Comments on community poems by Louis Gibbs
- Barriers (M.E.M.)
A fine metaphor on all-important hope, M.E.M. Welcome to MPS!
October 16th, 2017 11:25 - They Will Be Different (John Prophet)
Astute observation, JG. They are the hope of the future. Good write!
October 15th, 2017 20:23 - Grief at the Door (PACollin)
A tragic, well expressed poem of loss, PA! The reader shares the sad...
October 15th, 2017 11:58 - Fine line (Georgiacarter)
A fine introductory poem of disappointment in a relationship, Georgia....
October 15th, 2017 10:27 - arthur and alice (Frank Prem)
A beautiful and tender work of art, this one, Frank. You\'ve outdone...
October 15th, 2017 10:22 - Orchi\'s Travels. (Goldfinch60)
Wow! An epic tale you\'ve penned here, Goldie. Fun read.
October 15th, 2017 07:29 - THE POETRY OF JESUS ~ A Rhyming Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Never thought of the bible as a book of poetry, or of Jesus as a poet....
October 15th, 2017 07:21 - All of the Above (FredPeyer)
Your words are both inspired and inspiring, Fred! A lovelier tribute to...
October 15th, 2017 07:15 - Owl-Sound. (Fay Slimm.)
A lovely ode to a magical creature, in my mind. I once had a unique...
October 15th, 2017 07:08 - Narrow Escape. (Goldfinch60)
MPS is compelling, I agree. Nice write, Goldie.
October 14th, 2017 08:25 - OH MY ! POETIC SIDE ~ A 2 2 6 4 Rhyming Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A fine tribute to this splendid site, Brian. I must agree completely.
October 14th, 2017 08:21 - Your wee mate (Renzi)
You travel a difficult trail this lifetime, sweet and talented one! At war...
October 14th, 2017 08:04 - I don\'t believe what I believe (Poetic Dan)
We conceive, believe, then create. Your fine poem says it more eloquently,...
October 13th, 2017 14:21 - The Rain Crow (W c)
Good educational write, WC!
October 13th, 2017 10:26 - The Magic of Mozart. (Goldfinch60)
I saw a special on Mozart a while back. Interesting how a guy could be...
October 13th, 2017 10:24 - Friday (Accidental Poet)
Well described process of the time spent in our working years, but believe...
October 13th, 2017 09:58 - unravelling after (Frank Prem)
Exquisite description of the process of good writing, Frank! Let the muse...
October 13th, 2017 09:52 - Rise Above (Christina8)
Hold these strong thoughts, Christina ... kick anxiety in the butt! Well...
October 13th, 2017 09:48 - Out Of My Hands (LukeCoomer)
A strong, emotional piece, well delivered, Luke! Displays the wisdom...
October 13th, 2017 09:44 - Faded Flower (WL Schuett)
A mournful picture painted here so well, WL, both in words and by brush....
October 13th, 2017 09:39 - In The Making. (Fay Slimm.)
As a once-wood worker, I can hear the music of which you speak in this...
October 13th, 2017 09:35 - Together Again (FredPeyer)
Indeed! All of our loved ones await us. Something I really look forward...
October 13th, 2017 00:09 - Dark Delight. (Fay Slimm.)
Sounds like you had a pleasant youth, there by the sea? Lovely reflective...
October 12th, 2017 08:10 - There Be Monsters (John Prophet)
And in some lifetimes, we see monsters in the mirror. We all take...
October 12th, 2017 08:07 - A Mother’s Heart (Accidental Poet)
A fine tribute to the idealized mother, AP!
October 12th, 2017 08:03 - difficult departure (Frank Prem)
This one was a bit hard for me to see through all the smoke. Abstract, I...
October 12th, 2017 08:00 - New Day - Haiku. (Goldfinch60)
You\'ve improved my usual opinion of Haikus with this one, Goldie. Well...
October 12th, 2017 07:51 - Fast Lane (FredPeyer)
Sounds like advice on the proper way to ride a motorcycle? Just kidding....
October 12th, 2017 07:47 - My kind of different (Ykeb16)
\"Every morning I fit the alien into a foreign bag\" ... I like that, and...
October 11th, 2017 15:24 - 9 of Diamonds (Edthepoet)
Well done enjoyable poem, Ed! If I might suggest a correction that caused...
October 11th, 2017 11:20 - materinski jezik - the mother tongue (Frank Prem)
This is a classic, Frank! Truly enjoyed it, and envy the advantage you...
October 11th, 2017 09:52 - Hill of Life. (Goldfinch60)
A beautiful metaphor on your life\'s journey, Goldie, in which you are...
October 11th, 2017 09:24 - Just One Wish (Accidental Poet)
That chance to share the love between you will come again, to be sure....
October 11th, 2017 09:13 - This Too. (Fay Slimm.)
