Comments on community poems by Louis Gibbs
- I Can No Longer Feel The Sun (Syd)
Fine poem describing your depression, SYD. It can be treated, but it\'s...
October 4th, 2017 16:39 - THE OLD COUPLE (Lasergraph)
I agree with Michael, LG. Beautifully expressed and presented. Well done!
October 4th, 2017 16:26 - Vocation. (Wallace)
We all don our costumes for the play. Well put, Wallace!
October 4th, 2017 12:08 - ya-hey ya-ho (to fly) (Frank Prem)
Mountain climber becomes bird-man ... an enigma indeed, but intriguing....
October 4th, 2017 12:06 - Fountains Abbey (Sue.evans)
A worthy poem ... exquisitely presented, Sue! The attention to form is...
October 4th, 2017 10:29 - Empathy Among The Species (Accidental Poet)
Your poem, to me, describes the Fifth Dimension, toward which we are...
October 4th, 2017 10:14 - Imagination. (Goldfinch60)
Imagination is the key component in being human. I doubt that any A-I...
October 4th, 2017 10:07 - Scarred (FredPeyer)
I think we all will be surprised at the many positive ways we touched the...
October 4th, 2017 10:00 - October\' s Intent. (Fay Slimm.)
Fine tribute to my favorite month, Fay. Beautifully written!
October 4th, 2017 09:56 - Our love Is Strong (Christina8)
A beautiful dedication to your marriage, Christina! I hear wisdom gained...
October 4th, 2017 09:52 - Not even the Mule (WL Schuett)
\"Fragile but wonderful\", indeed, WL! A wonderfully expressed write on...
October 4th, 2017 09:44 - AUTUMN HAIKU ~ For CHRISTINA (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A fine dedication to my favorite time of year, Brian!
October 4th, 2017 09:41 - THE AUTOCRAT (Michael Edwards)
I sense a very particularly structured form here, Michael. What would be...
October 4th, 2017 00:06 - Alaska Wildlife (W c)
Alaska is indeed a nature-lover\'s paradise, as your fine poem describes...
October 3rd, 2017 10:15 - Saturday Morning (Karsten Turrey)
\"Baby fat?\" Sounds like you are about to break a law. Lovely poem,...
October 3rd, 2017 10:12 - so many ask why (Mugsdaddy)
Another sign of the (end?) times. Good post, Mugs.
October 3rd, 2017 10:09 - HALLOWEEN (Lasergraph)
Ah, the holidays ... what would the economy do without them. Cute poem,
October 3rd, 2017 07:50 - What Iād Like to Know (Accidental Poet)
A sad reflection on the senseless killing of a lion. It seems the sport...
October 3rd, 2017 07:02 - Summers Ago. (Fay Slimm.)
Truly a beauty, expressed in the finest tradition of classic poetry, Fay....
October 3rd, 2017 06:49 - Sweet Memories (FredPeyer)
When \"The song is over\", is a good time to go. Been the story of my...
October 3rd, 2017 06:41 - where you see and feel it (Frank Prem)
A psychiatric nurse, in a world going mad! There must be a long line at...
October 3rd, 2017 06:31 - ON BEING A POET (Michael Edwards)
Kudos on saying what drives us O.C.D.s mad, Michael! Doesn\'t everyone...
October 3rd, 2017 06:11 - Wine Soaked Kisses (FredPeyer)
I always suspected that you were the white knight type. I enjoyed this...
October 2nd, 2017 20:23 - Homeless (Sue.evans)
A finely written stark depiction of an all too common scene, Sue. Well...
October 2nd, 2017 17:08 - Take my hand (Poetic Dan)
Very inspirational, Dan! Well written, and I love that third stanza.
October 2nd, 2017 13:01 - Rutting Buck (W c)
A fine observation of nature portrayed in this poem, w c. Enjoyed it!
October 2nd, 2017 12:54 - The Book of Kindness (Jaksr)
A fine metaphor on goodness, Jaksr. He is blessed, indeed.
October 2nd, 2017 12:50 - Wells of Summer. (Fay Slimm.)
Classically beautiful, Fay, as only you write!
October 2nd, 2017 12:39 - GOODBYES (Arpit)
\"forever you\'ll be there in me.\" A beautiful description of true...
October 2nd, 2017 12:37 - Aubade (Baylee)
Could not find \'aubade\' in my dictionary, but like the poem anyway,...
October 2nd, 2017 12:27 - Me and the fabrics šš (Malubotelho)
A love affair with fabrics, quite well stated, and the dress pictured is...
October 2nd, 2017 12:10 - They say he lost his mind (Avigail)
\"most evolved animal\"? ... some porpoises or elephants might take issue...
October 2nd, 2017 12:03 - Kiss My WHAT? Good-bye (Accidental Poet)
And I thought it was supposed to end back in 2012! Must have looked at an...
