Comments on community poems by Neville

• what lights your eyes (Dusk arising) Your authors note culminates in a universal truth.. Your fine words...
  August 13th, 2019 16:55
• Solitaire (SerenWise) I like this.... N
  August 13th, 2019 13:23
• Perception (PoeticBiscuit) tis such a very personal thing perception.......... tis a darn good...
  August 13th, 2019 13:13
• Secret. (Fay Slimm.) A single red rose... and words that more than do it justice...... but sshh...
  August 13th, 2019 13:10
• Kunoichi no Geisha (Neville) You are write of course, and thank you for popping in today my friend... I...
  August 11th, 2019 11:49
• Kunoichi no Geisha (Neville) Thank you so very much Christina, your impression and comment are both...
  August 11th, 2019 11:31
• we need a whole lot of love (Dusk arising) I bet this sounded great live n loud.. it sounds great whispered in my...
  August 11th, 2019 05:20
• Not Again. (Fay Slimm.) Although this poem smacks of hurt, beauty nevertheless still sits...
  August 11th, 2019 03:17
• King\'s, Queens and all in between (Poetic Dan) just about sums everything up in one go.... Nice Neville
  August 11th, 2019 02:14
• Shedding (PoeticBiscuit) there are a lot of things one might assume from these words... but...
  August 11th, 2019 02:12
• FULL CIRCLE (Michael Edwards) fine words painted on the page and as well as being beautiful, Lowery...
  August 11th, 2019 02:09
• Rejoicing Regalings (Orchidee) It seems clear to me that Aristotle was spot on when he said \'The ...
  August 11th, 2019 02:08
• But Not Yet. (Goldfinch60) A heartfelt and uplifting wright in its very own right ... Nice one...
  August 11th, 2019 02:02
• Teenage Dream (PoeticBiscuit) You have crafted an aesthetically pleasing poem here and one which I...
  August 11th, 2019 00:37
• Modesty Acrostic. (Goldfinch60) what a wonderful acrostic poem you have crafted here Goldie.. Not an...
  August 10th, 2019 15:58
• Cotton Fields Listen As Wheat Grows Old. (Kevin browne) I really like this Kevin... great beat and rhythm my friend and some...
  August 10th, 2019 11:41
• Looking To Love (Orchidee) I really liked this... N
  August 10th, 2019 11:05
• Alive (Christina8) I imagine the fella you penned this for is one hellova lucky fella.....
  August 10th, 2019 10:48
• SWEET MELODY (FineB) I think you have the market cornered for this particular genre... quite...
  August 10th, 2019 10:46
• Motley. (Fay Slimm.) a new one on me.. but I am sure you did G. Manly-Hopkins proud .. I must...
  August 10th, 2019 05:29
• THE DREAM - THE REALITY (Michael Edwards) many a true word written in jest eh friend...... tis a damn good un this...
  August 10th, 2019 05:10
• Try... (Andrew Charles Forrest) Precisely... mine refused to even stick her nose out the door.. Mind we...
  August 10th, 2019 04:43
• Rare (Poetic Dan) I am smiling big, because you just made me smile big.... N
  August 10th, 2019 04:31
• all the times she tried (Dusk arising) these words are so reminiscent of some of my own much earlier work.. they...
  August 10th, 2019 04:29
• Fire & Ice (PoeticBiscuit) the unity of opposites does not always apply.... concept applauded...
  August 10th, 2019 01:16
• Why When Where and How (Neville) bless you L ... I dunno, I hope so x
  August 10th, 2019 01:14
• DROLL COUPLETS (3) (Michael Edwards) Very good.... Michael made me laugh so it did....
  August 9th, 2019 15:23
• Remorse (DesertWords) Liked by me.. liked by me a lot.... Neville
  August 9th, 2019 11:17
• The Girl Who Stole The Moon (Andrew Charles Forrest) this, or rather these words are something a little bit extra special.......
  August 9th, 2019 11:16
• the Jesus within (Dusk arising) tis a very personal thing pain... but I and everyone who comes to this...
  August 9th, 2019 09:50
• Road-Shock. (Fay Slimm.) Sad indeed and oh\' so very true.. and frequent. ... I folk would only...
  August 9th, 2019 08:17
• Fulfilled. (Fay Slimm.) The voice of experience whispers soft throughout these words and oh\' so...
  August 9th, 2019 03:53
• Just one night... forever (Andrew Charles Forrest) A great title.. and a delightful little poem to behold and be proud of...
  August 9th, 2019 03:41
• Simple Symbols (Orchidee) I have a thing about symbols... I like the snare drum and tom toms as...
