Comments on community poems by Louis Gibbs

• Homeless (Sue.evans) A finely written stark depiction of an all too common scene, Sue. Well...
  October 2nd, 2017 17:08
• Take my hand (Poetic Dan) Very inspirational, Dan! Well written, and I love that third stanza.
  October 2nd, 2017 13:01
• Rutting Buck (W c) A fine observation of nature portrayed in this poem, w c. Enjoyed it!
  October 2nd, 2017 12:54
• The Book of Kindness (Jaksr) A fine metaphor on goodness, Jaksr. He is blessed, indeed.
  October 2nd, 2017 12:50
• Wells of Summer. (Fay Slimm.) Classically beautiful, Fay, as only you write!
  October 2nd, 2017 12:39
• GOODBYES (Arpit) \"forever you\'ll be there in me.\" A beautiful description of true...
  October 2nd, 2017 12:37
• Aubade (Baylee) Could not find \'aubade\' in my dictionary, but like the poem anyway,...
  October 2nd, 2017 12:27
• Me and the fabrics 🎀👗 (Malubotelho) A love affair with fabrics, quite well stated, and the dress pictured is...
  October 2nd, 2017 12:10
• They say he lost his mind (Avigail) \"most evolved animal\"? ... some porpoises or elephants might take issue...
  October 2nd, 2017 12:03
• love (in a time of passing trains) (Frank Prem) Thanks for the enjoyable train ride, Frank. I always have loved trains,...
  October 2nd, 2017 11:23
• Ode to Music. (Goldfinch60) Music and mathematics, the universal languages ... gifts from heaven. One...
  October 2nd, 2017 11:18
• The Phone (FredPeyer) Sounds like you blew it big-time ... assuming this is true, which I...
  October 1st, 2017 19:29
• An Apology (Edward Charles McDevitt) An admirable confession of human nature, and an equally admirable goal you...
  October 1st, 2017 11:08
• Advancing. (Fay Slimm.) Beautiful form and content, this one. Love the attention to structure....
  October 1st, 2017 11:05
• To Fun or Not To Fun (Goldfinch60) I guess I was born old. Nice poem, Goldie!
  October 1st, 2017 11:01
• THE TEMPTRESS (Michael Edwards) I\'m amazed at the many ways poetry can be presented as mathematical...
  October 1st, 2017 10:49
• MULTITASKING (Michael Edwards) They are amazing creatures, indeed ... put us men to shame.
  September 30th, 2017 10:22
• Clever or Wise. (Goldfinch60) We can \'know\' much, but \'understand\' little. A thought-provoking poem,...
  September 30th, 2017 10:16
• Such Covert. (Fay Slimm.) A beautiful tribute to the magic and the price of a clandestine affair,...
  September 30th, 2017 10:10
• CHILLY WRITING DAY (Lasergraph) So much truth in that last phrase, LG. They do take on a life of their own...
  September 29th, 2017 13:24
• Missed Opportunities. (Goldfinch60) I just finished participating in a local theater production of Thornton...
  September 29th, 2017 11:20
• Extravagance. (Fay Slimm.) A mouth-watering portrayal of my favorite season, Fay, when my spirit...
  September 29th, 2017 11:13
• Wooden Music (WL Schuett) That guitar is a unique beauty, WL, as is this fine tribute to a lasting...
  September 29th, 2017 10:47
• Love theatre 🎭 (Malubotelho) Love the essence of this one ... the theater of love, actors engaging....
  September 29th, 2017 10:35
• REFLECTED EDONE (Michael Edwards) Quite a challenge, Michael, and no, I don\'t plan to attempt one. Thanks...
  September 29th, 2017 00:11
• Love (Emile Dubois) \"Love is all we have\" ... \"Everything we need to know of heaven\" ......
  September 28th, 2017 09:24
• Souls Know. (Fay Slimm.) \"Souls know\" says it all, and could stand alone as an epic poem of love....
  September 28th, 2017 09:07
• Sand Crabs (FredPeyer) To find the balance of the middle, one must experience both extremes, as...
  September 28th, 2017 08:57
• Calliope. (Goldfinch60) You guys have a National Poetry Day? No wonder there are so many fine...
  September 28th, 2017 08:46
• Make My Heart Sing (Christina8) A touching poem ... beautifully formed and presented, Christina!
  September 27th, 2017 18:15
• My Mentor. (Goldfinch60) My dad was an inventor, and he passed that \'curse\' on to me ... the...
  September 27th, 2017 14:13
• FUSIONS 2 (Michael Edwards) Made my mouth water with this one, Michael. Kudos!
  September 27th, 2017 14:03
• A Something. (Fay Slimm.) A graceful tribute to this small creature of nature, Fay. Well done, as...