October 2nd, 2017 11:26 - love (in a time of passing trains) (Frank Prem)
Thanks for the enjoyable train ride, Frank. I always have loved trains,...
October 2nd, 2017 11:23 - Ode to Music. (Goldfinch60)
Music and mathematics, the universal languages ... gifts from heaven. One...
October 2nd, 2017 11:18 - The Phone (FredPeyer)
Sounds like you blew it big-time ... assuming this is true, which I...
October 1st, 2017 19:29 - An Apology (Edward Charles McDevitt)
An admirable confession of human nature, and an equally admirable goal you...
October 1st, 2017 11:08 - Advancing. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful form and content, this one. Love the attention to structure....
October 1st, 2017 11:05 - To Fun or Not To Fun (Goldfinch60)
I guess I was born old. Nice poem, Goldie!
October 1st, 2017 11:01 - THE TEMPTRESS (Michael Edwards)
I\'m amazed at the many ways poetry can be presented as mathematical...
October 1st, 2017 10:49 - MULTITASKING (Michael Edwards)
They are amazing creatures, indeed ... put us men to shame.
September 30th, 2017 10:22 - Clever or Wise. (Goldfinch60)
We can \'know\' much, but \'understand\' little. A thought-provoking poem,...
September 30th, 2017 10:16 - Such Covert. (Fay Slimm.)
A beautiful tribute to the magic and the price of a clandestine affair,...
September 30th, 2017 10:10 - CHILLY WRITING DAY (Lasergraph)
So much truth in that last phrase, LG. They do take on a life of their own...
September 29th, 2017 13:24 - Missed Opportunities. (Goldfinch60)
I just finished participating in a local theater production of Thornton...
September 29th, 2017 11:20 - Extravagance. (Fay Slimm.)
A mouth-watering portrayal of my favorite season, Fay, when my spirit...
September 29th, 2017 11:13 - Wooden Music (WL Schuett)
That guitar is a unique beauty, WL, as is this fine tribute to a lasting...
September 29th, 2017 10:47 - Love theatre š (Malubotelho)
Love the essence of this one ... the theater of love, actors engaging....
September 29th, 2017 10:35 - REFLECTED EDONE (Michael Edwards)
Quite a challenge, Michael, and no, I don\'t plan to attempt one. Thanks...
September 29th, 2017 00:11 - Love (Emile Dubois)
\"Love is all we have\" ... \"Everything we need to know of heaven\" ......
September 28th, 2017 09:24 - Souls Know. (Fay Slimm.)
\"Souls know\" says it all, and could stand alone as an epic poem of love....
September 28th, 2017 09:07 - Sand Crabs (FredPeyer)
To find the balance of the middle, one must experience both extremes, as...
September 28th, 2017 08:57 - Calliope. (Goldfinch60)
You guys have a National Poetry Day? No wonder there are so many fine...
September 28th, 2017 08:46 - Make My Heart Sing (Christina8)
A touching poem ... beautifully formed and presented, Christina!
September 27th, 2017 18:15 - Tread Lightly My Dear (Accidental Poet)
A \'not-to-be-ignored\' threat, so gently presented, AP! If I were her, I...
September 27th, 2017 14:18 - My Mentor. (Goldfinch60)
My dad was an inventor, and he passed that \'curse\' on to me ... the...
September 27th, 2017 14:13 - FUSIONS 2 (Michael Edwards)
Made my mouth water with this one, Michael. Kudos!
September 27th, 2017 14:03 - A Something. (Fay Slimm.)
A graceful tribute to this small creature of nature, Fay. Well done, as...
September 27th, 2017 14:01 - A Writers Life (FredPeyer)
Writing ... not unlike Riding. Takes one on a thrilling, tenuous,...
September 27th, 2017 13:46 - DISJOINTED LOVE ~ A GHAZAL (BRIAN & ANGELA)
You and Santita are on fire this morning, B! Very clever.
September 27th, 2017 00:10 - Empathy (FredPeyer)
Who says motorcycle riders can\'t be mushy too? We\'ve got hearts inside...
September 26th, 2017 08:25 - MUSIC ~ FOR A WHILE ..........? (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A fine tribute to the food of life, good music, which transcends all other...
September 26th, 2017 08:13 - FROM FUSIONS 1 (Michael Edwards)
A season-appropriate piece as Fall presents. Enjoyed it, Michael.
September 26th, 2017 08:07 - The Tandem of Love. (Goldfinch60)
A well presented metaphor, Goldie. Congratulations on the enviable union...
September 26th, 2017 08:00 - Turbulence. (Fay Slimm.)
A masterfully constructed piece composed of powerful imagery! Visually, as...
September 26th, 2017 07:56 - Alive (Katy S.)
The magic of love well expressed in this fine poem, Katy. Welcome to MPS!