Congratulations on the strength and insight you have gained around loss,...
October 11th, 2017 09:03 - Humanism And Spiritualism (John Prophet)
Yes, the Golden Rule is the key to harmony. Such a simple concept, yet so...
October 11th, 2017 08:46 - Who Needs Sleeping Pills. (Wallace)
Would that all my dreams were that peaceful and calming. A fine reflective...
October 11th, 2017 00:25 - White Lie (FredPeyer)
This can\'t be a reference to the current political stage, a such...
October 11th, 2017 00:22 - Comprehension (Mafi)
Deep exploratory thoughts in this fine submittal, Oper. Makes one reflect...
October 11th, 2017 00:11 - Ghosts Of My Past (LukeCoomer)
It\'s called being human. Don\'t let it define the present. Good write,...
October 10th, 2017 21:39 - Life After Death (Kaden Hudson)
Stay tuned to this path, and keep asking these questions, Kaden. The...
October 10th, 2017 21:35 - Eavesdropping On Myself (Kurt Philip Behm)
A fine romantic reflection, Kurt! Some feelings never quite die.
October 10th, 2017 16:43 - TOP OF THE MOUNTAIN (Lasergraph)
An inspiring motivational poem, LG. Wise truth spoken herein. Kudos!
October 10th, 2017 10:22 - Extirpation (W c)
We may be the only species capable of self-inflicted extinction....
October 10th, 2017 10:16 - All seasons (Malubotelho)
Heart-breakingly beautiful, Malu! A tender and haunting plea, this one....
October 10th, 2017 10:11 - Playing At Love. (Fay Slimm.)
Good advice, to the young just entering the arena of love especially. Well...
October 10th, 2017 10:02 - Perception. (Goldfinch60)
\"Know thyself\", a worthy and imperative goal, well spoken herein,
October 10th, 2017 09:55 - Still House (FredPeyer)
Ouch! That would cut deep. Glad it came from your fertile imagination....
October 10th, 2017 09:49 - Disruption (John Prophet)
You may have glimpsed the future herein, JG, if we last that long as a...
October 10th, 2017 09:47 - Recognition (FredPeyer)
I\'m struggling with the last four lines, here. Don\'t recognize why yet,...
October 9th, 2017 18:57 - A Musical (Karsten Turrey)
Fine tribute to a form of performance that I fail to appreciate as much as...
October 9th, 2017 10:51 - As we age (Farmerama)
A fine summation of physical life, \'F\'! Welcome to MPS.
October 9th, 2017 09:38 - politika of the pipples (Frank Prem)
Brilliant, Frank! Simply brilliant tribute to poets. And a fine commentary...
October 9th, 2017 09:35 - God\'s Sense of Humour. (Goldfinch60)
Oh, Snap! He got you with that zinger, Goldie. Love the poem, a beauty.
October 9th, 2017 09:24 - Artful. (Fay Slimm.)
As an engineer, I tip my hat to the talent of the spider. Nice tribute to...
October 9th, 2017 09:20 - Poets of MPS (Accidental Poet)
Thank you for this tribute to all the fine poets on MPS! I concur, AP.
October 9th, 2017 09:16 - New Realms (John Prophet)
Science and mathematics, as fascinating and revealing as they are, will...
October 9th, 2017 09:11 - A GENTLE LAND (Michael Edwards)
Mathematic perfection this one. Michael. Very neatly presented.
October 8th, 2017 16:32 - What Kind Of God (John Prophet)
What if, before coming back, we chose where in the spectrum of \"Good\"...
October 7th, 2017 16:40 - Living One Day At A Time (Accidental Poet)
A wise offering, AP! I can appreciate it.
October 7th, 2017 16:06 - We are beautiful (Ella)
Well spoken in this introductory offering, Ebu. Welcome to MPS!
October 7th, 2017 16:02 - MAKE ME MORE LIKE AN APPLE TREE ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A fine ode to the unrelenting pace of nature, and what it can teach us. I...
October 7th, 2017 12:27 - Less Trodden. (Fay Slimm.)
A complete and brilliant course in composing good poetry! So well...
October 7th, 2017 12:14 - Missed (FredPeyer)
A fine metaphor of life\'s many missed opportunities. But yes, many more...
October 7th, 2017 12:04 - Is Opera For Me? (Goldfinch60)
As a vocalist, I do appreciate the fine voices that present opera, but...
October 7th, 2017 11:59 - KIPPERED (Michael Edwards)
I guess the moral here is; Don\'t change your mind about flying in mid...
October 7th, 2017 11:45 - Crevasse (Secondchancesyndrome)
Yes, the current scene is a bit baffling to us of a certain age. Lacking...
October 6th, 2017 16:38 - Life Feels Like Forever (Edthepoet)
Love the \"He cares about\" sequences in this good write. Well done, Ed!
