Comments on community poems by orchidee
- Praise Prosperity (Orchidee)
Thanks DS.
April 2nd, 2017 11:46 - Praise Prosperity (Orchidee)
The idea of \'dance\' may not appeal to everyone. it can be a literal...
April 2nd, 2017 11:34 - If Only. (Fay Slimm.)
A fine write.
April 2nd, 2017 11:06 - Butterflies (WriteBeLight)
Lovely write and presentation. They flutter-by briefly in life. Will you...
April 2nd, 2017 11:04 - How Did That Happen? (Goldfinch60)
Coooeee, me headache\'s gone now! That\'ll teach me to think too deeply...
April 2nd, 2017 11:01 - A SUNDAY SMILE (Michael Edwards)
Good write and great pic. If we were fussy, we could insist Haikus MUST be...
April 2nd, 2017 03:12 - WHERE YOU THERE ............. ? (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A fine write! We were there in a sense - not physically in person, of...
April 2nd, 2017 03:08 - By His Grace I Get Joy (Pintu Mahakul)
Oh wow! I see it, or rather I see Him in your face pic. Wonderful write!
April 2nd, 2017 02:33 - On hearing of a dead baby found in a river (Bryso)
Thoughtful write. I read of a so-called comedian making jokes about dead...
April 2nd, 2017 02:31 - Leviticus (Gerrylegister)
I can follow the holiness theme through this. I feel we adapt, or omit, or...
April 2nd, 2017 02:28 - How Did That Happen? (Goldfinch60)
You were moved in your subconscious, I think. Some deep movement, and the...
April 2nd, 2017 02:26 - How Did That Happen? (Goldfinch60)
It was a sort of finale for that Orchestra. It struck some chord within...
April 2nd, 2017 02:24 - To Infinity and Beyond. (Goldfinch60)
Bit of hyperbole = exaggerated statement of \'infinity and beyond\'?!...
April 1st, 2017 01:51 - Salvation Sureties (Orchidee)
Oops don\'t shoot me down in flames. I corrected a typo. I put \'Chris\'...
March 31st, 2017 13:52 - Salvation Sureties (Orchidee)
It\'s difficult Soul. I may give to Africa, etc. I don\'t know the person...
March 31st, 2017 13:50 - Donkey (Tony36)
Good write.
March 31st, 2017 10:07 - Lost in a Book. (Goldfinch60)
Cooeeee G. If I call cooee will I find you?! I wish I would shut up! lol.
March 31st, 2017 02:19 - Burgeoning. (Fay Slimm.)
Descriptive write. Erm, I recall a flurry of snow in late April last year....
March 30th, 2017 10:46 - BBQ (Tony36)
Sounds good, smells good - but not much garlic for me, thanks!
March 30th, 2017 10:44 - Aching With Pleasure. (Goldfinch60)
A fine write.
March 30th, 2017 02:31 - Children (Tony36)
Good write T.
March 29th, 2017 10:52 - Now. (Goldfinch60)
Just for now - right now - a big coooeeee! lol. Why don\'t I shut up now?!
March 29th, 2017 10:01 - Changing. (Fay Slimm.)
Good write. Cooeee F. lol.
March 29th, 2017 09:59 - Why I\'m An Atheist (An Open Letter To God) (Silent Nights)
It seems you do still believe, in your closing lines. Otherwise you may...
March 29th, 2017 09:54 - Why I\'m An Atheist (An Open Letter To God) (Silent Nights)
This should be for 18+ I think. Have you ticked the box for that? Not...
March 29th, 2017 09:51 - SOLAR SYSTEM HAIKU ~ PART 2 (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A fine write.
March 29th, 2017 04:46 - Gas Bag (WriteBeLight)
Oh lol good write.
March 29th, 2017 04:45 - Now. (Goldfinch60)
Good write. Let\'s not get into some tangle about whether \'now\' exists...
March 29th, 2017 02:11 - Salvation Safety (Orchidee)
Thanks all.
March 29th, 2017 02:08 - Love (Tony36)
Lovely write.
March 28th, 2017 10:16 - After A Sip. (Fay Slimm.)
No please! It\'s me joking! let\'s not have a deep theological /...
March 28th, 2017 08:54 - After A Sip. (Fay Slimm.)
Good write. I\'m permanent of course. Well, I keep saying I\'m millions...
March 28th, 2017 08:53 - SOLAR SYSTEM HAIKU ~ PART 1 (BRIAN & ANGELA)
But you is only on Part 1 - you said so in the title! I wasn\'t expecting...
March 28th, 2017 08:50 - Nelson Went To Battle. (Goldfinch60)
Oohh heehee. Were we there? Did I muck it up again, for Nelsons\' eye,...
