Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- So Met. (Fay Slimm.)
Its cos theyre Cornish. Gnarled and bent they may be but theyre tenacious...
October 9th, 2020 11:21 - ...AND... (Michael Edwards)
I\'m with the chattering birds admiring their boughs with this one. Oh for...
October 9th, 2020 11:17 - Happy Trad. (Goldfinch60)
Not a fan of trad but did see the very popular local trad band something...
October 9th, 2020 11:14 - Faith (Saxon Crow)
Definitely describes that leap of faith when we put our heart in someones...
October 8th, 2020 19:47 - Don’t Blame it on the River (Mark_2011)
This speaks of crimes of assasination unknown to me. It is heart...
October 8th, 2020 14:03 - Woollen Stockings (Neville)
Left me with one word in mind, outlined by your piece.
Dignity.
October 8th, 2020 13:55 - Trenched. (Fay Slimm.)
As one civilisation begins to learn, healing the wounds of conflict bourne...
October 8th, 2020 13:53 - Happiness Butterfly. (Goldfinch60)
Very interesting content in your work today Mr Goldfinch and I\'m going to...
October 8th, 2020 13:40 - familiar bench scenarios (пицбургэр) (Conradconrad)
Very confused and far too long a rant. Where is the art? Poetry?
October 7th, 2020 20:46 - fame is famously a inheritance (Lucifer very very very 1st)
you\'re so vein aintcha
October 7th, 2020 18:00 - Ode to a Sticky D Key (Lorna)
d\'s are a few of my favourite things.
October 7th, 2020 04:59 - Blue Light (Neville)
Arithmetic and poetry should be kept on separate pages... grrrrr
quite...
October 7th, 2020 03:27 - Cleansing Our Lifetimes. (Goldfinch60)
The rain is perpetual and gives us so much, not least among it\'s gifts is...
October 7th, 2020 03:18 - Fear (Dove)
Is there really that much fear around??? Not for me I aasure you and I...
October 6th, 2020 22:23 - Grab the Day (Trenz Pruca)
In these times of lockdown and shielding many of us are finding a lot more...
October 6th, 2020 22:18 - Seize Now (Fay Slimm.)
The past surely is a bounty, a treasure which brought is to here and we...
October 6th, 2020 07:32 - A Solitary Passing (Neville)
Every young recruit of every cause should be made to completely understand...
October 6th, 2020 07:21 - Practising And Preaching (Orchidee)
Are you ready to hear the C of E statement about its rampant peodophilia...
October 6th, 2020 02:22 - Another Year Gone. (Goldfinch60)
Let us all of a certain age hope we shall see the next birthday without...
October 6th, 2020 02:19 - Wild Company (Lorna)
You shame us here in UK for most us can only relate to spiders as a visit...
October 5th, 2020 06:55 - Wished-For (Fay Slimm.)
Concern over a friends wellbeing and one\'s joy on learning of their good...
October 5th, 2020 06:46 - THE TIDE (Michael Edwards)
Ah...i knew it was wrong..... henceforth i shall look for the backward...
October 5th, 2020 06:41 - New Joys. (Goldfinch60)
Once more we see the positive love of life you exhibit Goldfinch whilst...
October 5th, 2020 06:38 - Beauty (Dove)
Ah the mask of no smiles.... so many times i have said \"I\'m smiling...
October 4th, 2020 08:04 - Mr. Mediocre (Neville)
I\'m always embarrassed when you write about me.
Do you think i should...
October 4th, 2020 07:57 - Kathleen Sings To Me (Goldfinch60)
I took time to listen to this piece. Yes she certainly has an exceptional...
October 4th, 2020 01:51 - STRUCK (Michael Edwards)
Oh dear the poor republican
to stop me from cheering
i\'m doing all i...
October 4th, 2020 01:44 - I’m Leaning Towards Insane (Dove)
To me this reads like a mindful assessment of self in preparation to reset...
October 4th, 2020 01:04 - Tide-Turn. (Fay Slimm.)
Its as if the tides are there to remind us of the permanence of certain...
October 3rd, 2020 03:55 - WHAT A MUPPET (Michael Edwards)
That\'s nothing short of excellent!
a wasp came a buzzin around
makin...
October 3rd, 2020 02:00 - Playing Fair. (Goldfinch60)
Footie has been spoiled by all that dirty play..... and it rubs off on...
October 3rd, 2020 01:52 - Some Words are not Just Words (Neville)
Looks like Ive lost last week again..i dunno where ive put it...
October 3rd, 2020 01:49 - A Patchwork of Ashes (Neville)
You cant always see what you get and you dont always get what you want...
September 30th, 2020 04:05 - The Undisturbed (Fay Slimm.)
Wonderful to stroll upon your words into the tranquil space of natures...
