Comments on community poems by Neville
- First Love. (Fay Slimm.)
this is more than just a poem.. this is a series of moments captured that...
May 6th, 2019 16:57 - Finish The Play (Suresh)
the show must go on regardless...
I sincerely hope these words and the...
May 6th, 2019 11:49 - Moodswings (Moordykspot2)
it is hard to put into words precisely why, but I thoroughly enjoyed the...
May 6th, 2019 11:16 - IN TRANSCENDENCE (Michael Edwards)
what a lovely set of words you have left a trail of wonder with today...
May 6th, 2019 11:08 - Light And The Spirit (Orchidee)
does adding water to it lighten the spirit or just make it weaker........
May 6th, 2019 10:56 - SPIN-BACK (Fay Slimm.)
so very sad.. but I imagine this is precisely how it happens and all too...
May 6th, 2019 04:48 - My Wonderful World. (Goldfinch60)
a poem pictured perfectly and a fine dedication too..... Neville
May 6th, 2019 04:02 - Living In The Light (Orchidee)
I think in general terms.. living in the light is universally more...
May 5th, 2019 11:30 - SMUTTY YES BUT VULGAR NO (Michael Edwards)
I could not agree more sir.. and although accept there is a critical...
May 5th, 2019 11:27 - Valentine (Suresh)
there are some great sentiments contained herein.. it would be great if...
May 5th, 2019 11:21 - Untitled - VII (Suresh)
distance and range do have such an impact on perception and like you so...
May 5th, 2019 11:17 - Ready. (Fay Slimm.)
makes perfect sense to me... perfectly poemed too I might add and likewise...
May 5th, 2019 04:09 - The illusion of angels (In memory of Paul) Elegy #1 (Andrew Charles Forrest)
There are those of us who will be able to relate to these fine words, even...
May 5th, 2019 03:54 - If you were in my place (Poetic Dan)
reads like a statement made while standing before a mirror, contemplating ...
May 5th, 2019 03:13 - Loves Light FIBS. (Goldfinch60)
a canny composition if ever there was & true, no fibbing...... N
May 5th, 2019 03:00 - Hope (Brycycle)
Hang on to it at all costs.... nicely shared... Neville
May 4th, 2019 13:31 - Apocalypse - World War I (Suresh)
there is no such thing as a good war.. and they certainly got it wrong...
May 4th, 2019 11:13 - Harry\'sField (Moordykspot2)
Everyone needs such a tranquil, memory filled retreat within which to...
May 4th, 2019 10:00 - Composting a Hymn (MendedFences27)
a compelling post if ever there was..... N
May 4th, 2019 05:22 - The Hawthorn (SerenWise)
what delightful imagery you have gifted us this May mane... there is...
May 4th, 2019 05:21 - FROM COMMENTS (3) (Michael Edwards)
and when a tree falls in a forest with no one to hear, does it make a...
May 4th, 2019 05:18 - NOW IS THE HOUR 🧡 WHEN WE MUST SAY GOODBYE 🧡 ANGELA 🧡 BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
under the circumstances described the emotions experienced are certainly...
May 4th, 2019 04:30 - Roll up, roll up! (Poetic Dan)
this has an experimental flavour and tone to it.... enjoyed.. Neville
May 4th, 2019 04:25 - Prayer Pleas (Orchidee)
I thought the way you work consecutively through the psalms was well...
May 4th, 2019 04:22 - That Tree. (Fay Slimm.)
I understand precisely why you felt compelled to write about the specimen...
May 4th, 2019 04:13 - Life is There. (Goldfinch60)
Good Mane GF60, you raise some very pertinent questions here and I have...
May 4th, 2019 02:23 - Beltane (SerenWise)
reminds me of something I once wrote... very nice, nevertheless..
May 3rd, 2019 14:26 - Greetings (Suresh)
Greetings.....
May 3rd, 2019 12:42 - Focus (JB)
Oh dear
May 3rd, 2019 10:34 - Gender revealing (Poetic Dan)
yes indeed.. here\'s looking forward to eventually welcoming you to the...
May 3rd, 2019 08:29 - THE WELL OF TIME (Michael Edwards)
you have every write indeed to be justifiably proud of these words......
May 3rd, 2019 08:24 - UNFETTERED. (Fay Slimm.)
apologies for my late response my friend... I have visited these words...