March 28th, 2017 02:03 - Glory Graces (Orchidee)
Thanks all.
March 28th, 2017 02:02 - To a Slut on Mothers Day (Jabberwocky)
Sorry that was your experience. I know - it\'s usually \'nice\' loving,...
March 27th, 2017 02:36 - So Alone. (Goldfinch60)
Sensitive story. I saw a programme - someone faked an illness supposedly,...
March 27th, 2017 02:34 - SEEING GOD IN EVERYTHING ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Yep, I would believe in a pencil tree in me dafter moments! Well, it\'s...
March 26th, 2017 11:50 - Got Game (WriteBeLight)
A fine write and presentation.
March 26th, 2017 11:45 - Mother\'s Day poem (Thehara age 10) (Thehara)
Good write.
March 26th, 2017 11:43 - Fear of Rejection (JustABird)
Good write. Sometimes it\'s just writer\'s block though - or painter\'s...
March 26th, 2017 11:42 - Difference. (Fay Slimm.)
Good write, descriptive and eloquent.
March 26th, 2017 03:17 - The Past is Another Country. (Goldfinch60)
A fine write.
March 26th, 2017 03:13 - Communing Contemplations (Orchidee)
The clip seems to be on a different theme to the words I know to this...
March 25th, 2017 11:18 - Close Your Eyes (Dakotah Lavender)
Good write.
March 25th, 2017 10:56 - A List For That (WriteBeLight)
Good write. You got those lists?! lol.
March 25th, 2017 10:54 - Suffering Sustenance (Orchidee)
Couple of tweaks made, to give more of the sense of the words.
March 25th, 2017 07:24 - I Wonder. (Goldfinch60)
I sort of knew you might reply in that way - no regrets, but contentment,...
March 25th, 2017 06:38 - FIVE FRUITY HAIKU A DAY ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Chocolate in Lent? It\'s from pagan origins anyway (see comments on my...
March 25th, 2017 06:36 - FIVE FRUITY HAIKU A DAY ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I\'m gonna be naughty, but refined. Otherwise I make myself swoon! heehee....
March 25th, 2017 06:33 - Suffering Sustenance (Orchidee)
Thanks Soul. I tend to observe days, etc, but not scrupulously. I don\'t...
March 25th, 2017 06:30 - I Wonder. (Goldfinch60)
Also ... I wonder if I should have another porky pie or sherry! I always...
March 25th, 2017 03:06 - I Wonder. (Goldfinch60)
Good write. I hope the wonder isn\'t in a negative sense of \'I regret\'...
March 25th, 2017 03:05 - Conceding. (Fay Slimm.)
A fine write. Cooeee F.
March 24th, 2017 11:52 - TERRORISM TODAY ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
And yet I heard a statement from a monk-type person of long ago: \'What...
March 24th, 2017 03:59 - TERRORISM TODAY ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I\'m going to make a strong comment, about a recent person passing away....
March 24th, 2017 03:57 - A Man of Infinite Leisure - alternate version. (Goldfinch60)
I\'m \'doomed\' to be a man of infinite porkies and sherries. Not that it...
March 24th, 2017 03:55 - Prospering People (Orchidee)
Thanks all. Soul - I mean that Shropshire is part of England. Don\'t know...
March 24th, 2017 03:53 - Supermarket Meany (WriteBeLight)
Good write.
March 23rd, 2017 15:37 - MY POETIC SIDE OK ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A fine write. Ohh I know - not 13 lines or 15 lines - must be 14! heehee.
March 23rd, 2017 04:58 - A Man of Infinite Leisure. (Goldfinch60)
And now in retirement you have so much to do, you don\'t know how you...
March 23rd, 2017 03:01 - THREE COUPLETS (Michael Edwards)
A fine write and painting!
March 22nd, 2017 15:21 - Palms Processings (Orchidee)
This\'ll give ya all enough time to process in to church, or wherever ya...
March 22nd, 2017 09:57 - The Unwritten Book. (Goldfinch60)
Was you an analytical chemist? But we was there in 1066, among other stuff...
March 22nd, 2017 09:55 - The Unwritten Book. (Goldfinch60)
That\'d be write for sure - a world where reality ceases to exist. Though...
March 22nd, 2017 02:51 - The Unwritten Book. (Goldfinch60)
A fine write. I was only thinking the same thing myself - I must write a...
March 22nd, 2017 02:50 - Creation Celebration (Orchidee)
In the original hymn, particularly near the end, a couple of words seem to...
March 21st, 2017 11:44 - Stirrings. (Fay Slimm.)
