Comments on community poems by dusk arising
- My Forgotten Life. (Camille)
Very powerful writing. Enough to make every reader thoughful about what...
June 17th, 2019 10:00 - Out of Sight (Neville)
Were we all able to read each others thoughts then your writing would be...
June 17th, 2019 05:50 - Again & Again (Poetic Dan)
Quote:-
Work is love made visible. And if you cannot work with love but...
June 17th, 2019 05:46 - From \'A COLLECTION\' (13) (Michael Edwards)
And when his python head arrives we shall all chant \" Nice to see you -...
June 17th, 2019 05:39 - Hitchhikers Guide. (Goldfinch60)
Hmmm hitch hikers.... i\'m reluctant. You just dont know what you are...
June 17th, 2019 05:35 - Crash & burn (Poetic Dan)
Life brings unexpected challenges, disappointments, and mistakes. Without...
June 16th, 2019 18:26 - Out of the Blue (Neville)
I\'ll quote some famous words to respond to your fine sweet and sour words...
June 16th, 2019 08:59 - Tuneful Times (Orchidee)
LOL praise him all u like .... he won\'t hear u Orchidee.
June 16th, 2019 03:02 - Lady Lost. (Goldfinch60)
There you go Goldfinch. You know already that the church will just dance...
June 16th, 2019 01:45 - From \'A COLLECTION\' (12) (Michael Edwards)
Charts don\'t do anything. Farts can do lots.
Take that as definite...
June 16th, 2019 01:39 - From \'A COLLECTION\' (12) (Michael Edwards)
Charts don\'t do anything. Farts can do lots.
Take that as definite...
June 16th, 2019 01:19 - Make a long story short (Dls2012)
Welcome to MPS. We are all kinds of poets. Some seem to have to write...
June 15th, 2019 21:00 - Dear Children. (Kevin browne)
shall we know peace when she comes
this stranger to our land
will...
June 15th, 2019 11:32 - Old Poets (Neville)
Life - a history lesson.
Without a history, whats to write...
June 15th, 2019 10:56 - Giving Glory (Orchidee)
you you could could have have said said all all that that in in just just...
June 15th, 2019 10:54 - Imagination Managing. (Goldfinch60)
Amazing virtuoso piece and soooo long. Truly proving he is a master of...
June 15th, 2019 10:51 - Before I Go Blind (Neville)
But have u ever dabbled in the rings of saturn? Or the perverse pleasures...
June 14th, 2019 10:58 - SEDUCTION. (Fay Slimm.)
No escape desired or planned.... drown me.
June 14th, 2019 10:54 - Faith Controls The Tongue - James Series (4) (Orchidee)
Jeez u dont half use some weird grammar Orchidee.
June 14th, 2019 10:52 - That Wonderful Place. (Goldfinch60)
This is such an uplifting read coming from you in your circumstance. You...
June 14th, 2019 10:49 - Persistence is a fun key (Poetic Dan)
The crocodile snapped at Dan\'s feet
But crafty Dan was way out of...
June 14th, 2019 10:41 - So So Bad - \\\\\\\"Lane\\\\\\\" (So So Bad Official)
Sounds like a shy kid, afraid of the microphone, mumbling in the...
June 13th, 2019 15:27 - If Ever I Get A Girl Again. (Kevin browne)
I wasn\'t sure where this was going but i enjoyed those twists and turns,...
June 13th, 2019 12:42 - Forever (Lulu Boatwright)
Lovely tribute to a missed someone special.
May i politely suggest that...
June 13th, 2019 07:17 - The Earthworm and Caterpillar (Jenny Wren)
Hmmm surprisingly sad ending. I thought i was reading a joyful piece ideal...
June 13th, 2019 07:11 - WE. (Fay Slimm.)
Eyyup lass, tha\'s nailed eet wi words as teks me back tuh when dad bort...
June 13th, 2019 07:06 - I\'ve seen (Poetic Dan)
For mid June theres too many flippin showers.. and its too cold!
Are...
June 13th, 2019 06:59 - Zeal For Zion (Orchidee)
What does this lord bloke do up there on his mountain... control...
June 13th, 2019 06:55 - Transported from Reality. (Goldfinch60)
Vincent\'s work can take me places with little doubt.
Music is...
June 13th, 2019 06:49 - Once an Item (Neville)
The great things about memories are that they are stuff you did not stuff...
June 13th, 2019 06:41 - ESTEEM. (Fay Slimm.)
Your wonderful first verse here says it all for me.
June 12th, 2019 02:37 - Who Am I - FIBS. (Goldfinch60)
I am beside myself with admiration who is an old pal from way back when i...