September 30th, 2020 03:59 - Greatness Of God - Isaiah Series (2) (Orchidee)
Glad you mentioned omnipotence. Omni potent - having unlimited power and...
September 30th, 2020 03:51 - Laughter For All. (Goldfinch60)
Spontaneous laughter for no apparent reason is amazing, so uplifting....
September 30th, 2020 01:41 - Come Out & Play (93tmarie)
A wonderful expression of how heartbreak can lead to tainted expressions...
September 29th, 2020 23:24 - Come-a-Day (Neville)
magnificent
September 29th, 2020 10:11 - finding her (Mydesirelines)
Oh no....she\'ll only break your heart ..... well, she will if you...
September 19th, 2020 02:16 - Venus Destroyed. (Goldfinch60)
What do they look like?.... its those blessed pikeys isn\'t it.... they...
September 19th, 2020 02:14 - Compatible. (Fay Slimm.)
WOW !!! just flippin wow!!!
That feels really written from the heart...
September 18th, 2020 04:19 - America is Ready (MLHnow)
You need to spend some time getting to know how the layout tools work for...
September 18th, 2020 01:44 - The Testament (Gerrylegister)
Oh no not another victim of the plague of believing in the fairy tales of...
September 18th, 2020 01:38 - JUST APPEARED (Joe Marcello)
Fairy tales have many inconsistencies and get enhanced regularly by the...
September 18th, 2020 01:35 - Stella. (Goldfinch60)
I have always loved dogs and i see the very spirit of dog within your...
September 18th, 2020 01:28 - Bonus. (Fay Slimm.)
Reading your words today i shudder as your description of summers end now...
September 17th, 2020 03:56 - Amiable Anointing (Orchidee)
Love the way you re-write these fairy tales even though to do so would be...
September 17th, 2020 03:49 - Touched by Literature. (Goldfinch60)
Every author\'s inner desire is to emotionally affect their reader...
September 17th, 2020 03:46 - ONION (Michael Edwards)
Can you imagine how my friend felt, he married a russian doll?
I\'m a...
September 17th, 2020 03:41 - Abraham\'s tent (Gavin)
Nice fairy tale with great reference to fairy tale characters.
September 16th, 2020 04:17 - Souls Know. (Fay Slimm.)
Bliss! Yep like a alloy, two become one and of newfound strength and...
September 16th, 2020 02:48 - Pyotr Ilyich. (Goldfinch60)
How can one live without the string quartets of \'Chikers?\' LOL
Ok so...
September 16th, 2020 01:33 - Endless daze, sweaty nights (Trenz Pruca)
Insomnia rules!
September 16th, 2020 00:49 - when they ask me why i cannot clean the home that you invaded (Lainacarson98)
Very emotive writing. When a huge chunk of our life is taken away we...
September 16th, 2020 00:09 - Empty (MelissaJA)
A metaphor for a life choice to hide away from emotion? Safely decay away...
September 15th, 2020 23:36 - Vessel (SerenWise)
Very true. As we mature, and begin to understand that romantic love is...
September 15th, 2020 23:29 - Let me Serenade You (Dove)
You really are quite the poet of romance here.
By heck...Oh some lucky...
September 15th, 2020 11:08 - Intake. (Fay Slimm.)
Now if I\'m not mistaken that picture is taken from Lands End looking...
September 15th, 2020 11:05 - Geographia (Neville)
I didn\'t know you were related to a womble - good old uncle...
September 15th, 2020 10:57 - Together. (Goldfinch60)
No one reading your words over these last few years could be in any doubt...
September 15th, 2020 01:47 - of irish spring soap and absent fathers (Queer-with-a-pen)
Between the lines i read the melancholy of regret. Regret that whilst you...
September 15th, 2020 00:58 - “Terzanelle” A Million Stars (Dove)
So many unanswered questions when we lose someone dear to us, so we look...
September 14th, 2020 12:31 - Given. (Fay Slimm.)
Can\'t help but be drawn into the character of dear Rosie here for I too...
September 14th, 2020 06:25 - Opening and Shutting Doors. (Goldfinch60)
No no no. In closing doors we are acknowledging the wisdom our experiences...
September 14th, 2020 06:15 - Big Mistake (DesertWords)
Excellent! Really enjoyed this. Pathos throughout. Great slant upon which...
September 14th, 2020 06:10 - The Cabin Floor (Evergreen)
Couldn\'t stop reading this. Longer pieces generally bore me but here you...
September 14th, 2020 06:07 - BEAUTY ~ PURPOS\\E ~ ORDER & DESIGN ~ LIFE ON PLANET EARTH ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Maybe he would see the agony of the recipient when a mother insect lays...
September 13th, 2020 05:08 - Oxtail Stew. (Goldfinch60)
And may there be excellence of waiter service and afterwards the kitchen...
