Comments on community poems by dusk arising

• I’m jealous (Ady123) Learn how to love and jealousy will leave you alone. How do you learn...
  June 11th, 2019 16:42
• who did you think i am? (Aamina) Why should the reader think you are male? Maybe it\'s the way you write...
  June 11th, 2019 16:39
• Outrageous (Suresh) Buy a gun. Become an american. Trust in Trump. Everything else is just...
  June 11th, 2019 16:36
• Searching (An Abstract View of Life) You long for love and you ain\'t dead yet. Are you near death? I hope not....
  June 11th, 2019 16:28
• Butterworth Crows (Neville) Poor train driver. Traumatised for life. And SHE has fallen asleep in the...
  June 11th, 2019 03:34
• Teaching (Sylviasearcher) Viking raiders all around are plundering again, arriving in their posh...
  June 11th, 2019 03:29
• SMALLNESS. (Fay Slimm.) Heady things that we are, it is so easy to ignore the tiny world at our...
  June 11th, 2019 03:26
• Sending it somewhere (Poetic Dan) Read my piece today m8. Although it is a true part of my life, you came to...
  June 11th, 2019 03:21
• A Song Or Two? (Orchidee) That dog at the keyboard i picture as your alter ego Orchidee.
  June 11th, 2019 03:18
• Michael\'s Artistic World (Goldfinch60) Come back Goldfinch! Don\'t take another step. Thats porridge you are...
  June 11th, 2019 03:14
• From \'A COLLECTION\' (11) (Michael Edwards) Is that where the axe hit her. Some cleavage it left, Your pic is similar...
  June 11th, 2019 03:07
• Your pocket or mine it will be fine (Poetic Dan) Reads like somebody enjoying some of lifes little pleasures.
  June 10th, 2019 05:59
• The Monster (Aa Harvey) Oi! story of my life - except the last happy bits. LOL I just had to...
  June 10th, 2019 05:11
• GORMLESS. (Fay Slimm.) Reminded me of our modified lyrics to that Tom Jones hit \"down the lane i...
  June 10th, 2019 04:44
• Coffee (Down the rabbithole) It feels like you are living a lost love and in pain. Your immediate...
  June 10th, 2019 04:36
• Catching Flies (Neville) AS my daughter went through her infant special schools we met a lot of...
  June 10th, 2019 04:29
• Spirit Shine (Orchidee) Well i don\'t believe in a christian god but i do hold with everything in...
  June 10th, 2019 04:22
• From \'A COLLECTION\' (10) (Michael Edwards) Ha! Trust a female to try entrapment at a time like that! Great picture...
  June 10th, 2019 04:15
• Does Size Matter. (Goldfinch60) I have always been a lover of big cars probably because i have always been...
  June 10th, 2019 04:12
• Stay Beautiful (Meg) I guess that eventually the stuff we have been through and our coping...
  June 9th, 2019 12:11
• Blessed to know you all (Poetic Dan) I wholeheartedly agree with Nevilles words. Consider this. Each one of...
  June 9th, 2019 12:04
• Puppy Love (Neville) The salty truth of a dog\'s affection revealed at last!
  June 9th, 2019 11:56
• Dead to love (Aa Harvey) When love is a two way emotion i.e. coming right back at you with the same...
  June 9th, 2019 11:55
• Pentecost Pourings (Orchidee) Blimey... you\'ll have a congregation knackerd singing all that.
  June 9th, 2019 11:48
• From \'A COLLECTION\' (10) (Michael Edwards) You definitely nailed it M.E.
  June 9th, 2019 11:46
• Reality (Just Another Person :)) A sad viewpoint to admit to. Poets, being mostly people quite quite...
  June 8th, 2019 17:15
• What If? (Meg) Interesting. Will it make any difference telling them if they already know...
  June 8th, 2019 13:17
• What If? (Meg) Interesting. Will it make any difference telling them if they already know...
  June 8th, 2019 12:13
• Gender Bender (Frank J III) I read an interesting article in a U.K. newspaper called Daily Mail...
  June 8th, 2019 12:09
• Of those we lose (Andrew Charles Forrest) I think we pass on by example that which was passed to us by example. Some...
  June 8th, 2019 10:57
• Man flu (Aa Harvey) Thats telling it how it is.
  June 8th, 2019 10:31
• Fold & keep (Poetic Dan) These modified words of an old but very popular song come to mind:- ...
  June 8th, 2019 10:29
• Coffee Sir? (Goldfinch60) And (stupidly) the lady asked \"what would you like me to wear tonite...
  June 8th, 2019 10:21
• From \'A COLLECTION\' (9) (Michael Edwards) KInnell you made i larff. Bringing to mind a sight i have not yet seen....