  August 9th, 2019 03:30
• Walking Home. (Goldfinch60) Nearly scared the shi shi shirt off me back.. I was not expecting that.. f...
  August 9th, 2019 02:41
• be able to enter (Dusk arising) Thank the lord I am a Buddhist... Oops , as you were Pyke...
  August 8th, 2019 13:32
• DROLL COUPLETS (2) (Michael Edwards) Ooh err matron .. to err is to be human... you cheeky thing.... N
  August 8th, 2019 07:22
• Voices (PoeticBiscuit) I hope these words are the product of a keen imagination & not...
  August 8th, 2019 07:21
• Wasted (Sylviasearcher) say it like ya mean it why dont ya this reads more like self loathing...
  August 8th, 2019 07:07
• The Gift (SerenWise) tis sad but I have known many who still sit by their windows alone and...
  August 8th, 2019 05:46
• Unreal. (Fay Slimm.) You have just gone and done it again Fay... another absolute work of...
  August 8th, 2019 04:05
• Night Time Symphony (Christina8) There\'s nowt like a good thunderstorm to clear the air and help us to...
  August 8th, 2019 02:31
• Whatever The Weather (Orchidee) I see this as less of a hymn poem and more of a poem praising some...
  August 8th, 2019 02:15
• Abandoning christianity. (Goldfinch60) these words will sadden many of those who find them here... they are...
  August 8th, 2019 01:37
• My Wish (DesertWords) I think this is without any doubt my most favourite poem of yours, that I...
  August 7th, 2019 12:01
• Life is yours (Poetic Dan) Good to hear, grand to read and great to see...... peddle hard and see if...
  August 7th, 2019 11:58
• Untitled- XXI (Suresh) So very sad but quite brilliantly writ.....N
  August 7th, 2019 11:56
• So sorry (Scary-mary) this reads like a desperate plea.... I hope I am wrong... but liked by me...
  August 7th, 2019 07:15
• Elizabeth Darcy (Woodkatie28) When I came across the title.. I was not sure what to expect.. but being...
  August 7th, 2019 07:13
• DROLL COUPLETS (1) (Michael Edwards) Liked and liked a lot sir... and tis far more than what it seems in...
  August 7th, 2019 06:06
• She\'s Delighted. (Kevin browne) what a picture you paint here.... sublime imagery ... packing...
  August 7th, 2019 06:03
• To The Right Place. (Goldfinch60) when you get to that special place, dont ya just know it..... You...
  August 7th, 2019 06:00
• End of A Rainbow (PoeticBiscuit) you dont have to be a kid to enjoy this one.. this should bring a smile...
  August 7th, 2019 05:54
• there (Dusk arising) I aint gonna argue with Fay and whilst I hardly ever read the words of my...
  August 7th, 2019 05:44
• Otherness. (Fay Slimm.) Hey Fay.. this is absolutely brilliant.... am almost lost for words... ...
  August 7th, 2019 04:00
• Stable Steps (Orchidee) there is something about this hymn poem I enjoyed.. maybe the rhythm,...
  August 7th, 2019 02:53
• Eternal (Christina8) I have said it before but without wanting to sound like a stuck record,...
  August 7th, 2019 02:38
• My Boy (SerenWise) Super little love poem.... Lucky guy.... Neville
  August 7th, 2019 02:00
• Senseless (Christina8) I dont think you could get more meaningful... tis so very easy to...
  August 7th, 2019 01:47
• Paper Boat (Dovestoneboy) I really enjoyed Paper Boat .. thank you for posting it here.... Neville
  August 6th, 2019 11:47
• Love--(Senryu) (Christina8) these are great each one of them.. they aint easy and like you say.. they...
  August 6th, 2019 10:16
• Masked (PoeticBiscuit) the black dog can be a right bastard.. am glad you wrote a detailed...
  August 6th, 2019 06:17
• Holes (Evergreen) much enjoyed by me.. and I am sure many more will follow and...
  August 6th, 2019 03:36
• upon midnight (Dusk arising) this is certainly one of your strong points... note.. I said one........
  August 6th, 2019 03:35
• Reuben had a Brother. (Goldfinch60) what a lovely gift for those boys, their parents and of course all those...
  August 6th, 2019 03:33
• Play a role, listening to your soul (Poetic Dan) yeah.. positivity rules... nicely put and poemed too.... N
  August 6th, 2019 03:28
• Knowing. (Fay Slimm.) that is a kind of special feeling and a knowing... and you convey that so...
  August 6th, 2019 03:27
• Transforming Times (Orchidee) some thought Bob Dylan was some kind of prophet... he certainly did...