September 25th, 2017 16:06 - Seeing (FredPeyer)
\'Selective seeing\' is as real as \'selective hearing\' ... we neither...
September 25th, 2017 13:38 - The Alley (WL Schuett)
We all must go down our dark alleys alone. This one sounds like a...
September 25th, 2017 12:16 - NEVER (Lasergraph)
A heart-wrenching poem about a heart-wrenching experience, LG! One of...
September 25th, 2017 12:11 - Dark Comfort. (Goldfinch60)
\"Until the words stop\", I know this compulsion of which you speak,...
September 25th, 2017 10:24 - Not Yet.. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful expression of lost love, Fay!
September 25th, 2017 10:02 - What a wonderful time (Renzi)
Always glad to hear from you, Renzi.
September 25th, 2017 09:55 - IN DREAMS (Michael Edwards)
\'Mathematics as poetry\' ... interesting construction, Michael! Your...
September 25th, 2017 00:35 - DORCAS (Michael Edwards)
I, too, have had these moments as Brian describes like, \"visiting another...
September 24th, 2017 10:29 - Addiction. (Fay Slimm.)
Reminds me of how my young grandson saw the night as he would say, \"Dark...
September 24th, 2017 10:15 - Beauty Revealed. (Goldfinch60)
Wisdom spoken here, Goldie. Great advice!
September 24th, 2017 10:00 - Mind Games (FredPeyer)
And what if \'we\', the collective mind, are making up the rules as we go...
September 24th, 2017 09:57 - He played as a monster (Malubotelho)
What a beautiful, heart-rendering reflection on a terrifying childhood!...
September 24th, 2017 09:42 - The Circle (Boddhi1972)
The cycle of life, (lives), well described herein, Boddhi. I share your...
September 23rd, 2017 10:01 - Marching Band (W c)
A fine tribute to the often overlooked element of an exciting sports...
September 23rd, 2017 09:22 - FIRST LOVE (Michael Edwards)
Beautiful expression of a male\'s first sexual experience, Michael ... a...
September 23rd, 2017 09:19 - Think (John Prophet)
By definition, \"Truth\" assumes \'absolutes\' ... which don\'t exist....
September 23rd, 2017 08:43 - About sex and orgasm (Malubotelho)
Who is Lucia? This is a well done introspection of the deeper level of sex...
September 23rd, 2017 08:35 - No More.. (Fay Slimm.)
War is the definition of madness ... yet it remains the favorite pastime...
September 23rd, 2017 08:23 - Green. (Wallace)
Embrace the journey. We\'ll all get back home. Enjoyed your poem, Wallace!
September 22nd, 2017 16:17 - Seeing the World Differently (Goldfinch60)
I love this map of the world ... depicted exactly as I see it. A...
September 22nd, 2017 16:10 - Guardian of Innocence (Accidental Poet)
Words of wisdom, AP! Well done.
September 22nd, 2017 16:01 - colours (Dusk arising)
What greater \"winnings\" than wisdom? Like your fine poem, dusk!
September 22nd, 2017 15:57 - It Approaches (John Prophet)
Somehow I don\'t think \"singularity\" is all that close, unfortunately....
September 22nd, 2017 15:51 - THE OLD LIGHTHOUSE (Lasergraph)
Old light houses can still radiate a special kind of light, as your fine...
September 22nd, 2017 11:31 - First Love. (Fay Slimm.)
A splendid tribute to, and portrait of, first love, Fay ... the...
September 22nd, 2017 11:13 - Missing You (FredPeyer)
A beautiful tribute to lost love, Fred. One of life\'s most challenging...
September 22nd, 2017 11:00 - You think no one cares (SorrowfullyHappy)
No one can \"save\" another in this process of life. It is all up to us to...
September 22nd, 2017 10:29 - the pioneers (Avigail)
A wonderful tribute to the pioneering spirit in all of us! Well done,...
September 22nd, 2017 10:24 - Smoke and Mirrors (Edthepoet)
Great insight expressed in this one, Ed. Very well done! Love it.
September 22nd, 2017 10:19 - Growing Pains (Christina8)
The plot thickens, indeed, in this well-produced drama. Do not despair,...
September 22nd, 2017 10:15 - Just memories š (Malubotelho)
I do so admire you for this victory, Yumna. Congratulations! You are an...
September 22nd, 2017 10:09 - For those who love ā¤ļø (Malubotelho)
Love is all there is. Love these expressions, Malu!
September 21st, 2017 08:35 - Seize Now. (Fay Slimm.)
Our past as \"a learning curve\" ... so well captured herein, Fay. Kudos!
September 21st, 2017 08:32 - HE\'LL BE A POLITICIAN YET (Michael Edwards)
This poem brought back a memory from a time, late sixties I believe, when...
September 21st, 2017 08:23
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