  June 8th, 2019 10:16
• My Fathers Jacket (Neville) Very moving Neville. A bond so very strong comes across. A blessing which...
  June 8th, 2019 10:10
• Neighbors Are Special (W c) Envious of you. Would be so good if we all had a similar familiarity and...
  June 8th, 2019 08:54
• Broken (Neville) Sleep on it and awake to a new days dawn. Tis true how things can be...
  June 8th, 2019 08:41
• Broken (Neville) Sleep on it and awake to a new days dawn. Tis true how things can be...
  June 7th, 2019 03:47
• CHOICES. (Fay Slimm.) I know that you a lover of the dawning day and here you show us your love...
  June 7th, 2019 03:28
• Home is me (Poetic Dan) \'That which does not kill you makes you stronger\' You have gathered...
  June 7th, 2019 03:23
• Willing Way (Orchidee) I could not read beyond the first few lines because..... how does an...
  June 7th, 2019 03:19
• Memory Lost. (Goldfinch60) Looking back into my poetry, i find pieces i have written which take me...
  June 7th, 2019 03:15
• A COLLECTION (8) (Michael Edwards) Brought to mind the trivial sounds being made by a certain robed anglican...
  June 7th, 2019 03:00
• When the English Channel was Crossed (JWKP98) Drafted conscripts without choice. Still unable to be non Nazi themselves...
  June 6th, 2019 14:03
• I Trust Not In Me (Orchidee) Who invented forgiveness?
  June 6th, 2019 13:58
• WAITING FOR MY DADDY (Shayl) So sad. After reading your words i wanted you to read...
  June 6th, 2019 13:39
• Untitled - XVIII (Suresh) A day in the life of mankind. Let us hope it is peaceful. And upon today...
  June 6th, 2019 13:34
• Famous Last Words (Neville) Verily i sayeth unto thee W.T.F. Naa wot i meen innit?
  June 6th, 2019 08:17
• The Carousel Ride (Lorna) This is about real horses and neglect. Sad sad subject. Greyhounds...
  June 6th, 2019 08:15
• Arm and a leg (Poetic Dan) one for the kids.... will they groan though?
  June 6th, 2019 08:13
• BLOCKS. (Fay Slimm.) One wonders when you sleep for your poetry reveals you are very familiar...
  June 6th, 2019 07:15
• Mary had a Little Lamb 14. (Goldfinch60) Mary had a little sheep And with her sheep she went to sleep Her sheep...
  June 6th, 2019 03:37
• SHORE LINE (Michael Edwards) Fine words. My mind today is taken to beaches of Normandy some 75 years...
  June 6th, 2019 03:35
• Whether You Win Or You Lose. (Kevin browne) We have to keep on winning and.... as we get older we do, cos we see it...
  June 5th, 2019 14:57
• Southern Dream (Cynthia) i soon stopped reading because its not poetry. Is there a more suitable...
  June 5th, 2019 09:45
• Troubles (Lorna) THats how it is right enough. We all deal with troubles differently
  June 5th, 2019 08:15
• Faith Removes Discrimination - James Series (2) (Orchidee) I remember young Faith when we were at school in the midlands. Her teen...
  June 5th, 2019 08:11
• Penang White Coffee (Neville) Some people will travel to who knows where just to sample that once...
  June 5th, 2019 08:08
• NO LIMITS. (Fay Slimm.) The mystery of what makes us do our poetic thing. Beautifully crafted...
  June 5th, 2019 08:04
• Nature\'s Canvas. (Goldfinch60) Beautiful isn\'t it. How many years we took it all for granted...
  June 5th, 2019 07:57
• THE MISSING \'E\' (Michael Edwards) Great fun from your inventive, creative mind today. And the P is...
  June 5th, 2019 07:53
• Grandmother (Poetic Dan) Whatever your religion, faith, belief or motivation it is illness\' and...
  June 5th, 2019 07:41
• The Evening Ball (Lorna) Lovely! And nobody yet has compared to Fred & Ginger. The evening...
  June 4th, 2019 07:59
• Robin (Classicmister) The UK robin is a really brave little bird and seems less afraid of humans...
  June 4th, 2019 07:56
• Everywhere I Look (Neville) I never sensed anything was going on...blimey i am so detached and...
  June 4th, 2019 07:51
• WHAT IS WINE ? ANGELA & BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN) Shurrup science teacher and get it down yer neck.... LOL Its not about...
  June 4th, 2019 05:09
• Believe it real (Poetic Dan) Once again a lot of wisdom in your words. The video though is quite...
  June 4th, 2019 05:00
• LILY. (Fay Slimm.) Now THERE is an expression of love for an often overlooked beauty. What a...
  June 4th, 2019 04:30
• Here An Hilastrion (Orchidee) You certainly know how to play to the gallery with this popular stuff...