  August 6th, 2019 03:25
• Those Mystic Midnight Moons. (Kevin browne) Hey Kevin.. these words have the making of a great poem, some very...
  August 6th, 2019 02:41
• DO EVERYTHING TENDERLY ! BRIAN & ANGELA ~ A 5 5 4 Blank Verse Sonnet ! (ANGELA & BRIAN) a wonderful sentiment indeed.... we can only wish... and write...
  August 5th, 2019 15:47
• Storm (PoeticBiscuit) Now that is a nice outlook .. I certainly thing when they have passed, we...
  August 5th, 2019 11:53
• Fearless (Poetic Dan) You may have something here sir.... foundations are the key.. build em...
  August 5th, 2019 11:28
• Untitled - XIX (Suresh) Quite write.. you aint wrong again.. a concept that I have long been...
  August 5th, 2019 11:13
• Finding Neverland (Woodkatie28) very appealing.. I must read more of your work... Neville
  August 5th, 2019 10:53
• Summer Daze (Christina8) Frightening isn\'t it.. autumn will soon be upon us and you introduce...
  August 5th, 2019 10:51
• Wave of relief (Chris Yellow) yep.. I think ya done... N
  August 5th, 2019 09:51
• LAS VEGAS (FineB) I have been to the US several times.. never to Las Vegas tho... and...
  August 5th, 2019 09:49
• Rest In Relationship (Orchidee) squeaks and alleluia\'s have a nice ring to them.... I do like that...
  August 5th, 2019 03:03
• Dreamworld Acrostic. (Goldfinch60) these dont get any better sir... well bloomin done ........ N
  August 5th, 2019 02:23
• Need. (Fay Slimm.) not only tender, but tantalizing too and so very satisfying right at the...
  August 5th, 2019 02:22
• Heart of Gold (Christina8) This is simply amazing & it seems to me your Grandma was too.. they just...
  August 4th, 2019 14:36
• takes me there (Dusk arising) I just checked in again.. and yes.. tis still as good as I remember..... N
  August 4th, 2019 13:50
• Totally Trusting (Orchidee) Never a good idea, at least not on a first date... otherwise I\'m right...
  August 4th, 2019 13:37
• Chocolate (Christina8) I am not a great fan of chocolate and rarely touch it .. I think I was...
  August 4th, 2019 13:34
• Do Try - (Fay Slimm.) A flies sad demise is see & all despite your efforts to revive it.. maybe...
  August 4th, 2019 04:39
• LOVE TO EVERYONE 🧡 ANGELA ~ A SONNET FROM MY 🧡 (ANGELA & BRIAN) what a delightful gesture.. a page filled with smiles and love.. gifted to...
  August 4th, 2019 03:59
• Health and Stupidity. (Goldfinch60) Funny old world and infuriating at times..... I know exactly where...
  August 4th, 2019 03:30
• Diana, Princess of Wales - A Life (FineB) This is a most impressive account of the life of a young and sadly oft...
  August 3rd, 2019 12:33
• Evita (FineB) She is indeed something of an icon and a legend... and my word.. you have...
  August 3rd, 2019 12:21
• Help And Hope (Orchidee) you can beat an egg etc etc.. buy ya just can\'t beat a darn good...
  August 3rd, 2019 09:20
• Shyless. (Fay Slimm.) this is bloomin excellent... and I dont use the e word often.... love the...
  August 3rd, 2019 07:34
• takes me there (Dusk arising) Deep breath.... Aahh........ yes you got it... Pitched perfectly and...
  August 3rd, 2019 07:22
• Panic! (Christina8) a convincing write a revealing poem I think a lot of people might...
  August 3rd, 2019 04:50
• If You\'re Loving Enough. (Kevin browne) What a great abbreviated autobiography you just produced here sir... I...
  August 3rd, 2019 04:46
• Elders are the question, youth are the answer (Poetic Dan) this is a delightful little pre-birth dedication... and applicable...
  August 3rd, 2019 04:08
• Opposites attract (Suresh) simple as that.. but the impact, well that is another matter entirely.......
  August 3rd, 2019 02:03
• Mary Had a Little Lamb 12 (Goldfinch60) short and sweet and what\'s more, to the point.... it gave me a big smile...
  August 3rd, 2019 01:50
• Facade (Christina8) I think we all wear masks .. this is a little gem...
  August 2nd, 2019 10:52
• THE SENSE O\' TOUCH ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A 3 5 1 5 Acoustic Sonnet (ANGELA & BRIAN) A most impressive poem dedicated to perhaps the one sense that is often...
  August 2nd, 2019 07:36
• Fool I am.... (Suresh) Fool you aint .. Dont ya just love insight.... N
  August 2nd, 2019 05:55