Comments on community poems by Louis Gibbs
- Aftermath (FredPeyer)
Wouldn\'t make a good nursery rhyme, but a powerful commentary here, Fred!...
November 2nd, 2017 16:51 - SANTA CLAUS BLUES (Lasergraph)
This is destined to become a Christmas classic, LG! A fine tribute to the...
November 2nd, 2017 10:26 - Adrenaline Rush (Accidental Poet)
That beautiful \'72 Cuda would bring big bucks at auction today, for sure!...
November 2nd, 2017 10:21 - THE BOOK (Michael Edwards)
Gee, it looks just like my foyer!
Two more good writes here, Michael. You...
November 2nd, 2017 10:05 - Body Clock. (Goldfinch60)
Time ... a fluid and fabricated construct of this world. Well expressed...
November 2nd, 2017 09:50 - Voiceless. (Fay Slimm.)
Ah, the undeniable power of unspoken communication between twin-flame...
November 2nd, 2017 09:41 - THE POET AND THE PAINTER (David Ghio)
A very well written piece on the similarities between expressing in art...
November 2nd, 2017 09:35 - I\'m Staying (LukeCoomer)
This is not only impactful and beautiful, Luke, it is remarkable in the...
November 1st, 2017 16:16 - UNDER HEAVY ROCKS (David Ghio)
To me these cats can be a metaphor for what transpires with all of us in...
November 1st, 2017 16:04 - THE GYM (Lasergraph)
I assume you sued and got a fine settlement. If not, Michael was an...
November 1st, 2017 11:07 - Dark Mood (FredPeyer)
With rain comes the gift of life on this planet. I try to hold onto that...
November 1st, 2017 10:04 - THE DECISION (Michael Edwards)
Wow, the poor groom is in for a bad day! Well done formal poem, Michael....
November 1st, 2017 09:56 - born to dance (Frank Prem)
Indeed, we all dance through life alone ... some times with partners,...
November 1st, 2017 09:48 - Straight to Arrears. (Goldfinch60)
I too once managed rental properties, and can relate to your poem...
November 1st, 2017 09:42 - Dreamscape. (Fay Slimm.)
It seems we share a muse today, Fay, both writing about escape into...
November 1st, 2017 09:37 - If Life is... (FredPeyer)
And if life is all of the above ... or not ... all we can do is live it to...
October 31st, 2017 20:09 - BLACK FRIDAY (Lasergraph)
This feels like the decade that Amazon ate the world, doesn\'t it? Well...
October 31st, 2017 16:02 - cultured (Frank Prem)
Your writing is like watching a movie, how it progresses from scene to...
October 31st, 2017 07:48 - KP And Orchi Got Married. (Goldfinch60)
Well written description of the big event, Goldie. I can just see them...
October 31st, 2017 07:33 - Dancing With the Light (Accidental Poet)
A well written tribute to photography and its evolution, AP. Great last...
October 31st, 2017 07:27 - Fierce Hunger. (Fay Slimm.)
A fisherman\'s wife is not an easy life. You paint it so well in this fine...
October 31st, 2017 07:22 - Other Dimension (FredPeyer)
You covered the spectrum with this one, Fred! Mind-expanding, indeed. A...
October 30th, 2017 22:06 - And This Is My Story. (Kevin browne)
I really appreciate the structure you have adopted with this poem, Kevin....
October 30th, 2017 12:43 - Twilight Song (WL Schuett)
Devoid of life-force. Surrendered to the void. A quenched soul, is what...
October 30th, 2017 12:38 - New Kind. (Fay Slimm.)
Amazing how a good friend can infuse new life into us. Well expressed in...
October 30th, 2017 11:49 - Can You Hear It?? (Goldfinch60)
Of all the pleasing sounds we hear... music, nature, a lover\'s voice ......
October 30th, 2017 11:29 - the search for truth (Frank Prem)
My thoughts reflect Fay\'s, Frank. You speak well here of the commendable...
October 30th, 2017 11:22 - Mirror (FredPeyer)
By reflecting Upon our world, do we create it? Is what we individually...
October 28th, 2017 08:22 - Weirdos From Planet Earth (Accidental Poet)
This one resonates fully with my perspective of how we are viewed by them....
October 28th, 2017 08:00 - This Time. (Fay Slimm.)
The time of reflection in the late stages of a fully lived life echoed in...
October 28th, 2017 07:54 - AT LAST IN LOVE (Michael Edwards)
The latest version of the art has become dark and foreboding. While the...
October 28th, 2017 07:42 - At the Party (FredPeyer)
Goes to show, you never know what is in a package until it is unwrapped....
October 27th, 2017 10:34 - ronnie\'s other guy (Frank Prem)
It seems that our unspoken thoughts are all the privacy we have left these...
October 27th, 2017 10:29 - THE ANCIENT LAND (Michael Edwards)
The poem describes the beauty of what nature was hewn. The picture, an...
