Comments on community poems by dusk arising

• A CURRY A WEEK ~ SAVES LIVES ! ~ TEN RHYMING DOUBLETS ! (ANGELA & BRIAN) Gone are the days of real bum burner curries for me. It did seem to burn...
  October 19th, 2020 09:39
• of Immortal Poetry (L. B. Mek) Hmmm I\'d like to think there is a third way as I cannot claim to be nor...
  October 19th, 2020 09:28
• Regret (Fay Slimm.) Unsure whether this is after an \"I\'m leaving you\" break up or a change...
  October 19th, 2020 03:54
• caring church minister. (Goldfinch60) If only people would open their eyes to what is ACTUALLY going on in the...
  October 19th, 2020 02:31
• NIGELLA (Michael Edwards) Makes my blood broil.
  October 19th, 2020 01:26
• Ode to Calochilus robertsonii, or Purple beard orchid. (TheOzGreenMan) Good one! Short and sweet with humour too.
  October 19th, 2020 00:35
• CHESS (FineB) Oh so true. I taught a good friend the moves and some strategies - ruined...
  October 19th, 2020 00:20
• Into Your Future. (Goldfinch60) Those words are so true. The law of averages proves most relationships...
  October 18th, 2020 15:21
• Making. (Fay Slimm.) Oh that apprentices of the twenty first century were like that. But no....
  October 17th, 2020 06:31
• Idiomatic Incisiveness (Orchidee) I suppose parables helped in understanding for the uneducated masses in...
  October 17th, 2020 02:40
• A NEW DOOR (Michael Edwards) LOL you could have replaced it with ajar..... it all hinges on unlocking...
  October 17th, 2020 02:23
• Driving Into Daylight. (Goldfinch60) Good job too, cos if you were driving into foglight you\'d be heading for...
  October 17th, 2020 01:22
• The Kingdom (Crowns4Christ) I believe in god. But all this rhetoric about kingdoms and old fashioned...
  October 17th, 2020 00:31
• Very,Very Fast Food. (Goldfinch60) I had fast food last week eating a corned beef sarnie on the motorway at...
  October 16th, 2020 14:22
• Waving at Dolphins (Neville) Picture me, sat on the quayside seeing this exactly as you describe,...
  October 16th, 2020 05:56
• Revitalize. (Fay Slimm.) Well i think it\'s kind of obvious I\'m going to agree with every word of...
  October 16th, 2020 02:51
• WHAT IS THE PURPOSE OF WASPS ? ~ AN AFFIRMATIVE PANTOUM ! (ANGELA & BRIAN) Oh yes,wasps do exist for a reason. They provide us with a very satisfying...
  October 16th, 2020 00:56
• Family Plowing     (Dlherrmann) A very readable analogy piece. But your heritage made a financial living...
  October 15th, 2020 10:41
• Staying Alive (Lorna) It is necessary to have a sanctum, a place to be self without pressures of...
  October 15th, 2020 10:36
• Left Behind. (Fay Slimm.) An act of nature, gifted to you to marvel upon. Just as is some poetry...
  October 15th, 2020 09:45
• Death Missed. (Goldfinch60) One hundred percent with you on this one.
  October 15th, 2020 09:40
• Scarecrow Ode (Dove) Our local farmer has installed enhancements so that the scarecrow smells...
  October 14th, 2020 21:30
• Tapestry of life (Arobot) For we are but stardust recycled.
  October 14th, 2020 15:12
• Moses was a strange man (Trenz Pruca) Christianity is full of dual standards. Once realised and one\'s questions...
  October 14th, 2020 15:03
• I was made for you (Crowns4Christ) Long may it last for you both. A lovely expression of deep affection from...
  October 14th, 2020 13:00
• The Sheets and Time (Lorna) Many of us, of all ages, for all reasons, are living life at a low pace...
  October 14th, 2020 12:57
• Wasps (Neville) Oh i dunno about good for nuthin..... they make a rather satisfying...
  October 14th, 2020 12:40
• Raptoring. (Fay Slimm.) Nice one. These birds are really exciting to watch. I saw one being...
  October 14th, 2020 12:39
• Goldie and Orchi at Hastings. (Goldfinch60) Yes, i was there, that was the day i was combing the beach for old fossils...
  October 14th, 2020 12:32
• Bring us More Liquor (Neville) I\'m gonna be a train driver when I grow up, what you gonna be...
  October 13th, 2020 05:58
• Sometime Life Happens. (Goldfinch60) Famously john lennon said \"life is what happens to you whilst your busy...
  October 13th, 2020 05:51
• Awayness (Fay Slimm.) So much to read into this fine piece as it paints upon the easel of my...
