Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- time (Dusk arising)
You scribe time to perfection in this lament about its passing so quickly ...
July 13th, 2021 04:45 - Magnificently Different (Neville)
The scene shows results of first-time involvement with mirrored clarity...
July 13th, 2021 03:31 - ART IS CRUEL (Short story) (PrEm Ji)
Such a good read Prem - - ghost writers world over are ever shocked when...
July 12th, 2021 13:28 - I Awake Into A New Day. (Goldfinch60)
A remarkable testimony again my special friend on how to live life and...
July 12th, 2021 06:20 - Ephemeral: ‘We’ (L. B. Mek)
A fine reflective write on how to stay who we are and from inside bring...
July 12th, 2021 06:18 - Freefallen (Neville)
Heart-touching this little three liner --
-- and so very telling....
July 12th, 2021 02:59 - Briefly (Neville)
A lovely short read of your version of briefness Nev. Nature often leaves...
July 11th, 2021 02:59 - i drove (Dusk arising)
A fine way of feeling alive my friend - driving to watch dawn arrive...
July 11th, 2021 01:09 - A Challenging See-Saw (Laura🌻)
How true your poetic words ring dear Laura - - our up days make us more...
July 10th, 2021 13:25 - Our Initial Encounter (Thomas Koron)
What could be better than freezing a love letter like this - a wonderful...
July 10th, 2021 04:54 - Banished (Neville)
Sad but true Nev. Breaking up is indeed now an art. and methinks when...
July 10th, 2021 04:01 - love (Crowns4Christ)
What a romantic message to your dear belovéd - - he no doubt will...
July 9th, 2021 15:40 - Life #1 (Saxon Crow)
You nailed it my friend.
July 9th, 2021 15:29 - Elsa (Jerry Reynolds)
Strangely enough I thought like Neville about the poem\'s subject - -
...
July 9th, 2021 13:47 - A Summer Morning (Kevin Michael Bloor)
A n inspiring rhyme Kevin -- those summer days draw poets to their praise...
July 9th, 2021 06:13 - Sleeping on the Job (Neville)
A thoughtful three liner Nev. which makes us ask why standing stones have...
July 9th, 2021 04:33 - Passed The Universe. (Goldfinch60)
You describe my idea of paradise here my dear Andy - - making love not war...
July 9th, 2021 01:55 - Where None Have Visualised Before. (Goldfinch60)
With you all the way Andy in that wonderful journey where none went before...
July 9th, 2021 01:53 - A Triolet Ahead of The Pack (Doggerel Dave)
Good to read you having your say with a powerful triolet Dave..
July 9th, 2021 01:23 - SINS OF THE PAST (Michael Edwards)
Never a truer last line here Michael - - shall be remembering it too for...
July 8th, 2021 04:46 - Freshly Squeezed (Neville)
Hey lover - - cant wait for winter after remembering those sheets. ...
July 8th, 2021 04:05 - Under the Battered Cap (Trenz Pruca)
Believing we have control is a step in the right direction but oh what a...
July 7th, 2021 13:50 - Passive Messaging (Jerry Reynolds)
Ha he had the wheels slashed yet - - even the luxury flat dwellers can...
July 7th, 2021 06:59 - Way Too Late (Neville)
Her trust then shattered and with eyes wide open her cannons I guess were...
July 7th, 2021 04:37 - meditative - II (SureshG)
Your poetically wise observation outlines the power of words so finely ...
July 6th, 2021 17:36 - But (IAli)
Impressively wise in inviting the reader to look again at life\'s...
July 6th, 2021 15:00 - The Fairies Cast A Spell- Triolet (Dove)
Lovely and very dainty triolet dear Dove - -- love the colours too.
July 6th, 2021 14:54 - strangeness of strangers arms (Dusk arising)
Your expertise in word-play is so engaging dear Dusk as here yet again you...
July 6th, 2021 06:22 - No Mean Feet (Neville)
Was it Louis Armstrong who sang \"I dunt luv ya cos ya feets too big\" -...
July 6th, 2021 06:16 - Has He Returned? (Goldfinch60)
Oooh and wow - a real scary thought Andy - hope you think twice about...
July 6th, 2021 02:23 - Inspirations (Accidental Poet)
Inspiration as given in your well written lines includes men women and...
July 5th, 2021 14:12 - playground (Dusk arising)
Love it - love it - and into my faves this one skips.
July 5th, 2021 12:24 - Maybe One of Us Should Leave (Neville)
Seems like no compatible answer to this familiar request my friend.........
July 5th, 2021 04:12 - Shelley’s Steely Soul (Kevin Michael Bloor)
And loud applause from this female poet who agrees with every perceptive...
