Comments on community poems by Neville
- A Given Day. (Fay Slimm.)
Perfectly poemed our Fay...
Yes good old Daphne DM....and her Kernow...
January 22nd, 2020 06:14 - Stirrings. (Fay Slimm.)
A fine poem for a rainy day, or for that matter any day of the week.......
November 20th, 2019 04:03 - Addiction - I (Suresh)
some slip up, some slip down, whilst others merely fall over..
these...
November 20th, 2019 02:56 - Who I Am. (Fay Slimm.)
Although thoroughly enjoyed dear Fay I must confess, for the first time...
November 19th, 2019 07:13 - Unmatched. (Fay Slimm.)
Nowt unclear here dear Fay.. every line thought through precisely
and...
November 19th, 2019 04:57 - Saying, Doing, Living (Orchidee)
I like fuzz.. everything that follows seems so much clearer.....
I...
November 19th, 2019 03:22 - Nearly Won!! (Goldfinch60)
cor blimey and now immortalised here.... good on ya both.... I have run...
November 19th, 2019 02:40 - A Wonderful Evening (Goldfinch60)
then it seems a good time was had by all.
I am happy for you my...
November 19th, 2019 01:46 - Birds Beneficiencies (Orchidee)
I like the idea of a free house Orchidee... somewhere every living thing...
November 18th, 2019 14:33 - COUPLETS (1) (Michael Edwards)
Now dont it just, do just that....and dont you do it well..... and...
November 18th, 2019 14:30 - What’s It All About (Thoughts In Time)
I think this is probably one of my favourite Thoughts in Time poems......
November 18th, 2019 09:10 - Untitled - XXVI (Suresh)
standing tall in its own profound beauty and truth.... I have waited long...
November 18th, 2019 09:07 - Crying Wolf. (Fay Slimm.)
Fine and fitting words indeed for such a noble but oft misunderstood and...
November 18th, 2019 08:57 - Muddle & Squeak (Poetic Dan)
sounds like fun... sounds like my day in Malta when the floods hit.......
November 17th, 2019 07:16 - Singing. - - ( A Tribute ) (Fay Slimm.)
an excellent and timely reminder dear Fay.... N
November 9th, 2019 09:49 - Attack. (Fay Slimm.)
to witness such an event was a privilege, though some might argue...
November 7th, 2019 04:55 - Looking Back. (Goldfinch60)
too bloomin true.....
November 6th, 2019 04:15 - Unreal. (Fay Slimm.)
You have such a way with words Fay... Always....
November 6th, 2019 04:14 - Droplets (PoeticBiscuit)
a little gem my friend ... hope things get better and truly.... N
November 5th, 2019 18:23 - One soul (Andrew Charles Forrest)
what a lovely thought.. what a lovely poem..... super sir...
November 5th, 2019 18:20 - I Don\'t Know What It\'s Like To Grow Old (Aislinn Wilson)
really enjoyed this my friend...
For what its worth, half the time, it...
November 5th, 2019 14:15 - Exalting Encouragement (Orchidee)
exciting all this exalting Orchidee....
November 5th, 2019 12:38 - TRANSFORMATION. (Fay Slimm.)
as complex as they come, tho simply stunning as already said.........
November 5th, 2019 09:02 - Far More. (Fay Slimm.)
You have again done poetry proud my Lady....
November 4th, 2019 08:16 - Resigned (Suresh)
this is nothing short of brilliant... the first and last stanza\'s did it...
November 2nd, 2019 04:09 - Adversity Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
I like the word..
I dont like the reality of it
I like the way you...
October 31st, 2019 02:24 - Trees Sit Brown. (Kevin browne)
am impressed with the way you use words here in a kind of rap rhyme way.....
October 31st, 2019 00:14 - just an oak bench (Dusk arising)
A moving post indeed... I would without hesitation reinforce and share the...
October 30th, 2019 17:15 - Servant Sacrificed (Orchidee)
Gives a whole new meaning to the old question
so what did your last...
October 30th, 2019 12:37 - Soul-beauty. (Fay Slimm.)
Wow....
what an amazing image you have used here to accompany a truly...
October 30th, 2019 05:52 - Making Richer. (Fay Slimm.)
early mane captured in all its glory..
far more than fifty shades of...
October 29th, 2019 08:51 - My Muse (Suresh)
We have all been there my friend.. Your muse is just around the...
October 29th, 2019 03:52 - Tin Whistle Player. (Goldfinch60)
sadly.. there are more of these whistle blowers in every town across the...
