
June 11th, 2021 01:29 - True Love (Ron parrish aka wordman)
Agree with Dusk - both the number and your tender words are very...
June 10th, 2021 15:54 - Am I Just Getting Old? (Goldfinch60)
Tis like the police men - they all seem too young to be out on the beat...
June 10th, 2021 12:49 - beneath the stairs (Dusk arising)
When you give yourself up to fantasy Dusk your pen takes us to such other...
June 10th, 2021 12:45 - CHILD IS THE FATHER OF MAN (Short story) (PrEm Ji)
Meera and girls like that will have to learn and absorb the real life and...
June 10th, 2021 12:32 - Haibun to Friends (Jerry Reynolds)
Great to be near and unrestricted with poet-friends world-over here on MPS...
June 10th, 2021 12:14 - A taste of salt in the air (Saxon Crow)
What a fine tale of the sea and those who go down to it and such imagery ...
June 8th, 2021 15:58 - The Man In My Life. (Goldfinch60)
A very moving tribute dear Andy to your Father who gave you the wonderful...
June 8th, 2021 15:47 - Cactus Days (Neville)
Ha - With the first line\'s sweetest compliment I smiled at her prickly...
June 7th, 2021 15:55 - Linda (Jerry Reynolds)
How very true these tender words of simple togetherness Jerry.
June 6th, 2021 12:41 - The Edge of Golden (Neville)
Another few lines of spice Nev. to brighten a sunless Sunday - -smiling...
June 6th, 2021 07:41 - Unspooled (Fay Slimm.)
Special thanks Dave for your welcome input to the discussion on dementia...
June 6th, 2021 02:42 - Out of the blue (Jerry Reynolds)
Superb - - says so much in only three lines.
June 5th, 2021 12:36 - the dark wall of night (Dusk arising)
What a poem -Oh so rich in potent intrigue - - flowing with fugitive...
June 5th, 2021 10:03 - As Yet Unforgiven (Neville)
Two strong negatives make that final line unmissable Nev --- blame the...
June 5th, 2021 04:53 - The Day Is Ended. (Goldfinch60)
Angels are true helpers and loving
messengers and the sign of a white...
June 5th, 2021 01:31 - RANDOM THOUGHTS ON COMPLEX ISSUES (Michael Edwards)
Powerful thoughts here Mike - - the penultimate line hits the hardest...
June 5th, 2021 01:25 - ONE AMONG NOBODY (Short story) (PrEm Ji)
A fine and upbuilding account of how even troublesome people need someone...
June 4th, 2021 15:44 - A Precious Drought (Neville)
Fantastic imagery you use for this reminder that love when spent leaves...
June 4th, 2021 08:35 - Mercy Musings (Orchidee)
One of my favourite God-words is Mercy - we all need to use this trait...
June 4th, 2021 02:34 - Upon Reflection (Neville)
A perfect reflection of what we may see when we look with intent of...
June 3rd, 2021 04:01 - Stolen words! (Saxon Crow)
Oh what a shock and how frustrating S.C. - -I do understand as I have...
June 3rd, 2021 01:26 - Drifting (Saxon Crow)
Good questions finish this introspective verse on life and time S.C. - -...
June 2nd, 2021 15:55 - All\'s Well. (Goldfinch60)
A caring result to listening as a friend needs to unload - - lovely read...
June 2nd, 2021 12:29 - If Truth was a Colour (Neville)
Yes I see it as silvery blue - - colour is deep in its meaning as are...
June 2nd, 2021 04:38 - Once Upon a Freckled Cheek (Neville)
Thrilling as ever your best \"rainbow moment\" with I suspect a new family...
June 1st, 2021 03:14 - Exist For Eternity. (Goldfinch60)
Another up-lifting read dear Andy - your pen speaks of that time when...
May 31st, 2021 16:05 - days of the lost past (Dusk arising)
You pen them so well those invaluable memories dear Dusk - the past...
May 31st, 2021 03:56 - Sheen (Neville)
Oh Yes -- Sheen - you use one of my favourite words in this gloriously...
May 31st, 2021 03:10 - Riding a Curve (Neville)
Such a sensuous read - know what you mean by knowing and hope that stone...
May 30th, 2021 12:43 - Young entrepreneur (Dusk arising)
Ha ha - -- Thanks Mr. D. - that Patrick smacks of the thing called...
May 29th, 2021 05:30 - People In Life. (Goldfinch60)
Thanks dear Andy for the number called Mem\'ry with a beautiful rendering...
