Comments on community poems by Louis Gibbs

• SUMMER SOLSTICE (Michael Edwards) A proper painting and a proper poem. Both well expressed, Michael!
  November 29th, 2017 14:49
• You (FredPeyer) This one would work well for a Hallmark Greeting card. Well put poem,...
  November 28th, 2017 17:40
• Humanity (FredPeyer) Beethoven, Helen Keller, Steven Hawking ... all come to mind when reading...
  November 28th, 2017 17:35
• What! No Yorkshire!! (Goldfinch60) Horrible mistake! I see no reason to go on living. But wait ... you...
  November 28th, 2017 09:44
• An oldie but a goodie (Renzi) Hooray, our Renzi is still with us! You, who knows how to wring the most...
  November 28th, 2017 09:36
• In Transit. (Fay Slimm.) \"Eyes with keen poetic insight\" ... I really like that line! Insight is...
  November 28th, 2017 09:27
• CHICKS (Michael Edwards) Made me feel warm and cozy, this one. Like the accompanying sketch, too!
  November 27th, 2017 12:08
• one more chances (Frank Prem) Captivating write, Frank! It held me from beginning to end.
  November 27th, 2017 12:03
• Walk To Eternity. (Goldfinch60) You mirror my thoughts ... I was hoping you had the answers to these...
  November 27th, 2017 11:58
• A Thought. (Fay Slimm.) Wise thoughts, neatly presented, Fay!
  November 27th, 2017 11:54
• inside the poem (Frank Prem) To me, a poet who expresses other than that which is inside him, is simply...
  November 26th, 2017 12:05
• Finding Serenity. (Goldfinch60) Ah, so that is who you are! I thought I recognized you, as a fellow monk...
  November 26th, 2017 11:46
• Recharging. (Fay Slimm.) Beautifully balanced and structured, Fay! Such fine attention to form ......
  November 26th, 2017 11:42
• MY SWEET ANGEL ~ FALLEN FROM GRACE ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) So, does this mean you and Angel have parted ways?
  November 25th, 2017 09:02
• Timely truths (Casey Raffield) Congratulations, Casey. Speaking truth is our obligation to ourselves.
  November 24th, 2017 15:55
• MAN\'S CONSTRUCT (Michael Edwards) Where in the world do you come up with so many formal structures of...
  November 24th, 2017 09:31
• Build Bridges - Senryu. (Goldfinch60) If only. Fine write, Goldie.
  November 24th, 2017 09:27
• Were I. (Fay Slimm.) \"Unsettled my sleep ... Uneasy my soul ... Unrested my mind\" ... Things...
  November 24th, 2017 09:25
• SHAKESPEARE: THE MISSING LINES (3) (Michael Edwards) What\'s this? Regarding number four ... A lawyer drawing conclusions...
  November 23rd, 2017 10:12
• before winter (Frank Prem) Having become familiar with your unique current style, I could tell this...
  November 23rd, 2017 09:39
• Prison Walls (Goldfinch60) My heart goes out to you, Goldie. May your love, your music, and your...
  November 23rd, 2017 09:33
• Reality? (FredPeyer) If this were a \'Fusioned\' poem, I would add a last line; \'In fact but a...
  November 23rd, 2017 09:28
• Expectations (Altruistic_psychopath) \"It\'s not easy being green\", as Kermit would say. I can relate, AP....
  November 22nd, 2017 17:42
• County Line Bar (W c) Where did you say this bar was? Good write WC!
  November 22nd, 2017 17:33
• Hide of the Last Buffalo (Will Shootman) This is a classic ... a true beauty ... a tribute to the man who...
  November 22nd, 2017 17:31
• The Proof (Fay Slimm.) I love the creative shape of this fine poem, Fay! So well done, so...
  November 22nd, 2017 09:47
• Night Sky (FredPeyer) I\'m afraid I\'m one of the few who do not see the \"Star spangled night...
  November 22nd, 2017 09:42
• Morpheus, Where Did You Go? (Goldfinch60) Yep, been there. More often it seems as time goes by. I guess we find more...
  November 22nd, 2017 09:34
• SHAKESPEARE: THE MISSING LINES (2). (Michael Edwards) Pipe organ or mouth organ ... err, harmonica ... both make for fine music....
  November 22nd, 2017 09:29
• male nude (Frank Prem) \"Don\'t look deep Inside my eyes For that is where My soul lies...
  November 22nd, 2017 09:21
• I Am Cloud. (Fay Slimm.) In fact, the mind can affect clouds, to a degree. I\'ve seen it...
  November 21st, 2017 10:55
• SHAKESPEARE: THE MISSING LINES (Michael Edwards) Who knew the old bard was that hip? Number four is my favorite,...
  November 21st, 2017 10:49
• after storm (Frank Prem) Reminds me of a line from a song, in \'Annie\' I believe ... \"The sun...
