Comments on community poems by Goldfinch60
- A PLEB\'S WHAT I AM (Michael Edwards)
I too am not a pleb, in my life I have music, words, art, nature and the...
July 21st, 2019 15:46 - Witness To The World (Orchidee)
Good write but I no longer believe that the Christian philosophy is right,...
July 21st, 2019 01:32 - but unbeaten (Dusk arising)
Your beating heart is still beating and will take you past that hesitancy...
July 21st, 2019 01:14 - A poem about me (WildMoonChild)
That never ending journey is giving you the experience in life that will...
July 21st, 2019 01:12 - Rival (Jabberwocky)
May that freedom give you a new path of wonder and joy.
July 21st, 2019 01:09 - I no longer deny (Poetic Dan)
We all have troubles within us and perhaps we impose them on others in...
July 21st, 2019 01:07 - SENSE OF COLOUR ? ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A COLLABORATION POEM (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Colours in our life are so important and so wonderful.
July 21st, 2019 01:00 - Restless (Mary73223)
I am sure that someone will be with you soon.
July 21st, 2019 00:58 - Of Loneliness (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Nothing prepares you for the sound of an empty house.
July 21st, 2019 00:42 - strange land (Dusk arising)
Good write d a. Pure anarchy would work but so would communism in its...
July 21st, 2019 00:40 - Encouraging Exhortation (Orchidee)
Good one Orchi.
July 21st, 2019 00:30 - SATURDAY (Michael Edwards)
So true Michael, every day is Saturday for some of us, we have earned
July 20th, 2019 00:52 - Two Souls (Chagrined)
That love will forever be with you in your memories.
July 20th, 2019 00:51 - Ocean freedom (Crystal Hope)
That freedom takes you to beautiful places.
July 20th, 2019 00:48 - Signal loss (The_bleak_visionary)
May that silence bring peace to the world.
July 20th, 2019 00:47 - Denoument (Jabberwocky)
May that truth become a distant memory soon and your life moves on into...
July 20th, 2019 00:45 - A ballet, by Full Moon (Suresh)
I totally agree with Kevin, it is a beautiful piece of writing and so...
July 20th, 2019 00:43 - The catapult clause (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Love transcends all.
July 20th, 2019 00:42 - Faithful Flock (Orchidee)
Good one Orchi.
July 19th, 2019 02:08 - JULY 1969 ~ MAN ON THE MOON ! ? ~ BRIAN & ANGELA (ANGELA & BRIAN)
There is another theory that the first words Neil Armstrong said were...
July 19th, 2019 01:40 - Never lose faith in yourself (Poetic Dan)
That path of no regret will always be ahead of you Dan.
July 19th, 2019 01:37 - A SHEDFUL OF 575s (6) (Michael Edwards)
Very telling write Michael.
July 19th, 2019 01:36 - Shade (Jabberwocky)
Good emotive write.
July 18th, 2019 15:42 - THE OLD PIANO TUNER ~ BRIAN & ANGELA ~ FIVE TUNED QUATRAINS ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
The last stringed piano we had was a tone flat on all strings, the piano...
July 18th, 2019 15:41 - I\'m back from dusk till dawn (Poetic Dan)
Very good positive write Dan.
July 18th, 2019 15:37 - Progressing Possibilities (Orchidee)
May that light be there for us forever.
July 18th, 2019 15:36 - A SHEDFUL OF 575s (5) (Michael Edwards)
\"We will remember them.\"
July 18th, 2019 01:12 - Untamed (Christina8)
The heart is a strongbox without a key to unlock those memories.
July 18th, 2019 01:11 - The Landscape of You (SerenWise)
Beautiful write.
July 18th, 2019 01:09 - Not Knowing (Suresh)
Those words of salvation must be brought to the fore for all people. All...
July 18th, 2019 00:47 - Vanity is gone (Poetic Dan)
May that smile never leave your face and your positivity be forever with...
July 18th, 2019 00:45 - THE WHO (FineB)
Yes I was there when they first appeared, great group.
July 18th, 2019 00:41 - To your new life (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Thank you so much Andrew (Great Name), your words are very much...
July 18th, 2019 00:29 - The prowess (Fearlessstars)
That mystery will be secure in our beliefs of life to infinity.
