Comments on community poems by Louis Gibbs
- Seize and See. (Fay Slimm.)
I too love Eckhart Tolle\'s philosophy, and have read all of his work....
November 30th, 2017 09:27 - Me, Myself, and I (FredPeyer)
I feel your frustration in this one, Fred. The \'path to self\' is a...
November 29th, 2017 21:51 - Found Absent. (Fay Slimm.)
The history of humanity is grim, indeed! Well expressed here, Fay, in all...
November 29th, 2017 15:05 - Fevered Sea. (Goldfinch60)
I too belonged to a poetry group before moving ... a group I helped found,...
November 29th, 2017 15:01 - SUMMER SOLSTICE (Michael Edwards)
A proper painting and a proper poem. Both well expressed, Michael!
November 29th, 2017 14:49 - You (FredPeyer)
This one would work well for a Hallmark Greeting card. Well put poem,...
November 28th, 2017 17:40 - Humanity (FredPeyer)
Beethoven, Helen Keller, Steven Hawking ... all come to mind when reading...
November 28th, 2017 17:35 - What! No Yorkshire!! (Goldfinch60)
Horrible mistake! I see no reason to go on living. But wait ... you...
November 28th, 2017 09:44 - An oldie but a goodie (Renzi)
Hooray, our Renzi is still with us! You, who knows how to wring the most...
November 28th, 2017 09:36 - In Transit. (Fay Slimm.)
\"Eyes with keen poetic insight\" ... I really like that line! Insight is...
November 28th, 2017 09:27 - CHICKS (Michael Edwards)
Made me feel warm and cozy, this one. Like the accompanying sketch, too!
November 27th, 2017 12:08 - one more chances (Frank Prem)
Captivating write, Frank! It held me from beginning to end.
November 27th, 2017 12:03 - Walk To Eternity. (Goldfinch60)
You mirror my thoughts ... I was hoping you had the answers to these...
November 27th, 2017 11:58 - A Thought. (Fay Slimm.)
Wise thoughts, neatly presented, Fay!
November 27th, 2017 11:54 - inside the poem (Frank Prem)
To me, a poet who expresses other than that which is inside him, is simply...
November 26th, 2017 12:05 - Finding Serenity. (Goldfinch60)
Ah, so that is who you are! I thought I recognized you, as a fellow monk...
November 26th, 2017 11:46 - Recharging. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautifully balanced and structured, Fay! Such fine attention to form ......
November 26th, 2017 11:42 - MY SWEET ANGEL ~ FALLEN FROM GRACE ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
So, does this mean you and Angel have parted ways?
November 25th, 2017 09:02 - Timely truths (Casey Raffield)
Congratulations, Casey. Speaking truth is our obligation to ourselves.
November 24th, 2017 15:55 - MAN\'S CONSTRUCT (Michael Edwards)
Where in the world do you come up with so many formal structures of...
November 24th, 2017 09:31 - Build Bridges - Senryu. (Goldfinch60)
If only. Fine write, Goldie.
November 24th, 2017 09:27 - Were I. (Fay Slimm.)
\"Unsettled my sleep ... Uneasy my soul ... Unrested my mind\" ... Things...
November 24th, 2017 09:25 - SHAKESPEARE: THE MISSING LINES (3) (Michael Edwards)
What\'s this? Regarding number four ... A lawyer drawing conclusions...
November 23rd, 2017 10:12 - before winter (Frank Prem)
Having become familiar with your unique current style, I could tell this...
November 23rd, 2017 09:39 - Prison Walls (Goldfinch60)
My heart goes out to you, Goldie. May your love, your music, and your...
November 23rd, 2017 09:33 - Reality? (FredPeyer)
If this were a \'Fusioned\' poem, I would add a last line; \'In fact but a...
November 23rd, 2017 09:28 - Happy Thanksgiving (Accidental Poet)
What wonderful expressions of good will from our poet friends across the...
November 22nd, 2017 17:47 - Expectations (Altruistic_psychopath)
\"It\'s not easy being green\", as Kermit would say. I can relate, AP....
November 22nd, 2017 17:42 - County Line Bar (W c)
Where did you say this bar was? Good write WC!
November 22nd, 2017 17:33 - Hide of the Last Buffalo (Will Shootman)
This is a classic ... a true beauty ... a tribute to the man who...
November 22nd, 2017 17:31 - The Proof (Fay Slimm.)
I love the creative shape of this fine poem, Fay! So well done, so...
November 22nd, 2017 09:47 - Night Sky (FredPeyer)
I\'m afraid I\'m one of the few who do not see the \"Star spangled night...
November 22nd, 2017 09:42 - Morpheus, Where Did You Go? (Goldfinch60)
Yep, been there. More often it seems as time goes by. I guess we find more...
November 22nd, 2017 09:34 - SHAKESPEARE: THE MISSING LINES (2). (Michael Edwards)
Pipe organ or mouth organ ... err, harmonica ... both make for fine music....