  November 21st, 2017 10:45
• ONLY GHOSTS AND ANGELS (Michael Edwards) A bounty of adjectives grace this fine descriptive poetic offering! Well...
  November 20th, 2017 10:01
• A New Ending. (Goldfinch60) \'We live our lives with what we have learned\', indeed! \"Regrets as...
  November 20th, 2017 09:55
• Caught. (Fay Slimm.) Enchanting and well presented, Fay! Brings back childhood memories of awe...
  November 20th, 2017 09:45
• SEEKING HAPPINESS ! (RAJ NANDY) One begins to appreciate the important things in life with aging. Well...
  November 20th, 2017 09:40
• witchy wire (Frank Prem) I once hired one of these gifted \"Dousers\" to find a new well location...
  November 20th, 2017 09:32
• Lifes Highway. (Goldfinch60) Great advice here, Goldie. Good write!
  November 19th, 2017 10:44
• THREE ONE-LINERS (Michael Edwards) The disturbing print feels like my insides in sensory overload ......
  November 19th, 2017 08:48
• belle and beau (Frank Prem) Lovely depiction of the wind making love to a tree, Frank. Shouldn\'t it...
  November 19th, 2017 08:41
• Salvator Mundi. (Goldfinch60) How much more is to be spent in guarding it now ... insuring it ......
  November 18th, 2017 09:49
• I Saw Him. (Fay Slimm.) Nothing in nature fascinates and inspires awe quite like a great cat...
  November 18th, 2017 09:32
• child sometimes (Frank Prem) A beautiful sequential journey through life you take us on here, Frank,...
  November 17th, 2017 10:23
• Making Believe. (Fay Slimm.) And what a sweet way to pass the time it is. The harsh can come later, as...
  November 17th, 2017 10:18
• In the Beginning. (Goldfinch60) I can see this poem describing either \'A life\', or ongoing \'All life\'....
  November 17th, 2017 10:11
• MEASURED REASON (Michael Edwards) \"The doubt that measured reason brings\" to \"A victim of illusions...
  November 17th, 2017 10:02
• Tired (FredPeyer) Congratulations on coming into your own, Fred... the reward after having...
  November 17th, 2017 09:42
• The Inventor (FredPeyer) \"Never again will I be a slave to limitations of my own\" ... Love this...
  November 16th, 2017 17:13
• IN PRAISE OF MILK (Michael Edwards) Love the four-line tribute to \'extract of udder\' here, Michael! So well...
  November 16th, 2017 10:54
• Praying For Grandfather (Frank Prem) A brilliant portrayal here, Frank! Both poignant and humorous at once....
  November 16th, 2017 10:49
• In The Moonlight. (Goldfinch60) Lovely metaphor, Goldie. Cycles of the moon and cycles of life, well...
  November 16th, 2017 10:34
• Sunday-Ways. (Fay Slimm.) A tough life indeed, your poem describes. Those were the days ... I...
  November 16th, 2017 10:31
• 1 Year Anniversary on MPS (Poetboy123) I share your feelings in this fine tribute to MPS, poetboy....
  November 14th, 2017 09:10
• ARRIVAL OF SPRING (Michael Edwards) Can\'t look forward to Spring just yet ... I\'m enjoying Fall too much, my...
  November 14th, 2017 08:39
• How Could I Drive It? (Goldfinch60) Never known for low maintenance or reliability, the Jag is, and always has...
  November 14th, 2017 08:31
• Duo Ballet. (Fay Slimm.) A well formed and delightful one, Fay! You do appreciate nature\'s gifts...
  November 14th, 2017 08:21
• Cindy (FredPeyer) \"the slow smile ....... never reaching her eyes.\" What a great line! You...
  November 11th, 2017 08:44
• Never Forget. (Fay Slimm.) You have portrayed with beauty one of man\'s ugliest pastimes, Fay. War is...
  November 11th, 2017 08:32
• Today\'s Poem. (Fay Slimm.) I have no doubt you have been here many, many times, Fay. An old and wise...
  November 10th, 2017 11:28
• THE MERMAIDS SIGH (Michael Edwards) I\'m in awe of what an artist can evoke with so few lines! The...
  November 10th, 2017 11:19
• Life is a Mess (FredPeyer) Sounds like a hell-of-a party! Clever write, Fred. hope your hang-over...
  November 10th, 2017 00:46
• singing broken heart at number 60 (Frank Prem) A good voice is a blessing to listen to. I don\'t try to sing along, but...
  November 9th, 2017 11:00
• Glorious Sunshine (FredPeyer) Five uplifting short poems I see here, Fred. Can\'t connect them in my...
  November 9th, 2017 10:50
• A SHELTERED NOOK (Michael Edwards) Could have sworn I heard echoes in these three! Must be my imagination....
  November 9th, 2017 10:42
• Stepping Off. (Goldfinch60) Since I\'ve never really known a \'comfort zone\', living outside the box...
  November 9th, 2017 10:34
• Wordless. (Fay Slimm.) \"Speechless contact\", doesn\'t that describe what poetry is? And the...