June 12th, 2019 02:36 - On Being Human (Neville)
A lesson well presented. I hope it\'s taken on board.
We are very...
June 12th, 2019 02:33 - I am.... (Poetic Dan)
Yep! nuff said?
June 12th, 2019 02:29 - Shadows (Suresh)
The measure of any man will not be the wealth or status he achieved. A man...
June 12th, 2019 02:27 - Feels Like It\'s Been A While (Nafis Light)
Uplifting.
June 11th, 2019 16:51 - Runner Beans (Classicmister)
Very enjoyable. Enjoy those beans.
June 11th, 2019 16:44 - I’m jealous (Ady123)
Learn how to love and jealousy will leave you alone.
How do you learn...
June 11th, 2019 16:42 - who did you think i am? (Aamina)
Why should the reader think you are male?
Maybe it\'s the way you write...
June 11th, 2019 16:39 - Outrageous (Suresh)
Buy a gun. Become an american. Trust in Trump. Everything else is just...
June 11th, 2019 16:36 - Searching (An Abstract View of Life)
You long for love and you ain\'t dead yet. Are you near death? I hope not....
June 11th, 2019 16:28 - Butterworth Crows (Neville)
Poor train driver. Traumatised for life. And SHE has fallen asleep in the...
June 11th, 2019 03:34 - Teaching (Sylviasearcher)
Viking raiders all around are plundering again, arriving in their posh...
June 11th, 2019 03:29 - SMALLNESS. (Fay Slimm.)
Heady things that we are, it is so easy to ignore the tiny world at our...
June 11th, 2019 03:26 - Sending it somewhere (Poetic Dan)
Read my piece today m8. Although it is a true part of my life, you came to...
June 11th, 2019 03:21 - A Song Or Two? (Orchidee)
That dog at the keyboard i picture as your alter ego Orchidee.
June 11th, 2019 03:18 - Michael\'s Artistic World (Goldfinch60)
Come back Goldfinch! Don\'t take another step. Thats porridge you are...
June 11th, 2019 03:14 - From \'A COLLECTION\' (11) (Michael Edwards)
Is that where the axe hit her. Some cleavage it left,
Your pic is similar...
June 11th, 2019 03:07 - Your pocket or mine it will be fine (Poetic Dan)
Reads like somebody enjoying some of lifes little pleasures.
June 10th, 2019 05:59 - The Monster (Aa Harvey)
Oi! story of my life - except the last happy bits. LOL
I just had to...
June 10th, 2019 05:11 - GORMLESS. (Fay Slimm.)
Reminded me of our modified lyrics to that Tom Jones hit \"down the lane i...
June 10th, 2019 04:44 - Coffee (Down the rabbithole)
It feels like you are living a lost love and in pain. Your immediate...
June 10th, 2019 04:36 - Catching Flies (Neville)
AS my daughter went through her infant special schools we met a lot of...
June 10th, 2019 04:29 - Spirit Shine (Orchidee)
Well i don\'t believe in a christian god but i do hold with everything in...
June 10th, 2019 04:22 - From \'A COLLECTION\' (10) (Michael Edwards)
Ha! Trust a female to try entrapment at a time like that!
Great picture...
June 10th, 2019 04:15 - Does Size Matter. (Goldfinch60)
I have always been a lover of big cars probably because i have always been...
June 10th, 2019 04:12 - Stay Beautiful (Meg)
I guess that eventually the stuff we have been through and our coping...
June 9th, 2019 12:11 - Blessed to know you all (Poetic Dan)
I wholeheartedly agree with Nevilles words.
Consider this. Each one of...
June 9th, 2019 12:04 - Puppy Love (Neville)
The salty truth of a dog\'s affection revealed at last!
June 9th, 2019 11:56 - Dead to love (Aa Harvey)
When love is a two way emotion i.e. coming right back at you with the same...
June 9th, 2019 11:55 - Pentecost Pourings (Orchidee)
Blimey... you\'ll have a congregation knackerd singing all that.
June 9th, 2019 11:48 - From \'A COLLECTION\' (10) (Michael Edwards)
You definitely nailed it M.E.
June 9th, 2019 11:46 - Reality (Just Another Person :))
A sad viewpoint to admit to. Poets, being mostly people quite quite...
June 8th, 2019 17:15 - What If? (Meg)
Interesting. Will it make any difference telling them if they already know...
June 8th, 2019 13:17 - What If? (Meg)
Interesting. Will it make any difference telling them if they already know...
June 8th, 2019 12:13 - Gender Bender (Frank J III)
I read an interesting article in a U.K. newspaper called Daily Mail...
June 8th, 2019 12:09 - Of those we lose (Andrew Charles Forrest)
I think we pass on by example that which was passed to us by example. Some...
