Comments on community poems by Neville
- Trying Hard (Suresh)
a universal truth if ever there was.... perfectly poemed too.... Neville
July 12th, 2019 02:16 - Chatterbox. (Goldfinch60)
tis the way of the word.... nicely observed, tho maybe a tad...
July 12th, 2019 02:14 - Long Meg (SerenWise)
it was indeed a pleasure to stumble upon these words this fine mane... I...
July 12th, 2019 02:12 - I tried (Klc143)
I sincerely hope these words get all the attention they deserve.
They...
July 10th, 2019 09:25 - to: you (Queer-with-a-pen)
Well writ and a real delight to read.....
Neville
July 10th, 2019 03:05 - Exposed (Suresh)
it is the way of poets.. it is indeed poetry
Revealing all to tempt and...
July 10th, 2019 02:59 - PLANNED. (Fay Slimm.)
wonderfully writ and raising the kind of questions only a poet would care...
July 10th, 2019 02:54 - an encounter (Delilah)
filled to overflowing with sinister yet seductive imagery.... well poemed...
July 10th, 2019 01:54 - Laudable Light (Orchidee)
I like the idea of a guiding light...
shine on orchidee... Neville
July 10th, 2019 01:51 - BELLS RING OUT (Michael Edwards)
I share your passion sir..
and still wince when I think back to Kirsty...
July 10th, 2019 01:26 - Two Drivers. (Goldfinch60)
How extraordinary ..
but dont they say it\'s all about da bass..
I...
July 10th, 2019 01:21 - Clarity Resumed. (Goldfinch60)
if that\'s what it takes, hold on to it sir and hold it tightly... we all...
July 9th, 2019 12:35 - Lantern Light (Orchidee)
There is something special about a Lenten theme, particularly when read by...
July 9th, 2019 12:33 - DYING EMBERS (Michael Edwards)
but dont they smoulder beautifully.. lovely words these... N
July 9th, 2019 12:29 - blue eyes (Dusk arising)
you paint a pretty picture here with colours running down cheeks...
July 9th, 2019 10:25 - Home stretch (Poetic Dan)
what lovely sentiments you have poemed here sir... bravo..
July 9th, 2019 10:14 - Invoke II (Suresh)
Heavy stuff indeed ... now I need to ponder for a while... it has been a...
July 9th, 2019 10:11 - Integrity (Poetic Dan)
if you can maintain your integrity while those around you lose their\'s,...
July 9th, 2019 10:05 - The Curious Nature of Adoration (SerenWise)
You got it and bless ya for sharing some of it here.... Neville
July 9th, 2019 05:50 - TENDED. (Fay Slimm.)
a great first read of me day.... and true
July 9th, 2019 05:46 - PRECIOUS. (Fay Slimm.)
Word perfect if you ask me... perfect anyway for such a day as this.. sun...
July 3rd, 2019 02:43 - Ponginess! (Orchidee)
I really like it when you deviate my fine olfactory sensitive friend, sure...
July 3rd, 2019 02:38 - Naked Heart. (Fay Slimm.)
How I wish I had found this last eve when I felt for the life of me, I was...
July 3rd, 2019 01:37 - WHEN I WERE YOUNG (Michael Edwards)
and we all lived in the bottom of a lake in a paper bag.. he smiled ...
July 3rd, 2019 01:30 - The First Move. (Goldfinch60)
this is an absolute must read and should be seen as a public health...
July 3rd, 2019 01:25 - RIDERLESS horses (Suresh)
These words have a distinct chill.. and have clearly been chosen to age...
July 3rd, 2019 01:00 - Pershore bridge (Dusk arising)
What better way to educate anyone than by exposing them to something that...
July 2nd, 2019 09:39 - From \'A COLLECTION\' (15 and 16) (Michael Edwards)
I share your contempt for that rotten word gotten tis indeed an ugly word ...
July 2nd, 2019 09:33 - A Temple is desecrated (Suresh)
this is not only quite different.. it is a poetic education in its own...
July 2nd, 2019 04:17 - FROM the New World! (Goldfinch60)
Had I not visited this page, I may never have heard this beautiful...
July 2nd, 2019 04:14 - Marked (Sylviasearcher)
Ah my lady.. but you do melancholy so very darned well... and yet, and yes...
July 2nd, 2019 04:09 - Faith Endures Awaiting Christ\'s Return - James Series (8) (Orchidee)
I understand the message here.. I read ya loud and clear... but should the...
July 2nd, 2019 04:02 - LEARNING. (Fay Slimm.)
I am lost for words as I work through these of yours for the severalth...
July 2nd, 2019 03:52 - Untitled - XIII (Suresh)
You have the market well and truly cornered with these little nuggets of...