  November 9th, 2017 10:25
• TO HUG ~OR~ NOT TO HUG ? A 4 6 4 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Hugging, as satisfying as it can be, is an invasion of another\'s space...
  November 9th, 2017 10:13
• Cracked Window (WL Schuett) How about an alien life form with its soul on fire, surrounded by...
  November 8th, 2017 16:15
• THE GIFT OF TIME (Lasergraph) A great gift to give a young one, indeed. Well expressed, LG!
  November 8th, 2017 11:00
• Summer\'s Climb. (Fay Slimm.) \'\"Nature is bent on survival\" ... love the line! As we all are, as part...
  November 8th, 2017 10:54
• Back With My River. (Goldfinch60) There is something quite special, even spiritual, about being near water....
  November 8th, 2017 10:48
• the bazaar (Frank Prem) A bazaar poem to fit the bazaar it is set in. Thought-provoking and...
  November 8th, 2017 10:37
• ANOTHER CRUDY (Michael Edwards) Sounds like you got there exactly when you should have. Neither late nor...
  November 8th, 2017 10:30
• Cold Rain (FredPeyer) A strong series of couplets here, Fred. I like this new form you...
  November 8th, 2017 10:27
• stirring the soup (Frank Prem) Ah, the moment of creation. Always wondered how it began. And what a soup...
  November 7th, 2017 09:31
• The Actor (FredPeyer) \"An actor without a play\" ... what a great line! More meaningful to me...
  November 7th, 2017 09:17
• Thirty Six Years. (Goldfinch60) Congratulations, Goldie. Beautiful lady and a beautiful tribute poem!
  November 7th, 2017 09:06
• My Forever After. (Goldfinch60) Good attitude to start a marriage with! Lets hope it works out that way...
  November 6th, 2017 09:53
• Realization (FredPeyer) So much truth about us all in this fine poem, Fred.. Being thrust out of a...
  November 6th, 2017 09:47
• New Depths. (Fay Slimm.) \"The edge of seen and unseen\" ... where all seekers dwell. Listening to...
  November 6th, 2017 09:34
• Roses (FredPeyer) This one captures the stereotypical male quite well, Fred ... sadly. But...
  November 5th, 2017 11:04
• Exciting. (Fay Slimm.) Beautiful structure and cadence in this one, Fay. Admirable work!
  November 5th, 2017 10:52
• Satisfied? (Goldfinch60) Kudos on being able to access the dark side we all have for this fine...
  November 5th, 2017 10:48
• meeting Nola (Frank Prem) \'The kindness of strangers\' ... I adore the theme, Frank. Beautifully...
  November 5th, 2017 10:41
• Life Within Me. (Goldfinch60) To express is to be alive. Conversely, being alive is expressing. Well...
  November 4th, 2017 08:24
• stars in his sleeves (Frank Prem) Sounds like you outed a star person disguised as a human. Lot of them...
  November 4th, 2017 08:19
• Innocence Lost (FredPeyer) Ah, the power of an alluring woman to destroy a good man. Well portrayed...
  November 4th, 2017 08:13
• hair wash on friday nights (Frank Prem) Amazing how the norm of days past, which we took for granted, evolves....
  November 3rd, 2017 09:41
• Clarity of Mind. (Goldfinch60) When one is taught to believe that a higher power is directing every...
  November 3rd, 2017 09:33
• Heydays. (Fay Slimm.) You paint us an idealic childhood here, Fay, quite beautifully and as only...
  November 3rd, 2017 09:14
• THE CLOWN (Michael Edwards) Ouch! I suppose he will be scheduled for a rectal scaffoldectomy? (Have I...
  November 3rd, 2017 08:58
• The Holy Church of Matrimonial Bliss (FredPeyer) Yes, I used to belong to that church, and remember those services well....
  November 3rd, 2017 08:48
• Aftermath (FredPeyer) Wouldn\'t make a good nursery rhyme, but a powerful commentary here, Fred!...
  November 2nd, 2017 16:51
• SANTA CLAUS BLUES (Lasergraph) This is destined to become a Christmas classic, LG! A fine tribute to the...
  November 2nd, 2017 10:26
• THE BOOK (Michael Edwards) Gee, it looks just like my foyer! Two more good writes here, Michael. You...
  November 2nd, 2017 10:05
• Body Clock. (Goldfinch60) Time ... a fluid and fabricated construct of this world. Well expressed...
  November 2nd, 2017 09:50
• Voiceless. (Fay Slimm.) Ah, the undeniable power of unspoken communication between twin-flame...
  November 2nd, 2017 09:41
• THE POET AND THE PAINTER (David Ghio) A very well written piece on the similarities between expressing in art...
  November 2nd, 2017 09:35
• I\'m Staying (LukeCoomer) This is not only impactful and beautiful, Luke, it is remarkable in the...
  November 1st, 2017 16:16