June 8th, 2019 10:57 - Man flu (Aa Harvey)
Thats telling it how it is.
June 8th, 2019 10:31 - Fold & keep (Poetic Dan)
These modified words of an old but very popular song come to mind:-
...
June 8th, 2019 10:29 - Coffee Sir? (Goldfinch60)
And (stupidly) the lady asked \"what would you like me to wear tonite...
June 8th, 2019 10:21 - From \'A COLLECTION\' (9) (Michael Edwards)
KInnell you made i larff. Bringing to mind a sight i have not yet seen....
June 8th, 2019 10:16 - My Fathers Jacket (Neville)
Very moving Neville. A bond so very strong comes across. A blessing which...
June 8th, 2019 10:10 - Neighbors Are Special (W c)
Envious of you. Would be so good if we all had a similar familiarity and...
June 8th, 2019 08:54 - Broken (Neville)
Sleep on it and awake to a new days dawn.
Tis true how things can be...
June 8th, 2019 08:41 - Broken (Neville)
Sleep on it and awake to a new days dawn.
Tis true how things can be...
June 7th, 2019 03:47 - CHOICES. (Fay Slimm.)
I know that you a lover of the dawning day and here you show us your love...
June 7th, 2019 03:28 - Home is me (Poetic Dan)
\'That which does not kill you makes you stronger\'
You have gathered...
June 7th, 2019 03:23 - Willing Way (Orchidee)
I could not read beyond the first few lines because..... how does an...
June 7th, 2019 03:19 - Memory Lost. (Goldfinch60)
Looking back into my poetry, i find pieces i have written which take me...
June 7th, 2019 03:15 - A COLLECTION (8) (Michael Edwards)
Brought to mind the trivial sounds being made by a certain robed anglican...
June 7th, 2019 03:00 - When the English Channel was Crossed (JWKP98)
Drafted conscripts without choice. Still unable to be non Nazi themselves...
June 6th, 2019 14:03 - I Trust Not In Me (Orchidee)
Who invented forgiveness?
June 6th, 2019 13:58 - WAITING FOR MY DADDY (Shayl)
So sad. After reading your words i wanted you to read...
June 6th, 2019 13:39 - Untitled - XVIII (Suresh)
A day in the life of mankind. Let us hope it is peaceful. And upon today...
June 6th, 2019 13:34 - Famous Last Words (Neville)
Verily i sayeth unto thee W.T.F.
Naa wot i meen innit?
June 6th, 2019 08:17 - The Carousel Ride (Lorna)
This is about real horses and neglect. Sad sad subject. Greyhounds...
June 6th, 2019 08:15 - Arm and a leg (Poetic Dan)
one for the kids.... will they groan though?
June 6th, 2019 08:13 - BLOCKS. (Fay Slimm.)
One wonders when you sleep for your poetry reveals you are very familiar...
June 6th, 2019 07:15 - Mary had a Little Lamb 14. (Goldfinch60)
Mary had a little sheep
And with her sheep she went to sleep
Her sheep...
June 6th, 2019 03:37 - SHORE LINE (Michael Edwards)
Fine words. My mind today is taken to beaches of Normandy some 75 years...
June 6th, 2019 03:35 - Whether You Win Or You Lose. (Kevin browne)
We have to keep on winning and.... as we get older we do, cos we see it...
June 5th, 2019 14:57 - Southern Dream (Cynthia)
i soon stopped reading because its not poetry. Is there a more suitable...
June 5th, 2019 09:45 - Troubles (Lorna)
THats how it is right enough. We all deal with troubles differently
June 5th, 2019 08:15 - Faith Removes Discrimination - James Series (2) (Orchidee)
I remember young Faith when we were at school in the midlands. Her teen...
June 5th, 2019 08:11 - Penang White Coffee (Neville)
Some people will travel to who knows where just to sample that once...
June 5th, 2019 08:08 - NO LIMITS. (Fay Slimm.)
The mystery of what makes us do our poetic thing.
Beautifully crafted...
June 5th, 2019 08:04 - Nature\'s Canvas. (Goldfinch60)
Beautiful isn\'t it. How many years we took it all for granted...
June 5th, 2019 07:57 - THE MISSING \'E\' (Michael Edwards)
Great fun from your inventive, creative mind today.
And the P is...
June 5th, 2019 07:53 - Grandmother (Poetic Dan)
Whatever your religion, faith, belief or motivation it is illness\' and...
June 5th, 2019 07:41 - The Evening Ball (Lorna)
Lovely! And nobody yet has compared to Fred & Ginger.
The evening...
June 4th, 2019 07:59
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