Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.

• But (IAli) Impressively wise in inviting the reader to look again at life\'s...
  July 6th, 2021 15:00
• The Fairies Cast A Spell- Triolet (Dove) Lovely and very dainty triolet dear Dove - -- love the colours too.
  July 6th, 2021 14:54
• strangeness of strangers arms (Dusk arising) Your expertise in word-play is so engaging dear Dusk as here yet again you...
  July 6th, 2021 06:22
• No Mean Feet (Neville) Was it Louis Armstrong who sang \"I dunt luv ya cos ya feets too big\" -...
  July 6th, 2021 06:16
• Has He Returned? (Goldfinch60) Oooh and wow - a real scary thought Andy - hope you think twice about...
  July 6th, 2021 02:23
• playground (Dusk arising) Love it - love it - and into my faves this one skips.
  July 5th, 2021 12:24
• Maybe One of Us Should Leave (Neville) Seems like no compatible answer to this familiar request my friend.........
  July 5th, 2021 04:12
• Shelley’s Steely Soul (Kevin Michael Bloor) And loud applause from this female poet who agrees with every perceptive...
  July 4th, 2021 13:16
• Let me tell you how the rainbow came (Rrodriguez) A charming scene and described so well - -- I love your tale of how the...
  July 4th, 2021 13:12
• Geraldine (Neville) This caring tribute to a much missed lady must have been hard to scribe my...
  July 4th, 2021 04:28
• Three T’s (Neville) Ah - I like this three T take on what gets man to face his limits Nev. - -...
  July 3rd, 2021 11:07
• Vita Nova (Kevin Michael Bloor) A wonderful account of you meeting your future wife and how happy the lady...
  July 2nd, 2021 12:41
• The towers (Jerry Reynolds) wow - these few lines make me wonder if the question you put can be...
  July 2nd, 2021 11:36
• All the Best Words (Neville) Words are invaluable compared to fighting but can bring their own troubles...
  July 2nd, 2021 03:36
• Comforts, Commands, Communing (Orchidee) I love the word comfort with its many meanings.
  July 1st, 2021 04:05
• Another Year (Saxon Crow) Ha ha - - we never learn do we - - love that swingin word ending this...
  July 1st, 2021 04:04
• Six Million Candles (Neville) Heart-wrenching the feelings that these lines evoke Nev - each individual...
  July 1st, 2021 04:01
• My Little Boy. (Goldfinch60) There is nothing like the closeness of family where celebration of life...
  July 1st, 2021 01:05
• high leaves (Dusk arising) There is truly no better place to be for receiving peace my dear friend ...
  July 1st, 2021 01:00
• Plea Of The Persecuted (Orchidee) Fine write Orchi.
  June 30th, 2021 15:33
• Memorial (Jerry Reynolds) Excellent three liner which powerfully takes us into beyondness - thanks...
  June 30th, 2021 15:31
• Cold Shoulder (Neville) Judging fit to be demonized is all too familiar as you outline fools\'...
  June 30th, 2021 08:01
• Empty Harbours (Neville) Boating industries are sufferinig fishless and families too are crying for...
  June 29th, 2021 04:45
• Twitarus (Neville) Just had a pre-dinner toddy Nev. and did I read Hic or see Us - - what a...
  June 28th, 2021 10:44
• the day is dark (Dusk arising) There is a lot of that battle about in these worrisome days my friend - a...
  June 28th, 2021 09:39
• My Sod it…sorry, Sonnet…but then again…. (Doggerel Dave) Neutered indeed and an apt word to choose Dave - your sonnet has such a...
  June 28th, 2021 05:10
• Along the Mineral Line (Neville) Steamily right on the dot is your tale of fun-line journeys through much...
  June 27th, 2021 08:54
• Understanding (Gary Edward Geraci) Yes indeed Gary I can readily understand that a tender heart on seeing...
  June 26th, 2021 15:29
• Red Dress. (Goldfinch60) How wonderful for you both - Joyce must have been so thrilled - Oh what...
  June 25th, 2021 16:31
• Digit slipped.... (Orchidee) I have had the same recently Orchi and lost a poem - hope yours gets...
  June 25th, 2021 13:45
• Kaleidoscope (M.E.M.) Deeply moving this view on life and its changing patterns my friend - --...
  June 25th, 2021 13:26
• Tree of Souls (Neville) Yes we know next to no answers to the questions raised in this excellent...
  June 25th, 2021 12:48
• THE LIFE ARTIST (Michael Edwards) Ha ha - - a twist of the usual which gave me a big smile - - great to see...
  June 25th, 2021 12:33
• A Little Point of Fact Maybe (Neville) Lovely Nev. - Romantic lines again from your tender pen methinks - --...