  October 13th, 2020 05:46
• Spit it Out (Neville) Some become so enraged by the hurt they experience that they are unable to...
  October 10th, 2020 08:55
• Never Forget (Fay Slimm.) In the hope that those who have not yet considered both the futility and...
  October 10th, 2020 06:57
• The Things They Do (Lorna) Lovely celebration of individualism Lorna. And long shall it stay this...
  October 10th, 2020 04:48
• Heaven on Earth? (Saxon Crow) Yes indeed, not in a book or a church.
  October 10th, 2020 02:03
• LIMERICK No 69 (Michael Edwards) worried of blubber around her hips she surfed the net for dietry...
  October 10th, 2020 02:00
• judge not (Crowns4Christ) Set free from what?
  October 10th, 2020 01:41
• Laughter Wins. (Goldfinch60) Absolutely agree. Well said!
  October 10th, 2020 01:38
• Mile High (Neville) On the occasions when i flew to close to the sun which lit a lovers bed I...
  October 9th, 2020 11:25
• So Met. (Fay Slimm.) Its cos theyre Cornish. Gnarled and bent they may be but theyre tenacious...
  October 9th, 2020 11:21
• ...AND... (Michael Edwards) I\'m with the chattering birds admiring their boughs with this one. Oh for...
  October 9th, 2020 11:17
• Happy Trad. (Goldfinch60) Not a fan of trad but did see the very popular local trad band something...
  October 9th, 2020 11:14
• Faith (Saxon Crow) Definitely describes that leap of faith when we put our heart in someones...
  October 8th, 2020 19:47
• Don’t Blame it on the River   (Mark_2011) This speaks of crimes of assasination unknown to me. It is heart...
  October 8th, 2020 14:03
• Woollen Stockings (Neville) Left me with one word in mind, outlined by your piece. Dignity.
  October 8th, 2020 13:55
• Trenched. (Fay Slimm.) As one civilisation begins to learn, healing the wounds of conflict bourne...
  October 8th, 2020 13:53
• Happiness Butterfly. (Goldfinch60) Very interesting content in your work today Mr Goldfinch and I\'m going to...
  October 8th, 2020 13:40
• familiar bench scenarios (пицбургэр) (Conradconrad) Very confused and far too long a rant. Where is the art? Poetry?
  October 7th, 2020 20:46
• fame is famously a inheritance (Lucifer very very very 1st) you\'re so vein aintcha
  October 7th, 2020 18:00
• Ode to a Sticky D Key (Lorna) d\'s are a few of my favourite things.
  October 7th, 2020 04:59
• Blue Light (Neville) Arithmetic and poetry should be kept on separate pages... grrrrr quite...
  October 7th, 2020 03:27
• Cleansing Our Lifetimes. (Goldfinch60) The rain is perpetual and gives us so much, not least among it\'s gifts is...
  October 7th, 2020 03:18
• Fear (Dove) Is there really that much fear around??? Not for me I aasure you and I...
  October 6th, 2020 22:23
• Grab the Day (Trenz Pruca) In these times of lockdown and shielding many of us are finding a lot more...
  October 6th, 2020 22:18
• Seize Now (Fay Slimm.) The past surely is a bounty, a treasure which brought is to here and we...
  October 6th, 2020 07:32
• A Solitary Passing (Neville) Every young recruit of every cause should be made to completely understand...
  October 6th, 2020 07:21
• Practising And Preaching (Orchidee) Are you ready to hear the C of E statement about its rampant peodophilia...
  October 6th, 2020 02:22
• Another Year Gone. (Goldfinch60) Let us all of a certain age hope we shall see the next birthday without...
  October 6th, 2020 02:19
• Wild Company (Lorna) You shame us here in UK for most us can only relate to spiders as a visit...
  October 5th, 2020 06:55
• Wished-For (Fay Slimm.) Concern over a friends wellbeing and one\'s joy on learning of their good...
  October 5th, 2020 06:46
• THE TIDE (Michael Edwards) Ah...i knew it was wrong..... henceforth i shall look for the backward...
  October 5th, 2020 06:41
• New Joys. (Goldfinch60) Once more we see the positive love of life you exhibit Goldfinch whilst...
  October 5th, 2020 06:38
• Beauty (Dove) Ah the mask of no smiles.... so many times i have said \"I\'m smiling...
  October 4th, 2020 08:04
• Mr. Mediocre (Neville) I\'m always embarrassed when you write about me. Do you think i should...
  October 4th, 2020 07:57
• Kathleen Sings To Me (Goldfinch60) I took time to listen to this piece. Yes she certainly has an exceptional...