  September 27th, 2017 14:01
• A Writers Life (FredPeyer) Writing ... not unlike Riding. Takes one on a thrilling, tenuous,...
  September 27th, 2017 13:46
• DISJOINTED LOVE ~ A GHAZAL (BRIAN & ANGELA) You and Santita are on fire this morning, B! Very clever.
  September 27th, 2017 00:10
• Empathy (FredPeyer) Who says motorcycle riders can\'t be mushy too? We\'ve got hearts inside...
  September 26th, 2017 08:25
• MUSIC ~ FOR A WHILE ..........? (BRIAN & ANGELA) A fine tribute to the food of life, good music, which transcends all other...
  September 26th, 2017 08:13
• FROM FUSIONS 1 (Michael Edwards) A season-appropriate piece as Fall presents. Enjoyed it, Michael.
  September 26th, 2017 08:07
• The Tandem of Love. (Goldfinch60) A well presented metaphor, Goldie. Congratulations on the enviable union...
  September 26th, 2017 08:00
• Turbulence. (Fay Slimm.) A masterfully constructed piece composed of powerful imagery! Visually, as...
  September 26th, 2017 07:56
• Alive (Katy S.) The magic of love well expressed in this fine poem, Katy. Welcome to MPS!
  September 25th, 2017 16:06
• Seeing (FredPeyer) \'Selective seeing\' is as real as \'selective hearing\' ... we neither...
  September 25th, 2017 13:38
• The Alley (WL Schuett) We all must go down our dark alleys alone. This one sounds like a...
  September 25th, 2017 12:16
• NEVER (Lasergraph) A heart-wrenching poem about a heart-wrenching experience, LG! One of...
  September 25th, 2017 12:11
• Dark Comfort. (Goldfinch60) \"Until the words stop\", I know this compulsion of which you speak,...
  September 25th, 2017 10:24
• Not Yet.. (Fay Slimm.) Beautiful expression of lost love, Fay!
  September 25th, 2017 10:02
• What a wonderful time (Renzi) Always glad to hear from you, Renzi.
  September 25th, 2017 09:55
• IN DREAMS (Michael Edwards) \'Mathematics as poetry\' ... interesting construction, Michael! Your...
  September 25th, 2017 00:35
• DORCAS (Michael Edwards) I, too, have had these moments as Brian describes like, \"visiting another...
  September 24th, 2017 10:29
• Addiction. (Fay Slimm.) Reminds me of how my young grandson saw the night as he would say, \"Dark...
  September 24th, 2017 10:15
• Beauty Revealed. (Goldfinch60) Wisdom spoken here, Goldie. Great advice!
  September 24th, 2017 10:00
• Mind Games (FredPeyer) And what if \'we\', the collective mind, are making up the rules as we go...
  September 24th, 2017 09:57
• He played as a monster (Malubotelho) What a beautiful, heart-rendering reflection on a terrifying childhood!...
  September 24th, 2017 09:42
• The Circle (Boddhi1972) The cycle of life, (lives), well described herein, Boddhi. I share your...
  September 23rd, 2017 10:01
• Marching Band (W c) A fine tribute to the often overlooked element of an exciting sports...
  September 23rd, 2017 09:22
• FIRST LOVE (Michael Edwards) Beautiful expression of a male\'s first sexual experience, Michael ... a...
  September 23rd, 2017 09:19
• Think (John Prophet) By definition, \"Truth\" assumes \'absolutes\' ... which don\'t exist....
  September 23rd, 2017 08:43
• About sex and orgasm (Malubotelho) Who is Lucia? This is a well done introspection of the deeper level of sex...
  September 23rd, 2017 08:35
• No More.. (Fay Slimm.) War is the definition of madness ... yet it remains the favorite pastime...
  September 23rd, 2017 08:23
• Green. (Wallace) Embrace the journey. We\'ll all get back home. Enjoyed your poem, Wallace!
  September 22nd, 2017 16:17
• Seeing the World Differently (Goldfinch60) I love this map of the world ... depicted exactly as I see it. A...
  September 22nd, 2017 16:10
• colours (Dusk arising) What greater \"winnings\" than wisdom? Like your fine poem, dusk!
  September 22nd, 2017 15:57
• It Approaches (John Prophet) Somehow I don\'t think \"singularity\" is all that close, unfortunately....
  September 22nd, 2017 15:51
• THE OLD LIGHTHOUSE (Lasergraph) Old light houses can still radiate a special kind of light, as your fine...
  September 22nd, 2017 11:31
• First Love. (Fay Slimm.) A splendid tribute to, and portrait of, first love, Fay ... the...
  September 22nd, 2017 11:13
• Missing You (FredPeyer) A beautiful tribute to lost love, Fred. One of life\'s most challenging...
  September 22nd, 2017 11:00
• You think no one cares (SorrowfullyHappy) No one can \"save\" another in this process of life. It is all up to us to...