A fine write. I\'m in despair also, if I have no pork pies. I wish I would...
March 21st, 2017 11:13 - World Poetry Day ~ IT\'S SPRING ~ A Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I\'m gonna chuck cold water on it - erm, it\'s bit chilly at times still!...
March 21st, 2017 03:27 - Towards That Place. (Goldfinch60)
It\'s true though. We may think \'Aww I really wanted to do such-and-such...
March 21st, 2017 03:25 - Towards That Place. (Goldfinch60)
A fine write. To be daft - Oh I know, it\'s a bother when I can\'t find my...
March 21st, 2017 03:23 - Falling Faith. (Goldfinch60)
Yet some churches I think: Why bother to have faith? if it seems to just...
March 20th, 2017 03:58 - Falling Faith. (Goldfinch60)
It\'s difficult. Easy to give \'pat answers\', saying He knows, He cares,...
March 20th, 2017 03:55 - I Wonder. (Fay Slimm.)
A fine write.
March 19th, 2017 11:30 - Ski Trip (WriteBeLight)
A fine write and trip. You gone ski-ing there? When will ya be back?! lol.
March 19th, 2017 07:07 - God Almighty. (Kevin browne)
Don\'t know if it helps, or another human endeavour - I read a short book...
March 19th, 2017 06:48 - Time No Longer. (Goldfinch60)
Oops one more, to be daft - there\'s time no longer for me to wait for my...
March 19th, 2017 04:36 - God Almighty. (Kevin browne)
Easy for me, or anyone, to just say this. Well, anyone can SAY anything, I...
March 19th, 2017 04:33 - LET US ALL PRAISE GOD ! A (6 4 4) Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A fine write. Echoes of Psalm 103 in it!
March 19th, 2017 04:28 - Time No Longer. (Goldfinch60)
Also there is \'time, times, and half a time\'. Some see this as symbolic;...
March 19th, 2017 04:24 - Time No Longer. (Goldfinch60)
A very fine write. There\'s a bit where it says there is silence for half...
March 19th, 2017 04:23 - Touch Someone\'s Life (Iamwoman)
Good write.
March 18th, 2017 12:07 - Dave The Cat (Philip)
Also - we\'ve had various cats. We semi-adopted next-door\'s cat at he...
March 18th, 2017 12:05 - Dave The Cat (Philip)
Ahhh a fine poem. Not an original joke from me, but seen on a pets...
March 18th, 2017 12:03 - Noga Pants (WriteBeLight)
And .... oohh I dunno. I was about to look down on someone in jeans, then...
March 18th, 2017 12:02 - Noga Pants (WriteBeLight)
Good write lol. With church, it may depend what sort of group it is -...
March 18th, 2017 12:00 - SAINTLY PATRICK ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A good and informative write. Ahh, is that why there were no snakes in...
March 18th, 2017 11:56 - Golden Girl. (Goldfinch60)
Good write. I\'m gonna sing wot Soul wrote - oh no! Meeoowwwoo, that\'s
March 18th, 2017 11:50 - Salvation Security (Orchidee)
Thanks all. I suppose they are hymn-poems / psalms / prayers - all or some...
March 18th, 2017 11:48 - AN ABCDARIAN POEM ~ 26 WORDS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A great write. I tried one with 26 lines, starting A,B,C, etc. There\'s...
March 17th, 2017 02:57 - Music Conquers All. (Goldfinch60)
Wonderful write. Moments of heaven!
March 17th, 2017 02:55 - Truth\'s Trust........ (Fay Slimm.)
Poetically expressed - a fine write!
March 16th, 2017 12:44 - GOD\'S LOVE FOR EVERYONE ! A Free Verse Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A fine write. Some may be bound to bring up, e.g. But there\'s people...
March 16th, 2017 12:42 - Unlucky day (Vvnrose)
Oh I know, it\'s a pain! When you\'re doing \'this\', someone may want you...
March 16th, 2017 12:38 - Odd, (JJCooke)
Good write.
March 16th, 2017 05:06 - u (Frenwickrandolph)
A fine write.
March 16th, 2017 05:05 - The Illusion So Bright (Letmefly.2017)
Good write.
March 16th, 2017 05:02 - Dinner in the Dark. (Goldfinch60)
A fine write. Oohh is that you in disguise?!
March 16th, 2017 03:01 - Immortality (Niallprideaux)
It\'s here already - the living dead, or the wooden dead. Just see...
March 15th, 2017 11:40 - Up, Up And Away? (WriteBeLight)
Well, my advice is about as helpful as how to find a sewing needle among a...
March 15th, 2017 11:03
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