October 27th, 2017 10:25 - SIX SWEET STAGES OF LOVE ~ SANTITA & BRIAN ~ SYMBIOSIS (BRIAN & ANGELA)
As the Beetles said, \"Love is all there is\"! Well done, both of you.
October 27th, 2017 10:12 - Stopped By Music. (Goldfinch60)
The magic of music, the universal language ... well captured in this fine...
October 27th, 2017 10:08 - Unexplained. (Fay Slimm.)
Your poem touches a deep chord in reflecting such a great loss, Fay. \"Why...
October 27th, 2017 10:04 - TWISTED CAP (Lasergraph)
Ah yes, the tipsy college days of yore. Vodka, or scotch and water was my...
October 27th, 2017 09:48 - Path of the Poet (LukeCoomer)
\"The ones that bring an ink pen to a gunfight\" ... What a great tribute...
October 27th, 2017 09:43 - The Morning (WL Schuett)
A strong poem and a beautiful painting, WL! I enjoyed them both. Thanks.
October 26th, 2017 16:38 - A conversation I\'ll never have (Secretss)
A good and brave poem, Secrets. May your world come back together for you!...
October 26th, 2017 16:34 - Touch of Madness (LukeCoomer)
Nothing more therapeutic than letting it all out in a poem, Luke. Keep...
October 26th, 2017 09:38 - All we can be (FredPeyer)
\"Keeping it (the mind) a prisoner of our own comfort zone\" ... describes...
October 26th, 2017 09:12 - SPACESHIP MOON ~ A 4 5 3 2 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
An interesting theory, indeed, and who can say with certainty it is or...
October 26th, 2017 09:01 - Behind and Between. (Fay Slimm.)
\"Through the thinnest of veils there exists worlds behind and between\"...
October 26th, 2017 08:46 - Water is Life. (Goldfinch60)
So easy to take for granted in our \'advanced\' societies, this precious...
October 26th, 2017 08:27 - holding close to beauty (Frank Prem)
The domineering, insecure, brute of a man who destroys his own image of...
October 26th, 2017 08:23 - FIVE MORE FIVE SEVEN FIVES (Michael Edwards)
A most impressive illustration, Michael. I admire your artistic...
October 26th, 2017 08:16 - Best friend (Netashi)
A fine message of appreciation of what nature presents to us. Well done,...
October 25th, 2017 15:18 - SAVOR THE MOMENT (Lasergraph)
Live in and savor the moment, indeed. Well penned, LG!
October 25th, 2017 15:15 - Sweet Dreams (SongsOfSorrow)
How well I can relate to this feeling of not belonging here, Songs, as you...
October 25th, 2017 12:51 - Broken vows (Misplacedsoul)
Wow! This one touched me deeply, as I once was the fool who, suffering his...
October 25th, 2017 12:46 - Quenchers. (Fay Slimm.)
A succulent poem, indeed, Fay. Well done!
October 25th, 2017 10:23 - WHEELS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Your life on wheels as you describe, appears to have been a pleasant one,...
October 25th, 2017 10:13 - Drunk on Love (Accidental Poet)
A fine tribute to your love, AP! You are a fortunate man, indeed.
October 25th, 2017 10:06 - Hope in the Dark. (Goldfinch60)
An inspirational insight, this one. Well expressed, Goldie!
October 25th, 2017 10:01 - the astronomer (Frank Prem)
A man so absorbed in his work that he becomes oblivious to the mundane...
October 25th, 2017 09:58 - Quiet, so quiet (FredPeyer)
A timely tribute to nature\'s power after this terribly destructive...
October 25th, 2017 09:51 - The Groom (FredPeyer)
Sounds like another addict bites the dust in this one. A lot of that going...
October 24th, 2017 16:24 - Shadow fall (WL Schuett)
Warm and tender, this tribute to love, WL! Kudos.
October 24th, 2017 10:33 - Starchild (LukeCoomer)
I love this one, Luke, and can relate as the father of a son of whom I\'m...
October 24th, 2017 10:30 - axeman: await winter (Frank Prem)
I am reminded of the satisfaction gained from chopping wood for the winter...
October 24th, 2017 10:05 - Shore-Songs. (Fay Slimm.)
Exquisite poem, so finely presented in precise form! This is truly a...
October 24th, 2017 09:57 - It’s Just a Fantasy (Accidental Poet)
A perfectly beautiful poem of lost love, so very well expressed. Kudos,
October 24th, 2017 09:53 - The Mystery Becomes History. (Wallace)
I like the premise of, \"Today will soon be history\", and the repetition...
October 24th, 2017 09:48 - Why Don\'t Mornings Last All Day. (Goldfinch60)
I too find peace and satisfaction in the mornings, but enjoy a totally...
October 24th, 2017 09:42 - Normal? (Marianne)
I assume the offender was a parent? Sounds like you and I had a similar...