  September 22nd, 2017 10:29
• the pioneers (Avigail) A wonderful tribute to the pioneering spirit in all of us! Well done,...
  September 22nd, 2017 10:24
• Smoke and Mirrors (Edthepoet) Great insight expressed in this one, Ed. Very well done! Love it.
  September 22nd, 2017 10:19
• Growing Pains (Christina8) The plot thickens, indeed, in this well-produced drama. Do not despair,...
  September 22nd, 2017 10:15
• Just memories 📌 (Malubotelho) I do so admire you for this victory, Yumna. Congratulations! You are an...
  September 22nd, 2017 10:09
• For those who love ❤️ (Malubotelho) Love is all there is. Love these expressions, Malu!
  September 21st, 2017 08:35
• Seize Now. (Fay Slimm.) Our past as \"a learning curve\" ... so well captured herein, Fay. Kudos!
  September 21st, 2017 08:32
• HE\'LL BE A POLITICIAN YET (Michael Edwards) This poem brought back a memory from a time, late sixties I believe, when...
  September 21st, 2017 08:23
• Nobody\'s Fool, a short story (FredPeyer) A great illustration of the power of perspective, Fred, and the fact that...
  September 20th, 2017 14:48
• MORE MONOSTICHS (Michael Edwards) What a great pick-up line that last one would make! Love it, Michael.
  September 20th, 2017 14:43
• Throat Cutting. (Goldfinch60) Certainly a little levity never hurts. Nice chuckle ... thanks, Goldie.
  September 20th, 2017 14:34
• Becoming Other. (Fay Slimm.) Congratulations on tapping into the \'oneness\' of all living things, ...
  September 20th, 2017 14:29
• Rainbow of Life. (Goldfinch60) Sounds like a blessed life you\'ve led, Goldie ... troubles and all. Nice...
  September 19th, 2017 08:01
• Spain (Renzi) Party on, girl!
  September 18th, 2017 15:37
• THE WINDMILL (Lasergraph) Interesting how such an early \'clean energy device\' has been...
  September 18th, 2017 15:34
• The Gambler (FredPeyer) A tough life-lesson well described in this one, Fred! Kudos.
  September 18th, 2017 13:59
• I\'ll Be Seeing You. (Goldfinch60) Yes, music has the power to speak our hearts for us, to connect with our...
  September 16th, 2017 08:57
• Hungry Ghosts (Goldfinch60) Those biscuit-eaters are the sneakiest of all ghosts! I\'d call on the...
  September 15th, 2017 10:32
• My Baby Girl (FredPeyer) You speak well for all of us who are privileged to be the fathers of...
  September 15th, 2017 10:23
• WELL FED AM I (Michael Edwards) Of the two experiments, the painting is my favorite, Michael. I find it...
  September 15th, 2017 10:11
• The water and the rock (Malubotelho) I dig rocky love affairs. Enjoyed this one, Malu!
  September 14th, 2017 16:08
• Something Greater. (Fay Slimm.) The abandonment in late-blooming love makes possible attaining...
  September 14th, 2017 08:14
• VISIONS OF SLUMBER (Lasergraph) Sleep, our respite from this dark dream. Dreams, our contact with reality....
  September 13th, 2017 12:17
• Ocean Swim (FredPeyer) A great way to replicate the thrilling escape from gravity we experience...
  September 13th, 2017 10:05
• What is Time? (Goldfinch60) So glad you find time to share your poetry, Goldie! Always enjoyable.
  September 13th, 2017 09:54
• How Many. (Fay Slimm.) \'Anxious wife awaiting the return of her mate from danger\' ... a theme...
  September 13th, 2017 09:47
• A COUPLE OF EDONES (Michael Edwards) Clever constructs these, Michael! I do appreciate well shaped poems.
  September 13th, 2017 00:08
• Watch Me (Joy Fetherolf) A spunky one, indeed! Well done, and welcome to MPS!
  September 12th, 2017 16:34
• Thought (FredPeyer) I had a fleeting thought on a clever response to this poem ... but, alas!...
  September 12th, 2017 08:09
• THREE FROM FUSIONS (Michael Edwards) All three worked for me! Fun stuff, Michael.
  September 12th, 2017 08:06
• What is the Time? (Goldfinch60) Time serves to cue the players when to interact on the stage of life. Good...
  September 12th, 2017 07:54
• OUR AUTUMN HOME (Lasergraph) A fine poetic description of my favorite season as well. Thanks, lg!
  September 11th, 2017 15:59
• Collateral of War (0ustpokenh3art) If we analyze it too closely, the game might be over ... but that\'s not a...
  September 11th, 2017 12:41
• Right Before (GMO1) A stark poetic reminder of a stark and terrible day. Good write, GMO!...
  September 11th, 2017 11:46