  June 24th, 2021 08:58
• The Interment (Alan .S. Jeeves) A fine memorial verse Alan - a firefighter deserves all our verses of...
  June 24th, 2021 02:16
• Black December (Saxon Crow) Brilliant rhyming and after Poe\'s style this dark write should come a...
  June 24th, 2021 02:08
• A Taste of Hunger (Neville) Dear Nev - Is this your old house defending itself I wonder - or maybe...
  June 23rd, 2021 12:57
• Himawari - Sunflower (Neville) Your fine words raise a metaphor in my fanciful mind Nev. To belong to...
  June 22nd, 2021 03:19
• Brokenness (M.E.M.) With genuine hands held out the sufferer has a rope to pull on and must...
  June 21st, 2021 14:46
• Pandemia (Neville) This anthem to night\'s cavalcade of stars humble the senses if like me...
  June 21st, 2021 11:43
• Back in the Day (Neville) The many things that pass through the mind about a past love tell how much...
  June 20th, 2021 15:07
• Fathers Day (Jerry Reynolds) Yes a good Dad sets the pace of a child\'s future outlook = thanks for...
  June 20th, 2021 13:37
• The New Day Ahead. (Goldfinch60) No better outlook could be posted than your poems on finding the best in...
  June 20th, 2021 13:23
• curl up (Dusk arising) Dear Friend - I do hope these words are not from experience - your poetic...
  June 19th, 2021 08:01
• VILLAGE OF LOVE (Short story) (PrEm Ji) That village of Love sounds like a magical world Prem but what a tragedy...
  June 16th, 2021 16:19
• Pride (An Acrostic, written in June, “Pride Month”) (AuburnScribbler) I have always loved the phrase Dusk has used in his comment - to live and...
  June 16th, 2021 16:01
• a walk (Dusk arising) OOooh love that expression Dusk - - \"cornfield nakedness\" takes me back...
  June 16th, 2021 15:51
• Heart Hearing - Wisdom Series (5) (Orchidee) Wisdom is the pearl in anyone\'s crown - - a good read Orchi.
  June 16th, 2021 15:47
• DIBBLES AND DABBLES (2) (Michael Edwards) A truth indeed Michael and good to see you back posting your wonderful...
  June 16th, 2021 05:06
• spoken (Dusk arising) Ooooh this touches such tender heart-strings - - a fine love story and...
  June 15th, 2021 13:34
• the operation (Dusk arising) A terrible ouch of a write dear Dusk - your pen described well the...
  June 14th, 2021 13:54
• Clutter Land (Jerry Reynolds) Agree wholeheartedly Jerry that love can turn somersaults without any...
  June 14th, 2021 13:51
• Dog Bowls and Therapy? (A Documentary) (AuburnScribbler) Could just imagine the rumpus when doggie owners gathered for liquid and...
  June 14th, 2021 13:47
• Untitled - XLIII (SureshG) You introduce here the regular need to make peace with body, mind and soul...
  June 14th, 2021 13:41
• Nothing but a Keepsake (Neville) What might have been is covered here with veils of maybe and faded...
  June 14th, 2021 13:38
• Between the place.. (Sandra) A beautiful first read of my day Sandra - thank you sincerely for this...
  June 14th, 2021 02:39
• A Quilt Of Memories (Jayasree) A wonderfully inventive piece of imagery Jay which tells how memory should...
  June 14th, 2021 02:37
• Fog (Jerry Reynolds) A fantastic three lines which sets minds like mine sighing for such haiku...
  June 13th, 2021 16:12
• I Should o\' Known (All Along) (Alan .S. Jeeves) Great rhyming Alan and such an engaging tale of wisdom after the event -...
  June 13th, 2021 16:10
• Dorian Gray (SureshG) Ah - clever last line in this look at the changes a portrait displays...
  June 13th, 2021 14:34
• the artist (Dusk arising) The read of this re-visited poem tugs at heart-strings with vivid...
  June 13th, 2021 11:33
• Overcome (Neville) Sensually as any and hotter than this scorching Sunday - - ah yes - I...
  June 13th, 2021 10:07
• Seizing Moments (Neville) A quick second read of this truly engaging piece highlights a different...
  June 13th, 2021 03:19
• Seizing Moments (Neville) Am smiling again at how you build up with imagery a feel of intrigue as...
  June 12th, 2021 05:23
• Untitled - XLII (SureshG) You have just ticked every box in identifying real poetry my friend.
  June 11th, 2021 16:12
• Emotions Pour Out. (Goldfinch60) It shows you have heart dear Andy that even a book can bring out many...
  June 11th, 2021 16:10
• Exercise Exhortation (Orchidee) Good read Orchi.