July 4th, 2021 13:16 - Let me tell you how the rainbow came (Rrodriguez)
A charming scene and described so well - -- I love your tale of how the...
July 4th, 2021 13:12 - Geraldine (Neville)
This caring tribute to a much missed lady must have been hard to scribe my...
July 4th, 2021 04:28 - Three T’s (Neville)
Ah - I like this three T take on what gets man to face his limits Nev. - -...
July 3rd, 2021 11:07 - Friends of the Pen (Accidental Poet)
A touching read A.P. - those seeds of love need to be sown by perceptive...
July 2nd, 2021 15:35 - Vita Nova (Kevin Michael Bloor)
A wonderful account of you meeting your future wife and how happy the lady...
July 2nd, 2021 12:41 - The towers (Jerry Reynolds)
wow - these few lines make me wonder if the question you put can be...
July 2nd, 2021 11:36 - All the Best Words (Neville)
Words are invaluable compared to fighting but can bring their own troubles...
July 2nd, 2021 03:36 - Comforts, Commands, Communing (Orchidee)
I love the word comfort with its many meanings.
July 1st, 2021 04:05 - Another Year (Saxon Crow)
Ha ha - - we never learn do we - - love that swingin word ending this...
July 1st, 2021 04:04 - Six Million Candles (Neville)
Heart-wrenching the feelings that these lines evoke Nev - each individual...
July 1st, 2021 04:01 - My Little Boy. (Goldfinch60)
There is nothing like the closeness of family where celebration of life...
July 1st, 2021 01:05 - high leaves (Dusk arising)
There is truly no better place to be for receiving peace my dear friend ...
July 1st, 2021 01:00 - Plea Of The Persecuted (Orchidee)
Fine write Orchi.
June 30th, 2021 15:33 - Memorial (Jerry Reynolds)
Excellent three liner which powerfully takes us into beyondness - thanks...
June 30th, 2021 15:31 - Cold Shoulder (Neville)
Judging fit to be demonized is all too familiar as you outline fools\'...
June 30th, 2021 08:01 - Empty Harbours (Neville)
Boating industries are sufferinig fishless and families too are crying for...
June 29th, 2021 04:45 - Twitarus (Neville)
Just had a pre-dinner toddy Nev. and did I read Hic or see Us - - what a...
June 28th, 2021 10:44 - the day is dark (Dusk arising)
There is a lot of that battle about in these worrisome days my friend - a...
June 28th, 2021 09:39 - My Sod it…sorry, Sonnet…but then again…. (Doggerel Dave)
Neutered indeed and an apt word to choose Dave - your sonnet has such a...
June 28th, 2021 05:10 - Along the Mineral Line (Neville)
Steamily right on the dot is your tale of fun-line journeys through much...
June 27th, 2021 08:54 - Understanding (Gary Edward Geraci)
Yes indeed Gary I can readily understand that a tender heart on seeing...
June 26th, 2021 15:29 - Red Dress. (Goldfinch60)
How wonderful for you both - Joyce must have been so thrilled - Oh what...
June 25th, 2021 16:31 - Digit slipped.... (Orchidee)
I have had the same recently Orchi and lost a poem - hope yours gets...
June 25th, 2021 13:45 - Kaleidoscope (M.E.M.)
Deeply moving this view on life and its changing patterns my friend - --...
June 25th, 2021 13:26 - Tree of Souls (Neville)
Yes we know next to no answers to the questions raised in this excellent...
June 25th, 2021 12:48 - THE LIFE ARTIST (Michael Edwards)
Ha ha - - a twist of the usual which gave me a big smile - - great to see...
June 25th, 2021 12:33 - Through a Child’s Eyes (Accidental Poet)
A compelling read of what a little child teaches to those who look and...
June 24th, 2021 16:28 - A Little Point of Fact Maybe (Neville)
Lovely Nev. - Romantic lines again from your tender pen methinks - --...
June 24th, 2021 08:58 - The Interment (Alan .S. Jeeves)
A fine memorial verse Alan - a firefighter deserves all our verses of...
June 24th, 2021 02:16 - Black December (Saxon Crow)
Brilliant rhyming and after Poe\'s style this dark write should come a...
June 24th, 2021 02:08 - A Taste of Hunger (Neville)
Dear Nev - Is this your old house defending itself I wonder - or maybe...
June 23rd, 2021 12:57 - Himawari - Sunflower (Neville)
Your fine words raise a metaphor in my fanciful mind Nev. To belong to...
June 22nd, 2021 03:19 - Brokenness (M.E.M.)
With genuine hands held out the sufferer has a rope to pull on and must...