November 22nd, 2017 09:29 - male nude (Frank Prem)
\"Don\'t look deep
Inside my eyes
For that is where
My soul lies...
November 22nd, 2017 09:21 - I Am Cloud. (Fay Slimm.)
In fact, the mind can affect clouds, to a degree. I\'ve seen it...
November 21st, 2017 10:55 - SHAKESPEARE: THE MISSING LINES (Michael Edwards)
Who knew the old bard was that hip? Number four is my favorite,...
November 21st, 2017 10:49 - after storm (Frank Prem)
Reminds me of a line from a song, in \'Annie\' I believe ... \"The sun...
November 21st, 2017 10:45 - ONLY GHOSTS AND ANGELS (Michael Edwards)
A bounty of adjectives grace this fine descriptive poetic offering! Well...
November 20th, 2017 10:01 - A New Ending. (Goldfinch60)
\'We live our lives with what we have learned\', indeed! \"Regrets as...
November 20th, 2017 09:55 - Caught. (Fay Slimm.)
Enchanting and well presented, Fay! Brings back childhood memories of awe...
November 20th, 2017 09:45 - SEEKING HAPPINESS ! (RAJ NANDY)
One begins to appreciate the important things in life with aging. Well...
November 20th, 2017 09:40 - witchy wire (Frank Prem)
I once hired one of these gifted \"Dousers\" to find a new well location...
November 20th, 2017 09:32 - Lifes Highway. (Goldfinch60)
Great advice here, Goldie. Good write!
November 19th, 2017 10:44 - THREE ONE-LINERS (Michael Edwards)
The disturbing print feels like my insides in sensory overload ......
November 19th, 2017 08:48 - belle and beau (Frank Prem)
Lovely depiction of the wind making love to a tree, Frank. Shouldn\'t it...
November 19th, 2017 08:41 - Salvator Mundi. (Goldfinch60)
How much more is to be spent in guarding it now ... insuring it ......
November 18th, 2017 09:49 - I Saw Him. (Fay Slimm.)
Nothing in nature fascinates and inspires awe quite like a great cat...
November 18th, 2017 09:32 - child sometimes (Frank Prem)
A beautiful sequential journey through life you take us on here, Frank,...
November 17th, 2017 10:23 - Making Believe. (Fay Slimm.)
And what a sweet way to pass the time it is. The harsh can come later, as...
November 17th, 2017 10:18 - In the Beginning. (Goldfinch60)
I can see this poem describing either \'A life\', or ongoing \'All life\'....
November 17th, 2017 10:11 - MEASURED REASON (Michael Edwards)
\"The doubt that measured reason brings\" to \"A victim of illusions...
November 17th, 2017 10:02 - Tired (FredPeyer)
Congratulations on coming into your own, Fred... the reward after having...
November 17th, 2017 09:42 - The Inventor (FredPeyer)
\"Never again will I be a slave to limitations of my own\" ... Love this...
November 16th, 2017 17:13 - IN PRAISE OF MILK (Michael Edwards)
Love the four-line tribute to \'extract of udder\' here, Michael! So well...
November 16th, 2017 10:54 - Praying For Grandfather (Frank Prem)
A brilliant portrayal here, Frank! Both poignant and humorous at once....
November 16th, 2017 10:49 - In The Moonlight. (Goldfinch60)
Lovely metaphor, Goldie. Cycles of the moon and cycles of life, well...
November 16th, 2017 10:34 - Sunday-Ways. (Fay Slimm.)
A tough life indeed, your poem describes. Those were the days ... I...
November 16th, 2017 10:31 - 1 Year Anniversary on MPS (Poetboy123)
I share your feelings in this fine tribute to MPS, poetboy....
November 14th, 2017 09:10 - ARRIVAL OF SPRING (Michael Edwards)
Can\'t look forward to Spring just yet ... I\'m enjoying Fall too much, my...
November 14th, 2017 08:39 - How Could I Drive It? (Goldfinch60)
Never known for low maintenance or reliability, the Jag is, and always has...
November 14th, 2017 08:31 - Has Anyone Seen My Sanity? (Accidental Poet)
It is probably hanging out with mine somewhere. If you see them first,...
November 14th, 2017 08:25 - Duo Ballet. (Fay Slimm.)
A well formed and delightful one, Fay! You do appreciate nature\'s gifts...
November 14th, 2017 08:21 - Cindy (FredPeyer)
\"the slow smile ....... never reaching her eyes.\" What a great line! You...
November 11th, 2017 08:44 - Never Forget. (Fay Slimm.)
You have portrayed with beauty one of man\'s ugliest pastimes, Fay. War is...
November 11th, 2017 08:32 - Today\'s Poem. (Fay Slimm.)
I have no doubt you have been here many, many times, Fay. An old and wise...
November 10th, 2017 11:28 - THE MERMAIDS SIGH (Michael Edwards)
I\'m in awe of what an artist can evoke with so few lines! The...