October 29th, 2019 03:47 - F*** you universe, I\'ll rhyme another day (Poetic Dan)
Win some, lose some...tis a good job we can\'t see round the corner...
October 28th, 2019 14:31 - I Walked A While (Thoughts In Time)
what a smashing little wandering ... I just got back from the beach...
October 28th, 2019 13:20 - Peaceful Pursuits (Orchidee)
peaceful pursuits all perfectly wrapped in a particularly poignant poem...
October 28th, 2019 11:49 - no big shakes (Dusk arising)
I love the way this reads, the way it trips off the tongue and I love the...
October 28th, 2019 11:11 - In Transit. (Fay Slimm.)
this is an absolute delight, no matter which way one looks at it....
October 28th, 2019 03:53 - It hurts as a human (FineB)
What a grand job you have done pulling so many current injustices, wrongs...
October 27th, 2019 14:35 - RANDOM THUNKS (3) (Michael Edwards)
simple innit..... well done top marks
October 27th, 2019 10:06 - Black n White (Suresh)
absolutely, tis cut n dried....
October 27th, 2019 10:05 - Resting Place? (Sylviasearcher)
I came here today..
this very important day,
only to read these...
October 27th, 2019 06:56 - Inspiring Invocation (Orchidee)
hymn poems e\'ermore and furthermore finely writ.....
October 27th, 2019 06:48 - Extended Ripples of Life. (Goldfinch60)
this is one of those to contemplate whilst relaxing and feeling...
October 27th, 2019 06:43 - The Meandering Flows. (Kevin browne)
Cant beat a good bit o meandering sir.. specially when a rose is referred...
October 27th, 2019 06:40 - Festival of Lights (Suresh)
I recall celebrating many happy Diwali\'s with friends when I used to live...
October 26th, 2019 16:05 - Computers. (Goldfinch60)
I can imagine this happening... push a button, tick a box and pop a...
October 25th, 2019 05:37 - Teach Me, I Trust (Orchidee)
Nicely poemed O.... N
October 25th, 2019 05:34 - I Am A Clock (Thoughts In Time)
this is a lovely little whimsey but with possibly more serious and deeper...
October 25th, 2019 05:33 - Pull Back Your Face... (Kevin browne)
A great write in its own wright and a brilliant concluding sum up.......
October 25th, 2019 05:31 - Ours. (Fay Slimm.)
this is a captivating, beautiful tho incredibly sad and wholly relatable...
October 25th, 2019 05:27 - Tonic. (Fay Slimm.)
You have captured here well the very essence of the magnificent turdus...
October 24th, 2019 12:11 - The Perfect Storm (SerenWise)
very nice indeed ....
October 24th, 2019 03:19 - I hold your hand (Alta H Mabin)
tis true....
October 23rd, 2019 17:14 - Rapturous Return (Orchidee)
I would leave as is... but then I tend not to change much when posted....
October 23rd, 2019 13:11 - Nothing and Stars (Sylviasearcher)
dark and disturbing but thoroughly enjoyed..
October 23rd, 2019 09:17 - Contact. (Fay Slimm.)
outstanding Fay... no other words necessary..... N x
October 23rd, 2019 04:46 - Indecently Yours (Neville)
Thank you Fay.... always appreciated no end... N
October 23rd, 2019 04:42 - Human hues (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
an interesting prose post with some excellent lines running throughout...
October 22nd, 2019 07:56 - Betweeness. (Fay Slimm.)
These words fall between categories and lay across the page most...
October 22nd, 2019 07:26 - BOLDNESS. (Fay Slimm.)
Dear Fay, your words invariably impress, today.. they made me smile...
October 21st, 2019 16:56 - The ISLE of Wight (FineB)
Never been to the Isle of Wight but would love to one day..
I have...
October 21st, 2019 16:25 - Quality Not Quantity (Orchidee)
absolutely.. quality over quantity every day....
October 20th, 2019 09:47 - Gentlemen become Hooligans. (Goldfinch60)
Spot on my friend there is so much truth here as well as your words ...
October 20th, 2019 02:47 - Words in heart & hand, but the gut has the plan (Poetic Dan)
I think this is brilliant..
October 19th, 2019 16:56 - Beauty in the storm (Alta H Mabin)
Brevity at its finest..
October 19th, 2019 11:47 - Favourable Fruition (Orchidee)
I think this should be saved for Harvest Festivals and the like........
October 19th, 2019 11:37 - Silence. (Fay Slimm.)