June 21st, 2021 14:46 - Pandemia (Neville)
This anthem to night\'s cavalcade of stars humble the senses if like me...
June 21st, 2021 11:43 - Back in the Day (Neville)
The many things that pass through the mind about a past love tell how much...
June 20th, 2021 15:07 - Fathers Day (Jerry Reynolds)
Yes a good Dad sets the pace of a child\'s future outlook = thanks for...
June 20th, 2021 13:37 - The New Day Ahead. (Goldfinch60)
No better outlook could be posted than your poems on finding the best in...
June 20th, 2021 13:23 - curl up (Dusk arising)
Dear Friend - I do hope these words are not from experience - your poetic...
June 19th, 2021 08:01 - VILLAGE OF LOVE (Short story) (PrEm Ji)
That village of Love sounds like a magical world Prem but what a tragedy...
June 16th, 2021 16:19 - Pride (An Acrostic, written in June, “Pride Month”) (AuburnScribbler)
I have always loved the phrase Dusk has used in his comment - to live and...
June 16th, 2021 16:01 - a walk (Dusk arising)
OOooh love that expression Dusk - - \"cornfield nakedness\" takes me back...
June 16th, 2021 15:51 - Heart Hearing - Wisdom Series (5) (Orchidee)
Wisdom is the pearl in anyone\'s crown - - a good read Orchi.
June 16th, 2021 15:47 - DIBBLES AND DABBLES (2) (Michael Edwards)
A truth indeed Michael and good to see you back posting your wonderful...
June 16th, 2021 05:06 - spoken (Dusk arising)
Ooooh this touches such tender heart-strings - - a fine love story and...
June 15th, 2021 13:34 - the operation (Dusk arising)
A terrible ouch of a write dear Dusk - your pen described well the...
June 14th, 2021 13:54 - Clutter Land (Jerry Reynolds)
Agree wholeheartedly Jerry that love can turn somersaults without any...
June 14th, 2021 13:51 - Dog Bowls and Therapy? (A Documentary) (AuburnScribbler)
Could just imagine the rumpus when doggie owners gathered for liquid and...
June 14th, 2021 13:47 - Untitled - XLIII (SureshG)
You introduce here the regular need to make peace with body, mind and soul...
June 14th, 2021 13:41 - Nothing but a Keepsake (Neville)
What might have been is covered here with veils of maybe and faded...
June 14th, 2021 13:38 - Between the place.. (Sandra)
A beautiful first read of my day Sandra - thank you sincerely for this...
June 14th, 2021 02:39 - A Quilt Of Memories (Jayasree)
A wonderfully inventive piece of imagery Jay which tells how memory should...
June 14th, 2021 02:37 - Fog (Jerry Reynolds)
A fantastic three lines which sets minds like mine sighing for such haiku...
June 13th, 2021 16:12 - I Should o\' Known (All Along) (Alan .S. Jeeves)
Great rhyming Alan and such an engaging tale of wisdom after the event -...
June 13th, 2021 16:10 - Dorian Gray (SureshG)
Ah - clever last line in this look at the changes a portrait displays...
June 13th, 2021 14:34 - the artist (Dusk arising)
The read of this re-visited poem tugs at heart-strings with vivid...
June 13th, 2021 11:33 - Overcome (Neville)
Sensually as any and hotter than this scorching Sunday - - ah yes - I...
June 13th, 2021 10:07 - Seizing Moments (Neville)
A quick second read of this truly engaging piece highlights a different...
June 13th, 2021 03:19 - Seizing Moments (Neville)
Am smiling again at how you build up with imagery a feel of intrigue as...
June 12th, 2021 05:23 - Untitled - XLII (SureshG)
You have just ticked every box in identifying real poetry my friend.
June 11th, 2021 16:12 - Emotions Pour Out. (Goldfinch60)
It shows you have heart dear Andy that even a book can bring out many...
June 11th, 2021 16:10 - Exercise Exhortation (Orchidee)
Good read Orchi.
June 11th, 2021 16:04 - to sleep (Dusk arising)
Hoping your hospital visit went well today Dusk and this little anecdote...
June 11th, 2021 16:03 - Love’s Reach (Accidental Poet)
You poem this aspect of love so well A.P. and indeed the animal kingdom...
June 11th, 2021 15:46 - Unscathed (Jerry Reynolds)
Yes even crossing that river of woe former loves however old survive in...
June 11th, 2021 15:37 - Clickety Clack Life (Saxon Crow)
An awe- inspiring read Sax -- loved the part where you cant choose the...
June 11th, 2021 05:08 - Nowhere Left to Bleed (Neville)
Whooa - A strongly put set of reasons to say a firm Goodbye to love gone...
June 11th, 2021 01:29
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