July 17th, 2019 04:29 - UNDERGROUND EXPLORATION ~ CAVING ~ BRIAN ~ FIVE QUATRAINS (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Only been in a few caves in organised trips, always interesting to view.
July 17th, 2019 02:43 - Church Community (Orchidee)
Good one Orchi.
July 17th, 2019 02:41 - A SHEDFUL OF 575s (4) (Michael Edwards)
Proverbial pain,
As the rock goes up,
Only to roll down.
July 17th, 2019 01:28 - One Last Tear (Christina8)
May those tears of sorrow be tears of joy in that majestic place
July 17th, 2019 00:43 - It Never Goes Away. (Tayama)
Very emotive write.
July 17th, 2019 00:40 - TEN MOST POPULAR SPORTS ~ ANGELA ~ A DECET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Of those you have mentioned I have played table tennis (county level), ...
July 17th, 2019 00:32 - Castaway (Jurnee)
May your painting of the sky in your words flow on forever.
Welcome to...
July 17th, 2019 00:24 - Heartbeat & 4D of rainbow dragonfly (Poetic Dan)
Wonderful write. The birth of your child will be wondrous for all. Your...
July 17th, 2019 00:21 - PAINTED LADIES. (Fay Slimm.)
Painted ladies are amazing creatures in our wonderful world. That world...
July 17th, 2019 00:16 - Locusts Limited (Orchidee)
Good one Orchi but I do take issue with the Tune Doves of Peace they are...
July 16th, 2019 02:14 - No Hint of An End (Neville)
May those words never cease.
July 16th, 2019 01:13 - long poem part 78 (Jon Nakapalau)
That day will never happen, your dreams will always believe in you.
July 16th, 2019 01:11 - Twelve rounds (Poetic Dan)
You must always remember that last line. You need a plaque on the wall...
July 16th, 2019 01:11 - ENGLAND ~ WORLD CRICKET CHAMPIONS 2019 ! ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A 7 7 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
A great afternoons sport, I was watching both the cricket and the...
July 16th, 2019 01:08 - The Whimbrel (Neville)
Brilliant write Neville, I have been bird watching all my life and have...
July 16th, 2019 01:06 - Witch (Sylviasearcher)
Very good write Sylvia and as Neville said final two lines say it all.
July 16th, 2019 00:45 - WINGED. (Fay Slimm.)
That love can give freedom to all our hearts.
July 16th, 2019 00:41 - A SHEDFUL OF 575s (3) (Michael Edwards)
Wise words Michael. Children are so innocent.
July 15th, 2019 01:49 - A ballet (Suresh)
Beautiful balletic write Suresh.
July 15th, 2019 00:27 - She Kissed My Cheek. (Kevin browne)
May that harmony never die.
July 15th, 2019 00:26 - Miss Me Hard (Neville)
Ships that keep passing in the night.
July 15th, 2019 00:25 - Quiet Love (Christina8)
That love needs no words but we always write about it.
July 15th, 2019 00:24 - Loyalty Limited (Orchidee)
Good one Orchi.
July 15th, 2019 00:23 - A SHEDFUL OF 575s (2) (Michael Edwards)
That painting is sublime - it is amazing what wonders can be conceived...
July 14th, 2019 01:13 - Maybe if... (Suresh)
If only? the most profound question of all. If only?
July 14th, 2019 01:11 - pick me up (Jon Nakapalau)
Those little things are so meaningful.
July 14th, 2019 01:10 - Wanderers tale (Rithimus)
Yes looking at all around you is so important.
Welcome to MPS.
July 14th, 2019 01:09 - LANGUAGE OF ROSES ~ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A 4 - 10 Free Verse Sonnet (ANGELA & BRIAN)
We have a rose bush in the garden that was Joyce\'s mothers, she died in...
July 14th, 2019 00:53 - I sit by me again offering a hand (Poetic Dan)
When you face your fears and stand up to them they no longer become fears...
July 14th, 2019 00:51 - Sunflowers (Neville)
Such a wonderful sight to see and equally wonderful words to accompany it.
July 14th, 2019 00:47 - Temple Tenancy (Orchidee)
Good one Orchi.
July 14th, 2019 00:33 - FIRST SIGHTING (Michael Edwards)
Those sights are so rare.