May 3rd, 2019 08:16 - In All Things..... (Orchidee)
Try as one might.. you are of course write...... tis impossible ..N
May 3rd, 2019 08:04 - Elegy I for the death of Leonard Cohen (Andrew Charles Forrest)
A fine and fitting tribute Andrew to the late, great Mr. Leonard Norman...
May 3rd, 2019 08:02 - Concerto of Dreams (Moordykspot2)
what an absolute delight sir.. and thanks for the ride.... All Good...
May 3rd, 2019 07:52 - Babies Don’t Bounce (Neville)
Unfortunately and far too often there are folk that try to test the theory...
May 3rd, 2019 03:20 - Butterfly Mind. (Goldfinch60)
join the club my friend......
May 3rd, 2019 02:57 - Teach Me how to Communicate (Suresh)
communication is the key.. it is what sets us apart from everything else.....
May 2nd, 2019 16:32 - Far (Sylviasearcher)
I entirely agree with the points of view already mentioned by each of my...
May 2nd, 2019 12:43 - Forces of Creation..... 4 (Suresh)
A heavy concept that titillates my curiosity no end and may well do...
May 2nd, 2019 12:21 - Auralism (SerenWise)
thoroughly enjoyed ... Neville
May 2nd, 2019 06:53 - WHAT WORTH. (Fay Slimm.)
extremely well constructed and appealing whatever way one looks at it...
May 2nd, 2019 05:01 - Ramblings?! (Orchidee)
a ramble about a ramble.. now that is surely quite unique.. I like it when...
May 2nd, 2019 03:14 - Prone to bouts of melancholy (Andrew Charles Forrest)
this is more than just good... and so easy to relate to too...... Neville
May 2nd, 2019 03:10 - FROM COMMENTS (2) (Michael Edwards)
is there any other way..
May 2nd, 2019 03:06 - THE JOYS OF CAMPER VANNING ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A 6 6 2 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
camper vans can be so much fun.. say it like it is why dont\'cha... thanks...
May 2nd, 2019 01:44 - Strange Awakening. (Goldfinch60)
I love the way you always seem to savour the moment and then share it ...
May 2nd, 2019 01:39 - Seed of Discontent (Suresh)
when and wherever seeds of discontent flourish and spread unchecked, .. it...
May 1st, 2019 11:27 - Another Week Alone. (Goldfinch60)
it is a beast that many of us already know only too well.. I for one,...
May 1st, 2019 06:58 - disappointed (Dusk arising)
I am inclined to believe you have expressed the opinions of an increasing...
May 1st, 2019 06:37 - Let it roll of the tongue (Poetic Dan)
muchly enjoyed and my response now deployed...... Neville
May 1st, 2019 05:08 - UNWRAPPED. (Fay Slimm.)
you have a great imagination Fay... and a fine pen..... this is a superb...
May 1st, 2019 04:15 - Waiting A While (Orchidee)
an interesting hymn poem that raises some good points for future...
May 1st, 2019 03:53 - The best time to plant a tree (Andrew Charles Forrest)
here we have a seamless coupling of truth and words of great wisdom.. well...
May 1st, 2019 03:13 - john (Dusk arising)
These words have been important since the day they were first written.. I...
April 30th, 2019 16:50 - DAY MONTH YEAR (Michael Edwards)
A little gem... and a larger one.....both enjoyed and then some...... N
April 30th, 2019 15:46 - Untitled - VI (Suresh)
this reads very apt considering... Neville
April 30th, 2019 10:33 - Providential Plenitude (Orchidee)
how much better we all feel when all is safely gathered in...... Neville
April 30th, 2019 03:28 - WILD. (Fay Slimm.)
wild indeed and long may she remain both wild and free, but found here...
April 30th, 2019 03:23 - His Star. (Fay Slimm.)
there is something a little bit special here Fay... well writ would be an...
April 30th, 2019 03:07 - The Conversation Conservation (Andrew Charles Forrest)
true words spoken well and true...
April 30th, 2019 02:59 - The Quiet Man (Andrew Charles Forrest)
these too are very moving words Charles and it is not hard to see why you...
April 30th, 2019 02:27 - New World Calls. (Goldfinch60)
a touching post indeed and based on sound, sensible and loving words .......
April 30th, 2019 02:22 - FORCES OF CREATION ....2 (Suresh)
interesting .. I need to bend my own mental muscle around these words a...
April 29th, 2019 10:34 - Empyrean (SerenWise)
top marks my friend.... very nice indeed...