July 1st, 2019 11:32 - HOT AIR BALLOONS ~ ANGELA & BRIAN ~ A 338 Acrostic Sonnet (ANGELA & BRIAN)
I share your passion for hot air ballooning.... nicely poemed...
July 1st, 2019 10:22 - WORKS OF ART (Michael Edwards)
I think this might just be your own defining moment...
a concise and...
July 1st, 2019 08:33 - Childlike Communings (Orchidee)
and may your nib always sharp O.
July 1st, 2019 04:38 - CHANGE. (Fay Slimm.)
a beautiful write indeed a veritable kaleidoscope & colour wheel...
July 1st, 2019 04:34 - Happy Ever Ending (SerenWise)
I like lots of things, but I especially like happy ever...
July 1st, 2019 03:24 - Wordiku Two (Goldfinch60)
Way to go..... Wordiku whereto go... N
July 1st, 2019 03:19 - IN THE PINK ! ANGELA ~ An ABCDarian Poem ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Pink is not my fave colour by far, but you have certainly made it a little...
June 30th, 2019 17:29 - Bemused (Suresh)
Brilliant.. ....
..................................... Neville
June 30th, 2019 13:12 - Truth Be Told (Orchidee)
Oh\' yes.. I am a stickler for truth, but sometimes it hurts like...
June 30th, 2019 12:29 - From \'A COLLECTION\' (14) (Michael Edwards)
exclusive is about right, I reckon... :)
June 30th, 2019 12:21 - ...Thoughts of Mary (Andrew Charles Forrest)
The title itself is an eye catcher... and your fine words do more than...
June 30th, 2019 06:34 - From \'A COLLECTION\' (14) (Michael Edwards)
I am sure you are write sir....but then there are so many of em in every...
June 30th, 2019 04:21 - Escaping From Reality. (Goldfinch60)
this is not only a fine reflection... this is a lesson for all of...
June 30th, 2019 04:17 - Friendship\'s Love. (Fay Slimm.)
There\'s nowt like a real friend, is there..
and here you perfectly...
June 30th, 2019 04:15 - Sweet Blasphemy (SerenWise)
Perfectly poemed...
I aint gonna shave till tomorrow now..
Neville
June 30th, 2019 03:22 - Sotto Voce (SerenWise)
what a wonderful love poem you have crafted here, this poet whispers.......
June 30th, 2019 03:15 - Praise Perpetuity (Orchidee)
I much prefer the saxophone, but otherwise there is nothing like blowin...
June 29th, 2019 11:54 - Band of men (Poetic Dan)
like a band of poets....
Nicely put.... Neville
June 29th, 2019 10:18 - CHARLIE & IZZY~two acrostics (Laura🌻)
you write them both and in turn, your good self proud...... there is...
June 29th, 2019 05:47 - What We Had. (Fay Slimm.)
this is such a sad lament, your words though delicately laid carry such a...
June 29th, 2019 04:21 - Gutter Gardening. (Goldfinch60)
people pay good money to get their gutters cleared, if you could just...
June 29th, 2019 03:09 - Glastonbury (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Its been a while since I went.. but then I can almost hear the music from...
June 28th, 2019 08:11 - UK vs EUROPEAN DIET ~ ANGELA & BRIAN (ANGELA & BRIAN)
very funny and well thought through, throughout....
Oh\' I am English...
June 28th, 2019 06:45 - When My Life Begins (SerenWise)
We all have such days and moments.. ... tis the uncertainty of when the...
June 28th, 2019 04:24 - Hill (Suresh)
this is a very special poem and has a very special personal meaning......
June 28th, 2019 04:19 - Tomorrow, today and always (Poetic Dan)
This has a great vibe and I really like not only the message, but the way...
June 28th, 2019 03:02 - Salvation Surety (Orchidee)
Never in all my days have I ever encountered an e\'ermore before....Seems...
June 28th, 2019 02:59 - HEAT. (Fay Slimm.)
you have crafted an absolute peach of a poem here my very fine literary...
June 28th, 2019 02:52 - That Day When..... (Goldfinch60)
although I am lost for words, I think you are amazing and the love you...
June 28th, 2019 01:26 - Time Beaten Path (Suresh)
what a wonderful picture you create for us here with words... a...
June 27th, 2019 11:55 - I Tried To Think. (Kevin browne)
a tragic tale told poetically but with a more uplifting and positive...
June 27th, 2019 04:18 - Red Lorry, Yellow Lorry? (Goldfinch60)
My poor tongue had only just recovered from your last tongue teaser.......
June 27th, 2019 04:14 - BREAK OUT. (Fay Slimm.)