October 24th, 2017 09:33 - Kick Rocks and Smile (Karsten Turrey)
A fine series of terse couplets here, Karsten. I enjoyed reading them!
October 24th, 2017 09:29 - LIKE CORN IN WIND (Michael Edwards)
Desolate but calming picture! Excellent poem of wavering thoughts on...
October 24th, 2017 09:24 - Rape. (Braintoquatrain)
A bravely spoken poem about a terrible experience. Brain! I once dated a...
October 23rd, 2017 22:49 - Oiled with Love. (Fay Slimm.)
Another fine ode to lost love, Fay, as only you can pen them!
October 23rd, 2017 16:19 - Where\'s Mum? (Goldfinch60)
I helped take care of a dear aunt who was so inflicted. A trying disease...
October 23rd, 2017 09:23 - ANGELA ~ PINK ROSE ~ An Acrostic 6 4 4 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A fine tribute to your lady-love, Brian. My best to Angela.
October 23rd, 2017 09:13 - rules (are only guidelines) (Frank Prem)
I simply love this one, Frank! Too me it describes the dream of...
October 23rd, 2017 07:24 - CAST IN FALLOW FIELDS (Michael Edwards)
\"With futures curtain still undrawn\"... some beautiful thoughts well...
October 23rd, 2017 07:16 - Coffee (W c)
An innocent vice. Enjoyed the poem, WC!
October 21st, 2017 10:51 - THE MARTYRS CROWN (Michael Edwards)
I read in this one a dethroned monarch, brilliantly portrayed. Well done...
October 21st, 2017 10:40 - lumpen (Frank Prem)
Let me guess ... he is not a poet? Doesn\'t seem to fit the profile. A...
October 21st, 2017 10:31 - SULLY (Lasergraph)
A fine tribute to a true hero, LG! Well done.
October 20th, 2017 15:33 - Forgetting to Live (HChristian74)
This beautiful write speaks to all of us who have experienced this sad...
October 20th, 2017 09:23 - THE HOUSE (Michael Edwards)
I had no idea there were so many specific forms of poetry, Michael. The...
October 20th, 2017 09:16 - The Beckoning. (Goldfinch60)
This is a tender and touching write, Goldie. Thank you for sharing it....
October 20th, 2017 09:11 - Captured. (Fay Slimm.)
I appreciate this fine poem, Fay, and the shape of it is quite pleasing....
October 20th, 2017 09:04 - Attunement (Avigail)
And it has to do with adherence to the path of awakening, as well. Well...
October 20th, 2017 08:50 - Let’s just be kind (Avigail)
Your poem depicts for me the despair engrained in the, \"you only live...
October 19th, 2017 09:39 - surviving the devil - a song of fire (Frank Prem)
A captivating poem of terror and loss, Frank. Even now, again, being...
October 19th, 2017 08:08 - By Scribes (Fay Slimm.)
Indeed, by invoking the Muse we do become mere scribes of wisdom greater...
October 19th, 2017 07:57 - It (Skyebellasario)
A mysterious and powerful one in its ambiguity. I love it, Skye!
October 18th, 2017 16:23 - The lonely people among us (Avigail)
An important message for us all, Avigail. Reflects a poem I just completed...
October 18th, 2017 15:37 - Nocturnal Inspirations (Accidental Poet)
When I\'ve just written a poem in the evening, my muse won\'t let me drift...
October 18th, 2017 14:38 - BOTHER SUN & SISTER MOON ~ Tankas (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Even without knowing what a Tanka is, I can appreciate this tribute to the...
October 18th, 2017 14:29 - One more Night (FredPeyer)
A last fling before a loveless marriage ... sounds like a movie plot. Good...
October 18th, 2017 11:09 - Against the Flow (Goldfinch60)
There\'s a lot to be said for going in the opposite direction of the...
October 17th, 2017 08:59 - Virgin White Sheet (FredPeyer)
Does your wife approve of this hot affair? Well done expression of the...
October 17th, 2017 08:46 - New Start (FredPeyer)
A masterful exploration of rhyme here, Fred! A touching poem of lost love....
October 16th, 2017 12:26 - Zlata\'s Daughter (Frank Prem)
But another sad chapter in the ongoing madness of Wars, the favorite sport...
October 16th, 2017 12:22 - Dancing to the Music. (Goldfinch60)
Another fine metaphor from your talented pen, Goldie! I\'ve heard musical...
October 16th, 2017 12:09 - YOU. (Fay Slimm.)
\"Key? Secret? Text? Spell?\" You keep us enthralled to the end, Fay. It...
October 16th, 2017 11:59 - A Lifelong Journey (Accidental Poet)
You nailed us with this one, AP! Well done, sir.
October 16th, 2017 11:51 - TIME TRIAL (Gayathri Priya)
A fine examination of the concept of time, GP! Welcome to MPS!
October 16th, 2017 11:32
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