September 13th, 2020 04:02 - Poem, LOVE? (AwHec8)
Methinks there is much about love to learn for you. Love will teach you...
September 12th, 2020 10:39 - PROVERBS FOR POETS ~ AN ANTHOLOGY (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Most enjoyable post from you today.
September 12th, 2020 05:11 - Weird Enjoyment. (Goldfinch60)
I enjoy ironing about twice a year.... mostly i wear un-ironed clothes...
September 12th, 2020 05:07 - IN DREAMS (Michael Edwards)
Love the way you lead us into darkness to deliver that final punchline,
September 12th, 2020 05:03 - How Are You? Goldiku. (Goldfinch60)
Some things about growing older are quite saddening. During adolescence Ms...
September 11th, 2020 15:21 - DOWNTOWN GIRL (Laura🌻)
Moving words for the memory of your lost friend and all the other...
September 11th, 2020 08:49 - Show Me. (Fay Slimm.)
Now there\'s a prayer and a half. But i reckon the solution is granted to...
September 11th, 2020 05:09 - Between Worlds. (Fay Slimm.)
I have to admit to being sidetracked by the geometry of this presentations...
September 11th, 2020 00:54 - FOR SUCH A TIME AS THIS ! ~ BRIAN ~ A KYRIELLE SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Nice bit of poetry there Brian. Of course, with Angela as inspiration the...
September 10th, 2020 03:49 - Diverse Paths. (Goldfinch60)
Hmmmm walking, I wish it were easier but Osteoarthritis in my knees,...
September 10th, 2020 03:24 - Poem, Day by Day (AwHec8)
Good words of wisdom there. You have a lot to give in your poetic output...
September 9th, 2020 12:29 - Full.. (Poetic Dan)
Dunno why but today none of the videos on here are giving me audio so i...
September 9th, 2020 12:25 - Kyrielle Sonnet: A Delicate Flower (Dove)
Super construction in classic style verse.
I particularly like (and...
September 9th, 2020 12:07 - Unnoticed (MrNobody40)
Story of my life mate.
But upon reflection i read your piece again and...
September 9th, 2020 12:02 - THE BIG STORM (Trenz Pruca)
@They say\' is only man trying to gainsay nature. But nature will have its...
September 9th, 2020 11:51 - Waking. (Fay Slimm.)
Well you \'bright-eyed doer\' you\'ve been and gone and done it again...
September 9th, 2020 11:48 - Clarity and Freedom. (Goldfinch60)
As Orchi would say - a fine write.
It\'s amazing, all that clutter we...
September 9th, 2020 11:39 - TWO FOR ONE THOUSAND (Michael Edwards)
There was a fine chap called M.E.
Who\'d been on a grand writing spree
i...
September 9th, 2020 11:31 - Death Is Nothing At All (MalharPatel190)
An outstanding first write in MPS.
Nice to see this appreciation of...
September 9th, 2020 11:14 - Lamplight (Trenz Pruca)
Great suspenseful writing. What horrors await us in your further writings....
September 8th, 2020 20:39 - Smooth Like Honey (Faitholajuyigbe)
Nice words. But mankind was hearing voices telling good things, the inner...
September 8th, 2020 14:23 - Open heart surgery (Poetic Dan)
Hi Dan. When my son was a toddler he was afraid of me. It wasn\'t a nice...
September 8th, 2020 11:07 - Balls. (Goldfinch60)
Trust you to come up with a load of balls like this.
September 8th, 2020 10:57 - autumn (Ron parrish aka wordman)
And squirrels make love all winter long
September 8th, 2020 10:01 - Family Gathering. (Dsouzcry)
Every one of us is an individual and it\'s not surprising for people to...
September 7th, 2020 17:50 - A room that echoes (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Sadness as if one were reaching for the last ever human touch, a...
September 7th, 2020 17:33 - Disguised. (Fay Slimm.)
Yes such lovely creation upon the plant and here upon my screen.
Then...
September 7th, 2020 17:28 - Miracle For A Multitude (Orchidee)
Should have gone to Lidl.
September 7th, 2020 02:24 - Tame Your Unquiet Minds. (Goldfinch60)
Sadly it is a great human failing. History shows our inability to live in...
September 7th, 2020 01:59 - WOVEN IDIOMS (Michael Edwards)
I laughed like a drain at your daft picture today, great fun.
Mow the...
September 7th, 2020 01:28 - Maybe (Ron parrish aka wordman)
A soul mate from a previous life maybe. Dreams take our minds to a...
September 7th, 2020 00:30 - Chimerical (Fay Slimm.)
Ha! Honorable tinklings upon breeze announce back door left open. Maybe...
September 6th, 2020 03:56
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