November 10th, 2017 11:19 - Life is a Mess (FredPeyer)
Sounds like a hell-of-a party! Clever write, Fred. hope your hang-over...
November 10th, 2017 00:46 - singing broken heart at number 60 (Frank Prem)
A good voice is a blessing to listen to. I don\'t try to sing along, but...
November 9th, 2017 11:00 - Glorious Sunshine (FredPeyer)
Five uplifting short poems I see here, Fred. Can\'t connect them in my...
November 9th, 2017 10:50 - A SHELTERED NOOK (Michael Edwards)
Could have sworn I heard echoes in these three! Must be my imagination....
November 9th, 2017 10:42 - Stepping Off. (Goldfinch60)
Since I\'ve never really known a \'comfort zone\', living outside the box...
November 9th, 2017 10:34 - Wordless. (Fay Slimm.)
\"Speechless contact\", doesn\'t that describe what poetry is? And the...
November 9th, 2017 10:25 - TO HUG ~OR~ NOT TO HUG ? A 4 6 4 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Hugging, as satisfying as it can be, is an invasion of another\'s space...
November 9th, 2017 10:13 - In Memory of Ronnie Blanchard (Accidental Poet)
A fine tribute to a good friend, AP. Well written and moving. Good write!
November 8th, 2017 16:23 - Cracked Window (WL Schuett)
How about an alien life form with its soul on fire, surrounded by...
November 8th, 2017 16:15 - THE GIFT OF TIME (Lasergraph)
A great gift to give a young one, indeed. Well expressed, LG!
November 8th, 2017 11:00 - Summer\'s Climb. (Fay Slimm.)
\'\"Nature is bent on survival\" ... love the line! As we all are, as part...
November 8th, 2017 10:54 - Back With My River. (Goldfinch60)
There is something quite special, even spiritual, about being near water....
November 8th, 2017 10:48 - the bazaar (Frank Prem)
A bazaar poem to fit the bazaar it is set in. Thought-provoking and...
November 8th, 2017 10:37 - ANOTHER CRUDY (Michael Edwards)
Sounds like you got there exactly when you should have. Neither late nor...
November 8th, 2017 10:30 - Cold Rain (FredPeyer)
A strong series of couplets here, Fred. I like this new form you...
November 8th, 2017 10:27 - stirring the soup (Frank Prem)
Ah, the moment of creation. Always wondered how it began. And what a soup...
November 7th, 2017 09:31 - The Actor (FredPeyer)
\"An actor without a play\" ... what a great line! More meaningful to me...
November 7th, 2017 09:17 - Thirty Six Years. (Goldfinch60)
Congratulations, Goldie. Beautiful lady and a beautiful tribute poem!
November 7th, 2017 09:06 - My Forever After. (Goldfinch60)
Good attitude to start a marriage with! Lets hope it works out that way...
November 6th, 2017 09:53 - Realization (FredPeyer)
So much truth about us all in this fine poem, Fred.. Being thrust out of a...
November 6th, 2017 09:47 - New Depths. (Fay Slimm.)
\"The edge of seen and unseen\" ... where all seekers dwell. Listening to...
November 6th, 2017 09:34 - Roses (FredPeyer)
This one captures the stereotypical male quite well, Fred ... sadly. But...
November 5th, 2017 11:04 - Exciting. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful structure and cadence in this one, Fay. Admirable work!
November 5th, 2017 10:52 - Satisfied? (Goldfinch60)
Kudos on being able to access the dark side we all have for this fine...
November 5th, 2017 10:48 - meeting Nola (Frank Prem)
\'The kindness of strangers\' ... I adore the theme, Frank. Beautifully...
November 5th, 2017 10:41 - Life Within Me. (Goldfinch60)
To express is to be alive. Conversely, being alive is expressing. Well...
November 4th, 2017 08:24 - stars in his sleeves (Frank Prem)
Sounds like you outed a star person disguised as a human. Lot of them...
November 4th, 2017 08:19 - Innocence Lost (FredPeyer)
Ah, the power of an alluring woman to destroy a good man. Well portrayed...
November 4th, 2017 08:13 - hair wash on friday nights (Frank Prem)
Amazing how the norm of days past, which we took for granted, evolves....
November 3rd, 2017 09:41 - Clarity of Mind. (Goldfinch60)
When one is taught to believe that a higher power is directing every...
November 3rd, 2017 09:33 - Heydays. (Fay Slimm.)
You paint us an idealic childhood here, Fay, quite beautifully and as only...
November 3rd, 2017 09:14 - THE CLOWN (Michael Edwards)
Ouch! I suppose he will be scheduled for a rectal scaffoldectomy? (Have I...
November 3rd, 2017 08:58 - The Holy Church of Matrimonial Bliss (FredPeyer)
Yes, I used to belong to that church, and remember those services well....
November 3rd, 2017 08:48
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