  June 4th, 2019 04:24
• Continuing Life. (Goldfinch60) Excellent expression..... Why can\'t more of us be so enlightened?...
  June 4th, 2019 04:20
• IN TRANSCENDENCE (Michael Edwards) Four verses of considering... how am i gonna fix my motorbike - memories...
  June 4th, 2019 04:15
• A Time for Everything (Lorna) yep, there comes a time doesn\'t there. Does this mean we can expect...
  June 3rd, 2019 16:21
• Hardly a sound (Poetic Dan) Careful with that wind M8. Though TBH i\'ve never smelled an eagles fart....
  June 3rd, 2019 02:54
• The Senses For This Site. (Goldfinch60) Watching a Woody Allen film over the weekend i discovered this piece,...
  June 3rd, 2019 02:31
• Me ears are burning! (Orchidee) Your ears and Fido\'s should indeed be all aflame ... see my comments to...
  June 3rd, 2019 02:25
• HAUTEUR.. (Fay Slimm.) Indeed a Steely piece for this feared hunter. I have seen sparrow hawks...
  June 3rd, 2019 02:24
• Arbeit Macht Frie (Neville) Three words to remind us all of tryranny and madmen. Work in that instance...
  June 3rd, 2019 02:17
• DECLUTTER ~ THE RULE OF TEN ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A 6 8 SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN) I have TEN times too much clutter Most of which is fit for the gutter If...
  June 3rd, 2019 02:14
• LIMPET LUCY (Michael Edwards) Reminds me of Orchi\'s dog Fido He lost his left ear to a Flymo His pee...
  June 3rd, 2019 02:10
• Salt Marsh Fields (Neville) Great visions come out of this. I think youve encapsulated the magic of a...
  June 2nd, 2019 05:06
• Thanks for pushing me (Poetic Dan) Empathy, know what that is? Well youve got it in shedloads... thats how u...
  June 2nd, 2019 05:01
• Four year olds should run the world! (Andrew Charles Forrest) Absolutely delightful! I love my grandkids too.
  June 2nd, 2019 03:51
• Where Are You Tonight? (SerenWise) Hmmm maybe you dont want to hear the reply to the songs question. I\'m...
  June 2nd, 2019 01:45
• Newt (Sillygirl) OMG what is it you are keeping now then? Is it big? What does it eat. Is...
  June 2nd, 2019 01:41
• Let\'s Celebrate Something Together (Nafis Light) Sounds like a damn good suggestion to me.
  June 2nd, 2019 01:38
• Profitable Pause (Orchidee) Orchidee, we dont share the same appreciation of what god is but i do...
  June 2nd, 2019 01:36
• Emissary (Suresh) I\'m not sure about this one. Maybe you should set Orchidee\'s dog on him?
  June 2nd, 2019 01:34
• I Sit at the Table. (Goldfinch60) On the face of it a sad piece but.... Alone, or getting used to...
  June 2nd, 2019 01:32
• For Being Jack The Lad. (Kevin browne) This gave me laughs Kevin. I can see theres a darker side but it\'s the...
  June 2nd, 2019 01:23
• 4 years of sharing (Poetic Dan) Some are gone and some remain. Some are quite missed. MPS has...
  June 2nd, 2019 01:18
• A Moment (Neville) Dramatic Neville, very dramatic. Which is exactly what the subject...
  June 2nd, 2019 01:08
• From Darkness to Light. (Goldfinch60) The light within us is our positive energy which generates purpose. I...
  June 2nd, 2019 01:05
• If i could stay (Dusk arising) Well bless you Dan. I\'m pleased that my words have meant stuff for you. I...
  June 1st, 2019 19:56
• the immersivity of pain (Jon Nakapalau) That is one huge loss. I feel the pain in your words.
  May 30th, 2019 19:17
• No Cage for Thee (Neville) Beautiful separation of possessive romantic love from unconditional love....
  May 30th, 2019 09:52
• WHISPERS. (Fay Slimm.) This is Fay at her finest. You are marvellous with the dawn. It\'s almost...
  May 30th, 2019 09:47
• night troubles (Clair jane) Consider the life of a Butterfly, from maggot, thru pupae to a beautiful...
  May 30th, 2019 09:42
• A Letter From Those Who Will Stand (Nafis Light) Troubled times and peaceful repair seem to come in repetative waves....
  May 30th, 2019 09:35
• Ascension Alightings (Orchidee) Is this done as a rap... if you haven\'t tried it as a rap, have a go. it...
  May 30th, 2019 09:32
• LIFE*S DECISIONS ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ AN ACROSTIC 5 9 SONNET ! (ANGELA & BRIAN) Great stuff. As a self employed person this has been my way of life since...
  May 30th, 2019 09:30