  October 4th, 2020 01:51
• STRUCK (Michael Edwards) Oh dear the poor republican to stop me from cheering i\'m doing all i...
  October 4th, 2020 01:44
• I’m Leaning Towards Insane (Dove) To me this reads like a mindful assessment of self in preparation to reset...
  October 4th, 2020 01:04
• Tide-Turn. (Fay Slimm.) Its as if the tides are there to remind us of the permanence of certain...
  October 3rd, 2020 03:55
• WHAT A MUPPET (Michael Edwards) That\'s nothing short of excellent! a wasp came a buzzin around makin...
  October 3rd, 2020 02:00
• Playing Fair. (Goldfinch60) Footie has been spoiled by all that dirty play..... and it rubs off on...
  October 3rd, 2020 01:52
• Some Words are not Just Words (Neville) Looks like Ive lost last week again..i dunno where ive put it...
  October 3rd, 2020 01:49
• A Patchwork of Ashes (Neville) You cant always see what you get and you dont always get what you want...
  September 30th, 2020 04:05
• The Undisturbed (Fay Slimm.) Wonderful to stroll upon your words into the tranquil space of natures...
  September 30th, 2020 03:59
• Greatness Of God - Isaiah Series (2) (Orchidee) Glad you mentioned omnipotence. Omni potent - having unlimited power and...
  September 30th, 2020 03:51
• Laughter For All. (Goldfinch60) Spontaneous laughter for no apparent reason is amazing, so uplifting....
  September 30th, 2020 01:41
• Come Out & Play (93tmarie) A wonderful expression of how heartbreak can lead to tainted expressions...
  September 29th, 2020 23:24
• Come-a-Day (Neville) magnificent
  September 29th, 2020 10:11
• finding her (Mydesirelines) Oh no....she\'ll only break your heart ..... well, she will if you...
  September 19th, 2020 02:16
• Venus Destroyed. (Goldfinch60) What do they look like?.... its those blessed pikeys isn\'t it.... they...
  September 19th, 2020 02:14
• Compatible. (Fay Slimm.) WOW !!! just flippin wow!!! That feels really written from the heart...
  September 18th, 2020 04:19
• America is Ready (MLHnow) You need to spend some time getting to know how the layout tools work for...
  September 18th, 2020 01:44
• The Testament (Gerrylegister) Oh no not another victim of the plague of believing in the fairy tales of...
  September 18th, 2020 01:38
• JUST APPEARED (Joe Marcello) Fairy tales have many inconsistencies and get enhanced regularly by the...
  September 18th, 2020 01:35
• Stella. (Goldfinch60) I have always loved dogs and i see the very spirit of dog within your...
  September 18th, 2020 01:28
• Bonus. (Fay Slimm.) Reading your words today i shudder as your description of summers end now...
  September 17th, 2020 03:56
• Amiable Anointing (Orchidee) Love the way you re-write these fairy tales even though to do so would be...
  September 17th, 2020 03:49
• Touched by Literature. (Goldfinch60) Every author\'s inner desire is to emotionally affect their reader...
  September 17th, 2020 03:46
• ONION (Michael Edwards) Can you imagine how my friend felt, he married a russian doll? I\'m a...
  September 17th, 2020 03:41
• Abraham\'s tent (Gavin) Nice fairy tale with great reference to fairy tale characters.
  September 16th, 2020 04:17
• Souls Know. (Fay Slimm.) Bliss! Yep like a alloy, two become one and of newfound strength and...
  September 16th, 2020 02:48
• Pyotr Ilyich. (Goldfinch60) How can one live without the string quartets of \'Chikers?\' LOL Ok so...
  September 16th, 2020 01:33
• Endless daze, sweaty nights (Trenz Pruca) Insomnia rules!
  September 16th, 2020 00:49
• when they ask me why i cannot clean the home that you invaded (Lainacarson98) Very emotive writing. When a huge chunk of our life is taken away we...
  September 16th, 2020 00:09
• Empty (MelissaJA) A metaphor for a life choice to hide away from emotion? Safely decay away...
  September 15th, 2020 23:36
• Vessel (SerenWise) Very true. As we mature, and begin to understand that romantic love is...
  September 15th, 2020 23:29
• Let me Serenade You (Dove) You really are quite the poet of romance here. By heck...Oh some lucky...
  September 15th, 2020 11:08
• Intake. (Fay Slimm.) Now if I\'m not mistaken that picture is taken from Lands End looking...
  September 15th, 2020 11:05
• Geographia (Neville) I didn\'t know you were related to a womble - good old uncle...
  September 15th, 2020 10:57
• Together. (Goldfinch60) No one reading your words over these last few years could be in any doubt...
  September 15th, 2020 01:47