April 29th, 2019 07:39 - through tears (Dusk arising)
penned to near perfection.... and that\'s damned good in my book ...
April 29th, 2019 07:37 - ONCE I HAD A LOVER (Michael Edwards)
most chucklesome sir...
April 29th, 2019 06:18 - Walking In Wisdom (Orchidee)
words enjoyed whether poem, hymn or hymn poem... N
April 29th, 2019 04:04 - SIGNS. (Fay Slimm.)
it seems we have an established mutual appreciation society in the making...
April 29th, 2019 03:43 - Snippet - Birth (Suresh)
an interesting post for sure..
April 29th, 2019 03:18 - Weighty Dreams. (Goldfinch60)
it happens ... well observed GF60.. go for Duracell next time round.... N
April 29th, 2019 03:11 - Bard (MendedFences27)
a great read and a memorable write...
April 28th, 2019 13:22 - Lie is the new truth (Suresh)
I sincerely hope this prophetic post & poem never becomes a reality.......
April 28th, 2019 12:13 - Wolf (SerenWise)
I dont know why these words have not yet been commented on by any of my...
April 28th, 2019 12:10 - Gad sir! (Dusk arising)
I smile, you just loiter with a guilty look on ya face ... but
April 28th, 2019 12:04 - Welcome to my jungle (Poetic Dan)
Never been to a Sunday rave my friend but it looks and sounds fun.... well...
April 28th, 2019 08:41 - Invisible tattoo (for Scarlet) (Andrew Charles Forrest)
This is absolutely delightful Andrew sir.. I bet scarlet is as proud of...
April 28th, 2019 05:27 - Empty Sky (Neville)
Thank you so much my friend...N
April 28th, 2019 05:20 - Peace Perpetual (Orchidee)
Yeah, precisely what I am looking for ... N
April 28th, 2019 04:07 - FREEING . (Fay Slimm.)
much more than a whimsey Fay.. this is a little gem in its own write and...
April 28th, 2019 04:05 - The House, My Home (Suresh)
there is much truth here....
April 28th, 2019 03:34 - Unfurl (SerenWise)
this is now my favourite poem of yours that I have read to date... N
April 28th, 2019 03:32 - Suited Times. (Goldfinch60)
How very true and sadly too...
April 28th, 2019 03:26 - Snippet - Empty Quiver (Suresh)
this may or may not have been meant to be funny or philosophical... either...
April 28th, 2019 03:23 - Loss of the Very Young - 1 (Suresh)
a tragedy for sure..
April 28th, 2019 03:21 - Seasons (Suresh)
Here you have captured the essence of each of the four seasons..
April 28th, 2019 03:18 - Daughter of creation (Poetic Dan)
its what makes the world go round..... nicely penned, my friend...
April 27th, 2019 11:36 - On the Cusp of ..... (Suresh)
a poem that can be interpreted in several ways and certainly one that...
April 27th, 2019 10:54 - Communion Charis (Orchidee)
just as I was getting into the rhythm, you go and hit me for six with a...
April 27th, 2019 10:28 - Asking. (Fay Slimm.)
so very dad & more than.. N
April 27th, 2019 06:16 - BEAUTIFUL QUEENSTOWN ~ A 7 7 SONNET (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Nice sonnet.. I plan to visit in November.. N
April 27th, 2019 04:56 - LUSTY TIMES. (Fay Slimm.)
when less say\'s more, this has got the lot and it shouts it out.......
April 27th, 2019 03:40 - How many times (re-write) (Dusk arising)
One mans sweet is another mans poison.....or summat...
enjoyed and...
April 27th, 2019 03:35 - Curry Goldiku. (Goldfinch60)
its behind you....
April 27th, 2019 03:11 - Petrichor (SerenWise)
you nailed it with these words so fine.. I just love the scent you so...
April 26th, 2019 11:48 - BACK THEN. (Fay Slimm.)
what can I say other than thank you my friend for taking me on a trip back...
April 26th, 2019 11:44 - evil (Dusk arising)
these words sadden me.. they read so well meant...
Neville
April 26th, 2019 11:39 - Rise Up (SerenWise)
this is very sweet and very touching.. N
April 26th, 2019 11:36 - Overcoming Overwhelmings (Orchidee)
oh what it must be.. to be overwhelmingly overcome ...
April 26th, 2019 11:34 - four and counting (Dusk arising)
a delight to read a real treasure sir.... N
April 26th, 2019 08:53
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