  June 11th, 2021 16:04
• to sleep (Dusk arising) Hoping your hospital visit went well today Dusk and this little anecdote...
  June 11th, 2021 16:03
• Unscathed (Jerry Reynolds) Yes even crossing that river of woe former loves however old survive in...
  June 11th, 2021 15:37
• Clickety Clack Life (Saxon Crow) An awe- inspiring read Sax -- loved the part where you cant choose the...
  June 11th, 2021 05:08
• Nowhere Left to Bleed (Neville) Whooa - A strongly put set of reasons to say a firm Goodbye to love gone...
  June 11th, 2021 01:29
• True Love (Ron parrish aka wordman) Agree with Dusk - both the number and your tender words are very...
  June 10th, 2021 15:54
• Am I Just Getting Old? (Goldfinch60) Tis like the police men - they all seem too young to be out on the beat...
  June 10th, 2021 12:49
• beneath the stairs (Dusk arising) When you give yourself up to fantasy Dusk your pen takes us to such other...
  June 10th, 2021 12:45
• CHILD IS THE FATHER OF MAN (Short story) (PrEm Ji) Meera and girls like that will have to learn and absorb the real life and...
  June 10th, 2021 12:32
• Haibun to Friends (Jerry Reynolds) Great to be near and unrestricted with poet-friends world-over here on MPS...
  June 10th, 2021 12:14
• A taste of salt in the air (Saxon Crow) What a fine tale of the sea and those who go down to it and such imagery ...
  June 8th, 2021 15:58
• The Man In My Life. (Goldfinch60) A very moving tribute dear Andy to your Father who gave you the wonderful...
  June 8th, 2021 15:47
• Cactus Days (Neville) Ha - With the first line\'s sweetest compliment I smiled at her prickly...
  June 7th, 2021 15:55
• Linda (Jerry Reynolds) How very true these tender words of simple togetherness Jerry.
  June 6th, 2021 12:41
• The Edge of Golden (Neville) Another few lines of spice Nev. to brighten a sunless Sunday - -smiling...
  June 6th, 2021 07:41
• Unspooled (Fay Slimm.) Special thanks Dave for your welcome input to the discussion on dementia...
  June 6th, 2021 02:42
• Out of the blue (Jerry Reynolds) Superb - - says so much in only three lines.
  June 5th, 2021 12:36
• the dark wall of night (Dusk arising) What a poem -Oh so rich in potent intrigue - - flowing with fugitive...
  June 5th, 2021 10:03
• As Yet Unforgiven (Neville) Two strong negatives make that final line unmissable Nev --- blame the...
  June 5th, 2021 04:53
• The Day Is Ended. (Goldfinch60) Angels are true helpers and loving messengers and the sign of a white...
  June 5th, 2021 01:31
• RANDOM THOUGHTS ON COMPLEX ISSUES (Michael Edwards) Powerful thoughts here Mike - - the penultimate line hits the hardest...
  June 5th, 2021 01:25
• ONE AMONG NOBODY (Short story) (PrEm Ji) A fine and upbuilding account of how even troublesome people need someone...
  June 4th, 2021 15:44
• Aged Dreams (MendedFences27) yes chasing dreams belongs to the young Phil - yet dreams when looked back...
  June 4th, 2021 14:16
• A Precious Drought (Neville) Fantastic imagery you use for this reminder that love when spent leaves...
  June 4th, 2021 08:35
• Mercy Musings (Orchidee) One of my favourite God-words is Mercy - we all need to use this trait...
  June 4th, 2021 02:34
• Upon Reflection (Neville) A perfect reflection of what we may see when we look with intent of...
  June 3rd, 2021 04:01
• Stolen words! (Saxon Crow) Oh what a shock and how frustrating S.C. - -I do understand as I have...
  June 3rd, 2021 01:26
• Drifting (Saxon Crow) Good questions finish this introspective verse on life and time S.C. - -...
  June 2nd, 2021 15:55
• All\'s Well. (Goldfinch60) A caring result to listening as a friend needs to unload - - lovely read...
  June 2nd, 2021 12:29
• If Truth was a Colour (Neville) Yes I see it as silvery blue - - colour is deep in its meaning as are...
  June 2nd, 2021 04:38
• Once Upon a Freckled Cheek (Neville) Thrilling as ever your best \"rainbow moment\" with I suspect a new family...
  June 1st, 2021 03:14
• Exist For Eternity. (Goldfinch60) Another up-lifting read dear Andy - your pen speaks of that time when...
  May 31st, 2021 16:05
• days of the lost past (Dusk arising) You pen them so well those invaluable memories dear Dusk - the past...
  May 31st, 2021 03:56
• Sheen (Neville) Oh Yes -- Sheen - you use one of my favourite words in this gloriously...
  May 31st, 2021 03:10