Ssh\' tIs as golden as they say it is and then some....
N x
October 19th, 2019 08:15 - Sea-Swell. (Fay Slimm.)
truly awesome...
October 18th, 2019 06:36 - BLUE HAWAII 🧡 ANGELA & BRIAN 💙 A COLLABORATION (ANGELA & BRIAN)
What a delightful poem here... a testimony to seemingly true...
October 18th, 2019 04:12 - Music Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
A most impressive acrostic Goldie.. I suspect as well as me, many others...
October 18th, 2019 04:06 - WINTER FOLLOWS (Michael Edwards)
I really like these little uns
your pen and watercolour artwork is...
October 17th, 2019 11:57 - Saying, Doing, Living (Orchidee)
I think salt shall be my eventual undoing...
Have a great day O......
October 17th, 2019 05:55 - COMES AUTUMN. (Fay Slimm.)
The golden season so well captured and timely too....
Thank you...
October 17th, 2019 05:52 - Safety for the Slandered (Orchidee)
thank you for making me feel so much better....
October 17th, 2019 01:39 - Stillness (Thoughts In Time)
you have almost convinced me that all things are possible... a delightful...
October 17th, 2019 01:37 - Imagining. (Goldfinch60)
an interesting post today my friend... I have long been fascinated by the...
October 17th, 2019 01:34 - come on in (Dusk arising)
this is awesome....
and no explanation is considered necessary...
October 16th, 2019 16:46 - Don’t Ever Leave Me (Thoughts In Time)
what a lovely Thoughts in Time post you have shared with us all today....
October 16th, 2019 16:42 - Ticked all my box\'s & off I flew... Thank you (Poetic Dan)
Nice one my friend....
October 11th, 2019 07:00 - ‘Connections Through Time’ (Thoughts In Time)
what a delightful stream of poetry you have shared with us today...
October 11th, 2019 06:59 - Signs And Sufferings Shown (Orchidee)
Ouch... I liked this one tooo..
October 4th, 2019 06:16 - A KNOBBLY BONE (Michael Edwards)
Bril sir Michael and nowt less than...
dry cleaning bill in the...
October 4th, 2019 05:46 - Michele Marrulo. (Goldfinch60)
Blimey..... not bad at all when you consider the offensive price tags many...
October 4th, 2019 04:29 - Time\'s Needle. (Fay Slimm.)
Outstanding is perhaps the most apt word I can currently find to apply...
October 4th, 2019 04:25 - The Invisible Stuff (Andrew Charles Forrest)
what a lovely little truism perfectly wrapped within a poem ... N
October 4th, 2019 04:19 - The Game (FredPeyer)
How true you are sir, deceptively true, and a poet too.... my...
October 4th, 2019 03:55 - UNDER THE WEATHER? (Michael Edwards)
you almost made me clear out both ends simultaneously.. cheers...
October 3rd, 2019 13:16 - Syllove (Bragee)
Must be something mighty powerful if it made you go down like Frazier.......
October 3rd, 2019 11:17 - just a half written song (Dusk arising)
Sounds good in my head mate and dont look bad on the page either......
October 3rd, 2019 11:02 - Asking. (Fay Slimm.)
A great big sad little write if I might be so bold....
tis near a...
October 3rd, 2019 09:35 - Broken Dreams (Clara)
I really enjoyed the journey.. at first I thought of Saint Christopher,...
October 3rd, 2019 09:31 - Cried A Million Shadows. (Kevin browne)
Cor Blimey Kev.. the whole page is crammed with bits of ya... thoughts...
October 3rd, 2019 03:12 - Croquet and Nature. (Goldfinch60)
I am delighted you have found a good honest hobby.. and that you felt able...
October 3rd, 2019 03:07 - Waves crashing (Alta H Mabin)
a delightful cluster of words......
October 2nd, 2019 14:09 - God\'s Presence - Peace Series (3) (Orchidee)
I am all for peace.. and always have been... a great sentiment ,...
October 2nd, 2019 04:38 - Who is She? (Clara)
I once knew a girl who fitted these words perfectly... a lovely little...
October 2nd, 2019 04:36 - Maybe. (Fay Slimm.)
a longing song...
you really are a poet my friend ...
October 2nd, 2019 04:34 - Message to My River. (Goldfinch60)
Don\'t ya just love rivers, any old river does it for me...... cheers...
October 2nd, 2019 02:19 - alighted (Dusk arising)
and why not I might ask....
sometimes one needs to grab the bull by...
October 1st, 2019 16:36
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