October 6th, 2017 16:30 - tide (Dusk arising)
A beautiful metaphor of love now past, dusk! You paint the scene well in...
October 6th, 2017 16:23 - Night Time Stroll. (Wallace)
Thanks for taking us on a lovely evening stroll, Wallace. Well penned.
October 6th, 2017 16:16 - Meet Your Heroes (LukeCoomer)
Well penned, Luke. The rhyming is smooth, unforced. A lovely tribute to...
October 6th, 2017 15:22 - Tiny Fingers (Katy S.)
I hear as sad story concealed in a metaphor here. A lovely write indeed,...
October 6th, 2017 15:15 - Blue eyes (Malubotelho)
Who wouldn\'t fall for those stunning eyes! A well written tribute to an...
October 6th, 2017 15:10 - Blind (Youngandnaive)
A sweet tribute, Young! Welcome to MPS!
October 6th, 2017 15:06 - The Ten (H.cole23)
Cute poem and well presented, H. Welcome to MPS! I look forward to more.
October 6th, 2017 11:59 - The Best Opera in the World. (Goldfinch60)
A spectacularly portrayed poetic reenactment of a performance anyone...
October 6th, 2017 11:38 - Window To The Universe (Accidental Poet)
Thank you for bring to life for me that which I cannot see, the grand...
October 6th, 2017 11:29 - sweeping (Frank Prem)
A fine metaphor on life well lived, Frank! I appreciate this one
October 6th, 2017 11:21 - PTSD (Christina8)
As a fellow sufferer of PTSD from childhood abuse, I appreciate you...
October 6th, 2017 11:15 - Odds (John Prophet)
Fine probing for truths in this well written piece, JG. I enjoy your work.
October 6th, 2017 11:00 - Empty. (Deadbulb33)
Not familiar with Zachary Nelson, but this is a fine piece. Welcome to...
October 6th, 2017 10:55 - My love. (Kaylie)
A lovely tribute to love, Kaylie. I appreciated it. Welcome to MPS!
October 6th, 2017 10:52 - These Days. (Fay Slimm.)
I feel your heart aching, mourning lost love in this fine piece, Fay....
October 6th, 2017 10:47 - Searching Light (WL Schuett)
Congratulations and condolences on being on the unending path to...
October 6th, 2017 10:30 - Garden Spider (W c)
Not nice to fool with mother nature! Cute poem, WC.
October 6th, 2017 00:21 - Chains (FredPeyer)
Those chains could well tip the scale of buoyancy, Fred. I\'d hesitate...
October 6th, 2017 00:15 - DE MORTUIS NIL NISI BONUM (2) (Michael Edwards)
The undead are stirring, marking the time of a new beginning. Sounds about...
October 6th, 2017 00:13 - A Painters Eye (WL Schuett)
Could also apply to the poet\'s eye, would you say? If our muse isn\'t...
October 5th, 2017 16:16 - Life (Malcom R.)
Sage advice, Malcom. I enjoyed it. Welcome to MPS!
October 5th, 2017 10:47 - Under the stars ✨ (Malubotelho)
A precious depiction of innocent introduction to love, Malu, and your icon...
October 5th, 2017 10:44 - The Medicated Millions (LukeCoomer)
You can\'t let your affliction become your identity! No pill will cure it,...
October 5th, 2017 09:05 - Afraid (John Prophet)
Questioning the belief systems passed down to us would be a very...
October 5th, 2017 05:26 - Taken. (Wallace)
Not a bad way to go, and certainly not a bad poem, Wallace. Good write!
October 5th, 2017 05:19 - Paint\'s Heat. (Fay Slimm.)
A beautiful tribute beautifully framed, Fay ... most pleasantly and...
October 5th, 2017 05:09 - I Want to Meet a Stranger (MALU)
Sounds kinda like what transpires here on MPS ... baring our souls in...
October 5th, 2017 05:01 - Once More Her Hero. (Goldfinch60)
Keep that shining armor polished, good knight! Great tale of rescuing your...
October 5th, 2017 04:47 - Mortality (FredPeyer)
\"From confinement to freedom\", used herein to describe coming into this...
October 5th, 2017 04:40 - The Gravity of Time (Accidental Poet)
\"The gravity of time\" ... A wonderful expression! The entire poem is...
October 5th, 2017 04:15 - Sky Dive (Skyebellasario)
Sounds like a blast, Sky! Have a great time on your birthday. Enjoyed your...
October 4th, 2017 21:45 - What Is Love? (Patricia Ryan)
A beautiful exploration of love in all its many forms, Patricia. Well...
October 4th, 2017 21:35 - Religion Is Philosophy (John Prophet)
Great thoughts expressed in this fine piece, JG. I agree what you say...
October 4th, 2017 16:54
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