No cuckoos heard this year - yet.
July 14th, 2019 00:32 - The Truth Of It (SerenWise)
Beautiful words Serenwise.
July 14th, 2019 00:31 - Action (Suresh)
May those actions never stop.
July 13th, 2019 00:35 - conversation with a weed (Jon Nakapalau)
A weed is any plant in the wrong place.
July 13th, 2019 00:35 - THE SUNFLOWER. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful write about a wondrous flower.
July 13th, 2019 00:34 - THINK (Michael Edwards)
Bikers can be a right pain in the proverbial. When any occasionally stop...
July 13th, 2019 00:33 - Life is the plan (Poetic Dan)
As we go through life we learn and you are learning quickly that the...
July 13th, 2019 00:30 - Darkness Dismissed (Orchidee)
The light is forever with us.
July 13th, 2019 00:27 - Servitude (Suresh)
Very true.
July 12th, 2019 01:01 - 100 books you must not read before you die #28 (Jon Nakapalau)
I have a list of books that i \'should\' read, it gets longer all the
July 12th, 2019 01:00 - DREAM A LITTLE DREAM OF ME ! ANGELA ~ FOUR RHYMING QUATRAINS (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Good loving write Angela, October (great month) will soon be here and you...
July 12th, 2019 00:46 - Sheep Supplications (Orchidee)
Good one Orchi.
July 12th, 2019 00:44 - Trying Hard (Suresh)
All we can do in life is try our best.
July 11th, 2019 00:56 - THE VILLAGE HALL PACKAGE DEAL (Michael Edwards)
I know that place, but I won’t be able to book it until the week after...
July 11th, 2019 00:55 - No longer (Ocean)
Beautiful emotive write Ocean.
Welcome to MPS.
July 11th, 2019 00:51 - POP IN FOR A PIZZA ! ~ BRIAN ~ A 2 4 5 3 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Now I am hungry!!
July 10th, 2019 05:12 - Exposed (Suresh)
So very true.
July 10th, 2019 05:10 - PLANNED. (Fay Slimm.)
The wonder of nature can be so strong and so inspiring Fay.
July 10th, 2019 05:10 - Laudable Light (Orchidee)
The light is always with us.
July 10th, 2019 01:48 - Baby girl (Song for my daughter) (IndisClaire)
I am sure your daughter will have a wonderful joyful life.
July 10th, 2019 01:47 - BELLS RING OUT (Michael Edwards)
I vaguely recall The Pogues but do not know them well.
I cannot deal with...
July 10th, 2019 00:50 - Tribute to Billie - A Future Angel (Nafis Light)
Wonderful tribute to her.
July 10th, 2019 00:43 - Alone in the Dust (Chagrined)
Wonderful write but that darkness can be overcome as the light is always...
July 10th, 2019 00:16 - long poem part 50 (Jon Nakapalau)
Wonderful imaginative write.
July 10th, 2019 00:15 - Invoke II (Suresh)
May that knowledge lead you to a place where death has no bounds.
July 10th, 2019 00:10 - Integrity (Poetic Dan)
Integrity is one of the finest things we can have within ourselves and you...
July 10th, 2019 00:08 - TENDED. (Fay Slimm.)
May that flower bloom into the beauty as shown by your words Fay.
July 10th, 2019 00:05 - THE CARBON CYCLE ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ AN ACROSTIC SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Homo sapiens is using carbon based products to destroy our planet, why...
July 10th, 2019 00:04 - Lantern Light (Orchidee)
Good one Orchi. Always follow that light.
July 10th, 2019 00:01 - blue eyes (Dusk arising)
Very emotive write.
July 9th, 2019 01:24 - DYING EMBERS (Michael Edwards)
As each of those embers die during the night be assured that they will...
July 9th, 2019 01:04 - Among The Stars (Christina8)
That love will go on forever Christina, infinity is awaiting you both.
July 9th, 2019 00:58 - i have been parking my car as of late (Jon Nakapalau)
That manna will fill you with the love of life.
July 9th, 2019 00:57 - Forever Tears (Heather Hoffman)
Very emotive write but that erosion will cease and life will be wonderful....
July 9th, 2019 00:56 - Love Is........ (Suresh)
So very true Suresh.
July 9th, 2019 00:51
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