Yes indeed... far too many folk are hampered & restrained by their fears...
June 27th, 2019 04:10 - Faith Produces Dependence On God - James Series (7) (Orchidee)
I do sincerely believe that faith is the firmly held or devout belief in...
June 27th, 2019 04:00 - Enlightenment (Suresh)
Spot on sir ......
Neville
June 26th, 2019 05:28 - Two Brothers. (Goldfinch60)
Wow is an appropriate word to use here.. Yes being one of my fave bands......
June 26th, 2019 05:27 - My Rocker. (Fay Slimm.)
We have one too .. and like you dear poet, I oft think of all the tales...
June 26th, 2019 05:23 - Presiding Presence (Orchidee)
If you are talking presidents and presiding, you may well have just played...
June 26th, 2019 04:58 - ARE WE ? (Fay Slimm.)
sometimes it is best not to know.... the anticipation and uncertainties...
June 26th, 2019 03:44 - Yoda ish (Poetic Dan)
it seems you are moving forward, and therefore getting there..... N
June 26th, 2019 03:39 - Dance (Neville)
I am delighted.. what a smashing thing to say.. cheers Dan...... Neville
June 26th, 2019 03:12 - Human soup (Andrew Charles Forrest)
I like to think we wont lose face and did our bit to make this world of...
June 25th, 2019 16:57 - Serenity (Suresh)
a dozen more things spring to mind but here, I have no doubt... you got...
June 25th, 2019 13:04 - Tears And Joys (Orchidee)
I like the idea of a mouth filled with laughter
although it leaves my...
June 25th, 2019 07:24 - FERTILITY. (Fay Slimm.)
the soil holds many secrets and sow she must to coin a phrase
the...
June 25th, 2019 05:21 - All it took (Poetic Dan)
a splendid sentiment both penned and played to perfection......
Neville
June 25th, 2019 04:12 - Best Before See Date (Neville)
your take on these words is so much appreciated my friend.. I just love...
June 25th, 2019 04:02 - Art into Words. (Goldfinch60)
Two impressive art forms on the same page ..... I understand your...
June 25th, 2019 02:45 - She Said She Loved Me. (Kevin browne)
Filled with feeling of sadness, sorrow and loss.. Although I sense a touch...
June 25th, 2019 02:38 - MUST Escape (Suresh)
enjoyed as much this time round as maybe each of the dozen or so previous...
June 24th, 2019 13:21 - Let the spirit of your will drive your hope (Poetic Dan)
You said it.. You wrote it..
All ya gotta do now is let yourself live...
June 24th, 2019 12:35 - Curtain call (Andrew Charles Forrest)
what a beaut you have penned here sir.... and I have no doubt they shall...
June 24th, 2019 11:31 - Linconnue de le Siene (SerenWise)
what a delightful dedication to the tragic, mysterious and otherwise...
June 24th, 2019 11:09 - Will I ever? (Sylviasearcher)
you have indeed crafted a poem of quite exceptional beauty and laid it out...
June 24th, 2019 11:02 - THE MINIMALIST MANTRA (Michael Edwards)
I understand precisely where you are coming from... well said sir....
June 24th, 2019 10:56 - Children of the Sun (SerenWise)
a very much enjoyed dedication to what I suspect is one of our most...
June 24th, 2019 10:51 - make believe its your first time (Dusk arising)
a return visit from me to this page and these words... because You & they...
June 24th, 2019 09:37 - Instead of Being there was The Word (Sylviasearcher)
my pleasure
June 24th, 2019 04:32 - Faith Produces Humility - James Series (6) (Orchidee)
This was just a little too heavy for me Orchidee.. maybe because I am...
June 24th, 2019 04:26 - Instead of Being there was The Word (Sylviasearcher)
the minor imperfection you draw attention to in the last stanza , pales to...
June 24th, 2019 04:23 - UNWRAPPED. (Fay Slimm.)
Filled to overflowing with fond recollections many of us would be happy...
June 24th, 2019 04:18 - Miracles Exist. (Goldfinch60)
and the winner by a mile in the ironing poem category is Goldfinch60 with...
June 24th, 2019 03:09 - Confession (Poetic Dan)
If ya don\'t let go.. ya never will know....
sometimes you just gotta...
June 23rd, 2019 17:12 - Curtain call (Andrew Charles Forrest)
how upon how I share the underpinning thought that inspired this very...
June 23rd, 2019 17:09 - Last Night, I Learned How to Pray (SerenWise)
someone somewhere is gonna be gasping for breath......
Neville
June 23rd, 2019 17:06 - TIME ALONE (Michael Edwards)
somewhere between abstract and construct is where both words and image...
June 23rd, 2019 15:34
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