May 29th, 2021 04:47 - 2 Put it Frankly (Neville)
My smiles ever widen by your cleverly inventive twisting of words Nev. -...
May 29th, 2021 04:23 - Wholesome Wisdom (Orchidee)
Good words of advice for living in peace Orchi.
May 28th, 2021 05:03 - EVERYTHING HAS A PRICE (Short story) (PrEm Ji)
The truth outs in this interesting account of all things having a price...
May 28th, 2021 04:45 - your defences (Dusk arising)
A superb piece of tender encouragement - written in poetic styling to...
May 28th, 2021 04:29 - A Box Full of Maybe’s (Neville)
Bending to change can bring an awakening - - and that is no maybe my...
May 28th, 2021 04:19 - British Summertime. (Goldfinch60)
Thank you for sharing the contented outlook that summer can evoke dear...
May 28th, 2021 02:07 - Final Funny – (not funny at all - a Cautionary Tale…) (Doggerel Dave)
Never heard this dicky- tale before Dave so I must not be ancient !!! - ...
May 27th, 2021 05:52 - Rokhsana (Neville)
What a terrible custom Nev. - and so widely used for eons by many cultures...
May 27th, 2021 03:35 - Building Blocks (Orchidee)
Love that last line Orchi - God surely dwells and contacts through...
May 26th, 2021 13:09 - Yellow Birds (Jerry Reynolds)
The saying pf picking up more than you thought springs to mind after...
May 26th, 2021 13:08 - Mary Lou Williams. (Goldfinch60)
What an artist and how talented - -am glad to have been made aware of Mary...
May 26th, 2021 04:29 - was it just moments (Dusk arising)
Filled with wonder at your recorded visit of what sounds like the Muse my...
May 26th, 2021 04:21 - Scarce Blues (Neville)
More than a tribute to butterfly-beauty in this clever exposure of...
May 26th, 2021 03:14 - The Baby Boomers Of Paradise (Alan .S. Jeeves)
Agree with this look-back at a memorable era - -a lovely read Alan - -...
May 25th, 2021 04:14 - in the eye (Dusk arising)
Old wives used to say the eyes are the windows to the soul - - a lovely...
May 25th, 2021 04:10 - Face-ination (Neville)
Love the coined word in the title Nev. and oh that clever and very telling...
May 25th, 2021 04:08 - Creating Happiness. (Goldfinch60)
To see happy faces is enough to lift hearts of others who would like to...
May 24th, 2021 16:01 - Do you dare (Sandra)
Amen from me to these caring wishes. With you in your prayers too dear...
May 21st, 2021 04:57 - What Is A Youth. (Goldfinch60)
A really wonderful piece of romantic music and words - - love certainly...
May 20th, 2021 12:49 - Let me Quilt My Affections (Dove)
Such appeal in this tender love-verse - dear Dove --- I love that first...
May 20th, 2021 12:46 - Paper Cups (Neville)
So rich with imagery this write - it cleverly takes events in back-...
May 20th, 2021 04:05 - as it should be (Dusk arising)
Yes we are individuals and we are enough - - a needed message and so well...
May 17th, 2021 03:09 - longing (Dusk arising)
Dreams are so meaningful when we understand that they are just that my...
May 16th, 2021 04:52 - was that me (Dusk arising)
Your questions and wonderings are very relatable Dusk - we all have days...
May 16th, 2021 04:50 - Golden Girl. (Goldfinch60)
A description not to be forgotten this lady - your words live on in...
May 16th, 2021 04:48 - Not Never in a Month of Sundays (Neville)
A confession which must make your lady know such love is
May 16th, 2021 04:14 - MINDFULNESS (Short story) (PrEm Ji)
So uplifting to read the result of mindfulness found in a sweet nurse...
May 14th, 2021 15:40 - Our coping, Substitutions (L. B. Mek)
How true these reminders to seek help when negative moods rule our minds...
May 14th, 2021 15:24 - Fletched (Neville)
Cupid\'s darts always hit where they wish to cause most damage methinks ...
May 13th, 2021 04:18 - HOW ANNOYING IS THAT? (Michael Edwards)
Loud applause for wording some of my pet rants against the abuse and...
May 12th, 2021 12:59 - No Guaranteed Tomorrows (Neville)
Am loving the thoughtful use of words in this lament of lost love and how...
May 12th, 2021 02:46 - Peace Possibilities (Orchidee)
Well written this fine hymn-poem.
May 11th, 2021 12:50 - The End Of The Day. (Goldfinch60)
Lovely read of your pleasure in Mozart my friend - wonderful talent both...
May 11th, 2021 12:47
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